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Cancel 2013-01-26T15:39:26+00:00

This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on zondag 10 maart 2013 at 12:55:26

Artist: Fisher P
Title: Patvans
Tags: mad jubeat dj yoshitaka beatmania iidx nico nico douga ayu evans this is patrick spongebeat spongebob squarepants
BPM: 185
Filesize: 3450kb
Play Time: 01:42
Difficulties Available:

Ayu's Advanced (4,97 stars, 212 notes)
Beginner (1,47 stars, 73 notes)
Standard (4,11 stars, 127 notes)

Download: Fisher P - Patvans
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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FIRST RANKED BEATMAP

Difficulty Spread

Beginner by me

Standard by me

Advanced by Ayu
Map Status -

Bubbled on: 1 March 2013
By: Jacob
Ranked on: 9-3-2013
By: Suzully

Video Previews:

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=vlyTyBT5Cm4

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=J1itD5mZZgk

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=1qhKOgs1ncI

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=7VReHBKKeBQ

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ZS2HRwRhNEk

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=q-Pqr6nPITQ

Have a replay,PMme and i'll add it to the list!

Last edited by Cancel 2013-03-23T12:52:22+00:00, edited 79 times in total.

TheVileOne

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TheVileOne 2013-02-02T21:45:50+00:00

General
Either remove "this is" from tags or put it before patrick so people who search in quotes will pick up "this is patrick".
Countdown settings are different.
Where's the harder difficulties?

Beginner
There was a couple areas I wasn't sure whether a certain spacing should be fixed, because it would make the pattern more generic, so I didn't mention it. Other modders can point out such things if they so wish.

I'm not a hitsound expert, but during the kiais, maybe it would be nice to alternate between clap and whistle clap combination for the beat. It goes especially nice during this segment 01:11:724 - .

00:23:724 (1) - Why does the spinner start here rather than the vocal start?
00:36:697 (2,3) - Flows poorly because it's too close. It should be 0.65 snap here.
00:52:264 (2,1) - I don't recommend 1/2th note transitions when you can avoid them. End 00:52:264 (2) - here 00:52:913 - and fix spacing is my suggestion.
00:55:507 (3,1,2,3) - Create a better note curve?
01:07:832 (2,3) - Missing hitsounds.
01:10:588 (1) - Very short for the easiest difficulty. It really needs to start on the long white tick. Also add finish to the end?
01:16:913 (1,2,3,4) - Spacing could be slightly cleaner.

Standard
I want to mention about a suggestion I made for a clap towards the end. Ithink the beat isn't completely hitsounded in parts. You might want to experiment with more complex patterns to better match the song. It seems too simplified as it is.

00:07:832 (3,4,5,1) - I would prefer this note curve not angle so steeply downward. http://puu.sh/1WtGn < better angle IMO
00:12:372 (1,2,3) - Nazi- Make spacing exactly equal here.
00:14:642 (5,1,2,3,1) - why is the spacing changing so much here?
00:19:832 (3,1,2) - Exactly 0.70 will make a perfect transition.
00:36:372 (4) - Perfect coordinate for this seems to be x 334 y 141. adjust spacing accordingly.
00:38:318 (3,4,5,6) - Spacing could be cleaner.
00:51:615 (2) - End with clap.
00:52:912 (2) - ^
01:01:345 (1,2) - Problems with this blanket.
01:05:237 (5,6) - 0.70 exactly.
01:06:534 - Strange gap in the beat. You could do this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/595513.
01:08:480 (3,1,2,3) - Improve note stream. It should be smooth.
01:18:210 (3,4) - 0.70 exactly.
01:19:832 (1,2,3) - ^ (very small)
01:20:805 (1) - end with finish? (Do the same for beginner?)
01:33:129 (1) - If you moved the last point left 1 unit, you could get this transition, which looks cleaner IMO. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/595516
01:34:426 (3,4,5,6,7) - Spacing and note curve can be cleaner.
01:38:318 (2) - Clap?
01:39:615 (5,1,2,3) Smoother note curve?

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Cancel 2013-02-16T19:59:59+00:00

TheVileOne wrote:
General
Either remove "this is" from tags or put it before patrick so people who search in quotes will pick up "this is patrick". (Done)
Countdown settings are different.
Where's the harder difficulties? (Added Ayu's Hard)

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Cancel 2013-02-16T20:00:15+00:00

TheVileOne wrote:
General
Either remove "this is" from tags or put it before patrick so people who search in quotes will pick up "this is patrick".
Countdown settings are different.
Where's the harder difficulties?

Beginner
There was a couple areas I wasn't sure whether a certain spacing should be fixed, because it would make the pattern more generic, so I didn't mention it. Other modders can point out such things if they so wish.

I'm not a hitsound expert, but during the kiais, maybe it would be nice to alternate between clap and whistle clap combination for the beat. It goes especially nice during this segment 01:11:724 - .

00:23:724 (1) - Why does the spinner start here rather than the vocal start?
00:36:697 (2,3) - Flows poorly because it's too close. It should be 0.65 snap here.
00:52:264 (2,1) - I don't recommend 1/2th note transitions when you can avoid them. End 00:52:264 (2) - here 00:52:913 - and fix spacing is my suggestion.
00:55:507 (3,1,2,3) - Create a better note curve?
01:07:832 (2,3) - Missing hitsounds.
01:10:588 (1) - Very short for the easiest difficulty. It really needs to start on the long white tick. Also add finish to the end?
01:16:913 (1,2,3,4) - Spacing could be slightly cleaner.

Standard
I want to mention about a suggestion I made for a clap towards the end. Ithink the beat isn't completely hitsounded in parts. You might want to experiment with more complex patterns to better match the song. It seems too simplified as it is.

00:07:832 (3,4,5,1) - I would prefer this note curve not angle so steeply downward. http://puu.sh/1WtGn < better angle IMO
00:12:372 (1,2,3) - Nazi- Make spacing exactly equal here.
00:14:642 (5,1,2,3,1) - why is the spacing changing so much here?
00:19:832 (3,1,2) - Exactly 0.70 will make a perfect transition.
00:36:372 (4) - Perfect coordinate for this seems to be x 334 y 141. adjust spacing accordingly.
00:38:318 (3,4,5,6) - Spacing could be cleaner.
00:51:615 (2) - End with clap.
00:52:912 (2) - ^
01:01:345 (1,2) - Problems with this blanket.
01:05:237 (5,6) - 0.70 exactly.
01:06:534 - Strange gap in the beat. You could do this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/595513.
01:08:480 (3,1,2,3) - Improve note stream. It should be smooth.
01:18:210 (3,4) - 0.70 exactly.
01:19:832 (1,2,3) - ^ (very small)
01:20:805 (1) - end with finish? (Do the same for beginner?)
01:33:129 (1) - If you moved the last point left 1 unit, you could get this transition, which looks cleaner IMO. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/595516
01:34:426 (3,4,5,6,7) - Spacing and note curve can be cleaner.
01:38:318 (2) - Clap?
01:39:615 (5,1,2,3) Smoother note curve?

Thx for mod

ColdTooth

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Joined June 2012

ColdTooth 2013-02-16T20:21:14+00:00

General]

Set a preview point for all difficulties.

