Derekku wrote:

[General/SB]
*Err... is 'ZUN' really needed in tags? :p Yeah. This is probably the third time I've updated the tags for this. I suppose I was being a dolt and managed to screw fixing the tags up of all things, but it should hopefully be sorted!
*Innocent.jpg and ZUNman.jpg ARE supposed to be overlayed on each other, right? Also, I think you should fade them out at the end instead of suddenly disappearing. Yeah, the overlaying was intentional. as for the fade, I wanted it to cut out after that spinner like that, so I think it's fine as is.
*You have an unncessary SB load because the map's background wasn't faded out when the song began, so please fix that. Done. Sits at around 3.50x throughout now.
*Demystify.jpg, Utsuho.jpg, and oishi.jpg should be moved up a few pixels, since they're currently too low, resulting in a black line at the top of the screen. Fixed
*Speedfox.jpg, Ran.jpg, Yuyuko.jpg, Sikieiki.jpg, Aya.jpg, and Tepes.jpg should be moved to the right since they're too far to the left. By a pixel or two, but done.
*Also, Tepes.jpg seems to drop down a few pixels due to a couple extra movement commands in the .osb, if you want to get rid of those. Fixed (Yeah...this old storyboard is a bit of a Botch job)
*15Songname.png - I thought it was strange that this song title faded out a measure and a half before it was supposed to. All of the other song titles faded out half a measure before the background did. Originally it was to sync with the end of the map, but I guess it does look a little odd. I'll change it.

[Marathon]
01:35:429 (7) - sounds a bit awkward.. maybe try silencing the tick or something? :/ remapped this little part, since there's a note that I could've mapped on, removing the tick altogether. I didn't mind the tick, but that unmapped note bugged me.
01:47:065 (7) - ^ ^
*Similar sliders to above in Demystify Feast. I don't mind these ones much. I kinda like 'em
05:03:323 (2,3) - I'm not so sure about the stacking in this section. Other stacks were 1/2, but sliders like these are 3 1/4s after the last note, thus causing confusion. ): I see what you mean, but I don't think it's much of an issue. There's enough time to react methinks.
08:09:217 (2) - Deleting this note would make more sense since there isn't a note at 08:12:109. Agreed
11:21:845 (1) - not sure about this ending on the blue tick... extend to the white tick? eww. that wasn't intentional. That said, when extending it to the white tick it still sounded odd there. I've moved it back to 11:24:186, just as the last trumpet note comes in. Sounds better to me.
11:34:901 - Felt kinda awkward that a note wasn't here... Feels fine to me. I see what you mean, but I think I'll keep it.
12:19:655 - ^ Also, it's confusing because 12:19:116 (2) doesn't have an extra repeat like 12:21:634 (2) thrown an extra repeat on, and flipped the previous pattern so the spacing matches up.
12:24:693 - ^ fiddled about a bit. Can't say I'm happy with the result but I do agree that the missing note felt awkward
12:29:730 - ^ I'm gonna keep these ones though
12:34:768 - ^ ^
12:37:287 - ^ ^
13:29:634 (4,5,6,7,8,9) - the stacking is a bit confusing since there's half a beat between the end of the slider and the 1/4 notes unstacked that stack, like 13:35
13:35:634 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - this makes much more sense
14:24:028 (1) - move back to the red tick and extend? I wanted it to start from when the piano parts, so I'll leave that as-is.
16:02:140 (1,2,3) - the stacking confused me since 16:00:986 (4,5,6) were 1/2 apart, but these are triplets. Unstacked them and spreaded them around.
16:28:967 - Music gets kinda loud here, so how about turning up the volume a bit to match? I think the transition to the Normal sampleset works fine for that
17:05:961 (1) - was the whistle on the slider track intended? I think this was the only slider during this song that had that. oops, nice catch. Fixed
17:49:528 (1) - should actually end 1/4 earlier, but it's fine as-is if you don't want to change it. yeah, I'm happy as it is
22:30:897 (1,2,1,2) - a bit confusing, and the jump from one combo to the next was a bit large... Remapped this little area
22:40:480 (5) - ? ugh. fixed

