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Neo Cortex - I Want You (Nightcore Mix)

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Kite
[Color Legend]
Suggestions
It would be better if you fixed this
Fix this!

[General]
Preview time should be the same on all difficulties, right now all have a different one

[Normal]
00:36:874 - You should map this break imo ( Just follow the claps )
00:44:374 (1) - If you mapped the break then put this 1/1 earlier and place an additionatl beat at 00:45:803
01:24:731 - Map this break too

Everything seems fine for me here

[Hard]
00:36:874 - Same here, you should map this break
01:11:160 - Add a beat?
01:24:731 - Map this break too

Everything seems fine for me here

[Challenging]
00:32:748 (1) - End this on the white tick 00:33:998 maybe?
00:36:855 - Add beats on the claps in this section?
01:10:516 (1) - Perhaps you could start the stream here instead 01:10:069 and add beats 01:12:569; 01:12:748; 01:12:927
01:20:962 (4) - 1/4 earlier and stack with 01:20:784 (3)
01:33:105 (1) - End this spinner on white tick 01:33:998?
01:45:784 - Activate 1/8 Beat Snap Divisor her and place 1/8 reverse sliders instead

[Overall]
Sweet mapset, the storyboard is really awesome and difficulty spread is nice.
Have a star

Sorry for the late check
Topic Starter
BounceBabe

Kite wrote:

[Color Legend]
Suggestions
It would be better if you fixed this
Fix this! Fixed

[General]
Preview time should be the same on all difficulties, right now all have a different one Fixed

[Normal]
00:36:874 - You should map this break imo ( Just follow the claps ) Fixed
00:44:374 (1) - If you mapped the break then put this 1/1 earlier and place an additionatl beat at 00:45:803 Fixed
01:24:731 - Map this break too No x.x

Everything seems fine for me here

[Hard]
00:36:874 - Same here, you should map this break No x.x
01:11:160 - Add a beat? Fixed
01:24:731 - Map this break too No x.x

Everything seems fine for me here

[Challenging]
00:32:748 (1) - End this on the white tick 00:33:998 maybe?
00:36:855 - Add beats on the claps in this section?
01:10:516 (1) - Perhaps you could start the stream here instead 01:10:069 and add beats 01:12:569; 01:12:748; 01:12:927
01:20:962 (4) - 1/4 earlier and stack with 01:20:784 (3)
01:33:105 (1) - End this spinner on white tick 01:33:998?
01:45:784 - Activate 1/8 Beat Snap Divisor her and place 1/8 reverse sliders instead

[Overall]
Sweet mapset, the storyboard is really awesome and difficulty spread is nice.
Have a star

Sorry for the late check
Thanks for your mod ♥
-Lennox-
[Challenging]
00:32:748 (1) - End this on the white tick 00:33:998 maybe? ~no sry
00:36:855 - Add beats on the claps in this section? ~kay
01:10:516 (1) - Perhaps you could start the stream here instead 01:10:069 and add beats 01:12:569; 01:12:748; 01:12:927 ~i want to keep it >~<
01:20:962 (4) - 1/4 earlier and stack with 01:20:784 (3) ~something like this done ye
01:33:105 (1) - End this spinner on white tick 01:33:998? ~kay
01:45:784 - Activate 1/8 Beat Snap Divisor her and place 1/8 reverse sliders instead ~yup


thx Kite!

