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lily-an - Manekin Hime to Rokudenashi [Osu|Taiko]

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Komeiji Yuki
1,264 posts
Joined March 2010
Topic Starter
Komeiji Yuki
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2016年5月18日 at 上午 09:38:57

Artist: lily-an
Title: Manekin Hime to Rokudenashi
Source: Touhou
Tags: Nwolf flandre scarlet U.N Owen was her? C83 Liz Triangle
BPM: 166
Filesize: 10985kb
Play Time: 03:58
Difficulties Available:
  1. Hard (2.69 stars, 422 notes)
  2. Normal (1.69 stars, 171 notes)
  3. NTaikOni (4.03 stars, 1415 notes)
  4. yuki (3.86 stars, 519 notes)
Download: lily-an - Manekin Hime to Rokudenashi
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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( C83 ) Liz Triangle -マネキン姫とロクデナシ
Normal - WIP
Hard - finish
Insane - finish
NTaikOni - finish (By Nwolf)
StoryBoard- finish
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Last edited by Komeiji Yuki , edited 48 times in total.
madaoB
madaoB
我來第一發~
RandF
1,245 posts
Joined March 2013
RandF
Hi~ :) your storyboad is wonderful!
Please let me mod a little

[General]
  1. words check --7.png 「積もられ吹雪からて」　→　「積もられ吹雪かれて」
  2. words check -15.png「息すら苦しいから」　→　「息すら出来ないから」
  3. I' m concerned about the right edge of the map area. BackGround don't hide properly, do it ?
[Hard]
  1. 00:16:664 (4,1) - stack properly
  2. 00:23:532 (1) - NC is unnecessary
  3. 00:30:580 (3,4) - it is better not to stack
  4. 00:46:845 (1) - NC is unnecessary
  5. 01:12:869 (7,1) - it is better not to stack
  6. 01:21:182 (1) - NC is unnecessary
  7. 02:04:917 (6,1) - it is better not to stack
  8. 02:19:014 (1) - NC is unnecessary
  9. 02:25:520 (1,2) - it is better not to stack
  10. 02:54:074 (1) - NC is unnecessary
  11. 03:04:375 (1,2,3) - I like better using only notes(+ clap) instead of sliders
  12. 03:13:411 (4) - not stack on the end of 03:12:869 (3) - but stack on the start of03:13:592 (5) -
  13. 03:21:545 (3,4) - it is better not to stack
  14. 03:31:303 (1) - NC is unnecessary
  15. 03:55:339 (1) - NC is unnecessary
  16. 03:55:339 (1) - not stack on 03:54:977 (6) - but stack on 03:55:520 (2) -
I'm little experience about modding. So, please ignore if you think my mod is strange.

~good luck~
Komeiji Yuki
1,264 posts
Joined March 2010
Topic Starter
Komeiji Yuki
Thx for taking times to mod my map =D

and I'm glad to see u like the storyboard I make :3 ~

RandomEffect wrote:

Hi~ :) your storyboad is wonderful!
Please let me mod a little

[General]
  1. words check --7.png 「積もられ吹雪からて」　→　「積もられ吹雪かれて」oh I typed "re" to "ra" when i was making lyrics ><" fixed
  2. words check -15.png「息すら苦しいから」　→　「息すら出来ないから」I think np here :3 ?
  3. I' m concerned about the right edge of the map area. BackGround don't hide properly, do it ?
Don't get what u mean (ˊ'w'ˋ")

[Hard]
  1. 00:16:664 (4,1) - stack properly Fix
  2. 00:23:532 (1) - NC is unnecessary Fix
  3. 00:30:580 (3,4) - it is better not to stack well , I prefer stack than not stack
  4. 00:46:845 (1) - NC is unnecessary I think it is needed
  5. 01:12:869 (7,1) - it is better not to stack nope x_x
  6. 01:21:182 (1) - NC is unnecessary nope x_x
  7. 02:04:917 (6,1) - it is better not to stack nope x_x
  8. 02:19:014 (1) - NC is unnecessary Fix
  9. 02:25:520 (1,2) - it is better not to stack nope x_x
  10. 02:54:074 (1) - NC is unnecessary nope x_x
  11. 03:04:375 (1,2,3) - I like better using only notes(+ clap) instead of sliders nope x_x
  12. 03:13:411 (4) - not stack on the end of 03:12:869 (3) - but stack on the start of03:13:592 (5) - consider
  13. 03:21:545 (3,4) - it is better not to stack nope x_x
  14. 03:31:303 (1) - NC is unnecessary Fix
  15. 03:55:339 (1) - NC is unnecessary nope x_x
  16. 03:55:339 (1) - not stack on 03:54:977 (6) - but stack on 03:55:520 (2) -
u're right it's better :3

I'm little experience about modding. So, please ignore if you think my mod is strange.