[Beginner]

00:09:615 (1) - Let the spinner start at 00:09:453 - removing the repeat from the slider.
00:23:724 (1) - Spinner could start at 23:399 - (same goes for Standard)
00:54:210 (2,3,1) - Nazi - exactly same spacing, 0.7 would work.
01:10:588 (1) - Avoid short spinners for new players.
01:16:913 (1,2,3,4) - Try a square shape.

[Standard]

Extremely high slider velocity. There are spacing errors in this one, such as 00:14:318 (4,5,1,2,3,1) -
I'm not sure if I would consider a remap... but like I said, a high slider velocity for normal players could be too difficult.
Other than that:

00:21:129 (3,1) - Why is there a really short break here...
00:57:453 (1,2,3,4,5) - (no offense) Really bad pentagon shape.
01:01:345 (1,2) - Make the blanket look better.

[Ayu's Hard]

00:12:372 (1,2,3) - Not same spacing.
01:39:778 (1,3) - Not a good blanket

Good map, Standard might need some more mods, but it'll get ranked some time.

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Cancel 2013-02-16T20:50:52+00:00

VinylDash14 wrote:
General]

Set a preview point for all difficulties.

[Beginner]

00:09:615 (1) - Let the spinner start at 00:09:453 - removing the repeat from the slider. Fixed
00:23:724 (1) - Spinner could start at 23:399 - (same goes for Standard) Ok.
00:54:210 (2,3,1) - Nazi - exactly same spacing, 0.7 would work. Huh?
01:10:588 (1) - Avoid short spinners for new players. Not sure if I want to remove it or not.
01:16:913 (1,2,3,4) - Try a square shape. Fixed

[Standard]

Extremely high slider velocity. There are spacing errors in this one, such as 00:14:318 (4,5,1,2,3,1) -
I'm not sure if I would consider a remap... but like I said, a high slider velocity for normal players could be too difficult.
Other than that:

00:21:129 (3,1) - Why is there a really short break here... Fixed
00:57:453 (1,2,3,4,5) - (no offense) Really bad pentagon shape. This is meant to be a star ._.
01:01:345 (1,2) - Make the blanket look better. Ok.

Thanks for the mod

Origami_Munchkin

66 posts

Joined October 2011

Origami_Munchkin 2013-02-16T20:59:04+00:00

Beginner:
There are a few problems with having a difficulty this easy with this kind of song.
1) The notes in the song have a glitch sound to them which can cause confusion to beginners on when to hit a beat.
2) This song doesn't really have an easy to heard beat because of the treble is much louder. This can make it hard for beginners to hit certain notes such as 00:38:642. (This is not the only place)

For a beginner map, try to avoid placing beats underneath sliders like at 00:45:778. However, I think it is okay to have a beat over a slider like at 00:16:913.

01:09:778 - I would take off the repeat on this note and start the slider at 01:10:426

Standard:

00:16:588 - This note is slightly underneath the drain bar.
00:39:940 - ^
00:45:129 - Blanket this better. Ex: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/615706
01:01:994 - Try to shape this not so that it better blankets the slider before it. Ex: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/615694
01:13:669 - This note is WAY to far into the drain bar.
01:16:264 - Blanket this better. Ex: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/615702

Ayu's Hard

00:12:372 - Blanket this better.
00:16:751 - This is under the drain bar.
00:16:913 - I think that I read something in the ranking criteria that a beat cannot be underneath a slider.
00:18:859 - This is under the drain bar.
00:55:832 - The end of this note is under the drain bar.
00:56:156 - This is under the drain bar.
00:56:318 - ^
01:40:264 - Blanket better.
01:42:859 - Start the spinner here. (This is just a suggestion.)

Keep up the good work.

Foreverends

992 posts

Joined July 2011

Foreverends 2013-02-17T13:07:10+00:00

lalalala~
mod go mod go~(?

Beginner
00:08:156 (2) - put it on 00:08:318 -
00:20:805 (3) - delete this note, put the slider of 00:20:805 (3) - on 00:20:805 - ,and reverse the slider about 6 time (like this ->

SPOILER

00:48:372 (1) - use slider to replace this note like this? ->

SPOILER

01:32:805 - add one circle maybe

Standard
AR - 1/2 please ;w;
00:36:697 (1) - delete nc
00:38:318 (7) - nc
00:45:129 (4) - reverse this slider maybe
01:01:994 (2) - I think you can replace this long slider by two short slider, like this

SPOILER

Ayu's Advanced
00:07:345 - dont need the break right here
00:22:426 (4) - dont put it right on the slider head, use ds 0.8/0.9 to fix it
00:43:426 (5,6) - ? I think it is not too fit with the song

really nice map that i cant find so lot of problems

sorry for the poor mod and English

keep going Cancel

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Cancel 2013-02-17T13:24:20+00:00

Foreverends wrote:
lalalala~
mod go mod go~(?

Beginner
00:08:156 (2) - put it on 00:08:318 - Done
00:20:805 (3) - delete this note, put the slider of 00:20:805 (3) - on 00:20:805 - ,and reverse the slider about 6 time (like this ->
SPOILER
Done
00:48:372 (1) - use slider to replace this note like this? ->
SPOILER
Done
01:32:805 - add one circle maybe? Thats too close after the spinner

Standard
AR - 1/2 please ;w; Is it good now?
00:36:697 (1) - delete nc Done
00:38:318 (7) - nc ^
00:45:129 (4) - reverse this slider maybe Meh, i'll think about it.
01:01:994 (2) - I think you can replace this long slider by two short slider, like this
SPOILER
I like it the way it is now.

really nice map that i cant find so lot of problems Thank you :3
sorry for the poor mod and English
keep going Cancel

Thanks for the mod

Nwolf

2,607 posts

Joined September 2012

Nwolf 2013-02-17T18:28:47+00:00

Hi, from my modding queue : )

[Beginner]
00:15:615 (5) - Move to x:484 y:256
00:18:859 (2) - Move whole slider to x:212 y:184 and slider end point to x:84 y:196
00:43:183 (3,4) - Move slider end point to x:32 y:240, move (4) back under it
01:34:751 (2) - Move slider to x:164 y:224

[Standard]
00:16:588 (2) - Move to x:248 y:184
00:36:697 (5) - Move middle slider point to x:336 y:248 and end to x:272 y:232
00:45:129 (4) - Move to x:184 y:248
01:16:264 (5) - Move slider end point to x:120 y:168
01:32:805 - Add circle

[Ayu's Advanced]
Either replace the hard icon with insane in the description or AR -1 (or none of both but I would suggest doing something)
00:45:778 (1,2) - Switch the slider lengths
01:08:156 (7) - Shorten slider by 1/4

Nice map, looks a bit strange at parts but that is actually good cause most of the time most maps look the same now anyway^^

kajiyatta

1,421 posts

Joined April 2011

kajiyatta 2013-02-18T19:10:50+00:00

from PM
General
almost suggestions
Beginner
Placement
00:08:318(2,3) avoid stack better for newbie
00:17:561(1)^
00:45:778(4) ^

Standard
aimming to Normal? if so, you must set under 5 of AR.
Placement
01:13:669(3) the end attached on HP bar.

Ayu's Advanced
Placement
00:12:859(2) maybe ×0.90 spacing?
00:16:751(2) overlapped on HP bar
00:18:859(1)^
00:55:832(4,1,2)^
01:08:462(1) make a blanket?

