1. Easy (2.64 stars, 102 notes)
2. Hard (4.98 stars, 272 notes)
3. Insane (5 stars, 357 notes)
4. Normal (4.23 stars, 133 notes)

1. Offset -5ms (318). Remember to resnap all notes and kiai sections.

1. 00:27:065 (1,3) - These two sliders felt weird because they introduce a whole in the hitsounding right after you changed it.
2. 00:31:865 (2) - Same here. You bothered using claps every second tick, but this slider breaks the pattern and it sounds like something's missing.
3. 00:49:694 (1,3) - I'm being nazi but you could improve the blanket part of these sliders =p
4. 01:02:380 (5) - Here again this slider introduces a hole in the hitsounding. I understand why you made it this long though (probably to avoid having objects 1/2 apart), so I'm not sure I could find a fix.

1. This is... very hard. The spacing is really wide for a Normal, and the circle size 4 makes it even more obvious.
2. 00:25:694 (1,2,3) - The claps are on the wrong tick on these.
3. 00:35:980 (3,1) - To stay consistent in your comboing, reverse the combos.
4. 01:02:723 (4) - This slider creates a hole in your hitsounding. Shorten it by 1/2 and add a circle after it ?
5. 01:14:380 (1) - Continue the clap pattern after this point ? It feels weird to stop it so suddenly.

1. 00:26:380 (3,4) - I'm not a big fan of this stack, especially considering the fact that 00:27:751 (1,2) - weren't stacked. Either unstack the first or stack the second, but I tihnk it would be better to have both use the same pattern.
2. 00:49:351 - A note is desperately missing here to add a clap. D:
3. 00:56:551 (5,1) - I think you should unstack this. The kick slider's length is unpredictable, and that makes the stack hard to read, because it would need to be sightread for timing, but the hitburst prevents that.
4. 01:14:380 (1,2,3,1,2,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1,2,1,2,3,1,2,3) - The comboing is very weird at this point. ALso at 01:17:122 (1,2,3,1,2,1,2,3,1,2,3) -

1. OD8 <3
2. Maybe add jumps in the last flower pattern. I think it would be better for a finish. Not super big jumps mind you, but at least increase the spacing.

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Shiro wrote:

Asd per your request.

Please reply to this mod saying what you didn't fix (and what you did) and why.
Also, if you have any question, feel free to ask me in-game.

General

1. Offset -5ms (318). Remember to resnap all notes and kiai sections.Fixed.

Easy

1. 00:27:065 (1,3) - These two sliders felt weird because they introduce a whole in the hitsounding right after you changed it. Fixed.
2. 00:31:865 (2) - Same here. You bothered using claps every second tick, but this slider breaks the pattern and it sounds like something's missing.Fixed.
3. 00:49:694 (1,3) - I'm being nazi but you could improve the blanket part of these sliders =p I honestly don't know how to.
4. 01:02:380 (5) - Here again this slider introduces a hole in the hitsounding. I understand why you made it this long though (probably to avoid having objects 1/2 apart), so I'm not sure I could find a fix. Yeah same problem you described.

Normal

1. This is... very hard. The spacing is really wide for a Normal, and the circle size 4 makes it even more obvious. Let's see what I can do...
2. 00:25:694 (1,2,3) - The claps are on the wrong tick on these. Fixed.
3. 00:35:980 (3,1) - To stay consistent in your comboing, reverse the combos. Fixed.
4. 01:02:723 (4) - This slider creates a hole in your hitsounding. Shorten it by 1/2 and add a circle after it ? I think it's permissible considering that the vocals are emphasize more at this point.
5. 01:14:380 (1) - Continue the clap pattern after this point ? It feels weird to stop it so suddenly.Had to add a custom sampleset to fix this.

