MineC24 wrote:

384's Insane

imo, HP Drain - 1 It is suitable for this diff currently! so no change:3

00:15:827 (1) - stack by 00:14:415 (1)'s head good
01:26:768 (4) - red slider point -> move x:252 y:280 ok
03:06:121 (2) - (imo) Ctrl + G...? There's no jump here. no change:3

Flask wrote:

拖好久的mod!

[384]

1. 00:03:297 (2) - ctrl+j的方向比較flow 我用了ctrl+g..
2. 00:07:886 (2) - 不用拘泥於疊在(6)的頭 可以用1.0擺會看起來比較美觀 (至少不會擠在一團 好
3. 00:11:062 (3,4) - 不是很好flow..況且接下來接到(1)的spacing又是兩倍 這樣遮只會增加難度 我的想法是繞出來跟(2)弄個小三角形 再一口氣跳上去(1) 好
   
   範例

   
4. 00:31:886 (3,4,5) - 這跑太遠了 要不就兩邊拉近點要不就(4)往下然後(3,5)形狀條一下 fixed
5. 00:47:062 (6,7,1) - *吐槽*直線太古板了 ( 233 Let's jump!
6. 01:04:533 (4) - clap下錯位置了嗎? 聽起來有點像故意的不過...嘛 看你 >_< 果然是下错位置了 :3
7. 01:25:886 (3) - ...在I下2/1有點蠢 可以學學前後kiai段的擺法 对称233(没错 我是蠢mapper(雾
8. 02:16:003 (2) - 一樣跑太遠了 我覺得1.4就夠了 fixed
9. 02:18:474 (1,2,3,4) - 基於前面這麼善良以及送分 這裏沒有連起來我只想投1分 跟02:19:886 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - 一樣吧 (前兩句還有押韻 连起来就不好看 就这么办 (也有押韵
10. 02:37:180 - 貌似漏clap了... add
    對稱挺好的233 233

Flask wrote:

拖好久的mod!

[General]

1. kiai可以統一一下 (不過還是看G神意見
2. 黃色卡片是個團體吧 可以大概tag一下成員 雖然我也不懂 这个大概不用 从来没见单独提过乐队里的成员

[Summer]

1. 基於BPM和SV挺高的 我會建議你OD-1 其实我本来是7 SG test了一遍说 太容易了 OD8
2. 00:08:415 (7) - 這個飛太遠了 如果跟著音樂起伏的話(6,7)之間的距離應該要比(7,1)還要來的小 現在反而是倒過來了 可以擺個等距跳之類的 这一段都改了
3. 00:08:944 (3,4) - 幅度相同點 不然好醜 差不多
4. 00:14:239 (1) - 這裡的vocal用一條slider帶過不太好吧 音樂裡也沒有什麼長音 擺明就是要跟vocal 快換成note+1/2滑條 我觉得这样挺好 我喜欢串子后面接长滑条
5. 00:19:886 - finish k
6. 00:20:592 (3) - 吐槽吐槽 這條slider第一個紅點之前和第二個紅點之後的直線不平行 建議動一下最後一個點 k
7. 00:21:827 (2,3,4) - 等距? 看是要把(4)拉出去一點 不然就是放棄(3)的遮放進來一點 本来就没打算等距 1 2 3是等的 3到4我让它恢复到正常ds了
8. 00:30:827 (6,1,2,3) - 這裡的flow不太好 順著(6)的軌跡應該是(1)>(3)>(2)繞個圓圈回來 建議(2,3)調換一下位置 然後考慮重擺(4) k
9. 00:42:474 (1,2,3) - 這兒也是 順著(1)的軌跡畫圓應該是把(3)ctrl+G 然後接ctrl+G後的(2) 不過這樣太傻逼了 為求方便及flow建議把(1)ctrl+G就flow了 嗯之前这前面的结构不太一样 1的方向是根据前面走的 现在前面换了 我忘了动这个了……
10. 00:47:415 (3,4) - 沒跳無感 這裡算是高潮了吧 像是你後面的00:58:709 (1,2) - 都比這個的間距來的大 嗯 我自己改到这还没看你说什么我也发现了 不知道怎么弄的 应该是误操作 fixed
11. 01:06:121 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - (1,2,3,4)的flow都是逆時針 突然到了(5,6,7)時變順時針 打起來十分不爽 建議(6,7)掉個位置 (後面的串串大概要做點變化 不過不做也沒差) 七边形跳顺序改了
12. 01:15:827 (8) - x:256, y:344較美觀 k
13. 01:29:415 (2) - 其實我覺得這類直線slider都挺怪 建議和(4)一樣彎
14. 01:36:474 (1,2,3) - vocal點都在紅線上 不過slider頭卻在白線真的挺怪 建議三個選起來往後挪1/2 然後在01:36:474 - 上個note 不是那样的改 改成和后面的结构一样了 两短一长
15. 01:42:650 (3) - 怎麼說呢 因為前面的spacing也不是等距 這裡突然用random spacing排有一種縮起來的感覺
    