SPOILER

Rhythm
01:45:453 unnecessary green line

flankly speaing, I don't like this kind of songs, but mapset is fine. good luck

EmPao

723 posts

Joined May 2011

EmPao 2013-02-19T17:37:40+00:00

Hi!Cancel

M4M~

[General]
-Inconsistency in AudioLeadIn, "Ayu's Advanced" is 0, other diffs are 3000. please fixed them~
[Beginner]
00:36:697 (2) - spacing (0.61x → 0.70x)
00:45:778 (4) - Dont overlap this note please.
01:10:751 (1) - short spinner is too hard in "Beginner" diff. suggest you can remove it
[Standard]
00:52:264 (3) - remove this NC
01:40:588 (1) - ^
[Ayu's Advanced]
00:12:859 (2) - spacing
01:07:669 (6) - Ctrl+J?
01:22:102 (6) - add finish?
01:22:426 - suggest you can add a note here (with finish)

That's all~
Good Luck

Smoothie

569 posts

Joined August 2011

Smoothie 2013-02-19T19:08:55+00:00

Heya Cancel~

Mod requested via ingame PM.

[Ayu's Advanced]
00:15:940 (1,1) - I know you did that on purpose... but this NC spam is not really neccessary imo. Consider removing the NC here 00:16:264 (1)
00:18:534 (1,1) - ^
00:46:264 (2) - Remove that slider. Something like this would fit better to the music.

SPOILER

01:17:886 (4) - NC
01:39:778 (1,3) - Fix that blanket pls ._.

[Standart]
00:42:534 (4) - Move 1 grid to the left
01:15:615 (4,5) - Fix that blanket~ Like this:

SPOILER

00:58:751 (5) - The finish is a bit quiet. Increase the volume by 30-40%?
01:20:805 (1) - Consider ending the spinner here: 01:22:426
01:20:480 (3) - One grid up.

[Beginner]
00:20:805 (3) - Repeats too much imo. How about this?

SPOILER

01:10:751 (1) - This spinner is way to short :s
01:19:507 (1) - Same as on "Standart" consider ending it here: 01:22:426

Alright, thats all~
Good luck!

SamiPale

766 posts

Joined October 2009

SamiPale 2013-02-20T08:02:38+00:00

Hi Cancel. Mod request from my queue

Comments in Important stuff part, which may include unrankable issue, is high recommend to be fixed.
Comments in Map designing part, Rhythm/Placing part, Hitsounds part are personal opinions. You can skip it/them if you disagree.

[General]

The Artist should be "漁夫P" and Romanised Artist should be "Fisher P". Since "Nico Nico Douga" is not allowed to be in Artist and Source, you can put it in tags.
References:
https://www.facebook.com/jim.fang.73
http://www.youtube.com/user/830928jim?feature=mhee
http://www.nicovideo.jp/user/15733157
Make the AudioLeadIn of all diffs consistent. Now [Ayu's Advanced] is 0ms. And imo 2000ms is enough.
Remove countdown in [Standard] and [Ayu's Advanced]
Make the tags consistant please! [Ayu''s Advanced] is not consistant with others.

[Beginner]

Important stuff
1. None.
Map designing
1. 00:58:751(1) - This spinner seems not end at a good point. I suggest that ends at 01:00:048 and add a note at 01:01:345.
Rhythm/Placing
1. None.
Hitsounds
1. 01:08:480 (2) - Clap?

[Standard]

Important stuff
1. None.
Map designing
1. 00:14:642 (5) - Why don't you make a newcombo here?
Rhythm/Placing
1. 00:19:832 (3) - Just a nazi, make this curver?
Hitsounds
1. 00:48:372 (1) - Finish?
2. 01:09:129 (3,2) - Finish?
3. 01:15:615 (4,5) - Finish at the head of (4) and the whole (5)?
4. 01:19:507 (4,2) - Finish?
5. 01:40:913 (2) - Finish?

[Ayu's Advanced]

Important stuff
1. None.
Map designing
1. 00:33:615 (4) - Newcombo here instead of 00:34:102.
Rhythm/Placing
1. 00:20:642 - It sounds better that adding a note stacking (2).
2. 00:31:751 (3) - It's better that move this father:/
3. 00:44:480 (8) - Ahh, I think it can be curver.
4. 01:22:426 - Add a note that stacks with (6)?
Hitsounds
1. I suggest that at least increase 20% volume since current is too low.

This map is not bad, have my star.
Good luck~

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Topic Starter

Cancel 2013-02-20T13:37:49+00:00

SamiPale wrote:
Hi Cancel. Mod request from my queue

Comments in Important stuff part, which may include unrankable issue, is high recommend to be fixed.
Comments in Map designing part, Rhythm/Placing part, Hitsounds part are personal opinions. You can skip it/them if you disagree.

[General]
The Artist should be "漁夫P" and Romanised Artist should be "Fisher P". Since "Nico Nico Douga" is not allowed to be in Artist and Source, you can put it in tags.
References:
https://www.facebook.com/jim.fang.73
http://www.youtube.com/user/830928jim?feature=mhee
http://www.nicovideo.jp/user/15733157
Make the AudioLeadIn of all diffs consistent. Now [Ayu's Advanced] is 0ms. And imo 2000ms is enough.
Remove countdown in [Standard] and [Ayu's Advanced]
Make the tags consistant please! [Ayu''s Advanced] is not consistant with others.
[Beginner]
Important stuff
None.
Map designing
00:58:751(1) - This spinner seems not end at a good point. I suggest that ends at 01:00:048 and add a note at 01:01:345.
Rhythm/Placing
None.
Hitsounds
01:08:480 (2) - Clap?
[Standard]
Important stuff
None.
Map designing
00:14:642 (5) - Why don't you make a newcombo here?
Rhythm/Placing
00:19:832 (3) - Just a nazi, make this curver?
Hitsounds
00:48:372 (1) - Finish?
01:09:129 (3,2) - Finish?
01:15:615 (4,5) - Finish at the head of (4) and the whole (5)?
01:19:507 (4,2) - Finish?
01:40:913 (2) - Finish?
[Ayu's Advanced]
Important stuff
None.
Map designing
00:33:615 (4) - Newcombo here instead of 00:34:102.
Rhythm/Placing
00:20:642 - It sounds better that adding a note stacking (2).
00:31:751 (3) - It's better that move this father:/
00:44:480 (8) - Ahh, I think it can be curver.
01:22:426 - Add a note that stacks with (6)?
Hitsounds
I suggest that at least increase 20% volume since current is too low.
This map is not bad, have my star.
Good luck~

Thanks for the star and mod!

Yuki-kun

568 posts

Joined December 2010

Yuki-kun 2013-02-20T13:42:29+00:00

Hi~

From my queue xD

> General <

Inconsistency in AudioLeadIn:
- [Ayu's Advanced] : 0
- [Beginner] : 3000
- [Standard] : 3000

Inconsistency in Countdown:
- [Ayu's Advanced] : 1
- [Beginner] : 0
- [Standard] : 1

Inconsistency in Tags:
- [Ayu's Advanced] : Ayu Evans patrick spongebeat spongebob this is
- [Beginner] : Ayu Evans this is patrick spongebeat spongebob
- [Standard] : Ayu Evans this is patrick spongebeat spongebob

> My Mod <

[Ayu's Advanced]
01:19:507 (8) - NC
01:20:318 (1) - Remove NC

[Beginner]
Seem fine.

