Thanks Gabi!

Returning bubble due to some complications regarding first-post editing.

Bubble poppin'.

*=pure suggestion; just a suggestion from a mapper to a mapper, not a BAT to a mapper

Nuts:
-Is it my bad eyesight or does the background make the transparent hitcircles hard to see?
-00:09:25 (7,8) - Restack on the endpoint of 6.
-00:12:11 (8) - Restack on the endpoint of 7.
-00:14:32 (7,8) - I don't know if it's because of the transparent hitcircles, but this is hard to see.
-00:24:25 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - The spacing in between the combos here is, sorry to say, not good. Why does it not make sense? The way this song flows would dictate a New Combo mark on where your first 4 is (if you want the same effect you're looking for), and then there would be another on the second 4. Now, while that's gone and done with, why did I say it? Because the 4 is too awkward of a place to justify the spacing change. I could see something working if you made the combo numbers flow like this: (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1), but not in the current state. This part needs to be redone.
-00:27:11 (2,4) - Restack on the endpoint of 1.
-00:28:22 (1) - Restack on the endpoint of 4.
-00:34:84 (4) - New Combo mark goes here.
-00:35:06 (1) - Remove this New Combo mark.
-00:45:86 (5) - New Combo mark goes here.
-00:46:20 (1) - Remove the New Combo mark.
-01:47:19 (1) - This is just incredibly hard to see.
-02:14:10 (1,2,3,4) - Check the endpoint alignment.

Rough:
-Tone down the Whistle, please.
-00:48:07 (7) - Realign with 6.
-00:55:79 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - This is an awkward place to come back in, delete and extend the break.
-01:53:59 (1) - Remove the New Combo mark.
-01:54:25 (3) - New Combo mark goes here.
-02:01:31 (8,9) - Realign with 7's endpoint.
-02:05:06 (4) - New Combo mark goes here.
*-02:16:31 (4) - Pretty sure this isn't allowed.

Relax:
-00:23:14 (8) - Try to match the endpoint of 3 and 1.
-01:08:59 (5) - Restack on the endpoint of 4.
-01:21:82 (2) - Restack on the endpoint of 1.
-01:28:66 (8,9,10,11) - It feels awkward to continue this long into the break. Replace the Clap on 7 with a Finish and just delete this stuff and reinput the break.
-01:35:94 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Check/fix endpoint alignment throughout all of this.
-01:47:41 (1,2,3,4) - ^
-01:55:35 (3) - Restack.
-02:05:94 (2) - ^
-02:14:10 (2) - New Combo mark goes here.

Soft:
-00:11:89 (3) - Realign in the diagonal.
-00:16:31 (1) - Finish goes here.
-00:28:22 (1) - ^
-00:45:86 (1) - Replace the Clap with a Finish.
-01:09:03 (1) - Finish goes here.
-01:28:66 (6) - I'd say to get rid of this and reinput the break.
-02:23:14 (5) - Remove the Clap.

Sorry for all the seemingly bitchy comments, but they're necessary to make this absolutely incrediawesome.

Mogsworth wrote:

but they're necessary to make this absolutely incrediawesome.

Just to put it out there... FALSE IMO. more than half of these changes dont even reflect IN GAME PLAY even if hard mode is turned on (lookin at you nazi-align/stack posts). I highly disagree with this post. Combos work as intended imo. I looked at all the insane nazi mods and felt tehy were totally unnecessary. I do agree that some of the combos are hard to see but they are not impossible to read + its insane, doesnt need to be baby'd imo. Im not gunna bother goiing into detail with other difficulties but I feel that a majority of these 'BAT' non star posts ARE completely style suggestions and should be "*"


Well thats my opinion anyway. gooday =p

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No need to get all feisty ! Better to make some adjustments so more people can enjoy it, no matter how little they are.

Mogsworth wrote:

Relax:
-01:28:66 (8,9,10,11) - It feels awkward to continue this long into the break. Replace the Clap on 7 with a Finish and just delete this stuff and reinput the break.
-01:35:94 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Check/fix endpoint alignment throughout all of this.
-01:47:41 (1,2,3,4) - ^

Soft:
-01:28:66 (6) - I'd say to get rid of this and reinput the break.

