Weezy wrote:

I was bored one fine morning

General
- Screw what people say about the bg!!! I like it :3 Yeah! :3
- EDIT: Remove the following tags: kugimiya rie (tried searching it and I still found my 2 toradora maps and I don't have it in my tags. Tags searches individual words.) ed (too short to search for anything) suki kirai (its in hte title and when searching it doesn't account for punctuations. Still found the ranked on.)

Normal
00:42:211 (1,2) - This kinda annoys me, plays weird. Try moving (2) to 00:42:569 and stack it at the start of the slider. fixed
00:47:390 (3,4) - Not a pretty stack imo :/ try something else? fixed
00:50:247 (3,4) - ^same

Everything else is fine to me

TicClick wrote:

В принципе, можешь любое отвергать, это из серии «как я бы сделал».

Easy
00:21:140 (1) - что-то мне этот спиннер не нравится. Можешь попробовать его запустить с 00:21:319 по 00:23:461 okay
00:29:533 (1) - со второго звена можно свисток снять ^
00:31:676 (4) - ^ ^
00:32:390 (5) - только финиш оставить ^
00:39:533 (1) - я б его крутил с 00:39:711 по 00:42:045 до 00:41:319
00:42:211 (1) - можно с тела и с конца свисток снять, он в песне есть с конца убрал
01:01:319 (2) - а сюда добавить okay
01:23:819 (1) - попробуй закончить на 01:26:676 no

Если какой-нибудь из спиннеров будешь редактировать, на остальных дифках не забудь


Normal
00:01:676 (2) - свисток с начала можно убрать, как и на 00:03:104 (4) - okay
00:04:890 (3) - а вот тут на конец навесить okay
00:10:247 (7,8) - можно в повторяющийся слить no
00:10:604 (8) - один хлопок на начало (можно и второй на конец) no
00:20:961 (6) - свисток? no
00:26:676 (5) - ^ no
00:46:140 (6,7) - ^ no
00:46:676 (1,2,3) - мне очень хочется сюда свистки поставить (слайдеру — на начало) и на такие же куски дальше ok
00:49:533 (1,2,3) - ^ ok
00:56:676 (4,5) - свисток на третье звено и на ноту no

В принципе, со свистками на харде и инсейне всё то же самое.

Hard
01:20:248 (4) - сюда свисток no

Insane
В начале ритм странный.
00:33:194 (3) - можно убрать?
00:39:711 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - какая милая штука, хе-хе. Я б её погромче сделал и хлопки в ритм поставил:

• 00:39:890 (3) -
  00:40:604 (4) -

00:43:461 (9) - то же, что и с прошлым стримом.
all no
И да, попробуй оффсет 973. Тайминг битый ибо менял мп3. Ищу МАТа чтобы проверил. Можешь подогнать через тест, у меня такой почему-то вышел (пробовал тестить, потом на 0.25 подгонял).

pieguy1372 wrote:

Easy:

00:09:533 (5) - New combo? ok
00:27:033 (4) - New combo? ok

Normal:

-Tick rate 1? no

Hard:

-Tick rate 1? no

Insane:

-Tick rate 1? no

00:26:508 (5) - Space it evenly between (4) and (1)? ok

Nice map (ノﾟωﾟ)ノ

kioukiou wrote:

Please resnap all notes if you changed timing. again forgot it ;[
And resnap all green lines.(especially kiai time.)

[Easy]
00:24:189 (1) - Add new combo.(silly bug) fixed

[Hard]
00:06:689 (1) - Same as [Easy] fixed

Aleks719 wrote:

General
OH U... Удали звук из видеофайла + фулл сабмит irc

Insane
00:22:224 (4) - добавить свисток
00:36:510 (1) - свисток в начало
00:39:725 (1) - против заглушенного стрима. категорически, но ок.
00:44:546 (1,2,3) - добавь три клэпа
00:46:153 (1,2) - ещё два клэпа
00:52:403 (1) - добавь финиш
00:55:975 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - стандартный клэп ритм не канает, в песне другие клэпы, например 00:56:689 (1,2,3,4) - просится 4 клэпа кряду и 00:57:582 (1,2) - тут два
01:03:832 (1) - добавь финиш
01:06:689 (1) - ^
01:19:725 (1,2,3,4) - мб 4 свистка?

Hard
Суть, как в инсейне, хитсаунды местами пустоваты, возможно совпадут даже пожелания.
Это чувствуется, поэтому лучше пофиксить

Normal
То же cамое заметно,например здесь : 00:43:832 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) -
или здесь 00:55:260 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1) -
или здесь 01:23:475 (5,1,2,3) - но уже не так, как в инсейне.
00:39:546 (1) - добавь свисток
01:04:903 (1) - непонятно почему звук сбавлен, можно финиш + свисток смело

Easy
Почему то показалось, что АР идет быстро.
Не понял почему тикрейт 1, когда везде 2.
00:39:725 (1) - добавь свисток?