[Standard]
Seem fine.

Nice map. Good luck

rezoons

rezoons 2013-02-23T18:15:20+00:00

Hi

,

For the M4M:

General:
Put "Nico Nico Douga" into the source and remove it from the tag.

Beginner:
Ar -1 for an easy diff.
00:08:318 (2) - Clap.
00:08:805 (3) - Clap at the beginning and the end at the slider.
00:14:318 (4) - You shouldn't have combo that long in an easy diff. Put a NC here.
00:37:345 (3) - ^
00:18:859 (2) - Clap at the end?
00:58:102 (3) - The way 00:55:507 (3,1,2) are, i think the note is better at x=392 y=104 or x=384 y=96.
01:11:237 (1) - I think this spinner and the one at 01:19:507 are better with a finish.

Standard:
00:50:967 (1,2,1,2) - I think it fits better if you move them 1/2 beat sooner.
01:10:102 (3) - Move it to x=328 y=312. I think it looks better this way. (as you did at 01:41:237)
01:20:480 (3) - Move it to x=432 y=80 for the same reason.
01:28:264 - You could put a note here like you did at the start of the song. (And also put one at 01:28:588 and 01:29:561 and 01:29:886 and 01:30:534. )
01:34:426 (3) - Move it to x=280 y=136.

Ayu's Advanced:
00:04:102 - Put a note here.
00:09:291 - ^
00:15:940 - Why is there a lonely slider here? Remove the NC.
00:18:534 - ^
01:22:426 - Put a note here.

I really like your map. The advanced one is very fun to play.

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Topic Starter

Cancel 2013-02-23T18:22:53+00:00

rezoons wrote:
Put "Nico Nico Douga" into the source and remove it from the tag. That is not allowed

Thanks for mod

rezoons

rezoons 2013-02-23T18:39:01+00:00

Cancel wrote:
rezoons wrote:
Put "Nico Nico Douga" into the source and remove it from the tag. That is not allowed
Thanks for mod

Oh! Why? I didn't know that. Anyway, sorry for telling you wrong things (at least i won't make the mistake anymore).

Low

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Low 2013-02-24T22:35:36+00:00

[General]

- The SB you have is really poorly made and isn't intuitive at all.. in fact, it's more of any eyesore than anything. I think this would be better off without an SB, sorry. >< Make sure to remove all files associated with the SB as well.
- The background you have is really bad quality. Please find a better quality 800x600 or 1024x768 BG to use instead of this one. ._.
- There's multiple .osb files. (well remove both of them since you should probably delete the SB)
- If you're going to add a skin to a map, you need to fully skin it. Please add the default spinner-approachcircle.png, spinner-clear.png, spinner-spin.pn,g spinner-osu.png, and cursortrail.png from the template skin.
- Ayu's Advanced has an inconsisten AudioLeadIn. It should be 3000.
- Use tickrate 2 for all difficulties, please. it fits the map better.
- The volume for the entire map needs to be raised by about 10% (besides the places where you want them to be silenced). All of the hitsounds are way too quiet at the moment.

Don't give me kd. i'll finish the mod when you fix all of this

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Stefan 2013-02-24T22:38:39+00:00

rezoons wrote:
Oh! Why? I didn't know that. Anyway, sorry for telling you wrong things (at least i won't make the mistake anymore).

You're setting Nico Nico Douga as Artist but that's all. (In case the Name of the Creator cannot be found. Otherwise you should set the Name of the Creator) To set Nico Nico Douga as Source is like to say that this and this Song is coming from YouTube, Soundcloud, etc

rezoons

rezoons 2013-02-24T22:46:36+00:00

Stefan wrote:
You're setting Nico Nico Douga as Artist but that's all. (In case the Name of the Creator cannot be found. Otherwise you should set the Name of the Creator) To set Nico Nico Douga as Source is like to say that this and this Song is coming from YouTube, Soundcloud, etc

Well, it makes sense. Thanks ^^

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Cancel 2013-02-24T22:57:54+00:00

Jacob wrote:
[General]

- The SB you have is really poorly made and isn't intuitive at all.. in fact, it's more of any eyesore than anything. I think this would be better off without an SB, sorry. >< Make sure to remove all files associated with the SB as well. I tried, but oh well..
- The background you have is really bad quality. Please find a better quality 800x600 or 1024x768 BG to use instead of this one. ._. This one is from the original video, because I can't find BG's on google.
- There's multiple .osb files. (well remove both of them since you should probably delete the SB) <
- If you're going to add a skin to a map, you need to fully skin it. Please add the default spinner-approachcircle.png, spinner-clear.png, spinner-spin.pn,g spinner-osu.png, and cursortrail.png from the template skin. Done
- Ayu's Advanced has an inconsisten AudioLeadIn. It should be 3000. Done
- Use tickrate 2 for all difficulties, please. it fits the map better. Done
- The volume for the entire map needs to be raised by about 10% (besides the places where you want them to be silenced). All of the hitsounds are way too quiet at the moment. Uhm.. done?

Don't give me kd. i'll finish the mod when you fix all of this < oops. Ignore that that happened

Thank you!!

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Cancel 2013-02-25T20:58:04+00:00

Here's the IRC mod with Jacob & me

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20:44 Cancel: hi
20:44 Jacob: Hi
20:44 Cancel: can you maybe finish the mod?
20:44 Jacob: Sure
20:45 Jacob: did you delete the SB?
20:45 Cancel: yes
20:45 Cancel: almost everything
20:45 Jacob: Alright
20:45 Cancel: but thebg...
20:45 Cancel: bg*
20:45 Jacob: I'll find one
20:45 Cancel: thanks

20:52 Jacob: who's Fisher P? lol
20:53 Cancel: he's the one that made the song
20:54 Cancel: you can't have Nico Nico Douga as an artist if you know who the artist is
20:54 Jacob: ok
20:55 Jacob: i'll do an irc mod
20:55 Jacob: you're still missing the spinner-osu.png and cursortrail.png from the file
20:55 Jacob:

20:58 Jacob: in both the beginner and standard diff, you need to map through the small breaks at the start, like between 00:01:670 (1) - and 00:04:264 (1) -
20:58 Jacob: it's not how breaks should be used
20:58 Jacob: and it should be easy enough to map
20:58 Jacob: 00:45:778 (4,1) - and also around here too
20:58 Jacob: in both standard and beginner
21:00 Jacob: you there?
21:02 Jacob: ..
21:03 Cancel: sorry
21:03 Cancel: wass afk
21:03 Jacob: oh lol
21:03 Jacob: so read what i typed above ^ while i use the bathroom quickly
21:09 Cancel: Tht mapping in the breaks was hard, so i skipped it
21:10 Cancel: is it okay to just delete the breaks?
21:10 Jacob: uhh
21:10 Jacob: let's see
21:11 Jacob: i really think you should map through it, it shouldn't be that hard
21:11 Cancel: i tried really
21:11 Jacob: hold on, i'm coming up with an idea for beginner diff
21:11 Jacob:

21:12 Jacob: http://prntscr.com/u5c61 < for the first break in beginner
21:12 Jacob: shouldn't be too hard lol
21:13 Jacob: also make that slider one tick shorter, i messed it up
21:14 Jacob: for the second break : http://prntscr.com/u5ce1
21:14 Jacob: just fill in on the white ticks
21:15 Jacob: and for the breaks between 00:45:778 (4,1) - just fill in using the white ticks as well

21:15 Jacob: and for the next one after that too
21:15 Jacob: they really should be mapped
21:15 Jacob: make sure to do it for standard as well
21:16 Cancel: http://prntscr.com/u5ce1 < I don't get this one
21:17 Jacob: those two circles
21:17 Jacob: put them at 00:05:561 - and 00:06:210
21:18 Jacob: it's not following the hard hit sound in the background music, but it's best to map through that part
21:18 Jacob: do something similar for the next breaks and standard too
21:25 Jacob: ?
21:25 Cancel: what\
21:25 Jacob: did you do what i said? o;
21:25 Cancel: still busy
21:25 Jacob: ok
21:25 Cancel: i don't think it's that good, but it's up to you to decide
21:26 Jacob: well, breaks and paused really shouldn't be used like that
21:26 Jacob: so it's best to fill it in
21:27 Jacob: for example, look at what the mapper did in this evans map
21:27 *Jacob is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/206555 DJ YOSHITAKA - Evans -prototype- [Beginner]]
21:28 Jacob: also add DJ YOSHITAKA and beatmania IIDX into the tags
21:32 Cancel: ok done!
21:32 Cancel: do you like it?
21:32 Jacob: ok, upload the map
21:32 Jacob: to let me see
21:32 Cancel: i did
21:32 Jacob: oh ok
21:34 Jacob: ok now time for the real mod
21:34 Cancel: still IRC?
21:34 Cancel: oh wait
21:34 Jacob: yep
21:34 Jacob: ok, so
21:34 Jacob: did you add the spinner-osu.png cursortrail.png
21:34 Jacob: ?
21:34 Cancel: yup
21:34 Jacob: alright
21:35 Jacob: you sure?
21:35 Cancel: http://puu.sh/28jw0
21:35 Jacob: ok
21:40 Jacob: starting with beginner diff
21:41 Jacob: 00:03:129 (1,2) - unstack (2). you shouldn't stack circles under sliders in beginner diffs, since it may be difficult for read for newer players
21:41 Cancel: ok
21:42 Jacob: 00:18:859 (2) - clap at the end of this slider
21:42 Cancel: there is already a clap
21:42 Jacob: oh k
21:44 Jacob: 01:10:751 (1) - spinner's too short for a beginner diff
21:44 Jacob: newer players may not be able to 300
21:44 Jacob: so add circles at 01:11:075 - and 01:11:724 -
21:44 Cancel: what do i have to do there?
21:45 Jacob: lol just said
21:45 Jacob: or just make it one slider
21:45 Cancel: yeah ityped too late
21:46 Jacob: in all diffs, the break after the spinner (01:19:507 (1) ) should be extended by dragging it to the blue bookmark
21:46 Jacob: 01:22:426
21:46 Jacob: the break should be extended to there ^
21:46 Jacob: http://prntscr.com/u5i30 like this
21:46 Cancel: add finish in spinner then?
21:47 Jacob: oh sure
21:47 Cancel: ok
21:48 Jacob: that's it for the beginner diff
21:48 Jacob: moving onto standard...
21:49 Jacob: oh wait forgot something in beginner - 00:43:183 (3,4) - unstack (4) b/c it could be hard to read
21:49 Cancel: can i stack it on 00:46:426 (1) - ?
21:50 Jacob: sure
21:50 Cancel: ok
21:50 Jacob: just don't stack circles under sliders
21:50 Jacob: it's fine if you do circles under circles
21:51 Cancel: ok
21:51 Cancel: 00:03:129 (1,2) - - 00:05:561 (1,2) - Are these too hard for Standard?
21:52 Jacob: 00:05:561 (1,2) - these are i think, yeah
21:53 Jacob: do something like this instead http://prntscr.com/u5j9o
21:54 Jacob: that's it for standard
21:54 Jacob: i'm not gonna bubble it right now.. because i want to wait for ayu to come so i can do a full mod, plus i need to get off now
21:54 Jacob: and i need to check some small stuff
21:54 Jacob: so, byee
21:54 Cancel: ok

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Low 2013-02-26T01:22:32+00:00

[General]

- Since the BG quality is way too bad.. I had to make a new one for you (it's supposed to be funny, lol). Right click, save as, and use it for the BG in all diffs. Make sure to delete the old one.

BG

- Add "MAD" to the tags since this is what a mashup song like this is called.
- Where are you getting the name "Fisher P" for the artist? NicoNico? Could you provide links? I'm googling and not finding this video anywhere except YouTube and it has no artist..

[Beginner]

- It's unrankable to use 5% timing sections for things that aren't spinners, so change all of the 5% to 10%.
00:20:805 (3) - i think a repeat slider this long is too hard for a beginner diff since players might not be able to figure out when this will end. try doing something like this. Make sure to carefully look at the timeline (on the top) and the notes to see what you should do. (3) should go at 00:20:480, (4) should start at 00:21:129, and (5) should be at 00:22:426. make sure to apply hitsounds as well.
01:05:237 (4) - should be a clap at the beginning of this slider to go with the hard hitting sounds in the background music.
01:07:832 (2) - Clap at the reverse of this slider to follow your hitsound pattern.
01:31:183 (1) - extend this spinner to end on the heavy beat of the song

[Standard]

- It's unrankable to use 5% timing sections for things that aren't spinners, so change all of the 5% to 10%.
00:11:399 (4,1) - (1) should be spaced out farther according to distance snap to avoid readability issues.
00:51:615 (2,1) - there shouldn't be a jump this big in a standard diff.. it should be easy to move these around to distance snap in any way you want
00:58:751 (5) - You need to map through the break after this note. make a spinner that starts at 00:58:913 and ends at 01:00:048. It feels less odd then one whole break at this point in the diff.
01:10:426 (1) - Make this spinner longer by 2 1/2 ticks (aka it ends at 01:11:724). It's too short and feels awkward to play.
01:31:183 (1) - extend this spinner so that it lands on the heavy beat of the song (like what i suggested for the beginner diff). It feels weird to have it not do this.
01:35:399 (4) - Remove the finish from this note, but not the clap. It sounds out of place.
01:39:615 (5) - finish at the beginning of this slider.

[Ayu's Advanced]

- It's unrankable to use 5% timing sections for things that aren't spinners, so change all of the 5% to 10%.
00:01:670 (1) - Map through the breaks after this note like I told Cancel. Really, it's an advanced diff and there shouldn't be silly pauses like this.
00:04:264 (3) - ^
00:07:183 (1) - ^ This one's less severe. I still would, though.
00:15:940 (1) - remove this one note combo. i see what you were doing here, but it's kinda silly and ends up looking random rather than looking intuitive.
00:17:237 (4,1) - This overlaps in game with 00:16:913 (3) due to stacking. Space them farther away.
00:18:534 (1) - one note combo
00:28:102 (3) - Space this a bit farther away. the human eye can't detect the difference between this and the 1/2 spacing, causing readability issues for me and maybe other people who've never heard evans.
00:31:751 (3) - ^
00:31:994 (4) - ^
01:00:048 (1,2,3,4) - This is why you can't have 5% volume. Please turn the volume up on this PAST 10% because having these all silenced is really weird.
01:13:669 (1) - Should be a clap at the end of this slider.
01:22:102 (6) - Drag the break after this note to the bookmark like this. (I hope you know how to do that)
01:40:264 (3) - This entire slider should be shortened by one 1/4 tick to follow the vocals. Sounds odd for you to not do this..

phew, that was a lot.. call me back when you're ready orz

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Cancel 2013-02-26T14:24:47+00:00

Applied my part of Jacob's mod. Now I'm waiting for Ayu.

