I like this song~. star~
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Meu pc queimou, estou usando o note do meu pai, então nem vou responder, foi mal Hyguys Mas ja achei algo que vou fixar, então..Hyguys wrote:
olha eu acho que o offset ta com o tick mais ''alto'' errado
tenta esse offset : 9218
Easy
Almost no hitsounds.
00:40:468 (1) - Isn't this a bit ''ninja'' for begginers?
01:10:468 (1) - Random.
01:42:343 (1,1,1) - No
Normal
+2 HP
00:26:718 (2) - terminar 1/2 antes ?
00:29:218 (2) - ^
01:08:593 (6) - new combo
01:52:968 (1) - control + h e no resto tmb
Hard
pra que um hard com 0.9 de diferença de star do insane
Insane
HP Tá menor que a do normal o_o
Star
nao liga o mod ruim , é que eu to atrasado ):
Thanks, kudosu for you.KingsAL2 wrote:
- Insane
00:35:155 (X) - Add a note here is better Sure ^v^
00:44:061 (5) - New combo Ok
00:49:999 (6) - This simi jump is just make it far far a way. I
00:52:343 (7,8) - ^ Like
01:03:593 (3,4) - ^ These
02:36:405 (5,6) - ^ awesome
02:47:030 (9,10) - ^ and sexy
02:52:030 (7,8) - ^ anti
02:59:061 (5,6) - ^ Jumps!
01:02:186 (6) - New combo Sure
01:07:108 (1) - Finish at 01:09:843 Ok!
01:31:718 (3,4,5,6) - Just make this be same distance plz >< Sorry, no :3
- Hard
Just a little thing.
THE WISTLE IS TOO NOISE !!! I KNOW!!
- All
Love that song
But 3min X 4diff is too long already :3
I had no mood to that normal and easy already ORZ sorrry Lazy Lazy :3
Good luck STAR
Okezek wrote:
I made some changes on my easy. Download it
[attachment=0:59a91]Miley Cyrus - Party in the U.S.A (Katsuri) [ezek's Easy].osu[/attachment:59a91]
Hyguys wrote:
olha eu acho que o offset ta com o tick mais ''alto'' errado
tenta esse offset : 9218
Easy
Almost no hitsounds.
00:40:468 (1) - Isn't this a bit ''ninja'' for begginers?
01:10:468 (1) - Random.
01:42:343 (1,1,1) - No
Normal
+2 HP
00:26:718 (2) - terminar 1/2 antes ? Claro!
00:29:218 (2) - ^ capitão
01:08:593 (6) - new combo Sim
01:52:968 (1) - control + h e no resto tmb Não
Hard
pra que um hard com 0.9 de diferença de star do insane Você quis dizer 0.09? O hard ta bem mais fácil
Insane
HP Tá menor que a do normal o_o O_O
Star
nao liga o mod ruim , é que eu to atrasado ):
Meu pc queimou
pc queimou
queimouo_o
poisonchan wrote:
~ Well, modding your map as your request, hope it helps. ~
[!] = You NEED to change.
[?] = Suggestion
[.] = If possible, change!
Vou fazer meio pt meio inglês, preguiça né. hehe.
[General]
Pode tirar 'USA' das tags, also, tira ezek também, porque você tirou a diff dele !
Adicione 'The Time of Our Lives Lukasz Gottwald Claude Kelly Jessie J.' nas tags !
Tá, eu tava modando o mapa.. E COMEÇO A OUVIR ESSA #$@%& DE WHISTLE EM QUASE TODAS AS NOTAS.
Não vou modar. Sinto muito, eu te avisei por pm --' ~ Whatever. Me avisa se quiser recheck, mas tira essa droga.
Não dei 'check' por kudosu. /dicaKatsuri wrote:
Vou arrumar as tags, mas nem posso te dar kudosu sem um mod.
Kytoxid wrote:
Yo.
[General]
BPM should be 96, yeah. Lower it there, double all the slider velocities and tick rates.
;__;.
Kytoxid wrote:
Yo.