Ekaru wrote:

General:

That BG's wrong and borderline-inappropriate in a multitude of different ways, but okay. ~_~ you prefer black background?

Insane:

00:11:143 (1,2,3,4) - This just doesn't play well at all. I would just stack these instead - it'll play pretty dang similar, but will actually be readable and not so weird. no
00:52:393 (1,2,3) - You have jumps everywhere before this, and then suddenly, on a part of the music that begs for jumps... you go back to "normal" spacing. Just make these jumps. no
01:03:822 (1,2,3) - ^ Don't make these jumps too big, but they should be jumps no

Hard:

00:49:536 (1,2,3) - Stacking these is counter-intuitive; they feel like they should be jumps okay
00:52:393 (1) - Slider? 3 hit circles instead please, preferably with some jumps. no

Normal:

00:00:964 (1,2) - These are the only linear sliders in this map. Just make them curved or straight, please. okay

Easy:

00:00:964 (1,2) - Could you please make these rounder? They're not that pretty ATM, but it'd be easy to fix! okay

It's pretty fine and pretty decent overall!

scalone wrote:

Oh, hi! Mod4mod here. Before starting I'll star this map. Great job!

Easy:
00:965: At the of slider (2:036) remove whistle and add there clap. nope
02:393 ^ ^
49:536: ^ ^
1:01:947: Rhythm sounds weird here. try to follow a rhythm like: http://puu.sh/4zLX changed

Normal:
Well, I think Normal's not rankable 'cause it has 4 stars, and the limit is 3 i lol'd, sorry... but for ranking need diff less then 3 star but normal with 4 star it OK. I have Easy 2 star so my mapset rankeble So, I'll try to find patterns which make diff harder
3:822 (1) (2) (3). Rhythms like that are hard to read for newbies. Follow a rhythm like: http://puu.sh/4zMy no
10:250: Add 2 revers arrows and delete the other slider lol 2 revers it harder to read then just 2 sliders ^^
13:464: Replace with 1/4 slider
16:332: ^
24:179-28:822: Well, it's a bit hard for new players. Try to map a thing like: http://puu.sh/4zNa
39:179: Same thing of 13:464- 16:332
42:572: Remove Hit Circle
45:786: ^ and add reverse arrow
57:214: ^ ^
58:107: ^ ^
59:179: Remove Hit Cricle
01:250: Remove Hit Cricle, Move slider where was the deleted hitcircle and add reverse arrow
1:02:036: Remove Hit Cricle
1:03:107: Same thig of 01:250, but add two reverse arrows, and delete the hitcircle which stays on: 1:03:822
1:14:714: Remove Slider, and add an Hit Circle at: 1:14:893: x:460 y:152
1:24:536: Same thing of 10:250
Well, it will be easier Don't u think so? i don't need easier so all no

Insane:
Nothing to do here.

I'm Modding Hard I got to no now. I'll mod it soon
(PS: if my mod wasn't helpfull, FOR THE GOD'S SHAKE DON'T KUDOSU ME

Breeze wrote:

Hi there
oh,釘宮毒

[General]

1. Please remove Zero no from tag since they are already in the source, and remove the Definite Article and preposition
   like of the from tag, I think this word don't point to this song

ok

[Normal]

1. 00:31:679 (4) - Don't add whistle here to fit your previous slider style? And maybe use a slider with whistle and a note would be better i dont think so
   [attachment=0:856f2]1.jpg[/attachment:856f2]
2. 00:55:965 (3,4,5) - Add whistle to fit background music? Once you decide use whistle, please remove clap

good idea, also i added whistles (1,2) i hope it sound not like whistles spam

[Hard]

1. 00:55:250 (1-5) - Use whistle to fit music, if you use whistle, remove clap

ok

[Insane]

1. 00:20:250 (7) - I thinks add whistle here would better, oh and also add to slider itself no
2. 00:55:250 (1) - 00:57:215 (4) - Add whistle, and remove clap, same reason as before ok
3. 01:06:679 (1,2,3,5) - ^

ok

nice map
star
I'd like to bubble this map but then...I'm afraid that would be called "speed ranking" :<
just get some more mod, maybe it could be more perfect

kanpakyin wrote:

Yeah!Mod for The Challenge Queue

[General]

1. Remove "Zero no" from tag like Breeze have already explained why.

ok

[Easy]
error/unrankable stuff
Some error in this map,you need to fix it.

1. Orz..I don't know it's a bug or not,however,I want to complain about the slider tick rate.In editor,it shows tick rate 2 however in gameplay,it shows tick rate 1. wtf...

Beatmap design and suggestion
-These are suggestion only,you don't need to follow them if you disagree.

