wantuole wrote:

mod 来了
按要求full mod~:3
[General]
source里的Ib 是否都要大写？ 遊戲title沒大寫我就不大寫了 xD
00:39:854 (1) - 确定slider这里结束在红线?很危险对于rank来说,推荐去了第2个红线，00:45:854这里加这条红线 這沒事 因為紅線要在重音下
02:46:967 (1) 结束在长白会更好?好像差不多 改在籃線上了
00:31:679 - break 还是去了，保持统一 好
[easy]
00:03:310 (1) - 有一点点和之前的00:00:582 (2) 叠到 黑 看的蠻仔細的嘛 既然挑出來 那我就果斷改了 xD
01:00:584 (2) - 这些slider第2个tick音最好不发出会更好,5%音量 這有跟鋼琴聲ㄟ~
01:40:683 (1) - tick声这个比较明显的错了 不该红线出现,消掉 哈 這有跟到歌詞喔~
01:43:138 (4) - 这个slider如果是我来下的话 可能会出现在3的左边(前面的1,2,3把这里限制的死了 很难解决角落感和拥挤感) 這還好吧
02:02:778 (4) - 不太对应节奏 还是可以用的.主要02:03:323出现了变音 （:roll: 加个tick声专门为这里也有点大材小用的感觉）我覺得ok呢 有人在說我在改吧
02:16:962 (4,1) - 这里的话,我会改变点 這樣破了這diff的style 不改了

SPOILER

02:19:144 (2) - 降低点声音 大约20~30% 還好吧 :3
02:27:327 (4) - 开头和tick都折下更好 好吧 改了

先这样 剩下的明天写

[Blue Flower]
00:19:131 (4) - 别叠加,叠加起4~1~2~3走向怪怪的,拉出来2 4一条线平行1 3 Easy太簡單了 這做難一點沒關係
02:05:778 (3) - 不改变弧线 還好啦
02:47:104 (1) - 换个结尾方式,和下个难度相像了 沒差吧...
为啥有种是我做的感觉？:?
[Red Flower]
00:01:673 (1) - 被球遮住了rep 對喔 好吧 全部都改了
00:59:766 (1) - 好像是没必要的NC,是为了提示两倍DS? 恩對
01:31:681 (1) - 最好也是跳下 Hmm....
02:11:506 (2) - 默认皮肤下蹭到血条了 改惹
02:20:781 (1) - 个人更倾向是靠近3 不是远离3 You are right 改~
02:39:602 (3) - 这个真进血条了 好吧 用下來一些了

就这些
祝你好运
star for you~ 謝謝啦~

jesse7419 wrote:

Hi Boss :3 Yo 我要怎麼叫你
from #modreqs
其實是來補你給的星 XD哈 謝謝喔~

[General]

BPM我是不知道對不對 但offset53比較準 後面兩條紅線改53後感覺也可以刪了 不會影響後面的說 0.0 我在試試看

[Yellow Flower]
00:39:854 (1) - slider中間的tick要不要用靜音呢? 恩好
00:45:854 - 好特別的Break ! 這沒什麼 很好 >w<我也覺得很好 >w<
02:32:237 (1) - 這slider反轉的地方拍很怪 沒Vocal也沒音樂 QAQ 改成1個slider反轉+1 circle吧 或 2 slider? 覺得還好

[Blue Flower]
00:39:854 (1) - 同Easy 同
01:39:046 - 這邊加一個circle滿舒服的 前後兩個slider很緊湊的話這邊空了不太好 好
01:55:685 (2,1) - 試著疊起來? 就這樣吧

[Red Flower]
00:39:854 (1) - 同上 同
00:45:854 - 其實我覺得這邊可以放note說 (只是建議 因為這樣感覺也像特色0.0) 這Delay Break超讚 不想破壞他
01:35:500 (1) - 好像太上面了?

SPOILER

改了這一段的排列
02:39:602 (3) - ^ 改了

Hard做的很順MOD不出什麼... :)))

話說有skin & SB啊? 期待 0.0 Me too
relax map & song
Star~☆ 謝了~

HakuNoKaemi wrote:

Starting with a Timing Mod u,u

Offset: 60 ms / BPM : 110,000

Yeah, ultra rounded!