Hard

1. 00:26:380 (3,4) - I'm not a big fan of this stack, especially considering the fact that 00:27:751 (1,2) - weren't stacked. Either unstack the first or stack the second, but I tihnk it would be better to have both use the same pattern. Fixed.
2. 00:49:351 - A note is desperately missing here to add a clap. D: Added.
3. 00:56:551 (5,1) - I think you should unstack this. The kick slider's length is unpredictable, and that makes the stack hard to read, because it would need to be sightread for timing, but the hitburst prevents that. I can read it even with the default skin's big hitburst. Need a second opinion on this.
4. 01:14:380 (1,2,3,1,2,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1,2,1,2,3,1,2,3) - The comboing is very weird at this point. ALso at 01:17:122 (1,2,3,1,2,1,2,3,1,2,3) - Fixed.

Insane

1. OD8 <3
2. Maybe add jumps in the last flower pattern. I think it would be better for a finish. Not super big jumps mind you, but at least increase the spacing.

Nothing major. Hitsound and comboing inconsistencies though, but I've been seeing that more and more often lately.

Dark Fang wrote:

[General]

Uncheck Enable countdown? that's inactive
offset -8(315) ? I think that's right I'm following Shiro's timing for now

[Easy]

unused inherited points Not really needed but fixed.

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00:09:580 (2) - clap at head ? Fixed.
00:25:694 (1) - 1 grid right Fixed.
00:53:808 (2) - 1 grid up Fixed.
01:25:865 (1) - move second point of slider to (168,188)
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[Normal]

00:05:122 (3) - why don't you make try symmetry? Fixed.
00:11:980 - ~ vol 75% is louder for me. can you change to 60%? and others too.IMO Fixed. Also for other diffs.
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[Hard]

00:02:037 (3) - NC? Fixed.
00:22:265 (1) - slider end at 00:23:465 - here? I think it's fine as is.
00:59:465 - add a note? ^
01:21:751 (4) - 1 grid down? Fixed.
01:27:237 (1,2,3,4,5) - I think that's perfect when keep symmetry. Can you make that symmetry? Fixed.
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[Insane]

00:23:123 (11,1) - I can't read that notes. Consider that I'll get a second opinion on them.
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so tired x3 check unsnapped inherited points

I think this is perfect map
Star~


Sorry for delay and my poor mod ._.

Have a nice day

• • Adjust the Lead-In to 1500
  • Add some tags too?
  • Disable the countdown and the letterbox during breaks

• - 01:28:089 (x) - End this spinner here 01:29:118, sounds good

• - 01:27:918 (x) - Same as Easy

• - 01:28:089 (x) - Same as Easy

• - 00:28:089 (5) - I don't get it why this jump, is a little confusing to play, try something like this?
  - 00:37:689 (1,2,3) - Make these notes like 00:37:003 to follow the symetry
  - 01:28:089 (x) - Same as Easy

MoodyRPG wrote:

Hi Hitter :3

General

• • Adjust the Lead-In to 1500 Well that's just + 11 ms, but sure xD
  • Add some tags too? Added some.
  • Disable the countdown and the letterbox during breaks Done

Easy

• - 01:28:089 (x) - End this spinner here 01:29:118, sounds good Done

Normal

• - 01:27:918 (x) - Same as Easy Done

Hard

• - 01:28:089 (x) - Same as Easy Done

Insane

• - 00:28:089 (5) - I don't get it why this jump, is a little confusing to play, try something like this? Will get a second opinion on this. As of now, no change.
  - 00:37:689 (1,2,3) - Make these notes like 00:37:003 to follow the symetry Wasn't aiming for symmetry but sure.
  - 01:28:089 (x) - Same as Easy Done.

Awesome map and good luck >_<

Roxas wrote:

Mod4mod

[General]

BG.jpg?

[Easy]

00:07:175 (1) - Move 2nd sliderpoint one grid left (for simmetry) Fixed.
00:11:632 (1) - Move 3rd sliderpoint in x:256 y:91 Fixed.
00:22:260 (1) - Move the slider right (x+1) Fixed.
00:52:432 (1,2,3) - Too much finish imo Nice catch. Made it similar to my other hitsounding patterns.

[Normal]

00:12:660 (4) - delete and copy from 00:03:403 (1) - Tried to make it more symmetrical.
00:27:746 (3) - Make a better blanket Looks fine to me?
00:31:175 (5) - move last sliderpoint in x:188 y:224 Fixed.
01:11:632 (1,2) - you can make a good blanket here Changed the pattern.

