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Yasora

Maya-kira wrote:

hnggg.. ._.
permisi numpang nge-mod sekalian ya--

yang hard dulu deh:
seperti yang dikatakan kak nivalis, kayaknya disini ada kesalahan di snapping >.<

selain snapping, ada hal lain yang aku mod, itu aku tulis di sini aja ya >w<;;
00:13:333(2,3) = slidernya kurang panjang, jadi kurang ngepas gitu ._. terus kayaknya yang (4) lebih enak dihapus deh.. kalau masih mau pake suara, gini aja, klik bagian ujung 4 di bagian timing rulernya >w<;;
00:17:317 (5) = sama kayak yang diatas ;_; kurang panjang jadi kurang pas gitu
00:24:114 (3) = kayaknya ini enakan diganti jadi satu beat aja ._. atau slider aja.. ga pake reverse--
00:30:207 (1,2,3,..5) = ...ini aku ngak ngerti oTL kayaknya panjang slidernya masalah lagi deh-- terutama yang nomor 2 itu bingung diapain-- terus, yang nomor 5 lebih enak dihapus dulu. ._. kalau diatur sama panjang slider, yang kelima ini pasti nabrak.
00:42:862 (4) = ...kalau panjangnya diatur, terus yang ini di reverse, jadi tabrakan sama yang kelima orz, terus lebih enak kalau 7 dijadiin slider singkat deh--
01:28:765 = coba spinner nya maju satu ketuk deh ;u;''

ngngng kayaknya sih itu aja---
ada banyak salah length pada slider juga-- jadi uda aku coba fix >w<
aku fixnya berdasarkan ruler doang sih ._.;;
kalau misalnya soal spacing problem gitu aku ga bisa angkat ngomong-- oTL aku cuma bisa nge resnap aja--

ini yang uda ku re-snap >w<;;


ngngng segitu aja deh ;u;/
semoga bermanfaat (?)
dan baru yang hard aja..
yang insane aku periksa besok (?) <--siapa yang minta dia
yang easy sama normal uda bagus >w<
tadinya... baru aja mau ngumumin (?) siapa yang mau bikin guest diff yang hard eh taunya udah ada yang nanggepin sebelum ngomong :lol: thx ya~~
Topic Starter
Yasora

Devil_Cosmo wrote:

Nivalis wrote:

[Devil_Cosmo's Insane]
-> Lead-in time-nya masih 1985, rubah manual pakai Notepad jadi 2000 ?
Belum di-resnap juga... (Pakai AIMod tulisannya masih "Object isn't snapped!")
done
[attachment=0:682a4]Kuroki Meisa - Wired Life (TV Size) (Yasora-chan) [Devil_Cosmo's Insane].osu[/attachment:682a4]

btw, nick gw blom dimasukin ke tags ya? :P
iye~ ane nungguin sampe bener - bener ke fix smua~ baru di edit - edit lagi sisanya :P lagian video nya aja belom ke aplot hehe :lol:
Maya-kira

Yasora-chan wrote:

Maya-kira wrote:

hnggg.. ._.
permisi numpang nge-mod sekalian ya--

yang hard dulu deh:
seperti yang dikatakan kak nivalis, kayaknya disini ada kesalahan di snapping >.<

selain snapping, ada hal lain yang aku mod, itu aku tulis di sini aja ya >w<;;
00:13:333(2,3) = slidernya kurang panjang, jadi kurang ngepas gitu ._. terus kayaknya yang (4) lebih enak dihapus deh.. kalau masih mau pake suara, gini aja, klik bagian ujung 4 di bagian timing rulernya >w<;;
00:17:317 (5) = sama kayak yang diatas ;_; kurang panjang jadi kurang pas gitu
00:24:114 (3) = kayaknya ini enakan diganti jadi satu beat aja ._. atau slider aja.. ga pake reverse--
00:30:207 (1,2,3,..5) = ...ini aku ngak ngerti oTL kayaknya panjang slidernya masalah lagi deh-- terutama yang nomor 2 itu bingung diapain-- terus, yang nomor 5 lebih enak dihapus dulu. ._. kalau diatur sama panjang slider, yang kelima ini pasti nabrak.
00:42:862 (4) = ...kalau panjangnya diatur, terus yang ini di reverse, jadi tabrakan sama yang kelima orz, terus lebih enak kalau 7 dijadiin slider singkat deh--
01:28:765 = coba spinner nya maju satu ketuk deh ;u;''

ngngng kayaknya sih itu aja---
ada banyak salah length pada slider juga-- jadi uda aku coba fix >w<
aku fixnya berdasarkan ruler doang sih ._.;;
kalau misalnya soal spacing problem gitu aku ga bisa angkat ngomong-- oTL aku cuma bisa nge resnap aja--

ini yang uda ku re-snap >w<;;


ngngng segitu aja deh ;u;/
semoga bermanfaat (?)
dan baru yang hard aja..
yang insane aku periksa besok (?) <--siapa yang minta dia
yang easy sama normal uda bagus >w<
tadinya... baru aja mau ngumumin (?) siapa yang mau bikin guest diff yang hard eh taunya udah ada yang nanggepin sebelum ngomong :lol: thx ya~~
heee ;A;
itu diff mu yang aku mod--
bukan guess diff oTL
Topic Starter
Yasora

