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Noto Arisa - Neko Hiyori. [Taiko]

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Topic Starter
Jikson[m9]
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2013年4月3日 at 上午 01:20:23

Artist: Noto Arisa
Title: Neko Hiyori.
Source: maimai
Tags: SEGA, laundry machine, Eguchi seera,Stylips
BPM: 171
Filesize: 2428kb
Play Time: 01:27
Difficulties Available:
  1. Futsuu (4 stars, 208 notes)
  2. Kanpakyin's Taiko Oni (4.94 stars, 568 notes)
  3. Kantan (2.19 stars, 143 notes)
  4. Muzukashii (4.65 stars, 343 notes)
  5. Oni (4.94 stars, 500 notes)
Download: Noto Arisa - Neko Hiyori.
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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A song from Sega's Arcade game called maimai.
The four lower diffs are done and are made by me=Jikson[m9]
Made for ranking. Thanks.
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21 March 2013: added Kanpakyin's Taiko Oni, thanks to kanpakyin
Cihyaa
mod頼まれたので~

d= small don
k=small kat
D=BIG DON
K=BIG KAT
del=delete

Jik's Taiko Oni
  1. 00:08:745 del
  2. 00:14:184 change d
    00:14:359 del
  3. 00:16:464 ~ 00:16:728 vol50%
    00:16:903 vol70%
  4. 00:26:377 change k
  5. 00:45:763 add k
    00:45:850 del
    00:45:938 add k
    00:46:026 add d
    00:46:289 del
  6. 01:03:482 add k
  7. 01:08:921 change k
    01:09:008 del
    01:09:096 add k
  8. 01:09:184 add d
  9. 01:09:447 del
    01:09:622 add d
  10. 01:23:921 change D
  11. 01:25:324 add D

    良い譜面!

Jik's Taiko Muzu
  1. 00:05:675 ~ 00:16:201 難しすぎ;w;
  2. 00:06:640 del
    00:06:903 del
  3. 00:10:061 del
    00:10:149 del
    00:10:850 del
  4. 00:12:254 del
    00:12:517 del
  5. 00:15:763 del
  6. 00:21:464 del
  7. 00:26:201 del
  8. 00:34:622 del
  9. 00:56:728 ~ 00:57:780 speed change delete
    or slider delete
  10. 01:00:675 del
    01:00:938 del
  11. 01:04:184 del
  12. 01:04:798 add d
    01:04:973 add d
    01:05:149 add d
  13. 01:20:149 del
    01:20:412 add d

    最後のサビのとこの3打も気になりますがどこか一つだけ抜くのもバランス崩れるのでこれで一応。。。
Topic Starter
Jikson[m9]

Cihyaa wrote:

mod頼まれたので~

d= small don
k=small kat
D=BIG DON
K=BIG KAT
del=delete

Jik's Taiko Oni
  1. 00:08:745 del ok
  2. 00:14:184 change d no, このバーは面が少ないほうが好き
    00:14:359 del ok
  3. 00:16:464 ~ 00:16:728 vol50% ok
    00:16:903 vol70%
  4. 00:26:377 change k no, ピッチと合わせない…
  5. 00:45:763 add k ok いい発想!もとのもちょっと好きだけどこれでいい
    00:45:850 del
    00:45:938 add k
    00:46:026 add d
    00:46:289 del
  6. 01:03:482 add k ok
  7. 01:08:921 change k ↑↑
    01:09:008 del
    01:09:096 add k
  8. 01:09:184 add d
  9. 01:09:447 del no, ここはoox ooxが好き
    01:09:622 add d
  10. 01:23:921 change D ok
  11. 01:25:324 add D ok

    良い譜面! ありがとうございます!

Jik's Taiko Muzu
  1. 00:05:675 ~ 00:16:201 難しすぎ;w; はい;w;
  2. 00:06:640 del ↓↓↓
    00:06:903 del
  3. 00:10:061 del
    00:10:149 del→→→ 全部受け取ったけど、本当に3連打が欲しいので、00:08:043 と 00:13:657 と01:02:079 に縁を置きました、どうでしょうか?
    00:10:850 del
  4. 00:12:254 del
    00:12:517 del
  5. 00:15:763 del ↑↑↑
  6. 00:21:464 del ok
  7. 00:26:201 del ok
  8. 00:34:622 del ok
  9. 00:56:728 ~ 00:57:780 speed change delete
    or slider delete   たとえこのスライダーをスルーしてもミスにならないので、むずかしいプレイヤーにソフランを認識させてもいいではないかーと思いますが. Doing nothing to this slider won't lead to a miss count, so I think it is reasonable to put a speed change slider here. Moreover this can let Muzukashii players be used to speed changes. Took note for this, If more modders request deleting this I will delete it.
  10. 01:00:675 del ↑↑↑
    01:00:938 del ↑↑↑
  11. 01:04:184 del ↑↑↑
  12. 01:04:798 add d ok
    01:04:973 add d ok
    01:05:149 add d ok
  13. 01:20:149 del ok
    01:20:412 add d  ok

