p3n wrote:

Puh...trying my best to find something useful in a 100+ star map
Couldn't find anything gamebreaking or wrong...mostly cosmetic stuff.

[Easy]
01:10:286 (1) - add finish to starting point Added
That's pretty cool for an easy! Thanks!

[Normal]
01:11:572 (4) - slightly off, move to 425/216 Fixed
02:00:429 (2) - add whistle to starting point Added
02:46:072 (5,6) - maybe replace the two circles by a slider as it would better fit the difficulty of this map Great idea, but nope sorry~
02:50:357 (4) - slightly off, move to 248/44 Fixed
03:16:286 (7) - slightly off, move to 164/349 Fixed
03:32:572 (5) - slightly off, move 252/86 Fixed

[ignore's Hard]
01:01:287 (6) - ugly inconsistent gap between the sliders. To smoth the gap adjust ending point to 158/274 Fixed
01:02:358 (2) - adjust ending to fix the gap to 01:01:715 (1) (ending point of (2) to 292/289) Fixed
03:34:501 (1) - could be curved better around 03:34:287 (9) Fixed
great map!

[Insane]
03:36:214 (1) - adjust slider ending point to 176/314 to fix the ugly gap Fixed
04:03:429 (1) - ending point one grid left to 160/136, this way the start & end will not be on the same level but if you want to fix that, too, just rotate object by -1° and select "selection centre" as origin. Fixed


Hope this helps a bit! Yea you really did a helpful mod!

~star for a very good mapset

Thanks for moddin'!

MDuh wrote:

Hello

These Mod Entries Means that It is seen while playtesting the map (not in editor)

[EASY]
Nothing that catches my eye
nice diff

[NORMAL]
01:15:000 (1) - Remove NC New combos must be applied when changing slider velocity
01:16:714 (2) - NC nope

[Ignore's Hard]
-Move the last timing point a little before the end of the slider fixed
I might say, 13m but the diff has no traps whatsoever
nice map, 13m in 1 playthrough ;o

[INSANE]
00:53:357 (2) - - Reduce Spacing, always missing or getting 50's there that's just a little jump trick, so i'll keep it

starred

HakuNoKaemi wrote:

[General]
Use this hitsounds
[attachment=0:ecaf6]20287 Kagamine Rin - Kokoro.rar[/attachment:ecaf6] ( a Bass-Hit and a Snare, perfectly usable in that map )
Hmm, I don't think it suit. But still thanks for suggesting~

[Easy]

SPOILER

00:15:429 (4) - Finish at the Start Added
00:20:786 (1) - Finish Added
00:51:000 (2) - Clap
00:52:714 (4) - ^
00:55:286 (2) - ^
01:04:714 (2) - ^
01:05:143 (3) - Clap at 1st repeat
01:06:857 (1) - ^
01:09:857 (3) - ^
01:10:286 (1) - ^
01:13:714 (1) - ^
01:16:714 (2) - Clap
01:20:143 (3) - ^
01:23:572 (3) - ^
01:27:000 (3) - ^ Well, I won't change all these whistles into claps, I will keep whistle instead
Well, control the other spot of Snares and Cymbals of the map...and insert them Fixed some

[Normal]

SPOILER

01:02:143 (2) - Clap
01:03:000 (4) - ^
01:05:572 (2) - ^
01:06:429 (5) - ^
01:06:857 (1) - ^ at the end
01:09:000 (5) - ^ at the start
01:09:857 (6) - ^
01:10:286 (1) - ^ at the end
01:11:572 (4) - ^
01:11:786 (5) - ^ at the end
01:13:714 (1) - ^ at the end
01:15:000 (1) - ^ at the start
01:16:714 (2) - ^
01:17:572 (4) - ^ at the start
... do continue with that pattern and control if you did insert the claps in the rest of the map..
Fixed some of them

[Insane]
You didn't remember to insert some hitsound like the two other diffs (like 00:15:429 (1) - here a Finish)

Perfect mapping, only some little forgetfulness in the Hitsounds
You deserve to have this ranked (it deserve Kudosu Star :3)

I will do another post for the compressed skin (will optimize the skin :3)

Thanks for compressed skin, applied to map, thanks for helping!

lkp wrote:

Don't be mind that xD
Just saying DD

Sakura Hana wrote:

Ahh the memories from wmfcris's cantonese version of this song... i really love it

