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Chata - Winter Bells

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Cilvery
346 posts
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Topic Starter
Cilvery
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2012年12月27日 at 14:34:02

Artist: Chata
Title: Winter Bells
Source: Shirokuma Bell Stars
Tags: cRyo[iceeicee] Frostmourne Kite Xmas Christmas Collab
BPM: 158
Filesize: 8875kb
Play Time: 04:12
Difficulties Available:
  1. Collab (5 stars, 760 notes)
  2. Easy (2.05 stars, 213 notes)
  3. Frostmourne's Hard (4.91 stars, 643 notes)
  4. Kite's Normal (3.73 stars, 333 notes)
Download: Chata - Winter Bells
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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　｡･Merry Christmas･｡

♥(*´∀`*)人(*´∀`*)♥

Insane - Collab with cRyo[iceeicee]

Hard - by Frostmourne

Normal - by Kite

Easy - by Me
Last edited by Cilvery , edited 72 times in total.
cRyo[iceeicee]
1,885 posts
Joined May 2011
cRyo[iceeicee]
(*´∀｀*人*´∀｀*)ﾉ⌒ ★
Frostmourne
osu! Alumni
3,733 posts
Joined November 2009
Frostmourne
: ) http://puu.sh/1BhVy
Cilvery
346 posts
Joined May 2011
Topic Starter
Cilvery

Frostmourne wrote:

: ) http://puu.sh/1BhVy
thank you Frost !!!!
KRZY
Former osu! Champion: OWC#3
4,848 posts
Joined May 2009
KRZY
mod on Friday
Pokie
osu! Alumni
2,630 posts
Joined December 2009
Pokie
えっ、わたしは一番目だったの( ﾟдﾟ)!


General
  1. BG.jpg: 1023*767 Σ(´∀｀；) 縦と横を1 pixel伸びてください！
  2. Frostmourne と Kite はまだタグに含まれていないので、全難易度に追加してください。

Easy
  • 01:08:937 (1,2,3) - 一番低いの難易度なので、repeated slider> slider > repeated slider 初心者には苦手なパターンだと思います。

    01:41:271 (1) - 上記と同じ原因で、スピンナーの中心点に近い処へ移動するべきだと思います。　（パターンの修正も必要）



    01:44:437 (3,1) - リズムは少しやり辛いかもしれない、これはどうですか？


    01:46:604 - ここにnoteを追加。
    01:47:104 (1,2,3) - 赤線の1/1三連打はEasyとふさわしくないだと思うので、スライダーに入れ替えしませんか？

    02:31:604 (1,2,3) - 01:08:937 (1,2,3) - と同じパターンですが、ここも変更するべきです。
    03:03:937 (1) - ここに01:41:271 (1) - 書いた事と同じ

    03:07:104 (3,1) - リズムはここと一緒01:44:437 (3,1) -
    03:09:271 - noteの追加
    03:09:771 (1) - ここに01:47:104 (1,2,3) - 書いた事と同じ

    03:24:271 (4) - このnoteを削除する方がいいと思います
    03:54:604 (1) - ここに01:41:271 (1) - 書いた事と同じ

Kite's Normal
  • 00:16:438 (4) - Shorten this by 1/2 is more comfortable imo! plus adding a circle here 00:17:104 - , and swap these two into slider 00:17:438 (6,7) -


    00:31:271 (1) - adding finish here :P?
    00:51:271 (2) - Stack this perfectly under 00:49:271 (4) -
    02:15:104 (1) - Slidertrack hitted the HP bar xD Try to move these two 02:14:771 (7,1) - to a lower position?

    03:27:271 (1) - Sliders weren't snapped correctly on timing lines, better do a recalculation for sliders.
Oops, there are still lot of unsnapped notes._.
From AIBat


00:57:938 (1) - Unsnapped slider (end).
01:03:271 (1) - Unsnapped slider (end).
01:06:604 (5) - Unsnapped slider (end).
01:07:771 (7) - Unsnapped slider (end).
02:20:604 (1) - Unsnapped slider (end).
02:21:937 (2) - Unsnapped slider (end).
02:25:437 (6) - Unsnapped slider (end).
02:25:937 (1) - Unsnapped slider (end).
02:27:271 (3) - Unsnapped slider (end).
02:27:937 (4) - Unsnapped slider (end).
03:32:604 (1) - Unsnapped slider (end).
03:34:438 (3) - Unsnapped slider (end).
03:35:271 (1) - Unsnapped slider (end).
03:36:604 (2) - Unsnapped slider (repeat).
03:36:604 (2) - Unsnapped slider (end).
03:37:938 (1) - Unsnapped slider (end).
03:39:771 (3) - Unsnapped slider (end).
03:40:604 (1) - Unsnapped slider (end).
03:41:604 (3) - Unsnapped slider (end).
03:42:604 (4) - Unsnapped slider (end).

Frostmourne's Hard
  1. Stacking usage and spacing are kinda weird imo, as you have made great maps on other mapsets...kind of disappointed for this one >_<
  2. As it's just my own opinion, I may not pointing them out for a modding here.
    01:40:937 (1,2,1) - Kinda nonsense D: Delete this note instead of using a new combo 01:41:437 (1) -
    02:34:104 (1) - Remove this new combo as well.
    03:03:937 (3,4) - Try to use this rhythm instead, pretty off-beat'd atm.