    最後のサビのとこの3打も気になりますがどこか一つだけ抜くのもバランス崩れるのでこれで一応。。。 できるだけでooxとxxoを消しました、残ったのは同じ色の、もしくは必要らしい3連打です
感激します!モッドしてくれてありがとうございました!
mintong89
SPOILER
12:17 hknoboru: here?
12:17 mintong89: nope, 你杯具了
12:17 hknoboru: :(
12:17 mintong89: lol just kidding
12:17 hknoboru: 你不在啊
12:17 mintong89: 在
12:18 mintong89: 该玩笑罢了lol
12:18 hknoboru: 你回來的時候告訴我 (喂
12:18 mintong89: .
12:18 *mintong89 slaps hknoboru
12:18 hknoboru: http://osu.ppy.sh/s/73427 mod req 一小個 ._.
12:18 mintong89: 干嘛你们都跟我求modreq Q_Q
12:19 hknoboru: 你低難度神mapper
12:19 mintong89: OAO
12:19 mintong89: 来个irc mod 可以么? 有点懒惰了
12:20 hknoboru: ok
12:21 mintong89: 图片要 1024x768 而且
12:21 mintong89: 那么萌的歌曲不适合啦 _(:3 」∠)_
12:21 hknoboru: 圖片這個可以再找w
12:21 hknoboru: 因為要強調是maimai 曲嘛 OTL
12:22 mintong89: 音乐比特率最少要 128 kpbs
12:22 hknoboru: osu! 上一首都沒有
12:22 mintong89: lol
12:22 hknoboru: 這個比較難...
12:22 hknoboru: 未必有
12:22 mintong89: 你说未必有是...?
12:22 mintong89: 音乐?
12:22 hknoboru: 嗯
12:22 mintong89: 教人encode就可以了啊
12:22 mintong89: 叫*
12:22 hknoboru: ok...
12:23 mintong89: 等等
12:23 hknoboru: noted
12:23 mintong89: 帮你弄弄
12:23 hknoboru: m(_ _)m
12:24 mintong89: 而且感觉音乐质量好低 _(:3 」∠)_
12:25 hknoboru: ?
12:25 mintong89: 啊没事
12:25 mintong89: http://puu.sh/1Py7J
12:25 mintong89: 来看行么
12:26 mintong89: 哦对了encode后offset会稍微改变
12:26 hknoboru: 可以調整w
12:26 mintong89: 嗯w
12:27 hknoboru: 反正1/6不多
12:27 mintong89: 0.0
12:27 mintong89: 话说你会做osu谱?
12:27 mintong89: 只是问问
12:28 hknoboru: 不會...
12:29 hknoboru: 總覺得作osu譜對藝術細胞的要求好高
12:29 mintong89: 嘛
12:30 hknoboru: slider怎麼曲的都講究
12:30 mintong89: 我在练习做osu 先放开taiko http://puu.sh/1Py7J
12:30 mintong89: 。。
12:30 mintong89: 我在练习做osu 先放开taiko _(:3 」∠)_
12:30 hknoboru: wwwww
12:30 mintong89: copy表情错...
12:31 mintong89: 感觉offset没改变
12:31 hknoboru: 還好 :D
12:31 mintong89: lol~
12:32 mintong89: 00:17:615 - 这里加个红线吧~
12:32 hknoboru: 果然...
12:33 mintong89: 0.0
12:33 mintong89: 01:06:036 这里也是
12:33 hknoboru: 知道要放但不知道放在哪
12:33 mintong89: 01:06:036 -
12:34 mintong89: o.o
12:40 mintong89: 那就开始Mod了?
12:40 hknoboru: ok
12:41 *hknoboru ready to be killed
12:41 mintong89: OAO...
12:41 mintong89: 00:01:784 - 这不建议放, 没drum 没vocal
12:41 mintong89: 诶错time
12:41 mintong89: 00:04:106
12:41 mintong89: 00:04:106 -
12:42 hknoboru: 不是bass drum來的嗎...
12:43 mintong89: 如果整体听的话,感觉很奇怪
12:43 mintong89: 00:04:282 - 这个的话 K K D K 比较顺音
12:43 hknoboru: ok
12:43 hknoboru: ok
12:43 mintong89: 00:06:913 - k? 感觉d压重音
12:44 mintong89: 00:12:527 - ^
12:44 hknoboru: 顧及(kkkd) 後的k很難
12:45 mintong89: 这是oni感觉没问题吧...
12:45 hknoboru: 171的1/6 我認為夠難了...
12:45 hknoboru: 燎原也只是208
12:45 hknoboru: don't want to make it too hard
12:46 mintong89: 诶你们都是太鼓达人派的啊...
12:46 mintong89: 那就好吧
12:46 mintong89: 对太鼓达人来说的确有点难
12:47 mintong89: 00:26:419 - D比较好 (?
12:48 hknoboru: 你是第二個modder說這個了 w
12:48 hknoboru: 好吧好吧
12:48 mintong89: ww
12:48 hknoboru: 本來想這裏放純色好像很有趣
12:48 mintong89: 00:41:474 - 这的话直接 K K K就好了
12:48 mintong89: o.o
12:49 hknoboru: 也對
12:49 mintong89: 00:41:299 - 刚刚?
12:50 hknoboru: fixed
12:50 mintong89: 00:42:527 - 这的话kkkkd试试?
12:50 hknoboru: kkkkd k d d d?
12:50 mintong89: 然后 这里 k 00:43:579 -
12:50 mintong89: kkkkd k d d k
12:51 hknoboru: vocal好像比較明顯
12:51 mintong89: 嘛
12:51 mintong89: 大拍子建议压重音
12:52 mintong89: 00:42:878 - 大拍子
12:52 mintong89: 个人建议别介意w
12:52 hknoboru: check Mukashii
12:52 hknoboru: Muzukashii
12:52 hknoboru: 同一個地方ww
12:53 mintong89: 诶
12:53 mintong89: 还真哭了 我错惹
12:53 hknoboru: 別這樣 www
12:53 mintong89: w
12:53 mintong89: 好吧
12:54 mintong89: 00:44:281 - 如果是跟vocal的话 ddkkd比较顺?
12:55 hknoboru: →→→↑↑ 好像是這樣?
12:55 mintong89: 也可以?
12:56 mintong89: 00:53:404 - 这之后没东西的?
12:56 mintong89: 00:56:890 - overmap issue
12:56 hknoboru: D:
12:57 mintong89: 0.0
12:57 hknoboru: 嗚
12:57 mintong89: 0.0...
12:57 hknoboru: Nyaa~~
12:57 mintong89: 嗯是vocal 可是.... kkkkkkkkk 很像有点奇怪?
12:58 hknoboru: 這裏想放點特別的東西
12:58 mintong89: 好吧
12:58 mintong89: 虽然不知道可以不可以rank
12:58 mintong89: rankable*
12:59 mintong89: 哦对了 x1.5 特不建议 如果真要加的话 只可以 x1.2
12:59 mintong89: get from a BAT
12:59 mintong89: message
12:59 hknoboru: ok
12:59 hknoboru: 我看看效果
13:00 hknoboru: D;
13:00 hknoboru: 那還不如不加
13:00 mintong89: lol...
13:01 hknoboru: 討厭這個間隔
13:01 hknoboru: 1/4不1/4, 1/3不1/3
13:01 mintong89: +1w
13:02 hknoboru: 都別加了 (/‵Д′)/~ ╧╧
13:02 mintong89: OAO
13:03 hknoboru: 對了,因為要強調這Nyaa所以前面不放
13:03 mintong89: souka 0.0
13:03 hknoboru: 啊,我有一個問題
13:03 mintong89: ?
13:04 hknoboru: 在日版機台這歌名是 ネコ日和
13:04 hknoboru: 英文版機台是 Cats
13:04 mintong89: 懂了
13:04 mintong89: 都可以
13:04 mintong89: 你喜欢
13:04 hknoboru: 真好
13:05 mintong89: 好了来Mod muzu
13:05 hknoboru: muzu也要改變速:(
13:05 mintong89: 嗯 o.o
13:06 mintong89: 00:04:282 - 刚刚
13:07 hknoboru: fixed
13:11 mintong89: 我看了
13:11 mintong89: muzu, kantan 和 futsuu 还算可以
13:11 hknoboru: YAY
13:11 mintong89: 0.0