[General]
BPM should be 96, yeah. Lower it there, double all the slider velocities and tick rates. ;w;
That white colour for the hitcircles kinda hurts the eyes during kiai, as well as making the sliderticks hard to see. Fixed
[Normal]
I sneezed and missed a note. But that's not your fault. Why does this difficulty have a lower tick rate than the others? Normal with high tick rate sucks
00:30:468 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,1,2) - How about flipping this entire section vertically? The reason I ask is that the first S-shaped slider is kinda covered by the Sure, good idea
01:29:218 (2,1) - Space these a bit further? Ok
Purely aesthetical, but I recommend looking through your combos again and adding a few new ones here and there so that visually they look consistent. For example, I would put a new combo on 02:05:468 (3), because your last combo was also round slider-note.
Solid overall.
[Hard]
I can't double the slider velocity, Since, Should the bpm REALLY be 96?
Looking at the score alone, this jump is pretty large.
AR is too low for how fast the sliders go. I'd push it to 7. I like how it does
00:45:468 (1) - Flip this horizontally? I don't like this antijump. But if you raise the AR a bit, it might also be okay. Fixed anti jump
00:47:811 (1) - Maybe remove the first note in this combo, the lack of musical cues makes this pickup hard to catch. See the lyrics: So I put my hands up, Play my song and THE(1) BUT(2)TER(3)FLY(4). It's right!
00:50:468 (1,2,3) - I would change this to a 1-repeat slider, since it's the first 1/4 pattern that pops up, so it just introduces it to the player without hurting them on their first play. It shows the bpm 192, but I'll fix.
01:02:655 (6) - New combo? This one goes pretty long. Ok
01:40:468 (1) - Make this section a bit louder please. Ok
01:57:655 (6) - This slider, whenever it popped up, seemed to not fit in too well with the music. I like it XD
[Insane]
00:17:655 (9) - Don't silence this note please, the player needs feedback on whether they hit early/late.
00:49:999 (6) - Hard to time this beat. I recommend having a consistent time for notes stacked under slider tails, since you have 1/2, 1/1, and 3/2 all in this map. Love these anti jumps
01:36:249 (4,5) - Felt out of place, since the music didn't have any reason for a jump. Actually, this happens a lot throughout this map. Oh, I enjoyed the jumps, Dunno ;_;
02:40:936 (3) - Repeat is concealed by the spinner end. not
02:30:468 (1) - Whenever this pattern showed up (this + the following combos), I don't think it played too well. Just an opinion though.Liked it, Dunno
Good luck! This map was really fun, reminded me of a few other mappers' styles.
OzzyOzrock wrote:
[Normal]
WHY WOULD YOU USE DISTANCE SPACING 0.8 INSTEAD OF A SLOWER SPEED.
00:26:718 (2) - Looks better a grid up, but distance snap (0.8 ROAOROAOR) won't let you. Do it anyways. No
00:29:218 (2) - Same here, but lower instead. No
00:36:718 (2) - HEY Hey
00:39:218 (2) - HO No
00:49:218 (5) - I know you wanna center the tick but it looks ugly. Ok, fixed
HEYIHAVEANIDEAUSEASTRAIGHTSLIDERAHAHAHAHA
00:59:218 (5) - Oh but you don't have to, I'm gonna be ok. Ok ok
01:28:280 (1) - Close to the next note... but is it ok? That is the question. Fixed
01:38:280 (1) - THE BRITNEY SONG, WHAT AN INFULENCE ^
01:50:468 (1) - These blankets are nice, even if they don't blanket anything.The blanket my heart
02:52:343 (5) - Grid to the left, and maybe up one, I guess. Yes
03:17:343 (1) - WHOA WHOA WHOA DON'T YOU DARE END THIS ON THE SLIDER'S END. OMG DDDDDDDDDD:
[Hard]
Yeah this slider speed isn't fast.
00:53:593 (4) - WHOA BRO, ONE GRID TO THE LEFT LOLOL, Ok!
01:59:530 (8) - HOW DARE YOU USE CTRL+R Fixed
02:36:093 (4) - HOLY CRAP NOT AGAIN, ONE GRID TO THE RIGHT LIKE YEAH Ok ok o k ok
02:38:593 (4) - BRO ONE TO THE LEFT WHAT'S UP WIDDAT MAN ;w;
During the moving my hips like yeah (I hate it when they move them like that, but when they move them like yeah it's fine) are there notes that should be on 1/3? Because you sort of jump during 'moving' and stuff.
[Insane]
00:26:718 (4) - This slider is so CRAAZY That's the intention
Again with the 1/3 thing on some choruses but asefsdf and stuff.
