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zsr123
啊 很喜欢这歌啊 :)

介意加我一个taiko diff吗?
Topic Starter
JoJo
@Rorry
Double Star Thanks ! >o<//

@犀利
谢谢~ 神Timing~ 8-)

@zsr123
:| 抱歉~不喜欢taiko.. 但是谢谢><
Topic Starter
JoJo
@wcx
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wcx19911123 wrote:

哈哈哈
之前的占位就是为了现在啊

[General]
mp3 is 124 kbps , make it 128-192 plz , pay attention to timing when done this OK~I will fix the timing after all diff updated.

[Jojo]
00:51:223 (4) - http://puu.sh/43Hw OK~
00:52:724 (5,6,7,8,9) - to pentagon OK~
02:01:751 (2,4) - stack better Fixed~
02:34:164 (11) - ctrl+r OK~
02:36:865 (5,6) - http://puu.sh/43I2 Nice idea~
02:39:586 - break start here
02:59:994 (5,6) - http://puu.sh/43Ib OK~
03:18:215 - clap is mess from now on , look how claps working in Easy 0.0
03:57:231 - remove finish Removed finish of the end of the slider...This is my fault @_@
I suggest to remap the claps in the ending , then it will be a nice diff

edit : 顺带说下,staff写进creator's words里这个最后放上去~不然每次upload代码都会出错~
感谢神mod~~~(还有星星海~液~
Nymph

wcx19911123 wrote:

哈哈哈
之前的占位就是为了现在啊

[新人尼姆芙]
00:55:125 - whistle forgot...
01:12:532 (2) - far to next spinner don't bother me that much cause the spinner is long enough, but still fixed.
01:13:132 (1) - not to voice down but use a silenced spinner hitsound , will be better when playing what if other diffs want
their diffs with no silienced spinner.

01:37:142 (1) - ^
01:37:142 (1) - whistle this silence is on purpose
02:00:985 - delete this useless green line
02:17:358 (2) - repeat 1 time less , pay attention to next spacing good idea
02:47:794 - delete this useless green line K
02:49:189 (1,2) - vol=15% 15? 20 here
02:57:396 - delete this useless green line K
03:12:599 (1) - 236,136,192599,6,0,B|196:92|120:168|176:228|228:264|256:280|256:280|284:264|336:228|392:168|316:92| I like
mine pretty much..

03:18:076 - delete this useless green line
03:19:415 - vol=35
03:20:616 - ^
03:23:017 - ^ 30 seems good for me. 其实耳机有很大区别的..
03:27:819 - vol=40 , add finish , remove clap Actually clap is on purpose, but..whatever, finish seems good for me now. K


03:30:220 - vol=35 40 is better.
03:32:621 - ^ , ok I ignore this kind of suggestion from now on , I think 40% clap is too noisy
03:34:880 - delete this useless green line
03:37:423 - vol=40 40 is too low.
03:47:027 - remove clap , add finish K
03:56:484 - kaki end at 03:56:630 and delete this line Actually Kiai seems too bad for my eyes..I decided to deleted the Kiais.
03:56:630 (1,2) - vol=25 , and add finish at 03:56:630 15 too low? then 20. Finish is not necessary.
04:12:452 (1) - not to voice down but use a silenced spinner hitsound , and slience end
this is the most awesome Easy I had even seen 0.0
完毕

Download: riya - Chiisana Tenohira (Joshua Lost) [Nymph no Yume].osu
Topic Starter
JoJo
MP3 file exchanged. Redownload plz ~
Sorry for inconvenience ~ >A<

All diff Timing fixed.
Shiro
Shouldn't the title be "Chiisana Te no Hira" ?...

viewtopic.php?f=56&t=24443 this is how to change the title without duplicating the map.
Topic Starter
JoJo

Odaril wrote:

Shouldn't the title be "Chiisana Te no Hira" ?...
Hmm.. I try to search online and finally consider that both title are okay so...
Anyway , Title is changed to 'Chiisana Te no Hira'.
And thank you ~

Sorry , trouble everyone to redownload again . >_<
kanpakyin

wcx19911123 wrote:

[KPY]
00:58:726 (1) - move third square to x:296 y:320 X
01:12:232 (4,5,6) - to slider What do you mean?
01:16:883 (1) - too short X,that's ok for a Hard.
01:35:941 (1,2,3,4,5) -make spacing smaller plz It is too hard to do that.
01:55:149 (1) - this really ugly >_> make it fatter plz Fixed something
02:02:052 (2,3) - http://puu.sh/43Gv , not to follow vocal just for adding clap at 02:02:352 is very odd imo X,not now.
02:13:756 (5,1) - 5.9x jump is too huge to be in this diff It's a Hard
02:21:859 (1,2) - ._. ^
03:17:015 (1,2) - ._. ^
03:39:824 (5) - http://puu.sh/43Hb Change a bit!
04:12:452 (1) - end at 04:17:291 Fixed due to new MP3 and New timing.
some anti-jump is too huge , fix this it will be a awesome Normal I would like to say this is a Hard diff D:
Thanks but just change a little bit.

Download: riya - Chiisana Te no Hira (Joshua Lost) [KPY no Kibou].osu
Nymph
Fix the heart shape slider for a little bit :P

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Download: riya - Chiisana Te no Hira (Joshua Lost) [Nymph no Yume].osu
Kiddo-Kun
[General]
There are two .osb files. Delete one.
Tags aren't the same for all diffs. Please fix that.

[Nymph no Yume]
02:16:807 (1) - Remove new combo to match the vocals a little better.
02:19:208 (3) - Add new combo to match previous parts.
02:38:416 (3) - Add a whistle or a finish to this note.
02:39:636 - Remove this inheriting section. What ever you changed the timing point can be used.
02:44:437 (5) - Make this slider more symmetrical.
03:55:480 (5) - New combo.
03:56:680 (1) - Add a finish to the start of the slider.

[KPY no Kibou]
02:20:409 (5) - Add a finish to this note.
00:56:675 (1) - Remove new combo.
01:55:199 (1) - Move the tail of this slider up one tick (Grid Lvl 3)
03:18:265 (1) - Add a finish to the start of this slider like you did with 02:01:201 (1)
03:35:522 (1) - Add a finish to this spinner.
03:50:978 (5) - Add new combo.
03:53:079 (1) - Remove new combo.

[Koubou]
02:01:201 (1) - Add a finish to the start
02:19:208 (10) - Eh, I'm not sure about this slow down...But whatever.
02:33:614 (10) - New combo.
02:34:815 (1) - Remove new combo.
03:15:350 - Why not do something like this for the break?

03:31:470 (10) - New combo.
03:32:671 (1) - Remove new combo.

Everything else is fine. Sexy looking map. Plays fine.

STARED~
Topic Starter
JoJo
@Kiddo-Kun
SPOILER

Kiddo-Kun wrote:

[General]
There are two .osb files. Delete one. Fixed
Tags aren't the same for all diffs. Please fix that. Fixed @kanpakyin Update before fix plz ~

[Koubou]
02:01:201 (1) - Add a finish to the start Fixed
02:19:208 (10) - Eh, I'm not sure about this slow down...But whatever. Err.
02:33:614 (10) - New combo. OK
02:34:815 (1) - Remove new combo. OK
03:15:350 - Why not do something like this for the break? Fixed

03:31:470 (10) - New combo. OK
03:32:671 (1) - Remove new combo. OK

Thank you for modding ^^
kanpakyin
>Kiddo-Kun
All reject sorry :<

.........................................................
Nymph

Kiddo-Kun wrote:

[Nymph no Yume]
02:16:807 (1) - Remove new combo to match the vocals a little better. ya..I don't think so
02:19:208 (3) - Add new combo to match previous parts. Don't think so either.
02:38:416 (3) - Add a whistle or a finish to this note.I think it don't need hitsound here.
02:39:636 - Remove this inheriting section. What ever you changed the timing point can be used. K
02:44:437 (5) - Make this slider more symmetrical. I didn't meant to make this a symmetrical slider..
03:55:480 (5) - New combo. No I don't think so.
03:56:680 (1) - Add a finish to the start of the slider. with this volumn, finish really meant nothing.
thanks~

Download: riya - Chiisana Te no Hira (Joshua Lost) [Nymph no Yume].osu
Leorda
Leorda : JOJO-SENPAIIIII!!!!!!
Kanpakyin : Hoi Hora!

