okay...time to fix

All fixed...dble post ftwwwww

Moved to pending and ready for mod.

Hello~ Light check




The rest I can't mod for now. I really have something against freedom dive x_x

Entozer wrote:

Hello~ Light check

Ishi's 4k EZ

00:24:959 (24959|0,25229|3,25499|0,25769|3) - This feels awkward. I feel like they're supposed to be like this http://puu.sh/2rxBX
Good map but I think it's a bit hard for easy /o\ I'm not sure if ~3 stars are okay for 4k Easy ah converted bms problem after set timing. fixed thanks

4k HD

00:02:684 (2684|3) - delete fixed
00:04:844 (4844|0) - ^ fixed
00:07:004 (7004|3) - ^ fixed
(I think it feels better if we only follow the beat) yeah \o/

00:09:704 (9704|1) - This part http://puu.sh/2rxOv ? Better distribution fixed, wow nice


00:21:449 (21449|2) - add note fixed
00:21:719 (21719|2) - delete fixed

00:22:259 (22259|1) - delete fixed
00:22:529 (22529|1) - add note fixed

01:13:964 (73964|3,73964|0,74234|0,74234|2) - delete fixed
^ This instead? http://puu.sh/2rxYO

01:19:499 (79499|1,79634|0) - delete fixed

01:19:567 (79567|1) - Add note fixed
01:19:769 (79769|0) - Add note fixed

01:47:985 (107985|3) - Starting from this part, I think it's better if you follow the main instrument (and add the kicks every other beat) i pm you later in game if you free

Also, check all the triplets after that time, I think they're a bit off x-x uhh okay

4K MX

00:02:684 (2684|3) - Delete? (Same as 4k HD for the rest) fixed

00:06:194 (6194|0,6261|1,6329|0,6396|1) - Delete? fixed
^ Maybe do it like this instead? http://puu.sh/2ryc2

From here 00:25:904 - to 00:28:064 - Nicely done \o/ ^^ thanks

00:28:064 (28064|1) - Add note? fixed

02:54:945 (174945|3) - From here to 02:55:755 (175755|3) - Other pattern? this is too hard x-x okay changed

Again, try to check the triplets, A lot feels off for me >< uhh okay

The rest I can't mod for now. I really have something against freedom dive x_x

you did well, thanks i very appriciate it \o/

still too many long notes spam at some parts, in my opinion

i'm probably just bad at reading them but it's still really difficult to combo or score on.

otherwise, super fun! awesome job on it so far, good luck on rank!

hmmm updated HD diff

• remove 55.5bpm part become 111.11 bpm

• slight reduce note difficulty

• 1st break time filled with some notes

• remake some hard notes

Link : http://puu.sh/2sube

thanks

Double post again ww


Update!

saka1234 wrote:

Double post again ww

Irc mod with Entozer again

10:02 saka1234: o/
10:02 Entozer: saka~ \o/
10:03 saka1234: morning \o/
10:03 Entozer: Good morning xD
10:03 saka1234: xD
10:03 *saka1234 is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/230492 Yooh - Dynasty [Entozer's Normal]]
10:03 Entozer: Today is modding day for me xD I'll try to mod your map again later :>
10:03 saka1234: i done mod
10:03 Entozer: o:
10:03 saka1234: i just suggest note pattern
10:03 saka1234: hitsound too et for me
10:04 Entozer: xD
10:04 Entozer: but thank you for modding! I'll check after I mod your map xD
10:04 saka1234: thanks
11:29 Entozer: saka
11:29 Entozer: want to do IRC mod in freedomdive?
11:39 Entozer: Hey saka, is Louis a cute loli?
11:39 Entozer: According to his FB picture
11:39 saka1234: lol
11:39 saka1234: louis lolicon
11:39 saka1234: i back from afk
11:40 Entozer: welcome back xD \o/
11:40 saka1234: xD
11:41 saka1234: irc mod?
11:41 saka1234: which diff?
11:41 Entozer: any xD as many as we can?
11:42 saka1234: wow
11:43 saka1234: ok
11:43 Entozer: start with Ishi 4k EZ
11:44 Entozer: this part 00:16:319 (16319|0,16589|3,16859|0,17129|3) -
11:45 Entozer: I think it's better if they are placed like this http://puu.sh/2wFtf
11:46 Entozer: aaah wait @_@ no more EZ in your diffset I just checked x_x redownloading
11:46 saka1234: lel
11:46 saka1234: i fixed already
11:47 Entozer: ok ok next
11:47 saka1234: wait
11:47 Entozer: 00:24:824 (24824|0) - Maybe this is better if placed at 00:24:959 (24959|0) -
11:47 Entozer: okay okay
11:47 saka1234: how u post later ?
11:47 saka1234: irc mod
11:47 Entozer: /savelog xD
11:48 saka1234: ok fixed
11:48 saka1234: lol
11:48 saka1234: i nver knew that
11:48 Entozer: ahh
11:48 Entozer: /savelog and chat gets save in osu folder xD useful for IRC mod \o/
11:50 Entozer: Do you only want to keep Ishi's 4k only 1/1 notes?
11:50 saka1234: yes
11:50 Entozer: Wait, move this 02:02:835 (122835|0) - to 02:02:970 (122970|0) -
11:50 Entozer: Better I think
11:50 Entozer: aah
11:51 saka1234: bcoz bpm too high to make 1/2
11:51 Entozer: Also add note 02:02:767 (122767|1) - how about that? possible?
11:51 Entozer: Like this http://puu.sh/2wFC8
11:53 saka1234: wow nice ehythm
11:53 saka1234: r
11:53 Entozer: better?
11:53 saka1234: yep
11:53 Entozer: ok Ishi 4k NM good
11:54 saka1234: but a bit faz well its almost end chorus at ez diff
11:54 saka1234: 02:20:115 (140115|3) -
11:54 saka1234: this also chg
11:54 saka1234: ?
11:54 Entozer: ahh yes
11:54 Entozer: Didn't see ><
11:55 saka1234: :d
11:56 Entozer: in 4k HD
11:56 Entozer: This one better remove? 00:16:184 (16184|2) -
11:57 saka1234: removed
11:57 Entozer: okay
11:58 Entozer: Starting this part
11:58 Entozer: Just my suggestion
11:58 Entozer: 00:48:044 (48044|2) - I think better if you only place note for synth?
11:58 Entozer: until this part
11:58 Entozer: 00:56:144 (56144|0) -
11:59 Entozer: I mean remove notes like this 00:48:179 (48179|3,48719|0) - and only keep 1/1? (Synth)
11:59 Entozer: just a suggestion xD
11:59 saka1234: keep 1/1 using short hold
11:59 saka1234: how?
11:59 Entozer: Maybe change to like this http://puu.sh/2wFQe
12:00 Entozer: remove this 00:49:799 (49799|0) -
12:00 Entozer: remove 00:50:879 (50879|0) -
12:00 Entozer: remove 00:51:419 (51419|1,51689|1,51824|3,52364|0,52904|2) -
12:00 Entozer: 00:53:444 (53444|3) - remove
12:01 saka1234: ok all removed
12:01 Entozer: Then
12:02 Entozer: ahh this note missing, add 00:51:824 (51824|1) -
12:02 Entozer: Any place
12:02 saka1234: ad
12:03 Entozer: Then starting from this 00:53:984 - to 00:56:144 (56144|0) - Think can remap?
12:03 Entozer: Something like this start from 00:53:714 - http://puu.sh/2wFVH
12:03 saka1234: 1/1
12:03 Entozer: (Follow drum bass + synth)
12:04 saka1234: http://puu.sh/2wFXo
12:04 saka1234: how abt htis?
12:05 Entozer: Ahh I think that is good too
12:05 Entozer: Then start from 00:56:144 (56144|0) - maybe you can fill in missing note from 1/2
12:05 Entozer: (hi-hats)
12:06 Entozer: Like 00:56:279 - add note
12:06 Entozer: also here 00:56:414 -
12:06 Entozer: 00:56:549 -
12:06 Entozer: 00:58:979 add note
12:06 Entozer: 00:59:249 -
12:07 Entozer: 01:00:059 - etc etc
12:07 Entozer: Make it feel more stream?
12:07 Entozer: Just suggestion
12:07 saka1234: turn to 1/2 bit
12:08 saka1234: all added
12:08 saka1234: i think all ok
12:08 Entozer: ok ok
12:08 saka1234: but
12:08 saka1234: 00:56:144 (56144|0,56279|1,56414|2,56549|1) -
12:08 saka1234: that part keep bugging me
12:08 saka1234: well nvm 1st
12:09 Entozer: ahh
12:09 Entozer: Can remove if you want
12:09 Entozer: but part after that better if always have 1/2 (streamy)
12:09 Entozer: Just my opinion ><
12:09 saka1234: yes
12:11 saka1234: i guess better remove
12:11 saka1234: 00:47:504 (47504|2,47504|0,48044|3) -
12:11 saka1234: because same this part
12:11 Entozer: Ah yes
12:11 Entozer: nice nice
12:11 saka1234: xD
12:12 Entozer: I wonder if woc will allow shd rankable soon
12:12 saka1234: looking for nazi modder
12:12 Entozer: even nazi moding hard for SHD x_x
12:13 Entozer: I still thinking how to mod SHD diff in future for other people
12:13 Entozer: but anyway this part 02:08:775 (128775|3,128842|2,128910|1) -
12:13 Entozer: better remove this? 02:08:842 (128842|2) -
12:13 Entozer: and maybe move this one lane to the left 02:08:775 (128775|3) -
12:14 Entozer: 02:15:930 - better if you add note here I think
12:15 Entozer: Also here 02:17:010 (137010|2) -
12:15 Entozer: and here 02:18:090 -
12:15 Entozer: to keep flow
12:16 saka1234: done
12:16 Entozer: this one remove? 02:19:980 (139980|1) -
12:17 saka1234: ok
12:17 Entozer: ok I think all done for 4k HD
12:18 Entozer: 4k MX
12:18 saka1234: 4kmx
12:18 saka1234: the triplets
12:18 Entozer: Wait wait I check
12:18 Entozer: start with this first sorry >< 00:08:084 (8084|2) - add note?
12:18 Entozer: then remove this 00:08:489 (8489|3) -
12:19 saka1234: add dble note
12:19 saka1234: i mean at 00:08:219
12:20 Entozer: mm
12:20 Entozer: this note 00:38:189 (38189|2) - misplaced?
12:21 saka1234: nope
12:21 saka1234: but
12:21 saka1234: feel like hat
12:21 saka1234: that
12:21 saka1234: moved
12:21 Entozer: aah ><
12:22 Entozer: this triple part 00:50:744 (50744|3,50812|2,50879|1,51014|0,51082|1,51149|2,51284|3,51352|2,51419|3,51554|0,51622|1,51689|0) -
12:22 Entozer: this triple part 00:50:744 (50744|3,50812|2,50879|1,51014|0,51082|1,51149|2,51284|3,51352|2,51419|3,51554|0,51622|1,51689|0) -
12:22 Entozer: feel awkward for me >< maybe ask other people too
12:22 Entozer: but if you ask me I suggest keep it 1/2 note like previous
12:23 Entozer: but you can keep if you want
12:23 saka1234: =3= i jsut follow the rhythm :d
12:23 Entozer: xD
12:24 saka1234: try to keep 1st
12:25 Entozer: okay
12:25 Entozer: this one 01:48:660 (108660|2) -
12:25 Entozer: move to 01:48:592 (108592|2) - ?
12:25 Entozer: then add note 01:48:727 - ?
12:25 Entozer: but I'm also not sure about this one x_x
12:25 Entozer: maybe you can keep it
12:27 saka1234: omg 1/8
12:27 saka1234: but this better
12:27 Entozer: ahh
12:28 Entozer: Do same for others? ><
12:28 saka1234: yep
12:28 saka1234: http://puu.sh/2wGAr
12:29 Entozer: 1/8 D:
12:29 Entozer: so that what you mean xD
12:29 Entozer: I think 1/8 awkward >< because all of them are in 1/4 then suddenly 1/8
12:30 saka1234: yea
12:30 saka1234: how abt like this
12:30 saka1234: http://puu.sh/2wGDg
12:31 Entozer: I think that is good too
12:32 saka1234: i don't know good or not /.\
12:32 saka1234: xD
12:33 Entozer: same xD
12:33 Entozer: Maybe just keep previous note?
12:33 Entozer: if you haven't change it yet
12:34 saka1234: i guess i chg new looks better
12:34 Entozer: aah
12:34 saka1234: but
12:34 saka1234: 01:48:795 (108795|3,108795|2,108930|0,108930|1) -
12:34 saka1234: too loud
12:35 Entozer: Maybe keep them one note each
12:35 Entozer: aah this song really scary
12:35 saka1234: volume down
12:35 saka1234: i think btter
12:35 Entozer: x_x so hard to listen to song
12:35 Entozer: volume down possible too I guess
12:36 saka1234: volume 28 better
12:38 saka1234: freedom dive
12:39 saka1234: hard to follow full music
12:39 Entozer: yup x_x

