17:56 grumd: hey
17:57 Laurier: hi o/
17:57 grumd: is that intended that S:C2 sampleset doesn't have empty sliderslide, but S:C1 has?
17:57 Laurier: woop I forgot it
17:58 grumd: yeah
17:58 grumd: also, [Hard]:
17:58 grumd: 00:16:141 (3) - i'd move (1) so it makes a nice encircle with (2) and also move (3) on top of (1)
17:58 grumd: because (3)'s previous position was kinda strange
18:00 Laurier: um.
18:00 Laurier: http://puu.sh/1R6vs
18:00 Laurier: move to this
18:01 grumd: well, something like that, but still it could be nice to make a blanket with (1) start and (2) end
18:01 grumd: but as you wish
18:02 grumd: 01:16:471 (1) - rhythm here could be better, this follows vocal pretty good: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/579749
18:05 grumd: 01:30:482 (3) - telling that again, i'd remove this note, it is hard to hit because you already see a spinner when it appears and you want to spin more than to click this last note. even if this is wrong, that note isn't followed by anything that can continue this rhythm. you miss the same vocal at 01:30:647 - , so it may be kinda strange to leave the note before it. anyway.. do what you wish here
18:05 grumd: 01:30:482 (3) - telling that again, i'd remove this note, it is hard to hit because you already see a spinner when it appears and you want to spin more than to click this last note. even if this is wrong, that note isn't followed by anything that can continue this rhythm. you miss the same vocal at 01:30:647 - , so it may be kinda strange to leave the note before it. anyway.. do what you wish here
18:05 grumd: 01:30:482 (3) - telling that again, i'd remove this note, it is hard to hit because you already see a spinner when it appears and you want to spin more than to click this last note. even if this is wrong, that note isn't followed by anything that can continue this rhythm. you miss the same vocal at 01:30:647 - , so it may be kinda strange to leave the note before it. anyway.. do what you wish here
18:05 grumd: 01:30:482 (3) - telling that again, i'd remove this note, it is hard to hit because you already see a spinner when it appears and you want to spin more than to click this last note. even if this is wrong, that note isn't followed by anything that can continue this rhythm. you miss the same vocal at 01:30:647 - , so it may be kinda strange to leave the note before it. anyway.. do what you wish here
18:05 grumd: is that truncated?
18:06 Laurier: ahh
18:06 Laurier: ok removed this note
18:09 grumd: 02:21:086 (3) - pls middle point 1 grid left :D
18:10 Laurier: ok. make better blancket.
18:11 grumd: 02:29:657 (5) - here fix it a bit too pls
18:11 Laurier: ok
18:12 grumd: 02:37:405 (5,6,7,1,2,3,1) - what about moving this stuff to the center of the screen? the triple is a bit too far from previous slider
18:12 grumd: 02:37:405 (5,6,7,1,2,3,1) - what about moving this stuff to the center of the screen? the triple is a bit too far from previous slider
18:13 grumd: 03:00:976 (3) - also it could be a good idea to place it right between (2) and (4): http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/579759
18:13 grumd: for some reason it is closer to 4
18:13 grumd: hm
18:13 grumd: wait
18:13 grumd: it's ok
18:13 Laurier: if use x1.0 it's stack on (4) end
18:13 grumd: it's okok
18:14 Laurier: ah
18:14 Laurier: 02:37:570 (7) -
18:14 Laurier: I forgot finish
18:14 grumd: lol
18:15 grumd: it was fine even without it anyway
18:15 grumd: 03:47:130 (7) - what about making it parallel with (1)?
18:17 grumd: 03:49:438 (1) - i can suggest here the same rhythm as suggested before
18:17 grumd: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/579749
18:17 grumd: it was on 01:16:471 (1) -
18:17 grumd: hope you did it there
18:18 grumd: and if you did, make same on 03:49:438 (1) -
18:20 Laurier: http://puu.sh/1R6Sk
18:20 Laurier: http://puu.sh/1R6ST
18:20 Laurier: fixed 2 things
18:21 grumd: parallel doesn't mean vertical
18:21 grumd: http://puu.sh/1R6TZ this is parallel (but your version is fine too, leave it if you want)
18:22 Laurier: http://puu.sh/1R6VG
18:23 Laurier: ...o...ok?
18:23 grumd: yes, that's ok, but you don't have to apply everything that i say :D
18:23 grumd: i just suggest
18:24 grumd: 03:52:734 (1,2) - look at the angle between these too
18:24 grumd: 03:53:723 (1,2) - make same here
18:24 grumd: http://puu.sh/1R6Xh
18:30 Laurier: I think my CS2 finish is lost....