By some day I'll proceed for the Difficiulty mod ~

HakuNoKaemi wrote:

HakuNoKaemi wrote:

Starting with a Timing Mod u,u

Offset: 60 ms / BPM : 110,000

Yeah, ultra rounded!

By some day I'll proceed for the Difficiulty mod ~

I had found a good timing, and waited for answer ...

bossandy wrote:

HakuNoKaemi wrote:

Starting with a Timing Mod u,u

Offset: 60 ms / BPM : 110,000

Yeah, ultra rounded!

By some day I'll proceed for the Difficiulty mod ~
I had found a good timing, and waited for answer ...

ohoh!! sorry , I forgot to reply it , actually , I use this Timing because of p3n's mod >_<
so I think it's fine now (:

1. 00:04:946 (2) - Err, not sure why you put drum addition on this slider orz... By the way I think it's better to start this slider slightly more upper/lower to give more flow (compared to placing it directly beside (1)'s end xD)
2. 00:22:677 (1,2) - Uhm, I think it's better if you curve (1) encircling previous slider and (2) to the opposite direction: (the slider fan on (3,1) looks elegant imo~)
   
   SPOILER

   
3. 00:26:769 (2) - Err, actually you can add a test circle (which you can delete later) here for perfect encircle~ (yep, (3) is the test circle, you can delete it later)
   
   SPOILER

   
   ...the code for this slider should be:
   

   433,266,26769,2,0,B|453:234|455:187,2,80,0|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0

4. 00:29:496 (1) - Add note here and start spinner 1/4 after? The piano is VERY strong here orz...
5. 00:34:406 (1,2,3,4) - Uhm, this one looks very random... I'd create a standard pentagon instead, they look good~
6. 00:39:854 (1) - ...idk why you're using unconventional technique on this slider o.o... Works fine though :3
7. 01:10:404 (2) - (optional) Rotate it by ~-60° and put it in ~x:449 y:148?
8. 01:14:223 (2) - Err, this one is quite overcurved imo, try this one with less narrow curve instead:
   

   135,134,74223,2,0,B|112:166|68:176,1,80

   ...or you actually can also curve this upward, it flows good as well but remember to curve it only slightly or it'll become abrupt (slider start on ~x:135 y:134) :
   
   SPOILER

   http://up.ppy.sh/files/reunion3.png
9. 01:23:498 (1) - (optional) Considering (3)'s angle, how about rotating this slider ~11° selection centre, and then readjust the slider's second half? (tilted slider wave also works beautiful here~)
10. 01:33:318 (1) - Minor stuff, just a slider improvement xD
    

    376,76,93318,6,0,B|370:111|384:152|414:179|468:182,1,160,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0

11. 01:40:683 (1) - The vocal lands 1/8 earlier
12. 02:06:051 (3) - (optional) Perhaps add a slight curve upward here?
13. 02:19:144 (2) - Err, idk here, imo it's best not to force this slider's encircle... I'd rotate this by ~-38° and then put it in ~x:456 y:40 or ~x:445 y:29 xD
14. 02:27:327 (4) - Try to tilt it like this instead, so you can keep playing with encircles?
    
    SPOILER

    
15. 02:43:694 (1) - Uhm, I prefer having this encircling the last (1)'s end, then:
16. 02:45:331 (1) - Do something like this - the antagonistic direction builds up a really good flow imo (:
    

    313,219,165331,6,0,B|225:208|160:257,1,160,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0

1. 00:00:036 (1) - Put in ~x:148 y:16? Personally I don't like this stack at opening orz...
2. 00:09:584 (4) - This note is closer to (3) compared with (5)
3. 00:12:584 (4,5) - Hmm, I suggest to add a bezier twist on these two like this, actually the bounce on the slider fits the vocals very much~
   
   SPOILER

   
4. 00:16:949 (2) - (optional) To increase flow with (3), add a slight curve downward here?
5. 00:29:496 (1) - Same as Yellow Flower orz
6. 00:38:218 (1) - Minor stuff, about slider encircle improvement:
   

   148,296,38218,6,0,B|84:275|71:211,2,120,2|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0

