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EGOIST - Namae no Nai Kaibutsu (TV Edit 92s ver)

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No_Gu
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No_Gu
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2013年2月27日 星期三 at 13:17:40

Artist: EGOIST
Title: Namae no Nai Kaibutsu (TV Edit 92s ver)
Source: PSYCHO-PASS
Tags: Pokie Fumika Netsukawa supercell ryo chelly ending
BPM: 180
Filesize: 16198kb
Play Time: 01:27
Difficulties Available:
  1. Easy (3.26 stars, 107 notes)
  2. Fumika's Normal (4.46 stars, 161 notes)
  3. Insane (4.84 stars, 288 notes)
  4. Pokie's Hard (4.9 stars, 214 notes)
Download: EGOIST - Namae no Nai Kaibutsu (TV Edit 92s ver)
Download: EGOIST - Namae no Nai Kaibutsu (TV Edit 92s ver) (no video)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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#34 EGOIST - 名前のない怪物

Hard - Pokie
Normal - Fumika
Last edited by No_Gu , edited 10 times in total.
Pokie
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Pokie
不開心了 :( 還債什麼的去死(
No_Gu
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No_Gu
可怜的还债君
Axey
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Axey
好歌前排 敢不敢开full
No_Gu
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No_Gu

BakaHuang wrote:

好歌前排 敢不敢开full
full可是五分钟啊
可是五分钟啊
是五分钟啊
五分钟啊
分钟啊
钟啊
啊
Skystar
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Skystar
催債
Fumika
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Fumika
w-wait just Insane diff oAo
mintong89
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mintong89
0.0
S h i o n
1,053 posts
Joined July 2010
S h i o n
EGuIST好棒

[Insane]
00:11:457 (2) - 怎么看怎么听都觉得多余..
00:24:123 (1,2) - 可以做个位置上的微调，使后面(3)的jump不那么大 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/568870
00:40:957 (2) -http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/568874 同上 x2.0够了吧 那么鬼畜- -
00:33:290 (x) - and 00:33:373 (x) - 不来一发note?
00:43:957 (x) - ^
00:45:457 (1) - 这里用个1/1slider略单调 vocal感觉是强调的
00:46:790 (1,2,3) - 这里我觉得反而应该用note 而用slider来应对watashi的ta 拖音。
01:14:790 (1,2,3) - 求stream

no kud
Last edited by S h i o n , edited 1 time in total.
Mikkuri
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Joined April 2010
Mikkuri
Easy star rating 3.23 Σ(゜д゜;)

I don't know how to make Normal with good balance ._.

Edit: I will try!
-GN
Champion Above Champions
734 posts
Joined June 2011
-GN
HITSOUNDING INNOVATION

also, i've never been good at fixing hitsounds or finding errors, so most of these are just design suggestions, but i hope they're helpful still D:

[Easy]
00:11:290 (1,2,3,4) - construct it like this (http://puu.sh/1YQDR) instead? (1) is the same except no repeat and reversed
01:06:457 (3) - just for consistency, have this be a line like 01:03:123 (2) - ?
01:16:457 (2,4) - is it possible to have the tick here line up on the red point of the slider? it might look sort of ugly, though
01:25:623 - the hitsound here sounds weird when you have another hit 1/4 of a beat after, is it possible to change it or do something else with it?
01:27:540 (1) - this spinner is very long for a small beginner arm to play, although i do agree that it fits with the guitar, but maybe you can shorten it to 01:31:207 - ? (then again, you'd have to change all the other end spinners too, which might be dumb)

[Fumika's Normal]
00:31:623 (5,6) - stack (5) on (6) so it's the same as the earlier stacks? (and then move (7,8) according to the distance snap)
00:53:457 (4,1) - minor suggestion, but slightly bend these outwards (http://puu.sh/1YQOI) so you get a little circular flow?

[Pokie's Hard]
00:39:290 (2,3,1) - suggestion: construct it like this (http://puu.sh/1YR2a)? it plays nicer to me, although it is a bit harder o:
00:40:623 (2,3) - ^ (http://puu.sh/1YR6Z)
00:47:623 (3) - weird spacing even compared to the other irregular spacing, maybe put it at x:76 y:280 or move the slider a bit
01:04:123 (1) - end this on the white tick and make 01:04:957 (2) - start on red? it feels too long
01:10:457 (3) - move to x:372 y:184

[Insane]
00:09:457 (1,2,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1,2,3) - flip these 4 combos horizontally, there is a lot of things going on on the right side but nothing on the left D:
00:43:457 (3) - this speedup is unnecessary, just keep it at normal speed
01:06:790 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - suggestion, this is more jumpy and fun to play although might be a little too hard? (http://puu.sh/1YSRM)
nice map though, lots of fun patterns

so yeah, with love from #modreqs
Nymph
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Nymph
Hi.

