Graveyarded already :C?
Oh well I'll still put my mod here.
[General]
I set the beatmap genre to Anime: Japanese
The combos and patterns in this map will need a big change, I find too often the ends of sliders being the beginning of the next stanza which is very awkward and not how it should be done.
The beginning of the song is more calm so I recommend lowering the hitsound volume to 30-35%
You can continue the normal volume after 00:07:769 though I suggest using 70% maximum, 80% still sounds a bit loud to be honest.
[Easy]
00:36:569 (2,3,1) - copypasted from 00:22:169 (3,4,1) ? You could try something different, repetative patterns aren't very fun..
I'll make some suggestions here on the flow and how patterns play, it could use some changes.
00:02:009 (2) - move to x:368 y:128
00:02:969 (3) - move to x:448 y:224 ^
00:03:929 (1) - try this
384,336,3929,6,0,B|320:277|231:286,1,160,0|2,0:0|0:0,2:0:0
00:05:849 (2) - move to x:120 y:344
00:07:769 (1) - add a finish?
00:09:689 (4) - move down to x:256 y:80
00:10:649 (1) - x:360 y:160
00:12:569 (2) - move to x:256 y:240
00:13:529 (3) - x:152 y:168
00:14:489 (1) - x:160 y:296
00:20:249 (2) - this
448,216,20249,2,0,B|448:304|352:336,1,160,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
00:22:169 (3,4,1) - select these and move them to x:232 y:336
00:23:129 (1) - after that use this code for this slider
120,288,23129,6,0,B|56:232|80:136,1,160,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
00:25:049 (2) - move to x:176 y:56
00:26:009 (3) - x:305 y:40
00:26:969 (1,2,3) - select these and move them to x:408 y:112
00:28:889 (4) - move the slider to x:320 y:320 and then put the end sliderpoint to x:160 y:328 and the middle sliderpoint to x:248 y:344
00:34:649 (1) - curve it a bit more (middle sliderpoint to x:368 y:240 for example)
00:50:009 (1) - v
200,40,50009,6,0,B|136:104|176:200,1,160,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
00:51:929 (2) - nudge it to x:104 y:296
00:52:889 (3) - move it to x:240 y:304, curver it so the middle slider point goes to x:280 y:320
00:57:209 (3) - add a note?
01:02:009 (4) - ^
01:04:889 (2) - ^
01:06:329 (3) - how about this
this01:13:529 (4) - add a note
01:20:249 (3) - ^
01:21:689 (5) - curve it a bit more?
01:27:449 (3,4) - how about using a mirrored version of 01:25:529 (2)
[Amu's Normal]
I see symmetry!
00:12:089 (2) - a bit too close to (1) dont you think?
00:39:929 (4,5) - you sure you cant make these two look better
00:49:049 (4,5) - replace them with a mirrored version of 00:48:089 (3) just like the start of the combo with (1) and (2) for consistency
00:51:929 (1) - I think it would be better if this ended at 00:53:849, and you can remove 00:53:849 (1)
00:55:769 (1) - add finish
01:11:129 (1) - add finish at the beginning of the slider
01:26:489 (1) - ^
[Hard]
00:53:849 (1,2,3) - kinda overmapped and doesn't fit well.. try
this the (4) can be stacked to 00:56:249 (1)
00:59:249 (5,6,7,8) - dont really see any rhythm here to fit into streams, did you put them for difficulty increase?
01:02:729 (4,5,6,7) - ^
01:04:169 (4) - I suggest you do better rhythm here instead of just placing 1/2 objects one after another.
For example instead of 01:04:169 (4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,1,2) you made, it can be like
this which sounds much better.
01:24:809 (2) - remove note?
01:25:289 (3) - ^
01:27:209 (3) - curve it to 01:26:729 (2) ?
Thats all from me