7. 01:00:039 (3) - Add a slight curve to the right here to increase flow with (4)?
8. 01:10:677 (4,5,6) - Hmm, the problem here is imo the piano on 01:12:041 should be emphasized more, I'd arrange them in an arc like this:
   
   SPOILER

   
   ...aside from getting a better feeling from the piano, (8) and 01:13:678 (1) will also be placed in the same y-axis so the transition between these two looks beautiful also~
9. 01:17:769 (2) - Rotate it more (~10° selection centre)? Personally I feel it could use more rotation...
10. 01:32:772 (7) - (optional) Err, why don't you put this on ~x:72 y:108 instead to fully encircle (3) xD
11. 01:38:228 (2) - Uhm, flow suggestion orz :3
    
    SPOILER

    
12. 01:40:683 (1) - The vocal actually lands 1/8 earlier
13. 01:45:320 (2,3) - (optional) Uhm, it's just my experiment with bezier curves orz :3 - idk whether you'll like it or not, but I like this continuous arc >_<
    
    SPOILER

    
14. 01:54:049 (6) - ...err, again idk why you're using a weird technique like this ._.
15. 02:06:596 (5) - Uhm, it's quite obvious this slider isn't symmetrical orz... However I prefer a tilted slider wave here though, because it carries the flow to BOTH (4) and yellow (2) :
    

    222,131,126596,2,0,B|250:138|279:123|279:123|308:112|339:120,1,120,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0

    ...and if you do this don't forget to readjust 02:07:688 (1)'s position orz, it won't be hard (:
16. 02:09:324 (4) - (optional) I much prefer curving this upward because of your previous (3)... Ignore this if you want to keep (4,5,1)'s pattern >_<
17. 02:14:234 (1) - Move to ~x:8 y:32 regardless of the spacing to avoid overlap?
18. 02:19:144 (2,3,4) - I HIGHLY recommend something like this instead, it flows really good with your previous (1) especially because of the (3)'s direction:
    
    SPOILER

    
19. 02:32:237 (1) - (optional) imo this flows good to BOTH (5) and (2) though, it looks less forced compared to your current slider:
    

    172,316,152237,6,0,B|123:314|123:314|89:330|50:328,2,120,2|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0

20. 02:43:694 (1,1,2,3,1) - Uhm, why don't you just create a pentagon for the ending orz... It'll look MUCH more dramatic, really xD

1. 00:05:132 - Put the bezier waypoint after the red one on ~x:311 y:212? I can see you're not aiming for a symmetrical slider here, so imo it's better to lessen the second half's curve as well~
2. 00:10:402 (3) - . . .
3. 00:12:857 (4) - Put in ~x:235 y:195 for perfect triangle? o.o
4. 00:16:949 (3) - (optional) Rotate by ~-12° selection centre? Personally I think it's more beautiful if tilted...
5. 00:29:496 (1) - It's more dramatic imo if you stack this below (4) instead, but this is purely personal preference (:
6. 00:39:854 (1) - Hmm, this is just personal thought... imo this slider is too fast for such a mellow part, how about using a slower slider here (perhaps ~0.75x) to let this part be more dramatic? :3
7. 01:00:584 (1,2,3) - Err, personally I expect a circular movement around here, perhaps move (1) upper, stack (2) with 00:59:493 (3) to form a diamond and arrange the rest like this?
   
   SPOILER

   
8. 01:07:131 (1) - Put in ~x:225 y:245? (I'm not going to comment about this one, I'll let you see by yourself xD)
9. 01:10:132 (2,3) - Uhm, I personally feel weird that you put a pattern that forces player to do a sudden change of direction in this triangle pattern... I'd rather CTRL+G this (switch their position, to continue the triangle's clockwise flow) and:
10. 01:10:677 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Arrange encircling (2) from the outside like this (:
    
    SPOILER

    
11. 01:15:314 (1) - The second half can be improved here orz:
    

    308,48,75314,6,0,B|260:16|216:40|216:40|189:24|152:31,1,160,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0

12. 01:16:405 (3) - ...if you do above suggestion, perhaps you'd want to move this to ~x:88 y:94 (to keep the perfect triangle xD)
13. 01:19:952 (2) - (optional) Put in ~x:218 y:295 to make the jump's distance equal?
14. 01:26:225 (1) - Your current curve looks VERY rigid orz, perhaps use this instead:
    

