UnitedWeSin wrote:

Star because you pick awesome music. (:
I'll mod later if u want. :3

Gabe wrote:

I will be able to look at the hitsounds when I come back from school

1. If you want to, you could add a slidertick clap for offbeat claps that fall in the middle of a slider. This would be nice to have, especially on the easy diff because we miss out on so many claps due to long sliders.
   
   
2. You custom soft whistle is pretty much inaudible...... It would have been nice to have some default soft whistles imo, but it doesn't really matter.

1. 03:13:689 (1) - The rhythm here really feels bad imo because the long repeating sliders are ending at strange places in the music that aren't very accented. Plus just having these long repeating sliders is a bit boring considering this is essentially the climax of the song. Can I recommend a different rhythm?
   
   
   Shorten the 03:13:689 (1) so that it ends at 03:15:144. Have a circle at 03:15:507 and a 1/1 slider at 03:15:871. Then extend the 03:16:599 (1) so that its repeat hits at 03:17:871 on the red tick where the finish is in the music. You could add a finish there then. That would be a much nicer rhythm for the most important kiai time here.
   
   
2. 03:42:053 (3,3) - You should avoid 1/2 sliders like this in an easy diff. It would be better to me if you replaced these with 1/1 sliders instead.

1. 01:11:507 (1) - The finish at the end hits after the one in the music so it's sort of noisy and sounds bad. To fix, I'd recommend using the same rhythm here that you do at 02:27:144 (1,2). That way you could have a finish on the head of the 2 on the red tick.
   
   
2. 02:15:507 (1) - Remove the clap from the end because it isn't hitting along with the music and breaks your patterns.
   
   
3. 02:17:326 (2) - Remove the clap from the slider body and add one to the head to follow offbeat claps here.
   
   
4. 02:28:416 (2) - You can add a finish here on the head, it hits nicely with the vocals.

1. 00:07:325 (1) - The finish in the music doesn't actually happen until 00:07:507. I recommend moving this slider to there. Sure the vocals hit at 00:07:325 but they hit before the band crashes in and it feels really weird in play when that happens in the middle of the slider. That way it would be much easier to read the 00:08:416 (2,3,4) because the 1 would end on the red tick, and the 2 is on a red tick. It would be consistent with the polarity pattern that you have setup with everything up to this point.
   
   
2. 01:34:780 (1,2) - I don't think this placement is a good idea. The 2's repeat arrow is hidden partially under the slider track. It would be better to place them differently imo.
   
   
3. 02:38:779 (5) - Don't you want to NC here like you do at 01:23:144 (1)? o.o

1. 00:38:416 (3) - Fits the music better if you add a clap to the head and remove the one from the repeat.
   
   
2. 00:48:053 (2) - Missing clap on the end I believe.
   
   
3. 01:22:052 (4) - It would sound nicer if you reduce the volume of the repeat and the end of this slider when the band cuts out and we just have vocals. It's no noisy. ;_;
   
   
4. 01:34:780 (1) - Finish on the head just like 00:19:144 (1)? Either add it or remove it at both spots.
   
   
5. 01:44:235 - It would be better to make the jump in volume more gradual imo. Right now the 01:44:415 (2) is considerably louder than the previous slider but the music hasn't changed much so it sounds bad.
   
   
6. 01:54:052 (3) - Again, fits better imo to add a clap to the head and remove the clap from the repeat.
   
   
7. 02:38:053 - Same as 01:22:052 (4).
   
   
8. 02:57:689 (3) - Fits better to remove the clap from the end at add it to the repeat because the clap happens on the red tick in the music there.
   
   
9. 03:15:871 (4) - Missing clap on the end?
   
   
10. 03:31:871 (2) - You could add a clap to the head and tail of this slider, it would fit nicely imo.
    
    
11. 03:39:507 (4) - Clap would be nice here to be in pattern with 03:36:962 (1,2,3).
    
    
12. 03:40:416 (2) - Add a clap to the end to hit with the pattern in the music.
    
    
13. 03:41:325 (3) - Remove clap from head and add to repeat.
    
    
14. 03:42:052 (4) - Clap on the end.

1. 00:39:871 (1) - Useless NC here, I don't see a reason for it at all please remove it. 00:39:507 (1,1,2,3,4) is all the same vocal phrase.
   
   
2. 01:55:507 (1) - Useless NC again, better to remove imo.
   
   
3. 02:21:325 (1,2) - Hmm, why break spacing here? Maybe make it 1.2 like the rest of the section and just make the 2 a straight slider.
   
   
   
   
4. 03:15:689 (6,7,8) - Looks cleaner and plays better to me if you house the 6 with both sliders instead of having the 8 break the blanketing.
   
   
   
   
5. 03:33:325 (1) - It would be better if you could have this centered on the screen to be in pattern with all the sliders before it. A small jump would be fine imo. Also make the 1 symmetrical.
   
   
6. 03:46:780 (3) - Maybe add a NC here like you do in the insane diff.

1. 00:01:689 (1) - Remove clap from repeat and add to end. Fits music better.
   
   
2. 00:03:689 (4) - Finish on the head.
   
   
3. 00:04:598 (1) - Remove clap from repeat and add to end.
   
   
4. 00:06:598 (4) - Finish on the head
   
   
5. 00:17:507 (6) - Remove the clap from the head and add a finish.
   
   
6. 00:18:235 (8) - Finish on the head.
   
   
7. 00:47:144 (3) - Finish on the end.
   
   
8. 00:49:689 (1) - Remove finish from the end.
   
   
9. 00:50:053 (2) - Remove finish from the slider body and from the head. Too many finishes, you only need one at 00:49:689 and 00:50:235. Just like at 02:05:325 (1,2).
   
   
10. 00:51:507 (2) - Clap
    
    
11. 00:52:234 (4) - Clap
    
    
12. 00:52:962 (6) - Clap
    
    
13. 01:22:416 - Reduce volume for the slider.
    