[General]
the title TV Edit 92s ver is it necessary? or the mp3 itself was named like this in the CD?


[Easy]
I think AR5 is too much for a easy diff. -1 or -2?

00:01:457 (1) - Actually I think maybe follow the music will be better, following vocal is kinda of weird here.
00:05:957 (1) - ^
00:11:290 (1) - ^


[Fumika's Normal]
fine.


[Pokie's Hard]
fine.


[Insane]
00:43:457 (3) - I think I newcombo here would help read this slider speedup, maybe consider add one
others fine.


nice one :3
Jinxy
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Joined February 2009
Jinxy
Christ that is a lot of sections

[Easy]
The front vocals don't really sound so good to me, tbh. Would mapping them to the music like the other difficulties work? It would also reduce the amount of notes on offbeats, which I feel would trip up a new player.
00:12:290 (2) - This slider feels really weird to me, since its start is mapped to nothing, and it's on a red tick too. How about making the start 00:12:623?

Other that that one, the rest feels fine.
Star Stream
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Joined June 2010
Star Stream
From the queue

[General]
  1. Stack Leniency+1
  2. Off 'Letterbox during breaks'
  3. Lead-In 500 is enough imo
[Easy]
  1. 00:02:790 (1) - a bit boring, maybe add some notes instead
  2. 00:05:957 (1,2) - 5/2 is pretty hard to read for Easy diff imo, try making a slider from 00:06:623 - to 00:07:123 -
  3. 01:25:290 (2) - no, even i can't read them well with the confusing hitsounds, i'd start it from 01:25:457 - instead
[Normal]
  1. 00:18:790 (2) - you doubled SV suddenly, and i thought it's 1/1 beat ofc.. plz decrease the distance at least for here so players wouldn't get confused
  2. 01:26:790 (3,1) - make then as a slider?
[Hard]
  1. Good work
[Insane]
  1. 00:41:790 (2) - ctrl+g? it would moves better to play
  2. 00:42:457 (4) - if you followed ^, ctrl+g it too
  3. 00:55:790 (4) - it moves not so good for me, i'd ctrl+g or h for this
  4. 01:06:623 (5,1,2,3,4,5,6) - make jumps with them, jump would fit with this part and make fun
  5. 01:14:290 (3) - ctrl+g?
  6. 01:26:707 (2,1) - a 0.5x slider would fit well imo
Good luck with rank
Guy
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Guy
Hi! from m4m queue~

Red : You must be fix.
Blue : You should be fix.
Black : Just suggestion.


[General]
  1. Please check off Letterbox during breaks. cuz not break time this map.

[Insane]
  1. 00:45:457 (1,2) - rhythm suggestion.

    or

    i think that 1/2 slider is weird. not match with vocal.
    the suggestion mentioned above with the sound of the vocal.
  2. 00:55:290 (2) - This note is touch HP ber. You should move down a little.

[Pokie's Hard]
  1. 00:03:457 - not used green line.
  2. 00:03:540 - ^
  3. 00:04:790 - ^
  4. 00:04:873 - ^
  5. 00:07:457 - ^
  6. 00:07:540 - ^
  7. 00:08:790 - ^
  8. 00:08:873 - ^
  9. 00:42:790 (4) - slider end volume is loud. should be volume down~
  10. 01:00:790 (3) - 1grid right for blanket?

[Fumika's Normal]
  1. 00:18:623 (1,2) - oh distance miss?

[Easy]
  1. AR5..? Normal is AR5. I think AR4 or 3 is fit this map.
  2. 00:21:373 - not use green line
  3. 00:21:457 - ^
  4. 00:21:957 - ^
  5. 00:44:290 - ^
  6. 00:45:290 - ^
  7. 00:45:623 - ^
  8. There is a lot elsewhere.
nice map~ sorry poor mod
good luck! ;)
scanter
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scanter
[General]
last spin point is long. so, I recommend add more sounds decrescendo. should add timing points on each part of the spinner
If you're not use storyboarding, letterbox during breaks should off.

