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Wafu wrote:

Black - Suggestion
Blue - I highly recommend you to fix this
Red - Unrankable

[Easy]

00:15:023 (4) - Move this note on 187;248 to be on the same line as 00:13:634 (2). You've made it as I suggested now in another part, so you could follow it. fixed
00:06:340 (5) - Since 00:04:604 (2,4) are on the same line, 00:06:340 (5) could be on 228;246 to be on the same line with 00:05:646 (3) fixed
00:25:442 (3) - CTRL+G to follow 00:26:831 (1) better way, it breaks flow
no changes i like this
00:26:831 (1) - If you followed ^, move it down to don't break snap ^
00:32:388 (1) - Move red point on 341;233. It looks weird when is this shape so sharp at the center.
I had the red dot formed a curve so well groomed
00:34:125 (2,3) - To make better blanket, move 00:34:125 (2) - on 283;168 and 00:34:472 (3) on 205;127
circles by slider change
00:36:556 (3,4,5) - This would fit better with slider like 00:35:514 (2) also with repeat, becuase if you listen music carefuly you'll notice that these notes feels to be a bit connected with some noise.
nuu! if the instrumental tracks are good 3 strokes
00:50:448 (1) - Move on 185;198 to make perfect stack with 00:48:364 (3) ok fixed
00:53:226 (1) - Move on 252;252 ^ fixed
00:54:268 (2) - Move on 300;181 to make perfect blanket and better distance between objects fixed
00:59:478 (4,3) - Avoid overlap by moving 01:01:562 (3) up. fixed

[Normal]

00:07:035 (1) - Avoid overlap with 00:05:299 (3) by rotating 00:07:035 (1) no changes
00:31:346 (4) - Move on 278;62 to make constant distance between 00:30:304 (2,3,4) I do not understand that if I move the note to the distance indicated distace break the snap
00:36:556 (4,5) - Move the slider on 00:36:556 and add repeat. The same reason as on easy. no changes I like this
01:04:340 (3) - Move on 285;291 to make perfect stack. Fixed
01:39:070 (2,3) - Make slider from these because it's hard for new players to beat accurately pattern with redtick notes. not think it is very tough to understand so no changes
02:16:579 (2,3,4) - Better with CTRL+J, then moving it somewhere, because it breaks flow this way. I would like it very separate notes
02:22:136 (2,3,4,5) - ^ ^

Thanks You So Much For The Mod
Good map though. At least eLtXXx's Insanity needs to improve hitsounds very much!
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"All fixed" ... Please, don't lie to me. I always recheck a map after I modded it, but I see no change there. I just hate lazy mappers which almost totally ignores the mods. I'll appreciate if you'll answer this.
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Wafu wrote:

"All fixed" ... Please, don't lie to me. I always recheck a map after I modded it, but I see no change there. I just hate lazy mappers which almost totally ignores the mods. I'll appreciate if you'll answer this.
I made changes, so please do not place offensive words like "i hate" that are of more thanks, I answered the mod OKAY!
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Gero wrote:

Wafu wrote:

"All fixed" ... Please, don't lie to me. I always recheck a map after I modded it, but I see no change there. I just hate lazy mappers which almost totally ignores the mods. I'll appreciate if you'll answer this.
I made changes, so please do not place offensive words like "i hate" that are of more thanks, I answered the mod OKAY!
I haven't found them, at least do not lie to mr with: "all fixed" if i could not find anything fixed.
I will recheck it tomorrow to know if im blind so I cant see the change or if it is not my problem XD
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00:30:999 (1) - Spacing, too big jump imo, make it a little closer

not changed yet
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BounceBabe wrote:

00:30:999 (1) - Spacing, too big jump imo, make it a little closer


not changed yet
Oh Thanks BounceBabe Fixed~
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When thats fixed i will put you on his list then, good luck
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BounceBabe wrote:

When thats fixed i will put you on his list then, good luck
Oh Oh Thanks \^W^/!
posted
Easy
clap spam at the start of this map feels waaay too much
00:40:723 (1) - remove new combo, its pointless
00:46:280 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - what part of the music are these combos following? they seem to be following none....dont like that
02:11:023 (1) - remove the new combo from here and put it onto 02:12:064 (2) - to follow your own pattern

normal
01:25:873 (1) - remove new combo, breaking your pattern
01:43:238 (1) - remove new combo
01:46:016 (1) - same again, this combo spam is not good
01:58:519 (3) - either add a new combo here or remove the one at 01:55:393 (1) - because you are making inconsistant patterns