Nymph no Yume
* Don't use the kickslider (having more than one repeating slider), beginner player will confusing of this stuff. Example : 01:35:991 (1). Other than that is fine for me...

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KPY no Kibou
* Change the PreviewTime to 86928. Fix this using a notepad/wordpad, to make the Preview Time is same on each diff

01:10:781 (2,3) - I don't think this jump is fit to the song
01:44:695 (4) - New combo?
02:30:313 (4) - The head slider isn't following the song, move it to 02:30:613?
03:42:725 (3,4) - I think these doublets are confusing for some players. Try add note at 03:42:575 or change something

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Koubou
* Some this diff are including the burai slider that the slider is unreadable. So, make sure some slider are a clear path (e.g. 02:08:404 (7)). Also, it's included in new rules~

00:52:774 (5) - New combo for new pattern
02:19:208 (10) - New combo for slowdowns slider
03:12:649 (4) - ^ (?)

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I cannot find something wrong :cry:
Topic Starter
JoJo
@Leorda
SPOILER

Leorda wrote:

Leorda : JOJO-SENPAIIIII!!!!!! Hazukashi >//< You're much better than me yeah ~
Kanpakyin : Hoi Hora! Errrr... What's that ...0.0 (Asked by bakaKPY =w=)

Koubou
* Some this diff are including the burai slider that the slider is unreadable. So, make sure some slider are a clear path (e.g. 02:08:404 (7)). Also, it's included in new rules~ Yeah..I will try~

00:52:774 (5) - New combo for new pattern OK~
02:19:208 (10) - New combo for slowdowns slider OK~
03:12:649 (4) - ^ (?) Uh..I'm not sure for this one~

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I cannot find something wrong :cry:

Thank you ! And sorry for checking it late because I have not received any E-mail this time..I don't know why.. TwT
Nymph

Leorda wrote:

Nymph no Yume
* Don't use the kickslider (having more than one repeating slider), beginner player will confusing of this stuff. Example : 01:35:991 (1). Other than that is fine for me... :P ehhh....I think it is fine...cause this diff is more like a normal =v=.. So I think I can keep it, thanks!
EnakoRin
General
  • try offset = 197037
    个人认为这种透明的spinner圈转起来很痛苦LOL
    SB\bubble可以转得再慢一点
    加个slider的球的皮肤的话更好看
Nymph no Yume
  • 01:37:192 (1) - 声音加大点,然后加个whistle?
    02:19:208 (3) - new combo?
    02:48:039 (6) - new combo?
    02:57:643 (7) - new combo?
    03:50:678 (3) - 最后一个圈加normal-finish会比较有感觉
KPY no Kibou
  • 你到底用了几种DS orz
    00:43:770 (6) - 仔细看这个slider是歪的- -
    00:50:373 (1,2) - 不知道normal玩家能不能适应这种jump
    01:04:779 (3) - 可以让这个最后一个圆圈刚好盖住后面的4
    01:11:381 (3,4) - 因为前面用了JUMP,所以我建议这两个之间的距离弄成和01:10:781 (2,3)一样
    03:42:725 (3,4) - 不好看,重叠在一起吧
    03:58:181 (1,2) - 喂喂这是什么情况
    我觉得完全可以加大AR(比如AR7)做成HARD。这个难度从排列上讲比NOMAL难,但是做HARD就合适
Koubou
  • 03:12:649 (4) - 这个真心不好看- -
nice map,STAR AND KDS STAR(KDS暂时不够,有了再来补上 :x )
速速RANK,我去肛#1
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EasyModder 1.3
Program By Weiren
Topic Starter
JoJo
@Weiren
SPOILER

Weiren wrote:

General
  • try offset = 197037 这个好像off了= =?
    个人认为这种透明的spinner圈转起来很痛苦LOL那就继续痛苦下去吧~(咳。。咳。。。
    SB\bubble可以转得再慢一点 嗯~减慢了点
    加个slider的球的皮肤的话更好看 OK~立刻让KayeSara帮我做一个!
KPY no Kibou
  • 我觉得完全可以加大AR(比如AR7)做成HARD。这个难度从排列上讲比NOMAL难,但是做HARD就合适
其实我就是让他做hard的。。(捂脸

