Creative Life - I'm Screaming LOVE [Taiko|Osu]‬ · forum‬

yanlu

749 posts

Joined November 2010

Topic Starter

yanlu 2013-01-27T07:52:41+00:00

update~

Flower

1,740 posts

Joined August 2011

Flower 2013-02-22T18:21:05+00:00

Hi~m4m~

[General]
最后一个kiai莫名你可能需要咨询MAT/BAT

[Easy]
00:07:877 (3,1) - 整理下pattern以符合DS 肯定会被挑
00:28:286 (3,4) - DS
00:49:510 (1,2,3) - 其实可以仍然根据背景的drum来下红线可能导致新手手乱
01:02:571 (1,2) - ^
01:15:633 - clap莫名建议remove

[GiNa]
np

[Hard]
overmap很严重（下的过多，歌曲中没有相关的节奏，并且打起来很不舒服），建议减少三连
00:08:490 (1,2,3) - 莫名
00:18:592 (4,5) - 本身就可以删掉正好给玩家休息一下
00:23:796 (4,5,6,7,8,9) - 跳的略坑爹
00:27:265 (5) - 有点难读
00:34:918 (6) - delete
00:35:531 - 其实这里可以加个note
00:41:858 (2,3) - delete
00:43:796 (2,3) - 完全莫名
01:04:409 (1,2,3,4) - 初见在这里miss了我会说
01:05:531 (8) - delete
01:08:286 (4,5,6,7) - 这里建议按照背景节奏来下
01:24:409 (3,4,5,6) - 莫名这个就完全是为难而难了事实上三连可以下在01:24:918 -
01:41:857 (2) - 可要可不要
01:44:613 (1,2,3) - 有点坑

[DNANGEL]
00:09:102 (7,8) - NC?
00:15:633 (7,8) - ^
00:52:367 (1) - 莫名的加速建议不用用的话也最好改成1/2
00:53:796 (6,7) - 由于stack，这个pattern很难读，因此最好分开
01:03:796 - 不加个note？
01:05:531 (2) - 感觉最好删除因为没音效而且也不舒服
01:18:286 (1) - 个人认为放在01:18:490 - 会比较舒服（音效与读图二者皆是）
01:21:551 (4,5,6,7,1) - 由于stack，这个pattern需要向右下移动

[Taiko]
Taiko-specific BG is not allowed now. Please change.
Short kiai for kiai fountain is also prohibited. Please remove them.
Muzukashii sounds kind of strange... Are you sure you follow the song?
Oni: 01:10:326 (1,1,1,2,1,2,1) - sounds like you are overmapping this part cause it is not the "highest" part of the song. maybe 01:08:694 - is better for such stream. if you insist on this pattern, I suggest you make more streams in the song to make the difficulty more average.

Good luck~

quiz-chan_DELETED

quiz-chan_DELETED 2013-02-25T14:43:09+00:00

Hey-ho from my queue~

[General]
Seems to be fine~

[Easy]
01:02:571 (1,2) - I would revamp this pattern.

SPOILER

01:09:102 (1,2) - Add slight tweaks to blanketing part and the rest of second slider.

SPOILER

01:15:633 (1) - I recommend erasing the clap hitsound on the start of that slider.
01:30:326 (1) - This slider isn't perfect yet. The blanketing part is a bit... "unfitting", I guess? Use less nodes, works too.

SPOILER

[GiNa's Normal]
01:13:592 - One hit circle short. Missing one strong beat here and besides, sounds so empty without. Well, then add a circle here.
01:20:531 (3) - Make a good blanket.

SPOILER

01:39:510 (1) - Nothing significantly changes in the song so I don't get why there's a new combo here.

[Hard]
Cool!

[D.N.Angel]
Awesome!!

Good luck to everyone!!!~

Uan

Former osu! Champion: OWC#1

176 posts

Joined August 2009

Uan 2013-05-18T07:03:52+00:00

Gogo!!

