Athena Tennos wrote:

u guys all became to red name!...omg...

1. 00:11:038 (1) - 这里你不用抓嘉文问了 嘉文对抓spinner这件时间简直情有独钟
   我的图就是因为这样被要求re的 我觉得去掉了也不好 跟Easy一样的结束时间比较好呢
2. 00:15:449 (3) - 唔这里怎么听都觉得很奇怪 建议是折返一下跟vocal
3. 00:55:155 (1) - 这边的spinner去掉 在00:56:037 - 加一个1/1的折返滑条
4. 01:09:052 (3) - Remove 总觉得01:08:170 - 这里才应该加note呢
5. 01:42:802 (1) - 这里节奏对不上啊喂……怎么看都很违和
   
6. 01:48:317 (3,4) - 也是十分违和……不介意的话都去掉吧【逃
7. 01:49:861 (1) - 也是十分牵强
   
8. 01:57:582 (2) - 考虑1/2来回滑条妈
9. 02:05:743 (1) - 同上
10. 02:19:640 (3) - 同上
11. 02:51:405 - 加个圈?

Zero__wind wrote:

I admit that the gap from the current Normal to Hard is sharp so I will rename the Normal as Easy and add an additional Normal inbetween soon

Shiro wrote:

Zero__wind wrote:

I admit that the gap from the current Normal to Hard is sharp so I will rename the Normal as Easy and add an additional Normal inbetween soon

That is all you needed to do! oh glad to see you again

Regarding Hard:
00:35:302 (6,2) - confusing because the second slider is hidden under the first one. I don't think this would be acceptable in an Insane, let alone in a Hard - you could try to turn (6) around so that it doesn't cover (2) anymore no I actually don't think that 6 would ever totally overlap 2, when you're about to click, 6 has already disappeared. yet I changed this one as it could be easily achieved
00:41:258 (2,1) - same I rotated 1 by a certain degree and it should be better now, I know it's still kinda overlapped, but I think there's no other proper place for it to stay
I see you have made it easier, which is good. I personally (I insist: personally) think this is ok, although there are too many triples to my taste. yes it's a bit much, at the end, because I originally wanted to make the later kiais harder than the former as the song goes stronger (also for Collab) should still be acceptable though

Regarding the Collab:
00:29:126 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - this kind of rhythm, which you use a lot, is nowhere to be found in the song. It doesn't exactly fit its calm and quiet nature either. Simpler streams (3 and 5 notes) would fit much better. No, I'd say, definitely. as you may know or not, I've NEVER been a mapper who will cassually throw inexistent streams everywhere. I mapped them like this because I think and I'm really sure that there are keyboard sounds which form rhythms like this. plz really ask some other people if you still think it's wrong, or use a better earphone or anything. you make like this, or not, but as it's in the music, it shouldn't be denied and forbidden.
00:47:435 (3,4,1) - please make these a proper triangle =( okie
01:10:155 (1,2) - this goes against the song - the emphasized beat is 01:10:596 - which is a sliderend in the map. It's the same problem as those 2 and 4-note streams I pointed out earlier same thing (as you said)
01:11:699 (3,4) - super duper mega ultra nazi but they aren't perfectly stacked fixed
01:27:361 (2,3,4,5,6) - This kind of spacing is really confusing, it looks like (2,3) is a 1/2 gap, while it's not. fixed all this kind of spacing in the part
The song repeats itself a lot and so does the map (which is good, in a way), so what I pointed out above applies to a lot of different spots across the whole diff

The main problem with this map is the overuse of 1/4 that are nowhere to be found in the song, whether it be in the Hard or in the Collab.
abused or not, that's something rather subjective, as long as those beats do exisit in the music. like it or not, that's something even more subjective, without the diff spread issue, I hope this whole set is better-rankable now and would NOT be unranked again
don't kd this

Sharlo wrote:

一直掉线没法IRC啊orz

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1. 00:11:038 (1) - 这里你不用抓嘉文问了 嘉文对抓spinner这件时间简直情有独钟
   我的图就是因为这样被要求re的 我觉得去掉了也不好 跟Easy一样的结束时间比较好呢 统统美丽
2. 00:15:449 (3) - 唔这里怎么听都觉得很奇怪 建议是折返一下跟vocal 嘛 因为跟伴奏的 感觉跟vocal的话1/2的节奏会太密
3. 00:55:155 (1) - 这边的spinner去掉 在00:56:037 - 加一个1/1的折返滑条 嗯spinner几个都改了
4. 01:09:052 (3) - Remove 总觉得01:08:170 - 这里才应该加note呢 偶像书得很对！我一开始做的时候类似的地方都加了note的 然后做完发现2.26星……美丽 只好删了一下降到2.25 不然怕又要被教做人
5. 01:42:802 (1) - 这里节奏对不上啊喂……怎么看都很违和
   
6. 01:48:317 (3,4) - 也是十分违和……不介意的话都去掉吧【逃
7. 01:49:861 (1) - 也是十分牵强
   
8. 01:57:582 (2) - 考虑1/2来回滑条妈 关系不大
9. 02:05:743 (1) - 同上
10. 02:19:640 (3) - 同上
11. 02:51:405 - 加个圈?