irc mod as request~
Decipher
hi~ cute song D:
how about using cute cat or a girl with cat ears for the background? just asking lol
also, what is the function of maimai_logo.png? please delete if not used..

[Kantan]
00:21:825 - add d?
00:24:632 - d?
00:25:159 - d, move to 00:25:334
00:26:036 - k?
01:05:334 - d here? 0.0

[Futsuu]
I don't know... seems fine

[Muzu]
00:02:878 - slider on beginning is not rankable as far as I can remember? (please correct me if I'm wrong orz)
how about using similar intro with oni? ._.

[Oni]
00:06:562 (3,4,5,1) - make this (and the similar one with it) 1/4?
00:07:089 - k
00:44:983 - d
00:51:387 - remove
Topic Starter
Jikson[m9]

Light Usagi wrote:

hi~ cute song D:
how about using cute cat or a girl with cat ears for the background? just asking lol
also, what is the function of maimai_logo.png? please delete if not used..

thanks for the image, think about it later. maimai_logo.png deleted

[Kantan]
00:21:825 - add d?
00:24:632 - d?
00:25:159 - d, move to 00:25:334
00:26:036 - k?
01:05:334 - d here? 0.0

all fixed :D

[Futsuu]
I don't know... seems fine

[Muzu]
00:02:878 - slider on beginning is not rankable as far as I can remember? (please correct me if I'm wrong orz)
how about using similar intro with oni? ._.

fixed

[Oni]
00:06:562 (3,4,5,1) - make this (and the similar one with it) 1/4? No, the music is 1/6 and I like it
00:07:089 - k no
00:44:983 - d no
00:51:387 - remove no, symmetry with the next
Thanks for modding
tetsutaro
From the people who brought you

comes this mod.

