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Y&Co. feat. Karin - Sweet Rain
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finally a good, sweet rain
我先不mod音效，先把節奏確認好再說
General:
[Basic]
1. 考慮加進去些1/8, 要不然挺單調的
2. AR3
3. 把不需要的綠線去除
00:14:534 (x) - 加個note?
00:34:276 (1) - 有點太上面了...
00:35:824 (1) - spinner有點短, 可能偏難了. 建議用slider帶過
00:41:244 (3) - 這樣呢?
00:54:405 (2) - 這附近:
01:20:147 (3) - new combo
01:36:405 (x) - 加個note?
01:40:663 (x) - ^?
01:51:308 (3) - 建議把這stack到01:51:695 (1)上
[Advanced]
1. 吼 這advanced太簡單了ww，我拜託你改難一點 (要不然我作個hyper算了XD)
2. AR+2, OD+1
00:00:212 (1) -
00:40:857 (6,7,8,9) - 聽起來怪怪的, 考慮修正節奏
00:43:953 (1,2,3) - ^
節奏上沒什麼問題, 就真的太簡單而已
[Extreme]
這extreme...節奏事實上不密, 除了後面尾殺很棒之外XD
(老實說下的有點像本家jubeat譜面, 用了很多1/8)
OD-1
00:44:341 (x) - 加個note吧(淚目
01:20:147 (1) - 這是不行的, slider的頭尾不能被藏起來
01:33:115 (1) - 我覺得點難接
01:43:953 (1,2,3,4) - 這裡放1/8實在...感覺有點弱掉了耶w
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extreme很不錯 我還挺喜歡的
先這樣子囉 之後再補hitsound的
先不用給kudosu star
NO KUDOSU FOR NOW
I WILL POST A SECOND MOD LATER
我先不mod音效，先把節奏確認好再說
General:
[Basic]
1. 考慮加進去些1/8, 要不然挺單調的
2. AR3
3. 把不需要的綠線去除
00:14:534 (x) - 加個note?
00:34:276 (1) - 有點太上面了...
00:35:824 (1) - spinner有點短, 可能偏難了. 建議用slider帶過
00:41:244 (3) - 這樣呢?
00:54:405 (2) - 這附近:
01:20:147 (3) - new combo
01:36:405 (x) - 加個note?
01:40:663 (x) - ^?
01:51:308 (3) - 建議把這stack到01:51:695 (1)上
[Advanced]
1. 吼 這advanced太簡單了ww，我拜託你改難一點 (要不然我作個hyper算了XD)
2. AR+2, OD+1
00:00:212 (1) -
00:40:857 (6,7,8,9) - 聽起來怪怪的, 考慮修正節奏
00:43:953 (1,2,3) - ^
節奏上沒什麼問題, 就真的太簡單而已
[Extreme]
這extreme...節奏事實上不密, 除了後面尾殺很棒之外XD
(老實說下的有點像本家jubeat譜面, 用了很多1/8)
OD-1
00:44:341 (x) - 加個note吧(淚目
01:20:147 (1) - 這是不行的, slider的頭尾不能被藏起來
01:33:115 (1) - 我覺得點難接
01:43:953 (1,2,3,4) - 這裡放1/8實在...感覺有點弱掉了耶w
=====================
extreme很不錯 我還挺喜歡的
先這樣子囉 之後再補hitsound的
先不用給kudosu star
NO KUDOSU FOR NOW
I WILL POST A SECOND MOD LATER
nice song!
我覺得最難的地方是skin((咦
skin的圈太粗了啦>"< 這樣easy感覺也變好難
[Advanced]
00:09:502 (1,2,3,4) - 我覺得這邊的音效都不是很明顯
[hyper]
AR大一點會比較好?
[Extreme]
00:23:050 (5) - 這個位子應該和前面用一樣會比較合適!
skin的圈太粗了啦>"< 這樣easy感覺也變好難
[Advanced]
00:09:502 (1,2,3,4) - 我覺得這邊的音效都不是很明顯
[hyper]
AR大一點會比較好?
[Extreme]
00:23:050 (5) - 這個位子應該和前面用一樣會比較合適!
star...
star~!
Please read the rules before you post in other people's queue.
Most of them usually don't accept WIP map.
I'm not trying to be mean ... but yet ...
Most of them usually don't accept WIP map.
I'm not trying to be mean ... but yet ...
Hi!