    
14. 01:15:325 (4) - Finish on the end.
    
    
15. 02:07:144 (2) - Clap
    
    
16. 02:22:598 (4) - Finish on the head.
    
    
17. 02:38:053 - Reduce volume maybe.
    
    
18. 02:50:780 (1) - Remove finish from the head and remove clap from the tail. Add a clap to the head. This slider starts on the offbeat.
    
    
19. 03:07:144 (1,2,3,1) - Better to remove all the finishes here and just have claps imo. The finishes last too long.
    
    
20. 03:10:053 (1,2) - Remove the finish from the 2 and add a clap to the 1. Then you'd have a nice clap-clap-finish pattern.
    
    
21. 03:12:598 (5) - Remove the clap from the head, it's too noisy because nothing but vocals are sounding.
    
    
22. 03:33:325 - Again maybe reduce volume.
    
    
23. 03:45:689 (1) - Clap on the end.

1. 00:01:145 (1,2,3,1,2) - Honestly I just really hate how this plays...The slider 3 doesn't feel very nice and makes the jump hard to read. Better to me to just replace the slider with a circle at 00:01:325. Just a triplet would feel better imo. Even better if you stacked it.
   
   
   
   
2. 00:12:054 (1) - Isn't this off the pattern here? o.o Don't you want to move it up two grids to stack on the 00:10:599 (2)?
   
   
3. 00:15:508 (1,2) - Make these line up perfectly. They look really strange right now being offset.
   
   

1. 00:03:690 (3) - Finish on the head.
   
   
2. 00:05:326 (3) - Clap here is nice.
   
   
3. 00:06:417 (2) - Finish on the end.
   
   
4. 00:09:508 (6) - Finish on the head.
   
   
5. 00:17:508 (6) - Remove clap and add finish to head.
   
   
6. 00:18:236 (8) - Remove clap and add finish to head.
   
   
7. 00:45:690 (1) - Remove clap from the end and add to to repeat.
   
   
8. 00:47:145 (3) - Finish on the end.
   
   
9. 00:52:235 (7) - Remove finish from the head and add it to the end.
   
   
10. 00:52:780 (9) - Remove finish from the head. Also remove clap from the head and add a clap to the tail.
    
    
11. 01:15:690 (6) - Finish.
    
    
12. 01:22:416 - Maybe reduce volume.
    
    
13. 01:45:689 (3) - Clap
    
    
14. 02:00:963 (1) - Finish like the hard diff.
    
    
15. 02:07:144 (2) - Clap
    
    
16. 02:07:871 (5) - Remove finish from the head and add it to the end.
    
    
17. 02:08:416 (7) - Remove the clap and the finish from the head and add a clap to the end.
    
    
18. 02:09:325 (4) - Remove finish from the head.
    
    
19. 02:09:690 (1) - Remove clap from head. -.- Too much noise. Try not to ever use clap and finish, just one will fit better.
    
    
20. 02:10:962 (6) - Clap. Just like 00:55:326 (6).
    
    
21. 02:22:598 (4) - Finish on the head.
    
    
22. 02:38:053 - Consider reducing volume.
    
    
23. 02:50:780 (1) - Remove clap from repeat and add to head and tail.
    
    
24. 02:52:416 (3) - Finish on the head.
    
    
25. 02:52:962 (4) - Clap.
    
    
26. 02:54:598 (4) - Finish on the head.
    
    
27. 03:07:144 (1,2,3,1,2) - Better to remove finishes and just have claps.
    
    
28. 03:10:053 (1) - Clap
    
    
29. 03:17:507 (4) - Clap on the end. Remove the one on the head if you want.
    
    
30. 03:33:325 - Reduce volume.

UnitedWeSin wrote:

Hi hi~
Here is my mod that you requested.

Since Frostmourne said that Easy and Normal were mostly fine, I'll just look over them quickly.

[General]

1. If you want to, you could add a slidertick clap for offbeat claps that fall in the middle of a slider. This would be nice to have, especially on the easy diff because we miss out on so many claps due to long sliders.
   
   
2. You custom soft whistle is pretty much inaudible...... It would have been nice to have some default soft whistles imo, but it doesn't really matter.

[Easy]

Map Design/Rhythm

1. 03:13:689 (1) - The rhythm here really feels bad imo because the long repeating sliders are ending at strange places in the music that aren't very accented. Plus just having these long repeating sliders is a bit boring considering this is essentially the climax of the song. Can I recommend a different rhythm?
   
   
   Shorten the 03:13:689 (1) so that it ends at 03:15:144. Have a circle at 03:15:507 and a 1/1 slider at 03:15:871. Then extend the 03:16:599 (1) so that its repeat hits at 03:17:871 on the red tick where the finish is in the music. You could add a finish there then. That would be a much nicer rhythm for the most important kiai time here.
   
   
2. 03:42:053 (3,3) - You should avoid 1/2 sliders like this in an easy diff. It would be better to me if you replaced these with 1/1 sliders instead.

Hitsounds

1. 01:11:507 (1) - The finish at the end hits after the one in the music so it's sort of noisy and sounds bad. To fix, I'd recommend using the same rhythm here that you do at 02:27:144 (1,2). That way you could have a finish on the head of the 2 on the red tick.
   
   
2. 02:15:507 (1) - Remove the clap from the end because it isn't hitting along with the music and breaks your patterns.
   
   
3. 02:17:326 (2) - Remove the clap from the slider body and add one to the head to follow offbeat claps here.
   
   
4. 02:28:416 (2) - You can add a finish here on the head, it hits nicely with the vocals.

