Pokie wrote:

Request from The Lazy Queue@がんばらない

Hello yanlu! A further modding here:

　General

1. Is that adding a tag for lovely song necessary? If not, I'd recommend to remove that. There's no need to have a customized tag for yourself. okay ;(
2. Timing is totally off'd on 01:07:903 - . Please apply rEdo's timing. And remind that don't forget a resnap after changes. fix
   

   rEdo wrote:

   751, 130.00 BPM
   67904, 120.00 BPM
   69137, 110.00 BPM

3. Pretty weird that you only have a silenced sliderslide for Normal set, please consider adding one for Soft set too. add

　Storyboard

1. Storyboard部份用中文說明好了(汗
2. 優化(?)了一下代碼… http://puu.sh/24Vwa 用這個代替現有的osb, SB Load應該不會有超過5.00的地方了… (替代後請刪除BLACK.png) 恩~非常感謝!
3. 製作Storyboard時請避免使用Black覆蓋無需使用的背景, 這樣會佔用2.00的SB Load.
   
   • - 在背景layer加一條這樣的代碼可以去掉背景, 需要使用到背景的時候再另外加進去

Sprite,Background,TopLeft,"BG.jpg",0,0

:OO (還是不會用囧"..

1. 唔…為何Light -2.png的代碼裡會有一行Rotate效果? 建議刪除 (目前使用Rotate會導致在寬屏的位置也顯示出storyboard元件…)
2. 00:59:827 - 這裡明明是同一句歌詞, 但卻fade out了 orz …將lyrics 12.png分成will reveal our / golden day 兩張圖? 恩..其實是故意的orz

　Easy

1. Slider tick rate 1 should be enough for Easy difficulty.
   00:03:981 (3,1) - Adding a whistle on downbeat wasn't nice, please swap the whistle just like how you did on 00:07:674 (4,1) -
   00:09:751 (3) - (slider's head) To keep the consistency with 00:02:366 (2) - and 00:06:058 (3) - , add a whistle here?
   00:11:366 - Consider adding a circle/slider with whistle, instead of leave it blank?
   
   
   01:03:520 (1) - I-I tried to shape this but it took over 15 minutes Dx
   
   SPOILER

   

266,187,63520,6,4,P|311:164|331:140|360:95|342:40|288:36|254:75|254:75|224:36|171:40|150:100|189:147|197:149,1,400,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0

　Normal

• 00:28:443 (5) - For the slider's end, seems there's no point for ending this slider at such timing point. Please extend it by 1/2 beat (00:29:366 - )
  01:03:520 (1) - Wha- again?! Well thanks god that we've a scale tool.
  
  SPOILER

  

265,187,63520,6,4,P|305:166|323:145|349:104|333:55|284:51|254:86|254:86|227:51|179:55|160:109|195:151|202:153,1,350,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0

　Hard

• 00:27:981 (6,7,8) - If you ever wanted to add triples here, please don't leave 00:27:404 (4) - blank.
  00:31:674 (5) - Just to let you know that rhythms aren't even according with the music, I could say it's totally off'd here...Please use this rhythm instead of the current one.
  
  00:35:827 (1) - If you're trying to follow vocal, please move this slider to 00:35:597 - . (I've fixed the pattern for you until 00:38:135 (4) - )

320,300,35597,6,0,P|304:264|328:228|328:228|356:192|340:148,1,160,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
213,53,36289,1,8,0:0:0
256,176,36520,1,0,0:0:0
293,51,36751,1,0,0:0:0
189,129,36981,1,0,0:0:0
319,127,37212,1,8,0:0:0
257,176,37443,5,0,0:0:0
257,208,37558,1,0,0:0:0
253,240,37674,2,0,P|245:284|257:316,1,80,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
338,337,38135,1,8,0:0:0

• 00:39:520 (1) - Swap the whistle to 00:39:058 (6) - 's slider's end.
  00:45:751 (5,1,3) - (slider's head) Kind of ridiculous that you've added plenty soft/normal finishs through the chorus part, but missing them here. Please add finishs to both slider's head properly.
  00:49:905 (4) - Same suggestion with 00:31:674 (fixed until 00:51:751 - )

424,236,49904,2,0,P|460:256|498:256,1,80
316,244,50366,6,0,P|240:192|172:192,1,160,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
136,296,51058,1,2,0:0:0
76,212,51289,1,2,0:0:0
48,236,51404,1,0,0:0:0
28,268,51520,1,2,0:0:0
64,349,51751,1,0,0:0:0

• 00:53:135 (3) - ^ (fixed until 00:54:058 (1) - )

344,296,53135,2,0,P|328:236|348:184,1,120
372,160,53597,2,0,P|396:128|400:88,1,80,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
343,27,54058,6,0,P|308:55|314:101|314:101|269:178,1,160,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0

fix =A=
(愛心修的好漂亮喔...我都拉的不好看;w;

That's all, good luck

neonat wrote:

Minor suggestions.

