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Creative Life - I'm Screaming LOVE [Taiko|Osu]

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yanlu
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yanlu
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2013年6月13日 at 上午 11:44:32

Artist: Creative Life
Title: I'm Screaming LOVE
Source: beatmania IIDX 16 EMPRESS
Tags: Pop'n music 19 Tune Street TECHNO POP DJ YOSHITAKA DanceDanceRevolution Winx Club riznanacchi konami bemani GiNa DarknessAngel hs714
BPM: 147
Filesize: 4624kb
Play Time: 01:48
Difficulties Available:
  1. 714's Taiko Muzukashii (4.55 stars, 332 notes)
  2. 714's Taiko Oni (4.78 stars, 515 notes)
  3. D.N.Angel (5 stars, 357 notes)
  4. Easy (2.41 stars, 115 notes)
  5. GiNa's Normal (3.94 stars, 144 notes)
  6. Hard (4.86 stars, 302 notes)
Download: Creative Life - I'm Screaming LOVE
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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I'm Screaming LOVE !! ❤

-Mapset-
Easy - Done
Normal - Done by GiNa
Hard - Done
Insane - Done by DarknessAngel
714's Taiko Muzukashii - Done by hs714
714's Taiko Oni - Done by hs714

Taiko-BG
* free to use this BG for Taiko diff seems specific background not acceptable now...
Last edited by yanlu , edited 50 times in total.
mintong89
3,698 posts
Joined July 2011
mintong89
沙发 (?
Curisu
2,241 posts
Joined January 2010
Curisu
woooooooooow GJ

[General]
对应你Tags的pnm19 source应该写清楚2dx 16 empress
tag: DJ YOSHITAKA

后面空白太长了

[Timing]
offset整整偏差了1/2拍。

[Hard]
00:11:756 (5) - blanket有点糟糕
00:22:776 (1,2,3) - 直线或者把3拉弯做微曲线
00:43:184 - gap大了点毕竟后面就没那么大的gap了
00:53:796 (1,2) - 2上一点这里角度有点尖
00:54:613 (4,5) - spacing变的没什么道理
01:14:409 (5,6,1,2) - ...正方形? 也不像是平行四边形
01:26:858 (3,4,5) - 4有点猎奇 3末-4-5顺着slider路线走
01:28:490 (3) - 后移1/4
01:47:470 (3) - 3/4
yanlu
749 posts
Joined November 2010
Topic Starter
yanlu

Curisu wrote:

woooooooooow GJ

[General]
对应你Tags的pnm19 source应该写清楚2dx 16 empress
tag: DJ YOSHITAKA :arrow: 好~加

后面空白太长了 :arrow: ?__?

[Timing]
offset整整偏差了1/2拍。 :arrow: 改了;w;

[Hard]
00:11:756 (5) - blanket有点糟糕 :arrow: 還好吧"
00:22:776 (1,2,3) - 直线或者把3拉弯做微曲线 :arrow: 已經有了吧
00:43:184 - gap大了点毕竟后面就没那么大的gap了 :arrow: 我是照著vocal的..先keep>_<
00:53:796 (1,2) - 2上一点这里角度有点尖 :arrow: 改了~
00:54:613 (4,5) - spacing变的没什么道理 :arrow: 先keep D:
01:14:409 (5,6,1,2) - ...正方形? 也不像是平行四边形 :arrow: (5)的尾巴跟6.1.2是做平行四邊形
01:26:858 (3,4,5) - 4有点猎奇 3末-4-5顺着slider路线走 :arrow: 改了!
01:28:490 (3) - 后移1/4 :arrow: fix~
01:47:470 (3) - 3/4 :arrow: fix too
謝謝你的mod~~ :)

and thanks byaku's stars!! www
DarknessAngel
2,237 posts
Joined May 2010
DarknessAngel
http://puu.sh/1LxaZ 別下這個
done

外加音效記得丟資料夾，音效下得不好別黑我(掩面

順便提一下你的diff (Hard)幾個我比較在意的地方

首先是AR，調成7更好，不僅是因為這是Hard難度，同時還符合音樂和譜面整體流動
8的話感覺就有些太快，不是很合適

然後00:52:775 - 這段Kiai感覺意義不大， 應該要從01:05:428 - 開始會更合歌曲

這diff有些地方的間距必須注意一下，像01:36:041 (3,4,5)不明理由縮短間距，會讓人confuse並造成誤判

排列可以再好看些，像00:50:123 (2)可以稍作移動，變成這樣，會好看點，注意一些細節有助於譜面更漂亮0_<

音效的話，可以參照一下其他圖，看看別人的怎麼下，盡量避免這樣的隨機下法，除非有足夠經驗不然無法handle哦lol

最後是玩這diff後的心得，還挺不錯玩喔 @@

就這些 ~ 加油 !

EDIT : http://puu.sh/1LxPf
yanlu
749 posts
Joined November 2010
Topic Starter
yanlu

DarknessAngel wrote:

http://puu.sh/1LxaZ 別下這個
done

外加音效記得丟資料夾，音效下得不好別黑我(掩面

字順便提一下你的diff (Hard)幾個我比較在意的地方

首先是AR，調成7更好，不僅是因為這是Hard難度，同時還符合音樂和譜面整體流動
8的話感覺就有些太快，不是很合適

然後00:52:775 - 這段Kiai感覺意義不大， 應該要從01:05:428 - 開始會更合歌曲

這diff有些地方的間距必須注意一下，像01:36:041 (3,4,5)不明理由縮短間距，會讓人confuse並造成誤判

排列可以再好看些，像00:50:123 (2)可以稍作移動，變成這樣，會好看點，注意一些細節有助於譜面更漂亮0_<

音效的話，可以參照一下其他圖，看看別人的怎麼下，盡量避免這樣的隨機下法，除非有足夠經驗不然無法handle哦lol
最後是玩這diff後的心得，還挺不錯玩喔 @@
就這些 ~ 加油 !

EDIT : http://puu.sh/1LxPf
上傳好也改了點~音效我明後天來改改
謝謝你w 也很開心今天跟你聊好多東西ww
xD

Update!
hs714
257 posts
Joined March 2011
hs714
Hello, yanlu <33
May I make a Taiko diff /_\?
cirno-_old
cirno-_old
Normal
DS feels too high to me. Consider lowering it to 1.0 or 1.1
00:42:163 (1) - Starts pretty high
00:57:061 (2,4) - I think these should be closer to 1+3. Lowering DS by even just .1 for the whole map would probably fix this.
There's a few aesthetic things that could look better. Nothing to really point out tho. Just brush over it.

Hard
The pingpong whistle is a bit unfitting imo. It threw me off. The second appearance was fine to me tho. Maybe because it was at 70%
00:32:980 (8) - consider normal DS. I don't think this plays well.
The flow is nice.

Insane
01:26:041 (3) - too much of a jump imo

Welp that's all I got. In general, I think Easy and Normal can look better, but they do already play well as is. And insane is pretty good :) GL
Alltur
530 posts
Joined July 2012
Alltur
From my modding queue! (Maybe aiming for M4M for your queue also though hmm)

[General]
Clear it seems except
01:48:286 (1) - Why this spinner is in kiai time? please tell me x(

[Easy]
00:26:245 (4,1) - how about making this two something like this so that it does not overlap (very little); it does not look pretty to me so
SPOILER
00:42:571 (4) - nazi: seems a bit close to next slider, move down one grid in smallest grid standard
00:47:061 (1,2) - I prefer you keep using distance snap here since it does not go out of the boundary and you can still map it with them kept.
01:05:837 - How about starting your kiai time here?
01:26:245 (3,4,5) - this kind of stacking is confusing for newbies, this is easy diff so try refraining from stacking in this kind of fashion

[GiNa's Normal]
00:06:449 (1) - This note does not make sense to me, I hear no significant beat here and it's really hard to figure out since it's the first note.
00:09:715 (1,2) - Make these two note straight in horizontal sense.
01:02:571 (1) - Make this 1/1 slider with one repeat and add a note at 01:03:592 , probably on top of 01:03:796 (2).
01:08:286 (4) - how about this type of pattern here?


[Hard]
00:08:490 (9) - NC?
00:15:021 (5) - ^
00:19:307 (8) - ^
01:44:613 (1,2,3) - The spacing here is confusing here.

I don't know it's just me but the notes seems to be crowded a little in this diff and it does not look good in my opinion.

[D.N.Angel] I don't mod insane.
00:52:367 (1) -The acceleration of SV here maybe unnoticeable and so sudden to play. I dunno, maybe it's fine.

Good luck! :D
DarknessAngel
2,237 posts
Joined May 2010
DarknessAngel

cirno- wrote:

Insane
01:26:041 (3) - too much of a jump imo //It's fine imo.
ty for mod ~ :)

我自己改了些東西~
http://puu.sh/1ODC8
yanlu
749 posts
Joined November 2010
Topic Starter
yanlu

Akashi_S wrote:

From my modding queue! (Maybe aiming for M4M for your queue also though hmm)

[General]
Clear it seems except
01:48:286 (1) - Why this spinner is in kiai time? please tell me x( :arrow: cuz i want the spin has effect~

[Easy]
00:26:245 (4,1) - how about making this two something like this so that it does not overlap (very little); it does not look pretty to me so :arrow: fix
SPOILER
00:42:571 (4) - nazi: seems a bit close to next slider, move down one grid in smallest grid standard :arrow: fix
00:47:061 (1,2) - I prefer you keep using distance snap here since it does not go out of the boundary and you can still map it with them kept. :arrow: fix some..
01:05:837 - How about starting your kiai time here? :arrow: no
01:26:245 (3,4,5) - this kind of stacking is confusing for newbies, this is easy diff so try refraining from stacking in this kind of fashion :arrow: uhm...keep atm><

[GiNa's Normal]
00:06:449 (1) - This note does not make sense to me, I hear no significant beat here and it's really hard to figure out since it's the first note.
00:09:715 (1,2) - Make these two note straight in horizontal sense.
01:02:571 (1) - Make this 1/1 slider with one repeat and add a note at 01:03:592 , probably on top of 01:03:796 (2).
01:08:286 (4) - how about this type of pattern here?


[Hard]
00:08:490 (9) - NC?
00:15:021 (5) - ^
00:19:307 (8) - ^
01:44:613 (1,2,3) - The spacing here is confusing here.
:arrow: no change in Hard><
I don't know it's just me but the notes seems to be crowded a little in this diff and it does not look good in my opinion.