    03:25:104 (1) - + 03:25:771 (3) - or 03:26:104 (4) - Swap their new combos
    03:28:770 (6) - Since it's reaching combo (10), try to start another new combo here
    03:51:271 (3,1,2) - These three should be in the same combo imho, delete new combo on 03:51:771 (1) - , 03:52:771 (3) - and adding it here
    04:07:937 (1,1,1,2,1,1,1,1,2) - What happened on this part :o Are they on purpose?
Aw it becomes a new combo modding D: I'm sorry!

Collab
  1. Cilvery
    00:39:937 (3,4) - ジャンプの配置少し変わってるだと思います、これはどうでしょう？

    00:42:438 (5,6,1,2,3,4) - み・・みえ・・見えないっ！！（冗談です）00:43:271 (4) - これを00:42:771 (1) - の下に移動したらもっと読みやすくになるだと思うのです。
    00:53:604 (5,6) - 今の配置としてはもったいないだと思います・・なので一つの提案があります

    00:56:438 (5) - , 00:57:104 (1) - new comboを交換しましょう（00:57:104 (1) - は一人（？）しかいなくて寂しいと思いますよ（謎））
    01:16:604 (1) - 前のノートと三角にすると、もっと綺麗なパターンが見えます

    02:24:437 (3,4,5) - こういうリズムしか読めないパターンです。1/4のジャンプは入れても別にいいと思いますが、02:24:437 (3,4) - この二つにスペーシングを増えるべきです。

    02:41:938 (1) - 指摘とは言えないが、ここのスペーシングは前の連打と合ってないです。

    02:49:271 (9) - 02:49:604 (1) - こういうパターンには4つずつする方がいいと思いますので、new comboを交換しましょう。そして02:49:938 (5) - これをnew comboする
    02:52:604 (5) - downbeatなので、new combo入れた方がいいと思います？

    たとえランダムジャンプしても、スペーシングの重視は不可欠だと思います。今のパターンから見ると、ほんとのランダムだったー見たいな気がするw わたしも上手くジャンプ作れないから、一緒に頑張りましょう！

  2. cRyo
    03:05:521 (4,5) - Use the same, or a larger spacing than 02:03:187 (3,4) - ? (0.55x↑)

    Nice enough.

以上です！もうすぐクリスマスが来るので・・幸運を祈ります！
wring
596 posts
Joined February 2010
wring
やっほうう


General
probably nothing I say... (before mentioned)


Easy
00:16:937 (3) - スライダー終わりにwhistle?
00:22:604 (1) - スライダー頭にwhistle?
00:39:271 (3) - スライダー終わりにwhistle?
00:43:271 (2,3) - whistle
00:51:271 (4) - スライダー終わりにwhistle
01:01:271 (1) - リピートをやめて 01:01:937 - まで伸ばすのはどうですか。
01:07:604 (1,2) - (1)を消して(2)のスタートをここからにしてはどうでしょう。
01:26:604 (2) - whistle
02:01:937 (3) - スライダー終わりにwhistle?
02:05:937 (2,3) - whistle?
02:13:937 (4) - スライダー終わりにwhistle
02:23:937 (1) - 前述
02:30:271 (1,2) - ^
02:37:771 (2) - スライダー終わりにadd whistle
02:49:271 (2) - whistle
03:06:604 (2) - スライダー終わりにwhistle
03:28:937 (4) - リピートをなくしたほうがいいと思います。
03:39:604 (2) - whistle?
03:41:604 (1) - スライダー終わりにclap
03:50:604 (2) - whistle
03:57:604 (1,2) - ここもスライダースタートにしてみてはどうでしょう。
音量100%でwhistleを追加するのは少々うるさいと思うので、追加する場合は下げることをおすすめします。



Kite's Normal
00:17:604 (6) - add whistle?
00:36:604 (1) - How about change finish to whistle on slider head?
00:43:271 (5) - add whistle to slider head
00:52:771 (1,2) - umm, a little weird rhythm for me. How about delete (1) and (2) start here?
01:18:604 (1) - add whistle to slider end?
01:39:937 (4) - ^
01:42:437 (5) - add whistle to slider end
02:05:937 (4) - add whistle to slider end?
02:10:604 (2) - How about this shape, it might look more beautiful.
17,196,130604,2,0,P|4:124|44:60,2,150,0|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
02:25:437 (6) - add whistle to slider head?
02:41:271 (6) - add whistle to slider end?
03:02:604 (4) - ^
03:05:104 (5) - add whistle to slider end
03:42:604 (4) - add whistle to slider end?



Frostmourne's Hard
heheh frost <33
00:16:937 (1) - add clap
00:24:104 (3,4) - This jump is a bit strange for me. I recommend you delete (3) or not jump.
00:36:604 (1) - intend to not stack?
01:35:271 (4,1) - switch NC?
01:40:104 (3) - remove clap on slider head
01:45:771 (5) - How about this?
02:02:604 (1) - add note? that will be better imo.
02:18:937 (2) - stack on next (3) not on (1)'s end
03:35:937 (1) - stack perfectly under (4)?