Download: Neo Cortex - I want you (Nightcore Version) (BounceBabe) [-Lennox-'s Insane Love].osu
Phish_old
Lennooox :D
and nice BG Pic ^^
star~
GamerX4life
nice map*
PsychoSkill
staaaaaar
Louis Cyphre
Title
Neo Cortex - I want you (Nightcore Mix)
It's mostly used version of titles http://osu.ppy.sh/p/beatmaplist&s=4&r=0 ... 0&g=0&la=0
Celeste76
Hello there! All right, time for a mod :3

[Soft Love]
00:19:731 - add a note?
00:50:088 - Oi, the hit sounds are hurting my ears. Maybe lower the volume to 75%?
01:06:517 - maybe add a note here?
01:09:374 - ^
01:24:017 - ^
01:40:803 - Maybe shorten to 01:41:160 and add a note at 01:41:517?
01:41:160 - add a clap

[True Love]
Is this a normal or a hard?
00:36:517 - why add a break here? I feel as though you could've kept going...
00:50:088 - Oi, the hit sounds are hurting my ears. Maybe lower the volume to 75%?
01:03:838 - shorten it to the white tick and then add a note on that red tick?
01:06:517 - ^
01:09:553 - ^
I really like this diff

[Insane Love]
I love these patterns. Sadly I cannot mod insanes :o
Topic Starter
BounceBabe

Louis Cyphre wrote:

Title
Neo Cortex - I want you (Nightcore Mix)
It's mostly used version of titles http://osu.ppy.sh/p/beatmaplist&s=4&r=0 ... 0&g=0&la=0
Hmm.. ya
Aleks719
Folder, Skin
Your digits don't work since they named "default-0" etc etc; they must be named "score-0", "score-1" etc. Rename them
Where is your approachcircle? You must have it since you have custom htcircle and hitcircleoverlay
Your spinner-background must be 1023x692 instead of your 1024x768
Your scorebars it sum ~ 360kb... Imo, too much for scorebar. try to less quantity of scorebars
Full submit after this fixes.

General
I saw this bg in osuplayer111's map ;~;
Timing mistake, -Lennox-'s Insane Love has different timing. Fix it, fix timing points, sb offset, kiai time after that...
Slider tickrate 2 in all diffs. Fix it for True Love.
Use only one "space" between words in tags instead of your two "spaces". Fix this it True Love
1.5 sec before 1st beat... Set audio lead-in at least 1sec in all diffs.
Why black bg color if your bg is dark-blue?
Kiai...start it from ~00:50:069 from high white tick (you timing points is bad, I can't say correctly). And set kiai time in all diffs like in True Love. Because at this moment different kiai looks ugly
-Lennox-'s Insane Love has different preview point. fix it

Oh, There are many mistakes here. Fix them and I'll return, without star atm


[SB 18+]
After 20sec I thought that pepole on bg are fucking xD
Really, a bit strange pulsations )))


Lennox
4 different speeds... okaaaaay... Atm it's rankable.
00:19:374 (4,5,6) - totally disagree. Rhythm must be (timiline) : 00:21:696 (3) - 1/4 shorter, replace end of slider on red tick.
00:37:588 (1) - add clap
00:38:303 (3) - ^
00:39:017 (1) - ^ add sexy-standart-claps (every 2nd, 4th tick start from here, make it until spinner (00:46:338) )
00:48:660 (1,2,3,7) - add 4 claps. 1,2,3,7.
01:04:017 (2,3,4) - this triple sounds a bit off
01:09:017 (5,6,7) - ^
01:34:642 (1) - imo, too far from center after spinner. Make (1,2) symmetrically with 01:35:446 (1,2) - ?

True Love
00:01:517 (1,2,3) - 10% volume... Notes must be hearable +10% ?
00:13:303 (1,2,3) - imo, better
00:17:946 (1,2) - Rhythm must be (timiline) : 00:32:946 (3) - spot of start : 00:32:767 , spot of end leave as is (1/2 longer)
01:03:839 (5) - add whistle to the end
01:06:696 (5) - ^
01:09:553 (5) - ^
01:12:053 - add note+finish or add reverse to (1) + finish
01:32:946 (1) - Rhythm must be (timiline) : 01:34:374 (2,3,4,5) - try this (timiline) : 01:47:499 - kiai must be at white tick (1/4 later)

Soft Love
00:01:517 (1) - + 10% volume
00:04:374 (4,5) - try this : (timiline) : 00:36:874 (1,2,3,4) - claps everywhere. from here until 00:44:374
01:12:946 - kiai from white section, not blue

Star~
Topic Starter
BounceBabe

Aleks719 wrote:

Folder, Skin
Your digits don't work since they named "default-0" etc etc; they must be named "score-0", "score-1" etc. Rename them Fixed
Where is your approachcircle? You must have it since you have custom htcircle and hitcircleoverlay Fixed
Your spinner-background must be 1023x692 instead of your 1024x768 No
Your scorebars it sum ~ 360kb... Imo, too much for scorebar. try to less quantity of scorebars - No
Full submit after this fixes.