[Easy]
00:12:290 (2) - If you're following vocals, this slider should start at 00:12:623
00:17:957 (1) - How about to make this? looks more better. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/629438
00:22:123 (1) - How about this? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/629445
00:33:457 (1) - This slider is not perfect stacked. I recommend move to x:148, y:240
00:35:457 (4) - Distance a little strange. how about move to x:348, y:160
01:12:790 (4) - How about it more has gentle curve? like this. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/629450

[Normal]
00:06:457 (2) - Change drum sampleset.
00:48:123 (5) - Makes more blanket about 00:49:457 (2) like this. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/629460

[Hard]
00:22:790 (1) - Add finish at slider's first.
00:34:123 (3) - Distance a little strange. how about fit x1.2?
00:39:290 (2) - Ctrl + G?
00:40:957 (3) - Same.
01:04:123 (1) - Move to x:260, y:200? stack on 01:02:790 (1) looks more better.

[Insane]
00:02:790 - 00:19:373 - I think, left side feels empty. how about makes more use space?
00:27:290 (3) - How about move to x:352, y:240? looks more better about symmetry.
00:30:790 (1) - If you followed this, how about move to x:220, y:163?
00:53:123 (4) - How about this? looks more better. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/629478
01:14:290 (3) - Ctrl + G? how about makes more dynamic?

Good map and Nice song! good luck for rank ! :D
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GamerX4life
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GamerX4life
My mod:

[Pokie's Hard]
  1. 00:14:790 (1) Idk if this is a problem, but this slider is outside of the grid, maybe place it same grids left and fix spacing?
  2. 00:24:123 (1,2) try to make them rounder like this: http://puu.sh/28e3x (you can use the code if you like it):
    200,176,24123,6,0,P|136:214|71:188,1,140,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    9,145,24623,2,0,P|73:107|138:133,1,140,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
  3. 00:29:457 (1,2) same^
  4. 00:34:123 (3) maybe put the end-sliderpoint to x:332 y:188 (so it's parallel to (2) )
  5. 00:58:457 I would prefer this rhytm: http://puu.sh/28ed9 (fits better to the voice imo.)
  6. 01:17:123 same^
[Insane]
  1. 00:37:457 (1) I would make it more like a blanket: http://puu.sh/28ev3 (you can use the code if you like it):
    480,116,37457,6,0,P|406:138|333:78,1,176,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
  2. 00:41:123 (4) put it to x:248 y:192 (so its symmetrical with the end of the slider (1) and (2) )
  3. 00:52:123 (1) try to shape a perfect blanket with the end of (4): http://puu.sh/28eJh (I added the circle to show it):
    296,328,52123,6,0,P|355:264|338:173,1,176,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
[Fumika's Normal]
  1. 00:57:790 maybe try this rhytm: http://puu.sh/28eVL
  2. 01:14:790 (6) remove one repeat and put the next slider to 01:15:457 + add a circle at 01:16:123
  3. can't find much :)
[Easy]
  1. 01:16:457 (2) put the red sliderpoint one grid right? (it would fit better with the previous circle)
  2. 01:17:790 (4) same, but one grid left instead of right
Nice mapset!
Hope it helps and Goog Luck!
LunarSakuya
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hello, m4m from pokie queue

Easy
  1. 00:02:790 (1) - i think it can also work if you end the spinner at 00:05:457 - , and then start mapping here 00:06:790 - instead. so that it will give beginner players more time to recover from the spinner ~!

    if you change this, you should consider fixing similar parts i guess too, like at 00:08:123 (1) - , etc
  2. 00:11:290 (1,2) - Weird rhythm at first, try this: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/629540 (you could probably delete (3) if you wanna decrease difficulty lvl)
  3. 00:14:790 (1) - Shorten spinner to the white tick before (00:16:760), felt odd spinning during the vocals in this case.
  4. 00:17:957 (1) - Bring this back to 00:17:457, so i got this: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/629543
  5. 01:03:123 (2) - you should make the same shape as 00:59:457 (5) -
  6. 01:16:457 (2) - move red point one grid to the right (for more perfect curve). then don't forget to copy/paste to fix 01:17:790 (4) -
good

