AsprikaQ wrote:

What a jump(a bit) and Double hits!!!! Nice map.It should rather be approval map xD

NonxE wrote:

arrr I heard the song before

star for 12 M map :3(o^▽^o)(o^▽^o)(o^▽^o)(o^▽^o)(o^▽^o)(o^▽^o)

White Wolf wrote:

wwwwww
cool map and song :3
DJ Sharpenel + termerys = awesome \o/

l3lueskyiiz wrote:

มาแว้ว :3

ไม่รู้จะพิมอะไรดี มันบอกว่าประโยคสั้นเกิน

theMikeAG wrote:

Here we go. First Mod for this map! Yeeeeeaaaaah~!

~Insane~
00:27:885 (x) - Add note here. Eh, not here, I want it to be double notes instead of triple.
00:39:247 (1,4) - Go into Grid Size 4 and center these two notes. Done
01:36:558 (10) - I laughed here. It felt like the other Drrrrrrr map just ended. That's what I mend to to!
03:24:497 (1) - Personally, I think this new combo is pointless. Well, it is. Fixed

Consider this the "change if you want to" section.
04:19:469 (1) - Consider replacing this with a spinner? It seems like it would work great either way, but I'm just giving you another option. I think the slider will give them more emotion like "hold"
04:36:846 (1) - Maybe remap this spinner? It seems kind of anticlimactic like this. OK
04:54:391 (1) - Maybe end this spinner at 05:00:072 and place a note at 05:00:406? OK

This map = Masterpiece. Do I even need to say it? Really? Thanks XD

STAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAR~!!! Kudossssssssss!!!

termerys wrote:

00:27:885 (x) - Add note here. Eh, not here, I want it to be double notes instead of triple.

theMikeAG wrote:

termerys wrote:

00:27:885 (x) - Add note here. Eh, not here, I want it to be double notes instead of triple.

Are you sure you don't want to change this? Personally, the double gives the map a sort of stutter effect which doesn't sound or play so great and it just stands out really badly. But eh, it's your map.

Frostmourne wrote:

Good Term!!,Drrrrrrr! Full version is so exciting!!

star

termerys wrote:

Change song's artiste due to misspell. AND WHAT'S WRONG WITH THE MINIMUM CHARACTER LIMIT!!??
THIS IS FREAKING ANNOYING THAT I HAVE TO TYPE THIS LONG EVERY TIME I WANT TO JUST UPDATE THE FORUM REPLY!!

ziin wrote:

termerys wrote:

Change song's artiste due to misspell. AND WHAT'S WRONG WITH THE MINIMUM CHARACTER LIMIT!!??
THIS IS FREAKING ANNOYING THAT I HAVE TO TYPE THIS LONG EVERY TIME I WANT TO JUST UPDATE THE FORUM REPLY!!

edit the first post, add something constructive, or don't say anything at all. I just wanna complain about the minimum limit, that's all

Now for the mod

Song is 5 minutes long and has ONE break. That's just gay. Break added.
White combo color blends in really well to the background. Ok, let me change the colour.
You need a hitcircleoverlay and approach circle. Why? I think the skin is already looks good.
I get the feeling you just put in the triples wherever the hell you thought they would sound nice. That's a bad way to map IMO. It leads to overmapping, which most of this map is. You didn't really follow the music, and I dislike this style of mapping. It's too long for me to tell you what to fix, and you've put too much work into mapping it wrong to bother fixing it. Maybe you don't like triple stream, btw, dont tell this to creator of Demetori - Emotional Skyscraper ~ World's End
00:31:394 (1) - this roll should start here: 00:31:728 - Ok
00:52:948 (4,5,6,7,8) - these don't match the bass roll very well. IDK what you were trying to map. It's sounds good for me.
05:00:406 (1) - this is one of the dumbest things people do. ok, fixed

ziin wrote:

happy30 did a song you can do that on, because the drums and guitar are pretty much a constant 1/4 stream. This isn't one of those songs. So, you want me to decrease the triple stream?

You need a hitcircle overlay and approach circle if you want this ranked/approved. It's in the faq. Ok, added.

Download: DJ Sharpnel - Drrrrrrr! (termerys) [Net & Ozzy's Taiko Oni].osu

DeeN wrote:

I m so late
here's my mod here's my kd!

SPOILER

<General>
TAGS add Cyclick OK

<Insane>

00:24:209 (5,1) - too close fixed

00:28:888 (8,1) - change the silder(8) speed to 0.5 and remove note (1) Wow nice trick XD

00:29:890 - add a note Roger that

00:31:561 (2) - why not end at 00:32:020(1/8) Well, I thought it would be easier to click but yeah, it's approve song

00:34:736 (6) - ^same problem All others fixed

00:47:936 (7) - place at 00:46:933 (1)'s place? like this Ok
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00:52:948 (4,5,6,7,8) - not a very big problem but maybe u remove note(6) and (7) start the 1/8 silder stream in 00:53:115 better? Well, I listened to the rhythms themselves and I found a better pattern neither yours or my old one sry :3

and (8) why not end it at 00:53:742?

01:13:834 (1,2,3) - ^ same problem as before

01:24:528 (1) - Reverse Selection? Well, I think the jumping slider invert direction would be better, and it's a pattern from the last 2 sliders

01:24:862 (2) - ^

01:25:530 (5) - same problem as 01:13:834 (1,2,3)

02:08:305 (1) - ^

02:13:652 (1) - ^

03:12:467 (4) - ^

03:33:687 (1,2,3,4,5) - it should be jump So, it's a jump

03:34:857 (8) - same problem as 01:13:834 (1,2,3)

04:19:469 (1) - i know u want to make the effect like hold silder but change it to a spinner start at 04:19:469-04:20:973 end better imo I think the original one is good enough because after the previous spinner it would be more interesting to have a slow slider.

04:32:335 (5) - ^ same problem as 01:13:834 (1,2,3)

04:43:029 (13) - ^

some double notes feel strange but ok Beatbox rhythms baby lol

star for this map and my sharpnel :3

Thanks for modding!

mercury2004 wrote:

I suggest you to add more whistle sound to the map
02:48:239 (1,2,3) - This antijump is pretty confusing. Increasing spacing a bit? Ok

This whistle may be? Too much for inconsistency of the whistles. And they sound a bit weird when there are too much of them.

Zelos wrote:

Drrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr!

Folder:
I would list the fact that there are 2 .osbs in your folder but after a conversation that happened in #modhelp, it probably wouldnt matter if there were 50 .osbs in there.(okay maybe that is a bit much) so yeah you can leave those 2 there.

Insane:
00:28:219 (6,7,8) - no one could possibly realize that slider 8 is half speed when slider 6,7 are the same length and pretty close to each other.
I suggest putting some kinda warning right here or increase the tick rate by 1 to show a slow down. Done

00:36:908 (1) - see? you can actually see the slow down here because you can see the slider tick in this slider unlike the rest of the normal length sliders.
02:00:619 (1) - I can see what you are trying to do here but it just didnt work. you need more of a squiggle motion in it to fit the part of the music this was done at. Done
02:10:477 (5,6,7,8,9) - the spacing is uneven here. Fixed
03:18:148 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - going in the same pattern over and over is kinda boring. why not do the 2nd set of 1/8th sliders in a different shape? Shape changed

Random Thought:
the only mapping ive seen from you in the past is the guest insane you did for "Just be friends" I definitely like your drrrr map though. Thank you

Star for good mapping.