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kozato - 45nen no Yukizakura

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Takos
678 posts
Joined May 2010
Topic Starter
Takos
>swish, Suzully, Komeiji Yuki
Thank you for star ><

>Lunet
お願いします!

>soulfear

soulfear wrote:

Sorry, my Chinese is bad so I am replying in English.
对不起，我的中文不好，所以我说英文。
這歌一點也不適合閃.
從頭到尾幾乎在閃...真的很不合適...
Removed Kiai Time
你沒設置歌的預覽點.
I set it, although it doesn't make a big difference because the preview point is from the beginning.
沒用SB的話把目錄下的.OSB文件刪了重新完整上傳次.
Removed, I don't know why osu keeps adding this...
另外你要不要VEDIO.
Video...? The original BMS does not have video.
還有我這有個音質好點的MP3不知道你要替換不.
It will be great if you can give me a higher quality mp3.
Thank you~
谢谢了！
soulfear
947 posts
Joined January 2010
soulfear
OFFSET往前提一條大白線比較好.
MP3
http://u.115.com/file/dnavuer3
BGA VIDEO的OFFSET是-6000ms,遊戲里的EDIT設置不了-6000ms,你用記事本打開.OSU文件設置
http://u.115.com/file/clia6f94
還有45為啥不用日文...用日文好吧...這麼看有點彆扭,BMS題目也是日文的
Takos
678 posts
Joined May 2010
Topic Starter
Takos

soulfear wrote:

OFFSET往前提一條大白線比較好. Fixed~
MP3
http://u.115.com/file/dnavuer3 谢谢！
BGA VIDEO的OFFSET是-6000ms,遊戲里的EDIT設置不了-6000ms,你用記事本打開.OSU文件設置
http://u.115.com/file/clia6f94 好的...
還有45為啥不用日文...用日文好吧...這麼看有點彆扭,BMS題目也是日文的
I think it is fine... but I'll add "Shijugonen" and "Yonjugonen"(this is not the actual reading, but to make stuff more convenient) to the tags so it will be easier to search. Thank you for pointing this out.
Suzully
osu! Alumni
2,446 posts
Joined July 2010
Suzully

Takos wrote:

soulfear wrote:

OFFSET往前提一條大白線比較好. Fixed~
MP3
http://u.115.com/file/dnavuer3 谢谢！
BGA VIDEO的OFFSET是-6000ms,遊戲里的EDIT設置不了-6000ms,你用記事本打開.OSU文件設置
http://u.115.com/file/clia6f94 好的...
還有45為啥不用日文...用日文好吧...這麼看有點彆扭,BMS題目也是日文的
I think it is fine... but I'll add "Shijugonen" and "Yonjugonen"(this is not the actual reading, but to make stuff more convenient) to the tags so it will be easier to search. Thank you for pointing this out.
公式で配布されている音源をダウンロードした際に同梱されているテキストによると
読みは”しじゅうごねんのゆきざくら”みたいですよ～
Takos
678 posts
Joined May 2010
Topic Starter
Takos

Suzully wrote:

公式で配布されている音源をダウンロードした際に同梱されているテキストによると
読みは”しじゅうごねんのゆきざくら”みたいですよ～
検索の利便性を考えて"yonjugo"もタグにいれてみることにしました
soulfear
947 posts
Joined January 2010
soulfear

給你張BMS MISS時的圖片,你可以設置OSU X的時候出現,會設置么? :lol:
當然不用也沒關係
banvi
1,793 posts
Joined June 2009
banvi
faito~ >w</
S o r d a
1,576 posts
Joined July 2009
S o r d a
~_~
Orgol
493 posts
Joined July 2010
Orgol
:o

Download: kozato - 45nen no Yukizakura (Takos) [Lunet].osu
Thite
1,043 posts
Joined April 2010
Thite
:)
banvi
1,793 posts
Joined June 2009
banvi
[General]
audio lead-in 2s
全diff全体的にhitsoundが少なすぎると思いました(特に全く入れてないところは少しでも入れるといいかもです)

[Easy]
00:07:421 (3) (4)と平行にする
00:13:774 (3) new combo?
01:40:598 (1) 実際spinnerが終わる途中に音量5%にしているため、ボーナス音が途中で小さくなることになるので緑線は01:42:715に置くことを推奨
01:55:421 (3) new combo?