Update!

Entozer is suppose to do this, not you. . www

he said 'no kudosu' he cannot online right now i want to update it.....and we just recheck again his old mod posted

my diff no 1 mod orz ;w;

I'll mod this \:D/ and all the diffs lol

Add "ishimaru94", " - R u m i a -", "parousia" as Tags. And I am not sure if "ONI" is somehow related to other similar Games with this Mode.

no kd

Can I make a diff too? /me runs

[Ishi's 4K Normal]

02:14:445 (134445|1) - move this on 2nd column and 02:14:715 (134715|3) - this on 4th

[Rumi's 7K HD]

00:10:244 (10244|6,10244|2,10311|0,10379|3,10446|1,10514|4,10581|6,10649|3,10716|5) - A pattern like this? 01:25:844 (85844|2) - 6th column
01:25:979 (85979|1) - 4th column
01:26:114 (86114|2) - 5th column
01:26:249 (86249|3) - 3rd column
01:42:855 (102855|1,103125|1,103395|1,103665|1) - move on 3,5,3,5

[4K HD]

00:26:174 - add a circle here on 3rd column
00:26:714 - ^ on 2nd column
Uhm I like patterns gj

[4K MX]

00:47:774 - add circle on 3rd and 4th column ;_;
00:56:414 - ^ same ;_; I don't like that short pause
01:20:917 (80917|3) - remove?

[4K ONI]

It's okay for me TOOO HARD DASFG

[7K MX]

00:35:624 (35624|3) - move on 7th column
01:09:239 (69239|1) - move 01:09:307 - here?

[7K SHD]

Ok I cant mod this lol and same for SHD

About hitsounding I have an idea, let's talk on irc

Stefan wrote:

Add "ishimaru94", " - R u m i a -", "parousia" as Tags. And I am not sure if "ONI" is somehow related to other similar Games with this Mode.

no kd - okay, hmm mayb from stepmania?

Roxas wrote:

Can I make a diff too? /me runs - /.\ pending, you should tell me earlier....

[Ishi's 4K Normal]

02:14:445 (134445|1) - move this on 2nd column and 02:14:715 (134715|3) - this on 4th - oh wow when i saw this i got some changes at other part...thx fixed

[Rumi's 7K HD]

-wait he fix

[4K HD]

00:26:174 - add a circle here on 3rd column - no i think i focus on hold only there
00:26:714 - ^ on 2nd column ^
Uhm I like patterns gj \o/

[4K MX]

00:47:774 - add circle on 3rd and 4th column ;_; - added
00:56:414 - ^ same ;_; I don't like that short pause - ^
01:20:917 (80917|3) - remove? - hmm...i think i want to change some pattern there



[4K ONI]

It's okay for me TOOO HARD DASFG - AAARFFFGHDJKL: ( still cant mod it /.\ )

[7K MX]

00:35:624 (35624|3) - move on 7th column - nope, i following the music now
01:09:239 (69239|1) - move 01:09:307 -here? - o_o how...how you can find it?? fixed omg lol

[7K SHD]

Ok I cant mod this lol and same for SHD -

About hitsounding I have an idea, let's talk on irc - this i wanted to do i wait until morning from now.... \o/

thanks for mod

Roxas wrote:

[Rumi's 7K HD]

00:10:244 (10244|6,10244|2,10311|0,10379|3,10446|1,10514|4,10581|6,10649|3,10716|5) - A pattern like this?

SPOILER

01:25:844 (85844|2) - 6th column
01:25:979 (85979|1) - 4th column
01:26:114 (86114|2) - 5th column
01:26:249 (86249|3) - 3rd column
01:42:855 (102855|1,103125|1,103395|1,103665|1) - move on 3,5,3,5

[Fixed] = http://puu.sh/2ADQ3

All diffs:

Fix the tags in all diffs so it is the same. Add the guest difficulty mappers name to the tags for all diffs.
Set a preview point for all diffs.