Some combos are weird, but I dunno if they're that bad.
Not overmapped! Yeah! Ok, no star because I can't goodbye.
SapphireGhost wrote:
Please disregard the numerous song references in this mod. Also, I end up repeating myself a lot repeating myself a lot because of copy-paste and overlap that makes me sad. So this isn't actually as nazi as it looks, I promise.
[General]
- The correct song title is Party in the U.S.A. Don't forget to change the thread title accordingly.
- The proper offset is 468. This starts when the music starts and puts the downbeat in the right place.
- This is a Tick 4 song, sir. Set Tick 4 on [Normal] and [Hard].
- Use Distance Spacing 1.0x in the future, please.
- Your "white" is far too grey. Use 220,220,220.
[Normal]
00:20:468 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Split up the combo somehow.
00:30:468 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - I think I've been here before, I think I've run into you, I know the things that you do, cause this is deja vu.
00:47:343 (2) - One grid down.
00:49:218 (5) - One grid up.
00:57:343 (2) - Here it goes, here it goes, here it goes again. Oh, here it goes again.
00:59:218 (5) - I'll be out of my mind, and out of song references pretty soon. So let's spend the afternoon in a cold hot air balloon.
01:05:468 (1,2,3,4,5) - Looks better without overlap.
01:10:155 (2,3) - Remove these and drag the break to (3)'s position. Amazing.
01:26:718 (2) - One grid down, down, down, down, down.
01:36:718 (2) - Baby are you down, down, down, down, down?
02:06:718 (3) - Dooooown, dooooown. Two grids down, actually.
02:07:968 (1) - Do the break drag thing I mentioned earlier.
02:27:421 (1) - Start the spinner at 02:27:968.
02:32:343 (2) - Raise it up.
02:34:218 (5) - Remember those walls I buiiilt, if they should come tumbling dooown.
02:42:343 (2) - You got a smile that could light up this whole down, I haven't seen it in a while since she brought you DOOOOOWN.
02:44:218 (5) - Can't read my, can't read my, no you can't read a my, poker face. Also, two grids up.
02:50:468 (1,2,3,4,5) - These should be further apart, sir.
03:16:718 (5) - I AM OUT OF SONG REFERENCES.
[Hard]
I was highly disappointed in the amount of unnecessary overlap in this map. HP Drain and Overall Difficulty should probably be the same amount, by the way.
01:00:468 (1,2) - This and the pastes of this are not quite perfect.
01:10:468 - Drag break to here!
01:23:280 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - These should be properly aligned.
01:47:655 (6,7,8) - This could be more perfect. As well as the pastes of this.
02:45:468 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - This is a rather long combo, sir.
Perhaps end this difficulty at the same time as the others perhaps maybe sort of possibly.
[Insane]
This is rather overmapped, Mr. Katsuri.
00:26:718 (4) - ok
00:35:780 (2,3) - Remove overlap here
00:40:467 (1,2,3) - Oh, and this too.
00:44:843 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - Not really sure if this fits the song.
00:46:718 (5,1) - This blanket could be better, down where it's wetter, take it from me.
00:57:968 (2,3,4,5) - This part could be lovelier without the overlap.
01:03:280 (2,3) - All this ohoverlap bothers me.
01:07:108 (1) - Shorten the spinner and break drag! Whee!
01:46:561 (3) - Not quite on the rhythm. Extend the slider to the blue tick and then put a note on the white tick.
01:54:218 (5,1,2) - You and your overlapping notes.
02:05:468 (1) - Shorten the spinner and break drag wait I said this before.
02:27:733 (1) - Spinner should start on the white tick.
02:30:936 (3,1) - aewrociuaen;vlwkjdnal;ekcjmaewl;r
02:40:936 (3,1) - aewrociuaen;vlwkjdnal;ekcjmaewl;r
02:50:468 (1,3) - I suppose this blanket could be very slightly more perfect.
02:52:655 (1,1,1,1) - Too much combo spiced ham.
03:07:968 (2,3,4,5) - nononononononononono
03:13:280 (2,3) - http://www.tinyurl.com/marinarage
FINISHED
NotShinta wrote:
General:
- In my opinion, the red combo colour blends in with the bottom third of the BG when hitobjects are placed there. You could make it darker or lighter. It's already good
- You also might want to get an Easy to finish the spread. I don't really want a easy, Sorry.