[Normal]

Map Design/Rhythm

1. 00:07:325 (1) - The finish in the music doesn't actually happen until 00:07:507. I recommend moving this slider to there. Sure the vocals hit at 00:07:325 but they hit before the band crashes in and it feels really weird in play when that happens in the middle of the slider. That way it would be much easier to read the 00:08:416 (2,3,4) because the 1 would end on the red tick, and the 2 is on a red tick. It would be consistent with the polarity pattern that you have setup with everything up to this point.
   
   
2. 01:34:780 (1,2) - I don't think this placement is a good idea. The 2's repeat arrow is hidden partially under the slider track. It would be better to place them differently imo.
   
   
3. 02:38:779 (5) - Don't you want to NC here like you do at 01:23:144 (1)? o.o

Hitsounds

1. 00:38:416 (3) - Fits the music better if you add a clap to the head and remove the one from the repeat.
   
   
2. 00:48:053 (2) - Missing clap on the end I believe.
   
   
3. 01:22:052 (4) - It would sound nicer if you reduce the volume of the repeat and the end of this slider when the band cuts out and we just have vocals. It's no noisy. ;_;
   
   
4. 01:34:780 (1) - Finish on the head just like 00:19:144 (1)? Either add it or remove it at both spots.
   
   
5. 01:44:235 - It would be better to make the jump in volume more gradual imo. Right now the 01:44:415 (2) is considerably louder than the previous slider but the music hasn't changed much so it sounds bad.
   
   
6. 01:54:052 (3) - Again, fits better imo to add a clap to the head and remove the clap from the repeat.
   
   
7. 02:38:053 - Same as 01:22:052 (4).
   
   
8. 02:57:689 (3) - Fits better to remove the clap from the end at add it to the repeat because the clap happens on the red tick in the music there.
   
   
9. 03:15:871 (4) - Missing clap on the end?
   
   
10. 03:31:871 (2) - You could add a clap to the head and tail of this slider, it would fit nicely imo.
    
    
11. 03:39:507 (4) - Clap would be nice here to be in pattern with 03:36:962 (1,2,3).
    
    
12. 03:40:416 (2) - Add a clap to the end to hit with the pattern in the music.
    
    
13. 03:41:325 (3) - Remove clap from head and add to repeat.
    
    
14. 03:42:052 (4) - Clap on the end.

[Hard]

Map Design/Rhythm

1. 00:39:871 (1) - Useless NC here, I don't see a reason for it at all please remove it. 00:39:507 (1,1,2,3,4) is all the same vocal phrase.
   
   
2. 01:55:507 (1) - Useless NC again, better to remove imo.
   
   
3. 02:21:325 (1,2) - Hmm, why break spacing here? Maybe make it 1.2 like the rest of the section and just make the 2 a straight slider.
   
   
   
   
4. 03:15:689 (6,7,8) - Looks cleaner and plays better to me if you house the 6 with both sliders instead of having the 8 break the blanketing.
   
   
   
   
5. 03:33:325 (1) - It would be better if you could have this centered on the screen to be in pattern with all the sliders before it. A small jump would be fine imo. Also make the 1 symmetrical.
   
   
6. 03:46:780 (3) - Maybe add a NC here like you do in the insane diff.

Hitsounds

1. 00:01:689 (1) - Remove clap from repeat and add to end. Fits music better.
   
   
2. 00:03:689 (4) - Finish on the head.
   
   
3. 00:04:598 (1) - Remove clap from repeat and add to end.
   
   
4. 00:06:598 (4) - Finish on the head
   
   
5. 00:17:507 (6) - Remove the clap from the head and add a finish.
   
   
6. 00:18:235 (8) - Finish on the head.
   
   
7. 00:47:144 (3) - Finish on the end.
   
   
8. 00:49:689 (1) - Remove finish from the end.
   
   
9. 00:50:053 (2) - Remove finish from the slider body and from the head. Too many finishes, you only need one at 00:49:689 and 00:50:235. Just like at 02:05:325 (1,2).
   
   
10. 00:51:507 (2) - Clap
    
    
11. 00:52:234 (4) - Clap
    
    
12. 00:52:962 (6) - Clap
    
    
13. 01:22:416 - Reduce volume for the slider.
    
    
14. 01:15:325 (4) - Finish on the end.
    
    
15. 02:07:144 (2) - Clap
    
    
16. 02:22:598 (4) - Finish on the head.
    
    
17. 02:38:053 - Reduce volume maybe.
    
    
18. 02:50:780 (1) - Remove finish from the head and remove clap from the tail. Add a clap to the head. This slider starts on the offbeat.
    
    
19. 03:07:144 (1,2,3,1) - Better to remove all the finishes here and just have claps imo. The finishes last too long.
    
    
20. 03:10:053 (1,2) - Remove the finish from the 2 and add a clap to the 1. Then you'd have a nice clap-clap-finish pattern.
    
    
21. 03:12:598 (5) - Remove the clap from the head, it's too noisy because nothing but vocals are sounding.
    
    
22. 03:33:325 - Again maybe reduce volume.
    
    
23. 03:45:689 (1) - Clap on the end.

[Insane]

Map Design/Rhythm

1. 00:01:145 (1,2,3,1,2) - Honestly I just really hate how this plays...The slider 3 doesn't feel very nice and makes the jump hard to read. Better to me to just replace the slider with a circle at 00:01:325. Just a triplet would feel better imo. Even better if you stacked it.
   
   
   
   
2. 00:12:054 (1) - Isn't this off the pattern here? o.o Don't you want to move it up two grids to stack on the 00:10:599 (2)?
   
   
3. 00:15:508 (1,2) - Make these line up perfectly. They look really strange right now being offset.
   
   

Hitsounds

1. 00:03:690 (3) - Finish on the head.
   
   
2. 00:05:326 (3) - Clap here is nice.
   
   
3. 00:06:417 (2) - Finish on the end.
   
   
4. 00:09:508 (6) - Finish on the head.
   
   
5. 00:17:508 (6) - Remove clap and add finish to head.
   
