Gladi wrote:

Offset 363 -> Make the same for all diff's


NO.1

00:51:18 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17) - Please spice things up here, make it go left, right, up down, out of the screen or what ever, but a long stack like that doesn't fit in the nice map imo : (
00:48:36 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15) - < this stream rocks ^^ mabye make the one above like that : D
02:28:95 - I don't like the double BPM, it's 2 fast and also scared the shit out of me when I played it ^^'


Hard

00:46:98 - Normal hitsounds here (?)


Normal

00:46:27 (3,4,5) - Move these one grid level to the left.


Very nice map, hope it'll get ranked soon!

K2J wrote:

Wow. That last difficulty is really intense. I look forward to seeing replays of that. Why is Normal so short, though? I suggest renaming it "Easy" due to how short and simple it is.

Very solid map; can't find anything truly wrong with it.

Aeon wrote:

[normal]

0:13:157(4) make half beat shorter...
00:16:510(4) ^
00:17:304(1) one and half beat shorter
...but better replace that spinner and break with notes... same for the next spinner

[hard]

00:13:598(2) half a beat shorter
00:15:892 half a beat shorter
00:17:304 same suggestions from normal
00:25:157(8) remove
00:30:715(8) remove
01.08:127(1) end half a beat later
01:10:951(1) ^
01:13:774(1) ^
01:18:715(8) same as in 00:25:157
01:24:362(8) ^
01:29:127(1) end half a beat before and add a note 1 beat later
02.21:546(1) replace with notes ( this is hard after all)
02:27.186(1) make slider half a beat longer
02:29:657(1) maybe make it a slider 1 beat long

[NO. 1]

01:05:304(1) make half a beat longer

[Final Thoughts]

pretty well made beatmap set... very fun to play especialy No. ! but i cant play it yet too much double click for me , in addition i found some space inconsistencies and note overflow in No. 1 but... i wont mention them right now are those requiere my full attention and im not in a condition to do that right now... also will go over the other maps in better detail later, also normal is waaaay waaaay too short, that are note positioning make it more suitable to be easy dificulty

although it has some errors doesnt mean it doesnt deserve a star... so STARRED because of your effort and original note serpents
cya later!

Aeon wrote:

[normal]

All fixed except these:

00:25:157(8) remove
00:30:715(8) remove
01:18:715(8) same as in 00:25:157
01:24:362(8) ^
02:29:657(1) maybe make it a slider 1 beat long

Sorry I dont know whats these for?


After all thanks for your modding

Saturos-fangirl wrote:

[Easy]
I would feel better if this had a wider snap but other than that it looks great

Saturos-fangirl wrote:

[Normal]
00:27:89 (8,9,10,1) - can you line this up vertically from the end of 7?
00:34:06 (1) - stack under the end of 7
01:16:42 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8...) - this pattern is repeating a little too much can you mix it up a bit?
01:21:53 (8,9,10,1) - align vertically from 7
01:27:71 (1) - stack under end of 7
yeah the repetition of an entire verse's worth of map is the only big problem I have with this

Saturos-fangirl wrote:

[No. 1]
00:13:06 (11) - new combo
00:18:71 (11) - ^
delete and re-place the break right after this section
00:50:48 (1) - i dont really like this, could you make it something not-spinner or delete it?
01:43:77 (1) - could you stack these under one of the fading stream notes and then align the other two horizontally with it?
One last thing, with the 15 note streams I would prefer it if you put new combos in the middle but that's just me~


have a shiny star

Aeon wrote:

[normal]

All fixed except these:

00:25:157(8) remove
00:30:715(8) remove
01:18:715(8) same as in 00:25:157
01:24:362(8) ^
02:29:657(1) maybe make it a slider 1 beat long

Sorry I dont know whats these for?


After all thanks for your modding

MaxwellDemon wrote:

Just a brief look~

NO.1

Intense, intense!

00:46:33 (10,11,12,13,14,15) - Too confusing, unfortunately, and not very intuitive and fun with those super-fast sliders. D:
00:51:18 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17) - Same thing, not very fun or intuitive
02:29:65 (5) - Let's not make the sliders anymore faster, I think... XD

Some of the jumps here are VERY, VERY extreme and makes me question if it is possible to complete them. I suggest getting a few top 10 players to try this difficulty out.

At the health drain is rather low! XD

I like though~

Larto wrote:

All difficulties:
- About timing sections that change samples/volume: Don't place them directly on notes, place them 1/4 or 1/2 earlier. As long as you inherit nothing bad will happen. If they are on notes, though, you can get the wrong sample/volume when clicking too early.

Insane:
00:35:48 (5) - New Combo?
00:39:89 (8) - ^


This map definitely found some inspiration by Justice To Believe, huh :p

Alace wrote:

<easy>
Remove those useless time lines
00:36:71 (1) a little hard for new players Add one repeat of the slider

<hard>
00:34:77 (2) down 1 (tiny grid)

Godd map
but it is too hard for me T.T

Saturos-fangirl wrote:

[Easy]
looks great~

Saturos-fangirl wrote:

[Hard]
01:27:18 (8,9,10,1) - this pattern has a lot of overlap :/ can you clean it up?
02:07:42 (1) - delete and re-place break

Saturos-fangirl wrote:

[No. 1]
01:21:53 (7,8,9,10,11) - move these so they arent under the slider
02:18:71 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15) - can you break up these runs a little? theyre getting kinda repetitive

minyeob wrote:

Looks fine~

[Easy]
51:190(1)- Clap.

[NO. 1]
22:780(1) Move up a bit.

Star'd

You don't have to feed me a kudosu.

Pasonia wrote:

Nothing wrong with Easy or NO.1. (But fuck, are you seriously aiming for rank on your last map?)

Hard

00:42:71 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Offscreen. Move it higher.
01:39:18 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - ^

And NO.1 is fun to play with. =3

Kio wa de yi mia~~~~~~! ^.^ b