[D.N.Angel] I don't mod insane.
00:52:367 (1) -The acceleration of SV here maybe unnoticeable and so sudden to play. I dunno, maybe it's fine.

Good luck! :D

cirno- wrote:

Normal
DS feels too high to me. Consider lowering it to 1.0 or 1.1
00:42:163 (1) - Starts pretty high
00:57:061 (2,4) - I think these should be closer to 1+3. Lowering DS by even just .1 for the whole map would probably fix this.
There's a few aesthetic things that could look better. Nothing to really point out tho. Just brush over it.

Hard
The pingpong whistle is a bit unfitting imo. It threw me off. The second appearance was fine to me tho. Maybe because it was at 70% :arrow:uhm. 70% now
00:32:980 (8) - consider normal DS. I don't think this plays well. :arrow: i can't understand your mean...
The flow is nice.

Insane
01:26:041 (3) - too much of a jump imo

Welp that's all I got. In general, I think Easy and Normal can look better, but they do already play well as is. And insane is pretty good :) GL
thanks for modding :)
bakabaka
517 posts
Joined March 2010
bakabaka
\:D/
[Hard]
mod in irc

[D.N.Angle]
00:52:367 (1) - x2.0跟後面slider長度一樣~難判斷加速的感覺
　　　　　　　降低一點比較好~不然就是讓slider尾跟00:52:571 (1) - 近一點也可以:D

01:18:286 (1) - ...這個其實還好lol

good luck :)
yanlu
749 posts
Joined November 2010
Topic Starter
yanlu

bakabaka wrote:

\:D/
[Hard]
mod in irc
SPOILER
16:27 *yanlu is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/204130 Creative Life - I'm Screaming LOVE]
16:28 yanlu: =3=
16:28 yanlu: www
16:30 yanlu: 神奇baka球:3
16:31 bakabaka: 只看Hard可以嗎:3
16:31 bakabaka: 阿~I我看一下好惹:O
16:32 yanlu: www
16:32 yanlu: DNAngel做得很好玩>_<
16:33 bakabaka: 不錯耶:3
16:34 yanlu: IIDX的歌喔你知道這首嗎:0~
16:34 bakabaka: 不知道:O
16:34 yanlu: www
16:34 yanlu: 我是在優兔找到的~
16:34 bakabaka: 只是有個slider x2.0無法理解就是
16:38 bakabaka: 00:41:347 (1) - slider頭的clap感覺有點明顯~要不要改成whistle?
16:38 yanlu: 我的hard嗎
16:38 bakabaka: 恩:O
16:39 yanlu: 嗯嗯
16:40 bakabaka: 01:04:409 (1,2,3,4) -
16:40 bakabaka: 要不要改成交叉移動lol
16:40 bakabaka: 2在4位置 3在1位置 醬
16:41 bakabaka: 不改應該沒差:D
16:41 yanlu: wwww
16:42 bakabaka: 01:08:082 (3) - 這邊應該是要在這個點跳呢
16:42 yanlu: 我玩玩看改的
16:46 bakabaka: 我剛剛說的那個點~就是跟01:08:286 (1) - 離遠一點會比較順手
16:46 bakabaka: 因為節拍重音跳感覺比較好:3
16:46 yanlu: 嗯嗯~
16:46 bakabaka: 01:23:184 (5,1) - 為什麼要只二連拍:O
16:47 yanlu: ..我也不知道lol
16:47 yanlu: 好吧改三連><
16:47 bakabaka: 01:41:756 (1,2) -
16:47 bakabaka: 這也是呀lol
16:48 bakabaka: 好~沒惹:3
16:50 yanlu: ee好少-3-
16:50 yanlu: 謝謝~
16:50 bakabaka: >3<
16:50 yanlu: >33<

[D.N.Angle]
00:52:367 (1) - x2.0跟後面slider長度一樣~難判斷加速的感覺
　　　　　　　降低一點比較好~不然就是讓slider尾跟00:52:571 (1) - 近一點也可以:D

01:18:286 (1) - ...這個其實還好lol

good luck :)
\:D/ Thank you baka
Scarlet Devil_old_1
144 posts
Joined December 2012
Scarlet Devil_old_1
Awesome map

Couldn't find problems with it. It's perfect but there was two things that bother me.

Short mod ;w;
Each diff have separate hitsounds

And for the Hard diff 01:31:756 (5) - change to singles instead of a short slider?
yanlu
749 posts
Joined November 2010
Topic Starter
yanlu
all fix.
thank you for modding~ :3/
Cancel
956 posts
Joined August 2012
Cancel
hi.

just a little mod.

General
00:06:449 - Add bookmarks on all diffs. It is easier to get to the starting point for modders. Also add bookmarks to the breaks.

Easy
SPOILER

That looks much better ;)

01:33:592 (4) - Move that a spot above. That looks much better.

Normal
00:58:694 (5) - That doesn't fin in the rhythm IMO...

I cannot mod Hard/Insanes. Sorry.

Good Luck!
Loneight
osu! Alumni
1,332 posts
Joined January 2011
Loneight
早灣 >w<
Request from In-game.



  • "re" 意思是 "remove"
    黑色 只是建議,不喜歡可以略過~OAO
    藍色 是建議改掉
    紅色 是unrankable

[general]

  1. Hard 跟 Easy的 kiai time 不一樣~
    kiai time
    - [Easy] :
    Kiai #2: Starts on 01:05:428 , ends on 01:31:959

    - [Hard] :
    Kiai #2: Starts on 01:05:428 , ends on 01:18:286
    Kiai #3: Starts on 01:18:694 , ends on 01:31:959
  2. Easy的SC1設置總感覺有些奇怪, 試試找別的clap

[Easy]

  1. 無用的綠線:
    01:05:224 -

  2. 00:06:653 (1) - 這裡在test play裡, 很難得知道它其實是對"嘟"聲, 而不是vocal, 以至於會出現提早按的情況或是只能看圈圈縮小來按, 建議這邊一開始先對vocal, 像這樣

[GiNa's Normal]

  1. 無用的綠線:
    01:05:224 -

  2. 00:06:449 (1,2) - 這邊, 個人覺得對新手有些難, 必須去數時間或看圈圈縮小, 試試把(2)加個折返然後Ctrl+G
  3. 00:39:306 - 這邊空著有些奇怪, 怎麼沒繼續對clap了呢
  4. 01:05:224 (4) - 這個刪掉吧, 會簡單一些, 主要是認為這circle來得突然些
  5. 01:16:449 (2,3,4) - 試著改變一下排版, 因為01:16:653 (3) - 碰觸到了01:15:224 (1) - , 外加combo顏色一樣, 會照成新手上的判斷問題
  6. 01:27:877 (1) - 這種多次折返的slider, 突然出現...會坑掉一些人, 頂多能預料這是二次折返(事實上為三次), 於是在第三次折返時, 鼠標已經移動到了01:29:102 (2) - , 造成了miss, 試試切成sliders或circles
  7. 01:40:326 (1) - 其實不需要這麼準確的對準音樂, 對太多反而Normal變得有些難, 外加這裡折返很多次, 試試跟01:26:041 (4) - 一樣

[Hard]

  1. 無用的綠線:
    01:35:224 -
    01:35:326 -

  2. 00:09:001 (11) - 這裡節奏感覺有點奇怪, 試試讓它在白線開始
  3. 00:09:715 (12,1) - 這距離..太突然的一個跳, 試試把(12)移到00:09:510 - 開始, 當然前面的要調整一下距離
  4. 01:44:816 (2,3) - 距離縮減一點會比較好噢~因為01:45:021 (3,1) - 距離跟01:44:613 (1,2) - 一樣, 時間間距卻不同, 咱的話會stack在01:45:429 (1) - 的開始

[D.N.Angel]

  1. 00:12:980 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 咱大概知道為甚麼你要這麼做, 不過換個方向吧 lol! 要不然有種給人很Lazy的感覺
  2. 00:38:694 (3,4,5,6,7) - 這邊的音效設置, 總感覺缺少了什麼, 試試跟00:37:061 (4,5,6,7,8) - 一樣, 然後(5)加個clap
  3. 00:52:367 (1) - 這個...233, 太快了啦!!!總覺得破壞了整個難度平衡.. 咱覺得1.5x還差不多
  4. 01:18:286 (1) - ^
因為mod一半, puush掛掉了.. 所以用口頭說明
那類似打兵乓球的音效, 讓咱笑了一下 .. XDD
就這些了~ :3 good luck ~ lulu醬
DarknessAngel
2,237 posts
Joined May 2010
DarknessAngel

Loneight wrote:

[D.N.Angel]

  1. 00:12:980 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 咱大概知道為甚麼你要這麼做, 不過換個方向吧 lol! 要不然有種給人很Lazy的感覺
    //華生，你突破盲點了。靠 !!!!!!!! 我居然忘記ctrl + h !? 我原本就想這麼做了還好你提醒= =
  2. 00:38:694 (3,4,5,6,7) - 這邊的音效設置, 總感覺缺少了什麼, 試試跟00:37:061 (4,5,6,7,8) - 一樣, 然後(5)加個clap //少了些什麼..嗎 ? 我是覺得還可以，不過有個物件我給它放了whis感覺就好點了
  3. 00:52:367 (1) - 這個...233, 太快了啦!!!總覺得破壞了整個難度平衡.. 咱覺得1.5x還差不多 //之前試過1.5，慢到不行，變速不明顯啊 ...
  4. 01:18:286 (1) - ^ //這個倒是不覺得突然
因為mod一半, puush掛掉了.. 所以用口頭說明
那類似打兵乓球的音效, 讓咱笑了一下 .. XDD
就這些了~ :3 good luck ~ lulu醬
謝謝MOD ! \:D/

bakabaka wrote:

\:D/ // \:D/

[D.N.Angle]
00:52:367 (1) - x2.0跟後面slider長度一樣~難判斷加速的感覺 //弄接近了點，雖說不知道有啥功用lol
　　　　　　　降低一點比較好~不然就是讓slider尾跟00:52:571 (1) - 近一點也可以:D

01:18:286 (1) - ...這個其實還好lol //所以說怎麼樣lol ? 嘛我把slider tick改到2就方便判斷了

good luck :)
謝謝mod ~ :3

http://puu.sh/1PV16
Decipher
617 posts
Joined December 2010
Decipher
hi!
little taiko mod, I hope it's okay :0

[Muzu]
00:14:408 (6) - k?
00:15:020 (2) - d

[Oni]
00:15:633 (2,1) - reverse
00:25:326 (2,1) - reverse
00:46:245 (1) - remove finish?
00:48:694 (1) - d?
01:05:837 (1) - add finish?

gl~
yanlu
749 posts
Joined November 2010
Topic Starter
yanlu

Cancel wrote:

hi.

just a little mod.