ircmod~

14:36 *yanlu is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/252900 Creative Life - I'm Screaming LOVE]
14:37 Uan: 其實我是覺得這拍
14:37 Uan: 抓得有點奇怪啦
14:37 Uan: 00:08:898 (2) -
14:37 Uan: 雖然我都點300
14:38 Uan: 也是呵乎對拍
14:38 yanlu: @.@太近嗎?
14:38 Uan: 不是距離的問題
14:39 Uan: 如果這樣呢
14:39 Uan: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/762149
14:39 Uan: 往後一拍
14:39 Uan: 我覺得聽起來比較順
14:40 Uan: 知道我說哪裡嗎~?
14:40 yanlu: 喔喔!!
14:40 Uan: 對吧@.@
14:40 yanlu: 好像真的比較好>~<
14:40 yanlu: 改lol
14:41 Uan: 後面也有一個喔
14:41 Uan: 00:18:082 (2) -
14:41 Uan: 這個23會讓人趕拍
14:41 Uan: 可以放遠一點
14:42 Uan: 00:53:796 (4) -
14:42 yanlu: 嗯嗯
14:42 Uan: 想是這個4.5這樣襬才是對的吧
14:43 Uan: 像*
14:43 yanlu: 這個也遠一點?
14:43 Uan: 不是
14:43 Uan: 這個45跟剛剛那個23
14:43 yanlu: 嗯嗯
14:43 Uan: 間距依樣
14:43 Uan: 可是拍子不桐阿
14:43 Uan: 一個是1/2 1/4
14:44 yanlu: http://puu.sh/2VLnn.jpg 這樣呢@.@
14:45 Uan: 前面那個阿
14:46 Uan: 1234綠色
14:46 Uan: 要改成1 2 3 4 5(s) 都綠然後這個開始粉紅嗎?
14:46 Uan: 00:16:041 (1) -
14:46 Uan: 00:18:082 (2) -
14:47 Uan: 然後這個2改成1調遠一點點就沒問題了吧
14:47 yanlu: 唔...在加NC
14:47 Uan: 不好弄嗎@.@?
14:47 yanlu: 2+NC~
14:48 Uan: 還有~
14:48 Uan: 01:05:429 (5) -
14:48 Uan: 部分3連打可以參考這個5 6 1的間距
14:48 Uan: 01:03:592 (3) -
14:48 Uan: 或是這個345
14:49 Uan: 我個人比較喜歡這種間距
14:49 Uan: 00:42:163 (3) -
14:49 yanlu: 這超遠不像連打欸=A=
14:49 Uan: 像是這個345我就覺得很擠
14:49 Uan: 那就這種吧
14:49 yanlu: 030..
14:49 Uan: 01:05:429 (5) -
14:50 Uan: 不燃
14:50 Uan: 這種!!
14:50 Uan: 01:18:694 (10) -
14:50 Uan: 這樣看起來知道是串吧
14:50 yanlu: 幾乎都是1.0x你喜歡的那種了~
14:50 Uan: =3=
14:51 Uan: 01:38:286 (2) -
14:51 Uan: 再來是這個
14:51 Uan: 這個slider....
14:51 yanlu: 嗯!怎麼了!?
14:52 Uan: 改成這樣呢@.@
14:52 Uan: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/762158
14:53 Uan: 會太複雜嗎
14:54 Uan: 是覺得反射點在藍線感覺怪怪
14:58 Uan: 如何@.@
14:58 yanlu: 當個停頓點=3=
14:59 yanlu: 後面3連的話又太密了..
14:59 Uan: 恩
14:59 Uan: 好吧~
14:59 Uan: 大致上是這樣
14:59 Uan: 我挑不出怪地方了

yanlu

749 posts

Joined November 2010

Topic Starter

yanlu 2013-05-18T07:37:08+00:00

Uan wrote:
Gogo!!
ircmod~
14:36 *yanlu is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/252900 Creative Life - I'm Screaming LOVE]
14:37 Uan: 其實我是覺得這拍
14:37 Uan: 抓得有點奇怪啦
14:37 Uan: 00:08:898 (2) -
14:37 Uan: 雖然我都點300
14:38 Uan: 也是呵乎對拍
14:38 yanlu: @.@太近嗎?
14:38 Uan: 不是距離的問題
14:39 Uan: 如果這樣呢
14:39 Uan: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/762149
14:39 Uan: 往後一拍
14:39 Uan: 我覺得聽起來比較順
14:40 Uan: 知道我說哪裡嗎~?
14:40 yanlu: 喔喔!!
14:40 Uan: 對吧@.@
14:40 yanlu: 好像真的比較好>~<
14:40 yanlu: 改lol
14:41 Uan: 後面也有一個喔
14:41 Uan: 00:18:082 (2) -
14:41 Uan: 這個23會讓人趕拍
14:41 Uan: 可以放遠一點
14:42 Uan: 00:53:796 (4) -
14:42 yanlu: 嗯嗯
14:42 Uan: 想是這個4.5這樣襬才是對的吧
14:43 Uan: 像*
14:43 yanlu: 這個也遠一點?
14:43 Uan: 不是
14:43 Uan: 這個45跟剛剛那個23
14:43 yanlu: 嗯嗯
14:43 Uan: 間距依樣
14:43 Uan: 可是拍子不桐阿
14:43 Uan: 一個是1/2 1/4
14:44 yanlu: http://puu.sh/2VLnn.jpg 這樣呢@.@
14:45 Uan: 前面那個阿
14:46 Uan: 1234綠色
14:46 Uan: 要改成1 2 3 4 5(s) 都綠然後這個開始粉紅嗎?
14:46 Uan: 00:16:041 (1) -
14:46 Uan: 00:18:082 (2) -
14:47 Uan: 然後這個2改成1調遠一點點就沒問題了吧
14:47 yanlu: 唔...在加NC
14:47 Uan: 不好弄嗎@.@?
14:47 yanlu: 2+NC~
14:48 Uan: 還有~
14:48 Uan: 01:05:429 (5) -
14:48 Uan: 部分3連打可以參考這個5 6 1的間距
14:48 Uan: 01:03:592 (3) -
14:48 Uan: 或是這個345
14:49 Uan: 我個人比較喜歡這種間距
14:49 Uan: 00:42:163 (3) -
14:49 yanlu: 這超遠不像連打欸=A=
14:49 Uan: 像是這個345我就覺得很擠
14:49 Uan: 那就這種吧
14:49 yanlu: 030..
14:49 Uan: 01:05:429 (5) -
14:50 Uan: 不燃
14:50 Uan: 這種!!
14:50 Uan: 01:18:694 (10) -
14:50 Uan: 這樣看起來知道是串吧
14:50 yanlu: 幾乎都是1.0x你喜歡的那種了~
14:50 Uan: =3=
14:51 Uan: 01:38:286 (2) -
14:51 Uan: 再來是這個
14:51 Uan: 這個slider....
14:51 yanlu: 嗯!怎麼了!?
14:52 Uan: 改成這樣呢@.@
14:52 Uan: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/762158
14:53 Uan: 會太複雜嗎
14:54 Uan: 是覺得反射點在藍線感覺怪怪
14:58 Uan: 如何@.@
14:58 yanlu: 當個停頓點=3=
14:59 yanlu: 後面3連的話又太密了..
14:59 Uan: 恩
14:59 Uan: 好吧~
14:59 Uan: 大致上是這樣
14:59 Uan: 我挑不出怪地方了

