1. Emergency (5 stars, 557 notes)
2. extra (5 stars, 53 notes)
3. Insane (5 stars, 434 notes)
4. Normal (4,15 stars, 20 notes)

1. You must add BG. This is unrankable.
2. Remove giO-'s maps. This is big problem. If you do not remove other osu.file, this map will nuke.
3. Remove all tags. It is the tag of the original map set. They are not necessary for this map.

1. This map must add hitsounds. I suggested to imitate the original map.
2. 00:02:489 (1) - 1 grid left. move to an extension of 00:02:639 (2,3,4).
3. 00:03:839 (2,3,4) - The same shape as the 00:02:639 (2,3,4).
   00:03:914 (3,4) - 1 grid right up
   Edit: sry, I made mistake ><
4. 00:04:139 (1) - stack to 00:03:689 (1)
5. 00:04:738 (3,4) - I do not like this flow.
   
   
   try this
6. 00:07:437 (1,2) - You can improve the flow by adding the angle.
   
   
7. 00:13:584 (1,2,3) - Ctrl+G?
8. 00:18:531 (1,2) - To close the distance. this reverse may be confuse player.
9. 00:30:226 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - Distance. This small difference is the look bad.
10. 00:35:773 (7) - Confuse the player by the difference between the 00:35:473 (6).
    
    
    try this
    00:35:773 (7) - 00:36:073 (8) -
11. 00:45:068 (1) - This slider is unrankable. hitburst of 00:44:019 (5,6,7) hide reverse arrow.
12. 01:00:136 (1,1) - this is unrankable.
    

    Ranking Criteria wrote:

    No two hitobjects on the same tick.

13. 01:14:004 (4) - I could not understand this rythm.
    01:14:004 (4) - move to 01:14:154 and remove01:14:454 (5).
    01:14:004 - add note.
14. 01:16:702 (1) - same as 01:14:004 (4).
15. 01:27:647 (1) - stack to 01:27:197 (3).
16. 01:50:436 (5) - same as 00:02:489 (1). 1 grid right

NewRulerNA wrote:

hi hai

SPOILER

[General]

1. You must add BG. This is unrankable. yes
2. Remove giO-'s maps. This is big problem. If you do not remove other osu.file, this map will nuke. yes
3. Remove all tags. It is the tag of the original map set. They are not necessary for this map.

ok

[Emergency]

1. This map must add hitsounds. I suggested to imitate the original map. ok, need to find someone to do it for me
2. 00:02:489 (1) - 1 grid left. move to an extension of 00:02:639 (2,3,4). ok
3. 00:03:839 (2,3,4) - The same shape as the 00:02:639 (2,3,4). ok
   00:03:914 (3,4) - 1 grid right up ok
   Edit: sry, I made mistake >< orz
4. 00:04:139 (1) - stack to 00:03:689 (1) yes
5. 00:04:738 (3,4) - I do not like this flow. changed
   
   
   try this thanks
6. 00:07:437 (1,2) - You can improve the flow by adding the angle.
   
   
7. 00:13:584 (1,2,3) - Ctrl+G? thanks
8. 00:18:531 (1,2) - To close the distance. this reverse may be confuse player. closed it
9. 00:30:226 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - Distance. This small difference is the look bad. thanks for noting
10. 00:35:773 (7) - Confuse the player by the difference between the 00:35:473 (6).
    
    
    try this
    00:35:773 (7) - 00:36:073 (8) -
11. 00:45:068 (1) - This slider is unrankable. hitburst of 00:44:019 (5,6,7) hide reverse arrow.
12. 01:00:136 (1,1) - this is unrankable.
    

    Ranking Criteria wrote:

    No two hitobjects on the same tick.

13. 01:14:004 (4) - I could not understand this rythm. changed
    01:14:004 (4) - move to 01:14:154 and remove01:14:454 (5).
    01:14:004 - add note.
14. 01:16:702 (1) - same as 01:14:004 (4).
15. 01:27:647 (1) - stack to 01:27:197 (3).
16. 01:50:436 (5) - same as 00:02:489 (1). 1 grid right

thanks <3

good luck~

Frostmourne wrote:

as I promised Neptune xD

Emergency
00:18:531 (1) - remove 1 repeat , just triplet is sufficient Done
00:33:824 (6) - should be far from previous note about 1 grid up Yes
00:58:561 (7) - new combo and 2 left grid to make a star Oh, thanks
01:28:546 (7,1) - looks hard Didn't change
01:54:334 (2) - it's stacked under slider , looks hard but not a big problem

[Colours]
Combo1 : 215,107,0
Combo2 : 129,87,63
Combo3 : 179,164,140

-Kirito wrote:

hi~ M4M

[General]
Wallpaper size is 800 x 596 is not used.
BG Size : 800x600 or 1024x768 change.
I had to say in chat. Approved this map is impossible.