General
00:06:449 - Add bookmarks on all diffs. It is easier to get to the starting point for modders. Also add bookmarks to the breaks. :arrow: i think it's okay without bookmarks o~o

Easy
SPOILER

That looks much better ;)

01:33:592 (4) - Move that a spot above. That looks much better. :arrow: fix

Normal
00:58:694 (5) - That doesn't fin in the rhythm IMO...

I cannot mod Hard/Insanes. Sorry.

Good Luck!
thank you~

Loneight wrote:

早灣 >w<
Request from In-game.



  • "re" 意思是 "remove"
    黑色 只是建議,不喜歡可以略過~OAO
    藍色 是建議改掉
    紅色 是unrankable

[general]

  1. Hard 跟 Easy的 kiai time 不一樣~ :arrow: 啊~對噢忘記改><
    kiai time
    - [Easy] :
    Kiai #2: Starts on 01:05:428 , ends on 01:31:959

    - [Hard] :
    Kiai #2: Starts on 01:05:428 , ends on 01:18:286
    Kiai #3: Starts on 01:18:694 , ends on 01:31:959
  2. Easy的SC1設置總感覺有些奇怪, 試試找別的clap

[Easy]

  1. 無用的綠線:
    01:05:224 - :arrow: fix

  2. 00:06:653 (1) - 這裡在test play裡, 很難得知道它其實是對"嘟"聲, 而不是vocal, 以至於會出現提早按的情況或是只能看圈圈縮小來按, 建議這邊一開始先對vocal, 像這樣 :arrow: hao

[GiNa's Normal]

  1. 無用的綠線:
    01:05:224 - :arrow: fix

  2. 00:06:449 (1,2) - 這邊, 個人覺得對新手有些難, 必須去數時間或看圈圈縮小, 試試把(2)加個折返然後Ctrl+G
  3. 00:39:306 - 這邊空著有些奇怪, 怎麼沒繼續對clap了呢
  4. 01:05:224 (4) - 這個刪掉吧, 會簡單一些, 主要是認為這circle來得突然些
  5. 01:16:449 (2,3,4) - 試著改變一下排版, 因為01:16:653 (3) - 碰觸到了01:15:224 (1) - , 外加combo顏色一樣, 會照成新手上的判斷問題
  6. 01:27:877 (1) - 這種多次折返的slider, 突然出現...會坑掉一些人, 頂多能預料這是二次折返(事實上為三次), 於是在第三次折返時, 鼠標已經移動到了01:29:102 (2) - , 造成了miss, 試試切成sliders或circles
  7. 01:40:326 (1) - 其實不需要這麼準確的對準音樂, 對太多反而Normal變得有些難, 外加這裡折返很多次, 試試跟01:26:041 (4) - 一樣

[Hard]

  1. 無用的綠線:
    01:35:224 -
    01:35:326 - :arrow: fix too

  2. 00:09:001 (11) - 這裡節奏感覺有點奇怪, 試試讓它在白線開始 :arrow: 覺得還行...
  3. 00:09:715 (12,1) - 這距離..太突然的一個跳, 試試把(12)移到00:09:510 - 開始, 當然前面的要調整一下距離 :arrow: 已修改~
  4. 01:44:816 (2,3) - 距離縮減一點會比較好噢~因為01:45:021 (3,1) - 距離跟01:44:613 (1,2) - 一樣, 時間間距卻不同, 咱的話會stack在01:45:429 (1) - 的開始 :arrow: 改了點>~<
因為mod一半, puush掛掉了.. 所以用口頭說明
那類似打兵乓球的音效, 讓咱笑了一下 .. XD
就這些了~ :3 good luck ~ lulu醬
謝謝估掰飛翔的mod~~ :)
HellDawn
1,035 posts
Joined April 2010
HellDawn
M4M > http://osu.ppy.sh/s/69369

Easy

00:40:428- looks bad at least try new patterns
00:46:245- add a note It feels empty
01:18:898 (1,2,3,4) - these stacks hard to catch for the newbies
Last spinner need whistle :D

Normal from Gina

00:30:735- This repat need normal sampleset

Very nice diff

Hard

00:08:490- New combo
01:45:020- finish
01:46:245- ^
Last spinner > whistle

D.N Angel

00:51:959- whistle
yanlu
749 posts
Joined November 2010
Topic Starter
yanlu

HellDawn wrote:

M4M > http://osu.ppy.sh/s/69369

Easy

00:40:428- looks bad at least try new patterns :arrow: idk but fix some o_o
00:46:245- add a note It feels empty :arrow: i think it's okay
01:18:898 (1,2,3,4) - these stacks hard to catch for the newbies :arrow: ^
Last spinner need whistle :D :arrow: add

Normal from Gina

00:30:735- This repat need normal sampleset

Very nice diff

Hard

00:08:490- New combo :arrow: no
01:45:020- finish :arrow: ok
01:46:245- ^ :arrow: ok
Last spinner > whistle :arrow: add

D.N Angel

00:51:959- whistle
thanks!!
hs714
257 posts
Joined March 2011
hs714

Light Usagi wrote:

hi!
little taiko mod, I hope it's okay :0

[Muzu]
00:14:408 (6) - k? - done.
00:15:020 (2) - d - nope.

[Oni]
00:15:633 (2,1) - reverse - done.
00:25:326 (2,1) - reverse - nope.
00:46:245 (1) - remove finish? - done.
00:48:694 (1) - d? - done.
01:05:837 (1) - add finish? - done.

gl~
Thank you for your mod. Light Usagi <33

update onegaisimasu :)

Taiko Muzu: http://puu.sh/1QUQ4
Taiko Oni: http://puu.sh/1QV1o
yanlu
749 posts
Joined November 2010
Topic Starter
yanlu
update! >w</
Dora
26 posts
Joined May 2010
Dora
just a little suggestion >_</

General

Source: beatmania IIDX --> beatmania IIDX 16 EMPRESS

tags plz add DanceDanceRevolution Winx Club

Muzukashii

It's a good map at all , nothing to mod.

00:06:449

How about delete the first note ?

01:39:306 - 01:39:714 and 01:44:204 - 01:44:612

Both change to " o o o " or " o ooo " , it's strange that " ooooo " appears that suddenly.

Oni

It's a great map too , there's no big problem to mod.

:idea: the note on 01:07:775 please move to 01:07:673 , it's not on the lyrics rhythm

01:32:163 - I think the stream is too long , how about change to " ooxxooo o x o " ?

01:40:837 - How about change to " oo xo ox "?
yanlu
749 posts
Joined November 2010
Topic Starter
yanlu
thank you Dora moe~ >w</
hs714
257 posts
Joined March 2011
hs714

Dora wrote:

just a little suggestion >_</

General

Source: beatmania IIDX --> beatmania IIDX 16 EMPRESS

tags plz add DanceDanceRevolution Winx Club

Muzukashii

It's a good map at all , nothing to mod.

00:06:449 - nope.

How about delete the first note ?

01:39:306 - 01:39:714 and 01:44:204 - 01:44:612 - changed to "d ddd". thanks!

Both change to " o o o " or " o ooo " , it's strange that " ooooo " appears that suddenly.

Oni

It's a great map too , there's no big problem to mod. arigatou (*´▽｀*)!

:idea: the note on 01:07:775 please move to 01:07:673 , it's not on the lyrics rhythm - done.

01:32:163 - I think the stream is too long , how about change to " ooxxooo o x o " ? changed to "ddkkddk d k d" :3

01:40:837 - How about change to " oo xo ox "? - done.
Thank for your mod! Dora <33

update onegaisimasu! :D

Taiko Muzu: http://puu.sh/1RPRz
Taiko Oni: http://puu.sh/1RPRD
yanlu
749 posts
Joined November 2010
Topic Starter
yanlu
update :3
waiting Gina fix~
Curisu
2,241 posts
Joined January 2010
Curisu
我mod的时候只有HD...补齐mod
*No kd for this*

Easy

00:07:061 (2) - 节奏并不算太好 参照后面会好些
00:29:918 - 空拍感觉怪怪的 hs clap是下1/3 tick所以是突然少了个音
Fine. hitsounds感觉还是缺点设计

Normal

00:26:654 (3) - 长slider中间缺drum
00:36:041 (1,2,3,4,5) - Normal-hit vol-10~15 切的不自然
01:02:571 (1) - 为什么折返点蓝线上 好像是末端压01:03:592(vo) 自创节奏也一般很少5/4 建议这样:http://puu.sh/1S1hl
01:38:490 (1,2,1,1,1,2) - 突然就大段3/4和前面的不压bgm反差挺大的
01:47:673 (2) - 不在蓝线上不舒服但是又难打 01:47:469开始+3/4 slider挺常规的

Hard recheck

乒乓球hs lol
00:16:041 (7,8,9,10) - 这里仔细一想还是没想出为什么是jump
00:19:307 (8) - NC 和前面断开
00:31:143 (4) - 感觉是spacing给rhythm让路 00:31:347 缺音怪不舒服
00:33:184 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3) - 参照NM 建议Normal-hit代替clap位
00:58:592 (3,4,5,6) - 这里的曲线可以和00:59:715 (2) blanket
01:00:939 - 突兀 最少vol-10
01:11:756 (10) - 也是没懂为什么slider的类型 01:11:959 原曲有比较重的节奏
01:45:429 (1) - 不够flow 感觉reverse ; 01:46:041 (2) - <

H.T.Angel

Hentai Angel too pro
00:27:673 (7) - remove whis
00:33:796 (2,3) - 这个位有点逆人体工学 / 00:34:408 (4) - reverse
00:38:898 (5) - clap ; 00:39:000 (6) - whis
00:52:367 (1) - 2.0x还是有点夸张 1.5x应该就可以达到效果
01:11:959 - vol-10
01:18:286 (1) - imo Normal-whis不合
01:38:796 (3,4) - 连用whis有点吵 特别是2th tick没clap的情况下

oni/muzu懒逼(
DarknessAngel
2,237 posts
Joined May 2010
DarknessAngel

Curisu wrote:

H.T.Angel

Hentai Angel too pro //不是變態啊TAT
00:27:673 (7) - remove whis //跟voice的怎麼了 ? :O
00:33:796 (2,3) - 这个位有点逆人体工学 / 00:34:408 (4) - reverse //不會w
00:38:898 (5) - clap ; 00:39:000 (6) - whis //比較喜歡現在這樣:O
00:52:367 (1) - 2.0x还是有点夸张 1.5x应该就可以达到效果 //唔，感覺1.5不夠啊/.\
01:11:959 - vol-10 //雖然不懂為何但fixed.
01:18:286 (1) - imo Normal-whis不合 //覺得跟voice還算合的上
01:38:796 (3,4) - 连用whis有点吵 特别是2th tick没clap的情况下 //好像還好lol
謝謝mod ! :)

http://puu.sh/1SeR8
Autumn
501 posts
Joined October 2011
Autumn
Hi~M4M~

[Easy]
00:20:122 (1) -The claps arranged one beat after the downbeat sounds best imo.So you may clap on the end of this slider rather than the head.
So, set all these claps 1 beat later if you like.
(Just follow Normal's arrangement)

01:17:673 (4) - Seems better to bend like this:
SPOILER
01:27:061 (4) - The overlap is a little confusing..try this
SPOILER

[GiNa's Normal]
00:54:000 (3) - Rotate a little and adjust 00:54:816 (4) to let the flow looks better:
SPOILER

01:25:837 (3) - Clap?
01:30:735 (4) - ^

From 01:38:490 to 01:48:286, you may arrange the 2,4 claps here.