[S o r d a's Normal]
00:22:245 (7) こういう長いsilderは対称的に整形したほうがいいかも
00:34:951 (n) add note?
01:24:715 (4) 後ろの方ちょっと傾けてるのはわざとでしょうか？
01:58:245 (5,1) uh... spacing too far for normal...
02:15:539 (1) spinnerに変えた方がいいかも（変えたくなければ後ろの方の緑線消してください）

[Hard]
HP -1 ?
00:38:127 (9,10) spacing

[Lunet]
00:02:127 (8) new combo?
00:04:245 (7) ^
00:06:362 (10) ^ (特にコレcombo数長い）
00:08:480 (10) ^
00:10:598 (8) ^
00:14:833 (10) ^
00:16:951 (10) ^
00:25:421 (10) ^
00:28:245 (6) Ctrl + R ?
00:33:892 (10) new combo?
00:51:362 (8) ^
00:56:833 (9) ^
00:57:362 (14) ^
01:48:186 (14) ^
01:52:245 (8) ^
02:15:539 (1) sildertickが聞こえないように音量下げたほうがいいかもです
beautiful~

ファイトー！good luck (:
(すでに☆投げてましたｗ)
Takos
678 posts
Joined May 2010
Topic Starter
Takos

banvi wrote:

[General]
audio lead-in 2s fixed
全diff全体的にhitsoundが少なすぎると思いました(特に全く入れてないところは少しでも入れるといいかもです) 考えてみます

[Easy]
00:07:421 (3) (4)と平行にする fixed
00:13:774 (3) new combo? fixed
01:40:598 (1) 実際spinnerが終わる途中に音量5%にしているため、ボーナス音が途中で小さくなることになるので緑線は01:42:715に置くことを推奨 fixed
01:55:421 (3) new combo? fixed

[Hard]
HP -1 ? ok
00:38:127 (9,10) spacing fixed

ファイトー！good luck (:
(すでに☆投げてましたｗ)
Thank you for mod!
S o r d a
1,576 posts
Joined July 2009
S o r d a

banvi wrote:

[S o r d a's Normal]
00:22:245 (7) こういう長いsilderは対称的に整形したほうがいいかも silder Change
00:34:951 (n) add note? Fix
01:24:715 (4) 後ろの方ちょっと傾けてるのはわざとでしょうか？スライダーの形を変えてみました
01:58:245 (5,1) uh... spacing too far for normal...oops,Fixed
02:15:539 (1) spinnerに変えた方がいいかも（変えたくなければ後ろの方の緑線消してください）added spinner
Thanks for mod banvi

Download: kozato - 45nen no Yukizakura (Takos) [S o r d a's Normal].osu
Last edited by S o r d a , edited 1 time in total.
Orgol
493 posts
Joined July 2010
Orgol

banvi wrote:

[General]
全diff全体的にhitsoundが少なすぎると思いました(特に全く入れてないところは少しでも入れるといいかもです) add whistle... :o

[Lunet]
00:02:127 (8) new combo?
00:04:245 (7) ^
00:06:362 (10) ^ (特にコレcombo数長い）
00:08:480 (10) ^
00:10:598 (8) ^
00:14:833 (10) ^
00:16:951 (10) ^
00:25:421 (10) ^
00:28:245 (6) Ctrl + R ?
00:33:892 (10) new combo?
00:51:362 (8) ^
00:56:833 (9) ^
00:57:362 (14) ^
01:48:186 (14) ^
01:52:245 (8) ^
02:15:539 (1) sildertickが聞こえないように音量下げたほうがいいかもです change to 5%
beautiful~ arigatooo