Insane:
- Your spacing seems very unintuitive at times, with jumps seemingly added for difficulty rather than synchronisation with the song -People say it everytime.- 01:02:186 (1,2,3,4,5) and several parts of the second verse, for example, are particularly guilty of this.
01:10:468 - Drag the break here, like you did in the other difficulties. Sure
01:36:405 (6) - I already mentioned unintuitive spacing in general, but this is a bit unexpected. Fixed
02:04:530 (1) - This is a rather hard to read anti-jump and would be better moved further away from the previous note. Oh Fixed
- It's strange for this to be so differently mapped to the other difficulties, but okay. :)
Hard:
- Consider making the circle size 4. This avoids many of the ugly overlaps that you have here, and, in my opinion, matches the slider velocity slightly more. Oh No!
01:40:468 - I suggest making this around 61% volume, similar to your previous section like this. 100% at the moment seems sudden and obtrusive. Sure
01:53:124 (2) - Something went wrong during snapping, this should be on 1/3. My mistake, but it's 1/8 snapped XD
02:35:624 (2) - 1/3 snapping. ^
02:38:124 (2) - 1/3 snapping. ^
03:00:624 (2) - 1/3 snapping. ^
03:03:124 (2) - Yeah I'm pretty sure you get the idea ^
03:17:655 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Have you thought about making this a spinner for consistency with the other difficulties? Oh Sure
Normal:
00:11:718 (3) - It seems odd to have a slider under a slider like this, especially on the easiest difficulty. You may place this somewhere more straightforward. Ok
00:16:718 (3) - Likewise, of course. Of course
00:24:843 (8,9) - I personally wouldn't recommend stacking on the end of sliders on an easier difficulty. You can probably get away with it in this case, but it can be very hard to read if done wrong. I'll not change it
00:49:218 (5) - Perhaps move this a grid up, so it doesn't come so close to the slider borders of the previous sliders. It makes the pattern just look slightly more spaced out. Of course, if you do this, do it for the similar patterns. Sure
01:35:468- You might want to add a hitcircle or similar here. This is an awkward silence without. Make (4) of the previous combo a hitcircle to keep difficulty if you like. Don't forget to fix combos! Oh thanks, fixed.
01:37:968 - Likewise. Likewise
02:34:218 (5) - Why is this curved while previous ones aren't? Also, move a grid or 2 down for overlap avoidance. Fixed.
02:55:468 (8) - Add a finish for this? I think it emphasises the start of the chorus well. Ok
03:16:718 (5) - Also add a finish on the endpoint of this slider? Haha, Sure!
Normal and Hard show much promise. Keep up the good work.Thanks
val0108 wrote:
ya-
[Normal]
Slider tick rate 2
01:44:843 (7,1) - so far for them
01:46:718 (3,1) - ^
01:49:843 (5,6) - spacing
01:51:718 - add note?
01:50:468 (6,7) - plz put far
01:50:468 (1,2,1) - far again
02:07:968 (1) - spin end here?02:07:968 (1) -
02:24:218 (1) - The right redpoint 1grid right
02:27:655 (1) - spin start here.02:27:968 - and keep spin end if you fixed.
02:56:718 (3,1) - same as 01:46:718 (3,1)
03:04:843 (2,1) -
03:17:655 (1) - spin end 03:20:468 -
[Hard]
STR 2
00:18:905 (3) - little overlap.about 3grid down.
00:26:718 (4) - slider end 1/4?
00:39:061 (6) - move to symmetry with 4?about this http://puu.sh/4MnS
00:51:093 (3) - 1grid right
00:51:718 (5) - 2up 1right
00:53:124 (2) - put 1/3
00:54:218 (6) - 2down 1left
00:59:061 (6) - move 00:59:218 - ?
01:07:186 (1) - http://puu.sh/4MoF then,you can add note befire a spin if you fixed it.
01:16:093 (3) - about 3grid down.little overlap
01:45:468 (1) - http://puu.sh/4Mp8 better
01:55:468 (1) - ^
01:49:999 - add note?