Hard

00:28:327 - add a note (you can hear in the background) no..
00:33:635 - add a note (I think it would be nicer rather than just starting when the vocals do) ^
00:39:058 (6,1) - try this rhythm? (emphasizes 00:39:289 -) better but i have another way..fix now~

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Love the song I love it too

Zhengster wrote:

Hello! This is M4M from your queue. I hope you find my mod helpful, but i'm a newbie mapper and still learning D: Take these as suggestions~

[Easy]
01:03:520 (1)- I think the heart shape could be improved how..i think it's good enough now :/

[Normal]
00:27:289 - add note nop..it'll be harder
00:35:366 - ^
01:00:520 - ^
01:03:520 (1) - Heart shape could be improved same as easy :/

[Hard]
00:02:135 (4,5) - Consider switching these two to fit better with the music hmm..it's fine i think
00:10:442 (7,8) - move to the next white tick ..? I can't understand your mean =A=
0:26:597 (10)- NC, remove NC from 00:26:827 (1) change nc before like now..i think no to change again ><
01:08:654 - add note no..

Goodluck on your maapppp

tony8128 wrote:

Sorry for the late mod
The music is great~ And I like your mapping style

[SB]
The first picture seems to be appearing suddenly from pitch black. Consider changing to some fade-in effect.

[Easy]
01:10:227 (2) - This clap seems a bit strange... Change it to whistle and remove the whistle on the end seems better.
01:03:520 (1) - You can try this: First make a symmetry pattern of a heart with lower grid level, without considering the length. Then use "Scale by..." in the "Edit" menu to adjust its length, using the largest possible number. The shape will look better that way.

Btw, b/178353 in this map on Nogard diff, at 03:27:404 there is a good example of heart-shaped slider. You can take that as a reference.

[Normal]
00:02:366 (3) - The clap on the end is a bit inconsistent to the music... How about changing to whistle?
00:07:212 (5) - ^
00:14:597 (5) - ^
01:03:520 (1) - Same as Easy


[Hard]
OD 6? Maybe +1 would be better... (I SSed on the first try)
Flows are great.

00:10:904 (10) - Move the whistle to the beginning (optional)
00:14:135 (5) - Add a clap here
00:14:597 (8) - Remove this clap (optional)
00:18:289 (3) - Add a whistle on the beginning
01:10:227 (4) - Maybe adding a whistle sounds better...

Frostmourne wrote:

ok

SPOILER

General
sorry for inconvenience
for the only 1st offset (751) , change it to 756(+5) since it's a bit early , don't need to touch the other offsets
don't forget to resnap all green lines, preview time,SB and notes
I'm sorry for inconvenience really ;_;

Easy
00:54:981 (1) - remove this NC and add NC here instead 00:56:135 (5) - , it makes sense better since it follows the phrase in the song

Normal
00:32:366 (1) - add clap for the head of this slider too , as you hear , it sounds the exactly same as the tail of this slider so it will work correspondingly better too
00:33:058 (2) - this finish is weird , you shouldn't let the pre-part (a part before the kiai) be the more important part than kiai part
you should emphasis the kiai part best , so what I suggest is you should lower volume this note to 30% or lower than this
so the finish at 00:33:981 (1) - will stand out and fit the song perfectly

Hard
I find AR7 play better , the thing is the way you map , you didn't put jumps everywhere + the song itself is quite calm. so AR7 fits the song much better
00:32:139 (1) - this new combo is weird , when players play on this part, they might feel a bit astonished (at least to me) so I suggest you remove NC here
and keep long combo like you did in other points in this diff
00:51:524 (5) - without this whistle sounds much better because it doubles with 00:51:293 (3) - and it feels strange
01:01:447 (7) - finish?
01:02:139 (1) - ^
as I heard from the music, and this is the very end of the song so adding them will fit better

let me know when you have fixed this

no kudosu (you gave me for the timing fixes before)

Loneight wrote:

Hi~
Request from PM but sorry for late.