[General]
Metadata stuff:
:idea: Putting also Unicode song info helps people finding your map! "能登有沙" and "ネコ日和。".
:!: By naming standards in the community, "Arisa Noto" (i.e. swapping the family and given names) is better.
:!: Add a full stop after "Neko Hiyori." to correspond to the period in the Japanese title.
:?: Please explain these tags: "Eguchi seera", "Stylips"
:!: Background: putting the maimai machine for a maimai original is like putting a Taiko cabinet for Namco Originals (Taiko original), which helps next to nothing. Please replace with something more relevant to the theme/ambience/singer. I suggest a picture of cute fluffy cats :D
:!: Go-go Bugs: Some Go-go times starts not on a bar line but somewhere a tad off. Also Go-go times should also end at a bar line unless special features of the songs suggests otherwise, which this song hasn't.

[Oni] Perceived difficulty rating: 8* Oni
:idea: 00:09:194 (1,1,2,3,1) and similar - To me the music is only of 1/2 notes. The 1/4 cluster here is not very well supported.
:idea: 00:54:106 ~ 00:56:913 - could use some small katsus to bring out the more prominent drum hits
:!: 00:56:913 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Not that the meow is zigzagging nor there are relevant percussion, a stream here doesn't really get much support. Replace with spinner or slider.
:!: 01:20:071 (2,3,1,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,1,2,3,4) - I understand you want to push to the limits in the last iteration, but this is overdoing (and this is not the Mythbusters so it does not worth doing). Toning it down to 5-1-5-1 structure (colors as you deem suitable) is a possible option.
[Muzukashii] Perceived difficulty rating: 6* Muzukashii
:idea: 00:15:685 (2) - remove to correspond to the previous iteration where (00:10:071) there is no note after the dkdkdkdkd stream
:idea: 00:19:545 (2) - remove to correspond to the next iteration where (00:22:351) there is no note immediately before the group of large notes
[Futsuu] Perceived difficulty rating: 5* Futsuu
:idea: 00:16:913 ~ 00:27:264 - quite a bit too many katsus here. A common algorithm of using full or almost full katsus in one part is usually in the intro or in a midtro.
:!: 00:56:913 (1,2,3,1,2) - If Muzukashii is having a slider to cover the meow, shouldn't the easier Futsuu also have? You can move this cluster to Muzukashii and replace with a slider in Futsuu, or just completely forget this cluster at all.
[Kantan] Perceived difficulty rating: 4* Kantan
:idea: 00:52:703 (1,2,3) and similar - Large notes can raise the ambience here as a close to the chorus.
Topic Starter
Jikson[m9]
SPOILER

tetsutaro wrote:

From the people who brought you

comes this mod.

[General]
Metadata stuff:
:idea: Putting also Unicode song info helps people finding your map! "能登有沙" and "ネコ日和。". ok
:!: By naming standards in the community, "Arisa Noto" (i.e. swapping the family and given names) is better. I see everyone just put the family names of Asians at first and I like this too. ;2;
:!: Add a full stop after "Neko Hiyori." to correspond to the period in the Japanese title. I mislooked it D:
:?: Please explain these tags: "Eguchi seera", "Stylips" Noto Arisa is a member of StylipS, and she was well known by the character Eguchi Seera in Saki Achiga-hen. Not really relavant but just want people who are finding this voice actor's song could find this.
:!: Background: putting the maimai machine for a maimai original is like putting a Taiko cabinet for Namco Originals (Taiko original), which helps next to nothing. Please replace with something more relevant to the theme/ambience/singer. I suggest a picture of cute fluffy cats :D I've found a suitable image but editing was not finished, I'll do it later.
:!: Go-go Bugs: Some Go-go times starts not on a bar line but somewhere a tad off. Also Go-go times should also end at a bar line unless special features of the songs suggests otherwise, which this song hasn't. I bet this is not a problem? I put them there because it will not result in disastrous results in case the offset was adjusted.