Fumika's Normal
  1. 00:04:457 (6) - NC
  2. 00:05:790 (1) - remove NC
  3. 00:06:790 (3) - NC
  4. 00:09:790 (9) - NC
  5. 00:11:123 (1) - remove NC
  6. 00:12:457 (4) - NC
  7. 00:14:790 (7) - NC
  8. 00:16:457 (1) - remove NC
  9. 00:17:790 (3) - NC
  10. 00:18:623 (1) - remove NC
  11. 00:20:123 (5) - NC
    all these combo suggestions above should go together, and i just feel these follow the background instruments more, and they will still stay consistent ~
  12. 00:41:457 (3) - NC? since soft part begins
  13. 00:45:790 (3,4,1,2) - imo you should keep the rhythm the same as this part 00:49:457 (2,3,4) -
  14. 00:48:123 (5) - curve better around 00:49:123 (1) - ?
    SPOILER

    232,212,48123,2,0,P|184:208|132:240,2,106,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
i like the unique rhythm ~ ^^

Pokie's Hard
  • HPD +1?
  1. 00:29:457 (1,2) - i think you can curve these together more nicer (:
    SPOILER

    160,280,29457,6,0,P|92:268|33:303,1,140,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
    108,344,29957,2,0,P|176:356|234:320,1,140,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
  2. 00:34:790 (1,2) - if you want to fix here too lol:
    188,344,34790,6,0,P|256:372|324:348,1,140,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
    384,304,35290,2,0,P|316:276|248:300,1,140,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
  3. 01:04:123 (1) - you should somehow stack with 01:02:790 (1) - , gives a neater appearance
very nice

Insane
  1. 00:08:123 (1) - ctrl+G?
  2. 00:10:790 (1) - ^
  3. 00:37:957 - feels kind of empty imo lol, add a note somehow?
  4. 00:53:123 (4) - i think it will flow nice if you flip it like this:
  5. 01:25:707 (2,1) - lol oh, very big jump, just saying
awesome ~

good map!
No_Gu
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No_Gu
fixed some...lazy lazy to reply,thanks you guys
Pokie
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Pokie
Same here! _(:3 」∠)_ (runs
No_Gu
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No_Gu
fixed for net.update
scanter
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scanter
Go Go rank ! :D
Nymph
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Nymph
Recheck.

[Easy]
HP-1. 星数你懂的.


call me back when ready.
No_Gu
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No_Gu
OK now
Nymph
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Nymph
:D nice job
Bubbled~
Fumika
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Fumika
uuu ! \o/
Skystar
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Skystar
嗎的又不還債又狂泡狂rank簡直喪病.
No_Gu
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No_Gu

Amamiya Yuko wrote:

嗎的又不還債又狂泡狂rank簡直喪病.
。。。我错了请息怒
Pokie
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Pokie

Amamiya Yuko wrote:

嗎的又不還債又狂泡狂rank簡直喪病.
Scorpiour
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Scorpiour
Hi there~~ mod for request~~

red - must be fixed
blue - highly recommend to consider
black - only suggestions

[General]
  1. Background image is png, please change to jpg
[Insane]
  1. 00:11:457 (2) - delete it because i suppose it is unexpected.
[Pokie's Hard]
  1. 00:54:623 - add a note?
[Easy]
  1. OD+1
  2. 01:03:123 (2) - change the third anchor (260:132) to red?
No_Gu
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No_Gu

Scorpiour wrote:

Hi there~~ mod for request~~

red - must be fixed
blue - highly recommend to consider
black - only suggestions

[General]
  1. Background image is png, please change to jpgk
[Insane]
  1. 00:11:457 (2) - delete it because i suppose it is unexpected.去掉这note仔细听的话能听到大鼓。。。
[Pokie's Hard]
  1. 00:54:623 - add a note?pokie shuo bujia
[Easy]
  1. OD+1可
  2. 01:03:123 (2) - change the third anchor (260:132) to red?恩上面的也改了一下
update.thankssssssssssss
Fumika
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Fumika
Weeeee \o/
Scorpiour
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Scorpiour
everything looks fine now ~~

Ranked~~
Pokie
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Pokie

Pokie wrote:

Amamiya Yuko wrote:

嗎的又不還債又狂泡狂rank簡直喪病.
raririn
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攻洗屁股酱~
Nymph
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Nymph

Pokie wrote:

Amamiya Yuko wrote:

嗎的又不還債又狂泡狂rank簡直喪病.
No_Gu
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No_Gu

Scorpiour wrote:

everything looks fine now ~~

Ranked~~
教练谢谢你谢谢你谢谢你
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(ノ・ω・)ノ grats!
Flask
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Nymph wrote:

Pokie wrote:

嗎的又不還債又狂泡狂rank簡直喪病.
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