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Pereira006
hi!! saw modreqs, love this song and map

[General]

  1. the luka5.png http://puu.sh/2ggoA when I play this map i can see very well that Border white, can be clean more? because this made me frustration IMO

[Easy]

Hitsound:

  1. 00:50:155 (1) - when you listen the end slider you will hear weird there drum in end slidre, need drum to auto in additions because the drum is don't sense this music IMO also i see other pattern hitsound don't have this hitsound drum and diff hard don't have too.
  2. 00:54:329 (1) - ^ same happened
  3. 01:04:503 (3) - missing add clap in end slider because you have done pattern hitsound other part and diff hard, also i feel lack hitsound
  4. 01:12:068 (2) - ^ same happened
  5. 01:21:459 (2) - missing add clap in repeat slidr, I aldready explain before like 01:04:503 (3) because thist is again happened
  6. 01:25:372 (3) - missing add clap in end slider, again happened before
  7. 01:30:329 (3) - missing add clap
  8. 01:31:372 (5) - ^ same
  9. 01:50:416 (3) - change whistle to clap in end slider i feel this beat is more sense than whistle IMO also you aldready this in hard
  10. 01:53:285 (2) - missing add clap in start slider because I see you lost pattern
  11. 01:54:590 (3) - missing add clap in end slider ^ same explain
  12. 02:05:807 (2) - why didn't add clap in start slider ? the beat really need that as is more sense lot IMO
  13. 02:07:111 (3) - missing add clap in end slider
  14. 02:09:981 (2) - missing add clap
  15. 02:10:503 (3) - missing add clap in end slider
  16. 02:21:981 (1) - weird hear, the in end slider the sampleset need change drum to auto
  17. 02:23:807 (2) - really need add clap in start slider because i guess you missing add, as you pattern hitsound
  18. 02:30:329 (1) - weird hear in end slider, the "addition" need change drum to auto like what happened at 00:50:155 (1)
  19. 02:44:938 (3) - add clap in repeat slider as pattern hitsoung missing like what happened at 01:04:503 (3)
  20. 02:49:111 (3) - add clap in end slider ^ same explain
  21. 02:53:285 (3) - ^ same
  22. 02:57:198 (3) - ^ same
  23. 03:02:155 (3) - change whistle to clap
  24. 03:05:546 (3) - add clap in repeat slider as pattern hitsoung missing like what happened at 01:04:503 (3)
  25. 03:10:503 (4) - change whistle to clap
  26. 03:11:546 (1) - missing add clap in start slider

    you lost pattern hitsound, inconsistency hitsound and beat really need more clap, i feel this diff is lack, should recheck hitsound and try same hitsound in diff hard because the hard is good than this

Gameplay:


  • 01:02:677 (1,2) - this spacing is jump that very hard to catch here in diff easy when I test play, better fix spacing IMO
    02:28:242 (2,3) - inconsistent spacing, look like is little jump is hard catch there IMO

    many check times, everthing look for me

[Alacat's Normal]

Hitsound:


  • really good they are consistency, many check times

gameplay:

  1. 00:39:720 (1) - I feel this part vocals look like continue is don't really so higher, should be Remove new combo that sense lot IMO IMO
  2. 00:48:590 (5,6) - this don't really fit with melody should be this http://puu.sh/2gfAj that really fit with melody if you don't like my suggestion try remap you owm this part because this broke me ryhthm and bad sound IMO
  3. 00:56:416 (1) - this really need remove new combo like what happened at 00:39:720 (1)
  4. 02:19:894 (1) - ^ same
  5. 02:28:764 (4,5) - again really bad sound like what happened at 00:48:590 (5,6)
  6. 02:36:590 (1) - i feel the vocal still continue better remove new combo IMO IMO like what happened before
  7. 03:14:155 (1,2,3,4,1) - don't fit you pattern combo color and don't fit this song try this http://puu.sh/2gfLi this should fit you pattern combo and song

[Hard]

Woow, 30 times I play this diff, this diff is really good, flow etc... everthing is good, and hitsound they are consistency o.o
sorry i didn't mod this diff, this look perfect for me
also 9OD lol I don't see problem, I get this 99% accuracy orz

[]