All fixed~
Thank you for modding :P

Download: kozato - 45nen no Yukizakura (Takos) [Lunet].osu
Takos
678 posts
Joined May 2010
Topic Starter
Takos
All maps updated~
soulfear
947 posts
Joined January 2010
soulfear
其他難度你沒指定VIDEO.
Takos
678 posts
Joined May 2010
Topic Starter
Takos

soulfear wrote:

其他難度你沒指定VIDEO.
什么难度没指定VIDEO?? 我想没有问题...
It works fine on my osu, and works well on my friend's osu as well...
Maybe re-downloading will fix it?
DeadAlready
1,575 posts
Joined August 2008
DeadAlready
star~ :P
_Kiva
981 posts
Joined January 2010
_Kiva
:) :)
MODDING IN PROGRESS
kozato is good.

Edit 1 :
Change kozato to Kozato .. as me and Mystica both used "Kozato"

Edit 2:
use "45Nen no Yukizakura" maybe batter?
Last edited by _Kiva , edited 1 time in total.
Takos
678 posts
Joined May 2010
Topic Starter
Takos
Updated [Hard], Alace did a little mod for that diff.
Thank you~

>Thite, quintitem
Thank you for star!

>_Kiva
Thank you~
Looking forward to your mod
kozato is awesome XD
Takos
678 posts
Joined May 2010
Topic Starter
Takos

_Kiva wrote:

:) :)
Edit 1 :
Change kozato to Kozato .. as me and Mystica both used "Kozato"
No change D:
I understand your point, to be consistent with other beatmaps makes users identify the artist easily
However, I don't want to change this because his official BMS name is "kozato" ...
I searched for details to find that his name is "kozato yuzuki"(雪月こざと)
kozato_snow is his id on twitter... so I believe "Kozato Snow" is inaccurate, but it's fine for you to use it because Mystica has his beatmap ranked ;)

Edit 2:
use "45Nen no Yukizakura" maybe batter?
No change
hmm... since capital letters should be used for the leading character to emphasize that word, I think it is not appropriate to change the 'n' to an 'N'.
You wouldn't say "1St" or "2Nd" right?
Thank you for the suggestions~ :D
I carefully thought about it, but I decided not to change it because I wanted to be accurate, and wanted to show respect to the artist
Mystica
798 posts
Joined January 2010
Mystica
Actually i've talked this map with kiva..So I decided to do a mod on this map..
Some suggestion.

[General]
About the artist I think It's important to search it..May many users search "kozako" to find maps...So it may not a big problem with the artist.

[Easy]
Nothing wrong...But may use more whistle to make it more interesting..

[Sorda]
00:30:009 this patten may set as this....the original sounds not good..
SPOILER
00:43:421 why this following patten has such a low volume....may up 10~15%
01:39:539 add whistle
02:03:892 cancel the slider whistle
OD-1

[Hard]
00:03:186 new combo
00:13:774 cancel the slide whistle
00:43:421 this follow two sliders may revise three times plays more suitable..When I play this patten I got break three times
SPOILER
00:52:951 cancel the slider whistle
00:54:716 (9) - ^
00:56:127 (2) - ^
00:57:186 (4) - ^
00:58:598 (7) - ^
and so many.....
I don't like slider-whistle...Sorry about it.
AR+1

[Lunet]
fulled with streams.......some not fix this map....
So good luck.

.when I mod it something strange happend.....Here is
SPOILER
Hope ranked soon...Good luck.
If you need further modding...ask me in-game
Orgol
493 posts
Joined July 2010
Orgol

Mystica wrote:

[Lunet]
fulled with streams.......some not fix this map....
So good luck.
oh...谢谢~
S o r d a
1,576 posts
Joined July 2009
S o r d a

Mystica wrote:

[Sorda]
00:30:009 this patten may set as this....the original sounds not good..
SPOILER
00:43:421 why this following patten has such a low volume....may up 10~15%
01:39:539 add whistle
02:03:892 cancel the slider whistle
OD-1
OD-1 not fix
other fix thanks for mod Mystica

Download: kozato - 45nen no Yukizakura (Takos) [S o r d a's Normal].osu
Takos
678 posts
Joined May 2010
Topic Starter
Takos

Mystica wrote:

[General]
About the artist I think It's important to search it..May many users search "kozako" to find maps...So it may not a big problem with the artist. Yup, shouldn't be a problem.