Koubou
  • 03:12:649 (4) - 这个真心不好看- - 嗯。。。改了。。。@_@
nice map,STAR AND KDS STAR(KDS暂时不够,有了再来补上 :x ) XD
速速RANK,我去肛#1 好的好的=w=
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EasyModder 1.3
Program By Weiren
Nice Program ! =w= 谢谢猥人~
Nymph

Weiren wrote:

Nymph no Yume
  • 01:37:192 (1) - 声音加大点,然后加个whistle? 这里想故意静音
    02:19:208 (3) - new combo?
    02:48:039 (6) - new combo?
    02:57:643 (7) - new combo?我觉得其实加不加NC区别都不大..
    03:50:678 (3) - 最后一个圈加normal-finish会比较有感觉 不太觉得..一瞬间觉得Soft finish不错 不过为了统一 还是算啦..
谢了 :P
kanpakyin

Weiren wrote:

KPY no Kibou
  • 你到底用了几种DS orz 2種 .__.
    00:43:770 (6) - 仔细看这个slider是歪的- - = =好把.
    00:50:373 (1,2) - 不知道normal玩家能不能适应这种jump 這是H
    01:04:779 (3) - 可以让这个最后一个圆圈刚好盖住后面的4 不要..
    01:11:381 (3,4) - 因为前面用了JUMP,所以我建议这两个之间的距离弄成和01:10:781 (2,3)一样 暫時還是保持現狀把orz..
    03:42:725 (3,4) - 不好看,重叠在一起吧 我覺得很不錯啊 D:
    03:58:181 (1,2) - 喂喂这是什么情况 .__.後面jump,這裏new combo適合
    我觉得完全可以加大AR(比如AR7)做成HARD。这个难度从排列上讲比NOMAL难,但是做HARD就合适 icon什麼得不可信阿 D:
Thanks.
KayeSara
ignore

Joshua Lost wrote:

加个slider的球的皮肤的话更好看 OK~立刻让KayeSara帮我做一个!乃。。。。。
:? 好吧。。。这样也中
Breeze
[General]
  1. koubou的StackLeniency是0.3而其他2个难度是0.5,这是不允许的,请保持一致
[Skin]
  1. 既然都做了那么多skin的为什么不把sliderball的也做了呢,就这一个custom的感觉跟其他skin并不合
[Nymph no Yume]
  1. 02:38:416 (3) - 加个finish或者whistle的音效感觉会更好
  2. 03:56:680 (1) - 建议加个finish音
[KPY no Kibou]
  1. 02:20:109 (4) - 这种spacing变化太大的最好还是new combo吧
  2. 03:58:481 (2) - 这个jump跳得毫无道理啊,又没有变奏加速或者什么的
[Joshua Lost]
  1. 01:49:196 (7) - 前后连接较紧密的变速建议new combo
  2. 02:08:404 (7) - 说实话并不是太好认
  3. 02:19:208 (1) - 1/2BPM用这里感觉很突然
  4. 02:27:612 (6) - 不好认
  5. 02:34:815 (3) - New combo以便确认变速
  6. 03:25:468 (6) - 不好认
  7. 03:32:671 (3) - New combo
  8. 03:35:672 (10) - 其实就算要1/2BPM也应该是03:35:372 开始的才对,这部分变速太大,无形中增大了很多难度,让人捉摸不透
    玩的时候随时都提心吊胆的谁知道什么时候来个1/2BPM,后面接着有马上是正常BPM,完全无法适应
  9. 03:44:676 (7) - 同样的,不易于辨认
  10. 03:56:534 Timing Section - 这里的TS改回1.0xBPM, 1/2是03:56:680开始无误
nice map in all
star
Topic Starter
JoJo
@Breeze
SPOILER

Breeze wrote:

[General]
  1. koubou的StackLeniency是0.3而其他2个难度是0.5,这是不允许的,请保持一致OK~
[Skin]
  1. 既然都做了那么多skin的为什么不把sliderball的也做了呢,就这一个custom的感觉跟其他skin并不合嗯马上就开工~
[Joshua Lost]
  1. 01:49:196 (7) - 前后连接较紧密的变速建议new combo Sorry X.X
  2. 02:08:404 (7) - 说实话并不是太好认 不改..
  3. 02:19:208 (1) - 1/2BPM用这里感觉很突然 =。=我觉得还好。。
  4. 02:27:612 (6) - 不好认 不改..
  5. 02:34:815 (3) - New combo以便确认变速 OK~
  6. 03:25:468 (6) - 不好认 不改..
  7. 03:32:671 (3) - New combo OK~
  8. 03:35:672 (10) - 其实就算要1/2BPM也应该是03:35:372 开始的才对,这部分变速太大,无形中增大了很多难度,让人捉摸不透
    玩的时候随时都提心吊胆的谁知道什么时候来个1/2BPM,后面接着有马上是正常BPM,完全无法适应 提心吊胆才有乐趣嘛~(被狂揍..?
  9. 03:44:676 (7) - 同样的,不易于辨认 同样的,不改..
  10. 03:56:534 Timing Section - 这里的TS改回1.0xBPM, 1/2是03:56:680开始无误Fixed~
nice map in all
star
谢谢~ >w<//
Nymph

Breeze wrote:

[Nymph no Yume]
  1. 02:38:416 (3) - 加个finish或者whistle的音效感觉会更好 恩 FINISH added
  2. 03:56:680 (1) - 建议加个finish音 ..好吧 这么多人都吐槽这个地方..可是我真心觉得这里加了也听不到..
:P thanks

Download: riya - Chiisana Te no Hira (Joshua Lost) [Nymph no Yume].osu
kanpakyin

Breeze wrote:

[KPY no Kibou]
  1. 02:20:109 (4) - 这种spacing变化太大的最好还是new combo吧 k
  2. 03:58:481 (2) - 这个jump跳得毫无道理啊,又没有变奏加速或者什么的 突出"tsu"音
~Thanks
Tenshi-nyan
Finally getting to mod this.

Koubou
HP -2
OD -1

Current settings feel a bit too high IMO.
Too many whistles. Sounds better if you follow this mod, at least to me.

00:41:369 (4) - remove whistle
00:44:220 (10) - delete this note. Overmap.
00:45:271 (4) - remove whistle.
00:46:171 (6) - ^
00:51:273 (4) - remove whistle from end
00:53:674 (4) - remove whistle.
00:59:827 (2) - remove this note.
01:00:577 (4) - remove whistle from end
01:03:428 (10) - remove this note
01:04:478 (3) - remove whistle
01:07:780 (10) - remove whistle from end
01:11:681 (6) - remove whistle.
01:12:882 (1) - remove whistle from end
01:14:382 (2) - add whistle
01:14:983 (4) - remove whistle
01:18:884 (2) - ^
01:19:785 (4) - ^
01:22:486 (8) - ^
01:22:636 (9) - remove this note
01:23:686 (2) - remove whistle
01:24:587 (4) - ^
01:26:987 (7,8) - ^
01:28:188 (2) - ^
01:29:388 (4) - ^
01:31:789 (7,8) - ^
01:32:990 (2) - ^
01:33:590 (3) - add whistle to start, remove from end
01:40:793 - hitsounds in this part are a bit too loud, decrease volume by 10% please. from 40 to 30.
02:01:201 - volume starting here is ok again.
02:17:858 (6) - remove this note
02:18:308 (7,8) - remove 8 and turn 7 to a 1/1 slider
02:20:409 - resnap kiai time
02:21:309 (3) - remove whistle
02:23:860 (8) - remove note
03:12:649 (1) - flip horizontally
03:20:366 - UHHHH why did you mix up the hitsounds up? this sounds just plain bad, the normal hitsound doesn't fit at all.
PLEASE redo the hitsounds in a simpler way, just like you did in the 1st kiai time.