    範例

    
    改了 虽然和图有些出入
16. 02:08:415 (3) - 第二個點x:276, y:320 这个点有问题 不过我稍微修了一下
17. 小提琴加速真是個詭異的主意 omg 覆水难收 不想remap了Q^Q
18. 02:37:533 (4) - ctrl+G (5)往上擺
    
    圖

    
    这个不喜欢 没动
19. 02:41:591 (2,3) - 建議同彎 虽然我觉得直的也没啥不好 不过还是改了
20. 02:52:886 (1,2,3) - 感覺可以擺的再開一點 不要開spacing 盡量讓手在這裡能伸展 像是把(2)的尾巴疊在後面那個(1)上面等等

1 2 3都拉开了

其他基於時間考量我就先不mod了..這質量大概還需要一點改進 但總體已經不錯! 加油!!

00:12:474 (3) - Mirror this horizontally, it creates a better flow imo. X, i like this pattern o3o

Smoothie wrote:

[384's Insane]
00:28:709 (2) - Ctrl+G? x
00:29:062 (3) - ^ x
00:43:003 (2) - Place it horizontally to 00:42:474 (1)? http://puu.sh/3eGD6.jpg I like the current one
00:59:944 (3) - Add a reverse? It goes good with the music. added
01:13:886 (2) - Ctrl+G? x
01:14:239 (3) - ^ x
01:32:062 - Add a note? x
01:55:886 (5) - Add finish? added
02:27:121 (2) - ^ added
02:58:180 - Add note? no, it doesn't fit the music
03:01:003 - ^ x

Smoothie wrote:

It's always summer in my heart and in my soul~ :3

Heya
From my modding queue~

[Summer]
00:05:239 (4) - Move to x:292 y:196 nice idea with the below
00:05:592 (6) - Move to x:252 y:272
00:06:297 (1) - Stack on 00:05:944 (2)? Only make them closer, also to all the following ones
00:11:944 (1) - Stack on 00:11:592 (2)?
00:21:033 (4) - Remove this one? not changing it currently, will consider
00:24:297 (1) - Stack on 00:23:944 (4)?
00:35:062 (4) - How about adding a reverse here for a better flow? no, I prefer to leave it blank at that beat
00:36:474 - Add a note here? It goes very well with the vocals. I admit this is a nice idea and I would ask for more opinions, keep mine for now to keep consistency
00:38:327 (4) - Add clap? no to all similar poits
00:43:974 (4) - ^
01:06:121 (1) - Stack on 01:05:768 (4)~
01:09:474 (1) - Stack on 01:09:121 (10)
01:26:327 (4) - Add Clap
01:31:974 (4) - ^
01:32:945 (2) - Move to x:256 y:304 sure, I don't know how did I place these two notes wrong
01:33:121 (3) - Move to x:155 y:146
02:04:356 - 02:27:121 AAAAH, so much fun! I love that part. :3 Oh yeah~ finally got appreciated
02:34:092 (4) - Add clap~
02:39:739 (4) - ^
03:06:033 (3) - Add a note here? not really

[Hard]
00:31:886 (5) - How about this shape? http://puu.sh/3eGU4.jpg fine
01:28:356 (3) - Ctrl+G? not changing for now, but it is a point I've also considered about
01:32:239 (1,2,3) - How about this? http://puu.sh/3eH0j.jpg not neccessary, I think the current one is already good and can form blancket with the next yellow slider
01:55:533 (2) - Short the reverse slider to the red line and add a note at 01:55:886 ? not neccessary, it do have a stream of 5 at this point
01:57:827 - Add note? no, there's no drum at these two points, only guitar, and also, I'd rather leave this part more blank to have a larger differnce with the following part
02:00:650 - ^

[Easy]
00:04:003 (3) - Extend this slider to the white line. It flows better. no, I love the current rhythm, following the snare
00:06:827 (3) - ^
00:09:650 (2) - ^
00:12:474 (3) - ^
00:17:768 - Add note? ok
00:41:062 - ^ no, there's no beat landing on the white, but on the both red tick, but it would be too hard if I add to both of those, so I'd rather leave it blank
01:08:944 (2) - Extend it to the white line. bince idea, I also changed the similar part which follows, to keep consistency
02:09:297 (4) - Make this slider curvy? not really
02:38:239 (1) - How about this shape? http://puu.sh/3eIsd.jpg fine, I'm already enough with my old cluttered one

That's all

Awesome map and song.
Good luck!