Thank you for mod~>3<

revived and updated~

I fixed some partten in Hard diff, now looks more interest play i think

jyu

1,336 posts

Joined August 2012

jyu 2013-05-18T11:01:12+00:00

Hello, m4m

General

Uncheck letterbox during breaks in std diffs
If i'm not wrong, taiko bg is not allowed anymore
Inconsistency in break time (normal diff has a break time)
is it just me or the kiai burst here 00:52:775 - doesn't fit the song? well, it lacks emphasis
01:18:694 - this kiai starts kinda suddenly, i prefer to change the kiai here 01:18:898 -

Easy

00:10:326 (1) - you broke the distance snap here. Even though you do it on purpose for a good formation, it's recommended not change the distance snap suddenly, especially in easiest diff
00:27:469 (2) - prefer 396|204 so 00:26:653 (1,2) - won't be too dense
00:29:918 (5) - should be nc (big white tick)
00:30:326 (1) - remove nc
00:40:122 (2,3) - kinda not sure about overlap in easiest diff, but this is only a mere opinion
00:46:245 - the vocal ends here. add a note. it's also good to make the rhythm flow better
01:02:571 (1,2) - http://puu.sh/2VPbN.jpg
01:27:877 (5) - nc so the combo won't be really long
01:27:877 (5,1) - overlap. consider placing 01:30:326 (1) - somewhere
01:42:163 (2,3) - adjust the blanket more http://puu.sh/2VPg5.jpg

GiNa's Normal

OD+1
HP+1

00:13:592 (2) - maybe a little bit more to the right so the flow is better
00:17:265 - add a note here, because you have this slider 00:16:449 (4) - following the beat, not the vocal, so this slider's kinda hanging. i hope you understand
00:19:306 (1) - remove combo. if you don't want to, nc here 00:20:122 (3) - since it's the starting beat where the main music starts
00:56:041 (1,2,3) - how about making it symmetry? http://puu.sh/2VPo7.jpg
01:40:326 (2) - idk but i don't like this pattern. i suggest you to change the pattern to follow the song more. Or if you want, i have an abnormal suggestion http://puu.sh/2VPBT.jpg

Hard

i would suggest AR-1 because this diff is jumpy

00:09:510 (1) - nc is not really needed here, imo
00:18:082 (1,2) - this sudden anti jump is kinda awkward. i prefer if you use the normal distance snap here
00:45:224 (1) - remove nc, it's red tick
01:04:409 (5) - nc should be here, because this is where the jump starts
01:23:796 - prefer if you add a note
01:32:776 (3) - the jump is too cruel imo, especially after a short reverse slider

D.N.Angel

y u use grid level 1 i suggest to use grid level 4 if you like

00:52:367 (1) - this speed-up slider is not necessary, because the zap sound you're trying to map with this speed-up slider lack of emphasis, so it only confuse the player
01:18:286 (1) - same reason as above
01:26:245 (4,5) - you should exchange their position (4 to 5, 5 to 4) so the flow is better (clockwise) http://puu.sh/2VQ4P.jpg
not good at modding insane diff /runs

Good luck~

P A N

2,357 posts

Joined December 2011

P A N 2013-05-18T12:13:23+00:00

m4m from your queue

[Easy]

01:04:000 (2) - move it to 384|56. then move center to 332|152 and move tail to 360|240 for http://puu.sh/2VQBq.jpg
01:18:898 (1,2,3,4) - stack note like this in easiest diff is not a good idea. maybe move it to other place :3
01:42:163 (2,3) - make it more blanket >> http://puu.sh/2VQLG.jpg

[GiNa's Normal]

00:29:102 - sounds better to add note here
00:56:041 (1,2,3) - make it like http://puu.sh/2VQR2.jpg is better
01:05:428 (1,2,3) - maybe better? http://puu.sh/2VQUb.jpg
01:29:918 (1,2) - try this? http://puu.sh/2VQXL.jpg
01:38:490 - maybe try this rhythm

[Hard]

00:43:184 - add these note :/ its feel empty for hard

00:47:061 (1,2,3,4,1) - http://puu.sh/2VRd7.jpg better?

Location

00:47:057 (1) - 284|292
00:47:266 (2) - 200|272
00:47:470 (3) - 192|188
00:47:674 (4) - 272|156
00:47:878 (1) - 328|220

[D.N.Angel]

01:17:469 - I think this rhythm is more fit

01:25:428 - http://puu.sh/2VRFm.jpg

Code

116,285,85428,6,0,P|88:324|48:345,1,90,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
6,218,85837,1,0,1:0:0:0:
173,77,86041,1,8,0:0:0:0:
42,95,86245,1,8,0:0:0:0:
230,198,86449,1,2,0:0:0:0:
116,285,86653,1,2,1:2:0:0:
116,285,86755,1,8,0:0:0:0:
230,198,86959,6,0,P|282:192|324:194,1,90,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

GL

Zero__wind

osu! Alumni

3,314 posts

Joined August 2012

Zero__wind 2013-05-18T12:13:59+00:00

Hi :3 m4m here

General
难道我火星了？我觉得Kiai明显应该从01:05:837 - 和01:18:898 - 这里起啊
只勾选Normal 和DNA diff中的 letterbox during breaks。其余diff不要勾啊因为没有break