Collab
Heyhey cryo :33
00:17:271 (3) - move to x:16 y:100?
00:29:771 (4) - NC?
00:32:437 (4) - NC?
00:37:937 (1) - How about this flow?
00:38:937 (3) - if you change ^, you also should move this to (1)'s head.
00:57:771 (2) - This is very confused. Jump is nice but you should move to x:240 y:312 or other place will be more better.
01:11:271 (1,1,1,1) - How about put them farther more?
02:13:104 (4) - move to x:124 y:144?
02:24:937 (4) - I think this is not fit whole this diff because only this is too hard. The problem would be that (4)'s flow was against the (5). So if you want to keep that, how about arrange the (4)'s flow same as (5)?
02:51:438 (4,5,6) - I suggest this pattern.
03:30:604 (1,2) - How about switch these?
03:31:938 (1,2,3,4) - (nazi)こういうのどうですか？
464,192,211938,5,2,0:0:0
448,196,212104,1,2,0:0:0
456,204,212271,1,0,0:0:0
452,184,212438,1,2,0:0:0
03:44:438 (4) - add whistle to slider head
03:49:771 (6) - ^
03:57:104 (3,4) - , 03:58:437 (4) - (nazi)How about this? sorry only code...orz
184,320,237104,1,0,0:0:0
104,196,237271,2,0,P|148:200|196:220,1,85,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
352,236,237604,5,8,0:0:0
414,325,237771,2,0,P|446:289|460:256,1,85,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
359,125,238104,2,0,P|311:133|280:152,1,85,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
184,320,238437,2,0,P|232:312|264:294,1,85,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0

fight :)
Rue
489 posts
Joined July 2010
Rue
hiya!

[Collab]

Cilvery
03:27:271 (5) - confuses me errytime, why not just split it to 2 notes
04:12:604 (4) - you forgot the finish!
04:12:687 - put a spinner maybe? from here to 04:17:937 for example

cRyo
01:25:104 (5,6,7) - oh no, this triplet really doesn't belong here. i'd suggest to move 01:25:187 (6) to 01:25:021 - that one plays better. i myself wouldn't use either of them though!
03:42:604 (1,2,3,4) - how about something like this? dunno, it feels like jumping there

[Fromu]

stumbled upon a couple of quite unintuitive spots, those are:

00:30:437 (4,1,2) - that's fairly tricky, not a single time did i hit it properly. however, moving 00:30:771 (1) down there would work!
00:45:437 (3) - stacking with 4 would probably help

[Kite's Normal]

new players probably gonna have a fit dealing with the great number of 1/2 double notes you got there for them, Kite!
the rhythm kinda feels way too harsh for a normal, but other than that, it's a neat diff, nothing more really to complain about

[Easy]
01:07:604 (1,2) -
02:30:271 (1,2) -
03:57:604 (1,2) - they are soooo confusing for an easy, turn each into one long slider maybe?

clean diff otherwise

there you go, it's not much but hope it turns any useful to you guys!
Cilvery
346 posts
Joined May 2011
Topic Starter
Cilvery

Pokie wrote:

えっ、わたしは一番目だったの( ﾟдﾟ)!　うん！


General
  1. BG.jpg: 1023*767 Σ(´∀｀；) 縦と横を1 pixel伸びてください！　りょうかい
  2. Frostmourne と Kite はまだタグに含まれていないので、全難易度に追加してください。
あああおｋ

Easy
  • 01:08:937 (1,2,3) - 一番低いの難易度なので、repeated slider> slider > repeated slider 初心者には苦手なパターンだと思います。うーむ・・・

    01:41:271 (1) - 上記と同じ原因で、スピンナーの中心点に近い処へ移動するべきだと思います。　（パターンの修正も必要）なおした！



    01:44:437 (3,1) - リズムは少しやり辛いかもしれない、これはどうですか？


    01:46:604 - ここにnoteを追加。
    01:47:104 (1,2,3) - 赤線の1/1三連打はEasyとふさわしくないだと思うので、スライダーに入れ替えしませんか？おっけー

    02:31:604 (1,2,3) - 01:08:937 (1,2,3) - と同じパターンですが、ここも変更するべきです。あい
    03:03:937 (1) - ここに01:41:271 (1) - 書いた事と同じ

    03:07:104 (3,1) - リズムはここと一緒01:44:437 (3,1) -
    03:09:271 - noteの追加
    03:09:771 (1) - ここに01:47:104 (1,2,3) - 書いた事と同じ

    03:24:271 (4) - このnoteを削除する方がいいと思います
    03:54:604 (1) - ここに01:41:271 (1) - 書いた事と同じ

Kite's Normal
  • 00:16:438 (4) - Shorten this by 1/2 is more comfortable imo! plus adding a circle here 00:17:104 - , and swap these two into slider 00:17:438 (6,7) -


    00:31:271 (1) - adding finish here :P?
    00:51:271 (2) - Stack this perfectly under 00:49:271 (4) -
    02:15:104 (1) - Slidertrack hitted the HP bar xD Try to move these two 02:14:771 (7,1) - to a lower position?