General
I saw this bg in osuplayer111's map ;~;
Timing mistake, -Lennox-'s Insane Love has different timing. Fix it, fix timing points, sb offset, kiai time after that... Fixed
Slider tickrate 2 in all diffs. Fix it for True Love. It was already 2 ^^
Use only one "space" between words in tags instead of your two "spaces". Fix this it True Love Fixed
1.5 sec before 1st beat... Set audio lead-in at least 1sec in all diffs. There is the SB-Lead-In
Why black bg color if your bg is dark-blue? So important? - Don't think so^^
Kiai...start it from ~00:50:069 from high white tick (you timing points is bad, I can't say correctly). And set kiai time in all diffs like in True Love. Because at this moment different kiai looks ugly Fixed - Lennox chose it for his map
-Lennox-'s Insane Love has different preview point. fix it It is.. o.ô

Oh, There are many mistakes here. Fix them and I'll return, without star atm
-Lennox-
[Lennox]
4 different speeds... okaaaaay... Atm it's rankable.
00:19:374 (4,5,6) - totally disagree. Rhythm must be (timiline) : 00:21:696 (3) - 1/4 shorter, replace end of slider on red tick.
00:37:588 (1) - add clap
00:38:303 (3) - ^
00:39:017 (1) - ^ add sexy-standart-claps (every 2nd, 4th tick start from here, make it until spinner (00:46:338) )
00:48:660 (1,2,3,7) - add 4 claps. 1,2,3,7.
01:04:017 (2,3,4) - this triple sounds a bit off
01:09:017 (5,6,7) - ^
01:34:642 (1) - imo, too far from center after spinner. Make (1,2) symmetrically with 01:35:446 (1,2) - ?

All done, only the last point.

Download: Neo Cortex - I want you (Nightcore Mix) (BounceBabe) [-Lennox-'s Insane Love].osu
BrokenArrow
star~
Jenny
@Lennox' Diff: Could you kind of re-order the part with the spacing-increasing tripplets? Like to let them all point to the mid or forming a great circle, since just tripple-stacks don't play that great, but that's a subjective suggestion (would look way better though).
-Lennox-

Broetchen8441 wrote:

@Lennox' Diff: Could you kind of re-order the part with the spacing-increasing tripplets? Like to let them all point to the mid or forming a great circle, since just tripple-stacks don't play that great, but that's a subjective suggestion (would look way better though).

Yes i know... if i get the chance i will re-map the map.. it was a old map from mine so ehhh i don't know.

Edit: NO MODS TO MY DIFF I WILLP RE-MAP THE WHOLE MAP nvm no time >_>
PsychoSkill
yeah du hasn kudosu von mir xDD
so, ich bekomm jetzt was :P
Topic Starter
BounceBabe

PsychoSkill wrote:

yeah du hasn kudosu von mir xDD
so, ich bekomm jetzt was :P
BounceBabe gives a kiss on Psycho's cheek ♥
dkun
what a nice storyboard and map.
loving lennox's insane on this mapset!

have my star.
Makar
[Soft Love]
01:13:660 (2) - Move down 2 grids? (nazi)
01:16:517 (2) - Move left for 0.8 spacing
01:32:946 (1) - I think you should start this a half a beat earlier

[True Love]
There seems to be inconsistent spacing in a lot of places, I suggest using the same spacing for a normal difficulty.
00:13:303 (1,2) - One grid to the right (nazi)
-Nice difficulty overall

[Insane Love]
-You use more than 3 slider speeds which is unrankable
00:15:267 (1,2,3) - Stack these perfectly under each other
01:24:017 (2,3) - These are a little hard to see because of 01:23:392 (9). Maybe move some stuff around? It doesn't matter too much since this is an insane
-Very nice insane

Star and good luck with the map
HellDawn
8-)
Roddie
Hey there.