[Skin] All fixed
Your hit-x images are off-center.
soft-sliderslide.wav is 0 bytes, this can cause problems with certain audio cards, i recommend you use the silence.wav from the Custom Hitsound Library

[General]
Most of your diffs have a break at the same spot at the start, and section-pass/fail will cover the message about Lyrics on 00:30:429 when playing. Trying to find a solution now
I'm aware with your problems with the thumbnail and your posts on Help & Support so i won't comment over that, if possible i'll try to get someone to fix it, but can't promise anything. Thanks!
For all diffs: 01:34:072 I recommend putting a spinner here, seems to fit the acceleration for the song. I'll just add into ignorethis's diff since for Easy and Normal, notes seemed to be too soon after the spinner, and I want to keep those notes in Insane

[ignore's Hard]
02:54:858 (1) - Hard to see this approach circle. Fixed after deleting the part listed below
You should add another break in the 2nd half of the map, you have 2:30 without a break right now. Deleted 02:44:572 - 02:57:857

Oh hey pretty good map, i like it <3 Thanks alot for moddin'!

deohome123 wrote:

Star!

ziin wrote:

To fix preview image:

back up your map elsewhere.
Delete all files. make a new difficulty with one note and no background then full submit.
Repeat adding in the background you want. Clear cache in between reloads. If this doesn't work, or you have already tried it, oh well. Not much we can do about it. Perhaps changing the name too will work.

[skin]
default hitbursts If you just want to use the default, why even bother including them? Hitbursts are one of the most annoying things, so most people have their own skin which uses custom ones. Oops
fruit-plate.png is unnecessary Deleted
you have 2 fail-backgrounds Oooops, deleted the .png one
spinner background: Right now the vomit color is bleeding over the pictures. Could you make it slightly smaller than the pictures? also could you make it 1024x692 and with a black background? It looks bad because it snaps to black rather than fade to black.
SkinPreference:Default is one of the dumbest things you can do. If you really want to do it, then delete all the duplicated skin files in the folder, but I'll hate you forever. I can't customize the default skin. It would be nicer to find a decent vocaloid skin and use that, so we can at least customize it. This had been pointed out before, but due to my stupidity in mapping, I've just changed the SkinPreference of one difficulty, now this is fixed.

[storyboard]
When you use 640x480 images, only use "centre" and bring them in at 320,240. Otherwise you won't cover all the edges. It's an error in osu. Coincidentally, the same thing happens on the default spinner-background, which is why you should use 1024x692 rather than the default 1023.
34286 - start fading out here.

[easy]
01:34:286 (1,2) - This feels weird to map in easy. There's no clear beat (it's a drumroll) and this is just after a break and silence, so I lost track of the actual beat. You're right, deleted

[normal]
You've done a great deal to make the map look as good as possible, so I thought I'd point this out:
01:03:429 (1,2,3) - These don't stack perfectly: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/105753 osu! stacks the notes like that and I have no idea how to fix it, but I've rearranged the objects instead

[ignore this mod] Fixed
02:42:858 (1) - Normally your sliders are the perfect lazy-man sliders (not perfect but don't look bad), but this one really stood out as ugly.

[insane]
00:57:000 (2) - I don't think the jump fits, but at least space them evenly Spaced evenly
01:06:000 (7,8,9) - Anti jumps This is not even a jump D:
01:34:072 (1,2,3) - don't map this Deleted
01:42:000 (5,6) - fyi these are groups of 4 in the music, I don't think there would be a problem with putting a note on the last blue tick on an insane with a jump in the middle. Nah
01:49:714 (5) - This doesn't really fit the rest of the song's sliders, but okay. Never mind~
02:23:143 (2,3,4,5) - These feel more like jumps to me. Accelerated spacing is for increases in intensity Fixed
02:31:072 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2) - this would be better to put accelerated spacing Nope
03:26:572 (9) - don't cover up repeating sliders (another reason I hate these hitbursts), and this is just a weird place to put a 2x repeat. Ah I see your point but I think this is reasonable in an Insane difficulty
03:21:857 (4,5,6) - see [normal] Rearranged notes
03:33:429 (10,11) - switch these to better match vocals? This is okay
03:46:929 (4,1) - bad spacing Fixed

Very nice, only a few real errors.