Maya-kira wrote:

heee ;A;
itu diff mu yang aku mod--
bukan guess diff oTL
eh~ iya sori blm diliat sih tadi <--- maen nge pos aja /plak... btw, ane udah nyerah nih bikin yang hard~ mau nolongin bikinin ga?? ga mau juga gapapa sih wkwkwk (satu - satu nya jalan adalah menghapus hard nya >w</ ) <---tipe yang mudah nyerah
Maya-kira

Yasora-chan wrote:

eh~ iya sori blm diliat sih tadi <--- maen nge pos aja /plak... btw, ane udah nyerah nih bikin yang hard~ mau nolongin bikinin ga?? ga mau juga gapapa sih wkwkwk (satu - satu nya jalan adalah menghapus hard nya >w</ ) <---tipe yang mudah nyerah
heee bisa sih x'3;;
tapi kerja sama yuk,
bikinin diff untuk map ku yang akan datang (?) nanti, x3 gimana?
Topic Starter
Yasora

Maya-kira wrote:

Yasora-chan wrote:

eh~ iya sori blm diliat sih tadi <--- maen nge pos aja /plak... btw, ane udah nyerah nih bikin yang hard~ mau nolongin bikinin ga?? ga mau juga gapapa sih wkwkwk (satu - satu nya jalan adalah menghapus hard nya >w</ ) <---tipe yang mudah nyerah
heee bisa sih x'3;;
tapi kerja sama yuk,
bikinin diff untuk map ku yang akan datang (?) nanti, x3 gimana?
boleh~ boleh~ tapi ga jamin kualitas nya ya~ (?) :lol:
Devil Cosmo
kalo mau yang hard itu collab aja.
gw sih dah siap buat mendaftar buat collabnya :P
Topic Starter
Yasora

Devil_Cosmo wrote:

kalo mau yang hard itu collab aja.
gw sih dah siap buat mendaftar buat collabnya :P
... ngg.. collab itu apa toh? *maaf ga tau* ><
Devil Cosmo

Yasora-chan wrote:

Devil_Cosmo wrote:

kalo mau yang hard itu collab aja.
gw sih dah siap buat mendaftar buat collabnya :P
... ngg.. collab itu apa toh? *maaf ga tau* ><
collab itu 1 diff dikerjain min 2 orang. :)
Topic Starter
Yasora

Devil_Cosmo wrote:

collab itu 1 diff dikerjain min 2 orang. :)
ho~ *baru ngerti* :lol:
Maya-kira
HARD DIFFNYA SELESAI YA TUHAN QuQ!~~~

dan kenapa pula ahjsdfjklghak

maaf kalau hancur ya ;_;
aku sudah berjuang lho~
sudah berjuang ang ang (?)

Download: Kuroki Meisa - Wired Life (TV Size) (Yasora-chan) [Maya's Life ()].osu
Topic Starter
Yasora

Maya-kira wrote:

HARD DIFFNYA SELESAI YA TUHAN QuQ!~~~

dan kenapa pula ahjsdfjklghak

maaf kalau hancur ya ;_;
aku sudah berjuang lho~
sudah berjuang ang ang (?)
huwwooo selamat~ selamat~ silakan beristirahat :D
thx ya~
Rei Hakurei
mod iseng XD

General :
offset kayanya 188-190 ms

Extra :
00:45.205 , gw saranin ada break... biar drainnya ga jalan...
kenapa ini kesannya kaya Hard/Insane yang dibikin kesel ama HP dan CSnya ya ? IMO HP -3, CS -1, SliderTick 2 atw 1
umumnya 1/2 beat yang enak... ga ada 3/4 1/4 1/8 1/6 atw tipe2 beat yang ngeselin buat masuk kategori Extra..

Maya's Life :
ini baru bisa dibilang Extra/Insane... dari posisi sama beatnya lebih berbau sulit walau CSnya biasa...

Normal :
AR +1 ?

Easy :
no problem

SPOILER
CS= Circle Size
HP= HP Drain
AR= Approach Rate

bagus juga sih dari cara pembuatan mapnya... gw kasih aja nagareboshi kalo gitu :3

kalo masih ada guest diff slot ntar ku kasih random diff...
EDIT: buset... dah masuk Pending lagi... ga nyangka...
Topic Starter
Yasora

Rei_Fan49 wrote:

mod iseng XD

General :
offset kayanya 188-190 ms

Extra :
00:45.205 , gw saranin ada break... biar drainnya ga jalan...
kenapa ini kesannya kaya Hard/Insane yang dibikin kesel ama HP dan CSnya ya ? IMO HP -3, CS -1, SliderTick 2 atw 1
umumnya 1/2 beat yang enak... ga ada 3/4 1/4 1/8 1/6 atw tipe2 beat yang ngeselin buat masuk kategori Extra..