• • This diff is too hard for being an easy, rename this diff "Normal" and set HP 4, AR 5 and OD 4. (otherwise try to make this diff easier)
  • 00:16:003 (4,1) - Try this for a better flow:
  
  SPOILER

  
  • 00:38:944 (3,1,2) - This pattern can be improved a lot, look:
  
  SPOILER

  
  • 01:21:297 (3,4) - Select these circles and reverse their position (Ctrl + g) for a better flow.
  • 03:05:768 (4) - End this slider 1/2 later or try this pattern:
  
  SPOILER

  

• • 00:13:533 (4 and all next similar patterns) - Avoid hiding circles under sliders, I'm sure you can make a better looking pattern, try this for example:
  
  SPOILER

  
  • 01:23:062 (2) - Uh... is this supposed to be a 3? Anyway I don't really like this slider, try something else:
  
  SPOILER

  
  • 03:05:768 (3,4,5,6) - This is the only 4 1/2 circles pattern in the whole diff, keep using the same patterns you used before:
  
  SPOILER

  

• • HP Drain Rate: 6
  • 01:24:827 (1,2,3) - Too many overlaps here, this pattern looks messy, try this:
  
  SPOILER

  
  • 01:30:474 (1,2,3) - ^
  • 01:59:415 (3,4) - Move these sliders 1/2 earlier.
  • 02:01:180 (3) - Delete this slider and add a circle at 02:01:180, just keep using the same rhythm you used at 01:57:297 (1,2).
  • 02:16:180 (3) - Try this:
  
  SPOILER

  
  • 02:17:592 (3) - ^
  • 02:34:356 (1) - The start of this slider is completely hidden under the previous one, is this necessary? Try a different pattern.

• • 01:09:121 (4) - This slider is kinda boring to play, try this:
  
  SPOILER

  
  • 03:06:121 (4) - Convert this slider in 2 1/2 circles and make a small jump:
  
  SPOILER

  

• • HP Drain Rate: 7
  • 00:15:915 (2) - Delete this circle, this pattern sounds a lot better without it imo, also I don't get what you're trying to follow since there's no corresponding sounds here.
  • 00:21:033 (4) - ^
  • 00:38:327 (4) - ^
  • 00:43:974 (4) - ^
  • 00:59:415 (1) - Remove the first red slider point for a better shape/flow.
  • 01:10:797 (2) - Delete this circle.
  • 01:12:209 (2) - ^
  • 01:15:033 (3) - ^
  • 01:16:621 (3) - ^
  • 01:23:062 (3) - Delete this circle, then start a slider here and end it at 01:24:474.
  • 01:26:327 (4) - Delete this circle.
  • 01:31:974 (4) - ^
  • 02:04:356 (1) - Delete this slider and add a circle at 02:04:356.
  • 02:04:797 (3) - Delete this circle.
  • 02:07:180 (1) - Same as 02:04:356.
  • 02:07:621 (3) - Same as 02:04:797.
  • 02:10:003 (1,2,3) - This is too much, stop overmapping, just add a single 1/2 repeating slider.
  
  SPOILER

  
  • 02:11:239 (1) - Delete this slider and add a circle at 02:11:239.
  • 02:12:827 (1) - Same thing here.
  • 02:13:356 (4) - ^
  • 02:13:886 (1) - ^
  • 02:14:415 (4) - ^
  • 02:15:650 (1) - ^ and so on.

xxheroxx wrote:

Mod Infos:

• Suggestion.
• You should fix this.
______________________________________________
______________________________________________

Easy

• • This diff is too hard for being an easy, rename this diff "Normal" and set HP 4, AR 5 and OD 4. (otherwise try to make this diff easier) simplified many rhythms, now it's only based on 1/1
  • 00:16:003 (4,1) - Try this for a better flow:
  
  SPOILER

  
  k
  • 00:38:944 (3,1,2) - This pattern can be improved a lot, look:
  
  SPOILER

  
  k
  • 01:21:297 (3,4) - Select these circles and reverse their position (Ctrl + g) for a better flow. k
  • 03:05:768 (4) - End this slider 1/2 later or try this pattern:
  
