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Taketatsu Ayana&Tatsumi Yuiko - Futari no Honey Boy(TV Size)

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toxikon
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toxikon
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 6 мая 2011 г. at 17:56:50

Artist: Taketatsu Ayana & Tatsumi Yuiko
Title: Futari no Honey Boy (TV Size)
Source: KissXsis
BPM: 141
Filesize: 12346kb
Play Time: 01:26
Difficulties Available:
  1. Hard (4,46 stars, 183 notes)
  2. Normal (2,31 stars, 103 notes)
Download: Taketatsu Ayana & Tatsumi Yuiko - Futari no Honey Boy (TV Size)
Download: Taketatsu Ayana & Tatsumi Yuiko - Futari no Honey Boy (TV Size) (no video)
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Second map.
Last edited by toxikon , edited 34 times in total.
Selee
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Selee
Timing:
BPM: 141.000
Offset: 241
Hellzero
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Joined April 2010
Hellzero
IRC MOD
17:46 <Hellzero> : 00:15:453 (1,2) - оба слайдера начать с белого тика
17:47 <ToXIKoN> : проапдейтил
17:47 <Hellzero> : 00:18:538 (1,2,3) - вправо на 1 тик
17:48 <Hellzero> : и поставь друг на друга лучше
17:48 <ToXIKoN> : ээ
17:48 <ToXIKoN> : ну ок
17:48 <ToXIKoN> : проапдейтил
17:49 <Hellzero> : ну это только мое мнение можешь и не выполнять
17:49 <Hellzero> : но некоторые вещи нужно будет исправить
17:49 <Hellzero> : distance snap не узал
17:49 <Hellzero> : ?
17:49 <Hellzero> : юзал*
17:49 <ToXIKoN> : нет
17:49 <Hellzero> : понятно...
17:49 <ToXIKoN> : он не доставляет
17:50 <ToXIKoN> : мешает только
17:50 <Hellzero> : пля ну почему все так говорят
17:50 <Hellzero> : мне как то не мешяет а всем мешает
17:50 <ToXIKoN> : наверно потому-что так и есть
17:50 <ToXIKoN> : ну хз
17:51 <Hellzero> : 00:22:155 (5) - закончить на белом тике
17:52 <Hellzero> : 00:25:560 (5) - тоже самое
17:52 <Hellzero> : 00:28:964 (5) -
17:52 <Hellzero> : 00:35:772 (3) -
17:53 <Hellzero> : 00:54:070 (1) -
17:53 <Hellzero> : 00:54:709 (1) - вправо на 1 тик
17:53 <ToXIKoN> : 28 на белом тике до или после?
17:53 <Hellzero> : и закончить на белом
17:53 <Hellzero> : как хочешь
17:53 <Hellzero> : главное на белом
17:53 <ToXIKoN> : а чо имеет прям невъебенное значение что на белом?
17:53 <Hellzero> : ДА
17:54 <ToXIKoN> : о_о не понимаю почему :o
17:55 <Hellzero> : потому что белые тики это ударный ритм а когда ты кидаешь как попало следовательно ты не
17:55 <Hellzero> : попадаешь в ритм песни
17:55 <ToXIKoN> : омк
17:56 <Hellzero> : короче
17:56 <ToXIKoN> : пля на 54 709 никак на белый
17:56 <ToXIKoN> : :c
17:56 <ToXIKoN> : ща попробую чонить сделать
17:56 <Hellzero> : timeng > recalate slider leghts
17:57 <Hellzero> : 01:11:623 (1,2,3) - вправо на 1 тик
17:57 <Hellzero> : 01:15:028 (1) - начать с белого
17:58 <Hellzero> : закончить на красном следовательно
17:58 <Hellzero> : а ваще попробуй вот так
17:58 <Hellzero> : http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/73200
17:59 <Hellzero> : расположени сам придумаеш
18:00 <ToXIKoN> : через каждый слайдер бит чтоль?
18:00 <Hellzero> : ну
18:00 <Hellzero> : звучит получше
18:00 <Hellzero> : ._
18:00 <Hellzero> : .
18:01 <ToXIKoN> : ну мб, как сложности доделаю ещё звуки подредакчу
18:01 <ToXIKoN> : проапдейтил
18:02 <Hellzero> : 00:15:560 (1) - закончить на белом...
18:03 <ToXIKoN> : проапдейтил
18:03 <Hellzero> : 01:00:453 (1) - для нормала слишком короткий спинер
18:04 <Hellzero> : лучше убрать...
18:04 <Hellzero> : 01:15:134 (1,2,3) - эм
18:05 <Hellzero> : ты крин то мой смотрел?
18:05 <Hellzero> : скрин
18:05 <ToXIKoN> : да
18:05 <Hellzero> : так не так
18:05 <Hellzero> : вообщето
18:05 <Hellzero> : там все на белых стоят
18:06 <ToXIKoN> : щаа
18:07 <ToXIKoN> : так 1 00 453 заменил слайдером
18:07 <ToXIKoN> : 1 15 исправил
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lovhin456
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lovhin456
Hi! Here's my mod >w<