XinDecent
00:08:772 (1,2) - this jump doesnt suit, song doesnt ask for it at all, using normal spacing at this point flows much better
00:16:760 (1) - remove new combo, your breaking your own pattern
00:33:430 (6,7,8) - spacing error, 7,8 are too close, they need more space like 6,7
00:34:993 (1,2,3) - why do these have different spacings? its no a jump and just doesnt really make much sense
00:53:574 (6,7,8) - to follow your pattern these should be a jump pattern, give them the same spacing as you used the two times before
01:19:621 (1) - remove the combo from here and put it onto the next note to follow your own pattern which currently you are breaking
01:24:484 (1,2) - again this jump doesnt suit, it doesnt follow the style you have been using for this part and seems to come out of nowhere, it breaks the flow and feels wrong to play, it should be normal spacing like the other times, i advise to remake this pattern
01:39:070 (4) - put a new combo here and remove it from the note after, it follows the music better
01:43:238 (1) - again remove combo, combo spam = bad
02:01:992 (5,6) - didnt suit having these slider ends overlapping and the spacing is also wrong, i advise to remake the 6 slider, making it more like this

02:13:106 (5,6) - same comment here too

eLtXXx's Insanity
main problem you have in this map is constantly going against your own style which keeps breaking the flow badly, sooo lets help that out

00:07:209 (8,1) - not a good unexpected jump, its the softest part of the song with no jumps then suddenly this, felt out of place so i advise to remake as normal spacing
00:07:903 (2,3,4,5) - no, just no, remake this whole pattern, in a way which follows atleast some kind of spacing and is readable. this is not rankable
00:12:939 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - whole section feels out of place, its just a jump every note, yet for all the times the song does this again its not like this. it really breaks the flow and plays bad, again remap this section so that it follows the style your using after it.
00:22:490 (5) - extend the spacing on this note to follow the rest of the pattern
00:25:095 - add a note here so that it follows your pattern
00:29:610 (5) - new combo
00:44:891 (1,1) - remove combo spam
00:45:933 (1,2,3,4) - again this pattern is too dramatic to suit how you have mapped all the rest of this section. tone it down so it follows the rest
01:00:172 (1,2,3) - (1,2) is 1/2 timing yet bigger spacing than (2,3) thats not good, respace this combo so that the spacing makes sense to the timing. 2,3 needs to be a bigger spacing than 1,2 so decrease the spacing between 1,2
01:23:094 (1,2,3,4) - level out the spacing between these
01:43:238 (1) - remove combo
01:46:016 (1) - again
01:48:795 (1) - again
01:52:615 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - same thing again, tone it down, its too much for alll the other patterns within the whole section. since this whole section is a copy paste from the 1st chorus, just apply the same things i said for that chorus again here
02:22:136 (1,2,3) - again unfitting jump, give normal spacing

overall just try to not break your own maps flow so much, dont think about trying to make a hard pattern, think about making the pattern what suits the song the best
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jericho2442 wrote:

Easy
clap spam at the start of this map feels waaay too much we are following the claps that sound in the instrumental
00:40:723 (1) - remove new combo, its pointless Fixed~
00:46:280 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - what part of the music are these combos following? they seem to be following none....dont like that I am following in this part of the voice, but i fix this part
02:11:023 (1) - remove the new combo from here and put it onto 02:12:064 (2) - to follow your own pattern Fixed~

normal
01:25:873 (1) - remove new combo, breaking your pattern Fixed~
01:43:238 (1) - remove new combo Fixed~
01:46:016 (1) - same again, this combo spam is not good Fixed~
01:58:519 (3) - either add a new combo here or remove the one at 01:55:393 (1) - because you are making inconsistant patterns Fixed~

XinDecent
00:08:772 (1,2) - this jump doesnt suit, song doesnt ask for it at all, using normal spacing at this point flows much better Fixed~
00:16:760 (1) - remove new combo, your breaking your own pattern Fixed~
00:33:430 (6,7,8) - spacing error, 7,8 are too close, they need more space like 6,7 Fixed~
00:34:993 (1,2,3) - why do these have different spacings? its no a jump and just doesnt really make much sense Fixed~
00:53:574 (6,7,8) - to follow your pattern these should be a jump pattern, give them the same spacing as you used the two times before Fixed~
01:19:621 (1) - remove the combo from here and put it onto the next note to follow your own pattern which currently you are breaking Fixed~
01:24:484 (1,2) - again this jump doesnt suit, it doesnt follow the style you have been using for this part and seems to come out of nowhere, it breaks the flow and feels wrong to play, it should be normal spacing like the other times, i advise to remake this pattern Fixed~
01:39:070 (4) - put a new combo here and remove it from the note after, it follows the music better Fixed~
01:43:238 (1) - again remove combo, combo spam = bad Fixed~
02:01:992 (5,6) - didnt suit having these slider ends overlapping and the spacing is also wrong, i advise to remake the 6 slider, making it more like this Fixed~