  SPOILER

  
  end it 1/2 beat later

Hard

• • HP Drain Rate: 6 k
  • 01:24:827 (1,2,3) - Too many overlaps here, this pattern looks messy, try this:
  
  SPOILER

  
  changded this according a previous mod
  • 01:30:474 (1,2,3) - ^ nope, I like this one
  • 01:59:415 (3,4) - Move these sliders 1/2 earlier. didn't, I think the both rhythm are ok
  • 02:01:180 (3) - Delete this slider and add a circle at 02:01:180, just keep using the same rhythm you used at 01:57:297 (1,2). no need to, it doesn't do any bad just have some difference
  • 02:16:180 (3) - Try this:
  
  SPOILER

  
  no I'm already crazily eager to make this diff easier, I don't want add more challenge by doing this
  • 02:17:592 (3) - ^
  • 02:34:356 (1) - The start of this slider is completely hidden under the previous one, is this necessary? Try a different pattern. this is also neccessary to be changed

Summer

• • HP Drain Rate: 7 this will be under further consideration. I knew the common setting should be 7, but I want it to be 6 to for I want it to be more friendly to the not-so-high-level-players, just like some 0108 diffs
  • 00:15:915 (2) - Delete this circle, this pattern sounds a lot better without it imo, also I don't get what you're trying to follow since there's no corresponding sounds here. yeah, maybe it's based on nothing but it's applies a really nice effect, no change
  • 00:21:033 (4) - ^
  • 00:38:327 (4) - ^
  • 00:43:974 (4) - ^
  • 00:59:415 (1) - Remove the first red slider point for a better shape/flow. I think it's fine
  • 01:10:797 (2) - Delete this circle. nope
  • 01:12:209 (2) - ^
  • 01:15:033 (3) - ^
  • 01:16:621 (3) - ^ nope
  • 01:23:062 (3) - Delete this circle, then start a slider here and end it at 01:24:474. will consider after others' mod, I like the gap for now
  • 01:26:327 (4) - Delete this circle.
  • 01:31:974 (4) - ^
  • 02:04:356 (1) - Delete this slider and add a circle at 02:04:356.
  • 02:04:797 (3) - Delete this circle.
  • 02:07:180 (1) - Same as 02:04:356.
  • 02:07:621 (3) - Same as 02:04:797.
  • 02:10:003 (1,2,3) - This is too much, stop overmapping, just add a single 1/2 repeating slider.
  
  SPOILER

  
  • 02:11:239 (1) - Delete this slider and add a circle at 02:11:239.
  • 02:12:827 (1) - Same thing here.
  • 02:13:356 (4) - ^
  • 02:13:886 (1) - ^
  • 02:14:415 (4) - ^
  • 02:15:650 (1) - ^ and so on.

1. Uncheck letterbox during breaks, looked weird with this BG

1. 00:16:709 (5) - move to 116:289 for better flow?
2. 00:31:886 (5) - shape is .. odd. make it more smooth?
3. 01:27:650 (1) - try ctrl+g?
4. 01:31:533 (3) - ^
5. 02:11:944 (1) - move to 404:172? also flow issue
6. 02:16:533 (5) - compared with a slider, i think two notes is better
7. 02:17:944 (5) - ^, and tbh, i suppose your SV in this stream part is too high. For example, for this kinda kick slider:
   
   it's better to make the "head circle" overlap the "tail circle" a bit like
   
8. 02:38:768 (2) - the overlapped sliders are not looked neat...consider a better placement ? ie
   
   SPOILER

   
9. 02:46:621 - add a note here for transition?
10. 02:48:474 (2) - move to 103:233 for better flow?
11. 02:49:003 (2) - 221:303?
12. 03:00:827 (1,2) - ctrl+g separately to them?

1. AR+1
2. 01:05:768 (3) - ctrl+g? too close to prev now
3. 01:09:827 - the blank here is heard weird .. or.. unexpected
4. 01:31:533 (3) - blanket it better?
   
   SPOILER

   
5. 02:12:650 (5,1) - the jump is tricky a bit...
6. 02:27:121 (2) - 432:105?
7. 02:48:827 (3,4) - ctrl+g separately for better flow?
8. 02:57:649 (4) - Unsnapped

1. AR+1
2. 00:47:592 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - this kinda stream maybe too long for a Hard. Also 01:07:356 (5,6,7,8,9,10,1) - , 01:35:592 (5,6,7,8,9,10) - , 01:46:886 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - etc
3. 01:31:533 (3) - this kinda overlapped slider is not recommended to use other than Insane
4. 01:38:062 (3) - stack to (1)'s end? also difficulty issue
5. 02:18:474 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - more difficulty issue, it is completely fine in an Insane but it's Hard here..

