No_Gu wrote:

video:http://u.115.com/file/clna0qxk
- -弄了个带字幕了。。如果不想要字幕版的能帮你换个没字幕的
offset大概在99ms 0 0其实我不太会看
0w0再有就是能让我做一个hard吗。。

Star -v-

LKs wrote:

我不是这意思 我不喜欢video 所以我的map里也不要video 你可以下载后自己添加
难度已经很多了 不用了

No Flavor wrote:

Sumisola's Hard
00:51:065 (1,2,3) - 3個silder都早了1/6拍結束 切換1/3拍子重拉一下 .. 我确实没发现..

另外AR能提高1的話會比較舒服 先+1了 如果他觉得不好再商量

Azure_Kyte wrote:

Here's a mod for you~

Blue = Suggestion Red = Check this


[General]

The BG in this image is kinda inappropriate. I would advise you to change this to something that doesn't have a girl's panties showing, as BGs like this are considered unrankable by today's standards.
hmm, i don't very think such a cute BG will be destroyed by panties. them aren't emphases in this pic, the pic creator will think so i guess

[Muya's Easy]

Not any real problems here that I can see. The only this I would suggest is making 01:26:165 (1) a new combo, but that's about it.

Great job =3


[Normal]

00:45:965 (6,1) - I don't recommend placing a note over the top of sliders. Pretty soon this is going to be unrankable, but at the same time it can still be changed to look better, as well. I suggest something like this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/134918 ok
01:01:865 (1) - Again, this is similar to the previous suggestion. I would recommend, if you're willing, to change it to something like this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/134921 ficed the slider, not 100% like yours though
01:19:565 (5) - Please place this anywhere but under the end of the slider. sure
01:21:365 (4) - Same here ok
01:23:915 (4,5) - May I suggest an alternate setup http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/134924 ok

Other than these things, it's fine


[Sumisola's Hard]

00:29:315 (5) - This sounds really strange to me. I found that adding a note 1/2 a beat after this note, and shortening the spinner, made it sound better.
01:27:065 (1) - I suggest placing a finish on here; it makes it sound better as a last hitsound =3

Other than that, It's a great map.

[Insane]

00:01:715 (1) - Silent Slider Finishes are (barely) acceptable. This hitsound is silent. Please increase the volume from the timing panels, so that it is at least audible. (At least around 40%) increased volume to 40%

Apart from silent bits here and there, I see no issues with this map.


This beatmaps hitsounds are fantastic, I think I have a new favourite map when it comes to hitsounds. You've done a wonderful job at finding sounds that fit well with the song. I'm not going to bubble this yet, as I am a new old MAT member, but I can give you stars. ok , then could you have a MAT member to bubble this? it's just no possibility for me to get their mod successfully

LKs wrote:

Here's a mod for you~

Blue = Suggestion Red = Check this


[General]

The BG in this image is kinda inappropriate. I would advise you to change this to something that doesn't have a girl's panties showing, as BGs like this are considered unrankable by today's standards.
hmm, i don't very think such a cute BG will be destroyed by panties. them aren't emphases in this pic, the pic creator will think so i guess

Official Ranking Criteria wrote:

No obscene imagery in background image/storyboard/video content. This includes nudity or near-nudity. Keep things PG, suitable for 12+.

[Muya's Easy]

Not any real problems here that I can see. The only this I would suggest is making 01:26:165 (1) a new combo, but that's about it.

Great job =3


[Normal]

00:45:965 (6,1) - I don't recommend placing a note over the top of sliders. Pretty soon this is going to be unrankable, but at the same time it can still be changed to look better, as well. I suggest something like this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/134918 ok
01:01:865 (1) - Again, this is similar to the previous suggestion. I would recommend, if you're willing, to change it to something like this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/134921 ficed the slider, not 100% like yours though
01:19:565 (5) - Please place this anywhere but under the end of the slider. sure
01:21:365 (4) - Same here ok
01:23:915 (4,5) - May I suggest an alternate setup http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/134924 ok

Other than these things, it's fine


[Sumisola's Hard]

00:29:315 (5) - This sounds really strange to me. I found that adding a note 1/2 a beat after this note, and shortening the spinner, made it sound better.
01:27:065 (1) - I suggest placing a finish on here; it makes it sound better as a last hitsound =3

Other than that, It's a great map.

[Insane]

00:01:715 (1) - Silent Slider Finishes are (barely) acceptable. This hitsound is silent. Please increase the volume from the timing panels, so that it is at least audible. (At least around 40%) increased volume to 40%

Apart from silent bits here and there, I see no issues with this map.


This beatmaps hitsounds are fantastic, I think I have a new favourite map when it comes to hitsounds. You've done a wonderful job at finding sounds that fit well with the song. I'm not going to bubble this yet, as I am a new old MAT member, but I can give you stars. ok , then could you have a MAT member to bubble this? it's just no possibility for me to get their mod successfully

Kawayi Rika wrote:

[General]

图和音效都很不错~只是意见 我很喜欢这个图~ thx 中文不错啊


[Muya's Easy]

01:10:265 (4) - add NC not really necessary

nice job


[Normal]

00:04:415 - 00:09:815 这里的note很难，新人是不知道歌的节奏；只是建议 我同意有点别扭 改了
00:32:465 (5,6) - 可以试着换slider 不用了 位置不好放


[Sumisola's Hard] 我就斗胆看着帮你改一下了Sumi

01:21:065 (5) - add NC ok
01:27:065 (1) - Replace the soft sound


[Insane]

00:50:915 - 00:54:065 这里的绿线都偏移了 这不碍事的
01:24:365 (1) - 删掉NC 在后面的2加上NC ok


good luck >_<

arien666 wrote:

[Muya's Easy]
:3 c:

[Normal]
Nice hitsounds

[Sumisola's Hard]
00:09:965 (5) - Err... 1/4 holding switching would be orz on [Hard] imo ;_; Try to reduce return by 1? ok

[Insane]
<3

[Kanpakyin's Taiko Oni] sorry Kanpakyin 改了taikobg
01:22:265 - Move this Kiai end into 01:28:265 moved



Azure is right, this is decent mapset :3
And good luck XD



ps. Don't give kudosu for this reply :3

sisiJiang wrote:

好图。也好听。路过加星

SPOILER

顺便说一下 hard 的 00:42:665 (6,7) - 对齐会不会好点
normal 的 00:44:315 到 00:50:165 个人看来有点违和
这样会不会好点
00:47:615 (4) - 00:50:015 (4) - 都提前一格。这样会不会让新手来得更容易按一点？ 不用了 设计的就是一个逐渐填满的节奏
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kanpakyin wrote:

....
Insane
00:54:815 (x) - 感覺這個break可有可無,因為這麼段也沒發揮break的作用,而且前面的是1/3送分段,所以還是remove這個break把..

不要kuds.

sisiJiang wrote:

本来隐藏起来就是想不要太显眼了。我自己对作图都没什么自信。
现在倒是有点骗kd的嫌疑了。。。

Patchouloli wrote:

GOGOGOGOGOGOGOGOGOGOGOGOGOGOGOGOGO LKs-sama[lucky:ed897]这个是干嘛的[/lucky:ed897]