General
  1. Add "Trance" in the tags?
  2. I've seen this skin a couple of times before... Whose skin did you borrow from? you should probably credit the mapper who created this skin.
  3. You have two osb. files. Delete one of them.

Soft Love
  1. 00:20:088 (4)-Fix the spacing on this by using the distance snap.
  2. 00:21:517 (5)-^?
  3. 00:36:874 to 00:44:017-Add a couple of claps please. It would be great if you do. (:
  4. 00:50:088 (1)-Add a finish on the beginning?
  5. 01:04:731 (6)-Put a new combo here.
  6. 01:12:946 (1)-Add a finish on the beginning?

True Love
  1. The Overall Difficulty is a bit too low... Set the Overall Difficulty at 6?
  2. Set the HP Drain Rate by 6?
  3. 00:18:481 (2)-Move this 1/2 back. And shorten this by 1/2. Like this for example.
    And don't forget to use the distance snap on it. I think it's best to do that because, it would sound better and play better. And add a whistle on the end?
  4. 01:38:660 (1)-Add a finish?
  5. 01:41:517 (1)-^?

-Lennox-'s Insane Love
  1. 00:06:517 (1, 2)-http://puu.sh/3CFm It's unrankable to have a hitburst covering the reverse arrow, man. No matter which skin you're using, it's still unrankable. :/ Try a different type of mapping pattern.
  2. 00:12:588 (1, 1, 2)-O_o Did you really left this intentional or by mistake... If it was a mistake, please fix the timing points on slider 1 and fix the spacing a bit on notes 1 and 2.
  3. 01:01:517 (5)-Add a finish?

If you have any questions about my mod, let me know in-game.

Anyway, here's a star for all your hard work~
-Lennox-
Jessi könntest du den mod fixxen? Ich weiß du machst das richtige, kann grad net wirklich in osu rein.
Kirino Kousaka
Hello~ Here's my modding :> (some suggestions)
(mods inside the spoilerbox)
SPOILER
[Soft Love]
00:30:088 (2,3) - These hit circles' place are kind of irrelevant. Try fixing their formation. :)
01:47:588 - Remove Kiai. (not so sure about this, but it looks a little irrelevant too.)

[True Love]
01:43:124 (5) - Try dragging this hit circle upwards. (As shown on this pic:)

01:47:588 - Remove Kiai. (same with "Soft Love")

[-Lennox-'s Insane Love]
(looks fine :D)

Cute Map~ >w<
Have a star~
Andrea
[General]

Adjust the Audio Lead-In on every difficulty to 1000.


[Soft Love]

00:14:374 (4,1) - They seem a bit too close. Move (1) a bit farther.
00:18:660 (3,4) - Looks weird to see this spacing and also the formation.
01:01:517 (3) - New combo.
01:32:767 (1,2) - This is not so good for an Easy difficulty.
01:40:803 (6) - New combo.
01:41:874 (1) - Remove new combo.
01:44:374 (5) - New combo.
01:46:160 (1) - Remove new combo and also, remove one slider repeat.


[True Love]

00:45:803 (2) - New combo due to the slider velocity change.
01:10:446 (6) - New combo.
01:11:517 (1) - Remove new combo.
01:44:553 (1) - End this on 01:47:231 and add a finish.


