Updated ~
Thank'sWeezy wrote:
General
- Keep preview times the same for all diffs!
- Set the audio lead-in to 2 for all diffs! The SB is the "Lead-In"
True Love
AR is waaaaaay too high. Set it to 4 Kidding .___.? it's better for playing
-Lennox-'s Insane Love
- This has a different offset then the rest of this diffs! Fix please!
- Keep kiai time the same (Right now it almost takes up half the song.)
01:44:355 (2) Reeally hard to see the repeat on this slider. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/84150
map is fine
~star~
Thanks for the good mod and the star *o*Hushu wrote:
Hii there~
Soft Love:
0:11:517 - New combo
0:12:946 - Don't repeat, add a note and make a new combo 2/1 later instead.
0:14:374 - No new combo
0:21:517 - No new combo
0:22:946 - New combo
0:28:660 - Looks nice colourful, so new combo here?
0:31:517 - ^
0:45:803 - I think you should just repeat the slider and remove (1,2). No D:
0:58:660 - new combo
1:00:088 - No new combo
1:01:517 - New combo
1:46:160 - Instead of repeating many times, why not just place a spinner?
True Love:
0:13:303 - New combo has got to be here because this is a new verse in the lyrics~
0:23:838 - The sequence would feel better if you'd add a note here.
0:28:660 - I think you should not make a different sequence than at 0:25:803 because this bit is not much different than the one at 0:25:803... You can also do it the other way around. Anyways, without this fix I think it feels weird~
0:35:803 - I think it is rather that this note is 1/4 erlier?
0:48:264 - I think the hole is too long. Insert break time.
1:04:731 - New combo here, not at 1:06:160 :<
1:07:588 - New combo here not at 1:09:017
1:19:374 (3,4,1,2) - Don't make them go over themselves... I heard that it is unrankable~
1:38:660 - New combo here not 1/1 later so that it is on the big white tick (the song is prefect 1/4 combo here so that is how it should be)
1:41:517 - ^
Thanks for your mod ♥Kite wrote:
[Color Legend]
Suggestions
It would be better if you fixed this
Fix this! Fixed
[General]
Preview time should be the same on all difficulties, right now all have a different one Fixed
[Normal]
00:36:874 - You should map this break imo ( Just follow the claps ) Fixed
00:44:374 (1) - If you mapped the break then put this 1/1 earlier and place an additionatl beat at 00:45:803 Fixed
01:24:731 - Map this break too No x.x
Everything seems fine for me here
[Hard]
00:36:874 - Same here, you should map this break No x.x
01:11:160 - Add a beat? Fixed
01:24:731 - Map this break too No x.x
Everything seems fine for me here
[Challenging]
00:32:748 (1) - End this on the white tick 00:33:998 maybe?
00:36:855 - Add beats on the claps in this section?
01:10:516 (1) - Perhaps you could start the stream here instead 01:10:069 and add beats 01:12:569; 01:12:748; 01:12:927
01:20:962 (4) - 1/4 earlier and stack with 01:20:784 (3)
01:33:105 (1) - End this spinner on white tick 01:33:998?
01:45:784 - Activate 1/8 Beat Snap Divisor her and place 1/8 reverse sliders instead
[Overall]
Sweet mapset, the storyboard is really awesome and difficulty spread is nice.
Have a star
Sorry for the late check
Hmm.. yaLouis Cyphre wrote:
Title
Neo Cortex - I want you (Nightcore Mix)
It's mostly used version of titles http://osu.ppy.sh/p/beatmaplist&s=4&r=0 ... 0&g=0&la=0
Aleks719 wrote:
Folder, Skin
Your digits don't work since they named "default-0" etc etc; they must be named "score-0", "score-1" etc. Rename them Fixed
Where is your approachcircle? You must have it since you have custom htcircle and hitcircleoverlay Fixed
Your spinner-background must be 1023x692 instead of your 1024x768 No
Your scorebars it sum ~ 360kb... Imo, too much for scorebar. try to less quantity of scorebars - No
Full submit after this fixes.
General
I saw this bg in osuplayer111's map ;~;
Timing mistake, -Lennox-'s Insane Love has different timing. Fix it, fix timing points, sb offset, kiai time after that... Fixed
Slider tickrate 2 in all diffs. Fix it for True Love. It was already 2 ^^
Use only one "space" between words in tags instead of your two "spaces". Fix this it True Love Fixed
1.5 sec before 1st beat... Set audio lead-in at least 1sec in all diffs. There is the SB-Lead-In
Why black bg color if your bg is dark-blue? So important? - Don't think so^^
Kiai...start it from ~00:50:069 from high white tick (you timing points is bad, I can't say correctly). And set kiai time in all diffs like in True Love. Because at this moment different kiai looks ugly Fixed - Lennox chose it for his map
-Lennox-'s Insane Love has different preview point. fix it It is.. o.ô
Oh, There are many mistakes here. Fix them and I'll return, without star atm
[Lennox]
4 different speeds... okaaaaay... Atm it's rankable.