~good luck~
RandF
1,245 posts
Joined March 2013
RandF
I'm sorry for my poor explanation. :o
let me add a few comments.

"no kudosu, please"

Komeiji Yuki wrote:

[General]
  1. words check -15.png「息すら苦しいから」　→　「息すら出来ないから」I think np here :3 ?
01:16:122 is no problem but 02:14:134 is worng if using -15.png. you shold add a new png-file for 02:14:134- (named "-32.png" ?)

Komeiji Yuki wrote:

[General]
  1. I' m concerned about the right edge of the map area. BackGround don't hide properly, do it ?
Don't get what u mean (ˊ'w'ˋ")
Immediately after starting to play this map, I saw a noise line at the right side of the map field. But I cannot see it at edit-view, so please ignore if no problem at all.
moonlightleaf
2,155 posts
Joined September 2011
moonlightleaf
这图赞 SB好看 star一个 加油
moonlightleaf
2,155 posts
Joined September 2011
moonlightleaf
>w< 来mod一下

似乎得需要一个Easy？

Normal

01:39:255(10) NC

01:45:038(17) ^

01:51:182(23) ^

纳尼= = 这里怎么这么长 块该NC的NC 别闹了>w<

02:15:038(2) 改成滑条 结束在02:15:399

纳尼？后面没做完QAQ

Hard

00:03:833(1)(3) 分别 x|384 y|196 , x|136 y|196

00:10:881这加一个note在1上面怎么样

00:16:664(4)结尾点x|184 y|176 然后00:18:291(1) x|180 y|172

00:18:833(2) x|348 y|124 00:19:014(3)(4) x|392 y|56 (4号滑条点 x|296 y|64 , x|268 y|104

00:22:086 哦,3号滑条尾部和4567号都向右移动一格

00:32:387(1)(7)横坐标不变 y|380

01:16:122(1) x|92 y|312 结尾点 x|176 y|216

还有许多滑条尾部放note或者滑条都没完整隐藏好

03:48:833(5)这里好乱 这样行么 5号NC
SPOILER
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/835991
256,132,228833,5,8,0:0:0:0:
256,164,229014,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,200,229195,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,236,229375,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,272,229556,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,300,229736,1,8,0:0:0:0:

03:54:616(5)
SPOILER
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/835995
116,196,234616,5,8,0:0:0:0:
144,172,234797,1,0,0:0:0:0:
176,148,234977,1,8,0:0:0:0:
204,124,235158,1,0,0:0:0:0:
232,100,235339,5,0,0:0:0:0:
260,80,235520,1,8,0:0:0:0:

03:37:446 没对上线

yuki

我发现好些绿线没在线上 比如00:07:086

00:13:954感觉加一个note在后面的5上面比较好

00:19:737加一个note在5滑条尾巴

00:54:255(4)(5)(1)(2)(3)距离好怪

01:14:044(3)放到2个中间 比较不会骗到别人www

01:14:676(1)放这里会不会更漂亮些 x|156 y|220

01:42:688(2) Ctrl+G

02:02:026(7) x|368 y|272

02:02:749(1) ^

02:02:207(8) x|416 y|195

03:16:845(5) NC ?

好歌www 快rank它 啦 , 啦啦啦 ,,, 啦~~~
MeraMiPoP_old
155 posts
Joined October 2013
MeraMiPoP_old
好棒的storyboard
Koiyuki
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Joined March 2013
Koiyuki
咦
第一眼看到Yuki以为是我做的2333
Komeiji Yuki
1,264 posts
Joined March 2010
Topic Starter
Komeiji Yuki

Meramipop wrote:

好棒的storyboard
thx ^O^

[Minakami Yuki] wrote:

咦
第一眼看到Yuki以为是我做的2333
233 :D
MeraMiPoP_old
155 posts
Joined October 2013
MeraMiPoP_old
http://puu.sh/5kNWY.osu

求加个GD~
Komeiji Yuki
1,264 posts
Joined March 2010
Topic Starter
Komeiji Yuki

Meramipop wrote:

http://puu.sh/5kNWY.osu

求加个GD~

thx 已加 :3

繼續緩慢做N難度....
moonlightleaf
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moonlightleaf
原来还继续做的啊 SB赞 加油rank吧
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