Kanpakyin
OD -1
HP -1

01:42:894 (5,3) - this kind of overlap is hard to read and looks stupid, too.
01:45:595 (1,2) - remove the custom whistles.
01:50:697 (2,4) - remove whistles
01:51:297 (4,1,2,4,6) - remove ALL of those notes, it's just plain overmap.
03:35:522 (1) - this spinner doesn't fit, because the vocals start again at 03:36:272, so just remove it and map starting at 03:36:272 - again.
03:37:923 (1) - remove this note.
03:42:725 (3) - ^
03:50:978 (5) - remove this slider. at a note at 03:51:278 -
04:09:922 - impossible to hear the hitsounds here, increase by 5%


Care to check ALL hitsounds in the Kiai times? There are sometimes too many whistles... sometimes not enough... and so on... Don't wanna do that huge mod from above again ;_; Best thing to do: Synchronize it with the music. Don't add any unnecessary hitsounds. That's my mapping philosophy.

Nymph
Use some of the custom hitsounds. Don't use the soft-hitclap.wav though. That doesn't fit. Best to use soft-hitclap2.wav and soft-hitwhistle2.wav in exchange. Don't overdo it though, like in the higher diffs.

00:57:576 - add a note here?


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Don't just say no to my hitsound suggestions. I am on fire right now, kinda wanna redo the hitsounds on all diffs.
Besides the hitsounds, I gotta say great maps with only a couple small flaws, I couldn't have done it better.
Topic Starter
JoJo
@Tenshi-nyan
SPOILER

Tenshi-nyan wrote:

Finally getting to mod this.

Koubou
HP -2
OD -1 OK

Current settings feel a bit too high IMO.
Too many whistles. Sounds better if you follow this mod, at least to me.

00:41:369 (4) - remove whistleOK
00:44:220 (10) - delete this note. Overmap. No..Sorry
00:45:271 (4) - remove whistle.OK
00:46:171 (6) - ^OK
00:51:273 (4) - remove whistle from end X
00:53:674 (4) - remove whistle.OK
00:59:827 (2) - remove this note.OK
01:00:577 (4) - remove whistle from endOK
01:03:428 (10) - remove this note X
01:04:478 (3) - remove whistleOK
01:07:780 (10) - remove whistle from end OK
01:11:681 (6) - remove whistle.OK
01:12:882 (1) - remove whistle from endOK
01:14:382 (2) - add whistleOK
01:14:983 (4) - remove whistleOK
01:18:884 (2) - ^OK
01:19:785 (4) - ^OK
01:22:486 (8) - ^OK
01:22:636 (9) - remove this note X
01:23:686 (2) - remove whistleOK
01:24:587 (4) - ^OK
01:26:987 (7,8) - ^8 removed.
01:28:188 (2) - ^OK
01:29:388 (4) - ^OK
01:31:789 (7,8) - ^8 removed
01:32:990 (2) - ^OK
01:33:590 (3) - add whistle to start, remove from end OK
01:40:793 - hitsounds in this part are a bit too loud, decrease volume by 10% please. from 40 to 30.OK
02:01:201 - volume starting here is ok again.
02:17:858 (6) - remove this note X
02:18:308 (7,8) - remove 8 and turn 7 to a 1/1 slider X
02:20:409 - resnap kiai timeFixed~
02:21:309 (3) - remove whistle Fixed~
02:23:860 (8) - remove note X
03:12:649 (1) - flip horizontally OK
03:20:366 - UHHHH why did you mix up the hitsounds up? this sounds just plain bad, the normal hitsound doesn't fit at all.
PLEASE redo the hitsounds in a simpler way, just like you did in the 1st kiai time.

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Don't just say no to my hitsound suggestions. I am on fire right now, kinda wanna redo the hitsounds on all diffs.
Besides the hitsounds, I gotta say great maps with only a couple small flaws, I couldn't have done it better.
Thank you for mod and star ! Most of them fixed ~! >//<
Nymph

Tenshi-nyan wrote:

Nymph
Use some of the custom hitsounds. Don't use the soft-hitclap.wav though. That doesn't fit. Best to use soft-hitclap2.wav and soft-hitwhistle2.wav in exchange. Don't overdo it though, like in the higher diffs. I'd have to say that I finished my diff first and at that time, I don't have those custom hitsounds that we have now. Although, Jojo asked me that Kpy got some new custom hitsounds and asked me if I want to have a try, but after I mapped a little I don't really feel like them, so I just keep mine hitsounds. Actually I don't think my hitsounds is good, But I don't think the soft-hitclap will ruin this music, So I rather like to keep this.