[Easy]
Nothing wrong...But may use more whistle to make it more interesting.. Added some whistles

[Hard]
00:03:186 new combo
00:13:774 cancel the slide whistle
00:43:421 this follow two sliders may revise three times plays more suitable..When I play this patten I got break three times I'm not sure what you mean here, I'll ask you in-game or you can reply here.
SPOILER
00:52:951 cancel the slider whistle
00:54:716 (9) - ^
00:56:127 (2) - ^
00:57:186 (4) - ^
00:58:598 (7) - ^
and so many.....
I don't like slider-whistle...Sorry about it.
AR+1 I kind of want this diff. to be more relaxing, so no.
All fixed except for AR and the slider


.when I mod it something strange happend.....Here is
SPOILER
Hope ranked soon...Good luck.
If you need further modding...ask me in-game
Thank you for modding Mystica!
I'll work on this hard until it gets ranked XD
amritan
5 posts
Joined November 2010
amritan
:)
Takos
678 posts
Joined May 2010
Topic Starter
Takos

amrita___ wrote:

:)
Thank you for star!
wmfchris
osu! Alumni
5,072 posts
Joined March 2008
wmfchris
mod request, sorrrry for late

[Lunet]
00:01:774 (5,6,7,2) - they're not overlapped
00:03:362 (2) - up 1 lv4 grid
00:22:245 (1,2,3) - remove whistle?
00:26:127 (9~13) - a bit too load [no instrunments here in the music]? Make it softer~?
00:34:774 (x) - add one here?
00:51:892 (1~5) - uneven spacing?
01:51:892 (5,6,7,2) - not overlapped
02:12:362 (1,2,3,4,5) - make this into a regular shape like next combo?

it would be much better if there're more sound variations and more hitsounds~

[Hard]
00:06:009 (3,5) - whistle
00:22:068 (x) - add a note?
00:30:539 (x) - ^
00:33:892 (8,9,10) - place them horizontally? (10)'s position is really odd. Also 3 1/8s maybe too hard for a [Hard]?
00:42:362 (4,5,6) - ^, (5) has extra tick, remove.
01:59:127 (1) - one more tick?

also lacks hitsound orz

[Normal]
00:13:774 (1,2) - whistle at ending?
00:44:127 (3,4) - (3) down 1 grid, (4) left 1 grid
00:14:833 (2) - whislte here?
01:21:951 (x) - break
01:30:009 (1) - left 1 grid to make it symmetrical

For me, it generally lacks of hitsounds and the diffs simply follows the instruments =w=
Try to make variations by hitsounds and more special patterns?
_Kiva could help as he make a lot of stuffs like this xD
Takos
678 posts
Joined May 2010
Topic Starter
Takos
>wmfchris
Thanks for mod ><
Since I moved to Japan, I don't have my main pc atm.
I will fix those when I get access to osu.
Komeiji Yuki
1,264 posts
Joined March 2010
Komeiji Yuki

Takos wrote:

>wmfchris
Thanks for mod ><
Since I moved to Japan, I don't have my main pc atm.
I will fix those when I get access to osu.
:O

You have leaved HK to Japan because of vacation ?
_Kiva
981 posts
Joined January 2010
_Kiva
Suggestion
Have try these custom hitsounds,
Download: soft-custom.zip
Remember to reset the hitsound volume if use this.
Feel free to ask for hitsound help ~
S o r d a
1,576 posts
Joined July 2009
S o r d a

wmfchris wrote:

[Normal]
00:13:774 (1,2) - whistle at ending? Fix
00:44:127 (3,4) - (3) down 1 grid, (4) left 1 gridFix
00:14:833 (2) - whislte here?Fix
01:21:951 (x) - breakno
01:30:009 (1) - left 1 grid to make it symmetricalfix but symmetrical not fix
thanks for mod wmf

