[Relaxing]
00:06:21 (1) - try a different hitsound. as in replace all whistles with something else in this intro here
00:11:39 (1) - kinda ugly
the map feels very jerky starting at 00:12:13 (2)
00:18:42 (3) - getting better now
00:23:42 (2) - start 1/2 later
00:24:90 (1,2,3) - feels stuttery
00:31:01() - please explain why you're missing a note at the high point of the line?
00:38:78 (2) - kill the repeat
00:43:97 (8) - finish
00:59:52 (2) - kill the whistles on this and all others. or at least most of the whistles cus they sound TERRIBLE
01:05:81 (1,2,3) - if youre going to do this, add another note 1/2 before red 1
01:19:51 (3,8) - finish
01:25:43 (2) - ^
01:26:54 (2) - louder plz
01:40:24 (2) - finish
01:43:20 (2) - ^ etc.
[osuplayer mix]
00:06:21 (1) - try a different hitsound
00:26:20 (3) - hitsound this and remove whistles from 4
actually i would say at this point itd be best if you just removed all of the whistles from your map cus they sound that bad
00:44:71 (6) - hitsound the last two hits
00:55:81 (7) - finish
00:57:11 (2) - i will never understand why you like putting minute turns at the end of your sliders, but they tend to disturb the flow of your map
01:08:96 (2) - sounds awkward
01:11:36 (1) - finish the start
01:12:84 (1) - ^ etc.
01:22:47 (5) - finish
01:26:17 (2,3,4,5,6) - sounds really awkward
01:40:24 (2) - finish
01:52:45 (1,2,3) - remove some whistling (throughout section)
02:02:82 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - doesnt fit the song
02:12:81 (6,8) - try finish instead
02:15:77 (3) - finish
02:18:74 (6) - ^
02:19:11 (7) - new combo and remove from next note
02:22:25 (7) - stacking
02:20:22 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - clapspam
02:30:58 (7) - finish
02:39:47 (6) - ^
02:47:05 (4) - bad place for a finish
02:54:27 (2) - finish
[Edward]
00:07:37 (1) - remove whistle
00:05:88 (1) - try a finish on these instead
also two things 1. all of those short spinners like that are really a dick move and 2. you need more hitsounds (although i suggest staying away from normal whistle cus it doesnt match the song at all)
00:26:57 (9) - improper bpm change
00:29:90 (3) - why the slight turn at the end?
00:41:01 (7) - finish
00:55:44 (5) - NO. This is a highly confusing slider and not rankable
00:55:86 (1,1) - why are these separate?
ok at this point im going to have to say...you arent using spinners correctly. first, youre using far too many (think about the poor player) and second, you keep putting them in dick places that make it nearly impossible to both 300 and hit the notes on either end. please correct this.
01:14:32 (1,2,3,4,5) - repetitive much?
01:22:10 (3) - finish the end
01:30:98 (3) - ^
01:48:75 (5) - illegal
01:57:63 (1,1,1) - excellent example of how not to use spinners
02:02:45 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4) - whistlespam
02:15:77 (4) - finish
02:39:47 (5) - ^
02:49:46 (1) - center between 2,3
[EEeee]
intro feels a bit jerky but no specific comments
hit volume is a bit low, actually
needs more hitsounds
00:46:93 (1) - unintuitive bpm change
00:55:81 (1) - delete and replace break (and all other breaks)
01:10:44 (2,3,4,5) - clusterfucky
01:28:39 (3) - finish
01:40:24 (1) - unintuitive bpm change
02:12:44 (2,1,2,3,4,5) - def. needs hitsounds all through here
yeah other than the quantity of hitsounds this is by far the best diff yet
[crazy]
00:11:39 (1) - remove finish
00:18:05 (5) - unintuitive bpm change
00:19:54 (10) - ^ etc.
00:26:20 (3) - ^
00:57:29 (1) - ^
01:07:66 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - wtf@incorrectly spaced clusterfuck. this is not possible to read
01:28:76 (2) - remove whistle
01:37:64 (2) - ^
01:42:27 (1) - higher hitvolume plz
02:10:78 (2,4) - remove whistle
02:24:66 (5) - unintuitive bpm change
02:42:43 (1) - hitvolume too low
also whistles are just a hair too much, remove a few plz
02:55:75 (1) - unintuitive bpm change
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