1. Ayu's Advanced (4,97 stars, 212 notes)
2. Beginner (1,47 stars, 73 notes)
3. Standard (4,11 stars, 127 notes)

TheVileOne wrote:

General
Either remove "this is" from tags or put it before patrick so people who search in quotes will pick up "this is patrick". (Done)
Countdown settings are different.
Where's the harder difficulties? (Added Ayu's Hard)

TheVileOne wrote:

General
Either remove "this is" from tags or put it before patrick so people who search in quotes will pick up "this is patrick".
Countdown settings are different.
Where's the harder difficulties?

Beginner
There was a couple areas I wasn't sure whether a certain spacing should be fixed, because it would make the pattern more generic, so I didn't mention it. Other modders can point out such things if they so wish.

I'm not a hitsound expert, but during the kiais, maybe it would be nice to alternate between clap and whistle clap combination for the beat. It goes especially nice during this segment 01:11:724 - .

00:23:724 (1) - Why does the spinner start here rather than the vocal start?
00:36:697 (2,3) - Flows poorly because it's too close. It should be 0.65 snap here.
00:52:264 (2,1) - I don't recommend 1/2th note transitions when you can avoid them. End 00:52:264 (2) - here 00:52:913 - and fix spacing is my suggestion.
00:55:507 (3,1,2,3) - Create a better note curve?
01:07:832 (2,3) - Missing hitsounds.
01:10:588 (1) - Very short for the easiest difficulty. It really needs to start on the long white tick. Also add finish to the end?
01:16:913 (1,2,3,4) - Spacing could be slightly cleaner.

Standard
I want to mention about a suggestion I made for a clap towards the end. Ithink the beat isn't completely hitsounded in parts. You might want to experiment with more complex patterns to better match the song. It seems too simplified as it is.

00:07:832 (3,4,5,1) - I would prefer this note curve not angle so steeply downward. http://puu.sh/1WtGn < better angle IMO
00:12:372 (1,2,3) - Nazi- Make spacing exactly equal here.
00:14:642 (5,1,2,3,1) - why is the spacing changing so much here?
00:19:832 (3,1,2) - Exactly 0.70 will make a perfect transition.
00:36:372 (4) - Perfect coordinate for this seems to be x 334 y 141. adjust spacing accordingly.
00:38:318 (3,4,5,6) - Spacing could be cleaner.
00:51:615 (2) - End with clap.
00:52:912 (2) - ^
01:01:345 (1,2) - Problems with this blanket.
01:05:237 (5,6) - 0.70 exactly.
01:06:534 - Strange gap in the beat. You could do this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/595513.
01:08:480 (3,1,2,3) - Improve note stream. It should be smooth.
01:18:210 (3,4) - 0.70 exactly.
01:19:832 (1,2,3) - ^ (very small)
01:20:805 (1) - end with finish? (Do the same for beginner?)
01:33:129 (1) - If you moved the last point left 1 unit, you could get this transition, which looks cleaner IMO. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/595516
01:34:426 (3,4,5,6,7) - Spacing and note curve can be cleaner.
01:38:318 (2) - Clap?
01:39:615 (5,1,2,3) Smoother note curve?

VinylDash14 wrote:

General]

Set a preview point for all difficulties.

[Beginner]

00:09:615 (1) - Let the spinner start at 00:09:453 - removing the repeat from the slider. Fixed
00:23:724 (1) - Spinner could start at 23:399 - (same goes for Standard) Ok.
00:54:210 (2,3,1) - Nazi - exactly same spacing, 0.7 would work. Huh?
01:10:588 (1) - Avoid short spinners for new players. Not sure if I want to remove it or not.
01:16:913 (1,2,3,4) - Try a square shape. Fixed

[Standard]

Extremely high slider velocity. There are spacing errors in this one, such as 00:14:318 (4,5,1,2,3,1) -
I'm not sure if I would consider a remap... but like I said, a high slider velocity for normal players could be too difficult.
Other than that:

00:21:129 (3,1) - Why is there a really short break here... Fixed
00:57:453 (1,2,3,4,5) - (no offense) Really bad pentagon shape. This is meant to be a star ._.
01:01:345 (1,2) - Make the blanket look better. Ok.

Foreverends wrote:

lalalala~
mod go mod go~(?

Beginner
00:08:156 (2) - put it on 00:08:318 - Done
00:20:805 (3) - delete this note, put the slider of 00:20:805 (3) - on 00:20:805 - ,and reverse the slider about 6 time (like this ->

SPOILER

Done
00:48:372 (1) - use slider to replace this note like this? ->

SPOILER

Done
01:32:805 - add one circle maybe? Thats too close after the spinner

Standard
AR - 1/2 please ;w; Is it good now?
00:36:697 (1) - delete nc Done
00:38:318 (7) - nc ^
00:45:129 (4) - reverse this slider maybe Meh, i'll think about it.
01:01:994 (2) - I think you can replace this long slider by two short slider, like this

SPOILER

I like it the way it is now.

really nice map that i cant find so lot of problems Thank you :3
sorry for the poor mod and English
keep going Cancel

SamiPale wrote:

Hi Cancel. Mod request from my queue

Comments in Important stuff part, which may include unrankable issue, is high recommend to be fixed.
Comments in Map designing part, Rhythm/Placing part, Hitsounds part are personal opinions. You can skip it/them if you disagree.