1. 00:23:062 (2) - a straight slider maybe better
   
   SPOILER

   
2. 01:08:238 (2) - ^, similar

1. 02:38:239 (1) - the finish in the middle is heard odd

Scorpiour wrote:

Hi there~~ mod from queue

[General]

1. Uncheck letterbox during breaks, looked weird with this BG

[384's Insane]

1. AR+1 fixed
2. 01:05:768 (3) - ctrl+g? too close to prev now fixed, and I reversed another slider in order to fit this change
3. 01:09:827 - the blank here is heard weird .. or.. unexpected ..fixed
4. 01:31:533 (3) - blanket it better? fixed with 1.13x sliderspeed(omg)
   
   SPOILER

   
5. 02:12:650 (5,1) - the jump is tricky a bit... fixed by ctrl+H xD
6. 02:27:121 (2) - 432:105? fixed
7. 02:48:827 (3,4) - ctrl+g separately for better flow? fixed
8. 02:57:649 (4) - Unsnapped fixed

That's all, good luck

Scorpiour wrote:

Hi there~~ mod from queue


[G's Normal]

1. 00:23:062 (2) - a straight slider maybe better
   
   SPOILER

   
2. 01:08:238 (2) - ^, similar

Scorpiour wrote:

Hi there~~ mod from queue

red - must be fixed
blue - highly recommend to consider
black - only suggestions

[General]

1. Uncheck letterbox during breaks, looked weird with this BG k

[Summer]

1. 00:16:709 (5) - move to 116:289 for better flow? rearranged the sliders instead
2. 00:31:886 (5) - shape is .. odd. make it more smooth? k
3. 01:27:650 (1) - try ctrl+g? no, I'd like to keep it head up ↑
4. 01:31:533 (3) - ^ not changing for now, feeling either is ok
5. 02:11:944 (1) - move to 404:172? also flow issue k
6. 02:16:533 (5) - compared with a slider, i think two notes is better k
7. 02:17:944 (5) - ^, and tbh, i suppose your SV in this stream part is too high. For example, for this kinda kick slider: changed into 2 circles
   
   it's better to make the "head circle" overlap the "tail circle" a bit like
   
   well, kept the sv for now
8. 02:38:768 (2) - the overlapped sliders are not looked neat...consider a better placement ? ie
   
   SPOILER

   
   nice
9. 02:46:621 - add a note here for transition? no, for consistency
10. 02:48:474 (2) - move to 103:233 for better flow? fixed a series of
11. 02:49:003 (2) - 221:303?
12. 03:00:827 (1,2) - ctrl+g separately to them? nope

[Hard]

1. AR+1
2. 00:47:592 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - this kinda stream maybe too long for a Hard. Also 01:07:356 (5,6,7,8,9,10,1) - , 01:35:592 (5,6,7,8,9,10) - , 01:46:886 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - etc
3. 01:31:533 (3) - this kinda overlapped slider is not recommended to use other than Insane
4. 01:38:062 (3) - stack to (1)'s end? also difficulty issue
5. 02:18:474 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - more difficulty issue, it is completely fine in an Insane but it's Hard here..
   difficulty still under discussion, kept for now

[Easy]

1. 02:38:239 (1) - the finish in the middle is heard odd not really fitting, but it's still ok for me, keeping consistency between diffs

That's all, good luck

SapphireGhost wrote:

I'm a bit tired now so I'll do a quick check here.

384's Insane
01:30:474 (1,2,3) - This is a nice pattern. 0.0

Hard
00:47:768 (5,6) - There are two notes occupying the same spot here, you need to fix this. oops,sure

Easy
00:56:592 (1,1) - The circle comes too soon after a spinner for an Easy difficulty. well, hopes ok now

For the most part, this looks really good. Well done!

SapphireGhost wrote:

Have a very merry Christmas.

Bubbled!

also I can optionally forget the bubble but now here it is

dkun wrote:

There's unsnapped green sections in Hard and Summer. They're for hitsounds, but I'd still like to see them snapped to keep a tidy set.
Hard -
01:10:720 -
02:23:065 -
02:23:241 -
Summer -
02:23:065 -
02:23:241 -
fixed all the above, it's because the BPM is 170.02 when I mapped this but Sapphire once helped me change it to 170.00 and when I resnap all the notes and green lines one by one I may missed a little of them. Thank you for the careful checking
Could you also delete the extra .osb in the folder? But I don't fine any .osb in my folder so I think it's just fine


Let me know when you update and I'll be more than happy to rank this map!