[Oni] Perceived difficulty rating: 8* Oni
:idea: 00:09:194 (1,1,2,3,1) and similar - To me the music is only of 1/2 notes. The 1/4 cluster here is not very well supported. for leading in the long stream and synchronize with the last 5-plets
:idea: 00:54:106 ~ 00:56:913 - could use some small katsus to bring out the more prominent drum hitswants to symphasize the meow ;w;
:!: 00:56:913 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Not that the meow is zigzagging nor there are relevant percussion, a stream here doesn't really get much support. Replace with spinner or slider. changed to slider
:!: 01:20:071 (2,3,1,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,1,2,3,4) - I understand you want to push to the limits in the last iteration, but this is overdoing (and this is not the Mythbusters so it does not worth doing). Toning it down to 5-1-5-1 structure (colors as you deem suitable) is a possible option. hm... okay changed
[Muzukashii] Perceived difficulty rating: 6* Muzukashii
:idea: 00:15:685 (2) - remove to correspond to the previous iteration where (00:10:071) there is no note after the dkdkdkdkd stream So I like to "differ" from the previous one D:
:idea: 00:19:545 (2) - remove to correspond to the next iteration where (00:22:351) there is no note immediately before the group of large notes vocal dominant
[Futsuu] Perceived difficulty rating: 5* Futsuu
:idea: 00:16:913 ~ 00:27:264 - quite a bit too many katsus here. A common algorithm of using full or almost full katsus in one part is usually in the intro or in a midtro. Like to make it relaxing and simple here but don doesnt fit well so I chose kats
:!: 00:56:913 (1,2,3,1,2) - If Muzukashii is having a slider to cover the meow, shouldn't the easier Futsuu also have? You can move this cluster to Muzukashii and replace with a slider in Futsuu, or just completely forget this cluster at all. not agree with that. I like them here, sorry :(
[Kantan] Perceived difficulty rating: 4* Kantan
:idea: 00:52:703 (1,2,3) and similar - Large notes can raise the ambience here as a close to the chorus.okay fixed

Thanks for modding :D
Lundlerol
はい、どうもこんにちはー。
教え子の0gre君が指摘する部分がなくて困ってるそうなので
僕が【TAIKO MOD QUEUE TEAM】から駆けつけてきましたー。


modreqsという事で早速見ていきますねー。

[General]
FutsuuのHPDrainを3にしてみては?
Easy>Futsuu>Muzukashii>Oni
2>3>4>5
この流れにする方がいいかもしれませんね!

d = don
k = kat
D = Big(Finish) don
K = Big(Finish) kat


[Kantan]
01:27:790 (3) - K

[Futsuu]
00:27:264 (7) - K


[Muzukashii]
00:16:913 (2) - Finishを外して普通のスライダーにしましょう。意味がないです。
00:18:667 -  add to d
00:26:299 (1) - を 00:26:211 -  ここに移動しましょう。
00:26:738 (1) -  k
00:27:439 (1) -  D
00:27:614 (2) -  ^
00:27:965 (3) -  ^
00:56:913 (2) -  Finishを外しましょう。意味がないです。
01:09:369 (3,4,1) -  難しいにddkなど入れないようにしましょう。鬼となんら変わらなくなります。dddでfix
01:20:597 (4,5,1) - ^


[Oni]

00:04:106 -  この部分に音が聞き取れます。 わざと置いていないんでしょうけどFinish Notesの2つの間にNotesを置くのとは全く違いますのでここにdを。
Finish Notesの間にdを入れるならFinishを強調出来なくなるのでFinish手前のこの部分を置く。
僕ならこの部分にdを置きますね。

00:07:089 (3) -  この部分は 00:06:913 (2) - と比べると音が上がっているように聞こえます。なのでkにしてみてはどうですか?
音の強弱をdkで表したいので僕ならkにします

00:10:071 (2,3,1,1,2,1,1,2,1,1,2,1,2,3,4) -  この連打ですが右下にあるPlayback Rateを25%まで下げてから音を聞き取ると良いです
僕なら以下の通りにします。
ddkddkdddkddkkk

00:12:703 (1) -  ここも手前のdより音が上がっているのでkにします
00:14:808 (1,1,2,3,1) -  僕ならこのdkkkdddkdに置き直します。 
00:15:685 (2,1,1,2,1,1,1) -  ここの連打もPlayback Rateを下げてから聞き取るといいです。試してみてください。
僕ならこうします。

00:24:632 (1,2,3,4) -  ここのK K K Kはボーカルの声に沿っているので強調したい気持ちもわかります。ですが、僕はおすすめしません。
まず、
00:19:720 (3,1,1,1) -  00:22:527 (1,2,3) -  この2つは掛け声(Shout)があるのでFinish Notesは私も良いと思います。
ですが掛け声がない部分 00:24:632 (1,2,3,4) -  にFinish Notesを追加するのは合っていないと僕は思います。
したがって 00:24:632 (1,2,3,4) -  このK K K Kを直しましょう。
僕ならこうします。
d k d K
00:26:036 (1) -  ここは音的にもkで。
00:41:299 -  add d

00:44:281 (5,6,7,8,9) -   A
00:47:089 (3,4,5,6,7,8) -  B
00:49:018 (2,3,4) -  C
00:49:896 (6,7,8,9,10,11) - D
00:51:299 (3,4,1,1,1,2,3,4,1,2,1) -  E


これらの音の強弱をはっきりさせたいのでボーカルの声にも合わせて音を変えていきたいですね。
上から順番に
00:44:281 (5,6,1,1,1,2,1) -  この部分は5連打をddkdkにしてから あとの2つを kdにしてみてください。
ddkdk k d
00:47:089 (3,1,1,2,1,1) - kkk kkk>fixed> kdk kdk
00:49:018 (2,3,4) - ここはddkで良いでしょう。
00:49:895 (2,3,4,5,6,7,1) -  ここは配置をやり直しましょう。そして音は以下の通りになります

