1. Easy : 00:29:192 (3) - Missing whistle on slider's start
2. Easy : 02:10:144 (1) - Is the whistle on slider's end intentional here? (I'd remove the whistle on slider's end because 02:12:049 (1) also has no whistle on slider's end~)
3. Normal : 00:40:620 (4) - Missing whistle yet again
4. Normal : 01:47:287 (1) - Add new combo manually here (missing new combo after spinner)
5. Normal : 02:09:192 (6) - Yet again the hitsound is missing (the hitsound is missing from the entire slider this time :3)
6. Hard : 00:15:382 (1) - I don't think 1/3 is required here though, just use 1/4s as you used on 00:23:001 (1) - the lyric here is 'kireina' though (contains four syllables and therefore not snapped properly if 1/3)
7. Hard : 00:21:573 (5) - Missing whistle on slider's start

Ranking Criteria wrote:

The video's dimensions must not exceed 800x600 for the 4:3 format, or 854x480 for the 16:9 widescreen format This is so video files keep a decent filesize and do not increase the beatmap's size by too much

Niva wrote:

Hi Autumn, rechecking here (don't kd) - not much things to mention (I'm still half-awake while posting this orz) :

1. Easy : 00:29:192 (3) - Missing whistle on slider's start Added
2. Easy : 02:10:144 (1) - Is the whistle on slider's end intentional here? (I'd remove the whistle on slider's end because 02:12:049 (1) also has no whistle on slider's end~) Removed
3. Normal : 00:40:620 (4) - Missing whistle yet again Added
4. Normal : 01:47:287 (1) - Add new combo manually here (missing new combo after spinner) Added
5. Normal : 02:09:192 (6) - Yet again the hitsound is missing (the hitsound is missing from the entire slider this time :3) Hmm..Added XD
6. Hard : 00:15:382 (1) - I don't think 1/3 is required here though, just use 1/4s as you used on 00:23:001 (1) - the lyric here is 'kireina' though (contains four syllables and therefore not snapped properly if 1/3) Removed the reverse slider, using a single slider instead XD
7. Hard : 00:21:573 (5) - Missing whistle on slider's start

Added

Finally, your video's dimension is too large at the moment (current one is 1280 x 720 - yes it lags my editor ._.) :

Ranking Criteria wrote:

The video's dimensions must not exceed 800x600 for the 4:3 format, or 854x480 for the 16:9 widescreen format This is so video files keep a decent filesize and do not increase the beatmap's size by too much

About the Video: I have improved the encoding quality and changed video's dimension to 840x480. Hope it won't lag this time! XD

As you can see in this post I don't really find big problems pattern-wise (more or less it should had been covered up with my previous mod post), most problems left here are hitsounds being inconsistent at some part (:

Niva wrote:

Err, I forgot to mention one thing earlier though (also from the ranking criteria) :



...umm, yep, only that left actually (flip the comboburst-0.png~) Fixed

Gloria Guard wrote:

Good job 乃

Second Hari no Sora version gogo !!