00:57:576 - add a note here? I don't think so, no note here is on purpose.
kanpakyin

Tenshi-nyan wrote:

Kanpakyin
OD -1
HP -1 Hum,ok!

01:42:894 (5,3) - this kind of overlap is hard to read and looks stupid, too. No going to change this because the triangle pattern.
01:45:595 (1,2) - remove the custom whistles. k
01:50:697 (2,4) - remove whistles Fixed (2)-
01:51:297 (4,1,2,4,6) - remove ALL of those notes, it's just plain overmap. Why you would said this was overmap?I just follow the music D:
03:35:522 (1) - this spinner doesn't fit, because the vocals start again at 03:36:272, so just remove it and map starting at 03:36:272 - again. X
03:37:923 (1) - remove this note. X
03:42:725 (3) - ^ Why you're against the rhythm like this? D: I really love this rhythm
03:50:978 (5) - remove this slider. at a note at 03:51:278 - X
04:09:922 - impossible to hear the hitsounds here, increase by 5% X,I can heard it with headset,also I did this on purpose.

Care to check ALL hitsounds in the Kiai times? There are sometimes too many whistles... sometimes not enough... and so on... Don't wanna do that huge mod from above again ;_; Best thing to do: Synchronize it with the music. Don't add any unnecessary hitsounds. That's my mapping philosophy. Whistle because costum hitsound.Don't hate it.
No much change but thanks!

Download: riya - Chiisana Te no Hira (JoJo) [KPY no Kibou].osu
Suzully
CLANNAD~<3
SPOILER
○●○AFTER STORY○●○
Kawayi Rika
JOJO大爱        

CL 大爱 :)       

>///<          
KanaRin
我在膜拜樓上的中文...
怎麼能這麼利害。。。。

總之....給星的...

現在要用KDS給星真的很慘
Topic Starter
JoJo
@Suzully
@Kawayi Rika

Star Thanks ~ ^^

@KanaRin

KanaRin wrote:

我在膜拜樓上的中文... 在下已经膜拜了无数次了~
怎麼能這麼利害。。。。

總之....給星的...

現在要用KDS給星真的很慘可以随便来NAZI下啊~ ww 我给KD很随意啊哈哈 谢谢Kana酱~
Breeze
[General]
  1. Add a code SliderBorder: 255,255,255 or other colour code you like under the [Colours] section of each .osu file, in case of custom skin user looked your skin werid
[SB]
  1. I'm afraid about these parts



    Consider useing less elements or effect at these time so that it's not too hard to load at old machines
    Depends on you, it's just a suggestion
[Koubou]
  1. 00:56:675 - Is this break really needed?
Rest are fine
no kds since I've already got 1


Topic Starter
JoJo
@Breeze
SPOILER

Breeze wrote:

[General]
  1. Add a code SliderBorder: 255,255,255 or other colour code you like under the [Colours] section of each .osu file, in case of custom skin user looked your skin werid
Fixed~

[SB]
  1. I'm afraid about these parts
    [attachment=1:58067]0.JPG[/attachment:58067]
    [attachment=2:58067]2.jpg[/attachment:58067]
    [attachment=0:58067]3.jpg[/attachment:58067]
    Consider useing less elements or effect at these time so that it's not too hard to load at old machines
    Depends on you, it's just a suggestion
Thank you for pointing this out but I think they are not too high and often , in addition for myself I don't want to delete anything (Even I want to add something.. @_@) And many ranked map have more than 7x SB load , So I don't wanna to change anyting at the moment Sorry TwT