   
6. 00:18:236 (8) - Remove clap and add finish to head.
   
   
7. 00:45:690 (1) - Remove clap from the end and add to to repeat.
   
   
8. 00:47:145 (3) - Finish on the end.
   
   
9. 00:52:235 (7) - Remove finish from the head and add it to the end.
   
   
10. 00:52:780 (9) - Remove finish from the head. Also remove clap from the head and add a clap to the tail.
    
    
11. 01:15:690 (6) - Finish.
    
    
12. 01:22:416 - Maybe reduce volume.
    
    
13. 01:45:689 (3) - Clap
    
    
14. 02:00:963 (1) - Finish like the hard diff.
    
    
15. 02:07:144 (2) - Clap
    
    
16. 02:07:871 (5) - Remove finish from the head and add it to the end.
    
    
17. 02:08:416 (7) - Remove the clap and the finish from the head and add a clap to the end.
    
    
18. 02:09:325 (4) - Remove finish from the head.
    
    
19. 02:09:690 (1) - Remove clap from head. -.- Too much noise. Try not to ever use clap and finish, just one will fit better.
    
    
20. 02:10:962 (6) - Clap. Just like 00:55:326 (6).
    
    
21. 02:22:598 (4) - Finish on the head.
    
    
22. 02:38:053 - Consider reducing volume.
    
    
23. 02:50:780 (1) - Remove clap from repeat and add to head and tail.
    
    
24. 02:52:416 (3) - Finish on the head.
    
    
25. 02:52:962 (4) - Clap.
    
    
26. 02:54:598 (4) - Finish on the head.
    
    
27. 03:07:144 (1,2,3,1,2) - Better to remove finishes and just have claps.
    
    
28. 03:10:053 (1) - Clap
    
    
29. 03:17:507 (4) - Clap on the end. Remove the one on the head if you want.
    
    
30. 03:33:325 - Reduce volume.

Ok, I hope that helps. Sorry I mainly just focused on hitsounds because I thought that's what you'd probably want.
As for the insane. It plays ok. Some of the jumps don't really fit the music imo. Whenever you make a jump you should think how it's fitting to an idea in the music. You'll need to get more mods to check hitsounds too.

All fix !! Thank you so much

Frostmourne wrote:

but for the Hard and Insane I mostly concern about their hitsound because they don't sound as it should be, it should be better than this
so get more mods (especially hitsound) and I will bubble!

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  - 00:05:507 (4) - 클랩
  - 00:12:598 (4) - 끝에 피니시
  - 00:20:963 (9) - 끝에 휘슬 00:21:690 (11) - 여기도 휘슬
  - 00:23:871 (6,8) - ^
  - 00:26:963 (8) - ^
  - 00:30:054 (1) - 클랩
  - 00:36:417 (11) - 클랩 삭제
  - 00:33:690 (1) - 피니시 보단 휘슬
  - 00:36:599 (1) - ^
  - 00:44:416 (4) - 끝에 클랩 넣으시면 좀더 자연스러울듯
  - 00:45:690 (1) - 앞뒤에 삭제하시고 리핏에만 클랩
  - 00:47:872 (1) - 클랩 + 00:48:053 (3) - 피니시 ( 이거말고 스트림패턴에서 딴건 다삭제 )
  - 00:56:235 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 2,3,4 클랩 2,3,4,8 제외 전부 휘슬
  - 01:02:508 (3,5) - 클랩 삭제
  - 01:04:054 (4) - 클랩 삭제
  - 01:07:872 (3,5,7,9) - 굳이 빠른 느낌 ㅜㅈ시려면 여기 전부 클랩 추가
  - 01:15:690 (5) - 피니시 , 01:15:872 (7) - 여긴 피니시 삭제
  - 01:18:598 (2) - ^ , 01:18:781 (3) - ^
  - 01:20:236 (3,4,5,7,8,10) - 흰색 틱에 피니시
  - 01:36:598 (6,8) - 아시겠쬬 네 알꺼에요 아마 ( 앞에 안고쳤으면 여기도 스킵 )
  - 01:39:507 (6,8) - ^
  - 01:42:599 (6) - 끝 휘슬 이 필 요 하 지 말 입 니 다
  - 01:52:053 (4) - 삭제
  - 01:53:508 (6) - 피니시
  - 01:58:416 (1) - 리핏에 클랩 나머진 삭제
  - 01:59:871 (3,4) - 전부 클랩 ( 뒤에 슬라이더는 이전 빨간틱까지 줄이시는거 추천 그렇게 안하셧으면 슬라 두에는 클랩 ㄴㄴ )
  - 02:01:325 (3) - 알꺼에요 아마
  - 02:02:416 (4) - 피니시 + 02:02:780 (5) - 뒤에 클랩
  - 02:03:689 (8,9) - 클랩 삭제 8번에 피니시 추가 10번 노트에 피니시 삭제
  - 02:07:144 (2) - 클래 ㅂ삭제
  - 02:08:416 (7) - 피니시 삭제 앞쪽에
  - 02:10:053 (2) - 뒤에 클랩
  - 02:18:143 (5,7) - 클래 ㅂ삭제
  - 02:29:507 (5) - 클랩있으면 좀더 자연스러운듯
  - 02:31:325 (5) - 피니시 02:31:507 (7) - 피니시 삭제
  - 02:34:235 (7) - 피니시 + 02:34:417 (1) - 피니시 삭제
  - 02:35:871 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 흰색틱 모조리 피니시
  - 02:50:780 (1) - 앞쪽에 피니시
  - 03:19:144 (1,3) - 클랩
  - 03:20:780 (3,5) - 3 피니시 5 피니시삭제
  - 03:21:689 (7) - 클랩 삭제
  - 03:22:053 (1) - 클랩
  - 03:23:508 (1,3) - 1번 클랩 3번 피니시
  - 03:24:599 (1,2) - 빨간틱 대신 ㅡ힌색틱에 클랩
  - 03:26:599 (6) - 피니시 03:26:781 (1) - 피니시 삭제
  - 03:27:325 (3) - 피니시
  - 03:27:871 (5) - 앞쪽에 클랩
  - 03:30:962 (7) - 클랩