General;
- Disable letterboxing on all diffs
- You need to re-encode your mp3 to something that isn't 320 kbps
- Disable countdown on all diffs
Skin;
- Missing elements:
* Cursortrail
* Spinner-spin
- Problems with elements:
* Spinner-circle >> You need something that can be seen while spinning, what you have now blends with the background
* Spinner-metre >> This blends too much with the background, you can't see if your metre is filled up
* The hitcircle overlay seems smaller than it should be
SB;
* Maximum dimensions are 640x480 so reduce "black.png"
Basic;
- 00:41:631 >> Move (4) here
- 00:43:373 >> Delete
- 01:20:147 >> This slowdown might be a bit tricky for the easiest diff
- 01:56:341 >> Finish
- 01:57:889 >> End kiai time here
- The stacks and notes that are too soon after spinners are kinda difficult for the easiest diff
Adavanced;
- AR -1
- 00:35:437 (4,5,6,7) >> Might be a bot hard
- 00:42:986 (3,4,5,6) >> ^
- 01:26:341 (4,5,6,7) >> ^
- 01:38:534 >> Add a note
- Why not end the diff at the same place as Basic ?
Hyper;
- AR -1
- 00:52:566 >> Delete
- 00:52:760 >> ^
- 01:57:889 >> Finish
Extreme;
- 00:23:437 >> New combo
- 00:24:599 >> ^
- 01:25:179 >> ^
- 01:30:792 >> ^
- Why not end the diff at the same time as Hyper and Basic ?
* Star ~
General;
- Disable letterboxing on all diffs
- You need to re-encode your mp3 to something that isn't 320 kbps
- Disable countdown on all diffs
Skin;
- Missing elements:
* Cursortrail
* Spinner-spin
- Problems with elements:
* Spinner-circle >> You need something that can be seen while spinning, what you have now blends with the background
* Spinner-metre >> This blends too much with the background, you can't see if your metre is filled up
* The hitcircle overlay seems smaller than it should be
SB;
* Maximum dimensions are 640x480 so reduce "black.png"
Basic;
- 00:41:631 >> Move (4) here
- 00:43:373 >> Delete
- 01:20:147 >> This slowdown might be a bit tricky for the easiest diff
- 01:56:341 >> Finish
- 01:57:889 >> End kiai time here
- The stacks and notes that are too soon after spinners are kinda difficult for the easiest diff
Adavanced;
- AR -1
- 00:35:437 (4,5,6,7) >> Might be a bot hard
- 00:42:986 (3,4,5,6) >> ^
- 01:26:341 (4,5,6,7) >> ^
- 01:38:534 >> Add a note
- Why not end the diff at the same place as Basic ?
Hyper;
- AR -1
- 00:52:566 >> Delete
- 00:52:760 >> ^
- 01:57:889 >> Finish
Extreme;
- 00:23:437 >> New combo
- 00:24:599 >> ^
- 01:25:179 >> ^
- 01:30:792 >> ^
- Why not end the diff at the same time as Hyper and Basic ?
* Star ~
Sorry for huge delay.
Hi, as your request, but I don’t really like this kind of song, so I won’t point out that much.
[Basic]
-This diff’s kiai should end at 01:14:534 too.
01:14:247 – this green line should be at 01:14:244
[Extreme]
What’s the point to put so many green lines that are so close to each other ?
I would suggest you just make them like other diffs':
Star.
Oh, don't kds me if this is not helpful.
Hi, as your request, but I don’t really like this kind of song, so I won’t point out that much.
[Basic]
-This diff’s kiai should end at 01:14:534 too.
01:14:247 – this green line should be at 01:14:244
[Extreme]
What’s the point to put so many green lines that are so close to each other ?
I would suggest you just make them like other diffs':
Star.
Oh, don't kds me if this is not helpful.
General
kiai is not contant. Make end of 1st kiai sectoin in Basic at 01:14:534 too.
Hyper
Hp drain +2
00:24:599 (4) - add clap
00:52:470 (5) - add whistle
00:52:857 (1) - add whistle+finish to the start, remove whistle from the end
00:53:244 (2) - add whistle to the start
Extreme
OD -1
Basic
01:00:599 (1) - too far from screen's center after spinner. Hard to catch it, imo.
Very good, have my star~
kiai is not contant. Make end of 1st kiai sectoin in Basic at 01:14:534 too.
Hyper
Hp drain +2
00:24:599 (4) - add clap
00:52:470 (5) - add whistle
00:52:857 (1) - add whistle+finish to the start, remove whistle from the end
00:53:244 (2) - add whistle to the start
Extreme
OD -1
Basic
01:00:599 (1) - too far from screen's center after spinner. Hard to catch it, imo.
Very good, have my star~
[Basic]
- 00:12:405-; 00:49:567-; 01:00:405-; 01:14:341-; 01:32:922- for a beginnder its too hard, let more space behind the spinners, its too hard for an easy
[Advanced]
- looks good
[Hyper]
- looks good
[Extreme]
- looks good
star and good luck ^^
- 00:12:405-; 00:49:567-; 01:00:405-; 01:14:341-; 01:32:922- for a beginnder its too hard, let more space behind the spinners, its too hard for an easy
[Advanced]
- looks good
[Hyper]
- looks good
[Extreme]
- looks good
star and good luck ^^
Sweet Rain!Nice choice!