02:13:106 (5,6) - same comment here too Fixed~

eLtXXx's Insanity
main problem you have in this map is constantly going against your own style which keeps breaking the flow badly, sooo lets help that out

00:07:209 (8,1) - not a good unexpected jump, its the softest part of the song with no jumps then suddenly this, felt out of place so i advise to remake as normal spacing Fixed~
00:07:903 (2,3,4,5) - no, just no, remake this whole pattern, in a way which follows atleast some kind of spacing and is readable. this is not rankable Fixed~
00:12:939 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - whole section feels out of place, its just a jump every note, yet for all the times the song does this again its not like this. it really breaks the flow and plays bad, again remap this section so that it follows the style your using after it. Fixed~
00:22:490 (5) - extend the spacing on this note to follow the rest of the pattern Fixed~
00:25:095 - add a note here so that it follows your pattern Fixed~
00:29:610 (5) - new combo Fixed~
00:44:891 (1,1) - remove combo spam Fixed~
00:45:933 (1,2,3,4) - again this pattern is too dramatic to suit how you have mapped all the rest of this section. tone it down so it follows the rest Fixed~
01:00:172 (1,2,3) - (1,2) is 1/2 timing yet bigger spacing than (2,3) thats not good, respace this combo so that the spacing makes sense to the timing. 2,3 needs to be a bigger spacing than 1,2 so decrease the spacing between 1,2 Fixed~
01:23:094 (1,2,3,4) - level out the spacing between these Fixed~
01:43:238 (1) - remove combo Fixed~
01:46:016 (1) - again Fixed~
01:48:795 (1) - again Fixed~
01:52:615 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - same thing again, tone it down, its too much for alll the other patterns within the whole section. since this whole section is a copy paste from the 1st chorus, just apply the same things i said for that chorus again here Fixed~
02:22:136 (1,2,3) - again unfitting jump, give normal spacing Fixed~

overall just try to not break your own maps flow so much, dont think about trying to make a hard pattern, think about making the pattern what suits the song the best
Thanks For The Mod Jericho n.n!
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mod4mod

[Normal]
00:18:149 : remove NC
00:18:496 : NC here
00:48:711 : remove NC
00:49:059 : NC here
01:24:136 : add note ? / it up to you :)
01:39:070 : i think use silder to 01:39:591

[XinDecent]
00:07:903 : remove whistle
01:06:945 : try move to under silder 01:06:771 and add fin https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/589892
02:03:381 : add note ? / it up to you
02:03:555 : ^
02:14:495 : ^
02:14:669 : ^

[Insane]

00:54:615 : this silder end at 00:54:789 and note 00:54:963
01:06:771 : remove this silder and add note and 01:06:945 https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/589899
01:18:927 - 01:29:346 : i think you Should make whistle hitsound like XinDecent diff it good better 8-)
02:03:555 : add note ?

they're just suggestions

sry my poor english

BG so cute ;) Star
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indyinyou wrote:

mod4mod

[Normal]
00:18:149 : remove NC Fixed
00:18:496 : NC here Fixed
00:48:711 : remove NC clearly heard the word change here so no changes
00:49:059 : NC here ^
01:24:136 : add note ? / it up to you :)Ohhh I see O: Fixed
01:39:070 : i think use silder to 01:39:591 Nuu i like this :<, No changes

[XinDecent]
00:07:903 : remove whistle Fixed
01:06:945 : try move to under silder 01:06:771 and add fin https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/589892 oh i don't like that
02:03:381 : add note ? / it up to you ^
02:03:555 : ^ ^
02:14:495 : ^ ^
02:14:669 : ^ ^

[Insane]

00:54:615 : this silder end at 00:54:789 and note 00:54:963 Fixed!
01:06:771 : remove this silder and add note and 01:06:945 https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/589899 nuu i like this >< no changes
01:18:927 - 01:29:346 : i think you Should make whistle hitsound like XinDecent diff it good better 8-) ^
02:03:555 : add note ? no I do not like how it sounds with no added a note there

they're just suggestions Thanks for the mod indyinyou :3

sry my poor english No problem

BG so cute ;)Star Ohh Thanks *·*
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Hi~ m4m~~

[Easy]
00:25:442 (3) - Urge gun like the picture below?


01:38:723 (1) - To repeat that slide

do not see any particularly pointed to ^ ^
good diff~

[Normal]
Not normal and I do not have much difficulty difference...;;
00:59:130 (5) - Urge gun like the picture below?


01:22:052 (2) - Circle 2
01:24:484 (1) - ^
01:25:873 (4) - ^

good~

[XinDecent]

none.. good.. map...