Maya's Life :
ini baru bisa dibilang Extra/Insane... dari posisi sama beatnya lebih berbau sulit walau CSnya biasa...

Normal :
AR +1 ?

Easy :
no problem

SPOILER
CS= Circle Size
HP= HP Drain
AR= Approach Rate

bagus juga sih dari cara pembuatan mapnya... gw kasih aja nagareboshi kalo gitu :3

kalo masih ada guest diff slot ntar ku kasih random diff...
EDIT: buset... dah masuk Pending lagi... ga nyangka...
waa~ kayaknya kalo offset kaga' bisa di ubah lagi deh~ udah pas gitu~ gommen ne m(_ _)m

wahaha udah di ganti kok nama guest diff nya~ ga ada yang extra/insane XD dua - duanya ta' kasih "Life" biar unik gitu (?)

okeh~ okeh sisanya ditampung dulu~ untuk smentara di aplod aja dulu yang sekarang~ Arigatou >w<v
Devil Cosmo
sudah diedit dan diremap pas bagian banyak slider :)
Download: Kuroki Meisa - Wired Life (TV Size) (Yasora-chan) [Devil_Cosmo's Life].osu

geez, kena beginian :O
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Maya-kira

Rei_Fan49 wrote:

mod iseng XD

General :
offset kayanya 188-190 ms

Extra :
00:45.205 , gw saranin ada break... biar drainnya ga jalan...
kenapa ini kesannya kaya Hard/Insane yang dibikin kesel ama HP dan CSnya ya ? IMO HP -3, CS -1, SliderTick 2 atw 1
umumnya 1/2 beat yang enak... ga ada 3/4 1/4 1/8 1/6 atw tipe2 beat yang ngeselin buat masuk kategori Extra..

Maya's Life :
ini baru bisa dibilang Extra/Insane... dari posisi sama beatnya lebih berbau sulit walau CSnya biasa...


Normal :
AR +1 ?

Easy :
no problem

SPOILER
CS= Circle Size
HP= HP Drain
AR= Approach Rate

bagus juga sih dari cara pembuatan mapnya... gw kasih aja nagareboshi kalo gitu :3

kalo masih ada guest diff slot ntar ku kasih random diff...
EDIT: buset... dah masuk Pending lagi... ga nyangka...

*BANGGA* // terdepak
#sembaranganbales
Arcrea
mod hihi~anyway star~

BPM:128
offset:210

[General]
Kiai Time:
choice1:
mulai dari
00.37.706~00.52.470 ato gak disitu volume na 50%

choice2:
mulai dari
00.52.676~01.20.366 klo ini volume na 75% hihi, terserah sih....
Biar lebih seru xD, hihi, pick aja~ahah....

[Easy]
Ini slider na ada yang beberapa janggal, hihi, perbaikin deh, jadi panjang na sama gitu, hehe..

[Normal]
Di Diff ini slider lumayan banyak yang kelebihan, point na, contoh
biar rapih aja tolong pas in di tengah note na

yang kek gitu tolong di tanggapin deh, ehhe

segini dulu deh mod na~ anyway keren laguna, slowmow~ haha xD
Topic Starter
Yasora

deadhead22 wrote:

mod hihi~anyway star~

BPM:128
offset:210

[General]
Kiai Time:
choice1:
mulai dari
00.37.706~00.52.470 ato gak disitu volume na 50%

choice2:
mulai dari
00.52.676~01.20.366 klo ini volume na 75% hihi, terserah sih....
Biar lebih seru xD, hihi, pick aja~ahah....

[Easy]
Ini slider na ada yang beberapa janggal, hihi, perbaikin deh, jadi panjang na sama gitu, hehe..

[Normal]
Di Diff ini slider lumayan banyak yang kelebihan, point na, contoh
biar rapih aja tolong pas in di tengah note na

yang kek gitu tolong di tanggapin deh, ehhe

segini dulu deh mod na~ anyway keren laguna, slowmow~ haha xD
makasih bgt kaka~ ane kasih kudosu~~ >w<d
Maya-kira
mod iseng >w<;;

eh itu---
ituuuuuu ;A;
mungkin yang insanenya devil_cosmo bisa dibuat lebih bervariasi---
maksudnya gimana ya--
biar ngak flat aja sih oTL >.<

eng,.. #kabur
Pereira006
hello~~

Thank PM me from my userpage

Some Suggestions
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
[easy]