Add hitsounds for all diffs.
Here is the kick and the clap:
http://puu.sh/2Becv
Use the sample import to add it by selecting the notes. Then click alt+mouse1 on the note and a new window will come. Chose the sample from the left and click apply. Then click cancel and it is done. Dont click the sample button it will add an autoplay sample to the songs position.
Add finish sounds with the normal sample~


7K SHD:

00:04:304 - add note finish
00:06:464 - ^
00:06:396 (6396|4) - move this note to 3rd column
00:08:624 - add note finish
00:09:434 - ^
00:10:379 - should rearrange the notes here until the next beat, like a ladder or something
00:17:196 - there should be a note here on the 4 column like shortly before there. Need to move the next one far to the right if you decide to add it.
00:21:584 - add finish
00:23:339 - add note
00:23:541 - ^
00:25:836 - add note 4th column
00:26:039 (26039|2) - delete this note
00:26:579 (26579|5) - ^
00:28:064 (28064|3) - this is too close from the previous hold end
00:28:604 (28604|2,28806|2,29009|2) - i think its better if you space out this part more, like move those 3 notes 2 lanes left or something.
00:29:009 (29009|4) - also this note needs to be on the same column as 00:28:874 (28874|5) -. they are the same sounds i think
00:30:089 (30089|1) - Same here. Move it to the same column as 00:29:954 (29954|2) - and space it out a bit more if you like that.
00:31:169 (31169|2) - Same column as 00:31:034 (31034|1) -
00:43:791 (43791|2,43859|4,43926|3,43994|2,43994|5,44061|3,44129|4) - move those notes all 1 column to the right?
00:44:264 - 1 note too much here in my opinion
00:45:344 - this part feels weird compared to the rest of the map, i think you should remap that removing all the long notes and make a pattern that increases in pitch. Also should end with a stream to the next pattern
00:55:604 (55604|0) - putting such a stream while holding the spacebar is a bit too much i think The 1/8 stream is also too early, it starts here: 00:55:739 -
00:55:604 (55604|3,55874|4) - also this part looks awkward to play and structured for me. i think you should atleast make it look a bit less random and hard and make a nice stream pattern. I would remove the 2 holds here too
00:55:874 - here add another chord stream if you decide to remove the holds
00:58:169 - add note (for kick)
01:00:329 - ^
01:02:489 - ^
01:02:624 - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/706964 suggestion to make this look better and more playable
01:03:704 - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/706968 next pattern
01:06:944 (66944|0) - too close 01:06:944 (66944|5,66944|4,66944|0,67079|5,67147|1,67214|2,67214|5,67214|3) - just move all of those notes 1 to the right i guess? i was going to suggest moving some thing here anyways because 01:06:809 (66809|5,66809|4) - those and 01:06:944 (66944|5,66944|4) - the music changes in pitch there and you should move it.
01:10:522 (70522|1,70589|2,70657|3) - better flip those 3 notes horizontally to improve this, select all 3 press CTRL+H
01:11:264 - 1 note too much here
01:11:804 - ^
01:12:344 - ^
01:12:344 - this measure also looks really bad i think you need to rearrange it to make it better
01:30:839 (90839|5) - add one more note to all of the following ones
01:30:704 - add 1 or 2 more notes
01:32:864 - ^
01:47:985 - to 01:51:225 - rearrange those here~ the spacing you put for the 1/4 notes is not suggested at all by the music. The notes are close together here so i think you shouldnt put them all over the place. also the hold is not fitting here and on every second beat 3 notes seem better than 4
01:51:225 - to 01:52:305 - 01:52:035 (112035|5) - delete 01:52:170 (112170|6) - delete
01:53:655 - add note first column
01:55:477 - add note 4th column
01:56:490 (116490|1) - move this one one to the right
01:57:570 (117570|3) - move this one one to the left (
02:04:961 (124961|5) - move this one to the 2nd column
02:08:572 (128572|5) - delete this one
02:08:505 (128505|1) - ^
02:15:930 - add note 5th column
02:26:325 - to 02:26:865 - should arrange the notes differently to build up a bit more pressure the previous pattern is going too long
02:27:945 - 02:30:105 - rearrange this. there is no place in the music that would indicate to me 3 notes like that ontop at the spacebar. Also the notes dont seem to match at all in this part
02:43:605 - really need to delete the notes here and put some 1/8 streams
03:35:986 - 03:37:066 - rearrange this to be more understandable? nvm- move this note 03:36:661 (216661|1) - to the 7th column
03:41:926 (221926|0,221926|1,221926|2,221993|5,222061|2,222061|3,222061|6,222061|1,222128|4,222196|2,222196|0,222196|1,222196|5,222263|6,222331|3,222331|5,222331|2,222331|1,222398|6) - this part is absurd lol. i bet 99% of the that are even able to play this will have a hard time with it. It looks way too evil
03:52:456 (232456|1,232456|0,232523|3,232523|2,232591|1,232591|0,232726|1,232726|0) - this looks like you can make it better aswell, just balance it out a bit more
03:54:548 - add note
03:54:818 - ^ 03:55:088 -
03:55:426 - i think the holds after this part are a bit messed up and i changed it around. i dont remember exactly what i changed but i make screenshots. please look at if and see if you can improve anything osu.ppy.sh/ss/706968 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/707004
04:01:906 - 1 note too much here 04:01:906 (241906|2) - should remove this
04:02:176 - add note 04:02:716 - add note
04:03:526 - 04:03:796 - change to a 1/8 stream ?
04:04:606 - add note
04:05:506 (245506|2) - add note
04:05:551 (245551|4) - add note
04:06:766 (246766|1) - move this one 1 left
04:12:706 - this pattern is too weak and looks a bit poor and disappointing for the ending of the song lol. make a progressive pattern and raise the note density every measure until the end. Also the notes getting higher every measure aswell if you want to build this in to make a nice ending to this song.


7K MX:

02:18:292 (138292|3,138495|3,138697|3) - Those notes arent correctly snapped, move them all down 1/4 beat so the first hold starts on the new measure and the last one ends on second beat.
02:28:890 (148890|4) - move this one in the same column as one of the previous ones?
02:51:705 (171705|4,171705|6,171975|5,171975|2,172245|3,172245|0) - think its better if those notes keep following the piano part here. 02:51:705 (171705|4,171705|6) - move this up to 1/4 beat 02:52:245 (172245|0,172245|3) - move this down to 1/4 beat
03:09:390 - 03:09:593 - 03:09:795 - add notes here?
03:29:506 - add 1-2 notes
03:31:666 - ^
03:33:826 - add some note here or not depending if you added 1 or 2 before. so all those places got either 2 or 3 notes there
03:42:196 (222196|0) - move this to 3rd column?
03:42:331 (222331|1) - move this to 4th column?
03:55:426 (235426|6) - those holds here in this section should all start at the beat in my opinion (for the first holds)
03:56:776 (236776|5) - this hold is too long. should be as long as the others
04:14:934 (254934|5) - move this note so it isnt too short to the previous one?


7K HD:

02:22:410 (142410|4) - move this right?
02:29:025 - add a note for a finish hitsound


4K NM:

No complaints~


[color=#4000FF][size=150][b]4K HD:

00:06:194 (6194|3) - move this hold note to the previous beat
00:25:904 (25904|0,26444|3) - better cut those holds to have them shorter (like in the next measure)
01:06:809 (66809|2) - move this back to 1/4 beat
01:37:994 - add a hold here?