00:51:299 (3,4,1,1,1,2,3,4,1,2,1) -  ここは以下の通りにしてみてください。

01:01:124 (1) -  k
01:03:229 (1,1,2,3,1) -  ここはマークと同じように直してください。
01:04:106 (2,3,1,1,2,1,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,1,2,3) -  ここもPlayback Rateを下げて聞き取るべきです。
僕なら以下の通りになります。

01:07:439 (5,6,7,8,1,2,3) -
01:18:667 (5,6,7,8,9) -
^Aと同じで。

01:10:246 (3,4,5,6,7,8) -  Bと同じで。
01:12:176 (2,3,1) -  Cと同じで。
01:13:053 (2,3,4,5,6,7,1) -  Dと同じで。
01:14:808 (5) -  k
01:15:334 (2,3,1,2,1) -  ここは以下の通りで。
01:20:071 (3,4,1,1,1,1,1,2,1,2,1) - 以下の通りです。 Eと似ていますが連打の間のノーツが違うだけです。
01:21:650 - 僕ならdeleteします。
01:23:580 (1) -  k
01:24:282 (2,3,1,1,1,2,1) -  以下の通りにしてみてください。

01:26:124 (8) -  僕なら消します。
01:25:685 (3,4,1,1,1,1,1,2,1,2,1,1,1) -  そしてこの部分は以下の通りに置きます。

Oniの方は音の強弱を出したかったので執拗に音を聞き取りました。
これぐらい指摘すれば問題ないかと思います。
以上でmodは終了です。
わからない日本語があれば聞きに来てください。お答えします。
では頑張ってくださいー!
Topic Starter
Jikson[m9]

Lundlerol wrote:

はい、どうもこんにちはー。
教え子の0gre君が指摘する部分がなくて困ってるそうなので
僕が 【TAIKO MOD QUEUE TEAM】から駆けつけてきましたー。
https://osu.ppy.sh/forum/t/118687/start=0

modreqsという事で早速見ていきますねー。

d = don
k = kat
D = Big(Finish) don
K = Big(Finish) kat

[Kantan]
01:27:790 (3) - K fixed

[Futsuu]
00:27:264 (7) - K fixed


[Muzukashii]
00:16:913 (2) - Finishを外して普通のスライダーにしましょう。意味がないです。 fixed
00:18:667 -  add to d fixed
00:26:299 (1) - を 00:26:211 -  ここに移動しましょう。 ないかなー、だ~ってってとの合わせ(?
00:26:738 (1) -  k not really... change in pitch is not large
00:27:439 (1) -  D ↓ふむ…わかりました;w;
00:27:614 (2) -  ^
00:27:965 (3) -  ^
00:56:913 (2) -  Finishを外しましょう。意味がないです。 fixed
01:09:369 (3,4,1) -  難しいにddkなど入れないようにしましょう。鬼となんら変わらなくなります。dddでfix やっぱこれか…実はこっちもいろいろ考えた。dddにすればなんとなく怪しくなると思いますね、ddkの珍しさもわかってるし、新AC筐体の譜面にはddkあるのかな;w;
01:20:597 (4,5,1) - ^


[Oni]

00:04:106 -  この部分に音が聞き取れます。 わざと置いていないんでしょうけどFinish Notesの2つの間にNotesを置くのとは全く違いますのでここにdを。
Finish Notesの間にdを入れるならFinishを強調出来なくなるのでFinish手前のこの部分を置く。
僕ならこの部分にdを置きますね。 fixed

00:07:089 (3) -  この部分は 00:06:913 (2) - と比べると音が上がっているように聞こえます。なのでkにしてみてはどうですか?
音の強弱をdkで表したいので僕ならkにします 下がってたんじゃないですかOTL

00:10:071 (2,3,1,1,2,1,1,2,1,1,2,1,2,3,4) -  この連打ですが右下にあるPlayback Rateを25%まで下げてから音を聞き取ると良いです
僕なら以下の通りにします。
ddkddkdddkddkkk
 fixed

00:12:703 (1) -  ここも手前のdより音が上がっているのでkにします 前と同じ
00:14:808 (1,1,2,3,1) -  僕ならこのdkkkdddkdに置き直します。 
  fixed
00:15:685 (2,1,1,2,1,1,1) -  ここの連打もPlayback Rateを下げてから聞き取るといいです。試してみてください。
僕ならこうします。
   fixed

00:24:632 (1,2,3,4) -  ここのK K K Kはボーカルの声に沿っているので強調したい気持ちもわかります。ですが、僕はおすすめしません。
まず、
00:19:720 (3,1,1,1) -  00:22:527 (1,2,3) -  この2つは掛け声(Shout)があるのでFinish Notesは私も良いと思います。
ですが掛け声がない部分 00:24:632 (1,2,3,4) -  にFinish Notesを追加するのは合っていないと僕は思います。
したがって 00:24:632 (1,2,3,4) -  このK K K Kを直しましょう。
僕ならこうします。
d k d K

”起きない”とかは意味でもあるのかな?