HP -1
OD - why soo to high? this is easy pleasse put -2

I can see this have lot inconsiente spacing
I not why are you use Original Spacing so HOLD ALT (don't leave) look Beat Snap divisor change Distance Spacing what you original ?
1.6x? maybe? so example

00:09:584 (2,3) - Incosiente spacing and why? click at 00:09:584 (2) and look this http://puu.sh/4hwB the Next combo is 1.79x but you use 1.6x so that mean is inconsiente spacing pleasse fix 00:09:584 (2,3)
Only Easy and Normal cannot never make Random Spacing NEVER
00:11:458 (3,4) - Incosiente Spacing
too much lot inconsiente spacing
00:17:083 (2,3) - this little jump remenber only Easy never make random spacing ho also too jump and stream never
00:20:833 (4,1) - this is jump that cannot this easy pleasse fix spacing
I can't mod this because have lot inconsiente spacing

Pleasse Hold ALT choose you spacing original and check all note and slider to fix all spacing pleasse
don't ignore spacing
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Normal

00:20:833 (1,4) - Weird stack maybe stack like this http://puu.sh/4hxv this is call stack so fix this
00:25:988 (5) - Grid 1 up (fix spacing)
00:25:988 (5,1) - little jump pleasse fix
00:44:737 (1,2) - Incosiente spacing
00:52:236 (4,1,2,3) - fix inconsiente spacing

not much really problem
but i not what you use spacing original 0.8x or 0.9x? So you avoid the jump this normal
Normal cannot make jump so you so remove jump pleasse check all spacing
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
[Devil's_Cosmo's Life]

Slider Tick Rate 4 this is not fit this song so change 1 that is fit this song

00:03:959 (17,18) - http://puu.sh/4hA4 (17) i can't see arrow that mean is unrank pleasse get another place
00:06:303 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - This i can't listen drum,lyrics and beat not have all that mean is overmapped you should remove this because i can't listen drums or lyrics this just nothing that are overmapped pleasse remove you should listen music and not put note whithout drums
00:10:521 (1) - put new combo
01:10:750 this break are unrank because this is little pleasse remap

i can feel have lot overmapped you shoud listen music and listen lyrics and listen drums if you feel put note or slider and not put whithout drums
this need mooooooorrrrrrrrrrrreeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee work
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
[b]Maya's life][/b]

HP -1

00:05:834 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - again overmapped PLEASSE LISTEN MUSIC

this is fine for me because this insane i konw but need more work
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

that all i think
Any questions? call me in-game or pm
STAR ! and Good luck
Maya-kira

Pereira006 wrote:

hello~~

Thank PM me from my userpage

Some Suggestions
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
[easy]

HP -1
OD - why soo to high? this is easy pleasse put -2

I can see this have lot inconsiente spacing
I not why are you use Original Spacing so HOLD ALT (don't leave) look Beat Snap divisor change Distance Spacing what you original ?
1.6x? maybe? so example

00:09:584 (2,3) - Incosiente spacing and why? click at 00:09:584 (2) and look this http://puu.sh/4hwB the Next combo is 1.79x but you use 1.6x so that mean is inconsiente spacing pleasse fix 00:09:584 (2,3)
Only Easy and Normal cannot never make Random Spacing NEVER
00:11:458 (3,4) - Incosiente Spacing
too much lot inconsiente spacing
00:17:083 (2,3) - this little jump remenber only Easy never make random spacing ho also too jump and stream never
00:20:833 (4,1) - this is jump that cannot this easy pleasse fix spacing
I can't mod this because have lot inconsiente spacing

Pleasse Hold ALT choose you spacing original and check all note and slider to fix all spacing pleasse
don't ignore spacing
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Normal

00:20:833 (1,4) - Weird stack maybe stack like this http://puu.sh/4hxv this is call stack so fix this
00:25:988 (5) - Grid 1 up (fix spacing)
00:25:988 (5,1) - little jump pleasse fix
00:44:737 (1,2) - Incosiente spacing
00:52:236 (4,1,2,3) - fix inconsiente spacing

not much really problem
but i not what you use spacing original 0.8x or 0.9x? So you avoid the jump this normal
Normal cannot make jump so you so remove jump pleasse check all spacing
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
[Devil's_Cosmo's Life]

Slider Tick Rate 4 this is not fit this song so change 1 that is fit this song

00:03:959 (17,18) - http://puu.sh/4hA4 (17) i can't see arrow that mean is unrank pleasse get another place
00:06:303 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - This i can't listen drum,lyrics and beat not have all that mean is overmapped you should remove this because i can't listen drums or lyrics this just nothing that are overmapped pleasse remove you should listen music and not put note whithout drums
00:10:521 (1) - put new combo
01:10:750 this break are unrank because this is little pleasse remap

i can feel have lot overmapped you shoud listen music and listen lyrics and listen drums if you feel put note or slider and not put whithout drums
this need mooooooorrrrrrrrrrrreeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee work
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
[b]Maya's life][/b]