[eLtXXx's Insanity]

none.. Perfect!!

good Beatmap star~~!!!
posted
hello, m4m ^^

Easy
  1. 00:13:634 (2,3,4) - maybe you can try to align these 3 notes on the center of the y-axis somehow ~ it doesn't matter too much i guess though
  2. 01:05:382 (1) - blanket more neater around 01:04:687 (3) - by adjusting the 2nd point a bit
  3. 01:08:508 - you should drag the break to here :P it has a nice effect ^^
  4. 01:21:358 (2) - make neater curve around previous slider? make symmetrical basically if you can
  5. 01:24:484 (1) - move last point to x:368 y:288
  6. 01:39:765 (2) - move to x:220 y:100


Normal
  1. 01:08:508 - same as Easy diff., drag break if you did it at easy (applies to other diffs too ~)
  2. 01:51:573 (5) - why not move to center of the axis xD, looks neater


XinDecent
  1. 00:18:496 (3) - i made a better curve for you here if you want (code is in spoiler)
    224,188,18496,2,0,P|284:224|292:308,1,160,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
  2. 01:07:118 (6) - add finish


eLtXXx's Insanity
  1. 00:07:209 (8) - one grid to left so that (7) curves around it neater. Also so that you can create a better triangle pattern
  2. 01:03:298 (3) - imo it would flow much better if this was placed below 01:02:603 (1) - , rather than above it ~
  3. 01:24:484 (1,2) - you could try to horizontal flip 01:24:136 (4) - and having these 2 notes at this position instead so you can create a perfect geometris shape with 01:23:094 (1,2,3,4,1) -


nice job ^^ gl
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Didn't really find anything to mod. Possibly too short for any kudosu haha. Anyways these are my suggestions. (From modding queue)

XinDecent

00:10:161 (1) - shift the spinner to 00:10:334, end it at the same spot. Add a circle at 00:10:161
00:33:430 (6) - new combo?
02:03:381 - maybe add a slider here, end at 02:03:555
posted

HabiHolic wrote:

Hi~ m4m~~

[Easy]
00:25:442 (3) - Urge gun like the picture below?


01:38:723 (1) - To repeat that slide

do not see any particularly pointed to ^ ^
good diff~

[Normal]
Not normal and I do not have much difficulty difference...;;
00:59:130 (5) - Urge gun like the picture below?


01:22:052 (2) - Circle 2
01:24:484 (1) - ^
01:25:873 (4) - ^

good~

[XinDecent]

none.. good.. map...

[eLtXXx's Insanity]

none.. Perfect!!

good Beatmap star~~!!!
Thanks For The Mod n3n!
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meiikyuu wrote:

hello, m4m ^^

Easy
  1. 00:13:634 (2,3,4) - maybe you can try to align these 3 notes on the center of the y-axis somehow ~ it doesn't matter too much i guess though
  2. 01:05:382 (1) - blanket more neater around 01:04:687 (3) - by adjusting the 2nd point a bit Fixed
  3. 01:08:508 - you should drag the break to here :P it has a nice effect ^^ Fixed
    Fixed
  4. 01:21:358 (2) - make neater curve around previous slider? make symmetrical basically if you can Fixed
  5. 01:24:484 (1) - move last point to x:368 y:288 Fixed
  6. 01:39:765 (2) - move to x:220 y:100 Fixed


Normal
  1. 01:08:508 - same as Easy diff., drag break if you did it at easy (applies to other diffs too ~) Fixed
  2. 01:51:573 (5) - why not move to center of the axis xD, looks neater
Fixed

XinDecent
  1. 00:18:496 (3) - i made a better curve for you here if you want (code is in spoiler) Fixed
    Fixed
    224,188,18496,2,0,P|284:224|292:308,1,160,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
  2. 01:07:118 (6) - add finish
Fixed

eLtXXx's Insanity
  1. 00:07:209 (8) - one grid to left so that (7) curves around it neater. Also so that you can create a better triangle pattern Fixed
  2. 01:03:298 (3) - imo it would flow much better if this was placed below 01:02:603 (1) - , rather than above it ~ Fixed
  3. 01:24:484 (1,2) - you could try to horizontal flip 01:24:136 (4) - and having these 2 notes at this position instead so you can create a perfect geometris shape with 01:23:094 (1,2,3,4,1) - Fixed


nice job ^^ gl
Thanks For The Awesome MOD! :3
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neonat wrote:

Didn't really find anything to mod. Possibly too short for any kudosu haha. Anyways these are my suggestions. (From modding queue)

XinDecent

00:10:161 (1) - shift the spinner to 00:10:334, end it at the same spot. Add a circle at 00:10:161 i dont like no changes :3
00:33:430 (6) - new combo? Fixed
Thanks For The Mod
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