Star, sorry tiny mod as map is perfect
Question ? ask me in-game i can explain better as me eng is bad
I wish good luck! and bye bye!
alacat
fix new combo >.<

http://puu.sh/2gRWG

Thank you for modding guys ;)
cRyo[iceeicee]
m4p !! you know =3=
Hard

  • OD + 1 9 or 10 who cares \=3=/
  1. 00:15:459 (7,8,9,10,1) - this rhytm is strange, idk what is it following o:, you missing some sound at 00:15:720,and this note 00:15:981 (8) - starts from nowhere , i think you should move 00:15:981 (8) - to 00:15:720 + add whistle, and this whistle also 00:16:242 (9) -
  2. 00:51:198 (5,6) - prefer crl+g rhytm
  3. 01:28:503 (3,4) - ^ also they can be stacked
  4. 01:31:894 - add note + whistle at x256 y168 it will give you nice SB effect \:D/
  5. 03:42:590 - make triplet and add whistle on every note, match with piano ? placement could be smth like this http://puu.sh/2gWrV
    i started to write whistles suggestion but it turns into a wall of text so i decided to skip it xD
alacat's Normal
  • i think AR-5 is too high for 3star 115 bpm
  1. 00:10:242 (3) - should be whistle, since all whistles following specific sound in bgm (like this one 00:18:590 (3) - )
  2. 00:11:546 (5) - delete whistle since its not following this specific sound xD
  3. 00:14:416 (4) - w
  4. 00:20:416 (6) - delete w
  5. 00:25:111 (1,2,3) - prefer this rhytm http://puu.sh/2gWf8, i think those white tick notes not following music properly o:
  6. 00:29:807 (2,3) - ^ http://puu.sh/2gWg0
  7. 00:36:068 (4,5) - http://puu.sh/2gWgw
  8. 00:38:155 (2) - http://puu.sh/2gWgS
  9. 00:43:894 (4) - this slider should starts at 00:43:633, since you using soft whistle on slider head i think its more natural to follow piano then beat o:
  10. 00:46:503 (2,3) - http://puu.sh/2gWjQ
  11. 00:50:155 (1) - w tail
  12. 00:53:285 (4) - w head
  13. 01:31:894 - add note + whistle at x256 y168 it will give you nice SB effect \:D/
  14. 01:55:633 (5) - whistle tail instead of head
  15. 02:20:677 (3) - w tail
  16. 02:26:677 (2) - w tail
  17. 02:30:851 (2,3) - http://puu.sh/2gWyJ + whistle at 02:31:111
  18. 02:43:894 (2,3,4) - dont like this repeat o: http://puu.sh/2gWnr
  19. 03:21:198 - i was waiting note here because rhytm is repeatable in this part, so maybe this ? http://puu.sh/2gWps
Eay
  1. 00:26:938 (3) - this slider should starts at http://puu.sh/2gWDh
  2. 00:31:111 (3) - same, should be at 00:30:851
    idk but this switching between white and red ticks sounds and plays bad <_<
  3. 00:34:242 (2,3) - feels a bit empty between them maybe thi ? http://puu.sh/2gWED
  4. 00:41:807 (1) - why drumm hit ? isnt soft whistles match better with piano xD ?
  5. 00:49:111 (3) - move this note to 00:48:851 and add note at 00:49:633
  6. maybe it looks a bit complicated on time pannel but sounds and plays totally nice
  7. 00:50:155 (1) - drumm hit following piano =3=
  8. 00:54:329 (1) - ^
  9. 01:04:503 (3) - clap tail
  10. 01:12:068 (2) - ^
  11. 01:23:025 - add note with clap
  12. 01:31:894 - note with SB effect
  13. 01:50:416 (3) - you know x:
  14. 01:57:721 (2,3) - same empty feeling http://puu.sh/2gWED
  15. 02:07:111 (3) - =3=
  16. 02:21:981 (1) - drumm hit following piano x3x
  17. 02:29:285 (3) - same 3 notes as 00:49:111 (3)
  18. 02:30:329 (1) - drumm hit o...o
  19. 02:39:981 (2,3,4) - dont like placement http://puu.sh/2gWMw
  20. 03:13:372 (3) - dont like this slider, i prefer note+slider like you did here 03:17:546 (3,4) - sounds more natural o:
    skipped whistle wall also \:D/

and add sherrie fay to tags
Dark Fang
let me 2nd star
Pokie
...I suppose my modding won't help much here, I've checked this map over three times and uh... :|
leaving some metadata stuff then:

 General

  1. According to the Twitter or youtube pages, the artist should be L i z z instead of Lizz...imo.
  2. Add an unicode title アンサー.
  3. As you've added sherrie's storyboard, don't forget to disable letterbox setting on all difficulties!