    416,280,86225,6,0,B|465:271|488:328|454:378|400:356,1,160,2|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0

15. 01:30:044 (1) - (optional) Add a slight curve upward/downward here to support (2,3,4)'s arc shape?
16. 01:33:318 (1) - Minor stuff, but move your fourth waypoint to ~x:251 y:325 orz (it's kinda obvious >_<)
17. 01:40:683 (1,2) - Uhm, this might sound weird, but I've checked it - (1) should be 1/8 earlier while (2) should be 1/16 earlier (idk why the vocals sounded like that...)
18. 01:48:048 (1) - Hmm, idk why you put this directly beside (3)... I much prefer if you put this a bit downward like this, it increases flow a lot imo:
    
    SPOILER

    
19. 02:06:596 (2) - Minor stuff, but to make the triangle perfect this should be in ~x:356 y:79 xD
20. 02:18:871 (4) - ...why whistle here? Whistle should be on (3) imo (due to the piano sound)
21. 02:30:055 (5) - Again minor stuff, put slider's endpoint to ~x:271 y:274 to make it perfectly parallel with (1)?
22. 02:33:874 (1,2,3) - These three's distance isn't equal, imo it's better to make it equal instead orz (accelerated spacing doesn't really work with the music...)

Oh!! I will check them later , and the StoryBoard is still working be Kotone

Thanks Niva~! (and yanlu

Niva wrote:

Hi bossandy, yanlu showed me the map yesterday~ :D

[General]

-> I can confirm the first offset is around 60 as Haku said, yep (I got 56) Okay , Fixed to 56 , 60 is a bit lat for me >_<
-> Uhm, personally I think 30% volume is still too strong for this song... I'd use ~20% on the opening, and ~25% after 01:13:678 (: Ok , changed the volumes (:
-> Err, lead-in 3 seconds is too much imo... I'd use 2 seconds only xD Sure ~
-> Finally, on all difficulties, I recommend using a whistle on last spinner - it sounds dramatic, really >_< It is fine now xD

[Yellow Flower]

1. 00:04:946 (2) - Err, not sure why you put drum addition on this slider orz... By the way I think it's better to start this slider slightly more upper/lower to give more flow (compared to placing it directly beside (1)'s end xD) Fixed
2. 00:22:677 (1,2) - Uhm, I think it's better if you curve (1) encircling previous slider and (2) to the opposite direction: (the slider fan on (3,1) looks elegant imo~) Fixed a bit ~
   
   SPOILER

   
3. 00:26:769 (2) - Err, actually you can add a test circle (which you can delete later) here for perfect encircle~ (yep, (3) is the test circle, you can delete it later) Ya , I use your slider instead :3
   
   SPOILER

   
   ...the code for this slider should be:
   

   433,266,26769,2,0,B|453:234|455:187,2,80,0|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0

4. 00:29:496 (1) - Add note here and start spinner 1/4 after? The piano is VERY strong here orz... Ok , Fixed on Blue Flower too
5. 00:34:406 (1,2,3,4) - Uhm, this one looks very random... I'd create a standard pentagon instead, they look good~ Hmm, I think is is fine , sense I think they are not random :3
6. 00:39:854 (1) - ...idk why you're using unconventional technique on this slider o.o... Works fine though :3 Don't you think it is very beautiful? xDD
7. 01:10:404 (2) - (optional) Rotate it by ~-60° and put it in ~x:449 y:148? Rotate by 60% , but not put there :3
8. 01:14:223 (2) - Err, this one is quite overcurved imo, try this one with less narrow curve instead: ok
   

   135,134,74223,2,0,B|112:166|68:176,1,80

   ...or you actually can also curve this upward, it flows good as well but remember to curve it only slightly or it'll become abrupt (slider start on ~x:135 y:134) :
   
   SPOILER

   
9. 01:23:498 (1) - (optional) Considering (3)'s angle, how about rotating this slider ~11° selection centre, and then readjust the slider's second half? (tilted slider wave also works beautiful here~) ok , changed a bit
10. 01:33:318 (1) - Minor stuff, just a slider improvement xD ok
    