HP -1

00:05:834 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - again overmapped PLEASSE LISTEN MUSIC

this is fine for me because this insane i konw but need more work

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

that all i think
Any questions? call me in-game or pm
STAR ! and Good luck
ummm...
its not that I don't wanna accept suggestions ._.;;
but how?
I think the drum voice fits the maps well?
Devil Cosmo

Pereira006 wrote:

[Devil's_Cosmo's Life]

Slider Tick Rate 4 this is not fit this song so change 1 that is fit this song done

00:03:959 (17,18) - http://puu.sh/4hA4 (17) i can't see arrow that mean is unrank pleasse get another place changed into circle
00:06:303 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - This i can't listen drum,lyrics and beat not have all that mean is overmapped you should remove this because i can't listen drums or lyrics this just nothing that are overmapped pleasse remove you should listen music and not put note whithout drums done
00:10:521 (1) - put new combodone
01:10:750 this break are unrank because this is little pleasse remapremoved

i can feel have lot overmapped you shoud listen music and listen lyrics and listen drums if you feel put note or slider and not put whithout drums
this need mooooooorrrrrrrrrrrreeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee work
Download: Kuroki Meisa - Wired Life (TV Size) (Yasora-chan) [Devil_Cosmo's Life].osu
Maya-kira
quick mod for easy

osu file format v9

[General]
AudioFilename: Kuroki Meisa - Wired Life ~TV size~.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 37460
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 1

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 0.8
BeatDivisor: 1
GridSize: 8

[Metadata]
Title:Wired Life (TV Size)
Artist:Kuroki Meisa
Creator:Yasora-chan
Version:Easy
Source:Ao no Exorcist
Tags:2nd ED Devil_Cosmo Maya-kira

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:1
CircleSize:3
OverallDifficulty:2
ApproachRate:2
SliderMultiplier:0.6
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"Aonoexorcist.png"
Video,0,"Kuroki meisa - wired life (tv size).avi"
//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples
//Background Colour Transformations
3,100,163,162,255

[TimingPoints]
210,468.706058806987,4,2,0,50,1,0
37706,-100,4,2,0,50,0,1
52470,-100,4,2,0,70,0,0
83639,-100,4,2,0,22,0,0

[Colours]
Combo1 : 236,0,0
Combo2 : 0,128,255
Combo3 : 255,255,128
Combo4 : 0,140,35

[HitObjects]
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248,176,9584,2,0,B|320:176|376:96|344:32,1,180
432,56,11458,2,0,B|432:192,1,120,0|8
432,256,12865,1,4
352,256,13333,2,0,B|224:256|224:256,1,120,0|2
152,256,14739,1,0
152,168,15208,6,0,B|336:168,1,180
416,168,17083,2,0,B|416:64|288:56,1,180,0|0
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296,240,20833,2,0,B|488:240,1,180,0|2
440,144,22707,6,0,B|504:144,2,60,0|0|0
360,144,24114,2,0,B|360:224,2,60,0|0|0
272,136,25520,2,0,B|192:136,2,60,0|2|0
352,136,26926,1,8
272,104,27863,5,8
352,216,28801,1,0
200,216,29738,1,10
88,216,30675,6,0,B|88:96,1,120,0|8
168,88,32082,2,0,B|352:88,1,180,0|8
432,88,33956,1,0
384,160,34425,2,0,B|488:280,2,150
184,192,37706,6,0,B|56:200|64:72,2,180,0|8|0
264,192,40987,2,0,B|336:192|336:192,3,60,0|8|0|8
328,272,42862,2,2,B|136:272,1,180,0|0
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128,152,45674,5,0
200,112,46143,1,8
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224,304,48486,2,2,B|40:304,1,180
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328,208,52705,5,0
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192,128,55048,5,2
192,208,55517,1,2
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Maya-kira
for normal

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Artist:Kuroki Meisa
Creator:Yasora-chan
Version:Normal
Source:Ao no Exorcist
Tags:ending song

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Devil Cosmo

Maya-kira wrote:

for normal

osu file format v9

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Maya-kira wrote:

quick mod for easy

osu file format v9

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Artist:Kuroki Meisa
Creator:Yasora-chan
Version:Easy
Source:Ao no Exorcist
Tags:2nd ED Devil_Cosmo Maya-kira

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ini isi filenya ya?
sumpah gak mudheng ane x(
tutuhaha
BPM:128:00
Offset:200
hmmm.....
First I want to say, I don't know how to mod you map........
sorry about this but any problems are caused by the space :? ......
and Typesetting
new mapper please use distance snap
and slider velocity ;)

Second!
I really really like this song :) :) :) :) !!!!!!!!!!
so I don't want to see this in the Beatmap Graveyard :o :o :o :o
I finish one Insane
I think it can help you do best
and then if you like it, you can use it
....and you can change diff name
Good lucky :D
P.S change BMP and Offset, and then, Remember go to Timing-Resnap all notes ;)