Download: kozato - 45nen no Yukizakura (Takos) [S o r d a's Normal].osu
Takos
678 posts
Joined May 2010
Topic Starter
Takos
updated [S o r d a's Normal]
I tried fixing some stuff for [Hard] but my low-spec pc cant play this so I'll have to wait for my pc... TAT

>_Kiva
I will try those hitsounds later, thanks a lot

>Komeiji Yuki
I moved to Japan
knifeget
15 posts
Joined April 2009
knifeget
星どん。
Takos
678 posts
Joined May 2010
Topic Starter
Takos

knifeget wrote:

星どん。
どん！Thanks XD
Norn_NNN
203 posts
Joined February 2011
Norn_NNN
配置がおもしろい :)
grvyd
183 posts
Joined March 2010
grvyd
drrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr
Takos
678 posts
Joined May 2010
Topic Starter
Takos
>Norn_NNN, flatps
arigato- ><
tsuka
1,499 posts
Joined May 2009
tsuka
哈哈 四十五年雪樱
rui
1,388 posts
Joined February 2009
rui
nice map :)
Takos
678 posts
Joined May 2010
Topic Starter
Takos
>tsuka, rui
Thank you for support~ :D
Rigeru_old
426 posts
Joined January 2009
Rigeru_old
:oops:
thatday
5 posts
Joined June 2008
thatday
很不錯的歌曲

不過背景蠻朦朧的.....糊糊的

另外CTB小跳有點多XD 難度還算有點難

不過在skin蠻用心的 :)
Yumeko Yuki
135 posts
Joined December 2010
Yumeko Yuki
~~很不错啊 加油 ;)
Takos
678 posts
Joined May 2010
Topic Starter
Takos
>Rigeru, thatday, Yumeko Yuki
Thank you, xiexie for star

added custom hitsound, S o r d a and Lunet, please update hitsound
_Kiva
981 posts
Joined January 2010
_Kiva
:P
i know it will be better with hit sounds
[any KD for previous post with hit sound pack
Takos
678 posts
Joined May 2010
Topic Starter
Takos

_Kiva wrote:

:P
i know it will be better with hit sounds
[any KD for previous post with hit sound pack
lol ok.
calm down yo
Yumeko Yuki
135 posts
Joined December 2010
Yumeko Yuki
问下还可不可以接一个guestdiff
太喜欢这首歌了>"<
如果可以的话近期应该就能完成了

噢对了 难度的话大概是I
实在不行就别传进去了 不过我还是会做的 :)
Takos
678 posts
Joined May 2010
Topic Starter
Takos

Yumeko Yuki wrote:

问下还可不可以接一个guestdiff
太喜欢这首歌了>"<
如果可以的话近期应该就能完成了

噢对了 难度的话大概是I
实在不行就别传进去了 不过我还是会做的 :)
对不起，我已经有四个难度...
你可以做难度，可是无法加入这个mapset...
但是会放到creator's message :)
Yumeko Yuki
135 posts
Joined December 2010
Yumeko Yuki
嗯 那好吧 做我还是会做的...至于怎么处理就交给你吧= =(不过即使是我自己开坑也不一定rank的了
还有建议把soft-hitwhistle给删掉吧 没用到(而且也不合适)...而我觉得默认的whistle反而会比较合适...
具体可以参照下我的map(当然不放心的话可以先备份下
而且我的难度还没完成 预计明天(最晚后天)就能完成了..先放上来可以参考下音效(不过我感觉还不是很满意 :(
既然做不了GD了只能这样帮你们了.....
希望你能满意 :oops:

Download: kozato - 45nen no Yukizakura (Takos) [Yuki YukI].osu
Yumeko Yuki
135 posts
Joined December 2010
Yumeko Yuki
为了方便修改我自己上传了一个版本....
可以去参考一下看看
不过放心那个不会rank的啦XDDD
由于实在是太喜欢了~~
不过没经允许擅自用了skin如有困扰在此抱歉 :oops:(skin实在是太好看了XDD
dNextGen
4,688 posts
Joined May 2010
dNextGen
kozato <3

