1. Gonzvlo and MMzz into tags. I guess Saten-san already wrote that heh.

1. Some uncommon spacings but nothing major, it plays great with it so I won't be naziing it.
2. 00:21:942 - Unused timing section.
3. 00:23:314 - ^
4. 00:33:942 (1) - This note is too loud. Sure I see you want to emphasize it, but do it so you don't imitate a shotgun shot near a person. (check out this section 01:40:114 and further, you didn't emphasize those which you probably should have)
5. 01:40:114 (1) - What is this I don't even... I expected a jump here. It's quite fitting as well. You could argue antijump is good here as well, but this is the hardest diff and such a slow slider is a massive turn off. Would like if you emphasized the first note as well. ;x;
   Maybe make a circle and then another at 01:40:457? You could probably distance the first one somewhere into a corner or something and place the 2nd one where the current slider ends. Just a thought, you can do as you wish I suppose.
6. 01:51:085 (1) - This slider is more fitting than the above one because of the melody, but I'd still rather have a jump here.
7. 02:08:057 (2,3,4,5,6) - Uh, just a thought: The song is called shockwave, the diff is called quake, and those 2 combined usually mess things up quite badly, and this pattern has somewhat perfect order. I strongly suggest a more chaotic pattern, because, honestly, while it looks nice, it's a little boring. You used some nice galvenize patterns in solar, and some of them could be quite fitting here as well. Just throwing an opinion though, so up to you if you want to change this.
8. 02:09:429 (2,3,4,5,6) - ^
9. 02:16:457 (3,4,5,6) - Just throwing this here as a more appropriate pattern for the map compared to the 2 I greened out above.

1. OD+1 imo.
2. 00:21:942 - Unused timing section.
3. 00:23:314 - ^
4. 00:33:942 (1) - Same thing as in quake.
5. 00:55:885 (6) - This *could* be a little confusing for a hard-like diff. not only it's placed on another slider, but it has 4 repeats. Sure it's readable and all (depending on the player), but if you could think of something else, it could be better.
6. 01:06:342 - I'd say you're missing a note here. (look at the previous section which sounds just like this one, it has a circle there). This may interfere with your idea of the jumping sliders, but instead of the repeating slider, just use a regular one and add another one which would start at the endpoint of that one and end on this timeline? You can keep the jumps this way atleast. I just hope you don't make them symmetrical to the above sliders because I see "shockwave" as something which shits things up instead of lining up stuff to perfection. :p
7. 01:34:285 (1) - Well...I don't really want to nazi (much), but make it so it's a little closer to the slider? Just like the previous circles before this.

1. 00:21:942 - Unused timing section.
2. 00:23:314 - ^
3. 00:33:942 (1) - Just like in other diffs, too loud.
4. 01:40:457 (1,2,3,4,5) - Spacing in this combo is too much affected by the shockwave if you know what I mean (atleast for a normal diff). Fix it a little.
5. 01:48:342 (5,6) - Also these 2 are kinda far from the previous slider. What you could do is just leave them like they are because I think they are cool and perfectly playable by a newbie, or you can just unstack 5 and use correct distance snap. The choice is yours I suppose.

1. Unused timing sections

   00:32:571
   00:43:457
   00:44:571
   00:49:028
   00:50:057
   01:00:942
   01:01:028
   01:05:485
   01:08:571
   01:12:085
   01:13:371
   01:50:400
   02:06:857
   02:15:771
   02:18:514
   02:19:885
2. 01:45:942 (1) - Soft clap maybe? You used one before. Same goes for 01:51:428 (2), 01:56:914 (1).
3. 01:55:885 (3) - This clap is a little too quiet, I suggest to raise the volume a little.

lolcubes wrote:

[Gonz' Poke]:

1. Unused timing sections

   I'm too lazy to remove them, it doesn't matter anyways~
2. 01:45:942 (1) - Soft clap maybe? You used one before. Same goes for 01:51:428 (2), 01:56:914 (1). Okay
3. 01:55:885 (3) - This clap is a little too quiet, I suggest to raise the volume a little. Sure~

Kitsunemimi wrote:

[Gonz' Poke]:
There are a crapload of timing points. Maybe you should just use custom hitsounds (and throw away all that hard work). Yeah, honestly, I would to that if I were the creator. When I'm mapping a guest diff I rather use lots of timing sections than bothering the creator with a custom file~
00:33:942 (3) - Are you sure you're not going to make this a new combo? o3o Yeah, I think I'm sure. I will add the NC if somebody else mentions it tho

Charles445 wrote:

01:56:571 (1) - This hold slider doesn't work well at all. It's not intuitive and breaks the flow up more than it should.

ErufenRito wrote:

Charles445 wrote:

01:56:571 (1) - This hold slider doesn't work well at all. It's not intuitive and breaks the flow up more than it should.

I disagree, I played it perfectly fine on my first try so w/e

Shiirn wrote:

/me pokes

NatsumeRin wrote:

Shiirn has 5 maps ranked/approved in the last month.

That's called the magic of #modhelp, fools.

Blue Dragon wrote:

NatsumeRin wrote:

Shiirn has 5 maps ranked/approved in the last month.

That's called the magic of #modhelp, fools.

I am active in #modhelp.




You chinese people with your excuses.

Either way, I am totally against all your speedranks, Shiirn. Doing this won't get you known as a better mapper in any way.

Nice map, though.

KRZY wrote:

It is also called the stairway to MATship. Expect Shiirn to be the next MAT whether he wants it or not.

KRZY wrote:

It is also called the stairway to MATship. Expect Shiirn to be the next MAT whether he wants it or not.

Charles445 wrote:

Profit!

GladiOol wrote:

OMGFG SPEEDRANK OMG #MODHELP ALL FRIENDS BAT MAT OMG!! UNFAIR LOL MY MAP HORRIBLE NEEDS MORE MODS BUT I WNAT BAT BUT THEY NO LOOK OMG I DUNT GET THIS LOL WHYYY ;9:9;9(9;090;9 IM SO JELLY

hi \:D/

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