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5231_Kinoko wrote:

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El1as wrote:

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SiLviA wrote:

商品名:セボン　タンクにおくだけ
洗浄効果
こすらず落とす、トリプル洗浄成分（酵素・キレート剤・界面活性剤）配合。トイレはいつもつるピカ！
防汚効果
便器表面の汚れ・水あかをつきにくくする。
かわいい容器から爽やかな香りがトイレいっぱいに広がる
標準的な4人家族で約３～５週間ご使用いただけます。ただし、水温・水量・使用方法などにより多少変動します。

※セボンはタンク内の器具をいためず、浄化槽、防露タンクにも悪影響を与えませんので、安心してお使いいただけます。

といれにせぼん♪

val0108 wrote:

ya!

[General]
Enable countdown のチェックをはずす
[Hard]
基本ｽﾍﾟｰｼﾝｸﾞの距離が０．２以上離れてるのがあったからジャンプ以外のノートはもう少しｽﾍﾟｰｼﾝｸﾞ調整しましょう。
OD 7 or 6
同じ置き方が最初から最後まで続くから途中で飽きたって思ったかな。もっといろんなパターン置けるとよりよくなる！

[Normal]
00:24:656 (6,1,2) - 遠い
01:07:119 (7,1) - ^
00:43:475 (1) - スピン短いのでノート置くのおすすめ
01:24:974 (1) - remove hitclap

[Scarlet's Taiko]
01:26:783 - add note hit finish

しゃっせい！

dkun wrote:

Hello!

modding key:
this is a suggestion
this is something you should really do
this is unrankable

General
The artist should be "NicoNicoDouga".
The Source should be left blank.
The title should be "Miya To Odoru".
Delete your .osb file.


Hard
It simply looks like you put notes everywhere and tried to make sliders cosmetically pretty.
Flow is a bit of a question in this map.
But technically, there isn't anything wrong.

Normal
Same as above.

Scarlet Sisters wrote:

fight fight fight fight fight ！！！！！！！！！
star~☆

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Saten-san wrote:

hmm, no video?
Insane is empty o.o (can I make an Insane? ><)

I'll mod this later~♪

1. Artist: Nico Nico Douga
2. Tags: Amagami Scarlet Sisters Saten-san (remove niconico douga)
3. BPM: 124,310
   Offset: 38
   Make sure to snap the notes and timing points afterwards~
4. You need a Difficulty with less than 3 stars~
5. A preview point is needed

1. The difficulty settings is kinda too high for a [Hard]
   Please consider lowering HP Drain & Overall Difficulty.
2. 01:27:386 (1) - End this spinner at 01:28:607

1. 01:24:974 (1) - Same as Hard

Saten-san wrote:

General

1. Artist: Nico Nico Douga
2. Tags: Amagami Scarlet Sisters Saten-san (remove niconico douga)
3. BPM: 124,310
   Offset: 38
   Make sure to snap the notes and timing points afterwards~
4. You need a Difficulty with less than 3 stars~
5. A preview point is needed

Hard
5 star? o.o

1. The difficulty settings is kinda too high for a [Hard]
   Please consider lowering HP Drain & Overall Difficulty.
2. 01:27:386 (1) - End this spinner at 01:28:607

Normal

1. 01:24:974 (1) - Same as Hard

No need for kudosu this time

(ﾉﾟωﾟ)ﾉ~~☆

Hellzero wrote:

I like it >w<
Miya so kawaii >///<

General
You need diff less 3 stars for rank

Saten-san :3
AR -1
00:17:896 - need note
00:27:067 - ^
00:34:066 (5) - NC
00:34:790 (2) - move to 00:34:790 and 00:35:152 - add note
00:36:720 - need note
01:05:922 - need note

Hard
00:15:838 - add note and 00:15:966 (8) - move to 00:16:086 (just suggestion)
First part little boring, Maybe add more 1/4?
00:44:081 (3) - remove?
00:44:443 (1) - finish
00:45:167 (4) - remove finish
00:48:304 (1) - add finish
00:57:957 (9) - NC
01:17:505 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - make this > http://puu.sh/44op

Normal
Add more hitsounds!
And 1/1 it's not fun! >_<

It's not all but i'm lazy, sorry. Maybe i'll make recheck sometime XD
Ganbatte yo! ლ( ╹ ◡ ╹ ლ)

Hellzero wrote:

Saten-san :3
AR -1
00:17:896 - need note
00:27:067 - ^
00:34:066 (5) - NC
00:34:790 (2) - move to 00:34:790 and 00:35:152 - add note
00:36:720 - need note
01:05:922 - need note

Saten-san wrote:

Hellzero wrote:

Saten-san :3
AR -1
00:17:896 - need note
00:27:067 - ^
00:34:066 (5) - NC
00:34:790 (2) - move to 00:34:790 and 00:35:152 - add note
00:36:720 - need note
01:05:922 - need note

I love to experiment, did everything~♪

Doubt wrote:

(´・ω・)っ☆
nicemap nicesong
star~

にぃにのばかぁ！

Hinacle wrote:

modリクエストありがとうございますー！
参考程度におねがいします~~

mod

＜General＞

1. Resize BG to 1024x768 or 800×600
2. Artist change NicoNico Douga → Nico Nico Douga

＜Easy＞

1. Easyなのでスペーシングを一定にしてください
2. 00:09:691 (1) - add finish at beginning?
3. 00:11:139 (2) - 1grid down
4. 00:25:619 (1) - Remove new combo
5. 01:14:368 (5) - new combo?