[Hard]
00:08:490 (9) - NC~
01:12:980 (4) - Using the curving slider seems better,and you may arrange like this to avoid too much overlap:
SPOILER

01:22:062 (7) - Move up 2 grids

[D.N.Angel]
01:13:592 (7,8) - Vocal starts from 01:13:796，arrange like this might be better:：
Remove 01:13:694 (8) ，move the next slider here
SPOILER

01:26:653 (6,7) - ^

orz 來了才發現可以用中文的..不好意思
Curisu
2,241 posts
Joined January 2010
Curisu

DarknessAngel wrote:

00:33:796 (2,3) - 这个位有点逆人体工学 / 00:34:408 (4) - reverse //不會w
反人体工学(?)的原因是前面都是acw这里cw感觉不够flow所以想说4reverse

00:52:367 (1) - 2.0x还是有点夸张 1.5x应该就可以达到效果 //唔，感覺1.5不夠啊/.\
主要问题倒不是2.0x...slider尾没声音 SV增加是突出重音但是这个gap太大的还是有点适得其反

01:38:796 (3,4) - 连用whis有点吵 特别是2th tick没clap的情况下 //好像還好lol
我的连用指01:39:000 - remove whis 相比起来01:40:531听起来就舒服很多
01:37:265 - 顺便提一下这里也有点overuse
\:D/ lol其实all suggestion
Tsumetaku
732 posts
Joined May 2012
Tsumetaku
M4M的.. 我在MOD上還不熟練 小小意見請包容XD(本人音效苦手)
{EASY},{GiNa's Normal}:
很好-w-.

{Hard}:
01:09:102 (1) - 到下一個點在切combo吧
01:34:613 (3) - 移到X204 Y48好像比較好?
01:47:061-加一個(5)吧 難判斷

{D.N.Angel}:
01:18:286 - 2x的確有點快 要不要橋一下前面的位子或是後面接起來?
01:47:775 - 把兩個slider合成一個?!
敬此.(咬
yanlu
749 posts
Joined November 2010
Topic Starter
yanlu

Autumn wrote:

Hi~M4M~

[Easy]
00:20:122 (1) -The claps arranged one beat after the downbeat sounds best imo.So you may clap on the end of this slider rather than the head.
So, set all these claps 1 beat later if you like. :arrow: ok
(Just follow Normal's arrangement)

01:17:673 (4) - Seems better to bend like this:
SPOILER
01:27:061 (4) - The overlap is a little confusing..try this
SPOILER

[Hard]
00:08:490 (9) - NC~ :arrow: okay
01:12:980 (4) - Using the curving slider seems better,and you may arrange like this to avoid too much overlap:
SPOILER
:arrow: change but not your way

01:22:062 (7) - Move up 2 grids :arrow: fix

orz 來了才發現可以用中文的..不好意思 :arrow: lol

lead8964878 wrote:

M4M的.. 我在MOD上還不熟練 小小意見請包容XD(本人音效苦手)
{EASY},{GiNa's Normal}:
很好-w-.

{Hard}:
01:09:102 (1) - 到下一個點在切combo吧
01:34:613 (3) - 移到X204 Y48好像比較好? :arrow: fix
01:47:061-加一個(5)吧 難判斷 :arrow: fix

敬此.(咬
謝謝MOD :3~
我會盡快回mod的
DarknessAngel
2,237 posts
Joined May 2010
DarknessAngel

lead8964878 wrote:

{D.N.Angel}:
01:18:286 - 2x的確有點快 要不要橋一下前面的位子或是後面接起來? //改成1.5x了，接起來就完全沒感覺了呢lol
01:47:775 - 把兩個slider合成一個?! //不要，太單調了lol

Curisu wrote:

DarknessAngel wrote:

00:33:796 (2,3) - 这个位有点逆人体工学 / 00:34:408 (4) - reverse //不會w
反人体工学(?)的原因是前面都是acw这里cw感觉不够flow所以想说4reverse

//雖然不是很懂你說的，但我真覺得那裏並沒有違反人體工學什麼的，我自己打沒感覺不舒服:O

00:52:367 (1) - 2.0x还是有点夸张 1.5x应该就可以达到效果 //唔，感覺1.5不夠啊/.\
主要问题倒不是2.0x...slider尾没声音 SV增加是突出重音但是这个gap太大的还是有点适得其反

//滿多人提這個地方的，已用1.5x，只是我真感覺不夠氣勢...www

01:38:796 (3,4) - 连用whis有点吵 特别是2th tick没clap的情况下 //好像還好lol
我的连用指01:39:000 - remove whis 相比起来01:40:531听起来就舒服很多
01:37:265 - 顺便提一下这里也有点overuse

//如果你事先提出解決方案，像01:39:000 - remove whis，然後再提出你說的解釋，這樣說我就會改的，你只說有點吵我就看不出問題在哪
總之那邊我改了 ~ 不過我覺得01:37:265這邊沒有overuse，它很好的契合voices呢:O
\:D/ lol其实all suggestion

Autumn wrote:

[D.N.Angel]
01:13:592 (7,8) - Vocal starts from 01:13:796，arrange like this might be better:：
Remove 01:13:694 (8) ，move the next slider here
SPOILER

01:26:653 (6,7) - ^

//I want to follow the voices here,not for vocals.
謝謝你們的mod ! o.o/

http://puu.sh/1SOcd
GiNa
1,023 posts
Joined September 2010
GiNa
http://puu.sh/1TiIX
I'm being a lazy ass here, so no reply to any of the mods lol
Fixed almost everything though, thank you
yanlu
749 posts
Joined November 2010
Topic Starter
yanlu
update~
Flower
1,723 posts
Joined August 2011
Flower
Hi~m4m~

[General]
最后一个kiai莫名 你可能需要咨询MAT/BAT

[Easy]
00:07:877 (3,1) - 整理下pattern以符合DS 肯定会被挑
00:28:286 (3,4) - DS
00:49:510 (1,2,3) - 其实可以仍然根据背景的drum来下 红线可能导致新手手乱
01:02:571 (1,2) - ^
01:15:633 - clap莫名 建议remove

[GiNa]
np

[Hard]
overmap很严重 （下的过多，歌曲中没有相关的节奏，并且打起来很不舒服），建议减少三连
00:08:490 (1,2,3) - 莫名
00:18:592 (4,5) - 本身就可以删掉 正好给玩家休息一下
00:23:796 (4,5,6,7,8,9) - 跳的略坑爹
00:27:265 (5) - 有点难读
00:34:918 (6) - delete
00:35:531 - 其实这里可以加个note
00:41:858 (2,3) - delete
00:43:796 (2,3) - 完全莫名
01:04:409 (1,2,3,4) - 初见在这里miss了我会说
01:05:531 (8) - delete
01:08:286 (4,5,6,7) - 这里建议按照背景节奏来下
01:24:409 (3,4,5,6) - 莫名 这个就完全是为难而难了 事实上三连可以下在01:24:918 -
01:41:857 (2) - 可要可不要
01:44:613 (1,2,3) - 有点坑

[DNANGEL]
00:09:102 (7,8) - NC?
00:15:633 (7,8) - ^
00:52:367 (1) - 莫名的加速 建议不用 用的话也最好改成1/2
00:53:796 (6,7) - 由于stack，这个pattern很难读，因此最好分开
01:03:796 - 不加个note？
01:05:531 (2) - 感觉最好删除 因为没音效而且也不舒服
01:18:286 (1) - 个人认为放在01:18:490 - 会比较舒服（音效与读图二者皆是）
01:21:551 (4,5,6,7,1) - 由于stack，这个pattern需要向右下移动

[Taiko]
Taiko-specific BG is not allowed now. Please change.
Short kiai for kiai fountain is also prohibited. Please remove them.
Muzukashii sounds kind of strange... Are you sure you follow the song?
Oni: 01:10:326 (1,1,1,2,1,2,1) - sounds like you are overmapping this part cause it is not the "highest" part of the song. maybe 01:08:694 - is better for such stream. if you insist on this pattern, I suggest you make more streams in the song to make the difficulty more average.

Good luck~
quiz-chan_DELETED
quiz-chan_DELETED
Hey-ho from my queue~

[General]
Seems to be fine~

[Easy]
01:02:571 (1,2) - I would revamp this pattern.
SPOILER
01:09:102 (1,2) - Add slight tweaks to blanketing part and the rest of second slider.
SPOILER
01:15:633 (1) - I recommend erasing the clap hitsound on the start of that slider.
01:30:326 (1) - This slider isn't perfect yet. The blanketing part is a bit... "unfitting", I guess? Use less nodes, works too.
SPOILER

[GiNa's Normal]
01:13:592 - One hit circle short. Missing one strong beat here and besides, sounds so empty without. Well, then add a circle here.
01:20:531 (3) - Make a good blanket.
SPOILER
01:39:510 (1) - Nothing significantly changes in the song so I don't get why there's a new combo here.

[Hard]
Cool!

[D.N.Angel]
Awesome!!

