GeneralYou have mlp but you don't have the full name of the show anywhere. actually My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic belongs in source.
There is a green line that is unsnapped in all difficulties at 21:543.
Vinyl's EasyVery good flow, fits the song well, perfect spacing, long sliders are in the right places, great hitsounding.
00:14:304 (1,2) - Perfect blanket.
00:35:637 (1,2,1) - Nazi -Exactly 0.85.
01:07:637 (1,2) - Responding to the IRC we had earlier. This pattern isn't really bad. It's not worth remapping to fix it IMO. My fix would probably clutter things up and I don't recommend that. Try to avoid what I did in I Refuse and place notes too close together. Remapping this would probably create such an issue.
01:15:637 (2,1) - Do fix this though.
01:36:970 (1,2,1) - Perhaps design this so that it looks like a mirror of the transition after the slider.
NormalThere are some things I was unsure about, but they seem fine now that I'm rechecking. I hate mapping songs that require a lot of triples like this. You did a good job of handling all the triples in a flowing manner. I definitely could not have pulled this off as cleanly.
00:21:415 (1) - The ways this curves into a straight slider, the part that is pointed towards the straight slider should be somewhat flat. My suggestion is to rotate the slider so that it ends pointing more towards the next slider.
00:29:859 (4,5) - Not sure if there is anything that can be done about it but the curves aren't lined up. Probably would require a rotation to fix.
01:12:526 (4,5) - ^ (Looks even worse flipped)
01:17:415 (2,1) - This wasn't like this in first kiai. first kiai version looked better IMO.
01:30:748 (1,2,3) - I don't understand why this is rotated differently than the first version. I think the angles should be more similar.
HardReally technical map. I enjoyed it a lot.
00:21:415 (1,2) - Carries strange flow, but that part is fine. Perhaps there is a better placement though. It seems that 2 would be more fitting under 1 in some pattern. I wouldn't have used just straight sliders, but that is just my opinion.
00:49:859 (1,2,3,4) - Curve could be better.
00:51:637 (1,2,3) - This spacing difference is excessive. Smoothly increase the spacing.
http://puu.sh/21cUx <smooth curve 1.0 > 1.1 > 1.3. IMO you shouldn't really go over 1.3. It doesn't really match the rest of the map in difficulty, because it's not really jump sounds being mapped.
01:03:193 (3,4) - I don't think this spacing change is necessary, but up to you if you want to change.
01:11:193 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,1) - I rather like how this is mapped.
01:21:859 (1,2,3) - Please use equal spacing.
01:23:637 (1,2) - Flow just feels odd here. Why do you map this part so differently than 01:21:859 (1,2,3) - . ? I prefer it if you kept the flow the same through here without gaps in the beat. It feels more right, and you can make a better pattern if you do.
01:29:859 (3,4,5) - Small spacing discrepancy.
01:33:193 (3,4,5) - ^
InsaneI probably missed a few things here.
00:08:970 (7) - This should be more like 8 IMO.
00:09:859 (9,1) - This being 0.96 is making me 100.
00:19:415 (4,5,6,7,8) - I don't think the song properly matches the pattern here. It plays alright but I don't think those vocals carry that back and forth pattern vibe, and 7 and 8 aren't parallel. that really bothers me. You definitely need to fix that. Notice that 8 is properly aligned in the pattern and 7 isn't?
00:21:193 - I think it's easier to pick up the next part with this gap filled. There's not much options to resolve this with your current pattern, but there are some, but ideally you should have a note here. Option 2 is to space this gap 1.00 which will remove the odd transition and make it easier to pick up the beat.
00:27:415 (5,6,7) - spacing is changing a bunch here? At least make sure 00:27:637 (6,7,1) - has equal spacing so that it doesn't look weird.
00:33:859 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - spacing could be more consistent.
00:39:193 (1,2) - Transition could look a lot better.
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/608790 <Try to accomplish something like that.
01:16:526 (5,6,7,8,9) - Spacing could be cleaned up. Very small though.
01:34:748 (7,8,9,10,1) - Clean up this spacing?
ConclusionVery little wrong. I would say it's close to being bubble worthy.