4K MX:

01:08:159 - 01:08:227 - add note?
01:30:704 - you need to add notes here. Also the part before here 01:22:064 - got alot of empty space and afterall this is a MX diff
01:55:815 (115815|3) - move this note down to previous 1/4 beat
01:57:806 (117806|1) - ^ and 01:58:110 - add note
02:14:985 - ^
02:26:865 - add more kicks here this part is getting too easy
03:04:665 - you should change the pattern here on the 2nd and 3rd beat
03:30:991 - add note 03:31:328 - add note
03:33:826 -to 03:38:146 - keep adding more notes after this point. the patterns you put here are for a normal or hard diff
03:48:271 - 03:48:608 - 03:48:811 - add note
03:55:426 (235426|0) - extend those holds to the next beat
04:00:826 - add notes on every blue line for this measure?
04:05:551 - add note
04:11:154 - 04:11:289 - ^04:11:559 - 04:11:829 - 04:12:099 -


4K Oni:

00:25:566 - add note 00:25:836 -
00:33:261 (33261|2) - this note is not fitting into this pattern
00:37:874 (37874|2) - move down to 1/4 beat 00:38:189 - add note
00:38:189 - 00:38:526 - 00:38:729 - add note 00:41:159 - 00:41:361 -
00:42:171 (42171|2) - delete 00:42:306 - and add here
00:42:576 - add note 00:42:914 - add notes
00:44:331 (44331|1) - delete
00:45:816 - add note 00:46:356 - add note
00:55:064 (55064|2) - extend those holds to full beat
01:04:514 (64514|3) - this note shouldnt be here. You should delete it and make this part more playable
01:13:019 - 01:13:222 - add note
01:57:795 (117795|0,117885|2) - delete
01:57:975 (117975|1) - i think this hold is too long
01:58:785 (118785|1) - i think for the hold notes you put there they are more fitting for the more dominant sounds in the song that are every beat and every halfbeat so i dont know about this. I think its not necessarily wrong but notes instead of holds would be more appropriate to me in this kind of pattern. I mean the duration of the sound here is to short for someone to make it out. but i leave that for you to decide
02:02:362 (122362|3) - unfitting jack
02:04:995 - this part looks awkward to play. i would get off the holds at this point and just use notes
02:05:805 (125805|2) - move to next 1/4 beat
02:06:007 (126007|3) - move to next full beat
02:06:142 (126142|0) - delete this and put a note here 02:06:210 - instead
02:07:087 (127087|0) - delete
02:07:762 (127762|1) - should start on next 1/2 beat
02:07:897 (127897|3) - should start on next 1/4 beat
02:08:167 (128167|0,128302|1,128437|3) - same for those 3 they are all a 1/4 beat too early
02:14:310 - add note
02:14:850 - ^
02:15:075 (135075|2,135075|1) - move back to 1/4 beat
02:15:390 - add note
02:20:250 - add note 3rd column
02:27:405 - 02:27:945 - 02:28:485 - 02:29:430 - 02:29:970 - 02:31:590 - add note
02:32:265 (152265|1) - delete
02:39:150 - 02:39:420 - 02:39:623 - add note
02:41:985 - keep adding notes here every full and half beat on 3rd column?
02:43:065 - same here on 2nd column
03:01:358 - add note
03:01:830 (181830|0) - move this hold down to previous 1/4 beat
03:03:045 (183045|3,183113|2,183180|3,183248|2,183315|1) - select those notes and flip it horizontally CTRL+H
^same things for the next pattern
03:11:213 - 03:11:483 - 03:11:753 - add note
03:12:765 - add 1 more note
03:12:968 - add 2 more notes 03:13:170 - leave this as a single one
03:14:790 - 03:15:195 - 03:15:398 - add note
03:18:773 (198773|1) - this note is placed a bit disturbing. better switch its places with the next one on the 4th column
03:21:473 -03:23:633 - 03:23:836 -03:24:376 - add note
03:29:236 (209236|3) - convert to hold? and remove this? 03:29:506 (209506|3) -
03:29:776 - 03:30:046 - 03:30:316 - add additional notes
03:30:586 - 03:30:856 - ^
03:30:676 (210676|2) - move to previous 1/4 beat
03:31:058 (211058|3) - move to previous 1/2 beat
03:31:126 - add 2 notes
03:31:193 - add 1 note
03:31:328 - ^
03:31:396 - add 2 notes
03:31:666 - add 2 notes
03:35:378 - add note
03:36:526 (216526|2) - convert to hold for a full beat length?
03:40:171 - add note on 2nd column
03:46:381 - add note
03:51:781 - ^
03:53:941 - ^
04:05:236 (245236|2) - move this back to 1/4 beat and remove the other normal notes in that part. or at best make this part only with notes (you allways done it before with notes and i think its better fitting)
04:05:416 (245416|2) - hold too long?
04:11:424 - add note
04:11:491 - add 1 more note
04:13:786 - make this measure more difficult than the previous one?
04:14:866 - ^
04:16:486 (256486|3,256486|0,256554|2,256621|1,256689|2,256756|0,256756|3,256824|2,256891|1,256959|2,257026|1,257026|0,257026|3) - flip that horizontally CTRL+H


Good luck hope to see it ranked soon <3

oh god.....please lend me power to fix this....i will quot when it done and somepart i not understand ( i pm you in game )

Edit: helped out on lots of parts:

Hanyuu wrote:

All diffs:

Fix the tags in all diffs so it is the same. Add the guest difficulty mappers name to the tags for all diffs.
Set a preview point for all diffs.

Add hitsounds for all diffs.
Here is the kick and the clap:
http://puu.sh/2Becv
Use the sample import to add it by selecting the notes. Then click alt+mouse1 on the note and a new window will come. Chose the sample from the left and click apply. Then click cancel and it is done. Dont click the sample button it will add an autoplay sample to the songs position.
Add finish sounds with the normal sample~


7K SHD:


00:04:304 - add note finish - added
00:06:464 - ^ - added
00:06:396 (6396|4) - move this note to 3rd column - moved
00:08:624 - add note finish - added
00:09:434 - ^ - added
00:10:379 - should rearrange the notes here until the next beat, like a ladder or something - renoted
00:17:196 - there should be a note here on the 4 column like shortly before there. Need to move the next one far to the right if you decide to add it. - fixed
00:21:584 - add finish - added (1x)
00:23:339 - add note - added (but looks weird)
00:23:541 - ^ ^
00:25:836 - add note 4th column - added
00:26:039 (26039|2) - delete this note - removed
00:26:579 (26579|5) - ^ - removed
00:28:064 (28064|3) - this is too close from the previous hold end - i remove the normalhit at hold end and renote some
00:28:604 (28604|2,28806|2,29009|2) - i think its better if you space out this part more, like move those 3 notes 2 lanes left or something. - fixed, looks better now
00:29:009 (29009|4) - also this note needs to be on the same column as 00:28:874 (28874|5) -. they are the same sounds i think - a bit 'down' but if same column also nice ( i fixed them all )
00:30:089 (30089|1) - Same here. Move it to the same column as 00:29:954 (29954|2) - and space it out a bit more if you like that. ^
00:31:169 (31169|2) - Same column as 00:31:034 (31034|1) - ^
00:43:791 (43791|2,43859|4,43926|3,43994|2,43994|5,44061|3,44129|4) - move those notes all 1 column to the right? - i renote, make repeat drum (like 6 4 6 4 7 5 7 5 )
00:44:264 - 1 note too much here in my opinion - removed 1
00:45:344 - this part feels weird compared to the rest of the map, i think you should remap that removing all the long notes and make a pattern that increases in pitch. Also should end with a stream to the next pattern - renoted
00:55:604 (55604|0) - putting such a stream while holding the spacebar is a bit too much i think The 1/8 stream is also too early, it starts here: 00:55:739 - omg i put wrong place..... thanks fixed
00:55:604 (55604|3,55874|4) - also this part looks awkward to play and structured for me. i think you should atleast make it look a bit less random and hard and make a nice stream pattern. I would remove the 2 holds here too - i guess i changes the 2 holds with a normal note and remap some 1/8 stream
00:55:874 - here add another chord stream if you decide to remove the holds - removed ^
00:58:169 - add note (for kick) - added
01:00:329 - ^ ^
01:02:489 - ^ ^
01:02:624 - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/706964 suggestion to make this look better and more playable - looks nice for those beats, i use this.
01:03:704 - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/706968 next pattern ^
01:06:944 (66944|0) - too close 01:06:944 (66944|5,66944|4,66944|0,67079|5,67147|1,67214|2,67214|5,67214|3) - just move all of those notes 1 to the right i guess? i was going to suggest moving some thing here anyways because 01:06:809 (66809|5,66809|4) - those and 01:06:944 (66944|5,66944|4) - the music changes in pitch there and you should move it. - i fix only 01:06:809 (66809|5,66809|4) other note i stay first..
01:10:522 (70522|1,70589|2,70657|3) - better flip those 3 notes horizontally to improve this, select all 3 press CTRL+H - mirrored
01:11:264 - 1 note too much here - removed 1 note
01:11:804 - ^ ^
01:12:344 - ^ ^
01:12:344 - this measure also looks really bad i think you need to rearrange it to make it better - renoted this part
01:30:839 (90839|5) - add one more note to all of the following ones - added
01:30:704 - add 1 or 2 more notes - ^
01:32:864 - ^ - ^
01:47:985 - to 01:51:225 - rearrange those here~ the spacing you put for the 1/4 notes is not suggested at all by the music. The notes are close together here so i think you shouldnt put them all over the place. also the hold is not fitting here and on every second beat 3 notes seem better than 4 - ok done re-arranged, i hope this better.
01:51:225 - to 01:52:305 - 01:52:035 (112035|5) - delete 01:52:170 (112170|6) - delete - removed
01:53:655 - add note first column - added
01:55:477 - add note 4th column - ^
01:56:490 (116490|1) - move this one one to the right - moved
01:57:570 (117570|3) - move this one one to the left - ^
02:04:961 (124961|5) - move this one to the 2nd column - not suit with that....i try another pattern
02:08:572 (128572|5) - delete this one - removed, and....
02:08:505 (128505|1) - ^ ^
02:15:930 - add note 5th column - added
02:26:325 - to 02:26:865 - should arrange the notes differently to build up a bit more pressure the previous pattern is going too long - fixed. take that more harder. ^^
02:27:945 - 02:30:105 - rearrange this. there is no place in the music that would indicate to me 3 notes like that ontop at the spacebar. Also the notes dont seem to match at all in this part - fixed, hope this better
02:43:605 - really need to delete the notes here and put some 1/8 streams - 1/8 stream with 222bpm feel uncomfort but yeah i start 1/8 stream at 02:43:875
03:35:986 - 03:37:066 - rearrange this to be more understandable? nvm- move this note 03:36:661 (216661|1) - to the 7th column - wait i got another idea this part
03:41:926 -(221926|0,221926|1,221926|2,221993|5,222061|2,222061|3,222061|6,222061|1,222128|4,222196|2,222196|0,222196|1,222196|5,222263|6,222331|3,222331|5,222331|2,222331|1,222398|6) - this part is absurd lol. i bet 99% of the that are even able to play this will have a hard time with it. It looks way too evil - HAHAHA im evil , btw removed 1 note
03:52:456 (232456|1,232456|0,232523|3,232523|2,232591|1,232591|0,232726|1,232726|0) - this looks like you can make it better aswell, just balance it out a bit more - fixed
03:54:548 - add note - added
03:54:818 - ^ 03:55:088 - ^
03:55:426 - i think the holds after this part are a bit messed up and i changed it around. i dont remember exactly what i changed but i make screenshots. please look at if and see if you can improve anything osu.ppy.sh/ss/706968 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/707004 - hmm a little bit weird on LN.....i try another one..
04:01:906 - 1 note too much here 04:01:906 (241906|2) - should remove this - removed
04:02:176 - add note 04:02:716 - add note - added
04:03:526 - 04:03:796 - change to a 1/8 stream ? - i just found trplet on 1/8 only (+added)
04:04:606 - add note - added
04:05:506 (245506|2) - add note - ^
04:05:551 (245551|4) - add note - ^
04:06:766 (246766|1) - move this one 1 left - moved
04:12:706 - this pattern is too weak and looks a bit poor and disappointing for the ending of the song lol. make a progressive pattern and raise the note density every measure until the end. Also the notes getting higher every measure aswell if you want to build this in to make a nice ending to this song. - remapped at that part, maybe this looking good. i guess ><