HelloSCV wrote:

Frostmourne wrote:

but for the Hard and Insane I mostly concern about their hitsound because they don't sound as it should be, it should be better than this
so get more mods (especially hitsound) and I will bubble!

i can help, just some HS modding

[insane]

• 
  - 00:05:507 (4) - 클랩
  - 00:12:598 (4) - 끝에 피니시
  - 00:20:963 (9) - 끝에 휘슬 00:21:690 (11) - 여기도 휘슬
  - 00:23:871 (6,8) - ^
  - 00:26:963 (8) - ^
  - 00:30:054 (1) - 클랩
  - 00:36:417 (11) - 클랩 삭제
  - 00:33:690 (1) - 피니시 보단 휘슬
  - 00:36:599 (1) - ^
  - 00:44:416 (4) - 끝에 클랩 넣으시면 좀더 자연스러울듯
  - 00:45:690 (1) - 앞뒤에 삭제하시고 리핏에만 클랩
  - 00:47:872 (1) - 클랩 + 00:48:053 (3) - 피니시 ( 이거말고 스트림패턴에서 딴건 다삭제 )
  - 00:56:235 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 2,3,4 클랩 2,3,4,8 제외 전부 휘슬
  - 01:02:508 (3,5) - 클랩 삭제
  - 01:04:054 (4) - 클랩 삭제
  - 01:07:872 (3,5,7,9) - 굳이 빠른 느낌 ㅜㅈ시려면 여기 전부 클랩 추가
  - 01:15:690 (5) - 피니시 , 01:15:872 (7) - 여긴 피니시 삭제
  - 01:18:598 (2) - ^ , 01:18:781 (3) - ^
  - 01:20:236 (3,4,5,7,8,10) - 흰색 틱에 피니시
  - 01:36:598 (6,8) - 아시겠쬬 네 알꺼에요 아마 ( 앞에 안고쳤으면 여기도 스킵 )
  - 01:39:507 (6,8) - ^
  - 01:42:599 (6) - 끝 휘슬 이 필 요 하 지 말 입 니 다
  - 01:52:053 (4) - 삭제
  - 01:53:508 (6) - 피니시
  - 01:58:416 (1) - 리핏에 클랩 나머진 삭제
  - 01:59:871 (3,4) - 전부 클랩 ( 뒤에 슬라이더는 이전 빨간틱까지 줄이시는거 추천 그렇게 안하셧으면 슬라 두에는 클랩 ㄴㄴ )
  - 02:01:325 (3) - 알꺼에요 아마
  - 02:02:416 (4) - 피니시 + 02:02:780 (5) - 뒤에 클랩
  - 02:03:689 (8,9) - 클랩 삭제 8번에 피니시 추가 10번 노트에 피니시 삭제
  - 02:07:144 (2) - 클래 ㅂ삭제
  - 02:08:416 (7) - 피니시 삭제 앞쪽에
  - 02:10:053 (2) - 뒤에 클랩
  - 02:18:143 (5,7) - 클래 ㅂ삭제
  - 02:29:507 (5) - 클랩있으면 좀더 자연스러운듯
  - 02:31:325 (5) - 피니시 02:31:507 (7) - 피니시 삭제
  - 02:34:235 (7) - 피니시 + 02:34:417 (1) - 피니시 삭제
  - 02:35:871 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 흰색틱 모조리 피니시
  - 02:50:780 (1) - 앞쪽에 피니시
  - 03:19:144 (1,3) - 클랩
  - 03:20:780 (3,5) - 3 피니시 5 피니시삭제
  - 03:21:689 (7) - 클랩 삭제
  - 03:22:053 (1) - 클랩
  - 03:23:508 (1,3) - 1번 클랩 3번 피니시
  - 03:24:599 (1,2) - 빨간틱 대신 ㅡ힌색틱에 클랩
  - 03:26:599 (6) - 피니시 03:26:781 (1) - 피니시 삭제
  - 03:27:325 (3) - 피니시
  - 03:27:871 (5) - 앞쪽에 클랩
  - 03:30:962 (7) - 클랩

GoGo scanter

하드는 좀있다 해드릴꼐요 몇시간 뒤에... 집중력이 떨어짐 인세인도 다시봐야할듯

1. 파란틱에 클랩 들어가있는거 다빼주세요 1/4 슬라이더에 있는거 ㅇㅇ
   - 00:39:144 (7) - 뒤에 클랩 삭제
   - 00:44:416 (4) - 뒤에 클랩 + 00:44:962 (5) - 여긴 삭제
   - 00:45:689 (1,2) - 뒤에 클랩
   - 00:49:689 (1) - ^
   - 00:53:325 (1) - 00:55:507 - 여기서 끝내심이?
   - 00:56:598 (2) - 앞클랩 삭제
   - 01:02:416 (7) - 파란틱 클랩삭제
   - 01:07:871 (6,7) - 파란틱 제외하고 올클랩
   - 01:09:871 (4) - 앞 피니시
   - 01:11:144 (7) - ㅏ시죠?
   - 01:18:598 (4) - 앞쪽에 피니시
   - 01:53:507 (4) - 앞 피닛
   - 02:02:416 (2) - 피닛
   - 02:13:871 (4) - 앞 피닛 ( 앞쪽에서 그러셧던것처럼 )
   - 02:31:325 (5) - 피닛
   - 02:34:234 (4) - 앞 피닛
   - 02:54:053 (3) - 뒷 피닛
   - 02:59:871 - 클랩 + 03:00:053 - 클랩 + 03:00:416 - 클랩 + 03:00:780 + 클랩
   - 03:12:053 (4) - 앞 피닛
   - 03:20:416 (4) - 뒷피닛 + 03:20:962 (1) - 피닛 삭제
   - 03:23:325 (4,1) - 알꺼에요 아마
   - 03:31:144 (1) - 앞 피닛

