1. HP drain is a bit high for the easiest difficulty, set HP drain 3

1. 01:17:897 (2) - The shape of this slider is a bit offscreen, it can be hided by the some lifebar.
2. 03:28:727 (2) - Move this circle 1/4 earlier to follow the drum ?
3. 03:29:483 (4) - Move this circle 1/4 earlier to follow the drum ?
   
   SPOILER

   
4. 03:55:699 (1,2,3,4) - This pattern is kinda boring because of (3) and (4) who are exactly the same pattern as (1) and (2), so change them ?

Soul-less wrote:

只看过DC动画的说~~

[General]
- (Very minor issue) Resnap all notes后系统要求重save。

[Sakura]
- 应该都Ok。

[Yume]
- 01:19:662 (1,2,3) - 建议把它们排成下面的样子？比较没那么单调。把(1),(2),(3)贴得更进一点也ok，下面的图只是我随手调的。 >_<
还行吧...感觉一般单调 先这样吧.
- 01:35:291 (1,2,3,4) - 这里的clap法，考虑改成 0 1 1 0 0 1 1 1? 更喜欢现在的下法
- 02:22:178 和 02:23:186 - 考虑这俩白线加拍？ 若有加也加上whistle吧。加不加都一样吧 我也忘了我为什么没加了..
- 03:12:089 (1) - 感觉不需要clap。
- 03:13:098 (5) - 感觉slider头不需要clap。 感觉都需要 而且发现少加一个..
- 03:12:089 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 才发现到是kiai同部分，就考虑下以上的建议吧？(clap 0 1 1 0 0 1 1 1) 不要
- 03:42:843 (2) - 考虑把clap移去slider尾？还是头好听
- 04:17:126 (4) - slider头少了clap？嗯 失误呢
- 04:19:647 (1,2,3,4) - deja vu，考虑以上意见。 >_<

My map also sucks. :X
送星闪人~

1. HP drain is a bit high for the easiest difficulty, set HP drain 3

1. 01:17:897 (2) - The shape of this slider is a bit offscreen, it can be hided by the some lifebar.ok changed the slider shape
2. 03:28:727 (2) - Move this circle 1/4 earlier to follow the drum ?
3. 03:29:483 (4) - Move this circle 1/4 earlier to follow the drum ? No I prefer mine.
   
   SPOILER

   
4. 03:55:699 (1,2,3,4) - This pattern is kinda boring because of (3) and (4) who are exactly the same pattern as (1) and (2), so change them ?

1. Map an Easy ? It would make the mapset better...
2. I don't see the point of using custom difficulty names. They don't really make sense whatsoever (there's absolutely no link between sakura and yume)... So you might as well go for the standard ones.
3. Source should be Da Capo II and DCII should go in the tags.

1. Hitsounds are rather low, especially that custom clap.
2. AR is too fast for the easiest diff of the mapset and for a Normal diff. The song being calm, I'd suggest you use a slower AR matching the OD.
3. 01:14:116 (2,3) - This placement might be misleading for a new player, maybe change the slider direction ?
4. 01:48:903 (1) - Clap on the first beat ?
5. 02:59:485 (4,5) - The placement might be misleading here again... Change (5)'s direction ?

Odaril wrote:

Please reply to this mod post saying what you didn't fix (and what you did) and why. Remember these are all suggestions.
Also, if you have any question, feel free to ask me in-game

General

1. Map an Easy ? It would make the mapset better... I don't think this still need a easy.. if I map an easy then it must be below 2 stars...really don't want to do that
2. I don't see the point of using custom difficulty names. They don't really make sense whatsoever (there's absolutely no link between sakura and yume)... So you might as well go for the standard ones. OK then..changed to normal and hard.
3. Source should be Da Capo II and DCII should go in the tags.I don't think so.. some ranked map have the same source with this song and I am just using their sources, I think it is ok.

Sakura

1. Hitsounds are rather low, especially that custom clap. I think it is ok? maybe this depends on different computers, seems nobody else complain about this. So just keeping the volumn for now.
2. AR is too fast for the easiest diff of the mapset and for a Normal diff. The song being calm, I'd suggest you use a slower AR matching the OD. OK then.. AR-1
3. 01:14:116 (2,3) - This placement might be misleading for a new player, maybe change the slider direction ?ok I change it~
4. 01:48:903 (1) - Clap on the first beat ? oops..missing clap
5. 02:59:485 (4,5) - The placement might be misleading here again... Change (5)'s direction ?Ok fixed this~

Yume
seems fine

-Lennox- wrote:

Hey There~


[General]

Well there isn't any kind of storyboard so delete the .osb file and full sub. (I know BAT's and MAT's doesnt cares about that but why not?) ...I had deleted the osb file for over a thousand times... why it come out after I submit everytime..