Download: Kuroki Meisa - Wired Life (TV Size) (Yasora-chan) [tutuhaha‘s Insane].osu
Maya-kira
Devilcosmo : iyap www itu di copas ke notepad simpen dalam bentuk .osu x3
Topic Starter
Yasora

tutuhaha wrote:

BPM:128:00
Offset:200
hmmm.....
First I want to say, I don't know how to mod you map........
sorry about this but any problems are caused by the space :? ......
and Typesetting
new mapper please use distance snap
and slider velocity ;)

Second!
I really really like this song :) :) :) :) !!!!!!!!!!
so I don't want to see this in the Beatmap Graveyard :o :o :o :o
I finish one Insane
I think it can help you do best
and then if you like it, you can use it
....and you can change diff name
Good lucky :D
P.S change BMP and Offset, and then, Remember go to Timing-Resnap all notes ;)
thanx for your mod~ XD
btw, sorry i can't change the BPM/offset. because the last timing is more fitting ( i think ) :3~ very very sorry with that m(_ _)m
second~ Really?!! 0w0 thanks a lot >.<d
i do my best ~
and the end, sorry about your guest diff... i can't use it.. ;_; (except you use BPM/offset mine [i mean..from Nivalis hehehe] :3)
wowshakhov
Open map's folder and rename Kuroki Meisa - Wired Life %28TV Size%29 %28Yasora-chan%29 %5BDevil_Cosmo%27s Life%5D.osu to Kuroki Meisa - Wired Life (TV Size) (Yasora-chan) [Devil_Cosmo's Life].osu
Convert your bgs to .jpg for space saving's sake.
Since you'll have to make fullsubmit, delete an empty .osb file.
I doubt in usefulness of 2nd ED in tags :/
You must have hitsounds, it's obligatory ranking criteria. (speaking of guest diffs)
[Devil_Cosmo's Life] needs major work.
OzzyOzrock
[Easy]
All good, just some weird hitsounds

01:07:703 - Here you start clapping, then stop after a few notes, sounds bad, and just weird.

But it's good. Some sliders could be symmetric.
[Normal]
01:18:483 (1) - This could look better


Good diff, but some patterns look boxy and kind of boring orz
[Devil_Cosmo's Life]
Uh, no way to say it but this diff is bad...

The circle pattern at the beginning fit, but then was ruined when you used it again and it didn't fit.
Then you have unfitting rhythms and sliders like 00:10:755 (2) -
Then you even have notes under sliders, not even the good kind.
The MORE unfitting slider patterns. It's as if you randomly chose from circle or slider.

Yeah, this is very bad and will not get ranked, I highly suggest studying good maps more and re-mapping this.
[Maya's Life]
00:13:333 (4) - Very confusing, you only see half because of the last slider.

This diff looked promising, but went to bad really fast. Also has unfitting patterns, really weird speed-downs, incorrect spacing, bad boxy patterns, and simply the structure of an old map.

I don't wanna sound too mean, but this map isn't very good. But good luck!
Topic Starter
Yasora
@wowshakhov : oh, i forgot that, thanks : )
@OzzyOzrock : easy and normal is mine..of course, i will fix it : ).... and then for the guest diff, i will tell to the creator.. thanks to your mod
Mara
Sorry for delay, I had to eat and sleep and stuff. I can see your maps have already modded a little bit.

[Easy]
00:34:425 (4) - This slider sounds wrong to me. Instead of this you should put it like this.

[Normal]
00:17:552 (1) - One grid up. This makes it look "clean".
01:03:485 (4) - Hmm... I think this slider could be in better place, like under 3 or something.
01:18:483 (1) - Try to make this slider look like it's in Ozzy's screenshot. Stylepoints are always +!

[Devil_Cosmo's Life]
Alright, Devil_Cosmo - here's the thing. The map doesn't look rankable at all, but I'm trying to point few things so you can start trying to fix this mess up. You can always remap this totally, if you want.

First off, make new combos more often. You got really large combos in there, and it doesn't look good at all. You should get some new combos in your large combos. Just listen the music and you'll get it.

Second, don't use hitcircles too much like this. That is really ugly pattern, so you need to think for another way out.