[General]

1. The Artist should be "漁夫P" and Romanised Artist should be "Fisher P". Since "Nico Nico Douga" is not allowed to be in Artist and Source, you can put it in tags.
   References:
   https://www.facebook.com/jim.fang.73
   http://www.youtube.com/user/830928jim?feature=mhee
   http://www.nicovideo.jp/user/15733157
2. Make the AudioLeadIn of all diffs consistent. Now [Ayu's Advanced] is 0ms. And imo 2000ms is enough.
3. Remove countdown in [Standard] and [Ayu's Advanced]
4. Make the tags consistant please! [Ayu''s Advanced] is not consistant with others.

[Beginner]

1. Important stuff
   
   1. None.
2. Map designing
   
   1. 00:58:751(1) - This spinner seems not end at a good point. I suggest that ends at 01:00:048 and add a note at 01:01:345.
3. Rhythm/Placing
   
   1. None.
4. Hitsounds
   
   1. 01:08:480 (2) - Clap?

[Standard]

1. Important stuff
   
   1. None.
2. Map designing
   
   1. 00:14:642 (5) - Why don't you make a newcombo here?
3. Rhythm/Placing
   
   1. 00:19:832 (3) - Just a nazi, make this curver?
4. Hitsounds
   
   1. 00:48:372 (1) - Finish?
   2. 01:09:129 (3,2) - Finish?
   3. 01:15:615 (4,5) - Finish at the head of (4) and the whole (5)?
   4. 01:19:507 (4,2) - Finish?
   5. 01:40:913 (2) - Finish?

[Ayu's Advanced]

1. Important stuff
   
   1. None.
2. Map designing
   
   1. 00:33:615 (4) - Newcombo here instead of 00:34:102.
3. Rhythm/Placing
   
   1. 00:20:642 - It sounds better that adding a note stacking (2).
   2. 00:31:751 (3) - It's better that move this father:/
   3. 00:44:480 (8) - Ahh, I think it can be curver.
   4. 01:22:426 - Add a note that stacks with (6)?
4. Hitsounds
   
   1. I suggest that at least increase 20% volume since current is too low.

This map is not bad, have my star.
Good luck~

rezoons wrote:

Put "Nico Nico Douga" into the source and remove it from the tag. That is not allowed

Cancel wrote:

rezoons wrote:

Put "Nico Nico Douga" into the source and remove it from the tag. That is not allowed

Thanks for mod

rezoons wrote:

Oh! Why? I didn't know that. Anyway, sorry for telling you wrong things (at least i won't make the mistake anymore).

Stefan wrote:

You're setting Nico Nico Douga as Artist but that's all. (In case the Name of the Creator cannot be found. Otherwise you should set the Name of the Creator) To set Nico Nico Douga as Source is like to say that this and this Song is coming from YouTube, Soundcloud, etc

Jacob wrote:

[General]

- The SB you have is really poorly made and isn't intuitive at all.. in fact, it's more of any eyesore than anything. I think this would be better off without an SB, sorry. >< Make sure to remove all files associated with the SB as well. I tried, but oh well..
- The background you have is really bad quality. Please find a better quality 800x600 or 1024x768 BG to use instead of this one. ._. This one is from the original video, because I can't find BG's on google.
- There's multiple .osb files. (well remove both of them since you should probably delete the SB) <
- If you're going to add a skin to a map, you need to fully skin it. Please add the default spinner-approachcircle.png, spinner-clear.png, spinner-spin.pn,g spinner-osu.png, and cursortrail.png from the template skin. Done
- Ayu's Advanced has an inconsisten AudioLeadIn. It should be 3000. Done
- Use tickrate 2 for all difficulties, please. it fits the map better. Done
- The volume for the entire map needs to be raised by about 10% (besides the places where you want them to be silenced). All of the hitsounds are way too quiet at the moment. Uhm.. done?