DNA
00:21:755 (1) - 和00:23:388 (1) - 这类的位置用Normal hitsound ？
00:24:000 (5,6) - 因为明星5的音比6要高所以我认为你的whistle和clap放反了互换听听看
00:26:857 (2,3,4) - 同样的意见我认为伴奏中旋律音高的地方应该用clap 低的地方应该用whistle 这个地方的话2和3都用clap 4用whistle 听听看如果觉得这样好听就把其他所有类似的都改一下吧我就不一个个写了
00:39:102 (7) - clap换成whistle ？
00:55:428 (5,6) - 或许改成类似这样让它向下的弧度更大一些会顺手一些的感觉
01:05:020 (4,1) - 让它们相距1.1x吧移滑条也行移前面的四边形也行
如果我在general中所说的是对的那么01:05:224 (1) - 它的尾巴上的finish应该去掉换成clap 在01:05:633 (3) - 的尾巴上加finish
01:13:184 (5,6,7,8,9) - 我认为这里的节奏错位了 01:13:898 (9) - 它开头的那个时间点是没有拍子的原因是你的2连没有成对儿使用建议节奏改为这样
01:25:837 (2,3,4,5,6) - 把它们摆成正五边形呗
01:26:959 (1) - 建议缩短为四分拍滑条或者调换1和2的顺序让circle在滑条前面构成二连节奏会更好

Hard
00:10:939 (2) - （257,233）？
00:18:082 (1,2) - 完全重叠吧这样误导性太强了怎么想都是二连打而且其实如果你不是非要用00:18:286 (2) - 压住前面的4的话就让这1和2离前面的折返滑条远一些吧比如类似这样
00:19:306 (1) - 这个drum normal是有意的么？
00:24:409 (4,5) - 都加clap 然后00:24:613 (6) - 头上加whistle？
00:30:735 (3) - 头上加个whistle听起来貌似也不错？
00:32:164 (1) - 或许头上whistle尾巴clap？
00:32:571 (2,3) - 2个都whistle？
00:36:449 (1) - 在转spinner的时候80%的音量有点大了吧
00:48:490 (2) - 的尾巴以及00:49:103 (3,4) - 都whistle？
00:54:409 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - 这3组一二之间的间距渐变是有意的？
01:00:327 (4,5) - 它们之间是1.2x 它们之间只有1.05x 把全diff所有这种二连之间的间距统一到某一个数值吧
01:47:265 (1,2) - 建议1/4 slider换2 note 简单处理

Normal
01:02:367 (5) - maybe the default whistle on it should be move to the next slider's head
01:10:326 (2,3,4) - not recommended to stack notes like this in a Normal diff imo. Also maybe you should remove 01:10:531 (3) - and make the following slider start at (3)'s timing point, ending at the sampe time though
01:30:735 (2) - multi-reverse slider in E/N diff would really confuse newbie players
nice diff

Easy
00:29:918 (5,1) - 交换NC ？ 5是重拍
01:20:531 (5) - 或许需要NC
01:27:061 (4) - ^
槽点未侦测到

that's all
HURRY RANK THIS FOR THE AWSOME HITSOUND !!! ☆☆

yanlu

749 posts

Joined November 2010

Topic Starter

yanlu 2013-05-19T04:16:46+00:00

DarknessAngel

2,237 posts

Joined May 2010

DarknessAngel 2013-05-19T07:38:24+00:00

@Flower - 沒注意到你的mod..或者說是我忘了lol 你的建議幾乎採用
@Quiz-chan - \:D/
@AlpacaCokelat - I used grid 1 cuz I didn't use grid snap to map, and sorry no change, I don't agree what you motioned :O
@P A N - sorry I need to keep them
@Zero__wind - 音效部份我覺得不要用的那麼死.. 有些我聽起來還覺得有點奇怪。後面多數建議採用，但是5邊形那個你要考慮到我排列流向，而且我也不樂意用正5邊形

ty for modding !

http://puu.sh/2Wtuz.rar

Hanabi

Hanabi 2013-05-19T14:54:45+00:00

Sana's modding from M4M MODDING

[ ALL IN ONE ]

I think
01:48:592 (1) - spinner should be finished here
of all diff of you map

[ D.N.Angel ]

00:08:286 (1) - NC
00:14:817 (5) - NC
01:13:898 (9) - NC
01:14:204 (1) - Remove NC
01:23:592 (6) - NC
01:24:000 (1) - Remove NC
01:28:592 (7,1) - NOT beautiful -> http://puu.sh/2WE3S.jpg

[ Hard ]

00:18:286 (2) - NC for anti-jump
00:33:592 (2,4) - NC for highlight
00:34:409 (1) - Remove NC
00:34:918 - Remove circle
00:35:021 (3) - respace like -> http://puu.sh/2WEeS.jpg
00:35:531 (4) - add circle like -> http://puu.sh/2WEgh.jpg
00:42:980 (1) - too long break ->http://puu.sh/2WEiX.jpg -- it seems good
00:52:367 (4) - NC
01:04:409 (5) - NC
01:04:613 (1) - remove NC
01:46:653 (3) - NC

[ Normal ]

00:34:205 (4) - NC
01:04:408 (4) - NC
01:10:326 (2) - NC
01:47:061 (1,2) - NOT beautiful -> http://puu.sh/2WEv0.jpg

[ Easy ]

00:44:612 (3) - remove slider -> http://puu.sh/2WEC6.jpg it may be better?

no more points to pick up~

Yeah nice song, nice pattern~ GOOD LUCK

yanlu

749 posts

Joined November 2010

Topic Starter

yanlu 2013-05-20T05:28:45+00:00

> [ Sana ]
your mod weak for me.. orz
nothing change , sorry :I

update with DNA's diff~

Strawberry

osu! Alumni

1,536 posts

Joined October 2010

Strawberry 2013-05-20T15:11:48+00:00

[General]
　

offset: 5421 (-8)
specific background is not acceptable on taiko diff. please change them to normal as standard diffs.