[Timing]
Song 1:
*The beginning should be as follows: 737 (7/4), 3282 (4/4), 4736 (5/4), 6555 (4/4). Done
*25464 - Add an uninherited section using a bpm of 155 to fix the metronome for the slowdown here. Added
*27000 - Seems a bit early; try +10 (27010). Agreed
*50406 - I think this bpm section should be many measures earlier than it is. Right now, the previous section (27000) uses 163.75bpm, which seems too fast, evens out, and then gets too slow. So instead, use: 27010 (163.50bpm) and 38753 (164.50bpm).
*50406 (164.5bpm) - Change this to 50424 with 165bpm.
*60605 - Add an uninherited section using a bpm of 155 to fix the metronome for the slowdown here.
*84499 - Same as above and 25456.
Song 2:
*86023 - A bit late; try -10 (86013).
Song 3:
*155890 - Quite late; try -15 (155875).
Song 4:
*258508 - Add an uninherited section to reset the metronome to 4/4.
*282212 - Change to 3/4.
*286656 - Add a section to reset to 4/4.
Song 5:
*375586 - Feels a tiny bit late; try -5 (375581).
*426112 - 154bpm is correct, but the metronome is entirely off. Try something like 426211 instead.
Song 6:
*438195's bpm should be 160 instead of 150, and of offset of 438179. At least, that's what sounds right. The note (2) confuses me though, since you have it on a blue tick, and it sounds like it should be on a red tick. However, it seems to fall on a 1/3 tick. :/
Song 7:
*486507 - A bit early; I think +10 would be too much, so try +5 (486512).
*533932 - Try -5 (533927).
*545684 - Try -5 (545679).
*562826 - Same bpm as the above but used to reset the metronome, so -5 this as well (562821).
Song 8:
*679071 - 173bpm sounds too fast here... try 172 instead.
Song 9:
*ffffffriggin' 7/8 time signatures :I
*684901 - Felt a bit late; try -5 (684896)
*705256 - BPM seems a bit too fast towards the end; 166.5 sounds a bit better (hold down ctrl in the f3 panel to hear the metronome double which makes it sound like the proper 7/8 to test). Also, this could use a -5 (705251).
*715325 - Maybe -5 this too (715320).
*726763 - Feels quite off. Try -15 to the offset (726748).
*734711 - Try +10 (or 734722 to align with the last uninherited section) instead.
*737317 - Tiiiny bit late; I'd say -5, but you could do -3 to line up with the last section (737314).
*757457 - Actually felt a bit early, try +5 (or 757463 to line up with the last section).
*767457 - Same as the above; +5 (or 767463 to line up with the last section).
*780790 - Same as the above; +5 (or 780796 to line up with the last section).
Song 10:
*792572 - Late, so -10 (792562).
*Add an uninherited section with the same bpm at 828577 because the offset changes here.
Song 11:
*853314 - Felt a tiny bit late, try -10 (853304).
Song 12:
*924658 - Metronome sounds wrong here; Move this section 1/2 later (924860) to fix that.
*Then, add another section (same bpm of course) at 936008 to fix the metronome again.
Song 13:
*1013707 - Change this to 3/4.
*1019841 - Start a measure earlier (1018313) to fix the metronome.
Song 14:
*Almost perfect, but I think that 1090261 could use a -5 (1090256).
Song 15:
*Again, almost perfect, but 1178570 should be a few measures earlier (1174384).
Song 16:
*1203702 - A wee bit early; try +5 (1203707).
Song 17:
*1253250 - 145bpm seemed to get too early at the end; try 144.5 instead.
Song 18:
*1273397 - Move this back a measure (1271731) so that the pick-up notes use the same bpm.
*1314230 - You correctly reset the metronome here, but you used the wrong bpm. Change 165 to 144.
*1340897 - Remove this unnecessary section.
*1364038 - This really didn't seem necessary to me; it's like 20ms later than the previous section and felt much too late...
*1364246 - Same as above ^
*1367573 - 146bpm seemed to get too early at the end; try 145.5 instead.
Song 19:
*Almost felt like the offset jumped a couple of times in here, but it mostly felt fine when testing, so I think it's okay.
Outro:
*1475706 - Were you going to try timing the end? 115bpm is incorrect, so I'm not sure why it's there... I suggest taking a few minutes to time the end to keep the metronome happy, though. I can gladly fine-tune it when I recheck if you'd like.

June 10 EDIT: Updated a few things I missed in [Marathon]; will finish checking Komeiji's theme soon.
July 10 EDIT: Finished checking Koishi Komeiji's theme. I'm done modding this now.

Derekku wrote:

*50406 - I think this bpm section should be many measures earlier than it is. Right now, the previous section (27000) uses 163.75bpm, which seems too fast, evens out, and then gets too slow. So instead, use: 27010 (163.50bpm) and 38753 (164.50bpm). Agreed
*50406 (164.5bpm) - Change this to 50424 with 165bpm. Done
*60605 - Add an uninherited section using a bpm of 155 to fix the metronome for the slowdown here.
*84499 - Same as above and 25456. Done
Song 2:
*86023 - A bit late; try -10 (86013). I'll go with -8
Song 3:
*155890 - Quite late; try -15 (155875). -14 added
Song 4:
*258508 - Add an uninherited section to reset the metronome to 4/4. Fixed
*282212 - Change to 3/4. Done
*286656 - Add a section to reset to 4/4. I assume you mean at 285,174 instead, Added that one in.
Song 5:
*375586 - Feels a tiny bit late; try -5 (375581). -4 added
*426112 - 154bpm is correct, but the metronome is entirely off. Try something like 426211 instead. It looks fine to me. feels a little early so I've adjusted that, but apart from that, left as is.
Song 6:
*438195's bpm should be 160 instead of 150, and of offset of 438179. At least, that's what sounds right. The note (2) confuses me though, since you have it on a blue tick, and it sounds like it should be on a red tick. However, it seems to fall on a 1/3 tick. :/ Yeah, it's an awkward one. I'll throw in on 1/6. Seems like the best place for it really.
Song 7:
*486507 - A bit early; I think +10 would be too much, so try +5 (486512). I'm not so sure. added +2, but it doesn't seem that off.
*533932 - Try -5 (533927). -4 done
*545684 - Try -5 (545679). -4 also
*562826 - Same bpm as the above but used to reset the metronome, so -5 this as well (562821). -4 also also
Song 8:
*679071 - 173bpm sounds too fast here... try 172 instead. Sounds good
Song 9:
*ffffffriggin' 7/8 time signatures :I This one was a twat to time :c
*684901 - Felt a bit late; try -5 (684896) done
*705256 - BPM seems a bit too fast towards the end; 166.5 sounds a bit better (hold down ctrl in the f3 panel to hear the metronome double which makes it sound like the proper 7/8 to test). Also, this could use a -5 (705251). added the offset change. 166.75 sounds better though to me, so I'll go with that.
*715325 - Maybe -5 this too (715320). Done
*726763 - Feels quite off. Try -15 to the offset (726748). that sounds worse to me. -4 sounds better though
*734711 - Try +10 (or 734722 to align with the last uninherited section) instead. Done
*737317 - Tiiiny bit late; I'd say -5, but you could do -3 to line up with the last section (737314). done
*757457 - Actually felt a bit early, try +5 (or 757463 to line up with the last section). Done
*767457 - Same as the above; +5 (or 767463 to line up with the last section). +6
*780790 - Same as the above; +5 (or 780796 to line up with the last section). +6
Song 10:
*792572 - Late, so -10 (792562). I'll go with -8
*Add an uninherited section with the same bpm at 828577 because the offset changes here. added
Song 11:
*853314 - Felt a tiny bit late, try -10 (853304). gone with -6
Song 12:
*924658 - Metronome sounds wrong here; Move this section 1/2 later (924860) to fix that. Fixed
*Then, add another section (same bpm of course) at 936008 to fix the metronome again. Fixed
Song 13:
*1013707 - Change this to 3/4. oops. fixed
*1019841 - Start a measure earlier (1018313) to fix the metronome. Done
Song 14:
*Almost perfect, but I think that 1090261 could use a -5 (1090256). I'll throw -6 on there
Song 15:
*Again, almost perfect, but 1178570 should be a few measures earlier (1174384). Might as well. done
Song 16:
*1203702 - A wee bit early; try +5 (1203707). Fixed
Song 17:
*1253250 - 145bpm seemed to get too early at the end; try 144.5 instead. Done. changed the 142BPM section to a 142.5BPM section also. Felt too fast.
Song 18:
*1273397 - Move this back a measure (1271731) so that the pick-up notes use the same bpm. Sounds good
*1314230 - You correctly reset the metronome here, but you used the wrong bpm. Change 165 to 144. That was fixed originally, but not uploaded. whoops.
*1340897 - Remove this unnecessary section. Removed
*1364038 - This really didn't seem necessary to me; it's like 20ms later than the previous section and felt much too late... I remember having a reason for those prior, and I can't remember what. But on retrospect, they're pointless.
*1364246 - Same as above ^ ^
*1367573 - 146bpm seemed to get too early at the end; try 145.5 instead. Agreed
Song 19:
*Almost felt like the offset jumped a couple of times in here, but it mostly felt fine when testing, so I think it's okay.
Outro:
*1475706 - Were you going to try timing the end? 115bpm is incorrect, so I'm not sure why it's there... I suggest taking a few minutes to time the end to keep the metronome happy, though. I can gladly fine-tune it when I recheck if you'd like. What I propose for this is to put down timing sections so the metronome pulses on the more significant notes in this section (the loud notes and the first notes of the little melodies). for this I'm using a bunch of odd timing sections, but since there are no notes at this point and it's only the metronome being affected, I think this would be acceptable. Could use a bit of fine-tuning though. I might look at it again.

June 10 EDIT: Updated a few things I missed in [Marathon]; will finish checking Komeiji's theme soon.
July 10 EDIT: Finished checking Koishi Komeiji's theme. I'm done modding this now.

Lilac wrote:

01:23:008 - Please watch out for your sliders if you change your timing. fffffffffixed
01:48:247 - I still think that's way too cheap covering the (4). I don't think that one is an issue though
04:51:655 - Another one. fixed
04:52:396 - D: fixed
05:29:618 - DD: fixed
05:35:544 - DDD: fixed
06:02:719 - DDDD: fixed
06:05:940 - DDDDD: fixed
21:15:061 - DDDDDD: fixed
21:16:728 - DDDDDDD: fixed
22:15:688 - DDDDDDDD: fixed
22:22:563 (1,2) - DDDDDDDDD: fixed (ugh )
22:36:313 - Pretty sure that's 1/3? Yeah. resnappin' is being a bit of a twat. Fixed

And I think that's it. Please be sure to recheck your sliders if you do change your timing.

Raging Bull wrote:

Should have been approved with the release of Touhou 13/Touhou charts.

Would have been nice to have this in the chart too actually haha.

Raging Bull wrote:

Should have been approved with the release of Touhou 13/Touhou charts.

NoHItter wrote:

But wasn't there already a first bubble by Sakura?
James gave the second bubble just now.