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wmfchris
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Takos
678 posts
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Takos
>Yumeko Yuki
对不起，我说中文说的很慢，我说英文...
your map looks nice, im sorry that i cant add you diff to this mapset...
I linked your map to my creator's message :)
tell me if you want me to edit anything there~
there aren't any problems with using the skin

>dNextGen
thanks for star~
Orgol
493 posts
Joined July 2010
Orgol
sorry for late :o

SPOILER
I'm ok if you want to change my map (hitsound etc.) :)

Download: kozato - 45nen no Yukizakura (Takos) [Lunet].osu
Takos
678 posts
Joined May 2010
Topic Starter
Takos

Lunet wrote:

sorry for late :o

SPOILER
I'm ok if you want to change my map (hitsound etc.) :)
updated~
Ryafuka
840 posts
Joined May 2010
Ryafuka
hi~ ></
from my modding queue :)

SPOILER
全て提案程度ですので気に入らないものがあったら無視してくださってかまいません :)


[General]
･LetterBox during breaksのチェックを外す
･KIAI TIMEがあったらもっと盛り上がって良いなと思いました :)


[Lunet]
Slider Tick Rateがこのdiffだけ0.5になっているので他のdiffと同じ1に変更
00:52:951 (7) - new comboを追加
01:06:362 (3,3) - 綺麗にstackしていません
01:39:539 (8) - new comboを追加
02:15:539 (1) - 終点を02:17:657まで伸ばす？ (他のdiffは全てそこで終わっていたので)


[Hard]
00:03:187 (7) - new comboを追加
00:33:892 (8) - ^
00:36:716 (5) - ^
00:42:363 (4) - ^
01:27:892 (7) - ^
01:53:304 (9) - ^


[S o r d a's Normal]
00:30:009 (7) - 終点のwhistleを削除？
02:12:362 (5) - new comboを追加


[Easy]
01:53:304 (2) - スライダーがまっすぐになっていません
nice song and mapset :)

プレイしていて楽しかったです！
gogo ranked!
star :)
Orgol
493 posts
Joined July 2010
Orgol

Ryafuka wrote:

[Lunet]
Slider Tick Rateがこのdiffだけ0.5になっているので他のdiffと同じ1に変更
00:52:951 (7) - new comboを追加
01:06:362 (3,3) - 綺麗にstackしていません
01:39:539 (8) - new comboを追加
02:15:539 (1) - 終点を02:17:657まで伸ばす？ (他のdiffは全てそこで終わっていたので)
All fixed thank you~
Kiai ha omakase simasu~

Download: kozato - 45nen no Yukizakura (Takos) [Lunet].osu
Takos
678 posts
Joined May 2010
Topic Starter
Takos

Ryafuka wrote:

hi~ ></
from my modding queue :)

SPOILER
全て提案程度ですので気に入らないものがあったら無視してくださってかまいません :)


[General]
･LetterBox during breaksのチェックを外す ok
･KIAI TIMEがあったらもっと盛り上がって良いなと思いました :) ちょっと考えてから決めます、ノートがぴかぴか光るのが曲の雰囲気に合うかどうかわからないので；ｗ；

[Hard]
00:03:187 (7) - new comboを追加
00:33:892 (8) - ^
00:36:716 (5) - ^
00:42:363 (4) - ^
01:27:892 (7) - ^
01:53:304 (9) - ^
All fixed

[S o r d a's Normal]
00:30:009 (7) - 終点のwhistleを削除？
02:12:362 (5) - new comboを追加
All fixed


[Easy]
01:53:304 (2) - スライダーがまっすぐになっていません
All fixed
nice song and mapset :)

プレイしていて楽しかったです！
gogo ranked!
star :)
modありがとうございました！
☆も嬉しいです
[CSGA]Ar3sgice
4,298 posts
Joined July 2011
[CSGA]Ar3sgice
Hi, modding here~ :)

