[General]- The quality of the mp3 is very low, you should change it, I listen this song in better quality.
- Put the audio lead-in on 1000.
[Easy]AR -1 This is just an easy difficulty, you must change it.
HP Drain Rate -1
00:01:249 (1) Add finish at the start.
00:21:821 (3,4,5) Inconsistent spacing, use the same between (3,4) then between (4,5)
00:24:107 (1) This note is very close to the previous note, I know that you use the distance snap but with the hit-burst this may be confusing.
00:42:392 (1) The whistle sounds weird, empty, as if you were to continue with more whistles. I suggest to remove it.
00:49:249 (3) Add finish at the end, and add finish in the following (5).
00:56:107 (2) Never stack notes under the slider in the easier difficulty, that's very confusing for beginners, I suggest to change it for a slider with repeat.
01:11:535 - Add a note here, sounds empty.
01:12:107 (3) You're following an imaginary rhythm, that's okay for the hard or insane difficulty, but this can be confusing for beginners.
01:14:392 (5) If you add the note put a new combo here.
01:16:107 - And add a note here.
01:16:678 (7) Don't follow anything ... that's better if you extend the slider 1/2
02:04:678 (1,2,3,4,5) Considering the previous spacing, these notes are too far. (The followings sliders too)
02:19:535 - Considering that this is the kiai time, this is very, very boring, add more circles and sliders.
03:45:249 (1) Add a repeat? considering the previous sliders like this, the slider need a repeat.
03:47:535 (1) ^ Same, but there is easy to read, because you use a different pattern.
03:54:392 - Add a note with new combo?
03:55:535 (2) I'm not really sure about this speeddown, considering the slider ticks the player can miss the combo here, I suggest to change the speeddown to 0,75x
03:58:964 - The clap pattern here is wrong, please follow this pattern:
http://i36.tinypic.com/2i7lf9.jpg04:24:107 (1,2,3,4) You should unstack these notes. It's confusing for new players.
[Normal]AR -2 Are you crazy? this AP looks like a hard to me.
00:01:249 (1,2,3) Very nice pattern, but (3) is very close to (2). You must change it. (In the following patterns too)
00:20:678 (2,3,4,5) There are a little spacing errors, this is not very important but looks bad when you're playing.
http://puu.sh/4icM00:51:535 (1) This slider isn't snapped.
01:00:678 (1) This note is very close to the previous note, you should change it, considering the actual AP6 this is not confusing, but sooner or later some MAT/BAT will change you.
01:42:678 (2,3,4,5) Little spacing errors again, moving the notes one grid left should be right.
01:47:249 (2,3,4,5) ^ Exactly the same.
01:52:107 (1,2) Spacing.
02:00:107 (1) This is under the previous note, I suggest to change it, maybe you can change the pattern using horizontal flip?
02:11:535 (1) Never put a jump in a normal or easy difficulty, maybe that's just an error, I suggest to use reverse selection.
02:20:107 (1) Spacing, I know this is for symmetry, but this is wrong, If you want to do a symmetric map you need follow the distance snap first,
I have a suggestion: lol I try but I can't think anything with the same pattern.
02:29:821 (1,2,3) Little spacing error, maybe you can do a horizontal flip of the previous pattern.
02:33:249 (1,2,3,4,5) yee I really love the star patterns <3
02:40:678 (1,2) Move (2) one grid left, considering the following notes.
03:21:821 (3,1) Spacing.
03:24:107 (4,5,6) Inconsistent spacing.
03:33:821 (2,3) Spacing.
03:35:535 (1,2) ^ Same
03:42:107 (4) Add a clap here, the previous clap sounds empty.
03:48:964 (4) Change this finish for a clap, sounds weird and don't follow the rhythm.
03:54:392 - Change this speeddown to 0,75 for the change is not as sharp.
[Hard]00:13:249 (3) That slider feels like just have one repeat (for the previous pattern) If you change the position of the slider this will be more readable.
00:18:678 (6) Reduce this slider 1/2 and add a note here. I think sounds better and follow the voice like you.
00:19:535 (3,1) Spacing, these notes are too close.
00:51:535 - You can follow this pattern for the kiai time? sounds empty for me.
http://i36.tinypic.com/2i7lf9.jpg01:40:678 (1,2,3,4) A little spacing error between (2,3) to change it you need to use Grid level 4.
01:49:535 (1,2,3,4) Maybe this pattern can be confusing for (3,4) remove the repeat on (3) and add in (4).
02:52:678 (1) Very short spin, extend it to 02:53:821 and remove the note here.
03:31:249 (1,2) Add whistle at the end (both sliders) If (3) use soft-hitsounds add a whistle too.
03:34:964 (6,1) Spacing, I don't know how you make these spacing errors, you use the distance spacing ever right?
03:52:107 (1) Very short spin again, extend it to 03:53:249 and remove the note.
03:54:392 - Remove the break, isn't necessary because there are a blank space of 3 seconds, and is better I think, keeps the suspense.
04:26:392 - Move the inherited section to the white tick.
[Insane]00:07:535 (5,6,7) Please use the same distance between these three notes.
00:12:678 (1,2) Stack the slider perfectly.
00:41:821 (1,2,3) Reduce the distance between (2,3). Is inconsistent.
00:51:535 - Use the clap pattern for the kiai time:
http://i36.tinypic.com/2i7lf9.jpg01:06:678 (7) New combo, also, the star look really bad. Please fix it.
02:04:107 (10) Considering the previous spacing this note is too close.
03:21:821 - I can't feel a pattern like this in this song ... it's a pattern for nightcore or techno songs ...
In this difficulty are so many spacing errors, really, I skip to mod the rest because this is so far from ranked. You need a remap and use a consistent pattern of hitsounds.
You have more kodosu than me, I think you can improve the beatmap so much, strive only
Starr.