HelloSCV wrote:

이포스트는 구독수 ㄴㄴ 해

[Hard]

1. 파란틱에 클랩 들어가있는거 다빼주세요 1/4 슬라이더에 있는거 ㅇㅇ
   - 00:39:144 (7) - 뒤에 클랩 삭제
   - 00:44:416 (4) - 뒤에 클랩 + 00:44:962 (5) - 여긴 삭제
   - 00:45:689 (1,2) - 뒤에 클랩
   - 00:49:689 (1) - ^
   - 00:53:325 (1) - 00:55:507 - 여기서 끝내심이?
   - 00:56:598 (2) - 앞클랩 삭제
   - 01:02:416 (7) - 파란틱 클랩삭제
   - 01:07:871 (6,7) - 파란틱 제외하고 올클랩
   - 01:09:871 (4) - 앞 피니시
   - 01:11:144 (7) - ㅏ시죠?
   - 01:18:598 (4) - 앞쪽에 피니시
   - 01:53:507 (4) - 앞 피닛
   - 02:02:416 (2) - 피닛
   - 02:13:871 (4) - 앞 피닛 ( 앞쪽에서 그러셧던것처럼 )
   - 02:31:325 (5) - 피닛
   - 02:34:234 (4) - 앞 피닛
   - 02:54:053 (3) - 뒷 피닛
   - 02:59:871 - 클랩 + 03:00:053 - 클랩 + 03:00:416 - 클랩 + 03:00:780 + 클랩
   - 03:12:053 (4) - 앞 피닛
   - 03:20:416 (4) - 뒷피닛 + 03:20:962 (1) - 피닛 삭제
   - 03:23:325 (4,1) - 알꺼에요 아마
   - 03:31:144 (1) - 앞 피닛

1. 00:01:689 - The clap here is unnecessary, so just remove it.
2. 00:02:416 (2) - Whistle?
3. 00:03:871 - ^
4. 00:43:871 - Finish?
5. 00:48:235 - ^ (To emphasize the sound on 00:48:053.)
6. 00:51:144 - ^
7. 00:53:325 (4) - Not perfectly stacked below 00:51:872 (2)'s tail.
8. 01:34:780 - Finish?
9. 01:35:871 (2) - ^
10. 01:37:689 - ^
11. 01:38:780 (2) - ^
12. 01:39:871 - ^
13. 01:40:598 - ^
14. 01:43:508 (1) - Remove NC and add finish at 01:43:507? NC-ing this makes the previous combo too short, you know...
15. 02:02:416 - Finish?
16. 02:05:325 - ^
17. 02:29:689 (3,1) - What's with the spacing here?
18. 02:46:053 (3,1) - Arrange them so they don't touch each other?
19. 03:04:962 (1) - Remove NC? I don't think the NC here is needed at all; what's the point of a 1-object combo here?
20. 03:44:962 - Clap? The sudden absence of hitsounds here is confusing, IMO.
21. 03:45:325 - ^

1. 00:03:871 - Finish to emphasize the sound at 00:03:689?
2. 00:08:416 (2,3,4) - Start (4) at 00:08:962, and replace 00:08:416 (2,3) with a 1/2 slider that repeats once instead?
3. 00:22:052 (1,2) - Ctrl+G while choosing the two of them at once? The rhythm should be a 1/1 slider that repeats once alongside with another 1/1 slider, which fits the lyrics/word phrasing better.
4. 00:43:871 (4) - Lengthen to 00:44:780 to follow the vocal?
5. 01:04:235 - Finish?
6. 01:14:416 (1,2) - Same as 00:22:052 (1,2).
7. 01:39:871 (4) - Move the anchor point on the tail to (284,112)? Right now it feels weird to see the repeat close to 01:40:598 (1)'s head...
8. 01:47:506 (2,3) - Move one grid (tiny size) to the left so it will form a symmetrical pattern with 01:46:416 (1).
9. 01:53:871 - Remove the clap? It feels weird to have a double-clap (alongside the one at 01:54:053) here...
10. 02:19:688 (3) - Replace clap with finish?
11. 02:22:598 - Finish?
12. 02:30:052 (1,2) - Same as 00:22:052 (1,2).
13. 03:08:780 - Replace clap with finish?
14. 03:10:053 - Replace clap with whistle?
15. 03:10:416 - Replace clap with finish?
16. 03:14:962 - ^
17. 03:24:416 - ^
18. 03:31:144 (1,2) - Same as 00:22:052 (1,2).
19. 03:45:689 - Remove clap?
20. 03:46:235 - Finish?

1. 00:07:144 (5) - A clap every 1/4 beats sounds really noisy here. Remove every clap except the one on 00:07:144? (Do this to similar sliders too.)
2. 00:08:780 (5) - Make this a 1/2 slider that repeats once instead and add repeat on the finish. Using a 1/1 slider whose middle is the place of a stanza change is REALLY weird.
3. 00:10:962 - Finish?
4. 00:11:507 - ^
5. 00:12:053 - ^
6. 00:12:598 - ^ (These finish suggestions also apply to similar parts/patterns.)
7. 00:20:416 (4) - Stack below 00:19:871 (3)'s tail? It fits the song better, IMO.
8. 00:23:325 (4,5) - Combine them into a 1/1 slider?
9. 00:34:962 (4) - Stack the head below 00:34:416 (3)'s tail?
10. 00:35:325 (5,1) - ...What's with the spacing inconsistency here?
11. 00:43:871 - Finish?
12. 00:45:325 (6) - ^
13. 00:46:780 - ^
14. 00:53:507 (1) - Start at 00:53:325 to follow the vocal?
15. 01:44:962 (1,2,3) - Remove all hitsounds here and replace them with finish?
16. 02:08:780 (7,8,9) - Make this a 1/2 slider followed by another 1/2 slider that repeats once instead?
17. 03:07:871 (3) - Replace clap with finish?
18. 03:08:780 (1) - ^ (Yes, all claps.)
19. 03:10:053 (1,2) - ^