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• 
  "re" is means "remove"
  Black is just suggestion, if you don't like , you can skip it
  Blue is recommended to fix
  red is unrankable issue

[general]

1. for SB, it is weird that sb1.jpg suddenly appear on 00:00:751 - , try to use fade to get it slowly appear ok

[Easy]

1. Useless green line:
   00:33:520 -
   
   
2. 00:00:751 (1) - re finish at start, because music should start at a quite sound, add nothing would be better for music, don't you feel weird because of the finish?>~< nop:/
3. 00:08:135 (1) - same as ^, there also add nothing would be better, finish is too weird for there :/
4. 00:21:981 (4) - I think there flow isn't comfortable, try to ctrl+j, ctrl+h, ctrl+g and move to x:168 y:288, would be much smoother. If you change, remember to fix 00:22:904 (1) - distance
5. 00:54:981 (1,2) - swap NC, I feel there vocal is same as 00:40:443 (4,5,1) - , but NC is different.
6. 01:03:520 (1) - slidertick is too loud for there, why don't you make there like Hard? try to reduce volume because there is quite place
7. 01:09:404 (1) - unsnapped slider (end)

nice diff !~

[Normal]

1. Useless green line:
   01:03:058 -
   01:03:174 -
   
   
2. 00:00:751 (1) - same as Easy, also 00:08:135 (1) - :/
3. 00:29:827 (2) - add clap to make 00:28:443 (5,1,2) - have a hierarchical sense
4. 00:33:058 (2) - this finish is too weird for music, try to use Drum-clap, I think would be very suitable xD
5. 00:40:212 (1,4) - swap NC, why don't you make NC like Easy? I think NC should on 00:41:366 (4) - because have stress or make 00:41:366 (4,5) - length same as 00:43:212 (1,2,3) - . also 00:54:981 (1,3) - like there (I also think it is still readable)
6. 00:59:827 (3,1) - swap NC, I think there vocal like 00:45:058 (1,4) - 's part
7. 01:03:520 (1) - same as Easy

good diff :3!

[Hard]

1. AR is not suitable for this diff, it feels faster a bit. try to -1, would be much better for the diff ok
   
   
2. 00:18:981 (1,3) - swap NC, stress is on 00:19:212 (3) -
3. 00:26:597 (10,1) - same as ^, because I feel stress is on 00:26:597 (10) -
4. 00:31:904 (6,1) - I think 00:32:135 (1) -'s start dosen't follow anything with music, only could follow approachcircle to hit, and weird rhythm for me, try this rhythm want to keep ;w;
5. 00:33:058 (4) - same as Normal
6. 00:33:751 (1,3) - swap NC, because 00:33:981 (3) - have a stress or kiai time's start-time
7. 00:51:289 (3) - re whistle, because too many soft-finish sound make noisy , and 00:51:981 (7) - add whistle at start to make a new rhythm with 00:51:058 (2,3,5) -
8. 00:58:674 - add a note, I think would be better for rhythm or more readable
9. 01:07:904 (3) - I feel weird on 01:08:154 - , can't hear anything to follow, try this

smooth SV for this diff ~ good ! only AR is a bit fast

good luck for rank~! lulu >w<!
star~

Frostmourne wrote:

Recheck
Offset 67904 (01:07:904 (3) - this note in Hard) change to 67909 , please resnap all notes in between 01:07:909 to 01:09:409 interval as well
(also snap something before 67909 such as 01:07:217 (2) - in Easy diff too

Easy
01:01:217 (2) - shorten this slider end at 01:01:448 (1/2 back) because there is no music supporting at the next 1/2 beat
also it's not too hard for the beginner I believe

Normal
00:56:602 (4) - NC
00:57:986 (1) - remove NC
00:59:832 (5) - NC
01:02:140 (1) - remove NC
^ these are for better look and you can see that it makes sense more than before (the new NC will follow the new phrase accordingly)

no kd

Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB\Flash.png",320,240
 F,0,7679,8140,0,1
 M,0,8025,,320,240
 S,0,8025,,1.343358
 F,0,8140,8371,1,0

Saturos-fangirl wrote:

[Easy]
00:21:294 (3) - I would shorten this by half a beat to match the piano and preserve the 1 beat between clicks. Otherwise, you would have to change 4 so that it is not half a beat's distance from this end nop

[Normal]
looks good

[Hard]
00:10:332 (7) - why the random note in the middle? Nothing in the music calls for it. oh..dele
00:14:486 (7) - ^ ^
00:27:409 (5,8) - ^ having random extra notes in your song isn't usually a good mapping practice. no dele this >_<