7K MX:

02:18:292 (138292|3,138495|3,138697|3) - Those notes arent correctly snapped, move them all down 1/4 beat so the first hold starts on the new measure and the last one ends on second beat. - removed hold and changes normal notes ( add hold at there pretty weird)
02:28:890 (148890|4) - move this one in the same column as one of the previous ones? - moved
02:51:705 (171705|4,171705|6,171975|5,171975|2,172245|3,172245|0) - think its better if those notes keep following the piano part here. 02:51:705 (171705|4,171705|6) - move this up to 1/4 beat 02:52:245 (172245|0,172245|3) - move this down to 1/4 beat - gosh *offsync note* (i just misplace put the note) thanks fixed
03:09:390 - 03:09:593 - 03:09:795 - add notes here? - not sure...if add, its become to streams there....and i just hear 2 2 2 (piano)
03:29:506 - add 1-2 notes - added
03:31:666 - ^ ^
03:33:826 - add some note here or not depending if you added 1 or 2 before. so all those places got either 2 or 3 notes there ^
03:42:196 (222196|0) - move this to 3rd column? - moved
03:42:331 (222331|1) - move this to 4th column? - ^
03:55:426 (235426|6) - those holds here in this section should all start at the beat in my opinion (for the first holds) - hmm, ohh this i called unique LN, i try ask entozer if need to change it or not.
03:56:776 (236776|5) - this hold is too long. should be as long as the others - ops -fixed-
04:14:934 (254934|5) - move this note so it isnt too short to the previous one? - removed, feel uncomfort after hold


7K HD:

02:22:410 (142410|4) - move this right? - moved
02:29:025 - add a note for a finish hitsound - added +FI


4K NM:

No complaints~ -


[color=#4000FF][size=150][b]4K HD:

00:06:194 (6194|3) - move this hold note to the previous beat - moved
00:25:904 (25904|0,26444|3) - better cut those holds to have them shorter (like in the next measure) - fixed
01:06:809 (66809|2) - move this back to 1/4 beat - no, and i just realise there got some 1/6 note omg
01:37:994 - add a hold here? - added (but feel like a bit weird)


4K MX:

01:08:159 - 01:08:227 - add note? - no, its look very weird.
01:30:704 - you need to add notes here. Also the part before here 01:22:064 - got alot of empty space and afterall this is a MX diff - added
01:55:815 (115815|3) - move this note down to previous 1/4 beat - moved
01:57:806 (117806|1) - ^ - there 1/3 grid, not changed ^ and 01:58:110 - add note - added
02:14:985 - ^ ^
02:26:865 - add more kicks here this part is getting too easy - added
03:04:665 - you should change the pattern here on the 2nd and 3rd beat - changed
03:30:991 - add note 03:31:328 - add note - added
03:33:826 -to 03:38:146 - keep adding more notes after this point. the patterns you put here are for a normal or hard diff - added
03:48:271 - 03:48:608 - 03:48:811 - add note - added
03:55:426 (235426|0) - extend those holds to the next beat - no, because the end hold very suit with beside normal note i guess
04:00:826 - add notes on every blue line for this measure? - added
04:05:551 - add note - added
04:11:154 - 04:11:289 - ^04:11:559 - 04:11:829 - 04:12:099 - ^


4K Oni:

00:25:566 - add note 00:25:836 - added
00:33:261 (33261|2) - this note is not fitting into this pattern - fixed
00:37:874 (37874|2) - move down to 1/4 beat 00:38:189 - add note - moved and added
00:38:189 - 00:38:526 - 00:38:729 - add note 00:41:159 - 00:41:361 - added , no , added , added
00:42:171 (42171|2) - delete 00:42:306 - and add here - deleted and added
00:42:576 - add note 00:42:914 - add notes - added , no
00:44:331 (44331|1) - delete - no, later its looks unballance with 1 measure
00:45:816 - add note 00:46:356 - add note - added
00:55:064 (55064|2) - extend those holds to full beat - okay fixed
01:04:514 (64514|3) - this note shouldnt be here. You should delete it and make this part more playable - fixed, and renote some
01:13:019 - 01:13:222 - add note - added
01:57:795 (117795|0,117885|2) - delete - i don't get this
01:57:975 (117975|1) - i think this hold is too long - fixed, make it shorter
01:58:785 (118785|1) - i think for the hold notes you put there they are more fitting for the more dominant sounds in the song that are every beat and every halfbeat so i dont know about this. I think its not necessarily wrong but notes instead of holds would be more appropriate to me in this kind of pattern. I mean the duration of the sound here is to short for someone to make it out. but i leave that for you to decide - i leave it first
02:02:362 (122362|3) - unfitting jack - fixed
02:04:995 - this part looks awkward to play. i would get off the holds at this point and just use notes - renoted
02:05:805 (125805|2) - move to next 1/4 beat - moved *
02:06:007 (126007|3) - move to next full beat - i renoted this part
02:06:142 (126142|0) - delete this and put a note here 02:06:210 - instead - fixed and *
02:07:087 (127087|0) - delete - deleted and *
02:07:762 (127762|1) - should start on next 1/2 beat - *
02:07:897 (127897|3) - should start on next 1/4 beat - *
02:08:167 (128167|0,128302|1,128437|3) - same for those 3 they are all a 1/4 beat too early - *
02:05:265 to 02:08:775 - i renoted, i guess those short hold too weird if not in triplets
02:14:310 - add note - added
02:14:850 - ^ - ^
02:15:075 (135075|2,135075|1) - move back to 1/4 beat - moved
02:15:390 - add note - added
02:20:250 - add note 3rd column - ^
02:27:405 - 02:27:945 - 02:28:485 - 02:29:430 - 02:29:970 - 02:31:590 - add note - ^
02:32:265 (152265|1) - delete - deleted
02:39:150 - 02:39:420 - 02:39:623 - add note - added
02:41:985 - keep adding notes here every full and half beat on 3rd column? - okay, added
02:43:065 - same here on 2nd column - huh? hold?
03:01:358 - add note - added
03:01:830 (181830|0) - move this hold down to previous 1/4 beat - fixed and change position some part holds
03:03:045 (183045|3,183113|2,183180|3,183248|2,183315|1) - select those notes and flip it horizontally CTRL+H
^same things for the next pattern - mirrored
03:11:213 - 03:11:483 - 03:11:753 - add note - added , add and rearrange , added
03:12:765 - add 1 more note - added
03:12:968 - add 2 more notes 03:13:170 - leave this as a single one - added 2x , delete 1 note(leave 1 note)
03:14:790 - 03:15:195 - 03:15:398 - add note - added
03:18:773 (198773|1) - this note is placed a bit disturbing. better switch its places with the next one on the 4th column - moved
03:21:473 -03:23:633 - 03:23:836 -03:24:376 - add note - added
03:29:236 (209236|3) - convert to hold? - nope, just let it stream, and remove this? 03:29:506 (209506|3) - removed
03:29:776 - 03:30:046 - 03:30:316 - add additional notes - added
03:30:586 - 03:30:856 - ^ - ^
03:30:676 (210676|2) - move to previous 1/4 beat - moved
03:31:058 (211058|3) - move to previous 1/2 beat - ^
03:31:126 - add 2 notes - added
03:31:193 - add 1 note - ^
03:31:328 - ^ - ^
03:31:396 - add 2 notes - ^
03:31:666 - add 2 notes - ^
03:35:378 - add note - ^
03:36:526 (216526|2) - convert to hold for a full beat length? - ok
03:40:171 - add note on 2nd column - added
03:46:381 - add note - added
03:51:781 - ^ - ^
03:53:941 - ^ - ^
04:05:236 (245236|2) - move this back to 1/4 beat and remove the other normal notes in that part. or at best make this part only with notes (you allways done it before with notes and i think its better fitting) - moved, ( i guess its 1/3 beat there x_x )
04:05:416 (245416|2) - hold too long? - fixed, make it 1/1 beat LN
04:11:424 - add note - added
04:11:491 - add 1 more note - ^
04:13:786 - make this measure more difficult than the previous one? - renoted
04:14:866 - ^ - ^
04:16:486 (256486|3,256486|0,256554|2,256621|1,256689|2,256756|0,256756|3,256824|2,256891|1,256959|2,257026|1,257026|0,257026|3) - flip that horizontally CTRL+H - Mirrored


Good luck hope to see it ranked soon <3

Not fully complete it yet Done and Fixed/Rearranged/Renoted ..... phew

THANKS A BUNCH <3

Staiain wrote:

Edit: helped out on lots of parts:

ircmod

08:16 Staiain: :>
08:17 saka1234: o/
08:18 Staiain: im not technical but Oni needs more double notes
08:20 saka1234: i will check it later now i going to complete 7K mod first i'll pm you after i done, actually i need SM modder to mod ONI diff
08:20 saka1234: i will check it later now i going to complete 7K mod first i'll pm you after i done, actually i need SM modder to mod ONI diff
08:22 Staiain: is it possible for me to mod the diff and like, send you the modded version ? cause i barely understand the editor
08:23 saka1234: still not done it yet
08:23 saka1234: hanyuu mod takes very long time to fix it....
08:25 Staiain: can imagine
08:27 saka1234: o.o
08:27 saka1234: you can we start now?
08:27 saka1234: ops
08:28 saka1234: i mean *can we start now*?
08:28 *saka1234 is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/229057 xi - FREEDOM DiVE [4K ONI]]
08:28 Staiain: like, me finding stuff to mod and you apply it ?
08:29 saka1234: yes
08:29 saka1234: irc mod
08:29 Staiain: lemme go to the editor
08:30 Staiain: im just gonna weatch the song until i find a spot then i will tell you
08:30 Staiain: okay?
08:30 saka1234: sure
08:31 saka1234: but make sure its for all 4k player can play it dont over note it xD
08:33 saka1234: sorry i dc
08:33 Staiain: 01:14:533 has 1/6 notes
08:34 Staiain: 1/3 sorry
08:34 saka1234: yes
08:35 saka1234: at there i put 1/3 note
08:35 Staiain: so it goes to the rhtyhm of that part
08:37 Staiain: you would be surprised but i'm suggesting longnotes, lemem find the time
08:38 saka1234: okay.
08:38 Staiain: 1:22 here you could have longnotes in addition to the singlenotes
08:39 Staiain: a longnote every 2 beats or something
08:39 Staiain: lemme check
08:39 saka1234: at there SV changes is x0.50 it would be hard if add Longnotes
08:39 Staiain: yeah every 1.25 second or something, that's 1 per 4 beats
08:39 Staiain: oh right
08:39 Staiain: i forgot
08:39 Staiain: ops
08:40 saka1234: hehe
08:40 Staiain: yeah then that's a bad idea
08:40 saka1234: and
08:40 saka1234: wait
08:40 saka1234: 01:22:064
08:40 saka1234: at this part
08:41 saka1234: most people keep combo break when SV changes to 0.5
08:41 Staiain: yeah better leave it for now
08:41 saka1234: do you have any suggest to add more sv or keep stay 0.5?
08:41 Staiain: nah it think it's fine
08:42 saka1234: 01:38:264
08:43 Staiain: 1/2 notes should be in the gap perhaps? to keep it more flowing
08:43 saka1234: at that part?
08:43 Staiain: yes the gap feels unnatural
08:44 Staiain: 1:57:5 here there is 1/3 notes instead of mini LN
08:45 saka1234: should change to normal notes?
08:46 Staiain: yeah that would make the best flow, make it 1/3 notes then it would go perfectly to the rhythm
08:46 saka1234: okay removed LNs and add normalnotes.
08:47 saka1234: i also feel like that...because in mania too hard mini LN
08:47 Staiain: yeah afaik mania has stricter timing than o2?
08:48 saka1234: yep
08:48 Staiain: btw the LN at 2:59 what do they go to in the song
08:50 saka1234: maybe new challange for 4K
08:50 saka1234: and i refer it to DJmax
08:51 saka1234: *myo2
08:51 Staiain: hm, i still feel those are unneeded but it is your chart ^^
08:52 Staiain: also added a few notes here http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/708285
08:52 saka1234: i thinking about it
08:53 Staiain: 3:17:5 is a good way tro use LN but 2:59:4 isn't in my opinion anyway
08:53 Staiain: how do i remove a note
08:54 saka1234: select and right click
08:54 Staiain: how do i paste link to the exact place
08:55 saka1234: like this?
08:55 saka1234: 03:01:088 (181088|0) -
08:55 Staiain: yes
08:55 saka1234: click a note
08:55 saka1234: then copy it (ctrl+c)
08:55 Staiain: 03:21:473 (201473|2) - added a note here so it follows the swing of the song
08:56 saka1234: if multiple note - select the note you want then copy
08:56 Staiain: 03:30:586 (210586|0) - here should also be 1/3 notes
08:58 Staiain: 03:47:866 (227866|2) - here too is 1/3 notes
08:58 saka1234: there already put 1/3
08:58 Staiain: ah didn't notice, and um
08:59 Staiain: 04:02:513 (242513|2) - should be moved to the right and 04:02:581 (242581|3) - to the left
08:59 saka1234: at the 1st column?
09:00 Staiain: move the tapnote away from the end of the LN cause it would b e awkward to play that part3
09:01 saka1234: http://puu.sh/2BweZ
09:01 saka1234: if like this better?
09:01 Staiain: move the pink note to the right, in the middle
09:02 Staiain: from the middle*
09:02 Staiain: lemme show you
09:02 saka1234: okay
09:03 Staiain: could do it liek this http://puu.sh/2Bwhw ^^
09:03 saka1234: and also need to change too?
09:03 saka1234: 04:02:243 (242243|1,242311|3) -
09:04 Staiain: :>
09:04 saka1234: because the front part and 04:02:243 (242243|1,242311|3) - this part are mirrored
09:04 Staiain: ah okay
09:05 saka1234: ok fixef
09:05 saka1234: d*
09:05 Staiain:
09:06 Staiain: i think it's good now, the end LN part is tricky but then again it is the hardest 4k diff so i suppose it's all good
09:08 saka1234: from 01:58:785
09:08 saka1234: to
09:08 saka1234: 02:18:225
09:09 saka1234: if feel uncomfort tell me
09:09 saka1234: because this part the worst
09:09 Staiain: doesn't look bad, save and update and let me playtest it :>
09:11 saka1234: okay but let me recheck again

thanks for Oni mod....i fixed some and renoted a few....

i will mod this 4k oni and 4k mx when i get home in 3 hours.. and edit this post!

wow.... i waiting for that

so i don't edit the post, but here is IRC mod!