Don't give me kd. i'll finish the mod when you fix all of this < oops. Ignore that that happened

Jacob wrote:

[Ayu's Advanced]

- It's unrankable to use 5% timing sections for things that aren't spinners, so change all of the 5% to 10%.
00:01:670 (1) - Map through the breaks after this note like I told Cancel. Really, it's an advanced diff and there shouldn't be silly pauses like this. I'd rather not, it's silly to map to different things at once, also feels like overmapping since all there is is something like "krusty krab" said in a low volume.
00:04:264 (3) - ^ I'd rather not, it's silly to map to different things at once, also feels like overmapping since all there is is something like "krusty krab" said in a low volume.
00:07:183 (1) - ^ This one's less severe. I still would, though. I'd rather not, it's silly to map to different things at once, also feels like overmapping since all there is is something like "krusty krab" said in a low volume.
00:15:940 (1) - remove this one note combo. i see what you were doing here, but it's kinda silly and ends up looking random rather than looking intuitive.
00:17:237 (4,1) - This overlaps in game with 00:16:913 (3) due to stacking. Space them farther away.
00:18:534 (1) - one note combo
00:28:102 (3) - Space this a bit farther away. the human eye can't detect the difference between this and the 1/2 spacing, causing readability issues for me and maybe other people who've never heard evans.
00:31:751 (3) - ^
00:31:994 (4) - ^
01:00:048 (1,2,3,4) - This is why you can't have 5% volume. Please turn the volume up on this PAST 10% because having these all silenced is really weird.
01:13:669 (1) - Should be a clap at the end of this slider.
01:22:102 (6) - Drag the break after this note to the bookmark like this. (I hope you know how to do that)
01:40:264 (3) - This entire slider should be shortened by one 1/4 tick to follow the vocals. Sounds odd for you to not do this..

phew, that was a lot.. call me back when you're ready orz

• 
  Romanised Artist should be "Gyofu P".(Gyofu means fisher man in Japanese)
  
  Overall hitsound is kinda low. You can increase 50% part by 10% and I think it's better.
  
  All difficulties have a break after KIAI and Easy/Normal have another break at the first of song, but I think those parts can be mapped since there're many interesting sounds in back so try to consider to map all parts?

1. 00:05:583 (1,2) - It's hard for beginner to hear which sound these circles follow. I suggest replacing them with one slider.
2. 00:15:633 (x) - There are two green lines at the same time. Remove one please.
3. 00:17:583 (1) - Let's add a finish!
4. 00:37:367 (3) - Move below by 1 grid then (1,2,3) look more beautiful.

1. 00:07:854 (3) - There's a big sound at 00:08:340(you're following the same sound at 00:08:827 (4,5)) so adding a note there would be much better imo. Remove the repeat of slider, them add a circle or do something?
2. 00:15:633 (x) - There are two green lines at the same time. Remove one please.
3. 00:17:583 (1) - Let's add a finish!
4. 01:16:286 (5) - Move left by 1 grid(like arround (4)). Looks better.
5. 01:22:448 (x) - End a spinner with finish here would be better imo.

1. 00:16:773 (2,3) - Can't read (3). Player misreads them as one slider. Can you change them like 01:13:691 (1).
2. 01:32:827 (1) - Add a finish? It makes good effect.
3. 01:22:448 (x) - End a spinner with finish here would be better imo.

Cancel wrote:

The things noted below, I don't get.

???

• 00:07:854 (3) - There's a big sound at 00:08:340(you're following the same sound at 00:08:827 (4,5)) so adding a note there would be much better imo. Remove the repeat of slider, them add a circle or do something?
  01:16:286 (5) - Move left by 1 grid(like arround (4)). Looks better. < Can you please give the coordinates..

SPOILER

Suzully wrote:

Cancel wrote:

The things noted below, I don't get.

???

• 00:07:854 (3) - There's a big sound at 00:08:340(you're following the same sound at 00:08:827 (4,5)) so adding a note there would be much better imo. Remove the repeat of slider, them add a circle or do something?
  01:16:286 (5) - Move left by 1 grid(like arround (4)). Looks better. < Can you please give the coordinates..

Okay.
00:07:854 (3) -

or


01:16:286 (5) -

SPOILER

Well, another issue appeared. In Ayu's difficulty, it seems sliders were rescaled wrongly(idk why, there wasn't any timing change), please correct them.

Harez wrote:

[General]
GyofuP or Gyofu P ? *spacing*
BPM 185.000
Offset 1670
i think 3 sec AudioLeadIn is too long, consider make it short to 2 sec

[Beginner]
01:13:691 (2,3) - (2) one grid down, (3) one grid up

[Standard]
looks fine

[Ayu]
00:04:448 - Delete Break
00:06:394 - add 1/4 slider?
00:13:205 (3,4,1,2) - how about this
00:43:448 (5,6) - move it to 00:43:367
00:46:286 (2) - delete slider and add a note in 00:46:448

Suzully wrote:

You can fix stuff in Harez's mod. Those are all minor things so I can rank a map even after fixing them.
(BPM and offset are already fine, you don't need to change them. I agree with Audio-Lead-In.)

And also please change Artist in EDITER again. Probably you changed it in .osu file so it doesn't work fine now.(unknowned character "æ¼å¤«P" in Ayu's difficulty)
Then, I don't know why but a new combo has been removed from 01:01:367 (1) in Easy. This is the next note of a spinner so it's necessary.


Tell me again when you fix above. I'll rank asap because today's your birthday.

Jacob wrote:

grats, cancel. :>

Gabe wrote:

LOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOL.

Congratulation! >v<