General;
- You might have problems because of the vid ;~; At least put a warning on the info
- Add preview time to both diffs. Remember to make it the same
- Your mp3 is of bad quality ;~; and also it is 320kbps which is not rankable, you need a 192~128kbps mp3

Normal;

- If you're planning to make this your easiest diff and not make an Easy, then consider making circle size Large, and reduce 1 to HP Drain, AR and OD
- 00:18:538 (1,2,3) >> Remove finish from (1) and add clap; remove clap from (2); remove clap from (3) add finish
- 00:20:666 >> Add finish
- 00:21:836 >> Try to avoid blue ticks on Easy & Normal diff. is better to make a slider from where (3) is until 00:21:943
- 00:25:240 >> ^
- 00:28:645 >> ^
- 00:35:453 >> Avoid the blue tick, maybe move (3) here and extend it to where it ended ?
- 01:01:517 >> No. This is so confusing, at least try not to overlap the start ;/
- 01:04:496 >> I think it sounds better and follows vocals better if you end the slider ^ here
- 01:28:751 >> End the spinner here and add a whistle maybe ...

Hard;
- Your spacing on the whole difficulty is horrible, try to keep this distance during the whole diff.
- Try to work on your hitsounds, create patterns don't just put them randomly
- Curve your sliders better, if you can make them symmetrical
- 00:07:687 >> Add a note here ?
- 00:14:177 >> Maybe move it to the next white tick ?
- 00:15:985 >> ^
- 00:39:389 (5,6,7,8,9,10) >> These don't sound good or make sense, don't follow the music
- 00:41:943 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) >> ^
- 00:50:241 >> This might be a little to short ;~;
- 01:01:517 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15) >> These don't follow anything imo
- 01:05:560 >> Add a note ?
- 01:06:623 >> The new combo should start here
- 01:08:325 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) >> I'm really not sure here, I feel like is okk but at the same time doesn't follow the music/vocals well, check it
- 01:28:751 >> End the spinner here and maybe add a whistle

* Star
net45291
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Daiguren
430 posts
Joined July 2009
Daiguren
hi~

Normal
duce HP drain by 1~2
duce AR drain by 1~2
duce OD drain by 1~2
slider velocity is too low for a Normal diff ,increase it by about 0.5 will be better
volume is too high
00:07:475 (2) - move it at 00:07:368
00:07:900 (3) - move it at 00:07:687
00:08:751 (4) - new combo
00:09:177 (5) - move it at 00:09:070
00:09:602 (6) - move it at 00:09:389
00:10:453 (1) - make the middle slierpoint of this slider left 1 grid
00:14:177 (2,3) - spacing
00:15:560 (1) - stop at 00:16:198
00:18:751 (2) - move it at the blue line behind
00:18:964 (3) - add a 5% volume spinner instead of this circle and the spinner wiil be end at 00:20:241
00:21:092 (2) - spacing
00:21:836 (4,5) - ^
00:24:496 (2,3) - ^
00:25:240 (4,5) - ^
00:27:900 (2,3,4,5) - ^
00:32:156 (4) - mapping this part instead of break
00:35:453 (2,3) - spacing
00:35:772 (3) - end at 00:36:836 and remove the clap of last slider hit
00:45:347 (3,4) - difficult jumps for Normal diff
00:49:177 (2) - add something behind
00:51:304 (3) - new combo
00:52:581 (6) - spacing
00:54:709 (1) - ^
01:01:517 (1) - make the begining and ending of this slider clearly ,or it will make beginingers feel awkward
01:08:752 (2) - move it at the previous blue line
01:09:177 (3) - move it at the back blue line
01:10:453 (5) - move it at the previous blue line
01:15:134 (1) - overlaps with 01:16:411 (2,3) -
01:18:113 (4,5) - ^
01:22:368 (2) - move it at the previous blue line
01:22:794 (3) - move it at the back blue line
And I think you should take more care about your hitsound , it makes me feel unconfortable. ;_;

Hard
volume is also too high
slifer velocity is too low
00:07:900 (6) - spacing
00:28:964 (3) - not really overlaps
00:31:517 (2) - ^
00:32:368 (4) - ^
00:34:283 (2) - left 1 grid
00:58:113 (2,3) - not really overlaps
01:01:092 (2) - spacing
01:03:219 (9) - new combo
01:05:772 (1) - remove new combo
01:06:623 (2,3,4,5) - different spacing
01:16:836 (3) - spacing
01:22:368 (2) - ^
xBlevrled
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xBlevrled
Fantastic Beatmap!!!
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