00:19:374 (4,5,6) - totally disagree. Rhythm must be (timiline) : 00:21:696 (3) - 1/4 shorter, replace end of slider on red tick.
00:37:588 (1) - add clap
00:38:303 (3) - ^
00:39:017 (1) - ^ add sexy-standart-claps (every 2nd, 4th tick start from here, make it until spinner (00:46:338) )
00:48:660 (1,2,3,7) - add 4 claps. 1,2,3,7.
01:04:017 (2,3,4) - this triple sounds a bit off
01:09:017 (5,6,7) - ^
01:34:642 (1) - imo, too far from center after spinner. Make (1,2) symmetrically with 01:35:446 (1,2) - ?
Broetchen8441 wrote:
@Lennox' Diff: Could you kind of re-order the part with the spacing-increasing tripplets? Like to let them all point to the mid or forming a great circle, since just tripple-stacks don't play that great, but that's a subjective suggestion (would look way better though).
BounceBabe gives a kiss on Psycho's cheek ♥PsychoSkill wrote:
yeah du hasn kudosu von mir xDD
so, ich bekomm jetzt was
[-Lennox-'s Insane Love]blahblah
00:12:588 (4,1,2) - This sudden change of spacing is really hard to read while playing. Do something else.
00:34:374 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - WTF is with the spacing on this pattern?!
01:06:339 (7) - New combo.
01:06:606 (1) - Remove new combo.
01:10:089 (3) - New combo.
01:10:535 (1) - Remove new combo.
01:24:374 (4) - New combo.
01:40:981 (1) - Remove new combo.
01:41:338 (4) - New combo due to jump.
01:42:588 (5) - ^
01:44:374 (2) - Slider repeat is almost hidden.
01:47:410 (1) - I would totally remove this and let the map end with that stream.
Edit: (ninja CDFA)
Insane:
00:12:588 (4,1,2) - My avatar. But Andrea-sama already said this ;D
00:47:499 - You could totally just remove the break so people are like "omg wtf the game fro- OMG ROOAAARR!" or whatever people do. It's short enoughwant to keep that short break <3
Fixed and updated ♥osuplayer111 wrote:
[General]
Adjust the Audio Lead-In on every difficulty to 1000.
[Soft Love]
00:14:374 (4,1) - They seem a bit too close. Move (1) a bit farther.
00:18:660 (3,4) - Looks weird to see this spacing and also the formation.
01:01:517 (3) - New combo.
01:32:767 (1,2) - This is not so good for an Easy difficulty.
01:40:803 (6) - New combo.
01:41:874 (1) - Remove new combo.
01:44:374 (5) - New combo.
01:46:160 (1) - Remove new combo and also, remove one slider repeat.
[True Love]
00:45:803 (2) - New combo due to the slider velocity change.
01:10:446 (6) - New combo.
01:11:517 (1) - Remove new combo.
01:44:553 (1) - End this on 01:47:231 and add a finish.
[-Lennox-'s Insane Love]
00:12:588 (4,1,2) - This sudden change of spacing is really hard to read while playing. Do something else.
00:34:374 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - WTF is with the spacing on this pattern?!
01:06:339 (7) - New combo.
01:06:606 (1) - Remove new combo.
01:10:089 (3) - New combo.
01:10:535 (1) - Remove new combo.
01:24:374 (4) - New combo.
01:40:981 (1) - Remove new combo.
01:41:338 (4) - New combo due to jump.
01:42:588 (5) - ^
01:44:374 (2) - Slider repeat is almost hidden.
01:47:410 (1) - I would totally remove this and let the map end with that stream.
This map still needs to improve, get some more mods before asking me for a recheck
\o/jericho2442 wrote:
*I want your love tonight* o/
ok this has been pending ages now..... xD
True love
00:11:338 - i say add a note here, it follows your mapping here perfect and feels better
00:22:767 -
00:25:624 -
00:28:481 -
00:31:338 - same for all these. just goes so much better ;p
-Lennox-'s Insane Love
00:37:588 (1) - remove newcombo, its kinda pointless
01:24:196 - need to add a note here, the current position your stream ends seems totally wrong
hmmmm thats about it, everything else looked great to me
Yus Q.Qjericho2442 wrote:
Please enjoy receiving my Heart to rank this map
Yes it is . xD-Lennox- wrote:
Bad lennox diff is bad