    03:27:271 (1) - Sliders weren't snapped correctly on timing lines, better do a recalculation for sliders.
Oops, there are still lot of unsnapped notes._.
From AIBat


00:57:938 (1) - Unsnapped slider (end).
01:03:271 (1) - Unsnapped slider (end).
01:06:604 (5) - Unsnapped slider (end).
01:07:771 (7) - Unsnapped slider (end).
02:20:604 (1) - Unsnapped slider (end).
02:21:937 (2) - Unsnapped slider (end).
02:25:437 (6) - Unsnapped slider (end).
02:25:937 (1) - Unsnapped slider (end).
02:27:271 (3) - Unsnapped slider (end).
02:27:937 (4) - Unsnapped slider (end).
03:32:604 (1) - Unsnapped slider (end).
03:34:438 (3) - Unsnapped slider (end).
03:35:271 (1) - Unsnapped slider (end).
03:36:604 (2) - Unsnapped slider (repeat).
03:36:604 (2) - Unsnapped slider (end).
03:37:938 (1) - Unsnapped slider (end).
03:39:771 (3) - Unsnapped slider (end).
03:40:604 (1) - Unsnapped slider (end).
03:41:604 (3) - Unsnapped slider (end).
03:42:604 (4) - Unsnapped slider (end).

Frostmourne's Hard
  1. Stacking usage and spacing are kinda weird imo, as you have made great maps on other mapsets...kind of disappointed for this one >_<
  2. As it's just my own opinion, I may not pointing them out for a modding here.
    01:40:937 (1,2,1) - Kinda nonsense D: Delete this note instead of using a new combo 01:41:437 (1) -
    02:34:104 (1) - Remove this new combo as well.
    03:03:937 (3,4) - Try to use this rhythm instead, pretty off-beat'd atm.


    03:25:104 (1) - + 03:25:771 (3) - or 03:26:104 (4) - Swap their new combos
    03:28:770 (6) - Since it's reaching combo (10), try to start another new combo here
    03:51:271 (3,1,2) - These three should be in the same combo imho, delete new combo on 03:51:771 (1) - , 03:52:771 (3) - and adding it here
    04:07:937 (1,1,1,2,1,1,1,1,2) - What happened on this part :o Are they on purpose?
Aw it becomes a new combo modding D: I'm sorry!

Collab
  1. Cilvery
    00:39:937 (3,4) - ジャンプの配置少し変わってるだと思います、これはどうでしょう？

    00:42:438 (5,6,1,2,3,4) - み・・みえ・・見えないっ！！（冗談です）00:43:271 (4) - これを00:42:771 (1) - の下に移動したらもっと読みやすくになるだと思うのです。　かえた！
    00:53:604 (5,6) - 今の配置としてはもったいないだと思います・・なので一つの提案があります　かえたああ

    00:56:438 (5) - , 00:57:104 (1) - new comboを交換しましょう（00:57:104 (1) - は一人（？）しかいなくて寂しいと思いますよ（謎））　おおそこ多分間違えてたｗ
    01:16:604 (1) - 前のノートと三角にすると、もっと綺麗なパターンが見えます

    02:24:437 (3,4,5) - こういうリズムしか読めないパターンです。1/4のジャンプは入れても別にいいと思いますが、02:24:437 (3,4) - この二つにスペーシングを増えるべきです。

    02:41:938 (1) - 指摘とは言えないが、ここのスペーシングは前の連打と合ってないです。　たぶんなおってるとおもう

    02:49:271 (9) - 02:49:604 (1) - こういうパターンには4つずつする方がいいと思いますので、new comboを交換しましょう。そして02:49:938 (5) - これをnew comboする　おｋ！
    02:52:604 (5) - downbeatなので、new combo入れた方がいいと思います？

    たとえランダムジャンプしても、スペーシングの重視は不可欠だと思います。今のパターンから見ると、ほんとのランダムだったー見たいな気がするw わたしも上手くジャンプ作れないから、一緒に頑張りましょう！　がんばる！

  2. cRyo
    03:05:521 (4,5) - Use the same, or a larger spacing than 02:03:187 (3,4) - ? (0.55x↑)

    Nice enough.

以上です！もうすぐクリスマスが来るので・・幸運を祈ります！
modありがとーーーー
Cilvery
346 posts
Joined May 2011
Topic Starter
Cilvery

wring wrote:

やっほうう


General
probably nothing I say... (before mentioned)


Easy
00:16:937 (3) - スライダー終わりにwhistle?
00:22:604 (1) - スライダー頭にwhistle?
00:39:271 (3) - スライダー終わりにwhistle?
00:43:271 (2,3) - whistle
00:51:271 (4) - スライダー終わりにwhistle
01:01:271 (1) - リピートをやめて 01:01:937 - まで伸ばすのはどうですか。
01:07:604 (1,2) - (1)を消して(2)のスタートをここからにしてはどうでしょう。
01:26:604 (2) - whistle　かえた
02:01:937 (3) - スライダー終わりにwhistle?　
02:05:937 (2,3) - whistle?
02:13:937 (4) - スライダー終わりにwhistle
02:23:937 (1) - 前述
02:30:271 (1,2) - ^
02:37:771 (2) - スライダー終わりにadd whistle
02:49:271 (2) - whistle　おｋ
03:06:604 (2) - スライダー終わりにwhistle
03:28:937 (4) - リピートをなくしたほうがいいと思います。
03:39:604 (2) - whistle?
03:41:604 (1) - スライダー終わりにclap　おｋｋｋ
03:50:604 (2) - whistle
03:57:604 (1,2) - ここもスライダースタートにしてみてはどうでしょう。
音量100%でwhistleを追加するのは少々うるさいと思うので、追加する場合は下げることをおすすめします。



Kite's Normal
00:17:604 (6) - add whistle?
00:36:604 (1) - How about change finish to whistle on slider head?
00:43:271 (5) - add whistle to slider head
00:52:771 (1,2) - umm, a little weird rhythm for me. How about delete (1) and (2) start here?
01:18:604 (1) - add whistle to slider end?
01:39:937 (4) - ^
01:42:437 (5) - add whistle to slider end
02:05:937 (4) - add whistle to slider end?
02:10:604 (2) - How about this shape, it might look more beautiful.
17,196,130604,2,0,P|4:124|44:60,2,150,0|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
02:25:437 (6) - add whistle to slider head?
02:41:271 (6) - add whistle to slider end?
03:02:604 (4) - ^
03:05:104 (5) - add whistle to slider end
03:42:604 (4) - add whistle to slider end?