　
[GiNa's Normal]

raising the HP and OD to 4. so that it could be Normal.
01:24:816 (1) - to 01:30:735 (2) - i have few problems about new combos here.. shouldn't we to remove the new combo at 01:24:816 (1) - , 01:27:877 (1) - and 01:29:918 (1) - , then add new on 01:25:837 (8) - and 01:29:102 (7) - ? the present just looks random..
01:39:510 (1) - is it necessary? (yea i mean the new combo on it..

　
[Hard]

00:18:082 (1,2) - neither fish nor fowl.. maybe it's not a sensible choice decreasing the spacing here, you can stack them or just use the normal spacing.. probably it is only my opinion so it depends on you. debatable.
00:26:041 (4) - how about increase the spacing here? since you used 1.6x on the previous pattern. it's better to me for keeping consistency.
00:34:409 (1) - its really necessary to set another new combo here? ummmmmmmm

　
[D.N.Angel]

00:38:898 (5,7) - i perfer to exchange the hitsound of them. sounds more reasonable.
00:53:796 (6) - have a tinily moving onto x~221 y~190 for a better flow?
00:58:082 (4) - the clap here should be moved onto the tail of the previous slider (1)
01:02:980 (7) - also the clap on the tail sounds needless.. how about remove it?
01:11:551 (6) - similar as above, i'd like to move it onto x~292 y~287 for the flow~
01:18:286 (1) - the speed-up looks awkward for me.. i can get what you want to express however 2.0x is much over the limitation that safe for reading to people.. consider it? i think 1.5x is totally enough.. anyway..

　　--------------------------------------------------------
not bad.

DarknessAngel

2,237 posts

Joined May 2010

DarknessAngel 2013-05-21T10:41:14+00:00

Strawberry wrote:
[D.N.Angel]
00:38:898 (5,7) - i perfer to exchange the hitsound of them. sounds more reasonable. //I prefer current sound to yours.
00:58:082 (4) - the clap here should be moved onto the tail of the previous slider (1) //hmm...can't agree with you, I feel a bit awkward after I do this

the others fixed, ty for mod ^^

@yanlu 如果offset有改的話你幫我的難度改一下，真不行再PM給我我馬上改，ty ><

yanlu

749 posts

Joined November 2010

Topic Starter

yanlu 2013-05-21T11:18:58+00:00

Strawberry wrote:
[General]
　
offset: 5421 (-8) okay
specific background is not acceptable on taiko diff. please change them to normal as standard diffs. so sad T___T
　
[GiNa's Normal]
raising the HP and OD to 4. so that it could be Normal.
01:24:816 (1) - to 01:30:735 (2) - i have few problems about new combos here.. shouldn't we to remove the new combo at 01:24:816 (1) - , 01:27:877 (1) - and 01:29:918 (1) - , then add new on 01:25:837 (8) - and 01:29:102 (7) - ? the present just looks random..
01:39:510 (1) - is it necessary? (yea i mean the new combo on it..
all fix
　
[Hard]
00:18:082 (1,2) - neither fish nor fowl.. maybe it's not a sensible choice decreasing the spacing here, you can stack them or just use the normal spacing.. probably it is only my opinion so it depends on you. debatable. hmm..many people said this is bad.change to stack now OAO
00:26:041 (4) - how about increase the spacing here? since you used 1.6x on the previous pattern. it's better to me for keeping consistency. sure~
00:34:409 (1) - its really necessary to set another new combo here? ummmmmmmm >< okay...remove it
　
[D.N.Angel]
00:38:898 (5,7) - i perfer to exchange the hitsound of them. sounds more reasonable.
00:53:796 (6) - have a tinily moving onto x~221 y~190 for a better flow? fixed
00:58:082 (4) - the clap here should be moved onto the tail of the previous slider (1)
01:02:980 (7) - also the clap on the tail sounds needless.. how about remove it? fixed
01:11:551 (6) - similar as above, i'd like to move it onto x~292 y~287 for the flow~ fixed
01:18:286 (1) - the speed-up looks awkward for me.. i can get what you want to express however 2.0x is much over the limitation that safe for reading to people.. consider it? i think 1.5x is totally enough.. anyway.. 嗚哇這我不會改啊T.T

　　--------------------------------------------------------
not bad.

謝謝草莓醬><!!!!

DarknessAngel

2,237 posts

Joined May 2010

DarknessAngel 2013-05-21T11:29:12+00:00

@yanlu醬 ~~我有放上puush的link啊我只是跟你說timing的而已..lol~~

EDIT: 你說的隊 ! 看起來我做夢夢到我放上了哈哈，抱歉讓你費心=.=
http://puu.sh/2Y1ns.rar

Last edited by DarknessAngel 2013-05-21T11:39:43+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

yanlu

749 posts

Joined November 2010

Topic Starter

yanlu 2013-05-21T11:33:59+00:00

~~OAO!! 我沒看到link呀!?!?~~

不會~ DNA好萌好萌的>w<//

fixed the offset~ also update all diff~!

mintong89

3,699 posts

Joined July 2011

mintong89 2013-05-23T05:59:53+00:00

hi....你接受M4M么如果接的话, http://osu.ppy.sh/s/92028 thanks

Black: feel free to ignore
Blue: might consider
Red: Unrankable issue

[General]
Kiai Time 这里开始会比较好 01:05:829 -
不加静音的soft-sliderslide么

[D.N. Angel]

00:09:094 (1) - 竟然都要break了, 这不用NC了吧 0.0
00:15:625 (1) - ^
00:59:094 (10) - NC and 00:59:298 (1) - 去掉NC，vocal
01:02:563 (6) - NC

good diff 0.0

[Hard]
AR-1, 太快了

00:11:748 (4) - 感觉太弯了点, 00:11:135 (3) - 有这种就够了
00:17:869 (2) - add a note to 00:16:850 (1) - slider end? 突然没放了不好玩
00:39:910 (2) - 1和3之间距离不一样
00:43:584 - add a note, vocal. 还有就是为啥这之前没放note啊
01:09:094 (1) - 不需要NC吧
01:18:278 (4) - 如果你是跟vocal的这里NC然后后面的去掉
01:05:217 (4) - ^
01:45:421 (1) - 感觉会读错...建议放远点