HakuNoKaemi wrote:

ah, to correct uncorrect stacking, just manually stack.
In the sense that you use a distance Snap of 0.1x (or simply while pressing Ctrl) while pressing Shift to place them

Magical Pokie wrote:

Ok

這歌有PV的………… 我知道 但我不想add lol
Easy
還有黃線（預覽)後面一點可以嗎 不了
02:27:429 (2) - 兩根綠線似乎沒用 刪除了
03:10:286 (1) - 這裡我很不喜歡，用softl^^^ 恩

Norma
00:50:143 (6,7,8) - New combo 恩
01:15:000 (1) - 0.5x改成0.75並且把長度改了~ 本來就是0.75x....
這normal做的出奇的好…… 謝了
別忘了給kudol

Miu Matsuoka wrote:

ziin wrote:

[skin]
default hitbursts If you just want to use the default, why even bother including them? Hitbursts are one of the most annoying things, so most people have their own skin which uses custom ones. Oops They're still there

[storyboard]
When you use 640x480 images, only use "centre" and bring them in at 320,240. Otherwise you won't cover all the edges. It's an error in osu. still not fixed, you may need to do full submit

Sprite,Background,Centre,"blk.jpg",320,240

[normal]
You've done a great deal to make the map look as good as possible, so I thought I'd point this out:
01:03:429 (1,2,3) - These don't stack perfectly: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/105753 osu! stacks the notes like that and I have no idea how to fix it You put the end of the slider in the exact center. If you have notes stacked on top of each other, the top notes are moved up and left. If there is a stacked slider, the notes under it will be moved down and right instead. Just make sure your sliders are as close to perfect as possible, and it will do fine: how to make delicious sliders.

[insane]
01:06:000 (7,8,9) - Anti jumps This is not even a jump D: Yes, it's an anti-jump, meaning the spacing is smaller than normal (0.5x rather than 1.0x)
03:26:572 (9) - don't cover up repeating sliders (another reason I hate these hitbursts), and this is just a weird place to put a 2x repeat. Ah I see your point but I think this is reasonable in an Insane difficulty I really do feel strongly about covering up the repeat, regardless of the difficulty level

ziin wrote:

blahblahblah...

Cirno wrote:

I adore you for your determination Miu ;_;
(starred long long ago, so sad I don't have any kds left...)

Why isn't this ranked already

Haneii wrote:

Pretty skin and maps <3

Hopefully this gets bubbled and ranked soon!

First ranked mapset go! o/



~Twinkle twinkle little star~

Sakura Hana wrote:

Weeeell this seems pretty much ready however in wmf's taiko the katsus (blue notes) keep getting overwhelmed by the mp3 volume i'd highly recommend using louder hitsounds.
No kudosu

Miu Matsuoka wrote:

There isn't even a star from any BAT... :cry:

Garven wrote:

Miu Matsuoka wrote:

There isn't even a star from any BAT...

Just sayin' q:

Sakura Hana wrote:

Weeeell this seems pretty much ready

James2250 wrote:

Hey I remember modding this ages ago~

-There is something odd with your custom spinner at the moment, when you first go on it while playing it shows everything being white and then turns to black 1 second later. I would experiment with that for a while and see if it can be fixed
-It might just be me but that piece of hair on the right side of the comboburst looks really strange atm (maybe because how it is cut?) http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/122372 There are some parts that could be cut slightly more if you look at it carefully as well
-Make sure your fail-background is PNG or else it wont show up (it is currently JPEG)

Insane:
03:26:357 (7,8,9) - move these around so the repeat isn't hidden by the previous hitbursts

Everything else looks good, call me back after fixes and I should be able to rank

Beuchi-chan wrote:

I'm sorry but this bugs me too much

Your section-pass image has this... ugly white thing around what it's supposed to be a heart silhouette:

SPOILER

I tried to fix it and this is the result, you're free to use it or not~
[attachment=0:5a8af]section-pass.png[/attachment:5a8af]

Nice map! Good luck with getting it ranked, you're very close to it

James2250 wrote:

Looks like everything has been fixed nicely

Only some minor fixes and everything else looks good (quickly added Vocaloid to the tags)

Ranked~

Thanks James2250!
ilu <3

karenying wrote:

Congrats 靚仔

Al-Azif wrote:

good job well done
勾起很多回憶呢

Thanks guys and I want to thank everybody who helped me with my beatmap!