[General]- The spinner-background have a size of 1023x692, you must change it to 1024x768.
- The spinner-circle don't need to be 763x763? I'm not sure about this.
- I don't like these custom hitsounds, the finish and the whistle, sounds really bad.
- You use all of these custom hitsounds?
[Normal]Overall Difficulty +1
HP Drain Rate +1
00:02:828 (3,4,5,6,7) Considering that this is the easiest difficulty, you shouldn't put patterns very hard to read or many notes in a row. Maybe you can change these notes (3,4,5,6) for two sliders. Some like this:
http://puu.sh/3NVI don't hide the notes with the hit in easy difficulties.
00:09:035 (1) This slider are very close to the spin. This is unrankable in the easiest difficulty. You must leaving at least of two white ticks, for the player can take the control. I suggest you do something like this:
http://puu.sh/3NWp00:11:104 (3) These sliders shouldn't have a different number of repetitions. This slider is fine, but if you see the following slider with repeat, it has only one. The reason for this is that tend to confuse new players. This is not unrankable but you can try to change some of these patterns for make the difficulty a little easier to read. Considering this comment for all of the following sliders.
00:22:742 (3,4,5) The stacked notes are fine, considering the following stacked notes is as the same distance, but seeing the next, this have a different distance. This do that the player press the button hurriedly and miss the notes.
00:35:932 (1,2,3,4) Never stack notes in the end of the sliders in the easiest difficulty, you should to remove it. And the next notes (3,4) are hidden for the sliders, maybe this is a little hard to read.
00:42:139 (1) Too close to the spin. You know to do. Other thing, change the clap for a finish? Obviously you must change the custom hitsounds.
00:50:415 (x) I'm not sure about this but, put the inherited section here.
00:50:932 (1,5) Too close to the spin. Something else, you miss a clap in (5) please add one in the middle.
00:56:363 (1) Start the spin here please, and the following note is too close
01:05:673 (2,3) Stacked note, you know to do.
01:06:966 (1) Very short spin for a normal. The spins often surprise the player, he need a moment of reaction.
01:08:518 (1,2,3,4,5,6) Maybe do something like this?:
http://puu.sh/3NY8 I think looks better and fix the spacing between (5,6)
01:11:622 (1,2,3,4,5) Maybe you can put the notes in this formation, replaces the spin for notes and put a spin in 01:16:794
http://puu.sh/3NYp01:33:087 (5,6,7) Replace these notes for a slider, considering the previous stacked notes, but this make confusing the two sliders, you can fix it ;D
02:27:656 (1,2,3) Separates these notes please. Can be confusing.
02:50:415 (x) Maybe you can put a spin here to 02:52:484, I think is better.
03:06:966 (1) You can start the spin here, and finish him here 03:10:070, this separate the spin with the following note and make the spin larger.
03:18:863 (3,1,1,2) Stacked note, following for a very short spin, notes too close to the spin and a little confusing, if you want to stack these notes please stack the slider too.
[Hard]00:08:518 (1) Please finish the spin in the previous white tick. Is too close to the note I think.
00:15:242 (1,2,3,4,5) I can't understand why you put these notes with a different spacing, maybe this is a pattern to follow the piano rhythm? If so, you need change the spacing here 00:32:053 (1,2,3,1)
00:29:466 (1,3) Really bad sliders, make these like this:
http://puu.sh/3O0800:42:139 (1) Add a finish here. Don't the custom hitsound finish...
00:48:087 (1,2,3) Inconsistent spacing, considering the other notes.
00:56:363 (1) Start the spin here and remove (3)?
01:09:035 (1,3) Bad sliders again, make like this:
http://puu.sh/3O0E01:31:794 (2) Hidden repeat with the previous (6) this is unrankable.
01:50:156 (1) Remove new combo or start the spin here.
02:00:760 (x) Move the inherited section to here.
02:25:328 (1) Finish the slider in the next white tick.
02:43:432 (4,1) Spacing.
03:27:397 (1) Good job with the heart slider, but you finish it in a blue tick, you must finish him in the previous white tick. And you can make this slider like this:
http://puu.sh/2yPq
[Insane]
I'm not really sure about the Approach rate, the song is too slow. Maybe you can put it on 7?
00:15:242 (5,1) A great anti-jump here, you should change the position of (1).
00:38:777 (4,1) Spacing.
00:40:328 (1,2,1,2,1,2) I really love this jump <3
00:51:449 (1) Remove new combo, and in the next note too.
02:01:794 (1) ^ that's not a good pattern if you don't put a jump >.>
02:50:415 (7) Add one repeat to the slider and move the spin.
I don't find other problem here, maybe I can do other suggestions but isn't necessary.
Nice song, star.
STAR