＜Normal＞

1. NormalもEasyと同じでスペーシングを一定にしてください
2. 00:15:483 (5) - new combo?
3. 00:15:966 (1) - Remove new combo?
4. 01:08:576 (1) - ^
5. 01:24:491 (x) - green line delete.
6. 01:24:504 (4) - add green line

＜Hard＞

1. 01:25:952 (6) - end slider at 01:26:797
2. 01:27:400 (1) - Start spinner at 01:27:159

＜Saten's Insane＞
Nice Saten-san diff=w=b

Fight~

Aenna wrote:

mod suru tokoro nakatta desu (´・ω・｀)
nice desu (・∀・)

1. MP3 doesn't have name.
2. Artist(Nico Nico~) isn't spaced except Insane diff.

ykcarrot wrote:

[General]
- Preview point isn't setted.
- I found something strange in your map's folder.

.osz

[attachment=0:ec924]Screenshot_(2011-08-24_at_05.13.16).png[/attachment:ec924]

1. MP3 doesn't have name.
2. Artist(Nico Nico~) isn't spaced except Insane diff.

Give any name to MP3. And change file name from 'NicoNico~' to 'Nico Nico~'.
If you changed MP3 file's name, open .osu in notepad and write name that changed.
You have to full-submit when you finish work in every diff.


[Insane]
00:29:842 (4) - Weird position. Move to previous slider's end point. It will look much better.
00:35:514 (5) - Try to move it to start point of 00:34:428 (1) for better spacing.
00:36:720 (7) - New combo
00:36:841 (1) - Then remove new combo
01:26:314 (1) - Shorten to 01:26:797


[Hard]
00:16:086 (7) - Spacing. If you don't wanna change its position, add new combo.
00:40:582 (5) - New combo
00:40:702 (1) - Then remove new combo
00:43:840 (1) - Remove new combo
01:05:197 (7) - New combo due to spacing was changed.
01:05:680 (1) - Then remove new combo
01:27:159 (1) - Extend to 01:28:607


[Normal]
00:56:027 (1) - Too far from center. I suggest x:232/y:56


[Easy]
00:15:966 (3) - Stack correctly under previous note
00:20:792 (5,1,2) - Those stacks are hard to beginner. Find other way.


Not too bad stuff. Anyway it needs improvement.
Good luck.

ykcarrot wrote:

[Insane]
00:29:842 (4) - Weird position. Move to previous slider's end point. It will look much better.
00:35:514 (5) - Try to move it to start point of 00:34:428 (1) for better spacing.
00:36:720 (7) - New combo
00:36:841 (1) - Then remove new combo
01:26:314 (1) - Shorten to 01:26:797

Saten-san wrote:

ykcarrot wrote:

[Insane]
00:29:842 (4) - Weird position. Move to previous slider's end point. It will look much better.
00:35:514 (5) - Try to move it to start point of 00:34:428 (1) for better spacing.
00:36:720 (7) - New combo
00:36:841 (1) - Then remove new combo
01:26:314 (1) - Shorten to 01:26:797

All done~♪

Apricot wrote:

[!] = You NEED to change.
[.] = If possible, change.
[?] = Suggestion/nazi.

[NC] = Add New Combo.
[RNC] = Remove New Combo.

You can ignore hitsound mod if you don't like it.

[Easy]
00:11:622 (3) - (1) と重ならないように配置してください
00:15:000 (3) - (2)と完全に重なってません
00:23:206 (3) - Health Barと重なっているので修正してください
00:25:619 (1) - (4) と重ならないように配置した方がいいかもしれません
00:38:651 (2) - (5) と重ならないように配置してください
00:46:374 (5) - NC.
00:47:822 (1) - RNC.
00:49:270 (5) - NC.
00:59:405 (3) - ^
01:00:371 (1) - RNC.
Spinnerの終点を 01:26:917 へ移動

[Normal]
00:16:931 (4) - この配置の方が綺麗に見えると思います
00:31:894 (6) - Health Barと重なっているので修正してください
00:47:339 (5) - ^
01:02:784 (6) - Normalで1/4は使わない方がいいです
Spinnerの終点を 01:26:917 へ移動

[Hard]
AR -1
00:16:086 (1) - スペーシングが狭すぎます
00:18:620 (4) - 前後のサークルの中間に配置するようにしてください
00:20:310 (7) - NC.
00:21:034 (1) - RNC.
00:22:482 (8) - NC.
00:27:308 (12) - ^
00:32:618 (8) - ^
00:35:755 (1) - RNC.
00:36:479 (5) - NC.
00:37:686 (1) - RNC.
01:06:163 (1) - ^
01:16:540 (7) - NC.
01:25:952 (5) - ^

[Saten's Insane]
00:13:070 (3) - 1grid up? nazi
00:38:048 (8) - shouldn't stack to the previous slider.
00:47:339 (6) - 1grid left.
00:49:752 (4) - NC ?
01:13:644 (1) - NC.
01:18:230 (1) - RNC.
01:18:712 (5) - NC.
01:19:195 (1) - RNC.

Saten-san wrote:

Changes from Apricot's mod

Your message is too short.