Frostmourne's Hard
heheh frost <33
00:16:937 (1) - add clap
00:24:104 (3,4) - This jump is a bit strange for me. I recommend you delete (3) or not jump.
00:36:604 (1) - intend to not stack?
01:35:271 (4,1) - switch NC?
01:40:104 (3) - remove clap on slider head
01:45:771 (5) - How about this?
02:02:604 (1) - add note? that will be better imo.
02:18:937 (2) - stack on next (3) not on (1)'s end
03:35:937 (1) - stack perfectly under (4)?



Collab
Heyhey cryo :33
00:17:271 (3) - move to x:16 y:100?
00:29:771 (4) - NC?
00:32:437 (4) - NC?
00:37:937 (1) - How about this flow?
00:38:937 (3) - if you change ^, you also should move this to (1)'s head.
00:57:771 (2) - This is very confused. Jump is nice but you should move to x:240 y:312 or other place will be more better.　かえた！！
01:11:271 (1,1,1,1) - How about put them farther more?
02:13:104 (4) - move to x:124 y:144?
02:24:937 (4) - I think this is not fit whole this diff because only this is too hard. The problem would be that (4)'s flow was against the (5). So if you want to keep that, how about arrange the (4)'s flow same as (5)?
02:51:438 (4,5,6) - I suggest this pattern.
03:30:604 (1,2) - How about switch these?
03:31:938 (1,2,3,4) - (nazi)こういうのどうですか？
464,192,211938,5,2,0:0:0
448,196,212104,1,2,0:0:0
456,204,212271,1,0,0:0:0
452,184,212438,1,2,0:0:0
03:44:438 (4) - add whistle to slider head
03:49:771 (6) - ^
03:57:104 (3,4) - , 03:58:437 (4) - (nazi)How about this? sorry only code...orz
184,320,237104,1,0,0:0:0
104,196,237271,2,0,P|148:200|196:220,1,85,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
352,236,237604,5,8,0:0:0
414,325,237771,2,0,P|446:289|460:256,1,85,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
359,125,238104,2,0,P|311:133|280:152,1,85,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
184,320,238437,2,0,P|232:312|264:294,1,85,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0

fight :)
modありがとーーー
Cilvery
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Cilvery

Rue wrote:

hiya! hi Rue nyan!!

[Collab]

Cilvery
03:27:271 (5) - confuses me errytime, why not just split it to 2 notes :<
04:12:604 (4) - you forgot the finish! added!
04:12:687 - put a spinner maybe? from here to 04:17:937 for example added spinner~~

cRyo
01:25:104 (5,6,7) - oh no, this triplet really doesn't belong here. i'd suggest to move 01:25:187 (6) to 01:25:021 - that one plays better. i myself wouldn't use either of them though!
03:42:604 (1,2,3,4) - how about something like this? dunno, it feels like jumping there

[Fromu]

stumbled upon a couple of quite unintuitive spots, those are:

00:30:437 (4,1,2) - that's fairly tricky, not a single time did i hit it properly. however, moving 00:30:771 (1) down there would work!
00:45:437 (3) - stacking with 4 would probably help

[Kite's Normal]

new players probably gonna have a fit dealing with the great number of 1/2 double notes you got there for them, Kite!
the rhythm kinda feels way too harsh for a normal, but other than that, it's a neat diff, nothing more really to complain about

[Easy]
01:07:604 (1,2) -
02:30:271 (1,2) -
03:57:604 (1,2) - they are soooo confusing for an easy, turn each into one long slider maybe? all fixed!

clean diff otherwise

there you go, it's not much but hope it turns any useful to you guys!
thank you for moddd !
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Pokie

Pokie wrote:

[*]cRyo
03:05:521 (4,5) - Use the same, or a larger spacing than 02:03:187 (3,4) - ? (0.55x↑) dont understand this = ="

Nice enough.[/list][/notice]
wring

wring wrote:

Collab
Heyhey cryo :33 wring wring !!!!!
00:17:271 (3) - move to x:16 y:100? umm i like current one ^^
00:29:771 (4) - NC? ok!
00:32:437 (4) - NC? no because NC will be too short = ="
02:13:104 (4) - move to x:124 y:144? ok!
03:57:104 (3,4) - , 03:58:437 (4) - (nazi)How about this? sorry only code...orz ok!
184,320,237104,1,0,0:0:0
104,196,237271,2,0,P|148:200|196:220,1,85,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
352,236,237604,5,8,0:0:0
414,325,237771,2,0,P|446:289|460:256,1,85,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
359,125,238104,2,0,P|311:133|280:152,1,85,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
184,320,238437,2,0,P|232:312|264:294,1,85,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0

fight :)
Rue

Rue wrote:

hiya! (ﾉ^^)ﾉ wow Rue mod !!!