00:26:036 (1) -  ここは音的にもkで。fixed
00:41:299 -  add d fixed

00:44:281 (5,6,7,8,9) -   A 元のが感じがいいと思う…
00:47:089 (3,4,5,6,7,8) -  B 変えた
00:49:018 (2,3,4) -  C 音的に?
00:49:896 (6,7,8,9,10,11) - D  変えた
00:51:299 (3,4,1,1,1,2,3,4,1,2,1) -  E そちらのが悪くないんですが、最後の部分とのシンクロですから…


これらの音の強弱をはっきりさせたいのでボーカルの声にも合わせて音を変えていきたいですね。
上から順番に
00:44:281 (5,6,1,1,1,2,1) -  この部分は5連打をddkdkにしてから あとの2つを kdにしてみてください。
ddkdk k d
00:47:089 (3,1,1,2,1,1) - kkk kkk>fixed> kdk kdk
00:49:018 (2,3,4) - ここはddkで良いでしょう。
00:49:895 (2,3,4,5,6,7,1) -  ここは配置をやり直しましょう。そして音は以下の通りになります

00:51:299 (3,4,1,1,1,2,3,4,1,2,1) -  ここは以下の通りにしてみてください。

01:01:124 (1) -  k   ^
01:03:229 (1,1,2,3,1) -  ここはマークと同じように直してください。 はい
01:04:106 (2,3,1,1,2,1,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,1,2,3) -  ここもPlayback Rateを下げて聞き取るべきです。 
僕なら以下の通りになります。
難易度が下がったんですね、ほかの提案がないなら維持します

01:07:439 (5,6,7,8,1,2,3) -
01:18:667 (5,6,7,8,9) -
^Aと同じで。

01:10:246 (3,4,5,6,7,8) -  Bと同じで。
01:12:176 (2,3,1) -  Cと同じで。
01:13:053 (2,3,4,5,6,7,1) -  Dと同じで。 上と同じ
01:14:808 (5) -  k consistency
01:15:334 (2,3,1,2,1) -  ここは以下の通りで。
(赤ばかり)(青ばかり)にしてほしいから

01:20:071 (3,4,1,1,1,1,1,2,1,2,1) - 以下の通りです。 Eと似ていますが連打の間のノーツが違うだけです。
シンクロ

01:21:650 - 僕ならdeleteします。 ボーカルがあっても?
01:23:580 (1) -  k 音的に
01:24:282 (2,3,1,1,1,2,1) -  以下の通りにしてみてください。
こちらのペースのほうが好き

01:26:124 (8) -  僕なら消します。 
01:25:685 (3,4,1,1,1,1,1,2,1,2,1,1,1) -  そしてこの部分は以下の通りに置きます。



Oniの方は音の強弱を出したかったので執拗に音を聞き取りました。
これぐらい指摘すれば問題ないかと思います。
以上でmodは終了です。
わからない日本語があれば聞きに来てください。お答えします。
では頑張ってくださいー!
明日続きます!
kanpakyin
Nardoxyribonucleic
Cute song >.<"
Here comes a mod~ :3

[Kantan]

00:06:387 k
00:08:843 k
00:09:896 (9,10) k k
00:12:001 k
00:14:457 (17,18) k k
00:15:510 (20,21) k k
00:16:906 K
00:25:334 k
00:27:088 k
00:28:843 D?
00:29:544 k k
00:30:597 k
00:33:404 d
00:36:211 k
00:38:667 (7,8,9) d k k?
00:42:878 D
00:43:579 k
00:47:088 k
00:48:492 D
00:49:193 k
00:50:246 k
00:52:702 (1,2,3) use big notes?
00:59:720 D?
01:02:527 (6,7,8) k k k
01:04:632 k
01:05:334 (13,14) k k
01:09:544 k
01:11:650 D
01:16:211 (4,5,6,7) k d d k
01:20:772 d
01:22:176 (6,7,8) d k d
01:23:579 k

[Futsuu]

00:05:685 k
00:07:790 k
00:15:510 k?
00:20:422 d
00:27:088 (6,7) d d
00:28:843 D
00:31:299 k
00:37:264 (1,2) K K
00:38:492 (3,1) d k
00:39:018 k
00:42:878 K
00:44:983 k
00:47:614 d
00:50:422 k
01:00:422 k
01:01:825 k
01:04:281 (3,4) k k
01:06:036 K
01:08:843 k
01:13:228 (3,4,5,6) k d d k
01:21:123 k
01:22:176 K
01:25:685 k

[Muzukashii]

00:07:790 d
00:47:088 D
01:21:299 (1,1) k D

This one's nearly perfect. \:D/

[Oni]

00:21:650 d
00:27:439 (2,3,1) k k D
00:30:071 k
01:08:141 d
01:08:492 K

[Kanpakyin's Taiko Oni]

00:26:732 (158,159) d d
01:25:680 (117,118,119,120,121) d d k k d

Btw, do you need one more Muzukashii diff?