Good luck to everyone!!!~
Uan
Former osu! Champion: OWC#1
176 posts
Joined August 2009
Uan
Gogo!! :)
ircmod~
14:36 *yanlu is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/252900 Creative Life - I'm Screaming LOVE]
14:37 Uan: 其實我是覺得這拍
14:37 Uan: 抓得有點奇怪啦
14:37 Uan: 00:08:898 (2) -
14:37 Uan: 雖然我都點300
14:38 Uan: 也是呵乎對拍
14:38 yanlu: @.@太近嗎?
14:38 Uan: 不是距離的問題
14:39 Uan: 如果這樣呢
14:39 Uan: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/762149
14:39 Uan: 往後一拍
14:39 Uan: 我覺得聽起來比較順
14:40 Uan: 知道我說哪裡嗎~?
14:40 yanlu: 喔喔!!
14:40 Uan: 對吧@.@
14:40 yanlu: 好像真的比較好>~<
14:40 yanlu: 改lol
14:41 Uan: 後面也有一個喔
14:41 Uan: 00:18:082 (2) -
14:41 Uan: 這個23會讓人趕拍
14:41 Uan: 可以放遠一點
14:42 Uan: 00:53:796 (4) -
14:42 yanlu: 嗯嗯
14:42 Uan: 想是這個4.5這樣襬才是對的吧
14:43 Uan: 像*
14:43 yanlu: 這個也遠一點?
14:43 Uan: 不是
14:43 Uan: 這個45跟剛剛那個23
14:43 yanlu: 嗯嗯
14:43 Uan: 間距依樣
14:43 Uan: 可是拍子不桐阿
14:43 Uan: 一個是1/2 1/4
14:44 yanlu: http://puu.sh/2VLnn.jpg 這樣呢@.@
14:45 Uan: 前面那個阿
14:46 Uan: 1234綠色
14:46 Uan: 要改成1 2 3 4 5(s) 都綠 然後這個開始粉紅嗎?
14:46 Uan: 00:16:041 (1) -
14:46 Uan: 00:18:082 (2) -
14:47 Uan: 然後這個2改成1調遠一點點就沒問題了吧
14:47 yanlu: 唔...在加NC
14:47 Uan: 不好弄嗎@.@?
14:47 yanlu: 2+NC~
14:48 Uan: 還有~
14:48 Uan: 01:05:429 (5) -
14:48 Uan: 部分3連打可以參考這個5 6 1的間距
14:48 Uan: 01:03:592 (3) -
14:48 Uan: 或是這個345
14:49 Uan: 我個人比較喜歡這種間距
14:49 Uan: 00:42:163 (3) -
14:49 yanlu: 這超遠不像連打欸=A=
14:49 Uan: 像是這個345我就覺得很擠
14:49 Uan: 那就這種吧
14:49 yanlu: 030..
14:49 Uan: 01:05:429 (5) -
14:50 Uan: 不燃
14:50 Uan: 這種!!
14:50 Uan: 01:18:694 (10) -
14:50 Uan: 這樣看起來知道是串吧
14:50 yanlu: 幾乎都是1.0x你喜歡的那種了~
14:50 Uan: =3=
14:51 Uan: 01:38:286 (2) -
14:51 Uan: 再來是這個
14:51 Uan: 這個slider....
14:51 yanlu: 嗯!怎麼了!?
14:52 Uan: 改成這樣呢@.@
14:52 Uan: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/762158
14:53 Uan: 會太複雜嗎
14:54 Uan: 是覺得反射點在藍線感覺怪怪
14:58 Uan: 如何@.@
14:58 yanlu: 當個停頓點=3=
14:59 yanlu: 後面3連的話又太密了..
14:59 Uan: 恩
14:59 Uan: 好吧~
14:59 Uan: 大致上是這樣
14:59 Uan: 我挑不出怪地方了
yanlu
749 posts
Joined November 2010
Topic Starter
yanlu

Uan wrote:

Gogo!! :)
ircmod~
14:36 *yanlu is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/252900 Creative Life - I'm Screaming LOVE]
14:37 Uan: 其實我是覺得這拍
14:37 Uan: 抓得有點奇怪啦
14:37 Uan: 00:08:898 (2) -
14:37 Uan: 雖然我都點300
14:38 Uan: 也是呵乎對拍
14:38 yanlu: @.@太近嗎?
14:38 Uan: 不是距離的問題
14:39 Uan: 如果這樣呢
14:39 Uan: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/762149
14:39 Uan: 往後一拍
14:39 Uan: 我覺得聽起來比較順
14:40 Uan: 知道我說哪裡嗎~?
14:40 yanlu: 喔喔!!
14:40 Uan: 對吧@.@
14:40 yanlu: 好像真的比較好>~<
14:40 yanlu: 改lol
14:41 Uan: 後面也有一個喔
14:41 Uan: 00:18:082 (2) -
14:41 Uan: 這個23會讓人趕拍
14:41 Uan: 可以放遠一點
14:42 Uan: 00:53:796 (4) -
14:42 yanlu: 嗯嗯
14:42 Uan: 想是這個4.5這樣襬才是對的吧
14:43 Uan: 像*
14:43 yanlu: 這個也遠一點?
14:43 Uan: 不是
14:43 Uan: 這個45跟剛剛那個23
14:43 yanlu: 嗯嗯
14:43 Uan: 間距依樣
14:43 Uan: 可是拍子不桐阿
14:43 Uan: 一個是1/2 1/4
14:44 yanlu: http://puu.sh/2VLnn.jpg 這樣呢@.@
14:45 Uan: 前面那個阿
14:46 Uan: 1234綠色
14:46 Uan: 要改成1 2 3 4 5(s) 都綠 然後這個開始粉紅嗎?
14:46 Uan: 00:16:041 (1) -
14:46 Uan: 00:18:082 (2) -
14:47 Uan: 然後這個2改成1調遠一點點就沒問題了吧
14:47 yanlu: 唔...在加NC
14:47 Uan: 不好弄嗎@.@?
14:47 yanlu: 2+NC~
14:48 Uan: 還有~
14:48 Uan: 01:05:429 (5) -
14:48 Uan: 部分3連打可以參考這個5 6 1的間距
14:48 Uan: 01:03:592 (3) -
14:48 Uan: 或是這個345
14:49 Uan: 我個人比較喜歡這種間距
14:49 Uan: 00:42:163 (3) -
14:49 yanlu: 這超遠不像連打欸=A=
14:49 Uan: 像是這個345我就覺得很擠
14:49 Uan: 那就這種吧
14:49 yanlu: 030..
14:49 Uan: 01:05:429 (5) -
14:50 Uan: 不燃
14:50 Uan: 這種!!
14:50 Uan: 01:18:694 (10) -
14:50 Uan: 這樣看起來知道是串吧
14:50 yanlu: 幾乎都是1.0x你喜歡的那種了~
14:50 Uan: =3=
14:51 Uan: 01:38:286 (2) -
14:51 Uan: 再來是這個
14:51 Uan: 這個slider....
14:51 yanlu: 嗯!怎麼了!?
14:52 Uan: 改成這樣呢@.@
14:52 Uan: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/762158
14:53 Uan: 會太複雜嗎
14:54 Uan: 是覺得反射點在藍線感覺怪怪
14:58 Uan: 如何@.@
14:58 yanlu: 當個停頓點=3=
14:59 yanlu: 後面3連的話又太密了..
14:59 Uan: 恩
14:59 Uan: 好吧~
14:59 Uan: 大致上是這樣
14:59 Uan: 我挑不出怪地方了
Thank you for mod~>3<



revived and updated~

I fixed some partten in Hard diff, now looks more interest play i think :P
jyu
1,336 posts
Joined August 2012
jyu
Hello, m4m

General

Uncheck letterbox during breaks in std diffs
If i'm not wrong, taiko bg is not allowed anymore
Inconsistency in break time (normal diff has a break time)
is it just me or the kiai burst here 00:52:775 - doesn't fit the song? well, it lacks emphasis
01:18:694 - this kiai starts kinda suddenly, i prefer to change the kiai here 01:18:898 -


Easy

00:10:326 (1) - you broke the distance snap here. Even though you do it on purpose for a good formation, it's recommended not change the distance snap suddenly, especially in easiest diff
00:27:469 (2) - prefer 396|204 so 00:26:653 (1,2) - won't be too dense
00:29:918 (5) - should be nc (big white tick)
00:30:326 (1) - remove nc
00:40:122 (2,3) - kinda not sure about overlap in easiest diff, but this is only a mere opinion
00:46:245 - the vocal ends here. add a note. it's also good to make the rhythm flow better
01:02:571 (1,2) - http://puu.sh/2VPbN.jpg
01:27:877 (5) - nc so the combo won't be really long
01:27:877 (5,1) - overlap. consider placing 01:30:326 (1) - somewhere
01:42:163 (2,3) - adjust the blanket more http://puu.sh/2VPg5.jpg



GiNa's Normal

OD+1
HP+1

00:13:592 (2) - maybe a little bit more to the right so the flow is better
00:17:265 - add a note here, because you have this slider 00:16:449 (4) - following the beat, not the vocal, so this slider's kinda hanging. i hope you understand
00:19:306 (1) - remove combo. if you don't want to, nc here 00:20:122 (3) - since it's the starting beat where the main music starts
00:56:041 (1,2,3) - how about making it symmetry? http://puu.sh/2VPo7.jpg
01:40:326 (2) - idk but i don't like this pattern. i suggest you to change the pattern to follow the song more. Or if you want, i have an abnormal suggestion http://puu.sh/2VPBT.jpg


Hard

i would suggest AR-1 because this diff is jumpy

00:09:510 (1) - nc is not really needed here, imo
00:18:082 (1,2) - this sudden anti jump is kinda awkward. i prefer if you use the normal distance snap here
00:45:224 (1) - remove nc, it's red tick
01:04:409 (5) - nc should be here, because this is where the jump starts
01:23:796 - prefer if you add a note
01:32:776 (3) - the jump is too cruel imo, especially after a short reverse slider


D.N.Angel

y u use grid level 1 i suggest to use grid level 4 if you like

00:52:367 (1) - this speed-up slider is not necessary, because the zap sound you're trying to map with this speed-up slider lack of emphasis, so it only confuse the player
01:18:286 (1) - same reason as above
01:26:245 (4,5) - you should exchange their position (4 to 5, 5 to 4) so the flow is better (clockwise) http://puu.sh/2VQ4P.jpg
not good at modding insane diff /runs