cRyo
01:25:104 (5,6,7) - oh no, this triplet really doesn't belong here. i'd suggest to move 01:25:187 (6) to 01:25:021 - that one plays better. i myself wouldn't use either of them though! changed to slider ^^
03:42:604 (1,2,3,4) - how about something like this? dunno, it feels like jumping there hmm, i think non jumpy spacing also fits, but changed little bit !
Thanks~!! :)

http://puu.sh/1F3hc
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[General]
無音sliderslide追加したほうがいいかな
１番と２番のKiaiの長さがバラバラだから統一
FrostmourneとKiteをTagsに追加しよう
Lead-inは1500か2000あったほうがいいかな
Artistの項は"茶太"　にしてね　Romanised Artistは"Chata"のままで
Tagsに xmas christmas collab入れる
Count downとLetterboxいらないかな

[Collab]
緑線Resnapしてね
Unsnapped inherited (green) sections at:
00:00:459 - snap to 00:00:457
00:13:651 - snap to 00:13:653
00:13:841 - snap to 00:13:843
00:39:516 - snap to 00:39:521
00:39:683 - snap to 00:39:687
00:40:016 - snap to 00:40:021
00:40:183 - snap to 00:40:187
00:44:183 - snap to 00:44:187
00:44:349 - snap to 00:44:354
00:58:037 - snap to 00:58:021
01:08:599 - snap to 01:08:604
01:11:933 - snap to 01:11:937
01:12:599 - snap to 01:12:604
01:13:266 - snap to 01:13:271
01:40:849 - snap to 01:40:854
01:41:016 - snap to 01:41:021
01:42:433 - snap to 01:42:437
01:48:599 - snap to 01:48:604
02:10:037 - snap to 02:10:021
02:15:204 - snap to 02:15:187
02:20:599 - snap to 02:20:604
02:31:371 - snap to 02:31:354
02:48:183 - snap to 02:48:187
02:48:349 - snap to 02:48:354
03:08:704 - snap to 03:08:687
03:59:371 - snap to 03:59:354

00:12:419 (1) - 終点00:13:938 -
02:45:104 - Note追加？
03:13:937 - Breakここから？

[Hard]
00:00:459 - Remove this green line please.
00:26:271 (1) - Add newcombo here.
00:36:271 (6,1) - can be stacked in a better way.
01:40:437 (4) - Sounds better imo if there's no clap for this slider.
01:41:437 (1) - Remove newcombo.
04:01:437 (1) - ^
04:04:937 (1) ~ 04:12:437 (4) - no newcombo spam please.
04:12:437 (4) - feels much better if this difficulty is ended up with just a circle.

[Normal]
Use lower volume for slidertick hitsound. since it's louder than ordinary hitsounds.
03:27:271 (1) - Add finish here?
03:29:938 (1) - should start at 03:29:771 -
03:51:271 (1) ~ 04:01:438 (4) - I assume you've changed DS by mistake. I'd ask you to fix it up if it's not too though for you.
Nice use of arc sliders. really good job

[Easy]
04:12:604 (1) - Finish would be nice for the last of this difficulty.
04:12:771 - Add a spinner here like what you did in Collab diff?


EDIT:
00:13:854 - snap to 00:13:843
00:15:268 - snap to 00:15:271
00:23:268 - snap to 00:23:271
00:25:934 - snap to 00:25:937
00:35:351 - snap to 00:35:354
00:36:101 - snap to 00:36:104
00:36:434 - snap to 00:36:437
00:58:034 - snap to 00:58:021
01:08:184 - snap to 01:08:187
01:08:351 - snap to 01:08:354
01:08:596 - snap to 01:08:604
01:19:268 - snap to 01:19:271
01:21:934 - snap to 01:21:937
01:24:268 - snap to 01:24:271
01:32:601 - snap to 01:32:604
01:34:934 - snap to 01:34:937
02:02:851 - snap to 02:02:854
02:03:018 - snap to 02:03:021
02:09:934 - snap to 02:09:937
02:10:034 - snap to 02:10:021
02:15:101 - snap to 02:15:104
02:15:201 - snap to 02:15:187
02:20:596 - snap to 02:20:604
02:35:101 - snap to 02:35:104
03:59:368 - snap to 03:59:354
Last edited by Melophobia , edited 1 time in total.
Cilvery
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Cilvery

Melophobia wrote:

[General]
無音sliderslide追加したほうがいいかな
１番と２番のKiaiの長さがバラバラだから統一
FrostmourneとKiteをTagsに追加しよう
Lead-inは1500か2000あったほうがいいかな
Artistの項は"茶太"　にしてね　Romanised Artistは"Chata"のままで
Tagsに xmas christmas collab入れる
Count downとLetterboxいらないかな　ぜんぶやったーー

[Collab]
緑線Resnapしてね　おｋ
Unsnapped inherited (green) sections at:
00:00:459 - snap to 00:00:457
00:13:651 - snap to 00:13:653
00:13:841 - snap to 00:13:843
00:39:516 - snap to 00:39:521
00:39:683 - snap to 00:39:687
00:40:016 - snap to 00:40:021
00:40:183 - snap to 00:40:187
00:44:183 - snap to 00:44:187
00:44:349 - snap to 00:44:354
00:58:037 - snap to 00:58:021
01:08:599 - snap to 01:08:604
01:11:933 - snap to 01:11:937
01:12:599 - snap to 01:12:604
01:13:266 - snap to 01:13:271
01:40:849 - snap to 01:40:854
01:41:016 - snap to 01:41:021
01:42:433 - snap to 01:42:437
01:48:599 - snap to 01:48:604
02:10:037 - snap to 02:10:021
02:15:204 - snap to 02:15:187
02:20:599 - snap to 02:20:604
02:31:371 - snap to 02:31:354
02:48:183 - snap to 02:48:187
02:48:349 - snap to 02:48:354
03:08:704 - snap to 03:08:687
03:59:371 - snap to 03:59:354