00:00:210 (1-14) - This pattern isn't cool at all. I think you should remap this part.
00:03:490 (1-12) - ^
00:10:755 (2) - This slider sounds too wrong, and some notes are coming UNDER this slider. Try to make this slider go in beat.
00:14:505 (1) - Not a good place for a new combo. I'd suggest 00:15:208, if possible.
00:15:911 (3-9) - Hmm... These sounds wrong. Try to use sliders more carefully in this one.
00:20:833 (10) - Combo is getting too high in here.
00:22:473 (1) - Again, not a good place for a new combo.
00:22:942 (3-5) - Try to avoid these, alright?
00:25:754 (1-20) - You should just remap this part. Combo is too big in this pattern anyways.
00:30:441 (1) - Ends too late.
00:32:550 (1) - You may want to start this one earlier. This spinner also ends WAY too late.
00:36:066 (6-8) - Sound wrong. No comment.
00:37:706 (X) - There should be a note in here with a new combo.
00:40:050 (2) - This slider sounds too wrong due slider is one tick too long. You may have to create this slider again.
00:45:440 (1) - Spacing. Also the start of...
00:45:674 (2-14) - AAAAAAA MY PANTS ARE ON FIRE! New combo at 00:47:083?
00:48:721 (15) - This slider sounds wrong due slider is one tick too long.
00:52:705 (X) - There should be a note too... With a new combo.
00:52:939 (19-beforethedamnspinner) - Remap.
01:00:204 (X) - Missing a note. Important one.
01:02:065 (7) - New combo in here.
01:07:703 (9) - ^
01:10:281 (X) - Suddenly, a break! Map this part! No time for breaks!
01:12:390 (1) - Not a good time for a new combo. Use 01:13:328 instead.
01:14:043 (1) - Ends too late.
01:15:671 (X) - I think there's something missing in here too.
01:24:108 (1) - IMHO this one ends too EARLY. End it at 01:28:326.

You got a lot to fix, and I'm pretty sure there are more mistakes in this map. You have three harsh options in here. 1) Start fixing your map 2) Remap it 100% or 3) Forget it. Good luck to this one though.

[Maya's Life]
These patterns are advanced (different spacing and stuff) so I will leave this for more exprienced modder/mapper. Good luck with this.
01:00:195 (6) - New combo.
01:01:376 (1) - Get rid of this new combo. Instead, put it in 01:02:079.

My job is done in here. If it's possible, please reward me with some nice sexy kudosu thingy. LunaticMara is out.
Megurine Luka
Hi. Mod as requested.
It is the third map of this song I moded. 8-)

[General]
AudioLeadIn: 2000 (for all difficulty)
Preview time of each diff is different. Make it the same.
Use all blue combo color
Suggested:
Combo1 : 0,255,255
Combo2 : 0,128,255
Combo3 : 0,0,128

[Easy]

00:09:584 (2) - add clap (at the slider end. applies the same with below if I did not indicate specially)
00:11:458 (3) - del clap
00:12:865 (4) - del fin. add clap
00:14:739 (6) - ^
00:15:208 (1) - add clap
00:20:833 (4) - end at 00:21:770
00:22:707 (1,2,3,4) - change into http://puu.sh/4Iys
00:34:425 (4) - change into http://puu.sh/4IyF
01:08:641 (3) - del clap
01:09:578 (5) - add clap
01:10:515 (1) - del clap
01:10:984 (2) - add clap at slider beginning
01:12:859 (3) - add clap
01:13:796 (5) - add clap at slider beginning & end
01:15:202 (1) - add clap at 01:15:671
01:16:609 (2) - add clap at slider beginning
01:18:483 (4) - ^ & end
01:23:170 (2) - end at 01:24:577

[Normal]
Too easy for a normal, make it more difficult
The gap between this diff and the next one is too big
Also you need to fix the sound effect. Clap is usually used in the second and fourth white line.
00:31:613 (2) - make it into a curved slider?

[Devil_cosmo's life]
I suggest you to remap this.
The timing and offset change seems affect the map. So I can not understand why the mapper put it like this.
I hope the sliders in kiai time present like this is because of offset change. otherwise it is really a bad map.
Also. I do not recommend just put circles just in lines and they are too careful and neet now. Make some changes
00:01:147 (5) - NC
00:02:787 (12) - ^
00:03:490 (1) - del NC
00:04:662 (6) - ^
00:10:755 (2) - 1 grid up, begin at 00:10:990 and del one turn
00:14:271 (7,1,2) - del 7,1, and put 2 at this point. del 2 turns, remap following
00:18:723 (12) - del & remap
00:30:441 (1) - end at 00:32:082
00:40:050 (2) - this slider is affected by offset change

Maya's life
AR+1
OD+2
00:13:333 (4) - overlap sliders is unrankable
00:25:285 (4,5,6) - too far away. this jump is not appropriate
00:26:691 (1) - ^
00:30:207 (1,2,3) - slider is not clear enough
00:36:769 (3) - move further
00:58:563 (1) - ^
01:14:031 (11) - this jump is too sudden

Hope these will help
Good Luck :)
Topic Starter
Yasora
@LunaticMara : thanks for your mod : D sorry if I troublesome you~ here, your sexy kudosu mahahaha XD
@Megurine Luka : thanks for accepted >.<~ use all blue combo colour? wow~ is very match with the song~
but... with forced, I re-map the guest diff from @Devil_Cosmo TAT very very sorry with that m(_ _)m but, if you totally fix that, sure, I can accept that always :')
Rei Hakurei
ngefeel beat sambil nahan kebelet
Easy -->
inget2 omongan Nivalis, hindarin stack
Y U NO spinner?