18:31 grumd: uhm
18:31 grumd: try to realise what happened with hitsounds there and poke me then
18:34 Laurier: I submitted CS2. (sliders slide and finish)
18:35 grumd: okay, redling
18:39 grumd: oh, right
18:39 grumd: that finishes in the beginning gave me a strange feeling
18:41 Laurier: why lost my hitsounds ;_;
18:41 grumd: dunno
18:42 Laurier: btw new CS:2 finish is good sound.
18:45 grumd: 03:59:987 - is that finish really needed (normal)
18:45 grumd: ?
18:46 Laurier: woop I think whitsle is better
18:48 grumd: encircles, blankets in Easy are still very poor...\
18:49 Laurier: o.o
18:50 grumd: 00:23:064 (4) -
18:50 grumd: 00:25:701 (2,1) -
18:50 grumd: 00:28:339 (2) -
18:50 grumd: they all are not perfect, and so on
18:50 grumd: try to make stuff neater
18:51 Laurier: umm...
18:53 grumd: yup :(
18:53 grumd: 00:35:262 (1) - this one especially
18:53 grumd: turn off grid snap if you want, this helps to make encircles better
18:55 Laurier: but I can't understand. What is bad thing.
18:55 grumd: ok look
18:55 grumd: 00:35:262 (1) -
18:55 grumd: http://puu.sh/1R7z4 this is what you hav
18:56 grumd: http://puu.sh/1R7zs this is how it should look like
18:56 grumd: just making the circles better
18:56 grumd: like (1) was hugging (2), lol
18:56 grumd: http://puu.sh/1R7zx
18:56 grumd: see now?
18:57 grumd: that is called encircle or blanket
18:57 Laurier: yeah
18:57 grumd: 00:37:899 (1) - here, for example, moving last point 1 grid right helps
18:57 grumd: 00:42:515 (2) - here - middle point 1 grid right
18:58 Laurier: eee I don't like steep curve
18:59 grumd: it's not steep o.o
19:02 Laurier: maybe it's hard for me haha..
19:02 grumd: i can help you if you want :o
19:05 Laurier: ok. I'll try remake. but I won't to change my style.
19:05 grumd: that doesn't change the style
19:05 grumd: hey
19:06 grumd: it just means that sometimes one point should be moved by 1 grid
19:06 grumd: that's minor thing and that doesn't affect the style
19:07 Laurier: for example
19:07 Laurier: 00:41:526 (1,2) -
19:07 Laurier: http://puu.sh/1R7PC
19:08 Laurier: I cant understand. why need changing
19:14 grumd: this doesn't
19:14 grumd: just look at all of them
19:14 grumd: and fix the ones that can be fixed
19:17 Laurier: I can't choose what good or bad. I need more mod. haha
19:17 grumd: hmhm
19:17 grumd: upload what you have right now
19:18 Laurier: Latest version now
19:19 grumd: okay, let me look
19:21 grumd: 00:59:987 (3) -
19:22 grumd: move second point from the beginning 2 grids left
19:22 grumd: http://puu.sh/1R87K it should look like that
19:23 Laurier: http://puu.sh/1R88M
19:23 Laurier: ...ok ?
19:24 grumd: yeah, right!
19:24 grumd: very good now
19:25 Laurier: yey
19:27 grumd: 03:18:119 (4,1) - you should change the rhythm here to something like you did before at 03:15:811 (1) -
19:27 grumd: i'll make a screenshot, wai
19:27 grumd: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/579845
19:27 grumd: this
19:30 Laurier: I think far to 2.
19:31 Laurier: http://puu.sh/1R8jA
19:31 grumd: yeah, place it as you want, i'm just showing the rhythm
19:31 Laurier: i see
19:32 grumd: 03:58:009 (1) - maybe 1 grid left? :D
19:33 Laurier: 2nd way point ?
19:33 grumd: 04:02:954 (4) - and also change this shape.. to something more circular.. http://puu.sh/1R8mA
19:33 grumd: no, there i meant whole slider
19:34 Laurier: ok lol
19:35 Laurier: http://puu.sh/1R8qB
19:35 grumd: so, upload after that
19:36 Laurier: my best orz
19:36 grumd: move that points
19:36 grumd: closer to each other
19:37 grumd: http://puu.sh/1R8sl
19:37 grumd: like that :D
19:37 Laurier: try this and uploaded !
19:38 grumd: yeaaah
19:38 grumd: awesome@!
19:38 grumd: good job
19:38 grumd: i'm rechecking this then
19:38 Laurier: thanks !