Good luck~
P A N
2,354 posts
Joined December 2011
P A N
m4m from your queue

[Easy]

01:04:000 (2) - move it to 384|56. then move center to 332|152 and move tail to 360|240 for http://puu.sh/2VQBq.jpg
01:18:898 (1,2,3,4) - stack note like this in easiest diff is not a good idea. maybe move it to other place :3
01:42:163 (2,3) - make it more blanket >> http://puu.sh/2VQLG.jpg

[GiNa's Normal]

00:29:102 - sounds better to add note here
00:56:041 (1,2,3) - make it like http://puu.sh/2VQR2.jpg is better
01:05:428 (1,2,3) - maybe better? http://puu.sh/2VQUb.jpg
01:29:918 (1,2) - try this? http://puu.sh/2VQXL.jpg
01:38:490 - maybe try this rhythm

[Hard]

00:43:184 - add these note :/ its feel empty for hard
00:47:061 (1,2,3,4,1) - http://puu.sh/2VRd7.jpg better?
Location
00:47:057 (1) - 284|292
00:47:266 (2) - 200|272
00:47:470 (3) - 192|188
00:47:674 (4) - 272|156
00:47:878 (1) - 328|220

[D.N.Angel]

01:17:469 - I think this rhythm is more fit
01:25:428 - http://puu.sh/2VRFm.jpg
Code
116,285,85428,6,0,P|88:324|48:345,1,90,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
6,218,85837,1,0,1:0:0:0:
173,77,86041,1,8,0:0:0:0:
42,95,86245,1,8,0:0:0:0:
230,198,86449,1,2,0:0:0:0:
116,285,86653,1,2,1:2:0:0:
116,285,86755,1,8,0:0:0:0:
230,198,86959,6,0,P|282:192|324:194,1,90,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

GL :D
Zero__wind
osu! Alumni
3,314 posts
Joined August 2012
Zero__wind
Hi :3 m4m here

General
难道我火星了？我觉得Kiai明显应该从01:05:837 - 和01:18:898 - 这里起啊
只勾选Normal 和DNA diff中的 letterbox during breaks。其余diff不要勾啊因为没有break

DNA
00:21:755 (1) - 和00:23:388 (1) - 这类的位置 用Normal hitsound ？
00:24:000 (5,6) - 因为明星5的音比6要高所以我认为你的whistle和clap放反了 互换听听看
00:26:857 (2,3,4) - 同样的意见 我认为伴奏中旋律音高的地方应该用clap 低的地方应该用whistle 这个地方的话2和3都用clap 4用whistle 听听看 如果觉得这样好听就把其他所有类似的都改一下吧 我就不一个个写了
00:39:102 (7) - clap换成whistle ？
00:55:428 (5,6) - 或许改成类似这样 让它向下的弧度更大一些会顺手一些的感觉
01:05:020 (4,1) - 让它们相距1.1x吧 移滑条也行移前面的四边形也行
如果我在general中所说的是对的 那么01:05:224 (1) - 它的尾巴上的finish应该去掉 换成clap 在01:05:633 (3) - 的尾巴上加finish
01:13:184 (5,6,7,8,9) - 我认为这里的节奏错位了 01:13:898 (9) - 它开头的那个时间点是没有拍子的 原因是你的2连没有成对儿使用 建议节奏改为这样
01:25:837 (2,3,4,5,6) - 把它们摆成正五边形呗
01:26:959 (1) - 建议缩短为四分拍滑条 或者调换1和2的顺序 让circle在滑条前面构成二连 节奏会更好

Hard
00:10:939 (2) - （257,233）？
00:18:082 (1,2) - 完全重叠吧 这样误导性太强了 怎么想都是二连打 而且其实 如果你不是非要用00:18:286 (2) - 压住前面的4的话 就让这1和2离前面的折返滑条远一些吧 比如类似这样
00:19:306 (1) - 这个drum normal是有意的么？
00:24:409 (4,5) - 都加clap 然后00:24:613 (6) - 头上加whistle？
00:30:735 (3) - 头上加个whistle听起来貌似也不错？
00:32:164 (1) - 或许头上whistle尾巴clap？
00:32:571 (2,3) - 2个都whistle？
00:36:449 (1) - 在转spinner的时候80%的音量有点大了吧
00:48:490 (2) - 的尾巴以及00:49:103 (3,4) - 都whistle？
00:54:409 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - 这3组一二之间的间距渐变是有意的？
01:00:327 (4,5) - 它们之间是1.2x 它们之间只有1.05x 把全diff所有这种二连之间的间距统一到某一个数值吧
01:47:265 (1,2) - 建议1/4 slider换2 note 简单处理

Normal
01:02:367 (5) - maybe the default whistle on it should be move to the next slider's head
01:10:326 (2,3,4) - not recommended to stack notes like this in a Normal diff imo. Also maybe you should remove 01:10:531 (3) - and make the following slider start at (3)'s timing point, ending at the sampe time though
01:30:735 (2) - multi-reverse slider in E/N diff would really confuse newbie players
nice diff

Easy
00:29:918 (5,1) - 交换NC ？ 5是重拍
01:20:531 (5) - 或许需要NC
01:27:061 (4) - ^
槽点未侦测到

that's all
HURRY RANK THIS FOR THE AWSOME HITSOUND !!! ☆☆
yanlu
749 posts
Joined November 2010
Topic Starter
yanlu
DarknessAngel
2,237 posts
Joined May 2010
DarknessAngel
@Flower - 沒注意到你的mod..或者說是我忘了lol 你的建議幾乎採用
@Quiz-chan - \:D/
@AlpacaCokelat - I used grid 1 cuz I didn't use grid snap to map, and sorry no change, I don't agree what you motioned :O
@P A N - sorry I need to keep them
@Zero__wind - 音效部份我覺得不要用的那麼死.. 有些我聽起來還覺得有點奇怪。後面多數建議採用，但是5邊形那個你要考慮到我排列流向，而且我也不樂意用正5邊形

ty for modding ! :)

http://puu.sh/2Wtuz.rar
Hanabi
Hanabi
Sana's modding from M4M MODDING


[ ALL IN ONE ]

I think
01:48:592 (1) - spinner should be finished here
of all diff of you map

[ D.N.Angel ]


00:08:286 (1) - NC
00:14:817 (5) - NC
01:13:898 (9) - NC
01:14:204 (1) - Remove NC
01:23:592 (6) - NC
01:24:000 (1) - Remove NC
01:28:592 (7,1) - NOT beautiful -> http://puu.sh/2WE3S.jpg



[ Hard ]

00:18:286 (2) - NC for anti-jump
00:33:592 (2,4) - NC for highlight
00:34:409 (1) - Remove NC
00:34:918 - Remove circle
00:35:021 (3) - respace like -> http://puu.sh/2WEeS.jpg
00:35:531 (4) - add circle like -> http://puu.sh/2WEgh.jpg
00:42:980 (1) - too long break ->http://puu.sh/2WEiX.jpg -- it seems good
00:52:367 (4) - NC
01:04:409 (5) - NC
01:04:613 (1) - remove NC
01:46:653 (3) - NC

[ Normal ]

00:34:205 (4) - NC
01:04:408 (4) - NC
01:10:326 (2) - NC
01:47:061 (1,2) - NOT beautiful -> http://puu.sh/2WEv0.jpg

[ Easy ]

00:44:612 (3) - remove slider -> http://puu.sh/2WEC6.jpg it may be better?

no more points to pick up~

Yeah nice song, nice pattern~ GOOD LUCK ;)
yanlu
749 posts
Joined November 2010
Topic Starter
yanlu
> [ Sana ]
your mod weak for me.. orz
nothing change , sorry :I


update with DNA's diff~
Strawberry
osu! Alumni
1,536 posts
Joined October 2010
Strawberry
[General]
　
  1. offset: 5421 (-8)
  2. specific background is not acceptable on taiko diff. please change them to normal as standard diffs.
　
[GiNa's Normal]
  1. raising the HP and OD to 4. so that it could be Normal.
  2. 01:24:816 (1) - to 01:30:735 (2) - i have few problems about new combos here.. shouldn't we to remove the new combo at 01:24:816 (1) - , 01:27:877 (1) - and 01:29:918 (1) - , then add new on 01:25:837 (8) - and 01:29:102 (7) - ? the present just looks random..
  3. 01:39:510 (1) - is it necessary? (yea i mean the new combo on it..
　
[Hard]
  1. 00:18:082 (1,2) - neither fish nor fowl.. maybe it's not a sensible choice decreasing the spacing here, you can stack them or just use the normal spacing.. probably it is only my opinion so it depends on you. debatable.
  2. 00:26:041 (4) - how about increase the spacing here? since you used 1.6x on the previous pattern. it's better to me for keeping consistency.
  3. 00:34:409 (1) - its really necessary to set another new combo here? ummmmmmmm
　
[D.N.Angel]
  1. 00:38:898 (5,7) - i perfer to exchange the hitsound of them. sounds more reasonable.
  2. 00:53:796 (6) - have a tinily moving onto x~221 y~190 for a better flow?
  3. 00:58:082 (4) - the clap here should be moved onto the tail of the previous slider (1)
  4. 01:02:980 (7) - also the clap on the tail sounds needless.. how about remove it?
  5. 01:11:551 (6) - similar as above, i'd like to move it onto x~292 y~287 for the flow~
  6. 01:18:286 (1) - the speed-up looks awkward for me.. i can get what you want to express however 2.0x is much over the limitation that safe for reading to people.. consider it? i think 1.5x is totally enough.. anyway..

