Sorry for triple post, guys.
Long post incoming, I guess.
ゼロさんをもふもふよー♪

A not so clear detail here. Apparently, Zero's tail is really, really, REALLY fluffy. He however can't shake it himself? ("It's maybe tail, but he can't shake it himself." is what she told me)
そして風雲さんとキルナも従兄妹だったりする。それでキルナは月下とライバル関係にあるんだよね。でも月下ちゃんは風雲さんと恋仲で…んー?
THIS IS TOO INTERESTING, SOMEONE HELP ME UNDERSTAND THIS PLEASE D: I seriously need to know this! For some reason no matter how I translate it the first sentence in particular is too vague for me to understand D:
EDIT:
Zero and Fuun are cousins, and Fuun and Kiluna are cousins too. (Zero and Kiluna aren't siblings) Kiluna and Gekka are rivals, but Fuun loves Gekka..
Details check. Zero x Kiluna is still possible. Yey.
Now uh... my turn.
Get ready for bandwidth rape though. (I already resized this 50% ...)
First page:
Drew top, then lower left, then lower right.
Giving the character I made a bit more detail with the much expanded space. As you may have heard I used a mechanical pencil here and I felt how awesome it was.
For the lower-left pic I tried to make him sit down and... obviously it failed. Don't quite understand yet how the displacement of the angle works. I also made him a tad bit too tall and his vest kind of too short. I have no idea how to make him look like he's sitting down at all. His vest is also twisted, which is the most obvious fail in this one.
Lower-right. Failure even more. I was trying to do folded arms a bit too hard here, I guess. I also have no idea how to make the scarf look like it's actually wrapped around him, touching his body entirely. I was using a regular pencil here now btw (...Faber Castell No.2).
Guess there's nothing else so...
...Second page:
Left: I thought she'd be simple... until I got to the ribbons part, which made me lose my cool. I still don't know how proper facial expressions work either. Too tall and a lot of inconsistencies with the dress and there's just something incredibly wrong with the west and east side of the dress.
Right: I failed so hard here, no one would realize who this is. Lack of colors isn't helping either. Plus we've never seen him look like this yet. Missed an accessory, everything being too wide... it's horrible in general D: I have no idea how to do this oTL
Lower left: I was about to draw TCC before I had to be busy. Lol.