Sallad4ever wrote:

Hi kazumi

[General]
- I won't recommend a silent slidertick, the tick doesn't sound bad so it's better to remove the muted slider tick. If you still don't want to hear the tick, just use 0.5 tick rate (I highly suggest to remove the muted slidertick though)
- for the offset, try using 40% or 45%. 30 % is too quite and it made the hitsound are very hard to discern from the music in the background

[Easy]
01:25:419 (1) - this stack could easily confuse novice. Because it's the only stack on this diff, I suggest to just unstack it
01:34:419 (1) - almost the same as above but this one is more visible cause the hit burst will already gone when the note appears, so it's ok

[Morphi's Normal]
one thing that interest me in this diff is the slider that have part of them using normal-sliderslide sounds (00:53:919 (1) and beyond), if this is intentional that's a nice idea, if not maybe you should hear it more to decide whether to keep it or not (I'd say keep it cause it's good)

[Hard]
00:22:981 (5) - not a good overlap here. Maybe just move it precisely under or adjacent from the start of the previous slider
00:18:106 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3) - I think this jump-jump-anti jump are not a good idea, cause from the quick 1/2 jumps suddenly change to slow anti jump is kinda anti climax for me. Maybe change the anti jump to normal spacing?
00:32:731 (5) - this placed under the slider path is currently discussed on the new rule, I myself don't really like this kind of placement, move it?
00:58:231 (4) - ^

A very nice music, I'll absolutely put this to my mp4 player
Nice map, I like the flow~
Good luck and ~Star

happy30 wrote:

[General]

- Use the same kiai setting for all diffs. I'll consider this =/

Also don't use very short kiai sections like 01:17:919 (1) - on easy. Just let the whole part have kiai! But I wanna emphasize the last KIAI, so dat's y D:

- If you have cut the song by yourself it's not necessary to put (Short Ver.) in your title. wew, changed

[Hard]

00:20:169 (3) - Looks a bit weird, line it up with 1 and 2? well, k
01:16:981 (1,2,3,4,5) - Reduce hitsound volume for these notes? (And maybe add claps or whistles? o.o) done

Some notes are hard to read, I hope you can make these more visible

00:28:419 (6) -
00:32:731 (5) -
00:34:231 (3) -

Selee wrote:

[Morphi's Normal]

00:27:669 (2) - clap end?

00:55:419 (3) - straighten the slider from the 1st node? err...I mean...this

01:15:481 (T) - Unused timeline, delete? (plus it adds some noise onto the slider)
01:15:669 (T) - ^

01:29:919 (1) - Add whistle?

Selee wrote:

[General]

• Artist: Quynh Nhu -----He is the writer of the song, and Truong Quynh Anh is the singer...since this is instrumental, I guess Quynh Nhu would be more legitimate. (http://www.inghenhac.com/9438/Don_Coi.html) oh lawd u've done a research xD
  
  Tags: add "Truong Quynh Anh" right....
  
  hmm...to be honest I don't like the BG much...firstly, it has been used once (http://osu.ppy.sh/b/49462), also it doesn't fit the song style imo...Try puu.sh/3SCj ?(Thanks Kanon for cutting these images lol) ok i'll change it, i dont really like this BG either =/ thx 4 suggestions
  
  I know hitsounds are kinda personal style...but for me, I don't like the way you use soft-hitwhistle, sounds like soft-hitnormal already...so...just a suggetion, remove some whistles? I kinda prefer using whistle this way so.. i'll w8 4 more mod
  
  the first part is too quiet imo...I suggest to increase the volume for a little, perhaps starts the 1st part with 40% volume, then 50%---60%---70%? =>done (volume in morphi's diff is consistent btw, consider making some flow?) nah i found it's ok dat way, however it's up to morphina to change it or not lol
  
  Just one more hitsound you may use: http://puu.sh/3Tz8

thx ^^

[Eazy]

• 00:11:919 (1) - hmm, whistle begin+end for transition? k
  00:56:919 (1) - Raise the end for a little like this? =/ no thx
  01:25:419 (1) - Remove new combo?

done

[Morphi's Normal]

• 00:27:669 (2) - clap end?
  00:55:419 (3) - straighten the slider from the 1st node? err...I mean...this
  01:15:481 (T) - Unused timeline, delete? (plus it adds some noise onto the slider)
  01:15:669 (T) - ^
  01:29:919 (1) - Add whistle?

[Hard]

• 00:33:856 (2,3) - ...Try arrange like this?

ok done

Nice~

Star for awesome music/mapset

Shulin wrote:

Long time since I last saw this, everything is a suggestion as usual.

Easy:

00:14:919 (1) - Add clap?
00:18:669 (2) - Remove clap from the start?
00:32:169 (3) - Custom tick on the 1st return?
00:44:544 (4) - Add clap to the start?
00:50:169 (4) - Finish at the end?
01:22:419 (4) - Add clap?
01:25:044 (2) - ^
01:26:544 (5) - ^ At the start
01:30:294 (2) - ^ At the end
01:34:419 (1) - ^

Minor hitsound suggestions do what you want with them, the map plays fine ^_^

Normal:

00:50:919 (1) - I think soft finish sounds better.

Good but you used the same slider type a lot!

Hard:

00:27:387 (2) - Delete? It doesn't follow the song!
00:31:887 (2) - Delete? It seems like your following the piano at this part so it sounds weird.

Nice mapset, here is a 4 months late star =D

Card N'FoRcE wrote:

Some little things:

I found "Truong Quynh Anh" as Artist name, why did you use "Quynh Nhu"?
Remove "Quynh" from tags (and other duplicates if you change artist title).
Normal's Background makes approach circles kinda hard to see, do you mindfinding another one you like for it?
[Easy] 00:53:169 (2) - add clap (custom hitsound 1)
[Normal] 01:29:919 (1,2) - make these like 00:16:419 (5,6)?
[Normal] 01:21:856 - 01:26:356 - 01:33:856 - add beat here?

I really really like Hard

Let me know when you update (forum or game PM)

Card N'FoRcE wrote:

It's unfortunate that Normal's score is a bit low due to it having many sliders that inflate star rating and don't affect score.

Difficulty gap between Normal and Hard is a bit high, but not that much, so here you go.