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Ayu 2013-02-26T18:20:13+00:00

Jacob wrote:
[Ayu's Advanced]

- It's unrankable to use 5% timing sections for things that aren't spinners, so change all of the 5% to 10%.
00:01:670 (1) - Map through the breaks after this note like I told Cancel. Really, it's an advanced diff and there shouldn't be silly pauses like this. I'd rather not, it's silly to map to different things at once, also feels like overmapping since all there is is something like "krusty krab" said in a low volume.
00:04:264 (3) - ^ I'd rather not, it's silly to map to different things at once, also feels like overmapping since all there is is something like "krusty krab" said in a low volume.
00:07:183 (1) - ^ This one's less severe. I still would, though. I'd rather not, it's silly to map to different things at once, also feels like overmapping since all there is is something like "krusty krab" said in a low volume.
00:15:940 (1) - remove this one note combo. i see what you were doing here, but it's kinda silly and ends up looking random rather than looking intuitive.
00:17:237 (4,1) - This overlaps in game with 00:16:913 (3) due to stacking. Space them farther away.
00:18:534 (1) - one note combo
00:28:102 (3) - Space this a bit farther away. the human eye can't detect the difference between this and the 1/2 spacing, causing readability issues for me and maybe other people who've never heard evans.
00:31:751 (3) - ^
00:31:994 (4) - ^
01:00:048 (1,2,3,4) - This is why you can't have 5% volume. Please turn the volume up on this PAST 10% because having these all silenced is really weird.
01:13:669 (1) - Should be a clap at the end of this slider.
01:22:102 (6) - Drag the break after this note to the bookmark like this. (I hope you know how to do that)
01:40:264 (3) - This entire slider should be shortened by one 1/4 tick to follow the vocals. Sounds odd for you to not do this..

phew, that was a lot.. call me back when you're ready orz

fixed everything else. Atleast should be.

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Cancel 2013-02-26T22:43:57+00:00

Ugh, IRC mod with Jacob & me 2.. *crying*

SPOILER

22:32 Cancel: hi
22:33 Jacob: Hi,
22:33 Cancel: have you seen?
22:33 Jacob: yeah
22:33 Jacob: checking it now
22:33 Cancel: I'm so exited
22:34 Jacob: in beginner and standard, you need to change all 5% volume timing sections to 10%
22:34 Jacob: 5% is unrankable
22:35 Cancel: I FIXED THAT
22:35 Cancel: I mean..
22:35 Cancel: i fixed that
22:35 Jacob: I still see 5%
22:35 Jacob: o nvm it's for spinners
22:35 Jacob: haha
22:35 Jacob: ok, hmm
22:36 Jacob: i redownloaded the map, and the following files are missing: http://prntscr.com/ua6jk
22:36 Jacob: you need to re-add them
22:36 Jacob: and then update
22:37 Jacob: also add "MAD" to the tags in Ayu
22:37 Jacob: s diff
22:37 Cancel: i am getting stressed of this osu! editor..
22:37 Jacob: Sorry
22:37 Cancel: I fixed all that today
22:37 Cancel: and now...
22:37 Jacob: re-add the files and update the map lol
22:38 Cancel: If you see something is deleted, Its not my fault
22:38 Jacob: ..ok
22:39 Cancel: http://puu.sh/28Sfv
22:39 Cancel: ...
22:39 Cancel: its still there
22:40 Jacob: that the old folder.. it still has the old bg in it
22:40 Jacob: lol
22:40 Cancel: oh
22:40 Cancel: sorry osu!
22:40 Jacob: tell me when you fixed stuff
22:40 Jacob: in standard: 00:58:751 (5) - this note is silenced 5%, you need to change that
22:43 Jacob: and one last thing in ayu's advanced: 00:25:507 (2) - just space this note a little farther away using distance snap
22:44 Jacob: fix the skin issues and that stuff and i'll give you your first ever bubble

22:47 Cancel: Fixed
22:47 Cancel: (hopefully)
22:47 Jacob: kk
22:48 *Cancel is exited
22:48 *Cancel falls of chair
22:48 Jacob: :3
22:49 Cancel: and?
22:49 Jacob: i'm seeing
22:51 Jacob: in ayu's advanced, you need to use distance snap on 00:25:832 (3) - too.. lol.. make sure everything follows distance snap
22:51 Jacob: and now the only file missing is cursortrail.png
22:51 Jacob: We're almost there ^_^
22:51 *Cancel shakes
22:53 Cancel: ok updated
22:53 Jacob: kk gotta redownload again\
22:55 Cancel: and?
22:55 Jacob: ayu's advanced: omg tiny spacing error here 00:25:832 (3,4) - lol
22:56 Jacob: and add MAD to ayu's tags
22:56 Cancel: OMG!!!
22:56 Jacob: dunno why it got removed
22:56 Jacob: lol
22:56 Cancel: i tell you
22:56 Cancel: osu! is doing something\
22:56 Jacob: for that spacing error
22:56 Jacob: just space it out like 4 grids farther
22:57 Jacob: like this http://prntscr.com/uaa09
22:57 Cancel: can you say the x y coordinaate
22:57 Cancel: coordinate*
22:58 Jacob: the start of 00:26:318 (4) - should be at x:252 y:204
22:58 Jacob: don't forget MAD
22:58 Cancel: and (3) ?
22:59 Jacob: same as before, also add "jubeat" to tags in all diffs
22:59 Jacob: forgot that
22:59 Cancel: ._.
22:59 Cancel: 00:25:832 (3) -
22:59 Jacob: oh yeah
22:59 Jacob: 3 should be same spot as before
23:00 Cancel: can you maybe tell it
23:00 Cancel: because i moved it
23:00 Jacob: x:276 y:284
23:02 Jacob: done?
23:02 Cancel: done
23:02 Jacob: uploaded?
23:02 Cancel: yes
23:03 Cancel: and?
23:04 Jacob: omg... in beginner, you need to add "jubeat" after the MAD tag. in ayu and standard, you need to add "MAD" before jubeat
23:04 Jacob: dude what are you doing to the tags
23:04 Cancel: I COPY PASTED IT!!!!
23:04 Jacob: you copy pasted it wrong.. lol
23:04 Jacob: follow what i said
23:05 Jacob: make sure MAD and jubeat are in all diffs tags.. in the SAME ORDER
23:05 Jacob: make sure theres one space between each word
23:05 Jacob: and then upload
23:06 Jacob: tell me when you're done... lol
23:06 Cancel: ok
23:07 Cancel: done
23:08 Cancel: and?
23:09 Cancel: ...
23:09 Jacob: in song setup, uncheck both of these checks in all diffs http://prntscr.com/uabu6
23:09 Jacob: checking last things, hold on
23:10 Cancel: but.....
23:10 Jacob: Almost done
23:10 Jacob: Be patient, bubbles must be very high quality
23:10 Cancel: a bubble is a bubble
23:10 Cancel: it is round
23:10 Cancel: not HD
23:11 Jacob: no, you're incorrect
23:11 Jacob: A bubble = Practically ready for ranking
23:11 Jacob: It is not a "round"
23:11 Jacob: ...
23:11 Cancel: its a joke
23:11 Jacob: o.o
23:11 Cancel: all i can make while i am frustrated
23:13 Cancel: ok before i upload...
23:13 Cancel: anything elsse?
23:14 Cancel: nevermind...
23:14 Cancel: updated
23:14 Jacob: hold on..
23:16 Jacob: in all diffs, set the offset to 1692
23:16 Cancel: Orz
23:17 Jacob: and then for each diff, go to timing setup, and while holding ctrl, click all of the green timing sections. if should show an option that looks like this: http://prntscr.com/uadgb
23:17 Jacob: and then for each diff, go to timing setup, and while holding ctrl, click all of the green timing sections. if should show an option that looks like this: http://prntscr.com/uadgb
23:17 Jacob: change that 0 to 22 and click "move"
23:18 Jacob: that should snap all the timing sections: make sure to do for each diff
23:21 Jacob: fixed?
23:25 Cancel: ok
23:25 Cancel: fixed
23:26 Jacob: you didn't resnap notes ayu's diff
23:26 Jacob: fix and i'll bubble
23:28 Cancel: how?
23:29 Jacob: well, actually, in all diffs, click "Timing" at the top, and then "Resnap all notes" in red
23:29 Jacob: Should be good after that
23:30 Cancel: ok
23:30 Cancel: fixed
23:32 Cancel: and?
23:32 Jacob: omfg while you resnapped you messed up some notes, hold on lemme list so you can fix
23:32 Jacob: 00:25:043 (1) - should end on blue tick in 1/4
23:33 Jacob: 00:25:854 (3) - reverse should be on blue tick
23:33 Jacob: these are in ayu's diff btw
23:33 Jacob: 00:26:340 (4) - same thing
23:33 Jacob: 00:26:989 (5) -
23:34 Jacob: omg i'm just gonna get ayu to do this hold on lol
23:34 Cancel: *facepalm*
23:34 Jacob:

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23:34 Cancel: hes offline..
23:34 Jacob: no he's not lol
23:34 Cancel: yes he.. oh..
23:34 Cancel: WAIT!
23:35 Cancel: Don't let him update!
23:35 Jacob: why not.........
23:35 Cancel: he can send it via message
23:35 Jacob: i know..
23:35 Jacob: he's fixing it right npw
23:35 Jacob: now
23:35 Jacob: and then he's gonna send you the file
23:40 Cancel: he isn't doing anything....
23:41 Jacob: he's fixing
23:41 Cancel: for me he's in the idle
23:42 Jacob: i have to get off. ayu will fix, i'll be back soon to bubble. omg, things keep going wrong with this map, ugh... bye

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Cancel 2013-02-26T22:44:24+00:00

Again, waiting for Ayu.

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Cancel 2013-02-27T15:38:15+00:00

Ok, all done. Does this beatmap import for you guys? Please tell me.

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Low 2013-02-28T22:39:59+00:00

after days of work and IRC modding...

Bubbled.

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Cancel 2013-02-28T22:51:56+00:00

third IRC mod with Jacob

SPOILER

22:53 Cancel: hi
22:53 Cancel: !!
22:55 Jacob: hi
22:55 Cancel: doess patvans work for you now?
22:55 Cancel: so we can finish the mod?
22:58 Jacob: yeah
22:58 Jacob: old BG is still in the file
22:58 Jacob: plus where did you get the artist "Fisher P" from? I'm still confused
22:58 Cancel: from SamiPale's mod
22:58 Jacob: also ayu's offline, so i need to wait till he gets here
22:59 Cancel: The Artist should be "漁夫P" and Romanised Artist should be "Fisher P". Since "Nico Nico Douga" is not allowed to be in Artist and Source, you can put it in tags.
22:59 Cancel: The Artist should be "漁夫P" and Romanised Artist should be "Fisher P". Since "Nico Nico Douga" is not allowed to be in Artist and Source, you can put it in tags.
22:59 Jacob: k
23:00 Jacob: and i need someone to check the timing
23:00 Cancel: TheVileOne can help
23:00 Cancel: or _Ich
23:00 Jacob: i'm gonna get someone from the bat or mat to help
23:00 Jacob: o.o
23:00 Cancel: or Sakura
23:00 Cancel: ^ Bat
23:02 Cancel: oh and i know what was wrong
23:02 Jacob: ?
23:02 Cancel: At Ayu's Diff...
23:03 Cancel: i snapped them on 1/2
23:03 Cancel: so it was my fault after all
23:03 Jacob: k
23:03 Cancel: but fixed it with the old data file i kept
23:05 Jacob: kk
23:05 Jacob: i'm getting timing help right now
23:06 Cancel: he still can't import the mmap
23:06 Cancel: so i do the mod for his diff
23:06 Jacob: hmm
23:06 Jacob: yeah, do it
23:06 Jacob: i posted the mod earlier
23:07 Jacob: for ayu's diff
23:07 Jacob: the one he already checked but you reset the diff soo

23:07 Cancel: o yeah
23:10 Cancel: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=pxnfN9Um ... PkgJDZfKFA
23:10 Cancel: such an peaceful song
23:10 Jacob: cool
23:11 Jacob: i got timing checked, it looks good
23:11 Jacob: if you fix ayu's diff and remove the old BG i'll bubble
23:11 Jacob:

23:16 Cancel: ok updated
23:16 Cancel: is it good now
23:16 Cancel: or did i miss some things
23:18 Jacob: uhh you need to fix ayu's diff
23:19 Jacob: hold on
23:19 Jacob: 00:28:124 (3) - space this a little farther away (make sure everything after it doesn't overlap too)
23:19 Jacob: 00:31:773 (3) - same thing
23:19 Jacob: 00:32:016 (4) - same
23:20 Jacob: 01:40:286 (3) - and shorten this slider by one 1/4 tick to match the vocals
23:20 Jacob: make sure to re-arrange the sliders after it for distance snap too
23:22 Cancel: ok updated
23:23 Jacob: ...you didn't do them right
23:23 Jacob: hold on
23:23 Cancel: i'm not that good in that T.T
23:24 Jacob: i'm trying to get ayu.....
23:25 Cancel: he can't import remember
23:25 Jacob: i'm trying to help with that
23:29 Jacob: hmm
23:30 Jacob: i'm gonna tell you what to do for ayu's diff
23:31 Jacob: 00:28:124 (3) - move to x:264 y:104
23:31 Jacob: 00:28:610 (4) - move to x:464 y:76
23:32 Jacob: 00:28:935 (5) - move to x:420 y:216
23:32 Jacob: 00:29:746 (1) - move to x:304 y:296
23:32 Jacob: 00:29:746 (1) - move to x:80 y:360
23:33 Jacob: 00:32:016 (4) - move to x:180 y:284
23:33 Cancel: 00:29:746 (1) - there's 2 times
23:34 Jacob: whoops...
23:34 Jacob: 00:29:746 (1) - move to x:304 y:296
23:34 Jacob: 00:31:773 (3) - move to x:80 y:360
23:34 Jacob: thats better
23:35 Jacob: 00:32:502 (2) - move this to x:316 y:244
23:35 Jacob: 00:32:827 (3) - move to x:332 y:96
23:35 Jacob: and that's it..
23:36 Cancel: ok updated
23:39 Jacob: finally..
23:40 Jacob: refresh your map thread
23:40 Jacob:

23:40 Cancel: o3o
23:40 *Cancel hugs Jacob
23:40 Jacob: :3
23:40 Cancel: thank you
23:40 Jacob: np

Ayu

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Ayu 2013-02-28T23:09:39+00:00

<3

Suzully

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Suzully 2013-03-04T14:17:55+00:00

Hello.