[Koubou]
  1. 00:56:675 - Is this break really needed?
OK removed~

Rest are fine
no kds since I've already got 1
Thanks for checking ~ >w<
Breeze
k, as you said, I guess the SB is fine enough for a bubble
To next BAT : Please double check the over 5x load part in SB whether it's fine or not
Topic Starter
JoJo
@Breeze
Yeah ~ Thank you for Bubble !! ^o^/
SPOILER
And my message is too short =_=
Sun Rainbow
好唯美的一首歌~
高潮部分+唯美的图=超级无敌!
呵呵。不过为什么我不能投KD呢?
Raging Bull
Dango Dango Dango Dango Dango Dango Daikazoku.Instant star! (ノ^_^)ノ 彡☆

All are suggestions.
Really hope you fix it
Fix it
General:
I suppose tick rate 2 would fit really well here. Change tick rate to 2?
Maybe start inherited section at 00:29:964?
Put the preview point at 03:17:065 instead. I think it's so much better as it's the start of the chorus instead of your current preview point, which is in the middle of the verse.
I think it's good to combine your second post with your first. So it makes stuff easier to understand (like difficulties). The

JoJo wrote:

Nymph no Yume (Normal) by Nymph_ Finished
KPY no Kibou (Hard) by kanpakyin Finished
Special thanks ~ >w<//

Koubou (Hard) by me Finished
Storyboard by me Finished
Skin by me Finished
Nymph:
00:50:973 (2,3) - Perhaps making it like the timeline? Plays kinda weird to me. (Ignore slider, just look at timeline) http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/151175
01:10:181 (2,3) - ^?
Perhaps map the break like other diff? Seems weird how this diff is the only one with a long break. Up to you since it's guest map.
02:17:408 (2) - It seems kinda weird since it doesn't follow vocals well. Maybe try something like this in your timeline? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/151178
02:36:615 (2) - ^? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/151181
02:44:437 (5) - I could make it more symmetrical if you want? \o/ It will look like this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/151183
224,340,164437,6,0,B|160:324|128:252|160:180|224:164,2,240,2|2|0
03:18:265 - Perhaps add kiai here and end it at 03:56:680? It really does sound like the epic part of the song.

KPY:
Seems weird to see the SV lower than Normal, but I suppose it would break your sliders if you make it higher anymore :v
01:16:933 (1) - Remove spinner? It seems rather short. Adding a note at 01:17:984 (x) could be better.
01:55:199 (1) - I don't really advise this kind of slider. You need a higher SV or it needs to be longer on the timeline to make it look really good. Perhaps use an arc or wave? I made one for you
192,136,115199,6,0,B|272:80|320:136|368:192|448:136,1,270.000001788139,2|2
02:21:909 (1,2) - I don't really see a reason why is there a jump here. Can you explain? In the vocals, I believe both of these are in the same verse. Your other jumps are usually when it starts another verse or NC but this doesn't. I suggest you space this one instead.
02:25:811 (1,2) - This seems kinda weird to me as the vocals are in the middle of the slider. Maybe try something like the timeline instead? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/151190
03:18:265 (1) - Add finish here to emphasis the start of kiai time? It sounds nice too since it's also in the music.
03:42:875 (4) - I think it sounds better if you shorten this slider by 1/2 and add a note at 03:43:475 (x) instead.
03:50:978 (5) - Perhaps shorten this slider by 1/2? I think it follows vocals much better.
03:55:480 (1,2) - I don't see why there needs to be a jump here. I think it's best to space these correctly.
03:58:181 (1,2) - Maybe space these correctly too? Your pattern is 1/2 with the same spacing except this one, which is a jump.

Jojo:
I don't know why you made 2 hards o.o
02:19:208 (1) - Instead of this slow slider (Kinda why I recommend tick rate 2 so it's easier to see) Maybe use 5 notes like your previous patterns? Like 02:00:001 (1,2,3,4,1) and 02:09:605 (1,2,3,4,1). In fact you even did it later on 02:28:812 (1,2,3,4,1) o.o
02:37:816 (6) - Delete slider? It doesn't follow anything in the music. It only follows the end with the sound. If you really wanna add something, delete slider and add note at 02:38:416 (x) for the sound.
KayeSara
All of them are suggestions.
Jumping is for suitable and smooth playing. Rhythm and shape of style are depend on creator, no one obtain the entirely same tempo.

Then, there is good enough.

o>_<o Written by me in the restroom.
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