00:12:419 (1) - 終点00:13:938 - 　かえた
02:45:104 - Note追加？
03:13:937 - Breakここから？　おｋ

[Hard]
00:00:459 - Remove this green line please.
00:26:271 (1) - Add newcombo here.
00:36:271 (6,1) - can be stacked in a better way.
01:40:437 (4) - Sounds better imo if there's no clap for this slider.
01:41:437 (1) - Remove newcombo.
04:01:437 (1) - ^
04:04:937 (1) ~ 04:12:437 (4) - no newcombo spam please.
04:12:437 (4) - feels much better if this difficulty is ended up with just a circle.　ぜんぶ直した！

[Normal]
Use lower volume for slidertick hitsound. since it's louder than ordinary hitsounds.
03:27:271 (1) - Add finish here?
03:29:938 (1) - should start at 03:29:771 -
03:51:271 (1) ~ 04:01:438 (4) - I assume you've changed DS by mistake. I'd ask you to fix it up if it's not too though for you.
Nice use of arc sliders. really good job　ぜんぶなおした～～

[Easy]
04:12:604 (1) - Finish would be nice for the last of this difficulty.
04:12:771 - Add a spinner here like what you did in Collab diff?　ぜんぶなおしたぞ！！
めろちゃんありがとう！！
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Thank you Pokie , wring , Rue and Melo for mods very muchhh

don't have much time now , so thanks to Cilvery for fixing it too :D

thank you !!!
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Merry xmas~

Edit: 1500th post
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Bakaphobia
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Bubblophobia
those
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those
[General]
  1. Red lines needed to properly count stanzas: 00:15:271 - 180bpm
    01:48:604 - , 03:11:270 - 04:01:936 - .
[Collab]
  1. 00:40:020 - RHRHHGRHGRHRGH sliderslide.wav
Cilvery
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those wrote:

[General]
  1. Red lines needed to properly count stanzas: 00:15:271 - 180bpm
    01:48:604 - , 03:11:270 - 04:01:936 - .
added

[Collab]
  1. 00:40:020 - RHRHHGRHGRHRGH sliderslide.wav
changed~
thank you!!
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Gogooo ;)
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To repair
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those wrote:

To repair
omae saaaaaaaaaa

arigato www
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Go fighto :3
Garven
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Some IRC modding for Cilvery's parts.

SPOILER
05:07 Garven: 00:01:121 -
05:08 Garven: 00:01:975 (2) -
05:08 Garven: 00:04:159 -
05:08 Garven: http://puu.sh/1FtFE
05:08 Garven: S dake tukau ni slider kikoeru
05:08 Cilvery: a~a~
05:08 Cilvery: wakatta =w=/
05:09 Garven: http://puu.sh/1FtGg
05:09 Cilvery: naosuuu
05:09 Garven: ha~i
05:09 Garven: yotta mod suta-to!
05:11 Garven: 00:52:104 (1,2,1) - amari muzukashi kamo
05:15 Garven: 01:41:271 (1) - ha ya su gi ma su. motto jikan kudasai
05:16 Garven: 02:14:771 (1,2,1) - mada amari muzukashiiii
05:17 Garven: 02:57:604 (1,2) - spacing ookii
05:17 Garven: 03:03:937 (1) - hayasugimasu
05:24 Garven: 03:54:604 (1) - ^
05:25 Garven: 04:01:437 (1) - new combo nozoku
05:42 Garven: Collab:
05:42 Garven: 00:13:854 - kono midori sen kesite kudasai. sousite 00:13:938 - aka sen ha 5%
05:47 Cilvery: ただいまーー
05:47 Garven: おかえり～
05:50 Garven: 01:12:604 (1,1) -　Ｆｉｎｉｓｈ　はどこ？
05:50 Garven: そうしてNew comboおおいだ
05:51 Cilvery: おおいかー
05:52 Garven: たくさんがHPDrain
05:52 Garven: へんになる
05:52 Cilvery: -1?
05:53 Garven: いえいえｍｍ
05:53 Cilvery: ええええええええ
05:53 Garven: New Combo Removeのほうがいい
05:53 Cilvery: ああ
05:53 Cilvery: new comboのせいで
05:53 Cilvery: へんになる　かｗ
05:54 Garven: q:
05:54 Cilvery: :D
05:56 Garven: 03:13:937 - http://puu.sh/1FuhL　　 -> http://puu.sh/1FuhS
06:00 Garven: おわり～
06:00 Cilvery: これ
06:00 Cilvery: Melophobia
06:00 Cilvery: って人に
06:00 Cilvery: これにしてって
06:00 Cilvery: 言われた
06:01 Cilvery: どうしよう！
06:02 Garven: http://puu.sh/1Fumc

Mostly talking about fixing the green lines in the Easy to fix sliderslide noise everywhere along with some harder spots and notes too soon after spinners.