[General]

Romanised Artist should be "Gyofu P".(Gyofu means fisher man in Japanese)

Overall hitsound is kinda low. You can increase 50% part by 10% and I think it's better.

All difficulties have a break after KIAI and Easy/Normal have another break at the first of song, but I think those parts can be mapped since there're many interesting sounds in back so try to consider to map all parts?

[Easy]

00:05:583 (1,2) - It's hard for beginner to hear which sound these circles follow. I suggest replacing them with one slider.
00:15:633 (x) - There are two green lines at the same time. Remove one please.
00:17:583 (1) - Let's add a finish!
00:37:367 (3) - Move below by 1 grid then (1,2,3) look more beautiful.

[Standard]

00:07:854 (3) - There's a big sound at 00:08:340(you're following the same sound at 00:08:827 (4,5)) so adding a note there would be much better imo. Remove the repeat of slider, them add a circle or do something?
00:15:633 (x) - There are two green lines at the same time. Remove one please.
00:17:583 (1) - Let's add a finish!
01:16:286 (5) - Move left by 1 grid(like arround (4)). Looks better.
01:22:448 (x) - End a spinner with finish here would be better imo.

[Ayu's Advanced]

00:16:773 (2,3) - Can't read (3). Player misreads them as one slider. Can you change them like 01:13:691 (1).
01:32:827 (1) - Add a finish? It makes good effect.
01:22:448 (x) - End a spinner with finish here would be better imo.

I suggested mapping all parts of song, it seems kinda tough to you. I leave a judge for trying or not to you.
Call me back after you finished fixing and tell me your thought :3

Stefan

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Stefan 2013-03-04T14:22:01+00:00

Meanwhile you can fix your Tags that nothing is capitalized. Also, add "squarepants" because the name of the serie is "Spongebob Squarepants". no kd for this.

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Cancel 2013-03-04T15:21:37+00:00

The things noted below, I don't get.

???

00:07:854 (3) - There's a big sound at 00:08:340(you're following the same sound at 00:08:827 (4,5)) so adding a note there would be much better imo. Remove the repeat of slider, them add a circle or do something?
01:16:286 (5) - Move left by 1 grid(like arround (4)). Looks better. < Can you please give the coordinates..

Anyway, fixed anything else exept one. Waiting for Ayu to apply his part of the mod!

The one thing I denied (don't hate me for this!

)

:(

All difficulties have a break after KIAI and Easy/Normal have another break at the first of song, but I think those parts can be mapped since there're many interesting sounds in back so try to consider to map all parts?

EDIT : Finished the mod for Ayu.

Suzully

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Suzully 2013-03-05T13:13:17+00:00

Cancel wrote:
The things noted below, I don't get.

???
00:07:854 (3) - There's a big sound at 00:08:340(you're following the same sound at 00:08:827 (4,5)) so adding a note there would be much better imo. Remove the repeat of slider, them add a circle or do something?
01:16:286 (5) - Move left by 1 grid(like arround (4)). Looks better. < Can you please give the coordinates..

Okay.
00:07:854 (3) -

or

01:16:286 (5) -

SPOILER

Well, another issue appeared. In Ayu's difficulty, it seems sliders were rescaled wrongly(idk why, there wasn't any timing change), please correct them.

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Cancel 2013-03-07T19:39:33+00:00

Suzully wrote:
Cancel wrote:
The things noted below, I don't get.

???
00:07:854 (3) - There's a big sound at 00:08:340(you're following the same sound at 00:08:827 (4,5)) so adding a note there would be much better imo. Remove the repeat of slider, them add a circle or do something?
01:16:286 (5) - Move left by 1 grid(like arround (4)). Looks better. < Can you please give the coordinates..
Okay.
00:07:854 (3) -

or

01:16:286 (5) -
SPOILER

Well, another issue appeared. In Ayu's difficulty, it seems sliders were rescaled wrongly(idk why, there wasn't any timing change), please correct them.

Ok. Fixed. Please Recheck

wendao

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wendao 2013-03-08T06:50:05+00:00

[General]
GyofuP or Gyofu P ? *spacing*
BPM 185.000
Offset 1670
i think 3 sec AudioLeadIn is too long, consider make it short to 2 sec

[Beginner]
01:13:691 (2,3) - (2) one grid down, (3) one grid up

[Standard]
looks fine

[Ayu]
00:04:448 - Delete Break
00:06:394 - add 1/4 slider?

00:13:205 (3,4,1,2) - how about this

00:43:448 (5,6) - move it to 00:43:367
00:46:286 (2) - delete slider and add a note in 00:46:448

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Cancel 2013-03-08T15:19:31+00:00

Harez wrote:
[General]
GyofuP or Gyofu P ? *spacing*
BPM 185.000
Offset 1670
i think 3 sec AudioLeadIn is too long, consider make it short to 2 sec

[Beginner]
01:13:691 (2,3) - (2) one grid down, (3) one grid up

[Standard]
looks fine

[Ayu]
00:04:448 - Delete Break
00:06:394 - add 1/4 slider?
00:13:205 (3,4,1,2) - how about this
00:43:448 (5,6) - move it to 00:43:367
00:46:286 (2) - delete slider and add a note in 00:46:448

Fixed!

Last edited by Cancel 2013-03-09T15:48:57+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

Suzully

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Suzully 2013-03-09T06:02:35+00:00

You can fix stuff in Harez's mod. Those are all minor things so I can rank a map even after fixing them.
(BPM and offset are already fine, you don't need to change them. I agree with Audio-Lead-In.)

And also please change Artist in EDITER again. Probably you changed it in .osu file so it doesn't work fine now.(unknowned character "æ¼å¤«P" in Ayu's difficulty)
Then, I don't know why but a new combo has been removed from 01:01:367 (1) in Easy. This is the next note of a spinner so it's necessary.

Tell me again when you fix above. I'll rank asap because today's your birthday.

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Cancel 2013-03-09T15:48:42+00:00

Suzully wrote:
You can fix stuff in Harez's mod. Those are all minor things so I can rank a map even after fixing them.
(BPM and offset are already fine, you don't need to change them. I agree with Audio-Lead-In.)

And also please change Artist in EDITER again. Probably you changed it in .osu file so it doesn't work fine now.(unknowned character "æ¼å¤«P" in Ayu's difficulty)
Then, I don't know why but a new combo has been removed from 01:01:367 (1) in Easy. This is the next note of a spinner so it's necessary.

Tell me again when you fix above. I'll rank asap because today's your birthday.

Fixed!