歌好治愈就是BG不萌哭了 求萌bg

1. 00:11:038 (1,1) - You might get your head bitten off from this? | Delete 00:13:905 (1) - and you should have enough room after the spinner. Another suggestion is to end the spinner back where Easy ends.
2. 00:57:361 (1) - I'm worried about this as well. | Two suggestions. 1) Remove the spinner and map through the spinner. The spinner in the below image started 1/2 after (3)
   
   2) Delete 00:57:361 (1) - | I still recommend using suggestion 1) as it's a bit strange to start a kiai on a spinner end.
3. 02:05:743 (1) - Same ^
4. 03:16:332 (1) - Same thing as above. | If this isn't a problem, then I suggest moving 03:18:537 (1) - closer to the center so it's easier for the player to recover.
   
   Edit: I had an outdated version I was modding at this time. The spinners are fine now. Oops!
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5. 01:09:052 (3) - / 01:23:170 (3) - / 02:19:640 (3) - / 02:33:758 (3) - / 03:30:228 (3) - / 03:44:347 (3) - All of these circles don't really feel dominant enough to deserve their own circle. If you delete any of these notes and listen to the song, you'll quickly see that they really aren't important and not worth their own circle. Most of the stuff you map slider-heads or circles to are vocals/important sounds in this diff. A slider-end is fine (like in the majority of your other diffs besides a few times) | This is optional but I think they could be changed to implement a slider end or just deleted.
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6. 00:26:037 (2) - Missing whistle on head.
7. 00:27:582 - your hard diff might be missing a whistle here?
8. 00:53:170 (6) - Balance this at x469 y147 | The note touches (1) but is spaced from (5)
9. 01:51:405 (2) - Missing whistle (check hard. insane doesn't map to this though, so maybe remove from hard?)
10. 01:58:685 (4,5) - To maintain your pattern like 00:48:096 (3) - Try using a 3/4 reverse slider here. It actually fits pretty well here even if it's slightly different sounding.
11. 02:35:302 (2,3) - Control+G? Moving downwards feels more natural here instead of right.
12. 03:07:067 (2) - x211 y153 to even up the noticeable distance spacing gap.
13. 03:15:890 (4) - x334 y297 to make a perfect diamond.
14. 03:40:155 (3) - Try making this a straight slider like 03:41:037 (5) - | The first thing that caught my eyes was the curve from the (3) not really supporting the (4) Try something like this | http://puu.sh/blVOx.jpg

Lanturn wrote:

Normal diff mod coming up. No KD.

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I'm a bit worried about the spinners in your Easy/Normal diffs now. with Easy recommending about a 4/1 gap and normal being 2/1 though I'm not sure if this applies to this because it's under 160bpm. (I need to verify with a QAT on this.) I'll leave suggestions on how you can fix these in Normal for now. It might not be an issue though.

1. 00:11:038 (1,1) - You might get your head bitten off from this? | Delete 00:13:905 (1) - and you should have enough room after the spinner. Another suggestion is to end the spinner back where Easy ends.
2. 00:57:361 (1) - I'm worried about this as well. | Two suggestions. 1) Remove the spinner and map through the spinner. The spinner in the below image started 1/2 after (3)
   
   2) Delete 00:57:361 (1) - | I still recommend using suggestion 1) as it's a bit strange to start a kiai on a spinner end.
3. 02:05:743 (1) - Same ^
4. 03:16:332 (1) - Same thing as above. | If this isn't a problem, then I suggest moving 03:18:537 (1) - closer to the center so it's easier for the player to recover.
   
   Edit: I had an outdated version I was modding at this time. The spinners are fine now. Oops! yeah~ spinners resolved
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5. 01:09:052 (3) - / 01:23:170 (3) - / 02:19:640 (3) - / 02:33:758 (3) - / 03:30:228 (3) - / 03:44:347 (3) - All of these circles don't really feel dominant enough to deserve their own circle. If you delete any of these notes and listen to the song, you'll quickly see that they really aren't important and not worth their own circle. Most of the stuff you map slider-heads or circles to are vocals/important sounds in this diff. A slider-end is fine (like in the majority of your other diffs besides a few times) | This is optional but I think they could be changed to implement a slider end or just deleted. changed all these, tough work though
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6. 00:26:037 (2) - Missing whistle on head. added
7. 00:27:582 - your hard diff might be missing a whistle here? lol yay
8. 00:53:170 (6) - Balance this at x469 y147 | The note touches (1) but is spaced from (5) fixed
9. 01:51:405 (2) - Missing whistle (check hard. insane doesn't map to this though, so maybe remove from hard?) removed from Hard actually
10. 01:58:685 (4,5) - To maintain your pattern like 00:48:096 (3) - Try using a 3/4 reverse slider here. It actually fits pretty well here even if it's slightly different sounding. not really fitting in here like the former point
11. 02:35:302 (2,3) - Control+G? Moving downwards feels more natural here instead of right. changed that part totally
12. 03:07:067 (2) - x211 y153 to even up the noticeable distance spacing gap. ok
13. 03:15:890 (4) - x334 y297 to make a perfect diamond. done
14. 03:40:155 (3) - Try making this a straight slider like 03:41:037 (5) - | The first thing that caught my eyes was the curve from the (3) not really supporting the (4) Try something like this | http://puu.sh/blVOx.jpg ok good

Good luck getting this reranked :3