01:51:718 (6) - how? http://puu.sh/4Mpl
01:54:218 (6) - ^
01:53:202 (2,6) - put the center
01:59:999 - add note? then,02:00:155 (1) - delete
02:21:405 (1) - renew combo
02:36:718 (6) - again
02:39:218 (6) - ^
02:52:186 (1) - start?02:52:968 -
02:55:468 (1) - again
03:01:718 (6) - ^
03:03:202 (2,6) -^
03:05:468 (1) - ^
03:09:530 (8,1) -^
03:17:655 (1) - ^
[insane]
STR2?
sorry many mod...orz
I am glad if I can help you x))
spboxer3 wrote:
sorry I was busy for lest week so...
here some suggest for you
[Hard]
SV is too higher to me :(
AR=7 No
[Insane]
00:44:843 (1) - clap? No
01:36:249 (5,6,7,8) - I don't like this snap No
Kytoxid wrote:
Rechecking...
[General]
You have 2 .osb files, one is ehh, but two is really unnecessary and is making osu! think there's a video or something here. So delete them both and just full upload. Ok
[Insane]
00:09:843 (1) - I didn't really like these twitch sliders the first time I played it, and I still don't really like them with the sliders being relatively fast. Ok, changed
00:44:843 (1,2,3,4,1) - This change in spacing isn't really matched by anything in the music. Ok, jumps now
02:40:936 (3) - Repeat's hidden by the spinner clear's text on the default skin. Ok, fixed
Felt a bit messy because of the spacing, but otherwise was okay.
[Hard]
01:04:374 (6,7,8) - 6 is a bit hard to land on even though it follows the vocals, but 8 is in a weird spot imo. Ok
01:07:655 (6) - Change to a 1/4 slider? No, sorry
01:23:280 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - Put these in 1 combo? Ok
01:28:749 - This gap sounds a bit weird. Ok, changed
01:32:811 (7) - Remove this note? Makes the 1 easier to hit. No
01:47:655 (6) - All 3 beats on this slider land on weird spots. I will keep it D:
[Normal]
Looked good.
Some of the beats on the 2 harder difficulties were a bit heard to read/predict, so there's quite a jump between Normal and Hard, in my opinion. Good luck!
> Skin.Katsuri wrote:
If you want to make a skin for me feel free.
Updated, thanksRandomJibberish wrote:
Sorry, should have modded this ages ago, but better late than never
General
An easy would be nice. I'd totally make one if you're too lazy
Insane
Generally, this diff felt a little 1/4 spammy and crazy spaced, but it's all pretty readable :)
00:44:843 (1,2,3,4,1) - I think this is a little too confusing Fixed
01:46:561 (3) - The repeat doesn't follow anything in the music It does
02:20:468 - It threw me off that you didn't follow the offbeatness in this section Oh
02:38:983 (1) - out of nowhere spinner is out of nowhere Fixed
Hard
Spacing is pretty low compared to the slider speed, which felt awkward. Also, 1/4s slightly overlapping kinda irritated me, so fixing it would be two birds with one stone
00:50:468 (1) - This slider isn't used on any of the copypastas - I'd suggest you add it on the others. I don't think so. Sorry
Normal
01:33:280 (1) - Starting a slider on a red tick out of nowhere like this isn't advisable. I'd move its start to the white tick before or after. Fixed
There isn't a lot wrong with this map as such, but I'd like to see it with some more modding before we think about bubbles etc.- It could do with some more "polish", as it were. Concentrate on matching the music more closely, and try and base all your mapping decisions off of it.
Ha ha. Ha.theowest wrote:
Don't know why. But this looks better and is more fun to play than any ztrot, osuplayer, larto, shiirn, jarby, RandomJibberish, etc map I've ever played.
Gonzvlo wrote:
[General][Normal]
- Skin: Pause-Retry, Back and Continue are missing, add them please. Ok
- Tags: Remove "Jesse J", that's not related at all. Ok
[Hard]
- 01:54:843 (2,1) - Reduce this jump a bit please.Done o3o
[Insane]
- 00:59:218 (X) - I'd suggest to add a circle here, same for copypastas.Done :3
- 00:35:155 (X) - I'd suggest to add a circle here. Oki~
- 01:02:186 (1,2,3,4) - There isn't any rhythm or vocals change to backup this jumps. They feel too forced, I strongly suggest to either use normal spacing or reduce the jumps. Fixeeeed~
- 01:36:249 (5,6,7) - This spacing doesn't make much sense either, it makes the notes looks as if they were in different signatures. Try to make spacing consistent between these 3.Done.