Hey there!
I think for your first map you did a good job.
Each uploaded map has a discussion page to collect and discuss feedback for your map.
You can find it by pressing the "Discussion" button on the beatmap page.
You can find some information on how this Discussion page is used
here
I left you some feedback on your discussion page that you can review and apply to your map if you agree with it.
I didn't look at the Easy too much as it seemed unfinished though.
Please make sure you look at the issue regarding the timing first.
Here is a hotlink to that issue.