Poke me if you've done moddings above I mean last page, and fixed the OD stuff on Hard!
Topic Starter
Garven

Pereira006 wrote:

hi!! saw modreqs, love this song and map

[General]

  1. the luka5.png http://puu.sh/2ggoA when I play this map i can see very well that Border white, can be clean more? because this made me frustration IMO

I'll let sherrie take care of this when she can.

[Easy]

Hitsound:


  • Stuff

    you lost pattern hitsound, inconsistency hitsound and beat really need more clap, i feel this diff is lack, should recheck hitsound and try same hitsound in diff hard because the hard is good than this

I'm just going to rehitsound it. It's just bad.

Gameplay:


  • 01:02:677 (1,2) - this spacing is jump that very hard to catch here in diff easy when I test play, better fix spacing IMO
    02:28:242 (2,3) - inconsistent spacing, look like is little jump is hard catch there IMO I did these spacing changes only on really large gaps in rhythm, so they're still easy to perform, imo. If you can get feedback from an easy player, I'm happy to change it though. I just can't find any, hehe.

    many check times, everthing look for me

Star, sorry tiny mod as map is perfect
Question ? ask me in-game i can explain better as me eng is bad
I wish good luck! and bye bye!
Thanks!

Pokie wrote:

...I suppose my modding won't help much here, I've checked this map over three times and uh... :|
leaving some metadata stuff then:

 General

  1. According to the Twitter or youtube pages, the artist should be L i z z instead of Lizz...imo.
  2. Add an unicode title アンサー.
  3. As you've added sherrie's storyboard, don't forget to disable letterbox setting on all difficulties!

Also added "lizz" to tags

Poke me if you've done moddings above I mean last page, and fixed the OD stuff on Hard!
I was going to troll ykcarrot a bit more with the OD9 thing but I'm too tired now. I understand what you mean, ykcarrot, but I still feel that it isn't over the top for an ENH spread. That said, 8 is the most appropriate, though I still prefer OD9.

cRyo[iceeicee] wrote:

m4p !! you know =3=
Hard

  • OD + 1 9 or 10 who cares \=3=/ Done o3o
  1. 00:15:459 (7,8,9,10,1) - this rhytm is strange, idk what is it following o:, you missing some sound at 00:15:720,and this note 00:15:981 (8) - starts from nowhere , i think you should move 00:15:981 (8) - to 00:15:720 + add whistle, and this whistle also 00:16:242 (9) - 00:10:242 (5,6) - It's similar to this passage, just with one less emphasis. With the larger spacing and kind of a descending feel to the lyrics, it felt best to reduce a little more for the second part of the phrase.
  2. 00:51:198 (5,6) - prefer crl+g rhytm Oops, fixed. Also changed the pattern a bit there.
  3. 01:28:503 (3,4) - ^ also they can be stacked I'd rather keep this one though.
  4. 01:31:894 - add note + whistle at x256 y168 it will give you nice SB effect \:D/ It's tempting, but I really like the delayed break better q:
  5. 03:42:590 - make triplet and add whistle on every note, match with piano ? placement could be smth like this http://puu.sh/2gWrV It would fit there musically, but it would be really out of place for the pace of the rest of the map. If I had used more faster rhythms during more calm parts of the song, sure, but during a cool down like this, I wanted to just stick with simpler 1/2 to have a smooth finish.
    i started to write whistles suggestion but it turns into a wall of text so i decided to skip it xD
q:

Eay
  1. 00:26:938 (3) - this slider should starts at http://puu.sh/2gWDh I like having that slight delay since the weightiest part of the beat is on that held note.
  2. 00:31:111 (3) - same, should be at 00:30:851
    idk but this switching between white and red ticks sounds and plays bad <_<
  3. 00:34:242 (2,3) - feels a bit empty between them maybe thi ? http://puu.sh/2gWED That works, sure.
  4. 00:41:807 (1) - why drumm hit ? isnt soft whistles match better with piano xD ?
  5. 00:49:111 (3) - move this note to 00:48:851 and add note at 00:49:633
  6. maybe it looks a bit complicated on time pannel but sounds and plays totally nice It does, except that I don't think new players are going to get that rhythm when it's all circles like that D:
  7. 00:50:155 (1) - drumm hit following piano =3=
  8. 00:54:329 (1) - ^
  9. 01:04:503 (3) - clap tail
  10. 01:12:068 (2) - ^
  11. 01:23:025 - add note with clap
  12. 01:31:894 - note with SB effect
  13. 01:50:416 (3) - you know x:
  14. 01:57:721 (2,3) - same empty feeling http://puu.sh/2gWED
  15. 02:07:111 (3) - =3=
  16. 02:21:981 (1) - drumm hit following piano x3x
  17. 02:29:285 (3) - same 3 notes as 00:49:111 (3)
  18. 02:30:329 (1) - drumm hit o...o
  19. 02:39:981 (2,3,4) - dont like placement http://puu.sh/2gWMw Kind of weird flow, but it works better than before.
  20. 03:13:372 (3) - dont like this slider, i prefer note+slider like you did here 03:17:546 (3,4) - sounds more natural o: Mm,
    skipped whistle wall also \:D/

and add sherrie fay to tags
Thanks cRyo! Quite a helpful mod~ o3o
cRyo[iceeicee]
I took Pokie as a hostage, and if you wont add sherrie fay to tags i will eat Pocky Pokie and you wont get your o(-`д´- 。)☞ bubble
Topic Starter
Garven
I still had pending fixes. Everything should be uploaded now and I fixed the SB myself (I hope sherrie doesn't mind D:). I didn't fix the lip syncing because lazy.
Pokie
( ˘ω˘ )スヤァ…
alacat
Thank cRyoooo ;)

http://puu.sh/2sZkK

( ˘ω˘ )スヤァ…( ・ิω・ิ)/ slaps pokiee
Pokie
Fixed the audio lead-in stuff via irc discussion ;)
(`・ω・´)シャキーン

SapphireGhost
Minor things to consider.

General
- Mentioned this small cropping mistake over IRC.

Hard
- Some of the patterns in this difficulty are close to going offscreen, and they do go offscreen with Easy mod, osu!'s most popular and widely used mod. Up to you if you feel like fixing them or not. Personally I think it'd be neater but I can understand if you don't want to.

alacat's Normal
00:29:285 (1) - Very, very close to going offscreen and I'd sleep better at night if it wasn't.

Easy
02:09:981 (2) - Just an HP bar overlap, but I think the map would look better without it.
02:17:807 (1,2,3) - Not sure about this, but it might be good enough to make ends meet.
02:38:155 (4,1,2) - See if you can make (2) a bit more noticeable here? Currently it's slightly overlapped by (4) and overshadowed by (1).

That's it. Should be fine to rank after fixes and I've been wanting to anyway.
Andrea
Fix the topic's title while you're at it.
Topic Starter
Garven
Did fixes except the hp bar thing since I cheated and waited for a new default skin that eliminates that pesky thing for me bwuhahaha.

Just gotta wait on alacat's thoughts.
alacat
fix ;) ;)

Thank you for modding :3
SapphireGhost
Now go get some sleep!
Topic Starter
Garven
Fiiine. Thanks!
Colin Hou
congratz mr.sleep
alacat
( ˘ω˘ )gratz!!
Skystar
Gratz
Pokie
;)
Ash Cat
Congratulations! \o/
mintong89
Gratz~
Seph
grats Garven-chan
S o r d a
moe song!
gratz~
eveless
Congrats :3

nice bg
Scorpiour
congratz~
Poggo
wow congratulations :3
chelly
Yay Rank #12 I am a pro for ten minutes /o/

oh god why am i so bad

Edit:
ohyaynowigetrank#4oneasymode
Dark_Ai
omedetoo :33
lolcubes
Grats!
:D

No OD9 ;___;
Sure
Congrats~


lolcubes wrote:

No OD9 ;___;
Nooo
Satellite
congratz~!! :)
Xierra
The sound's so sweet! The lyrics are nicely literated that it felt like an original song. Oh wait, I said that before. xD
Omedetou Garven! :3
Rare
gratz~
hs714
congrats :3♥
ssssssssssssssss
SB不能再棒!(拇指
10nya
garven, alacat-nyan, omoedeto-nyan _(;3)rz
Aoriki
Congratz.
Lissette
Yay! congratzz <3
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