    376,76,93318,6,0,B|370:111|384:152|414:179|468:182,1,160,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0

11. 01:40:683 (1) - The vocal lands 1/8 earlier Oh!! really ! , Fixed
12. 02:06:051 (3) - (optional) Perhaps add a slight curve upward here? ok
13. 02:19:144 (2) - Err, idk here, imo it's best not to force this slider's encircle... I'd rotate this by ~-38° and then put it in ~x:456 y:40 or ~x:445 y:29 xD ok
14. 02:27:327 (4) - Try to tilt it like this instead, so you can keep playing with encircles? Fixed a bit
    
    SPOILER

    
15. 02:43:694 (1) - Uhm, I prefer having this encircling the last (1)'s end, then: ok
16. 02:45:331 (1) - Do something like this - the antagonistic direction builds up a really good flow imo (: sure
    

    313,219,165331,6,0,B|225:208|160:257,1,160,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0

[Blue Flower]

-> Tick Rate 2?

1. 00:00:036 (1) - Put in ~x:148 y:16? Personally I don't like this stack at opening orz... ok...
2. 00:09:584 (4) - This note is closer to (3) compared with (5) ok
3. 00:12:584 (4,5) - Hmm, I suggest to add a bezier twist on these two like this, actually the bounce on the slider fits the vocals very much~ Hmm~~ okok
   
   SPOILER

   
4. 00:16:949 (2) - (optional) To increase flow with (3), add a slight curve downward here? Changed , but not your way :3
5. 00:29:496 (1) - Same as Yellow Flower orz Fixed when changed Yellow flower's mod xD
6. 00:38:218 (1) - Minor stuff, about slider encircle improvement: ok
   

   148,296,38218,6,0,B|84:275|71:211,2,120,2|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0

7. 01:00:039 (3) - Add a slight curve to the right here to increase flow with (4)? ok
8. 01:10:677 (4,5,6) - Hmm, the problem here is imo the piano on 01:12:041 should be emphasized more, I'd arrange them in an arc like this: Sure , changed
   
   SPOILER

   
   ...aside from getting a better feeling from the piano, (8) and 01:13:678 (1) will also be placed in the same y-axis so the transition between these two looks beautiful also~ Ya~ I know you mean~
9. 01:17:769 (2) - Rotate it more (~10° selection centre)? Personally I feel it could use more rotation... ok
10. 01:32:772 (7) - (optional) Err, why don't you put this on ~x:72 y:108 instead to fully encircle (3) xD ~~ ok ~~
11. 01:38:228 (2) - Uhm, flow suggestion orz :3 ok
    
    SPOILER

    
12. 01:40:683 (1) - The vocal actually lands 1/8 earlier Fixed
13. 01:45:320 (2,3) - (optional) Uhm, it's just my experiment with bezier curves orz :3 - idk whether you'll like it or not, but I like this continuous arc >_< Fixed a bit
    
    SPOILER

    
14. 01:54:049 (6) - ...err, again idk why you're using a weird technique like this ._. ok...
15. 02:06:596 (5) - Uhm, it's quite obvious this slider isn't symmetrical orz... However I prefer a tilted slider wave here though, because it carries the flow to BOTH (4) and yellow (2) : Nice idea , changed by my self >_<
    

    222,131,126596,2,0,B|250:138|279:123|279:123|308:112|339:120,1,120,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0

    ...and if you do this don't forget to readjust 02:07:688 (1)'s position orz, it won't be hard (:
16. 02:09:324 (4) - (optional) I much prefer curving this upward because of your previous (3)... Ignore this if you want to keep (4,5,1)'s pattern >_< Time to ignore (runs xD
17. 02:14:234 (1) - Move to ~x:8 y:32 regardless of the spacing to avoid overlap? ok
18. 02:19:144 (2,3,4) - I HIGHLY recommend something like this instead, it flows really good with your previous (1) especially because of the (3)'s direction: okok
    
    SPOILER

    
19. 02:32:237 (1) - (optional) imo this flows good to BOTH (5) and (2) though, it looks less forced compared to your current slider: Sure , much better now ~
    

    172,316,152237,6,0,B|123:314|123:314|89:330|50:328,2,120,2|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0

20. 02:43:694 (1,1,2,3,1) - Uhm, why don't you just create a pentagon for the ending orz... It'll look MUCH more dramatic, really xD It is nothing Imo , so keep it for now >w<

[Red Flower]

-> Tick Rate 2?