1. 00:21:322 (1) - consider a hitclap on this spinner?It fits music a lot.Just think about it. no
2. 00:38:107 (3) - Be honest.this slider looks really ugly,also this slider should end at 00:38:107 (3) - ,place it on downbeat.
   changed
3. 00:45:250 (4) - To follow your hitsound pattern,I think you should add a whistle here.Sure you also can add a finish here as well. added a whistle
4. 01:02:036 (4) - I'm wondering why you don't put the rhythm like 00:59:357 (4) - this?Just sayin. changed
5. 01:22:750 (5) - Probably make a symmetry with 01:21:322 (3) - ?You also need to move (4) - 2 grid up

Yeah! fixed

[Normal]
error/unrankable stuff
-Some error in this map,you need to fix it.

1. Good job.

Beatmap design and suggestion
-These are suggestion only,you don't need to follow them if you disagree.

1. 00:09:893 (6) - I highly suggest you put a new combo here because it can consistent the length with others combo!Well,a tiny thing only,feel free to ignore. ok
2. 00:18:107 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - Just give a little rhythm suggestion to you:Why you don't make the rhythm like this -> xxx xxx xxx?I'm sure it's not too difficult for Normal.You need to adjust the spacing after change.I thought about it but no
3. 00:29:536 (1,2,3,4) - ^Same.
4. 00:39:536 (x) - IMO,this spinner should be stop at 00:41:322 - to fit the first accent point!Also add a note at 00:41:679 - after change,I suggest you put this note on the central if you want to change it. no
5. 01:04:893 (x) - I'm wodering why you put a spinner here?The vocal is still continue so it shouldn't be a spinner,I strongly suggest you continue you mapping here,use note and slider instead of it. ok
6. 01:14:715 (4) - Tiny hitsound suggestion here:I think finish doesn't fit it too much.If I were you,I would like to use a normal hitsound instead of. ok
7. 01:18:107 (x) - Something really similar with 01:04:893.However I think this spinner can stay but I would make it start from 01:19:714 - .

too short spinn imo but i mapped this part

[Hard]
error/unrankable stuff
-Some error in this map,you need to fix it.

1. Good job.

Beatmap design and suggestion
-These are suggestion only,you don't need to follow them if you disagree.

1. 00:00:965 ~ 00:05:250 (x) - A feeling for here,since you stuff many 1/2 here,so i suggest you do a crescendo here.00:00:965 - 30% 00:02:393 - 60% 00:03:822 - 90% 00:05:429 - Back to 60% good idea but i make 40/60/80 cuz too different volume
2. 00:06:322 (x) - IMO,30% volume is too loud,I prefer use 5% here because here doesn't have any vocal/bass/drum sound. ok
3. 01:05:607 (6,7,8) - I think you should follow the music here because you follow the music most of the part so add some 1/2 will make it more better. ok
4. 01:09:000 (3) - Change this to normal hitsound?Don't add any finish/clap/whistle on it,just change it to normal hitsound. ok
5. 01:14:714 (9.10) - ^Same. ok

[Insane]
error/unrankable stuff
Some error in this map,you need to fix it.

1. Good job!

Beatmap design and suggestion
-These are suggestion only,you don't need to follow them if you disagree.

1. 00:00:965 ~ 00:05:250 (x) - Same as Hard. ok
2. 00:06:322 (x) - Same as Hard. ok
3. 00:10:250 (1,2,3,4) - I feel little bit uncomfortable when I played this jump.I would suggest you change some position: put (2)- on (4)- then put (4)- on (2)- In other words,that's mean exchange the position on (2.4)- ok
4. 00:45:250 (1,2,3,4) - I suggest you change another jump position?I can see you use this pattern before so I guess you can change another pattern to make more fun. no
5. 01:09:000 (3.4) - Same as Hard. ok
6. 01:14:357 (2,3) - ^Same. ok

That's it!Good luck.

rEdo wrote:

[Easy]
1:20:607 (1) - delete that note maybe? no

[Normal]
0:32:750 (1) - i kinda don't like how this spinner ends... i can end at 00:35:250 but imo it will too close to next note (for normal diff)
1:25:607 (4) - a whistle instead of that finish, i guess? ok

[Hard]
0:32:572 (1) - start it 1/2 later? ok
1:17:929 (1) - delete NC i make 2 notes instead of slider
1:18:286 (2) - add NC
1:20:607 (1) - delete NC ok

[Insane]
0:03:286 (4) - move it a bit to the right, so those notes form a perfect rhombus. i'd use distance snap 1.2x on this one, by the way. ok
0:20:250 (7,8,9) - this kinda doesn't follow the music, i'd go with vocals at that point.Yeah! changed
0:39:715 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - isn't this quite... overmapped? i don't think this actually fits the song, i don't think there's a reason follow that fast something in the background XD" don't touch this stream cuz it's my favorite :p
0:50:429 (1) - delete NC ok
0:50:786 (3) - add NC ok
0:59:000 (3) - delete NC ok
0:59:715 (5,6,7,8) - move those notes (despite the distance snap) a bit higher? this just doesn't look nice imo. ok
1:01:857 (1) - delete NC ok
1:02:393 (4) - add NC ok


definitely, one of the best maps i've modded, extremely fun to play, also i like the way you're following the rhythm
good luck!