[Emergency]
HPDR +1?
01:04:858 - 01:09:056 - please fill in the notes.no map needs break
01:43:239 - 01:47:437 - ^ same
01:09:656 - 01:18:052 - Kiai time add
01:19:251 - 01:38:442 - ^

-Note thanks for this :3

SPOILER

00:03:089 (6) - clap on head
00:03:914 (3,4) - grid 3 up1
00:04:139 (1) - clap on tail
00:05:488 (2) - clap
00:06:537 (2) - clap on head
00:07:887 (3) - ^
00:07:437 (1) - x:56 y:232
00:08:936 (1) - clap on tail
00:10:136 (1) - ^
00:11:485 (1) - clap
00:11:860 - note add
00:11:935 - ^ ,00:11:935 (1,2) - 00:12:085 - move
00:12:085 (1) - finish on head
00:21:230 (5) - Remove
00:20:181 (1,2,3,4) - 1/2 move
00:20:031 - note add
00:20:481 (1,2,3) - finish on head
00:20:481 (1) - NC
00:21:380 (5) - clap add
00:21:680 (6) - NC and finish add
00:21:830 (1) - NC Remove
00:31:275 (1) - finish on head
00:32:175 (4) - clap
00:33:374 (1) - ^
00:34:274 (1) - clap on tail
01:18:052 (7) - NC and finish
01:18:352 (1) - NC Remove
01:18:352 (2,3) - finish
01:18:951 (4) - clap
01:47:437 (1) - finish, x:104 y:184
01:47:587 (2,3,4) - clap, x:240 y:240
01:47:887 (5) - x:208 y:96 (01:47:437 (1,2,3,4,5) - Jamp)
01:48:037 (1) - finish on head
01:56:433 (1,4,7) - finish and Numder 4,7 NC
01:56:507 (2,3,5,6,8,9) - clap

Clap missing here and there. Clap put gave a nice

We wish without appoverd be ranked.

Katty Pie wrote:

hi~ M4M~


General

• Better if you add 3 color~

[Colours]
Combo1 : 215,107,0
Combo2 : 129,87,63
Combo3 : 179,164,140

I will think about it.

looks better~

• Oh so many overlaps ;w; Will be better if you stack it~ 00:02:639(2,3,4) and 00:03:839 (2,3,4) it will be looks better done this
00:03:689(1,1) - the same~
00:11:035(1,2,3,4,5,3,1) - ^ e.t.c Plz check it on all diff~

• Spam NC~ Will be better if you will be put nc on Big wite ticks~

00:03:389 - remove NC
00:04:139 - ^
00:04:888 - add NC
00:05:338 - remove NC
00:05:788 - ^
e.t.c check it on all diff~

Hmm no, I guess I'll do my combos on the way I feel with the music

• BG should have size 1024x768( 800x600 or 640x480) You have now 800x596 correct it~ Thanks

• Where hitsounds? U should add hitsounds for for a more diverse sound~~ Working on this.

•MAP is very overmapped~ U can make rhythm better~

00:07:212 - remove this note
00:15:833 - replace on 1 note and slider 1/1 on white ticks
00:24:004 - remove this note
00:26:403 - ^
00:30:301 - ^
00:30:600 - ^
00:30:900 - remove 1 repeat and put this slider on white tick
00:33:599 - remove note
00:36:073 - replace on 2 notes or slider 1/2
00:39:971 - replace on double slider 1/2 or add note on 00:40:271
00:43:119 - replace on 3 notes
00:54:738 - remove note
01:49:836 - replace on 2 notes
01:52:310 - remove note
-> This is meant as the hardest diff of the mapset that it will be, and imo, I don't think this is overmapped. I don't understand why you would remove one note out of each stream. as they perfectly fit with the music.

• You should make another diff for rank bcz map very easy for approval~ play time 1:57 it's very few for approval~ http://osu.ppy.sh/wiki/Ranking_Criteria#Mapset

SPOILER

Mapsets must have at least two osu! standard or Taiko difficulties, one of which must be an Easy/Normal level. It is possible for Marathon difficulties to have only 1 difficulty, but it must be named Marathon for the BSS to allow the submission to pending.

So I guess I will be making a whole mapset.
It's all for me~ good luck~