好鬼畜! 距离问题好严重好多读不出啊感觉不是很好玩.. 难道是我太蠢了？ww

[Normal]
np

[Easy]

00:07:869 - 这里感觉不用whistle, 感觉加在00:09:502 - 会比较好
00:20:931 (2) - 头部移上点
00:44:196 - 忘了放音效..吧？
00:49:094 (3) - 加whistle会比较好

GL

kajiyatta

1,421 posts

Joined April 2011

kajiyatta 2013-05-23T10:51:47+00:00

M4M request from your queue
[General]
almost suggestions
[Easy]
Placement
00:22:155(3) a bit cuved better since the flow seems more natural

SPOILER

00:29:910(5,1) swap NC better
Rhythm
00:56:033(1) double reverses seem difficult for newbie, delete 1 reverse and add a note instead?

SPOILER

01:33:584(4)^
Hit Sonud
00:43:788(2) use Normal sound at head?
[Normal]
Placement
01:03:788(3) flow suggestion, you can change the direction like this.

SPOILER

[Hard]
Placement
01:03:584(3,4) for Hard I just suppose this spacing looks weird. you can use normal distant better
01:16:033(2,3) if stacked, maybe move away better

SPOILER

Rhythm
01:38:278(1) sounds weird. you should follow the cymbal sound at 01:38:482
Hit Sonud
00:26:645(1) add finish
01:02:053(5) add finish at end instead next (1)
01:24:400(5) add whistle to follow the vocal
[D.N.Angel]
Placement
01:02:563(6,1) swap NC
Rhythm
01:18:278(1) this fast slider is really needs? I just suppose it looks useless

good luck and star~

Last edited by kajiyatta 2013-05-24T09:55:27+00:00, edited 2 times in total.

Sagisawa-Yukari

216 posts

Joined March 2009

Sagisawa-Yukari 2013-05-24T09:03:08+00:00

[General]
红色：必须遵守
蓝色：只是建议
请移除掉Taiko BG
tags里添加：konami,bemani,GiNa。另外tags里的词都是拆分的，dj可以不要了，就留个yoshitaka就行了。另外请加上vocal，附上她的推特翻译成罗马音后添加到tags里 https://twitter.com/riznanacchi

[Easy]
HP darin -1
00:33:176 (1) - 这个重新拉下应该结束在这里00:34:604 -
00:35:216 (2,3) - 这里节奏重做，从00:35:420 - 开始的滑条到00:36:237 - 结束，当然实际上你只要复制00:33:176 (1) - 然后黏贴下就行了
00:39:706 (1,2) - 这里感觉莫名其妙，如果你跟的是伴奏那这里应该是做成一个完整的滑条，跟vocal这里vocal又没开始，像后面的00:42:972 (1,2) - 这个就不错，重新处理下
00:47:053 (1) - 往前1/2，如果你不想重新做这段的话
00:49:094 (3) - 往后1/2
01:18:890 (1,2,3,4) - easy难度我不建议这样重叠的排列
01:33:584 (4) - 放在x:408 y:316附近？

[GiNa's Normal]
00:06:441 (1) - clap in reverse slider
00:08:890 (5) - ^
00:53:992 (3,4) - ctrl+g？
01:02:359 (5) - Ummm...That sounds very strange,remove

[Hard]
AR-1
00:06:849 (2) - 滑条头clap
00:08:278 (6) - clap
00:09:094 (3) - 滑条头clap
00:35:931 (2) - 这个应该在00:36:033 -
00:43:176 - 为什么这里要空一段
00:45:216 (1) - ctrl+H一下然后移到原位？
00:51:543 (1,2,3) - 三个间距怎么不一样？
00:55:217 (1,2) - 前面的1到2间距都是1.0怎么这里突然变成1.2了？多不好看
01:03:584 (3,4,5) - 用NC区分下，我打到这莫名其妙
01:23:176 (1,2,3) - 1和3去掉，2往后1/2，然后01:23:380 - 加个circle，这个新加的circle记得NC
01:28:584 (1,2) - 1去掉，然后2放到1的位置开头，然后01:28:890 - add circle
01:31:747 (5,6,7,1) - 我觉得三连应该是6,7,1而不是现在的5,6,7
01:36:646 (5,1,2,3) - 5和1去了把前面的4复制下然后看情况放，至于后面的3也去了，当然如果你这么做这里一段要自己重新构思下怎么放不过也不难就是
01:41:544 (4,1) - 4和1换下位置？
01:43:788 (2,1) - 我觉得把1放在2的滑条尾的那位置不错

[D.N.Angel]
00:41:339 (1,2,3) - 去掉1，然后2,3都往前挪1/2，然后00:42:155 - add circle
00:44:604 (1,2,3) - ^ ，然后00:45:420 - add circle
00:47:869 (1,2,3) - ^ ，00:48:686 - add circle
01:13:584 (7,8,9) - 这里，这里我建议8去掉，然后9的开头放8的位置然后01:13:992 - add circle
01:14:604 (2,3) - ctrl+g？
01:26:033 (3,4) - 3和4位置换下？

good luck~

-xNaCLx-

363 posts

Joined April 2012

-xNaCLx- 2013-05-25T00:12:46+00:00

hi, taiko mod from my queue >.0

All of them are suggestions, ignore them if you dont like it.