[All difficulties]
Tons of unsnapped notes

[Normal]
03:13:186 - The sound cuts out slightly early and sounds weird. Snap the end of the spinner to the vocal or leave the end more audible.

[Hard]
00:29:937 (1,2,3,4) - This progression from a stack to movement into a return to a stack doesn't read or play very well for a Hard diff. I suggest rethinking it a bit.
00:42:604 (1) - Why such a short combo? Breaks your flow up. Make it longer to fit the music
01:06:604 (1) - ^
02:43:937 (1,2,3,4,5) - Stack, move, stack. This doesn't really flow well for such a smooth part of the song
Overall felt kind of tough for a Hard, but not spread-breaking, I guess.

[Collab]

[cYro]
02:33:937 (1,1,1,1) - Please don't new combo spam
03:55:437 (2,3,4) - Not a good spot for a 1/4 rhythm.
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Garven wrote:

[Hard]
00:42:604 (1) - Why such a short combo? Breaks your flow up. Make it longer to fit the music

at least, can I leave NC on this one please ? 00:42:937 (1) - , just felt this 00:44:604 (8) - will be too long for 1 nc, I try not to exceed 10 for each set.

The points ,where I didn't mention, were fixed accordingly

Overall felt kind of tough for a Hard, but not spread-breaking, I guess. I'm not good at mapping , really sorry for this..
Thank you for mod very much Garven !
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Fixed up the unsnapped notes and all that other stuff, for the most part. Also lined up a red line that was off by 1 ms in the Collab. Let's try this again~

Rebubbled!

Andrea
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~Easy~

Increase AR by 1 or 2 ticks at least.

~Frostmourne's Hard~

Increase HP Drain and Overall Difficulty by 1 tick.

~Collab~

Last Kiai is unsnapped by 1 ms.

Let me know when you're ready (:
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Garven wrote:

[Collab]

[cYro]
02:33:937 (1,1,1,1) - Please don't new combo spam
It was NC for every SV change baka Graven =3=
Cilvery
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Cilvery

Andrea wrote:

~Easy~

Increase AR by 1 or 2 ticks at least.

~Frostmourne's Hard~

Increase HP Drain and Overall Difficulty by 1 tick.

~Collab~

Last Kiai is unsnapped by 1 ms.

Let me know when you're ready (:
ok changed :3
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After some more IRC fixes here we go! Merry Christmas, Cilvery.

Ranked~
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omedetou~! <3
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R a r e wrote:

むっつりはやい
おめでとう(*´◡｀​*)
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おめでと～です(♥´∀` ♥)
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Hate to break the love but 00:23:270 (1) - has an unsnapped end.
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-kevincela-

ktgster wrote:

Hate to break the love but 00:23:270 (1) - has an unsnapped end.
Yeah,he's right. The 0,90x SV inherited section begins a ms after 00:23:270 (1) - ,making it unsnapped because of the SV which didn't change. I guess there's need to unrank here :\
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On my diff
03:32:603 -
02:20:603 -
were unsnapped

Edit : Here fixed + mod below http://puu.sh/1FyNN

Sorry for the trouble..
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-kevincela-
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-kevincela-
I checked the diffs and the problem is in various unsnapped inherited sections,which changed the SV of some sliders making them unsnapped. These are the points:

[Easy]

  1. 03:25:021 - snap to 03:25:019
  2. 03:27:021 - snap to 03:27:019
  3. 03:43:271 - snap to 03:43:269
  4. 03:59:021 - snap to 03:59:019
  5. 04:13:937 - snap to 04:13:935
  6. 04:16:604 - snap to 04:16:602
  7. 04:17:937 - snap to 04:17:935
  8. 04:19:271 - snap to 04:19:269
  9. 04:20:521 - snap to 04:20:519
  10. 04:20:687 - snap to 04:20:685
[Kite's Normal]

  1. 03:43:271 - snap to 03:43:269
  2. 03:43:521 - snap to 03:43:519
  3. 03:49:021 - snap to 03:49:019
  4. 03:55:021 - snap to 03:55:019
  5. 03:57:521 - snap to 03:57:519
[Frostmourne's Hard]

  1. 03:43:271 - snap to 03:43:269
  2. 04:07:271 - snap to 04:07:269
  3. 04:12:604 - snap to 04:12:602
[Collab]

  1. 03:43:271 - snap to 03:43:269
  2. 04:04:604 - snap to 04:04:602
  3. 04:07:271 - snap to 04:07:269
  4. 04:12:604 - snap to 04:12:602
  5. 04:13:937 - snap to 04:13:935
  6. 04:16:604 - snap to 04:16:602
  7. 04:19:271 - snap to 04:19:269
  8. 04:20:521 - snap to 04:20:519
Also,shouldn't be the Audio leadin 2000ms instead of 1957ms?

Fix these and call me back.
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yoshilove
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これ大好き！　ふぁいと～ふぁいと～！
Kite
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Kite
Oh damn, there's even more, thanks for pointing it out.
http://puu.sh/1FyNN
Flanster
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When you're done fixing the unsnapped timing points and update, I'll rerank.
Aurele
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Aurele

Lolicore Flandre wrote:

When you're done fixing the unsnapped timing points and update, I'll rerank.
You will need to wait for Kevin's rebubble first. Am I right?
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Pretty much.
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