Normal -->
:)

Maya-kira -->
00:20:012 (3) - majuin 1/4
00:20:247 (1,2,3) - gw ga ngefeel apa2 disini...
00:33:722 (5) - 1 slider --> 1 circle
00:37:589 (1,2,3) - offbeat
00:43:682 (5) - pindahin terserah +/- 1/4
00:52:119 (3) - ^
00:54:931 (2) - ^ (mending 1/8in aja kalo pengen tengah2)
00:57:743 (1) - ^
01:02:899 (2) - ^
01:13:210 (4) - ^
kayanya beberapa beatnya berantakan ya ? hmmm...
Topic Starter
Yasora

Rei_Fan49 wrote:

ngefeel beat sambil nahan kebelet
Easy -->
inget2 omongan Nivalis, hindarin stack
Y U NO spinner?

Normal -->
:)

Maya-kira -->
00:20:012 (3) - majuin 1/4
00:20:247 (1,2,3) - gw ga ngefeel apa2 disini...
00:33:722 (5) - 1 slider --> 1 circle
00:37:589 (1,2,3) - offbeat
00:43:682 (5) - pindahin terserah +/- 1/4
00:52:119 (3) - ^
00:54:931 (2) - ^ (mending 1/8in aja kalo pengen tengah2)
00:57:743 (1) - ^
01:02:899 (2) - ^
01:13:210 (4) - ^\
kayanya beberapa beatnya berantakan ya ? hmmm...
easy -> no spinner because in normal is avaible *inggris lagi* s---ettacckk?? 0A0
Maya-kira ->ma...masaaa ?? 0A0 itu wa yang edit loh <---baka iya deh ntar ta' edit lagi ;A; abis orangnya kaga bisa ol
sankyu untuk mod nyaa :D
btw, katanya mau bikin guest diff? selalu terbuka kok : D (khususnya diff hard) mahahaha
Rei Hakurei

Yasora-chan wrote:

easy -> no spinner because in normal is avaible *inggris lagi* s---ettacckk?? 0A0
Maya-kira ->ma...masaaa ?? 0A0 itu wa yang edit loh <---baka iya deh ntar ta' edit lagi ;A; abis orangnya kaga bisa ol
sankyu untuk mod nyaa :D
btw, katanya mau bikin guest diff? selalu terbuka kok : D (khususnya diff hard) mahahaha
lol, gw lupa dan diffnya dah kehapus lagi itu... gw mau remake tapi ga sekarang..

EDIT : di post lain.
Maya-kira
[Maya's Life]
00:13:333 (4) - Very confusing, you only see half because of the last slider.

This diff looked promising, but went to bad really fast. Also has unfitting patterns, really weird speed-downs, incorrect spacing, bad boxy patterns, and simply the structure of an old map.

I don't wanna sound too mean, but this map isn't very good. But good luck!
ano... I don't wanna sounds like someone ignorant or something like that, but please do point out where to really fix ? Because when you say this, all I have in my head is like "go remake your map" and I was like "wth?!!"
oAo
I'm not an experienced mapper tho >,< that's why I need help ._.
winber1
General

--I don't think the .012 of the bpm is needed..

Maya's Life

--Try to keep spacing more consistent, and i would also refrain from using the SV changes you used.. they are kinda weird imo.

00:06:771 (5,1,2) - i would space this out equally
00:17:552 (3) - this sounds weird, and the SV change does not make sense imo
00:22:473 (x) - add note
00:28:098 (4) - i would move this on the other side of combo 3
00:37:706 (1,2,3) - move 1/4 tick forward..
00:43:330 (4,5,6) - space equally please
00:45:440 (1,2,3,4) - this square shape is weird
00:51:298 (2,3,4,5) - spacing
00:52:587 - snap this kiai time
00:58:681 (1,2,3,4,5) - this is snapped very weirdly
01:03:368 (3) - ^
01:09:109 (5) - new combo
01:13:093 (x) - add note

Normal

00:10:990 (1,2,3,4,5) - use the same spacing as before.. yea, it's readable, but it looks a little weird to me
00:22:707 (4) - new combo with finish and remove clap
00:23:176 (1) - remove combo
00:25:988 (5,1,2) - spacing
00:45:674 (2) - spacing
01:12:859 (1,2,3,4) - add some hitsounds. it's alittle empty right there

Easy


00:22:707 (1) - add finish
00:34:425 (4) - this slider doesn't follow the music very well
00:37:706 (1) - add finish
01:23:170 (2) - change into a spinner?

Good luck with the mapset :3
Rei Hakurei
Taiko diffnya nih...
BGnya ntar aku buat..
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