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not bad.
DarknessAngel
2,237 posts
Joined May 2010
DarknessAngel

Strawberry wrote:

[D.N.Angel]
  1. 00:38:898 (5,7) - i perfer to exchange the hitsound of them. sounds more reasonable. //I prefer current sound to yours.
  2. 00:58:082 (4) - the clap here should be moved onto the tail of the previous slider (1) //hmm...can't agree with you, I feel a bit awkward after I do this
the others fixed, ty for mod ^^

@yanlu 如果offset有改的話你幫我的難度改一下，真不行再PM給我我馬上改，ty ><
yanlu
749 posts
Joined November 2010
Topic Starter
yanlu

Strawberry wrote:

[General]
　
  1. offset: 5421 (-8) :arrow: okay
  2. specific background is not acceptable on taiko diff. please change them to normal as standard diffs. :arrow: so sad T___T
　
[GiNa's Normal]
  1. raising the HP and OD to 4. so that it could be Normal.
  2. 01:24:816 (1) - to 01:30:735 (2) - i have few problems about new combos here.. shouldn't we to remove the new combo at 01:24:816 (1) - , 01:27:877 (1) - and 01:29:918 (1) - , then add new on 01:25:837 (8) - and 01:29:102 (7) - ? the present just looks random..
  3. 01:39:510 (1) - is it necessary? (yea i mean the new combo on it..
:arrow: all fix
　
[Hard]
  1. 00:18:082 (1,2) - neither fish nor fowl.. maybe it's not a sensible choice decreasing the spacing here, you can stack them or just use the normal spacing.. probably it is only my opinion so it depends on you. debatable. :arrow: hmm..many people said this is bad.change to stack now OAO
  2. 00:26:041 (4) - how about increase the spacing here? since you used 1.6x on the previous pattern. it's better to me for keeping consistency. :arrow: sure~
  3. 00:34:409 (1) - its really necessary to set another new combo here? ummmmmmmm :arrow: >< okay...remove it
　
[D.N.Angel]
  1. 00:38:898 (5,7) - i perfer to exchange the hitsound of them. sounds more reasonable.
  2. 00:53:796 (6) - have a tinily moving onto x~221 y~190 for a better flow? :arrow: fixed
  3. 00:58:082 (4) - the clap here should be moved onto the tail of the previous slider (1)
  4. 01:02:980 (7) - also the clap on the tail sounds needless.. how about remove it? :arrow: fixed
  5. 01:11:551 (6) - similar as above, i'd like to move it onto x~292 y~287 for the flow~ :arrow: fixed
  6. 01:18:286 (1) - the speed-up looks awkward for me.. i can get what you want to express however 2.0x is much over the limitation that safe for reading to people.. consider it? i think 1.5x is totally enough.. anyway.. :arrow: 嗚哇這我不會改啊T.T

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not bad.
謝謝草莓醬><!!!!
DarknessAngel
2,237 posts
Joined May 2010
DarknessAngel
@yanlu醬 我有放上puush的link啊我只是跟你說timing的而已..lol

EDIT: 你說的隊 ! 看起來我做夢夢到我放上了哈哈，抱歉讓你費心=.=
http://puu.sh/2Y1ns.rar
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yanlu
749 posts
Joined November 2010
Topic Starter
yanlu
OAO!! 我沒看到link呀!?!?

不會~ DNA好萌好萌的>w<//


fixed the offset~ also update all diff~!
mintong89
3,698 posts
Joined July 2011
mintong89
hi....你接受M4M么 如果接的话, http://osu.ppy.sh/s/92028 thanks

Black: feel free to ignore
Blue: might consider
Red: Unrankable issue

[General]
Kiai Time 这里开始会比较好 01:05:829 -
不加静音的soft-sliderslide么

[D.N. Angel]

00:09:094 (1) - 竟然都要break了, 这不用NC了吧 0.0
00:15:625 (1) - ^
00:59:094 (10) - NC and 00:59:298 (1) - 去掉NC，vocal
01:02:563 (6) - NC

good diff 0.0

[Hard]
AR-1, 太快了

00:11:748 (4) - 感觉太弯了点, 00:11:135 (3) - 有这种就够了
00:17:869 (2) - add a note to 00:16:850 (1) - slider end? 突然没放了不好玩
00:39:910 (2) - 1和3之间距离不一样
00:43:584 - add a note, vocal. 还有就是为啥这之前没放note啊
01:09:094 (1) - 不需要NC吧
01:18:278 (4) - 如果你是跟vocal的这里NC然后后面的去掉
01:05:217 (4) - ^
01:45:421 (1) - 感觉会读错...建议放远点

好鬼畜! 距离问题好严重 好多读不出啊 感觉不是很好玩.. 难道是我太蠢了？ww

[Normal]
np

[Easy]

00:07:869 - 这里感觉不用whistle, 感觉加在00:09:502 - 会比较好
00:20:931 (2) - 头部移上点
00:44:196 - 忘了放音效..吧？
00:49:094 (3) - 加whistle会比较好
GL
kajiyatta
1,421 posts
Joined April 2011
kajiyatta
M4M request from your queue
[General]
almost suggestions
[Easy]
Placement
00:22:155(3) a bit cuved better since the flow seems more natural
SPOILER
00:29:910(5,1) swap NC better
Rhythm
00:56:033(1) double reverses seem difficult for newbie, delete 1 reverse and add a note instead?
SPOILER
01:33:584(4)^
Hit Sonud
00:43:788(2) use Normal sound at head?
[Normal]
Placement
01:03:788(3) flow suggestion, you can change the direction like this.
SPOILER
[Hard]
Placement
01:03:584(3,4) for Hard I just suppose this spacing looks weird. you can use normal distant better
01:16:033(2,3) if stacked, maybe move away better
SPOILER
Rhythm
01:38:278(1) sounds weird. you should follow the cymbal sound at 01:38:482
Hit Sonud
00:26:645(1) add finish
01:02:053(5) add finish at end instead next (1)
01:24:400(5) add whistle to follow the vocal
[D.N.Angel]
Placement
01:02:563(6,1) swap NC
Rhythm
01:18:278(1) this fast slider is really needs? I just suppose it looks useless

good luck and star~
Last edited by kajiyatta , edited 2 times in total.
Sagisawa-Yukari
216 posts
Joined March 2009
Sagisawa-Yukari



[General]
红色：必须遵守
蓝色：只是建议
请移除掉Taiko BG
tags里添加：konami,bemani,GiNa。另外tags里的词都是拆分的，dj可以不要了，就留个yoshitaka就行了。另外请加上vocal，附上她的推特翻译成罗马音后添加到tags里 https://twitter.com/riznanacchi


[Easy]
HP darin -1
00:33:176 (1) - 这个重新拉下应该结束在这里00:34:604 -
00:35:216 (2,3) - 这里节奏重做，从00:35:420 - 开始的滑条到00:36:237 - 结束，当然实际上你只要复制00:33:176 (1) - 然后黏贴下就行了
00:39:706 (1,2) - 这里感觉莫名其妙，如果你跟的是伴奏那这里应该是做成一个完整的滑条，跟vocal这里vocal又没开始，像后面的00:42:972 (1,2) - 这个就不错，重新处理下
00:47:053 (1) - 往前1/2，如果你不想重新做这段的话
00:49:094 (3) - 往后1/2
01:18:890 (1,2,3,4) - easy难度我不建议这样重叠的排列
01:33:584 (4) - 放在x:408 y:316附近？


[GiNa's Normal]
00:06:441 (1) - clap in reverse slider
00:08:890 (5) - ^
00:53:992 (3,4) - ctrl+g？
01:02:359 (5) - Ummm...That sounds very strange,remove


[Hard]
AR-1
00:06:849 (2) - 滑条头clap
00:08:278 (6) - clap
00:09:094 (3) - 滑条头clap
00:35:931 (2) - 这个应该在00:36:033 -
00:43:176 - 为什么这里要空一段
00:45:216 (1) - ctrl+H一下然后移到原位？
00:51:543 (1,2,3) - 三个间距怎么不一样？
00:55:217 (1,2) - 前面的1到2间距都是1.0怎么这里突然变成1.2了？多不好看
01:03:584 (3,4,5) - 用NC区分下，我打到这莫名其妙
01:23:176 (1,2,3) - 1和3去掉，2往后1/2，然后01:23:380 - 加个circle，这个新加的circle记得NC
01:28:584 (1,2) - 1去掉，然后2放到1的位置开头，然后01:28:890 - add circle
01:31:747 (5,6,7,1) - 我觉得三连应该是6,7,1而不是现在的5,6,7
01:36:646 (5,1,2,3) - 5和1去了把前面的4复制下然后看情况放，至于后面的3也去了，当然如果你这么做这里一段要自己重新构思下怎么放不过也不难就是
01:41:544 (4,1) - 4和1换下位置？
01:43:788 (2,1) - 我觉得把1放在2的滑条尾的那位置不错


[D.N.Angel]
00:41:339 (1,2,3) - 去掉1，然后2,3都往前挪1/2，然后00:42:155 - add circle
00:44:604 (1,2,3) - ^ ，然后00:45:420 - add circle
00:47:869 (1,2,3) - ^ ，00:48:686 - add circle
01:13:584 (7,8,9) - 这里，这里我建议8去掉，然后9的开头放8的位置然后01:13:992 - add circle
01:14:604 (2,3) - ctrl+g？
01:26:033 (3,4) - 3和4位置换下？


good luck~
-xNaCLx-
363 posts
Joined April 2012
-xNaCLx-
hi, taiko mod from my queue >.0

All of them are suggestions, ignore them if you dont like it.

[Muzu]
00:07:665 (3) - remove
01:05:829 - start kiai at here, because the second kiai also start at 01:18:890 (or you may adjust the second kiai)
01:12:359 - remove this green line as it is useless
01:12:461 - ^
01:15:216 (2) - k
01:18:482 (2) - D

[Oni]
00:31:645 (2) - delete
00:31:849 - add d/k
01:05:420 - for kiai time, same as muzu
01:12:359 - remove this green line
01:12:461 - ^

nice map..good luck to rank :D
yanlu
749 posts
Joined November 2010
Topic Starter
yanlu
M桶

mintong89 wrote:

hi....你接受M4M么 如果接的话, http://osu.ppy.sh/s/92028 thanks

Black: feel free to ignore
Blue: might consider
Red: Unrankable issue

[General]
Kiai Time 这里开始会比较好 01:05:829 - :arrow: 我覺得現在的比較合適
不加静音的soft-sliderslide么 :arrow: 嗯不加

[Hard]
AR-1, 太快了 :arrow: ;w;

00:11:748 (4) - 感觉太弯了点, 00:11:135 (3) - 有这种就够了 :arrow: 不...沒關西吧ˊ~ˋ
00:17:869 (2) - add a note to 00:16:850 (1) - slider end? 突然没放了不好玩 :arrow: ?_?
00:39:910 (2) - 1和3之间距离不一样 :arrow: 欸..真的耶lol! fixed
00:43:584 - add a note, vocal. 还有就是为啥这之前没放note啊 :arrow: ...故意的呀; _;
01:09:094 (1) - 不需要NC吧 :arrow: 換了前後的~
01:18:278 (4) - 如果你是跟vocal的这里NC然后后面的去掉 :arrow: no :/
01:05:217 (4) - ^
01:45:421 (1) - 感觉会读错...建议放远点 :arrow: 換了:/