[Muzu]
00:07:665 (3) - remove
01:05:829 - start kiai at here, because the second kiai also start at 01:18:890 (or you may adjust the second kiai)
01:12:359 - remove this green line as it is useless
01:12:461 - ^
01:15:216 (2) - k
01:18:482 (2) - D

[Oni]
00:31:645 (2) - delete
00:31:849 - add d/k
01:05:420 - for kiai time, same as muzu
01:12:359 - remove this green line
01:12:461 - ^

nice map..good luck to rank

yanlu

749 posts

Joined November 2010

Topic Starter

yanlu 2013-05-25T10:12:03+00:00

M桶

mintong89 wrote:
hi....你接受M4M么如果接的话, http://osu.ppy.sh/s/92028 thanks

Black: feel free to ignore
Blue: might consider
Red: Unrankable issue

[General]
Kiai Time 这里开始会比较好 01:05:829 - 我覺得現在的比較合適
不加静音的soft-sliderslide么嗯不加

[Hard]
AR-1, 太快了 ;w;

00:11:748 (4) - 感觉太弯了点, 00:11:135 (3) - 有这种就够了不...沒關西吧ˊ~ˋ
00:17:869 (2) - add a note to 00:16:850 (1) - slider end? 突然没放了不好玩 ?_?
00:39:910 (2) - 1和3之间距离不一样欸..真的耶lol! fixed
00:43:584 - add a note, vocal. 还有就是为啥这之前没放note啊 ...故意的呀; _;
01:09:094 (1) - 不需要NC吧換了前後的~
01:18:278 (4) - 如果你是跟vocal的这里NC然后后面的去掉 no :/
01:05:217 (4) - ^
01:45:421 (1) - 感觉会读错...建议放远点換了:/

好鬼畜! 距离问题好严重好多读不出啊感觉不是很好玩.. 难道是我太蠢了？ww lol

[Easy]

00:07:869 - 这里感觉不用whistle, 感觉加在00:09:502 - 会比较好好
00:20:931 (2) - 头部移上点
00:44:196 - 忘了放音效..吧？不是忘記..
00:49:094 (3) - 加whistle会比较好改了
GL

kajiyatta

kajiyatta wrote:
M4M request from your queue
[General]
almost suggestions
[Easy]
Placement
00:22:155(3) a bit cuved better since the flow seems more natural sure~
SPOILER
00:29:910(5,1) swap NC better hmm..no i keep that ><
Rhythm
00:56:033(1) double reverses seem difficult for newbie, delete 1 reverse and add a note instead?
SPOILER
01:33:584(4)^ i think about it...keep now
Hit Sonud
00:43:788(2) use Normal sound at head? too loud for me
[Hard]
Placement
01:03:584(3,4) for Hard I just suppose this spacing looks weird. you can use normal distant better no..i want it :/
01:16:033(2,3) if stacked, maybe move away better good~
SPOILER
Rhythm
01:38:278(1) sounds weird. you should follow the cymbal sound at 01:38:482 no..i like it now>_<
Hit Sonud
00:26:645(1) add finish ok
01:02:053(5) add finish at end instead next (1) ok
01:24:400(5) add whistle to follow the vocal kk

good luck and star~

也牛~

Sagisawa-Yukari wrote:

[General]
红色：必须遵守
蓝色：只是建议
请移除掉Taiko BG 欸已經移掉了吧..?
tags里添加：konami,bemani,GiNa。另外tags里的词都是拆分的，dj可以不要了，就留个yoshitaka就行了。另外请加上vocal，附上她的推特翻译成罗马音后添加到tags里 https://twitter.com/riznanacchi fixed

[Easy]
HP darin -1 唔..已經很低了耶>~<
00:33:176 (1) - 这个重新拉下应该结束在这里00:34:604 - 怎麼會...
00:35:216 (2,3) - 这里节奏重做，从00:35:420 - 开始的滑条到00:36:237 - 结束，当然实际上你只要复制00:33:176 (1) - 然后黏贴下就行了不太懂...
00:39:706 (1,2) - 这里感觉莫名其妙，如果你跟的是伴奏那这里应该是做成一个完整的滑条，跟vocal这里vocal又没开始，像后面的00:42:972 (1,2) - 这个就不错，重新处理下改了點~
00:47:053 (1) - 往前1/2，如果你不想重新做这段的话
00:49:094 (3) - 往后1/2 ^這樣是normal的節奏了..
01:18:890 (1,2,3,4) - easy难度我不建议这样重叠的排列好多人都建議...改掉了!
01:33:584 (4) - 放在x:408 y:316附近？不想改;w;

[Hard]
AR-1 ;w;
00:06:849 (2) - 滑条头clap no
00:08:278 (6) - clap no
00:09:094 (3) - 滑条头clap no...
00:35:931 (2) - 这个应该在00:36:033 - 我是強調00:35:931 - 裡面很明顯的音><
00:43:176 - 为什么这里要空一段 ~~是故意的.~~..好吧好多人噴;__;換掉了..
00:45:216 (1) - ctrl+H一下然后移到原位？
00:51:543 (1,2,3) - 三个间距怎么不一样？嗯...凸顯!
00:55:217 (1,2) - 前面的1到2间距都是1.0怎么这里突然变成1.2了？多不好看其實是1.0x>1.1>1.2漸變\:D/
01:03:584 (3,4,5) - 用NC区分下，我打到这莫名其妙 add~只是不知道會不會變成nc spam ;w;
01:23:176 (1,2,3) - 1和3去掉，2往后1/2，然后01:23:380 - 加个circle，这个新加的circle记得NC fixed
01:28:584 (1,2) - 1去掉，然后2放到1的位置开头，然后01:28:890 - add circle
01:31:747 (5,6,7,1) - 我觉得三连应该是6,7,1而不是现在的5,6,7 改了點~
01:36:646 (5,1,2,3) - 5和1去了把前面的4复制下然后看情况放，至于后面的3也去了，当然如果你这么做这里一段要自己重新构思下怎么放不过也不难就是也改了點
01:41:544 (4,1) - 4和1换下位置？ ok~
01:43:788 (2,1) - 我觉得把1放在2的滑条尾的那位置不错已改了2,3的位置~

