Mod from Kyshiro's and Ayu's modding queue.
[Insane]
General:- I see your map is in WIP, so I'll not mention stuff about the mapset.
- I will treat your difficulty as if it is 100% complete.- Your map does not have a preview point yet, please use one. Suggestion: 01:11:884
- Use an Overall Diffulty of 8.
- Use an HP Drain Rate of 7.
Timing Points:01:33:312 - This kiai is not placed on a downbeat, move it to 01:33:484.
01:32:370 - Same for this kiai end, please move it to either 01:32:455 or 01:31:770
There are also some unsnapped inherited (green) sections, you should re-snap these.
00:06:067 - snap to 00:06:055.
00:06:367 - snap to 00:06:355.
00:22:182 - snap to 00:22:170.
00:26:296 - snap to 00:26:284.
00:28:010 - snap to 00:27:998.
00:28:182 - snap to 00:28:170.
00:39:153 - snap to 00:39:141.
00:50:124 - snap to 00:50:112.
01:55:131 - snap to 01:55:127.
Placement:00:04:341 (1) - I don't hear any clear beats or whatever here, so are you REALLY sure you want to 'overmap' with this slider?
00:06:741 (1,2,3,4,5) - Maybe flip this entire combo vertically? It will create a better flow and thus nicer to play.
00:12:912 (3) - This slider is ugly and you shouldn't use any slider made in this style. Try to make something like a blanket over 00:12:741 (2).
00:15:998 (1) - Has an inconsistent spacing with 00:16:170 (2,3,4,5,6,7).
00:16:170 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - Are you sure of this? I feel like this little pattern could rather turn into something neat, use your creativity! Maybe use more sliders, etc. Have an example of what I'd do:
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/58797300:19:770 (6) - Try to make this wave more symmetrical.
00:29:884 (8) - Another slider that shouldn't be made in this style. Try to be more creative!
00:31:255 (2) - The curve of this slider is greater than 00:30:741 (1), so it's placed rather strange. Either move it to a completely other location, or make it less curvy.
00:32:712 (8) - Another slider that shouldn't be made in this style. Try to be more creative!
00:35:884 (6) - Use a New Combo here.
00:36:570 (10) - This seems like a nice blanket, but is placed 1 grid too high.
No, this isn't nazi. Currently it's not a blanket, because of an unecessary overlap. Move it down one grid to fix it.
00:38:112 (3) - Another slider that shouldn't be made in this style. Try to be more creative!
00:39:741 (3,4) - Has a greater spacing than 00:39:484 (2,3), please use the same spacing.
00:40:341 - Maybe make this combo like this:
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/587987 - Currently the flow is pretty weak, so try to change it.
00:51:484 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) & 00:54:227 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - These combo's don't have any sliders, try to use one or more!
00:56:970 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - 00:59:712 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - Same as mentioned above.
00:50:112 - From here till 01:06:141: This place feels like it could use way more creativity. Maybe try to use more sliders, less randomized patterns and more.
01:07:812 (6) - Unsnapped slider (end).
01:12:484 (7) - Move this to X:36 and Y:312
01:12:570 (8) - Move this to X:112 and Y:332
01:14:798 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Use the same pattern as 01:12:055 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8) -
01:19:427 (3) - Flip this slider horizontally for a better flow.
01:20:284 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Another ugly stream, use the same suggestion as before.
01:21:484 (10) - Overlaps 01:21:055 (8) unnecessary, either move the slider or move (8).
01:23:027 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - Should be more curvy.
01:32:112 (1,2,3,4) - Try to be more creative with this square jump, for example rotate it 45 degrees.
01:37:084 (11) - There should be a note at 01:37:255, so change this slider in either a 1/4 slider with a kickback, or a slider with a note after.
01:49:941 (17) - Ugly overlap with (15) and (16), also try to put a New Combo somewhere in this combo, because 17 is just too many.
02:08:112 (4,1) - Switch the New Combo.
02:07:084 (1) - Remove New Combo.
02:08:970 (4,5,6) - Use a kickback slider here, like you did before.
02:10:341 (3,4,5) - Same as the suggestion above.
02:22:855 (4) - This slider is ugly and you shouldn't use any slider made in this style.
02:27:312 (6) - Add a New Combo.
02:29:370 (11) - Add a New Combo.
02:51:398 (4,5) - Has a greater spacing than 02:51:141 (3,4) - , please use the same spacing.
02:59:198 (6) - Same suggestion as before, move the blanket so (5)'s Approach Circle allign's with the Slider Border.
03:11:541 (2) - Consider adding a NC here, since this note follows a spinner.
03:14:627 (15) - Flip Horizontally and Vertically, after that move it back. This is to create a better flow.
03:24:912 (11,12,13,14,15) - Spaced very weird.
03:30:441 (6) - Unsnapped slider (end).
04:12:570 (1,2) - incosistent spacing, please space it wider.
04:12:570 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,1,2,3,4,5) - This feels really linear and really needs to be mapped more well. Use some more creativity, make stuff more curvy, make some neat patterns with a great flow.
This mod took me something like an hour, so I'd be very pleased if you could reply to this mod when you denied something and why you did. Thanks.
. Tell me when you know what diff you'll map :p .