1. 00:05:132 - Put the bezier waypoint after the red one on ~x:311 y:212? I can see you're not aiming for a symmetrical slider here, so imo it's better to lessen the second half's curve as well~ I think the Timing which you gave is wrong orz
2. 00:10:402 (3) - . . . oh shxt , what happen with it!? Fixed orz...
3. 00:12:857 (4) - Put in ~x:235 y:195 for perfect triangle? o.o sure...
4. 00:16:949 (3) - (optional) Rotate by ~-12° selection centre? Personally I think it's more beautiful if tilted... okay
5. 00:29:496 (1) - It's more dramatic imo if you stack this below (4) instead, but this is purely personal preference (: Keep it now~
6. 00:39:854 (1) - Hmm, this is just personal thought... imo this slider is too fast for such a mellow part, how about using a slower slider here (perhaps ~0.75x) to let this part be more dramatic? :3 x0.75 now xD
7. 01:00:584 (1,2,3) - Err, personally I expect a circular movement around here, perhaps move (1) upper, stack (2) with 00:59:493 (3) to form a diamond and arrange the rest like this? I prefer current one :3
   
   SPOILER

   
8. 01:07:131 (1) - Put in ~x:225 y:245? (I'm not going to comment about this one, I'll let you see by yourself xD) put to other place :3
9. 01:10:132 (2,3) - Uhm, I personally feel weird that you put a pattern that forces player to do a sudden change of direction in this triangle pattern... I'd rather CTRL+G this (switch their position, to continue the triangle's clockwise flow) and: really , Ctrl+G! (Clicking xD
10. 01:10:677 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Arrange encircling (2) from the outside like this (: sure
    
    SPOILER

    
11. 01:15:314 (1) - The second half can be improved here orz: ok
    

    308,48,75314,6,0,B|260:16|216:40|216:40|189:24|152:31,1,160,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0

12. 01:16:405 (3) - ...if you do above suggestion, perhaps you'd want to move this to ~x:88 y:94 (to keep the perfect triangle xD) sure
13. 01:19:952 (2) - (optional) Put in ~x:218 y:295 to make the jump's distance equal? ok
14. 01:26:225 (1) - Your current curve looks VERY rigid orz, perhaps use this instead: ok
    

    416,280,86225,6,0,B|465:271|488:328|454:378|400:356,1,160,2|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0

15. 01:30:044 (1) - (optional) Add a slight curve upward/downward here to support (2,3,4)'s arc shape? ok
16. 01:33:318 (1) - Minor stuff, but move your fourth waypoint to ~x:251 y:325 orz (it's kinda obvious >_<) ok
17. 01:40:683 (1,2) - Uhm, this might sound weird, but I've checked it - (1) should be 1/8 earlier while (2) should be 1/16 earlier (idk why the vocals sounded like that...) Amazing singer xD Fixed anyway
18. 01:48:048 (1) - Hmm, idk why you put this directly beside (3)... I much prefer if you put this a bit downward like this, it increases flow a lot imo: Fixed
    
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19. 02:06:596 (2) - Minor stuff, but to make the triangle perfect this should be in ~x:356 y:79 xD Fixed
20. 02:18:871 (4) - ...why whistle here? Whistle should be on (3) imo (due to the piano sound) Fixed
21. 02:30:055 (5) - Again minor stuff, put slider's endpoint to ~x:271 y:274 to make it perfectly parallel with (1)? ok
22. 02:33:874 (1,2,3) - These three's distance isn't equal, imo it's better to make it equal instead orz (accelerated spacing doesn't really work with the music...) ok

I'm Mary~

- t e n n y a - wrote:

From our queue (/w\)
OMG ITS IB <3333

[General]

1. How about change the diff into Yellow Rose, Blue Rose and Red Rose, since Ib is using roses ww Nice idea! changed

[Yellow Flower]

1. 01:39:319 (4)- : add finish at the slider tail and remove the whistle? ok

[Blue Flower]