Redid the part in [Nuts]. Hopefully it's better then last time. Some of your restack corrections; I manually placed because osu!'s stack leniency makes them appear way off and it looks ugly when playing.

Relax: I didn't exactly follow your suggestion on 01:28:66 (8,9,10,11), but it is shorter. I don't see anything wrong with the endpoint alignments at 01:35:94 & 01:47:41. The combobursts not being exactly in the middle would be because of the stack leniency.

Soft: Instead of getting rid of the 6, I made it 1/2 shorter with a finish at the end.

Thanks for the mod!

Nexy wrote:

No need to get all feisty ! Better to make some adjustments so more people can enjoy it, no matter how little they are.

Mogsworth wrote:

Relax:
-01:28:66 (8,9,10,11) - It feels awkward to continue this long into the break. Replace the Clap on 7 with a Finish and just delete this stuff and reinput the break.
-01:35:94 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Check/fix endpoint alignment throughout all of this.
-01:47:41 (1,2,3,4) - ^

Soft:
-01:28:66 (6) - I'd say to get rid of this and reinput the break.

Redid the part in [Nuts]. Hopefully it's better then last time. Some of your restack corrections; I manually placed because osu!'s stack leniency makes them appear way off and it looks ugly when playing.

Relax: I didn't exactly follow your suggestion on 01:28:66 (8,9,10,11), but it is shorter. I don't see anything wrong with the endpoint alignments at 01:35:94 & 01:47:41. The combobursts not being exactly in the middle would be because of the stack leniency.

Soft: Instead of getting rid of the 6, I made it 1/2 shorter with a finish at the end.

Thanks for the mod!

The only reason I got feisty was because my methods were being attacked. Shove me and I shove back. :/

The editor does that sometimes, it's best to manually restack endpoints, anyways.

And it looks all good to me now. Rebubble is in order.

Thank You once again!

Soft:
01:01:09 (4) - i think this should be extended to the next white tick
01:35:94 (the whole stream of stuff) Hit sounds are barely audible, if at all. I dont mind the volume effect you're trying to make here, but it at least needs to be a bit audible
01:47:85 (1) - seriously turn volume up here

Relax:
02:21:16 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Are all of those fountains really necessary?

Rough:
My only comment is that the Whistle sounds overused, and the clap is rarely, if at all used.

Nuts:
I normally don't enjoy nazi'ing over hitsounds but I really have to here
00:09:47 (8) - Add a clap maybe?
00:46:42 (4,5) - Move 4's clap to 5
00:54:47 (4,5) - Move 5's clap to 4
00:58:44 (8) - Suggestion: remove? (feel free to say no)
01:47:19 (1) - Volume up please
Again, are the excess kiai fountains at the end really necessary?

I hate hate hate going above the 8th notch for the volume. I raised it by 1 notch at the timing's you told me. The kiai fountain is a personal preference which is not necessary but I like it and want it there D:<!

The stream of sliders in [Soft] seem pretty loud enough to me and no one else has complained about. I left it as it was.

I didn't remove 00:58:44 (8) in [Nuts] because I like the way it sounds.

Thanks for mod!

Returning bubble then

Oh, hey, this is ready to be ranked.

THIS MAP IS W00T!! Where the hexk is the star check box

Good map indeed but I could barely see the cursor because of kiai time + the bright background. I missed some jumps because of it :/

just forget that. It doesn't make the map worse or something. It's very well made. keep it up

Thank You!

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i<3thisbeatmap.

Okthnx.

One of my favorites <3

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I tried the Sharada Beatmap and I really liked it. I only think the Backround was a bit distracting and when the circle beats go from Beat 1 (With two circles around it) then beat 2 (2 circles around it) and you have to go back to where the first beat is for number 3, it's kind of confusing. It goes over and over. The music kept up with the beat well though and it was nicely made. Just a suggestions :]

one of the best songs i have heard~
great map, awesome job ^^