good luck~

Thank you all for modding!! >A<

update~

DarknessAngel

2,237 posts

Joined May 2010

DarknessAngel 2013-05-25T14:25:37+00:00

@mintong89 - NC也可以用來強調跳的(:
@kajiyatta - NC fixed but yeah, that 1.5x slider is necessary for me :/
@Sagisawa-Yukari - 說個什麼原因讓我參考吧lol，要改的話肯定一堆部分remap...而且你要想想我那些部分就是固定這種節奏的orz。轉換的建議不甚喜歡，不採用sry ;w;

ty for mods !

http://puu.sh/30PtC.rar

GiNa

1,023 posts

Joined September 2010

GiNa 2013-05-26T01:11:52+00:00

Ye.
The laziest mapper in this map set is back LOL
http://puu.sh/31cXI

yanlu

749 posts

Joined November 2010

Topic Starter

yanlu 2013-05-26T07:52:31+00:00

update~! thank you w

waitting hoshi's reply >w<

hs714

257 posts

Joined March 2011

hs714 2013-05-26T13:23:05+00:00

Flower :3

Flower wrote:
Hi~m4m~

[General]
最后一个kiai莫名你可能需要咨询MAT/BAT

[Taiko]
Taiko-specific BG is not allowed now. Please change.
Short kiai for kiai fountain is also prohibited. Please remove them.
Muzukashii sounds kind of strange... Are you sure you follow the song?
Oni: 01:10:326 (1,1,1,2,1,2,1) - sounds like you are overmapping this part cause it is not the "highest" part of the song. maybe 01:08:694 - is better for such stream. if you insist on this pattern, I suggest you make more streams in the song to make the difficulty more average.
- thanks a lot! deleted short kiai green line. and 01:10:625 (2) - deleted this notes. I'm really thank you!

Good luck~

Thank you for your mod! Flower ✿

NewibornCLivee :3

NewibornCLivee wrote:
hi, taiko mod from my queue >.0

All of them are suggestions, ignore them if you dont like it.

[Muzu]
00:07:665 (3) - remove
01:05:829 - start kiai at here, because the second kiai also start at 01:18:890 (or you may adjust the second kiai) - Flower has pointed out the problems already! but thank you NewibornCLivee!
01:12:359 - remove this green line as it is useless
01:12:461 - ^
01:15:216 (2) - k - changed :3
01:18:482 (2) - D - nnn.. sorry.

[Oni]
00:31:645 (2) - delete - done~!
00:31:849 - add d/k - add k :3
01:05:420 - for kiai time, same as muzu - thanks
01:12:359 - remove this green line
01:12:461 - ^

nice map..good luck to rank

Thank you for your mod! NewibornCLivee <33

and sorry for late reply! yanlu channnn!! orz
Thank you PM message! (and twitter!) (*´∀｀)ﾉ

please (last?) update~

♥
Taiko Muzukashii: http://puu.sh/31vTU.osu
Taiko Oni: http://puu.sh/31vUj.osu

yanlu

749 posts

Joined November 2010

Topic Starter

yanlu 2013-05-27T04:18:07+00:00

(*´∀｀)ﾉupdateee~

Strawberry

osu! Alumni

1,536 posts

Joined October 2010

Strawberry 2013-06-09T03:51:49+00:00

yanlu

749 posts

Joined November 2010

Topic Starter

yanlu 2013-06-09T03:55:12+00:00

Thank you Strawberry~~♥

Nymph

osu! Alumni

3,243 posts

Joined December 2010

Nymph 2013-06-12T12:51:24+00:00

[Easy]
00:43:788 (2) - 前面结尾都做了normalhit当clap的梗这里放空是故意的么因为略突然

01:42:155 (2) - 也是建议继续使用hitsound

01:45:012 (1) - 跟音乐在红线转折更好一些这样拉白线听着略勉强

[Hard]
AR+1好读不少因为有几个遮挡梗AR7看着不舒服

00:43:788 (3,4,5) - 这里spacing杂乱了到底是想用多少呢这里1.0 1.2 1.1都有但是还看不出是故意使用的（像这种东西这个diff确实不少啊这里尤其看着明显一些间距细节没能统一就造成有的地方看起来杂乱了）

yanlu

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yanlu 2013-06-13T03:43:59+00:00

Nymph wrote:
[Easy]
00:43:788 (2) - 前面结尾都做了normalhit当clap的梗这里放空是故意的么因为略突然因為加了略吵...我放個綠線好了>.<

01:42:155 (2) - 也是建议继续使用hitsound fixed

01:45:012 (1) - 跟音乐在红线转折更好一些这样拉白线听着略勉强改了點~

[Hard]
AR+1好读不少因为有几个遮挡梗AR7看着不舒服嗯嗯

00:43:788 (3,4,5) - 这里spacing杂乱了到底是想用多少呢这里1.0 1.2 1.1都有但是还看不出是故意使用的（像这种东西这个diff确实不少啊这里尤其看着明显一些间距细节没能统一就造成有的地方看起来杂乱了） eh..改成1.1x了orz

Thank you Nymph~~

update!

Nymph

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Nymph 2013-06-13T10:20:31+00:00

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buhei

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buhei 2013-06-13T10:23:31+00:00