Bites wrote:

so i don't edit the post, but here is IRC mod!

irc mod!

19:20 saka1234: o/
19:21 Bites: hii
19:22 saka1234: hi
19:23 Bites: so
19:23 Bites: i want to do IRC mod for freedom dive 4k ONI
19:23 saka1234: okay
19:24 saka1234: sorry i just woke up
19:25 Bites: it's ok
19:25 Bites: :p
19:25 Bites: anyways
19:25 Bites: 00:19:424 (19424|0,19424|2) - from here, to..
19:25 Bites: 00:24:689 (24689|3,24689|2,24689|0) -
19:25 Bites: the pattern is so awkward to play
19:26 saka1234: suggest to change new pattern?
19:28 Bites: http://puu.sh/2Gw54.jpg
19:29 Bites: maybe?
19:29 Bites: similar idea.. not so awkward
19:30 Bites: 00:23:744 (23744|3,23744|1,23744|0,23811|2,23879|1,23946|2,24014|3,24014|0,24081|1,24149|2,24216|1,24284|0,24284|3,24351|2,24419|1,24486|2,24554|0,24554|3) - here is ok though
19:30 Bites: 00:23:744 (23744|3,23744|1,23744|0,23811|2,23879|1,23946|2,24014|3,24014|0,24081|1,24149|2,24216|1,24284|0,24284|3,24351|2,24419|1,24486|2,24554|0,24554|3) - here is ok though
19:30 Bites: 00:23:744 (23744|3,23744|1,23744|0,23811|2,23879|1,23946|2,24014|3,24014|0,24081|1,24149|2,24216|1,24284|0,24284|3,24351|2,24419|1,24486|2,24554|0,24554|3) - here is ok though
19:31 Bites: 00:24:959 (24959|3,24959|0,25026|1,25094|3,25094|0) - move the [1] on the top to be a [3] so it looks like: http://puu.sh/2Gw8H.jpg
19:31 Bites: 00:25:499 (25499|0,25499|3,25566|2,25634|1,25634|0) - ^ but mirrored
19:31 Bites: 00:34:544 (34544|0) - up to..
19:32 Bites: 00:36:029 (36029|1,36029|3)
19:32 Bites: why do you use double notes here when before they were not in use, when the song did not add any new instrument?
19:33 saka1234: wait
19:33 saka1234: 00:25:229 (25229|2,25364|1) -
19:33 saka1234: those i feel uncomfort after changes
19:33 Bites: http://puu.sh/2Gwed.jpg ?
19:34 Bites: maybe that is better?
19:34 saka1234: whi part?
19:34 saka1234: which
19:34 Bites: 00:24:959 (24959|3,24959|0,25026|1,25094|3,25094|2,25229|0,25229|1,25364|3,25364|2,25499|0,25499|3,25566|2,25634|1,25634|0) -
19:34 saka1234: okay
19:34 saka1234: looks good
19:35 Bites: cool!
19:37 Bites: 00:49:664 (49664|0,49664|2,49799|2,49934|0,49934|1,49934|3) - be careful with this thing..
19:37 Bites: this is called an anchor because of a big line of notes on one column
19:37 Bites: and lots of different ones
19:37 Bites: and it is weird to play..
19:38 Bites: if you can avoid it, try not to make these "anchor"
19:38 Bites: change notes around a little bit
19:38 Bites: so that big lines of notes in one column do not go too long
19:39 saka1234: 00:49:664 (49664|2) - if chg to |4|
19:39 Bites: no, that is okay
19:39 Bites: it is just 2 notes
19:40 Bites: try to avoid longer than 4 notes :p
19:40 saka1234: okay :d
19:41 Bites: 01:02:624 (62624|0) - here up, these vry short long notes are unfun to play..
19:42 Bites: and almost always combo breaks
19:42 Bites: difficult to read
19:42 saka1234: staiain say still ok
19:42 Bites: staiain isn't a mapper, just a player
19:42 Bites: and he admits to that
19:43 saka1234: mmokay.....should remove that?
19:43 Bites: if you feel like it, yes - they are not impossible
19:43 Bites: so if you really want to keep them then go ahead
19:43 Bites: they are doable
19:43 Bites: and i think i combo them one time
19:43 Bites: just letting you know
19:44 Bites: 82064,-200,4,2,2,35,0,0
19:44 saka1234: because i love this part 01:03:704 (63704|2,63839|3,63839|1,63974|1,63974|2,64109|0,64109|3,64244|2,64244|3,64379|1,64379|2,64514|1,64514|0,64649|0,64649|2) -
19:44 Bites: then keep it
19:44 Bites: it isn't unrankable
19:45 saka1234: 01:02:624 (62624|1,62624|0,62759|1,62759|3,62894|1,62894|0,63029|2,63029|1,63164|3,63164|1,63299|2,63299|3) - maybe i chg another pattern
19:45 Bites: give it a shot! see if it turns out well
19:45 Bites: 01:22:064 (82064|0,82064|1,82064|3) - SV change here maybe reduce extremity?
19:45 Bites: 0.75 or 0.8 instead of 0.5
19:45 saka1234: yeah so many combo break there
19:45 Bites: still noticeable but
19:45 Bites: not too hard
19:46 saka1234: i use 0.75
19:46 Bites: sounds great!
19:47 Bites: 01:51:765 (111765|3,111765|1,111765|0,111900|2,111900|1,112035|1,112035|2,112170|0,112170|2,112170|3) - change to have pitch relevance?
19:48 Bites: maybe to : http://puu.sh/2GwGR.jpg
19:48 Bites: or other pattern you can think of :p
19:48 Bites: 01:56:017 (116017|3,116085|3) - why minijack note?
19:49 saka1234: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/720865
19:49 saka1234: how?
19:49 Bites: yeah, that looks good
19:49 saka1234: moved that minijack 01:56:085 (116085|2) - at |3|
19:50 saka1234: i think better |1|
19:50 Bites: how does this look? you can keep minijack, because it is not awkard like this: http://puu.sh/2GwKE.jpg
19:50 Bites: and it flows nice now
19:51 Bites: 01:57:705 (117705|3,117795|1,117885|3,117975|1) - this is the first and last time long notes are used for this note in the song
19:51 Bites: inconsistent with the rest of the map
19:51 Bites: maybe change these to normal notes
19:51 Bites: 01:57:975 (117975|1) - keep this long note, oops
19:52 Bites: 01:58:785 (118785|1,118852|2,118920|1) to 02:00:675 (120675|3,120742|2,120810|1)
19:52 Bites: oops
19:52 Bites: 01:58:785 (118785|1,118852|2,118920|1) to..
19:52 Bites: 02:00:675 (120675|3,120742|2,120810|1)
19:52 Bites: why is long notes used here too?
19:53 Bites: they were never used before on this instrument
19:53 Bites: and makes to be VERY difficult to play.. huge difficulty spike in this one part
19:54 Bites: 02:04:185 (124185|0,124252|2,124320|3,124455|0,124522|1,124590|3,124725|2,124792|1,124860|0) - same with this
19:54 saka1234: ;w;
19:54 Bites: you do it because it looks good?
19:55 saka1234: i dont know...because i nver tried chart on 4K mode
19:55 Bites: ah
19:55 Bites: it's ok dude
19:55 Bites: what you have here is really really good
19:55 Bites: and it has a lot of potential
19:55 Bites: i think you can definitely get rank..
19:55 saka1234: yeah but....the hitsound make me trouble
19:56 Bites: hmm
19:56 Bites: i will talk about that later..
19:56 Bites: anyways
19:56 Bites: 02:14:985 (134985|3,134985|2,135052|2,135052|1,135165|1,135165|0,135255|2,135255|3,135255|0) - off sync!
19:56 saka1234: lol
19:56 Bites: put these on 1/3 please
19:56 saka1234: that hanyuu's mod
19:57 saka1234: if 25%
19:57 saka1234: but when playing its uncomfort ?
19:58 Bites: no, but i listen at 75% and 50% and it sounds like 1/3 to me.. when at 25% it still sounds like 1/3 but off a little?
19:58 Bites: maybe the song offset is wrong
19:58 Bites: it is a fun pattern though
19:58 Bites: and i don't lose combo
19:58 saka1234: maybe
19:58 Bites: so it doesn't matter if it is 1/4 or 1/3
19:58 Bites: still can be played!
20:00 Bites: 02:16:065 (136065|1,136065|0,136200|3,136200|2,136335|0,136335|1,136335|2,136470|3,136470|2,136605|1,136605|0,136740|3,136740|1,136875|1,136875|2,136875|0,137010|2,137010|0) -
20:00 Bites: maybe change pattern to..
20:00 Bites: http://puu.sh/2Gx58.jpg
20:00 Bites: i do not want to get rid of ALL your long notes.. but these ones who are in one column are awkward to play
20:01 saka1234: better
20:01 saka1234: i use that
20:01 Bites: ok!
20:01 Bites: 02:40:635 (160635|2,160635|3) -
20:01 Bites: here you miss one note
20:02 Bites: should look like: http://puu.sh/2Gx8v.jpg
20:02 Bites: or maybe just 1 extra note
20:02 Bites: instead of 2
20:03 Bites: 02:47:183 (167183|1,167250|0,167318|0) - different note on piano.. so no minijack!
20:03 Bites: 02:49:545 (169545|3,169613|3,169680|2,169748|2) - same here
20:03 saka1234: fixed
20:03 Bites: 02:54:878 (174878|0,174945|0) - and here
20:04 Bites: 02:59:400 (179400|3,179468|0,179535|1,179603|2,179670|3,179738|0,179805|3,179873|1,179940|2,180008|3,180075|0,180143|3,180210|1,180278|0,180345|2,180413|0,180480|3,180548|1,180615|0,180683|1,180750|2,180818|3,180818|0,180885|1,180953|2,181020|3)
20:04 Bites: what in the heck happened here :p
20:04 Bites: i think you got a bit carried away
20:04 saka1234: o2jam mixed hold
20:04 saka1234: that i refered from Djmax / myo2
20:05 Bites: this is so impossible hard to play.. and does not fit the song very well i think
20:05 Bites: 03:07:905 (187905|0,187973|1,188040|2,188108|3,188445|3,188513|2,188580|1,188648|0) - keep this - it is hard to do but it is straightforward
20:06 Bites: but "o2jam mixed hold"
20:06 Bites: i do not know..
20:06 Bites: i want to say it is bad but maybe other players will do it better than me
20:07 Bites: but i still think it does not go good with the song
20:07 Bites: 03:09:053 (189053|1,189120|1) -
20:07 Bites: watch out for minijack again
20:07 saka1234: chged
20:08 saka1234: abt o2jam mixed hold...i wait for myo2 player to play that
20:08 Bites: ok, that sounds good!
20:08 saka1234: i mean chged only minijack D
20:09 saka1234: those hold i stay first...
20:09 Bites: 03:16:545 (196545|1,197085|0,197625|3,197895|2,198165|0,198435|1,198705|2,199245|3,199785|0,200056|1,200326|3,200596|2) - why long notes? there is no instrument, i think what you map is just piano jumping around :p
20:09 Bites: would also be a lot more fun if it was just a really big stream with lots of doubles
20:10 Bites: so maybe like..
20:11 Bites: http://puu.sh/2Gxpq.jpg
20:11 Bites: something like that?
20:11 Bites: maybe not the same...
20:12 Bites: but you can try it out maybe?
20:12 saka1234: only add beat note?
20:12 Bites: yeah, i think that would be really good
20:12 Bites: there are lots of long notes in all other parts of the song
20:12 saka1234: yeah but wait
20:12 saka1234: you see this
20:12 Bites: ?
20:13 saka1234: 03:16:545 -
20:13 Bites: yes?
20:13 saka1234: 1st put 4 beat each measure lines and next measure 8 beat?
20:14 saka1234: 03:16:545 - = 1/1 beat 03:17:625 - = 1/2 beat
20:14 Bites: 03:18:705 - maybe at here you do 1/2 instead
20:14 Bites: so half way
20:15 saka1234: nope that part i mirrored from back
20:15 Bites: ! lol
20:15 Bites: well, either one
20:15 Bites: if you think it is good, do it!
20:16 Bites: 03:54:346 (234346|3,234413|2,234481|1,234548|2,234616|3,234683|2,234751|1,234818|2,234886|3,234953|2,235021|1,235088|2,235156|3,235223|2,235291|1) - mini staircase
20:16 Bites: big anchor on [3]
20:17 Bites: 7 notes
20:17 Bites: change this pattern maybe?
20:17 Bites: 03:55:426 - up to..
20:17 Bites: 03:58:801
20:18 Bites: these long notes are weird and inconsistent
20:18 Bites: you can still have long notes here but try to make it obvious why they are there
20:18 Bites: it looks like just random.. :p
20:18 saka1234: yes random lol
20:18 Bites: that is bad then! :p
20:19 Bites: 04:04:876 (244876|3,245146|0,245213|2,245326|0,245416|2,245686|3,246226|0,246496|1,246766|2,247036|3,247306|0,247373|1,247441|3,247846|3,247913|2,247981|0,248386|3,248453|1)
20:19 Bites: all is very weird..
20:20 Bites: can you change these so they make sense? :p
20:20 Bites: very strange how you place them and hard to play
20:21 Bites: i think that is it
20:22 Bites: so that is what i say to the 4k oni difficulty!
20:22 saka1234: but wait
20:22 Bites: yes?
20:23 saka1234: 03:54:346 - does look good now? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/720888
20:24 Bites: yeah, that should be better
20:25 Bites: that is a lot better
20:25 Bites: ok!
20:25 saka1234: wow thanks
20:25 Bites: yes, thank you for making a fun song