[Easy]
01:28:951 (4) - move to (332,144) to line up with 3

[Normal]
00:20:127 (5) - this? http://up.ppy.sh/files/screenshot062-11.jpg
00:23:304 (8) - 1/1 slider, 1 reverse
00:30:009 (7) - 1 reverse, add a note at 00:30:715
00:47:657 (1,2) - bad shape 0.0
01:01:421 (2) - move to (272,248)
01:01:774 (3) - (160,288)
01:24:715 (4) - make it wiggle? = =

[Hard]
Good map~

[Lunet]
poinsettia?
00:12:539 (6) - stack with next 1
00:25:421 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - make it like this? http://up.ppy.sh/files/screenshot061-7.jpg even if I can't do them anyways
01:39:539 (8,9,10,11) - not perfect square jump
01:40:245 (12,13) - stack back with 10 and 9 ww
02:12:362 (1) - move to the right place

and star~ :)
al2e10
1,101 posts
Joined August 2008
al2e10
By AL2 queue --- Welcome again

--- Lunet ---
00:09:539 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Not a perfect STAR D: Just fix it
00:12:539 (6) - New combo (New distance) and so remove 00:12:715 (1)
00:20:127 (1,2,3) - Change it to (W>N>W>N>W>N) W= Wistle N= None
00:22:333 (2,3) - Remove finish plz. One is already enough.
00:26:480 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - (W>N>W>N...)
00:30:009 (6,7,8,9,10) - Choose one to put the finish... That noisy enough D:
夠了=[ 你可以跟你說... 之前kana都有用過這個finish, 我都跟他說過這個finish的用法
你要放finish的話一定要在別人不擦覺的情況下才放
因為這個finish特別的原固, 別人聽到就是你的失敗, 明白嗎?
viewtopic.php?f=14&t=52647&st=0&sk=t&sd=a&start=30
(請跟他"日文"一下我不懂 =w=)


[Hard]
00:29:304 (6-2nd) - Wistle 太突出, change it to clap or maybe 30%
00:47:657 (1) - Add finish
01:41:568 (X) - Remove timing section and change the spiner to clap is BETTER :D
話說, 可以的話我可以幫你做sound effect的... 都做得很好了 =]

[All]
Nice map but you can improve the sound effect. Coz this map is a "Just Music" song. And so the way you put the wistle and clap is the way you can give the fun to ppl. Thats all.
Goos luck and STAR.
Bobo_old
492 posts
Joined February 2011
Bobo_old
Hey there o/
Modded on request.

-General-

Kiai time should be the same on every diff, it's slightly longer in Sorda's Normal.
Also, I found the reverse arrow hard to read at times.

-Lunet-
Don't know what to say about this diff... it's... confusing...

00:32:833 (1) - Antijump, made me combo break D:<
00:42:362 (4,5,6) - Perhaps you could make this a repeat slider that faces to the right.
00:45:539 (1,2) - It's exactly the same as the combo before, why not rotate these a bit, just to put a little spin on it (no pun intended)
00:51:715 (5) - 1 grid to the right.
00:52:598 (5) - 3 grids to the right.
01:01:421 (4) - Ugly slider, try this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/199837
01:47:392 (6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - Not sexy enough, http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/199838
01:51:009 - Add a note, this breaks the flow.
01:58:951 (1) - This didn't look like a repeat slider when I tested this, how about interpreting a slider speed up so that the slider is longer and the repeat arrow is more visible.
02:03:892 (1) - NC
02:10:245 (1,2) - :3 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/199840

-Hard-

00:24:009 (4) - Take the endpoint and drag it up 2 grids.
00:47:127 (8,9,10) - :3 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/199843
01:39:539 (4) - Difficult jump.

-Normal-
Fix the Kiai.
Also, the sliders look rather ugly in general.

00:33:892 (6) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/199846
00:51:451 (7) - Face the slider downwards and stack.
01:04:245 (8) - Place it above and between (7) and (1).

Uhh, yeah the main issue is the slider art, try to make your sliders better looking.

-Easy-

01:07:245 (3) - Shorten to the white tick and add 1 slider repeat.

Uhhh yeah that's about it, Normal could use a bit of work.
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