1. 00:08:781 (6) - Same as Hard.
2. 00:34:963 (6) - The tail is hidden by 00:34:417 (4)'s hitburst, making it hard to read.
3. 00:43:872 (2) - Finish.
4. 00:45:326 (6) - ^
5. 00:47:963 (2,4) - Remove. These are badly overmapped.
6. 00:50:235 (4,1) - ...Is this spacing okay?
7. 01:19:872 (10,1) - ^
8. 01:45:689 (1,2) - Replace clap with finish?
9. 02:01:144 (2) - Finish?
10. 02:02:962 - Replace clap with finish?
11. 02:03:780 (9,10) - Remove clap?
12. 03:07:871 (3,1,2) - Replace clap with finish?
13. 03:10:053 (1) - Replace clap with whistle?
14. 03:10:417 (2) - Replace clap with finish?
15. 03:20:871 (4) - Seems overmapped badly; remove?
16. 03:23:871 (5) - Remove finish?
17. 03:26:599 (6) - Replace clap with finish?

Hinsvar wrote:

Hi; M4M~

Got stuff to be done IRL, so yeah.

*Bolded = Unrankable or strongly suggested; red = Highly suggested or questionable (still weaker than the bolded ones); black = Minor suggestions/rants; blue = Notes/advices to avoid/fix repeated problems.

>-iCo-'s Easy

1. 00:01:689 - The clap here is unnecessary, so just remove it.
2. 00:02:416 (2) - Whistle?
3. 00:03:871 - ^
4. 00:43:871 - Finish?
5. 00:48:235 - ^ (To emphasize the sound on 00:48:053.)
6. 00:51:144 - ^
7. 00:53:325 (4) - Not perfectly stacked below 00:51:872 (2)'s tail.
8. 01:34:780 - Finish?
9. 01:35:871 (2) - ^
10. 01:37:689 - ^
11. 01:38:780 (2) - ^
12. 01:39:871 - ^
13. 01:40:598 - ^
14. 01:43:508 (1) - Remove NC and add finish at 01:43:507? NC-ing this makes the previous combo too short, you know...
15. 02:02:416 - Finish?
16. 02:05:325 - ^
17. 02:29:689 (3,1) - What's with the spacing here?
18. 02:46:053 (3,1) - Arrange them so they don't touch each other?
19. 03:04:962 (1) - Remove NC? I don't think the NC here is needed at all; what's the point of a 1-object combo here?
20. 03:44:962 - Clap? The sudden absence of hitsounds here is confusing, IMO.
21. 03:45:325 - ^

>HabiHolic's Normal

1. 00:03:871 - Finish to emphasize the sound at 00:03:689?
2. 00:08:416 (2,3,4) - Start (4) at 00:08:962, and replace 00:08:416 (2,3) with a 1/2 slider that repeats once instead?
3. 00:22:052 (1,2) - Ctrl+G while choosing the two of them at once? The rhythm should be a 1/1 slider that repeats once alongside with another 1/1 slider, which fits the lyrics/word phrasing better.
4. 00:43:871 (4) - Lengthen to 00:44:780 to follow the vocal?
5. 01:04:235 - Finish?
6. 01:14:416 (1,2) - Same as 00:22:052 (1,2).
7. 01:39:871 (4) - Move the anchor point on the tail to (284,112)? Right now it feels weird to see the repeat close to 01:40:598 (1)'s head...
8. 01:47:506 (2,3) - Move one grid (tiny size) to the left so it will form a symmetrical pattern with 01:46:416 (1).
9. 01:53:871 - Remove the clap? It feels weird to have a double-clap (alongside the one at 01:54:053) here...
10. 02:19:688 (3) - Replace clap with finish?
11. 02:22:598 - Finish?
12. 02:30:052 (1,2) - Same as 00:22:052 (1,2).
13. 03:08:780 - Replace clap with finish?
14. 03:10:053 - Replace clap with whistle?
15. 03:10:416 - Replace clap with finish?
16. 03:14:962 - ^
17. 03:24:416 - ^
18. 03:31:144 (1,2) - Same as 00:22:052 (1,2).
19. 03:45:689 - Remove clap?
20. 03:46:235 - Finish?

>Hard

1. 00:07:144 (5) - A clap every 1/4 beats sounds really noisy here. Remove every clap except the one on 00:07:144? (Do this to similar sliders too.)
2. 00:08:780 (5) - Make this a 1/2 slider that repeats once instead and add repeat on the finish. Using a 1/1 slider whose middle is the place of a stanza change is REALLY weird.
3. 00:10:962 - Finish?
4. 00:11:507 - ^
5. 00:12:053 - ^
6. 00:12:598 - ^ (These finish suggestion also applies to similar parts/patterns.)
7. 00:20:416 (4) - Stack below 00:19:871 (3)'s tail? It fits the song better, IMO.
8. 00:23:325 (4,5) - Combine them into a 1/1 slider?
9. 00:34:962 (4) - Stack the head below 00:34:416 (3)'s tail?
10. 00:35:325 (5,1) - ...What's with the spacing inconsistency here?
11. 00:43:871 - Finish?
12. 00:45:325 (6) - ^
13. 00:46:780 - ^
14. 00:53:507 (1) - Start at 00:53:325 to follow the vocal?
15. 01:44:962 (1,2,3) - Remove all hitsounds here and replace them with finish?
16. 02:08:780 (7,8,9) - Make this a 1/2 slider followed by another 1/2 slider that repeats once instead?
17. 03:07:871 (3) - Replace clap with finish?
18. 03:08:780 (1) - ^ (Yes, all claps.)
19. 03:10:053 (1,2) - ^