1. 01:47:502 (6)- : add whistle here? sure
2. 02:10:688 (5)- : ^ no
3. 02:13:416 (5)- : add whistle on the head? no

[Red Flower]

1. 01:00:039 (2,3)- : add whistle? Added 3 only
2. 01:27:862 (4)- : add whistle on slider head and slider tail? no
3. 01:29:499 (3)- : add whistle? ok
4. 02:09:324 (1)- : nazi, last slider point 3grid to right? Fixed a bit
5. 02:15:871 (1)- : nazi, last slider point 2grid to right? ok

aaahh that's all I can find Q_Q
good luck~! more Ib vocals ww ~ ~/'w')/~* >w<

Kotone wrote:

http://puu.sh/1wk0j
做了點

1. You don't need to force SliderBorder without custom skin... though, Kotone's making the skin and it will probably have white borders, so you can leave :3
2. The game have different pronunciation, why don't add them to the tags ? "Eb" and "Iv"
   

• [Rhythm]
  

1. 01:26:782 (1) - To keep combos consistent
   
2. 02:07:691 (1) - ^
3. 02:32:236 (1) - It doesn't stay that good since there's no note in the red tick. Delete the (2) too and do this?
   
4. 02:46:964 (1) - Make it a bit longer, so it ends to 02:48:782 (it's an 1/6)

1. 02:42:054 (1) - Fix either blankets?
   
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• [Graphics]
  

1. Curves generally flow better in those type of song, so I'll suggest many of them
2. 00:09:601 (4) - 2 grid down, 1 right so it look curved like this?
   
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3. 00:12:601 (4,5) - Curved slider have better flow there
4. 00:16:419 (1,2) - Curving them like this?
   
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5. 01:25:145 (2) - Adjust blanket? Mid waypoint 2 grid down
6. 01:27:327 (2,3,4) - Curve it like this?
   
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7. 01:56:236 (4) - Fix blanket
   
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8. 02:01:691 (2,3) - Curve them?
   
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9. 02:08:236 (2,3) - ^
   
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1. 01:15:054 (x) - Isn't better to follow the higher volume piano notes instead of 01:15:600 (5) ? ( Add circle there and maybe delete (5))
2. 01:30:054 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Do this instead? Should be better to follow either voice and piano
   
3. 01:34:418 (3) - Make it an 1/2 slider for the same reason as ^
4. 02:47:100 (1) - Make it a bit longer, so it ends to 02:48:782 (it's an 1/6)

• [Graphics]
  

1. there are other part that can benefit a curvy pattern
2. 00:00:056 (1,2) - Curve those?
   
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3. 01:15:327 (1) - A normal curve should flow better
   
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4. 01:28:418 (1) - It's still a soft song, so blanketing the end do feel good
   
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1. 00:27:874 (4,1) - An Hold slider? Just use a x0.5 Sv change
2. 01:51:054 (x) - Add Note "to" and adjust to ?
   
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p3n wrote:

[General]
SB images are almost uncompressed. I re-compressed them for you without any quality loss: http://puu.sh/27z9u

Still very busy today but I'll post the full mod later tonight!

Thanks p3n! , really thanks ))

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Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB\white.jpg",320,240
 M,1,45854,47491,-318,294,620,294
 F,0,45854,55674,0.51872
 M,1,54038,55674,620,294,959,299
 F,0,55674,,0.51872

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popner wrote:

Hi~

[SB]
Move all the elements to background layer? Some part are displayed incorrectly with widescreen:

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00:45:873 - white.png - how about use '1' style for moving? It is more nature from what I see.

Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB\white.jpg",320,240
 M,1,45854,47491,-318,294,620,294
 F,0,45854,55674,0.51872
 M,1,54038,55674,620,294,959,299
 F,0,55674,,0.51872

00:52:418 - sb/sb.png - these words are not moving in a vertical route, is this intentional? Waiting for Kotone

[Red Rose]
02:42:054 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1) - the part has a very different pace from previous parts imo.. I think you should try to keep the pace here, or slow down the pace gradually. I would like to keep it as they are , sorry ~

Call me back when you are ready.

MMzz wrote:

Boop.

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