[-Lennox-'s Insane Love]

00:12:588 (4,1,2) - This sudden change of spacing is really hard to read while playing. Do something else.
00:34:374 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - WTF is with the spacing on this pattern?!
01:06:339 (7) - New combo.
01:06:606 (1) - Remove new combo.
01:10:089 (3) - New combo.
01:10:535 (1) - Remove new combo.
01:24:374 (4) - New combo.
01:40:981 (1) - Remove new combo.
01:41:338 (4) - New combo due to jump.
01:42:588 (5) - ^
01:44:374 (2) - Slider repeat is almost hidden.
01:47:410 (1) - I would totally remove this and let the map end with that stream.


This map still needs to improve, get some more mods before asking me for a recheck :P
Shohei Ohtani
Insane:
00:12:588 (4,1,2) - My avatar. But Andrea-sama already said this ;D
00:47:499 - You could totally just remove the break so people are like "omg wtf the game fro- OMG ROOAAARR!" or whatever people do. It's short enough :D

Hard:
00:58:660 (1) - It's generally a bad idea to have a slider with many repeats. It looks lazy and it doesn't play that well ;~;. Do something sexier, please ;D.

Easy:
01:46:160 (1) - Same as hard~.

uguu buugu.
-Lennox-
[-Lennox-'s Insane Love]

00:12:588 (4,1,2) - This sudden change of spacing is really hard to read while playing. Do something else.
00:34:374 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - WTF is with the spacing on this pattern?!
01:06:339 (7) - New combo.
01:06:606 (1) - Remove new combo.
01:10:089 (3) - New combo.
01:10:535 (1) - Remove new combo.
01:24:374 (4) - New combo.
01:40:981 (1) - Remove new combo.
01:41:338 (4) - New combo due to jump.
01:42:588 (5) - ^
01:44:374 (2) - Slider repeat is almost hidden.
01:47:410 (1) - I would totally remove this and let the map end with that stream.


Edit: (ninja CDFA)

Insane:
00:12:588 (4,1,2) - My avatar. But Andrea-sama already said this ;D
00:47:499 - You could totally just remove the break so people are like "omg wtf the game fro- OMG ROOAAARR!" or whatever people do. It's short enough :D want to keep that short break <3
blahblah

Download: Neo Cortex - I Want You (Nightcore Mix) (BounceBabe) [-Lennox-'s Insane Love].osu
Topic Starter
BounceBabe

osuplayer111 wrote:

[General]

Adjust the Audio Lead-In on every difficulty to 1000.


[Soft Love]

00:14:374 (4,1) - They seem a bit too close. Move (1) a bit farther.
00:18:660 (3,4) - Looks weird to see this spacing and also the formation.
01:01:517 (3) - New combo.
01:32:767 (1,2) - This is not so good for an Easy difficulty.
01:40:803 (6) - New combo.
01:41:874 (1) - Remove new combo.
01:44:374 (5) - New combo.
01:46:160 (1) - Remove new combo and also, remove one slider repeat.


[True Love]

00:45:803 (2) - New combo due to the slider velocity change.
01:10:446 (6) - New combo.
01:11:517 (1) - Remove new combo.
01:44:553 (1) - End this on 01:47:231 and add a finish.


[-Lennox-'s Insane Love]

00:12:588 (4,1,2) - This sudden change of spacing is really hard to read while playing. Do something else.
00:34:374 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - WTF is with the spacing on this pattern?!
01:06:339 (7) - New combo.
01:06:606 (1) - Remove new combo.
01:10:089 (3) - New combo.
01:10:535 (1) - Remove new combo.
01:24:374 (4) - New combo.
01:40:981 (1) - Remove new combo.
01:41:338 (4) - New combo due to jump.
01:42:588 (5) - ^
01:44:374 (2) - Slider repeat is almost hidden.
01:47:410 (1) - I would totally remove this and let the map end with that stream.


This map still needs to improve, get some more mods before asking me for a recheck :P
Fixed and updated ♥
Andrea
Did some more IRC Modding about every difficulty.