Support this map~ \:D/
Topic Starter
Jikson[m9]

Nardoxyribonucleic wrote:

Cute song >.<"
Here comes a mod~ :3

[Kantan]

00:06:387 k *
00:08:843 k *
00:09:896 (9,10) k k *
00:12:001 k *
00:14:457 (17,18) k k *
00:15:510 (20,21) k k *
00:16:906 K ok
00:25:334 k *
00:27:088 k *
00:28:843 D? no, theres not a need to have a strong beat here
00:29:544 k k *
00:30:597 k *
00:33:404 d *, for consistency
00:36:211 k *
00:38:667 (7,8,9) d k k? *
00:42:878 D no, theres not a need to have a strong beat here
00:43:579 k *
00:47:088 k *
00:48:492 D no, theres not a need to have a strong beat here
00:49:193 k *
00:50:246 k *
00:52:702 (1,2,3) use big notes? ok
00:59:720 D? no, theres not a need to have a strong beat here
01:02:527 (6,7,8) k k k not a vocal, so i dont think this needs to have some high pitches
01:04:632 k *
01:05:334 (13,14) k k *
01:09:544 k *
01:11:650 D no, theres not a need to have a strong beat here
01:16:211 (4,5,6,7) k d d k no, too difficult
01:20:772 d consistency
01:22:176 (6,7,8) d k d consistency
01:23:579 k decrease in pitch so d

*In kantan maps, change of colur is rare because newbies are still not too familiar with the two colours. So we avoid changing colours too frequently.

[Futsuu]

00:05:685 k ok
00:07:790 k no, too difficult
00:15:510 k? consistency
00:20:422 d consistency
00:27:088 (6,7) d d sounds weird imo ;w;
00:28:843 D no need?
00:31:299 k consistency
00:37:264 (1,2) K K ok
00:38:492 (3,1) d k pitch and difficulty
00:39:018 k pitch
00:42:878 K difficulty, same as the reason why we avoid 1/4 big notes at Oni
00:44:983 k difficulty
00:47:614 d consistency
00:50:422 k difficulty
01:00:422 k no vocal so no emphasize
01:01:825 k consistency and pitch
01:04:281 (3,4) k k difficulty
01:06:036 K difficulty
01:08:843 k difficulty
01:13:228 (3,4,5,6) k d d k difficulty
01:21:123 k difficulty
01:22:176 K difficulty
01:25:685 k pitch

[Muzukashii]

00:07:790 d pitch?
00:47:088 D any reason supporting that D:?
01:21:299 (1,1) k D ^^

This one's nearly perfect. \:D/

[Oni]

00:21:650 d a sudden vocal needs the k imo
00:27:439 (2,3,1) k k D ok
00:30:071 k pitch I think?
01:08:141 d pitch
01:08:492 K pitch

[Kanpakyin's Taiko Oni]

00:26:732 (158,159) d d
01:25:680 (117,118,119,120,121) d d k k d

Btw, do you need one more Muzukashii diff?

Support this map~ \:D/

thanks for your mod.

However I think the diffs are quite mature now so sorry for that...yep.
Cloudchaser
I loved this bg
jomnhnk
Hi~Jikson's mod req~

[Muzukashii]
01:09:545 (1) - d Muzukashii diffでddkの3連はあまり良くないかと思います。
01:20:597 (4,5,1) - kkk ^
[Oni]

1set・・・1つ変更するなら3つとも変更して下さい。
00:15:773 (3) - d
00:15:860 (1) - k
00:16:124 (1) - k



[Kanpakyin's Taiko Oni]
1set
00:25:680 (151) - d
00:25:855 (152) - k
00:25:943 (153) - k
00:26:031 (154) - d


00:41:294 (74) - d (here drum)
00:58:136 (176) - d^


全体的に良かったと思います!Ranked頑張ってくでさい :) :D :)
Topic Starter
Jikson[m9]

-Cloudchaser wrote:

I loved this bg
thanks :D I got it from the official maimai background

jomnhnk wrote:

Hi~Jikson's mod req~

[Muzukashii]
01:09:545 (1) - d Muzukashii diffでddkの3連はあまり良くないかと思います。
01:20:597 (4,5,1) - kkk ^
[Oni]

1set・・・1つ変更するなら3つとも変更して下さい。
00:15:773 (3) - d
00:15:860 (1) - k
00:16:124 (1) - k



[Kanpakyin's Taiko Oni]
1set
00:25:680 (151) - d
00:25:855 (152) - k
00:25:943 (153) - k
00:26:031 (154) - d


00:41:294 (74) - d (here drum)
00:58:136 (176) - d^


全体的に良かったと思います!Ranked頑張ってくでさい :) :D :)
私の部分は全部fixedです!modありがとうございます!
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