a lot of changes ONI diff and some unnecessary hold are removed.... thanks

Updated


EDIT : Updated 27 / 5 / 2013

Hmmm...
you've fixed the slow BPM?
OMG i think this map is quickly popular than i thought

dionzz99 wrote:

Hmmm...
you've fixed the slow BPM?
OMG i think this map is quickly popular than i thought

think about 'slow' ah.. i forgot to fix other diff the slow part.... (0.5 will chg to 0.75 after update next)

4K NM

01:47:917 - Remove this speed change,the beginner can't read it

4K HD

00:38:324 - add a note

00:39:404 - ^

00:40:484 - ^

01:12:614 (72614|2) - remove

01:13:154 (73154|2) - ^

Sorry,I don't have much time /.\

Wrong post ._.

Lieselotte wrote:

Wrong post ._.

you mean the mod? or this post???

btw

Lieselotte wrote:

4K NM

01:47:917 - Remove this speed change,the beginner can't read it ✔

4K HD

00:38:324 - add a note ✔

00:39:404 - ^ ✔

00:40:484 - ^ ✔

01:12:614 (72614|2) - remove ✔

01:13:154 (73154|2) - ^ ✔

Sorry,I don't have much time /.\

thanks and Update it again.

Star! 4k oni is a lot of fun!

Bobbias wrote:

Star! 4k oni is a lot of fun!

thanks :3

finally passed 4K ONI with nearly 90% ;_;

WHY NO A ;___;

_Gezo_ wrote:

finally passed 4K ONI with nearly 90% ;_;

WHY NO A ;___;

me get B too ;_;

ExPew wrote:

_Gezo_ wrote:

finally passed 4K ONI with nearly 90% ;_;

WHY NO A ;___;

me get B too ;_;

I got a high 89...
sad
endurance y u no keep being high

_Gezo_ wrote:

I got a high 89...
sad
endurance y u no keep being high

need more faster xd

and...why still cannot rank this map xd

blbl