好鬼畜! 距离问题好严重 好多读不出啊 感觉不是很好玩.. 难道是我太蠢了？ww :arrow: lol

[Easy]

00:07:869 - 这里感觉不用whistle, 感觉加在00:09:502 - 会比较好 :arrow: 好
00:20:931 (2) - 头部移上点
00:44:196 - 忘了放音效..吧？ :arrow: 不是忘記..
00:49:094 (3) - 加whistle会比较好 :arrow: 改了
GL

kajiyatta

kajiyatta wrote:

M4M request from your queue
[General]
almost suggestions
[Easy]
Placement
00:22:155(3) a bit cuved better since the flow seems more natural :arrow: sure~
SPOILER
00:29:910(5,1) swap NC better :arrow: hmm..no i keep that ><
Rhythm
00:56:033(1) double reverses seem difficult for newbie, delete 1 reverse and add a note instead?
SPOILER
01:33:584(4)^ :arrow: i think about it...keep now
Hit Sonud
00:43:788(2) use Normal sound at head? :arrow: too loud for me
[Hard]
Placement
01:03:584(3,4) for Hard I just suppose this spacing looks weird. you can use normal distant better :arrow: no..i want it :/
01:16:033(2,3) if stacked, maybe move away better :arrow: good~
SPOILER
Rhythm
01:38:278(1) sounds weird. you should follow the cymbal sound at 01:38:482 :arrow: no..i like it now>_<
Hit Sonud
00:26:645(1) add finish :arrow: ok
01:02:053(5) add finish at end instead next (1) :arrow: ok
01:24:400(5) add whistle to follow the vocal :arrow: kk

good luck and star~

也牛~

Sagisawa-Yukari wrote:




[General]
红色：必须遵守
蓝色：只是建议
请移除掉Taiko BG :arrow: 欸已經移掉了吧..?
tags里添加：konami,bemani,GiNa。另外tags里的词都是拆分的，dj可以不要了，就留个yoshitaka就行了。另外请加上vocal，附上她的推特翻译成罗马音后添加到tags里 https://twitter.com/riznanacchi :arrow: fixed


[Easy]
HP darin -1 :arrow: 唔..已經很低了耶>~<
00:33:176 (1) - 这个重新拉下应该结束在这里00:34:604 - :arrow: 怎麼會...
00:35:216 (2,3) - 这里节奏重做，从00:35:420 - 开始的滑条到00:36:237 - 结束，当然实际上你只要复制00:33:176 (1) - 然后黏贴下就行了 :arrow: 不太懂...
00:39:706 (1,2) - 这里感觉莫名其妙，如果你跟的是伴奏那这里应该是做成一个完整的滑条，跟vocal这里vocal又没开始，像后面的00:42:972 (1,2) - 这个就不错，重新处理下 :arrow: 改了點~
00:47:053 (1) - 往前1/2，如果你不想重新做这段的话
00:49:094 (3) - 往后1/2 :arrow: ^這樣是normal的節奏了..
01:18:890 (1,2,3,4) - easy难度我不建议这样重叠的排列 :arrow: 好多人都建議...改掉了!
01:33:584 (4) - 放在x:408 y:316附近？ :arrow: 不想改;w;

[Hard]
AR-1 :arrow: ;w;
00:06:849 (2) - 滑条头clap :arrow: no
00:08:278 (6) - clap :arrow: no
00:09:094 (3) - 滑条头clap :arrow: no...
00:35:931 (2) - 这个应该在00:36:033 - :arrow: 我是強調00:35:931 - 裡面很明顯的音><
00:43:176 - 为什么这里要空一段 :arrow: 是故意的...好吧好多人噴;__;換掉了..
00:45:216 (1) - ctrl+H一下然后移到原位？
00:51:543 (1,2,3) - 三个间距怎么不一样？ :arrow: 嗯...凸顯!
00:55:217 (1,2) - 前面的1到2间距都是1.0怎么这里突然变成1.2了？多不好看 :arrow: 其實是1.0x>1.1>1.2漸變\:D/
01:03:584 (3,4,5) - 用NC区分下，我打到这莫名其妙 :arrow: add~只是不知道會不會變成nc spam ;w;
01:23:176 (1,2,3) - 1和3去掉，2往后1/2，然后01:23:380 - 加个circle，这个新加的circle记得NC :arrow: fixed
01:28:584 (1,2) - 1去掉，然后2放到1的位置开头，然后01:28:890 - add circle
01:31:747 (5,6,7,1) - 我觉得三连应该是6,7,1而不是现在的5,6,7 :arrow: 改了點~
01:36:646 (5,1,2,3) - 5和1去了把前面的4复制下然后看情况放，至于后面的3也去了，当然如果你这么做这里一段要自己重新构思下怎么放不过也不难就是 :arrow: 也改了點
01:41:544 (4,1) - 4和1换下位置？ :arrow: ok~
01:43:788 (2,1) - 我觉得把1放在2的滑条尾的那位置不错 :arrow: 已改了2,3的位置~

good luck~
Thank you all for modding!! >A<

update~
DarknessAngel
2,237 posts
Joined May 2010
DarknessAngel
@mintong89 - NC也可以用來強調跳的(:
@kajiyatta - NC fixed but yeah, that 1.5x slider is necessary for me :/
@Sagisawa-Yukari - 說個什麼原因讓我參考吧lol，要改的話肯定一堆部分remap...而且你要想想我那些部分就是固定這種節奏的orz。轉換的建議不甚喜歡，不採用sry ;w;

ty for mods ! :D
http://puu.sh/30PtC.rar
GiNa
1,023 posts
Joined September 2010
GiNa
Ye.
The laziest mapper in this map set is back LOL
http://puu.sh/31cXI
yanlu
749 posts
Joined November 2010
Topic Starter
yanlu
update~! thank you w

waitting hoshi's reply >w<
hs714
257 posts
Joined March 2011
hs714
Flower :3

Flower wrote:

Hi~m4m~

[General]
最后一个kiai莫名 你可能需要咨询MAT/BAT

[Taiko]
Taiko-specific BG is not allowed now. Please change.
Short kiai for kiai fountain is also prohibited. Please remove them.
Muzukashii sounds kind of strange... Are you sure you follow the song?
Oni: 01:10:326 (1,1,1,2,1,2,1) - sounds like you are overmapping this part cause it is not the "highest" part of the song. maybe 01:08:694 - is better for such stream. if you insist on this pattern, I suggest you make more streams in the song to make the difficulty more average.
- thanks a lot! :oops: deleted short kiai green line. and 01:10:625 (2) - deleted this notes. I'm really thank you!

Good luck~

Thank you for your mod! Flower ✿

NewibornCLivee :3

NewibornCLivee wrote:

hi, taiko mod from my queue >.0

All of them are suggestions, ignore them if you dont like it.

[Muzu]
00:07:665 (3) - remove
01:05:829 - start kiai at here, because the second kiai also start at 01:18:890 (or you may adjust the second kiai) - Flower has pointed out the problems already! but thank you NewibornCLivee! :oops:
01:12:359 - remove this green line as it is useless
01:12:461 - ^
01:15:216 (2) - k - changed :3
01:18:482 (2) - D - nnn.. sorry.

[Oni]
00:31:645 (2) - delete - done~!
00:31:849 - add d/k - add k :3
01:05:420 - for kiai time, same as muzu - thanks ;)
01:12:359 - remove this green line
01:12:461 - ^

nice map..good luck to rank :D

Thank you for your mod! NewibornCLivee <33

and sorry for late reply! yanlu channnn!! orz
Thank you PM message! (and twitter!) (*´∀｀)ﾉ

please (last?) update~ :roll: ♥
Taiko Muzukashii: http://puu.sh/31vTU.osu
Taiko Oni: http://puu.sh/31vUj.osu
yanlu
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yanlu
(*´∀｀)ﾉupdateee~
Strawberry
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Strawberry
yanlu
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Thank you Strawberry~~♥
Nymph
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Nymph
[Easy]
00:43:788 (2) - 前面结尾都做了normalhit当clap的梗 这里放空是故意的么 因为略突然

01:42:155 (2) - 也是建议继续使用hitsound

01:45:012 (1) - 跟音乐在红线转折更好一些 这样拉白线听着略勉强


[Hard]
AR+1好读不少 因为有几个遮挡梗AR7看着不舒服

00:43:788 (3,4,5) - 这里spacing杂乱了 到底是想用多少呢 这里1.0 1.2 1.1都有 但是还看不出是故意使用的（像这种东西这个diff确实不少啊 这里尤其看着明显一些 间距细节没能统一就造成有的地方看起来杂乱了）
yanlu
749 posts
Joined November 2010
Topic Starter
yanlu

Nymph wrote:

[Easy]
00:43:788 (2) - 前面结尾都做了normalhit当clap的梗 这里放空是故意的么 因为略突然 :arrow: 因為加了略吵...我放個綠線好了>.<

01:42:155 (2) - 也是建议继续使用hitsound :arrow: fixed

01:45:012 (1) - 跟音乐在红线转折更好一些 这样拉白线听着略勉强 :arrow: 改了點~


[Hard]
AR+1好读不少 因为有几个遮挡梗AR7看着不舒服 :arrow: 嗯嗯

00:43:788 (3,4,5) - 这里spacing杂乱了 到底是想用多少呢 这里1.0 1.2 1.1都有 但是还看不出是故意使用的（像这种东西这个diff确实不少啊 这里尤其看着明显一些 间距细节没能统一就造成有的地方看起来杂乱了） :arrow: eh..改成1.1x了orz
Thank you Nymph~~ ;)

update!
Nymph
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ranked.
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gratz
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謝謝妮妮的說> <哇~~
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Congratz
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I'm screaming yeah ~!
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1 hour ago i updated it and now it's got ranked? i'll screaming now! orz

btw, congrats yanlu :)
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i'm screaming congratz to yanlu /runs
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Congratz!! ^^
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Congrats
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oh yey it got ranked :D.

congratz on the rank lulu <33333
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Congratz!
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congratz~~!!!
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恭喜!*2 lol


Edit: my 500 posts :)
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Congratz :3
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Thanks to all~c:

I'm screaming now xD ww
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lulu moe.
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GiNa wrote:

lulu moe.
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congrats yanlu channnnnn!!!!!!!!!!! yattaaaa ヾ(*´∀｀*)ﾉ"
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i would like the bloodcat link
thanks <3
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