>Insane

1. 00:08:781 (6) - Same as Hard.
2. 00:34:963 (6) - The tail is hidden by 00:34:417 (4)'s hitburst, making it hard to read.
3. 00:43:872 (2) - Finish.
4. 00:45:326 (6) - ^
5. 00:47:963 (2,4) - Remove. These are badly overmapped.
6. 00:50:235 (4,1) - ...Is this spacing okay?
7. 01:19:872 (10,1) - ^
8. 01:45:689 (1,2) - Replace clap with finish?
9. 02:01:144 (2) - Finish?
10. 02:02:962 - Replace clap with finish?
11. 02:03:780 (9,10) - Remove clap?
12. 03:07:871 (3,1,2) - Replace clap with finish?
13. 03:10:053 (1) - Replace clap with whistle?
14. 03:10:417 (2) - Replace clap with finish?
15. 03:20:871 (4) - Seems overmapped badly; remove?
16. 03:23:871 (5) - Remove finish?
17. 03:26:599 (6) - Replace clap with finish?

Done here.

Good luck on the way

Frostmourne wrote:

Recheck

-iCo-'s Easy
timing is wrong , red section must start consistently with other diffs, so you must move the first red line from 00:00:235 to 00:00:230
don't forget to move other green lines with red line too and resnap all notes properly
02:12:598 (1) - add new combo
03:15:507 (2) - clap
03:15:871 (3) - clap tail
03:42:053 (3) - clap tail
03:44:962 (3) - clap both head tail

HabiHolic's Normal
02:22:229 (2) - move to x:212 y:320 to fit the spacing
02:58:411 (1) - clap head
03:23:866 (3) - clap the end of this slider (last point)
03:31:866 (2) - clap on repeat point
03:40:411 (2) - clap end of this slider
03:45:684 (4) - clap end of this slider

Hard
02:58:775 (10) - remove whistle only head here
03:38:957 (8) - move to x:256 y:340 to fit this spacing

Insane
00:27:775 (11) - add note here , to correspond with 00:24:866 (2) - , it's kind of overmapping but it's ok
00:28:593 (3,5) - remove finish from both 2 notes, their volumes are too low to have these finishes
00:30:957 (2) - remove whistle
00:32:775 (9) - remove whistle only head
00:33:502 (11) - remove whistle
00:33:866 (2) - remove whistle
00:35:684 (9) - remove whistle only tail
00:36:411 (11) - remove whistle
00:36:775 (2) - remove whistle
00:45:139 (5) - remove finish
00:56:320 (2) - change to whistle
00:56:411 (3) - change to whistle
01:46:775 (3) - only clap on the head (remove whistle only)
01:48:411 (2) - remove whistle on the head
01:50:593 (2) - remove whistle on the tail
01:51:320 (2) - remove whistle on the tail
01:52:593 (3) - remove whistle only from the head
02:01:320 (3) - remove whistle from the head
snap this green line 123784 to 123775 because it affects game play
02:24:229 (1) - move right 1 grid for better curve
02:27:139 (6) - remove whistle on the tail
03:36:957 (1) - add new combo
02:53:320 (3) - add whistle
03:26:048 (6) - add whistle
03:30:411 (1,5) - add clap for these 2 notes
03:46:411 (6,7) - remove both whistle and add note at 03:46:502 on x:136 y:144 and add clap at 03:46:593 (8) -

I'm really glad that UnitedWeSin,HelloSCV and Hinsvar helped improve for the hitsounds really really well

Kawayi Rika wrote:

Hi ~ scanter ~



Red : Must be fixed
Pink : Need to consider
Purple : Just suggestions

[General]

1. Add 'opening' in tags,and remove Anime,it's unneed.
2. 01:23:139 - #2 kiai time end to here is better.
3. 02:38:775 - #4 kiai time end to here is better.
4. 03:34:048 - #5 kiai time end to here is better.

[Insane]

1. 00:19:866 (6) - Make more blanket to here,here is code.
   

   276,332,19866,2,0,P|372:320|408:244,1,180,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
   476,180,20411,1,0,0:0:0:0:

2. 00:47:866 (1,2,3,4,5) - I guess here is overmapped.
3. 03:23:502 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^
4. 01:26:048 - Add clap with 40% volume,sound much better.
5. 03:36:593 - ^
6. 02:33:957 (6) - Remove circle,sound better to me.
7. 03:09:139 (2) - Move to X:440 Y:240,03:08:775 (1) - symmetrical.
8. 03:10:411 (2) - Move 2 grid right,03:10:048 (1) - symmetrical.

[Hard]

1. 01:26:048 - Same as Insane.
2. 03:36:593 - ^
3. 01:55:502 (2,3,5) - You'd better to make the circle here symmetrical.
4. 02:50:775 (1,3) - Same as above.
5. 03:07:139 (1,2) - ^
6. 03:10:048 (1,2) - ^
7. 03:31:139 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - ^
8. 03:08:775 (1) - Move 1 grid right to center.

[HabiHolic's Normal]

1. AR+1 for better diff spread.
2. 01:46:411 (1,2,3) - You'd better to make these notes symmetrical.
3. 02:58:411 (1) - Remove short new combo.
4. 02:59:139 (1) - The spinner should end to 03:00:957,and add clap with 40% volume.
5. 03:52:957 - Remove doubled green line.

[-iCo-'s Easy]

1. 01:06:957 (2) - Shorten to 01:07:866 - ,sound much better.
2. 02:32:957 (1) - Shorten to 02:35:139 - and remove clap.

OK ~ That's all ~ Not bad for your 1st map and nice song ~

Call me back ~

Frostmourne wrote:

congratz for the first ranked map : )