[Normal]

01:19:284 (1,1) - Since this it the easyiest diff i highly suggest you to remove the beat after the spinner here. It's hard for newbies to reach the note after the spinner. It is really weird to remove this beat. I just move it near the center of the screen.
01:25:460 (1,2) - Yea thats the easiest diff right? Remove that sliders they'r to confusing for new players.
01:41:593 (1,2) - ^
03:02:258 (1,2) - ^
03:08:308 (1,2,3) - ^
03:18:391 (1,2) - ^
04:09:816 (1,2) - ^
04:25:949 (1,2) - ^

Don't ignore those sliders! They are really hard for newbies. Thank you so much for warning about this. But I really can't agree with this. Even though I have only 2 diffs in this map, but this is still a normal, not a easy... not too hard for a new player to play... If I really have to fix this, then I think I can't use some other sliders like this :01:46:382 (3,4). So I really want to keep is, even there are no reasons for me to explain why I did so...really sorry


[Hard]

04:04:774 (1,2,3,4) - Hmm could have a higher spacing. ok I always want to jump this one..



Pls don't ignore those sliders in normal. .......really sorry. I don't know what else to say..I will try to coming up with some new patterns.

Great song! Star

-Sekai- wrote:

ok again this random mod :3

[Normal]
00:54:958 (4) - new combo
01:33:274 (4) - ^
01:36:803 (4) - ^
01:37:307 (1) - remove the new combo
01:38:820 (5) - new combo
02:11:590 (4) - ^
02:29:236 (6) - ^
02:30:244 (1) - remove the new combo
02:31:757 (6) - new combo
02:39:571 (3) - ^
02:59:485 (4) - ^
03:16:375 (5) - ^
04:07:799 (5) - ^
04:21:663 (1) - remove the new combo
04:23:176 (8) - new combo

[Hard]
01:22:939 (5) - new combo
01:27:476 (5) - ^
01:37:055 (4) - ^
01:37:307 (1) - remove the new combo
01:39:072 (6) - new combo
01:43:609 (6) - ^
02:28:480 (5) - ^
03:00:242 (6) - ^
03:27:466 (6) - ^
03:28:223 (1) - remove the new combo
04:00:741 (4) - new combo
04:11:328 (7) - ^

done nice map
no star i already stared it

fixed some of these thx sekai~

Miu Matsuoka wrote:

[Normal]
Nothing picky for me.

[Hard]
00:44:371 (8,1) - Weird I think it's ok.
01:44:114 (8) - x:424 y:136? (To make the 3 notes straight)fixed
02:12:599 (6) - Make the points like this? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/107658
02:13:355 (8) - ^ http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/107659 nah..It seems ugly for me.I kinda like mine.
02:29:740 (10) - Weird placing... Suggestion: Rearrange (10) or change (9,10) into a sliderI like this.
03:13:098 (5) - Weird snapping again x_x seems good for me.
03:28:601 - Put a note here? (To follow the sound of the bass)
03:29:357 - ^No it sounds weird.
04:19:647 (1) - Weird snapping Think it is ok.

Great, star!

Sakura Hana wrote:

[General]
Arent you gonna include another difficulty? Not necessary I think~ The difficulty flow is fine
03:47:507 - Make this section louder, the song goes softer true, but your hitsound volume goes WAAAY too low. Really...Then volumn +10~

[Hard]
You need to use louder hitsounds they feel way too soft. I asked some of my friends to test this map, and they the think it is fine.So I'd rather keep this~(Actually I really enjoy this hitsound=v=)
Use a 2nd break, just like you did on [Normal] Ok I see. I deleted the spinner and some other notes to be a break time~I think it is OK now~

Nice and peaceful map~
Wow that kudosu was fast O_O

Sakura Hana wrote:

Alright then Bubbled~ love this nice and peaceful map Nymph <3

Sakura Hana wrote:

Congratulations Nymph san =)

KanaRin wrote:

Congratz>w</

Joshua Lost wrote:

魂淡妮姆芙~恭喜~

hoLysoup wrote:

Congrats Nymph~