Now go, get 2 more mods at least and maybe this map might be ready :3

Mapset seems much better to me, starred for now!
S a S e R u
Overall I enjoyed every single diff. :)
Keep up the good work!
Luneko
Neko mod go!

[Soft Love]
00:06:517 - Nen Circle auf den startpunkt von (1) setzen?
00:28:660 (1) - löschen ---> 00:25:803 (1) kopieren ---> Strg + H ---> Profit

[True Love]
00:40:446 (3) - 1 grid nach rechts
00:44:017 (4) - 1 grid nach links <-<

[-Lennox-'s Insane Love]
nix

Nettes beatmap set~
Sternchen~
-Lennox-
[-Lennox-'s Insane Love]
nix

So ist's brav <3
AndreasHD
So here is my little mod:)

[Soft Love]

00:01:517 (1) - you know, this isnt straight : ) just look at the grid
on the right side, nazi I know >_> ..
00:15:803 (1) - This note... I feel this suits better if you place
it at 00:15:624 instead.
and then of course add this here 00:17:053 (2) -
and this 00:18:481 (1) - and this 00:19:910 (2) -
and this 00:21:338 (3) -
00:47:588 (4) - I feel like this note is unnecessary on a
easy diff, so perhaps the best thing is to just remove it.
if you want these sliders to be even more perfect,
then try to drag then lower point of the slider so it looks
like this: and then just copy paste it to the other side. I know, Im nazi : )
01:24:374 (3) - add finish? just keep whistle.
01:24:463 what is this inheriting section for?

[True Love]
00:50:088 add + 7ms on this inheriting section.
01:24:374 (8) - add finish? just keep whistle.
01:24:463 what is this inheriting section for?


[-Lennox-'s Insane]
The kiai is diffrent from the two other diffs,
so you can add a inheriting section at 01:01:428and take away kiai and then add on kiai time at 01:01:517and remove it at 01:01:606 again.
01:01:517 add + 19ms on this inheriting section.


[SB]
00:50:088 Don't you wanna feel my love tonight
if you look at the keyframe -> this has scale when you don't
actually need to change it more than once, so remove all of
animations including "scale" but the first one here.

~~~~~~~~
I think this is an AW E S O M E map and I hope it gets ranked!
I wish you good luck!
Kurokami
I love all Nightcore Mix so I want this map will be ranked as fast as possible. I don't know how to help, but I think this is almost done.
jericho2442
*I want your love tonight* o/

ok this has been pending ages now..... xD

True love
00:11:338 - i say add a note here, it follows your mapping here perfect and feels better
00:22:767 -
00:25:624 -
00:28:481 -
00:31:338 - same for all these. just goes so much better ;p

-Lennox-'s Insane Love
00:37:588 (1) - remove newcombo, its kinda pointless
01:24:196 - need to add a note here, the current position your stream ends seems totally wrong


hmmmm thats about it, everything else looked great to me 8-)
Topic Starter
BounceBabe

jericho2442 wrote:

*I want your love tonight* o/

ok this has been pending ages now..... xD

True love
00:11:338 - i say add a note here, it follows your mapping here perfect and feels better
00:22:767 -
00:25:624 -
00:28:481 -
00:31:338 - same for all these. just goes so much better ;p

-Lennox-'s Insane Love
00:37:588 (1) - remove newcombo, its kinda pointless
01:24:196 - need to add a note here, the current position your stream ends seems totally wrong


hmmmm thats about it, everything else looked great to me 8-)
\o/
Andrea
Some IRC Mod.

- Added some missing skin elements.
- Fixed 2 patterns on Insane difficulty.

Bubbled~
jericho2442
ooook this has been pending waay too long ;p rechecked it, fixed the spinner image abit and now this looks perfectly rankable

Please enjoy receiving my Heart to rank this map ;)
Topic Starter
BounceBabe

jericho2442 wrote:

Please enjoy receiving my Heart to rank this map ;)
Yus Q.Q
PsychoSkill
gz
-Lennox-
Bad lennox diff is bad
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