[Hard]

00:41:460 (3) - Better blanket How exactly? it looks fine to me.

[Insane]

00:57:575 (1) - Remove NC? I think it's fine.

GL :3 starred

Star Stream wrote:

[Easy]
00:10:946 (4) - maybe move it to (480,316)? it looks betterimo Fixed.
01:02:032 (4,5) - use a slider from 4 to 5's head, and a slider from 01:02:718 - to 01:03:232 - I think the current combo is fine.
01:04:775 (3) - replace with 2 circles? Fixed.
01:12:318 (2,3) - finish I think that part is too soft to add a finish.
01:15:403 - remove finish, too noisy for me Fixed.
01:16:775 - ^ Fixed.
01:28:089 (1) - isn't it too short for an Easy diff? Well I think the length is fine.

[Normal]
00:32:718 - clap? I'm following a hitsounding pattern here. Sorry
00:48:318 (2) - sta ck on 00:45:575 (3) - 's tail I think the current pattern is better.
01:14:889 (2,3) - too confusing for noob players imo, maybe try using 1/1 slider I'll get a second opinion on this.
01:17:632 (2,3) - ^ Same as above.
01:25:860 (1) - it could be more funny notes ;_; Made it into two sliders instead.

[Hard]
00:29:803 (2) - start combo from here I'm following the lyrics.

[Insaen]
00:08:203 (6) - i think you could make a jump with this rhythm, maybe add a circle on 6's head and 00:08:717 (1) - I think the current pattern is fine..
00:21:918 - 1 more circle on there? The lyrics end at 00:21:918. I'm sticking with that.
00:22:946 (9,10,11) - make a hold slider from 9 to 00:23:203 - Done.
01:08:546 (9) - a jump could be more easy to read imo Please explain what you mean by this?

Dark Flame Master!

Konei wrote:

Mod4Mod here ~

Must fix

should fix

I wanted to mention

suggestion


[General]

* Inconsistency in Audio Lead in, Easy has 1498 Fixed.
* Add "opening" to tags? Sure.


[Easy]

00:11:289 - Useless timing point Not that it matters, but removed.
00:37:346 (3) - I think this would look better if it had the same angle as 1 It does have the same angle.
01:18:832 (3) - Remove clap from start? Sounds too loud imo I think its fine.
01:28:089 (1) - This Spinner looks a bit short for an Easy, remove it? Well I think the length is fine.


[Normal]

00:37:346 (6) - NC? I'm following a combo pattern and it will break if I NC.
00:55:175 (1,2,3) - If you take another direction for these Sliders, it will flow better imo and the overlap with 1 and the previous 1 wouldnt be there I think it's fine as is.
00:57:575 (1) - Stacking this for a Normal diff is not a good idea imo because newbies are most likely to click directly if they think it is a stack I think a Normal can be more challenging than an Easy.
00:58:603 (3) - Add whistle to start as you have it on 2? Nice catch. Added


[Hard]

* AR +1? Plays better imo Added, but I may lower it again.
00:24:146 (1) - Remove NC? It is following the vocals atm.
00:42:832 (1) - ^ As you are following vocals with them? Done.
00:53:460 (5) - Start NC here because same reason as above? I was emphasizing the beat and pattern here instead of continuing the lyrics.
01:00:660 (2) - Move up a bit for having a triangle? :3 It already is a triangle...


[Insane]

00:10:089 (1,2,3) - Make a similar pattern than the previous two as they are the same ryhthm? :3 00:10:775 (1,2,3) - is also somewhat following the pattern I set here. I'm keeping the current one since it's similar to the pattern at 00:10:775 (1,2,3).
00:46:346 (8) - NC? This Combo looks a bit long and untidy to me Long combos are fine IMO.
01:21:917 (5) - NC? New Vocal is starting Fixed
01:28:003 (1) - You should end this Spinner on same point as other diffs, or extend the other Spinners :3 Fixed


That's all I found ~

Nice nice map. Star and good luck ~ o/

Melophobia wrote:

congratz~

Melophobia wrote:

congratz~