[General]
offset about -5ms
[Basic]
00:35:824 (2,1) - this stack is too difficulty for beginner.
01:23:824 (1,2) - ^ but no concern than other issue
01:36:211 (1,2,3) - ^
[Advance]
00:24:599 (7,8) - add clap 7. remove hitsound 8.
00:41:437 (1,2,3) - suggestion. http://puu.sh/5vZ3
01:57:502 (5,6) - add clap 5.remove hitsound 6.
[Hyper]
OD +1
00:06:405 (1,2,3,4,5) - Why did you choose this timing? Please more meaningful to the timing.
[Extreme]
HPDrain is very hard.
Please -1~2
00:22:948 (4,5) - not good staking.
00:41:626 (5,1) - too close? Please using about x0.5 DS.
gl~
[General]
offset about -5ms
[Basic]
00:35:824 (2,1) - this stack is too difficulty for beginner.
01:23:824 (1,2) - ^ but no concern than other issue
01:36:211 (1,2,3) - ^
[Advance]
00:24:599 (7,8) - add clap 7. remove hitsound 8.
00:41:437 (1,2,3) - suggestion. http://puu.sh/5vZ3
01:57:502 (5,6) - add clap 5.remove hitsound 6.
[Hyper]
OD +1
00:06:405 (1,2,3,4,5) - Why did you choose this timing? Please more meaningful to the timing.
[Extreme]
HPDrain is very hard.
Please -1~2
00:22:948 (4,5) - not good staking.
00:41:626 (5,1) - too close? Please using about x0.5 DS.
gl~
我還不太會mod~.~ 一切都只是建議^^
Basic
00:11:045(1) - 拉到 00:12:206??
00:48:206(1) - 拉到 00:49:368??
00:59:045(1) - 拉到 01:00:206??
01:31:561(1) - 拉到 01:31:561??
01:54:787(1) - new combo?
Advanced
very nice~~~^^
Hyper
Extreme
00:04:852 (5,6,7) - 排好看一點??
00:15:690 (7,8,9,10) - ^
01:40:852 (1,2,3,4) - ^
--------------------------------------------
就這樣@@
非常好的圖喔^^
祝~~早日ranked
Basic
00:11:045(1) - 拉到 00:12:206??
00:48:206(1) - 拉到 00:49:368??
00:59:045(1) - 拉到 01:00:206??
01:31:561(1) - 拉到 01:31:561??
01:54:787(1) - new combo?
Advanced
very nice~~~^^
Hyper
Extreme
00:04:852 (5,6,7) - 排好看一點??
00:15:690 (7,8,9,10) - ^
01:40:852 (1,2,3,4) - ^
--------------------------------------------
就這樣@@
非常好的圖喔^^
祝~~早日ranked
as your req~
[General]
tags里面不加上KONAMI么(嘛 其实加不加都无所谓 加不加看你自己了
[Extreme]
00:48:594 (3) - 唔...3.5x的jump是不是有点大了 建议调小点
01:18:787 (6) - 同上
01:57:884 - 这里调大点音量?50%感觉太小了
[Hyper]
00:24:981 (6) - 加finish
01:26:916 - 这个note删掉 然后后面的3个slider提前1/2?
01:57:884 - 同extreme
[Advance]
00:44:529 - 加个note?
01:27:303 (1,2,3,4,1) - 这5个slider都提前1/2?
01:57:884 - 同extreme
[Basic]
fine
给颗星星吧(27颗 这数字真心不吉利lol
[General]
tags里面不加上KONAMI么(嘛 其实加不加都无所谓 加不加看你自己了
[Extreme]
00:48:594 (3) - 唔...3.5x的jump是不是有点大了 建议调小点
01:18:787 (6) - 同上
01:57:884 - 这里调大点音量?50%感觉太小了
[Hyper]
00:24:981 (6) - 加finish
01:26:916 - 这个note删掉 然后后面的3个slider提前1/2?
01:57:884 - 同extreme
[Advance]
00:44:529 - 加个note?
01:27:303 (1,2,3,4,1) - 这5个slider都提前1/2?
01:57:884 - 同extreme
[Basic]
fine
给颗星星吧(27颗 这数字真心不吉利lol
[overall]:
[Extreme]:
nothing found~
go go Ranked!
- looks fine
[Extreme]:
- Rename Another?
- 00:15:690 (7) - New combo
- 01:13:948 (7) - New combo
- 01:26:626 (6) - Add note?
- 01:37:368 (7) - repeat 1time?
- Maybe Kiai end for 01:56:142
- 00:56:723 (4) - Reduce for repeat1
- 00:57:303 - Add note
- looks fine.
- looks fine
nothing found~
go go Ranked!
Topic Starter
mjw5150 wrote:
as your req~
[General]
tags里面不加上KONAMI么(嘛 其实加不加都无所谓 加不加看你自己了 好吧>_< 那不加啦
[Extreme]
00:48:594 (3) - 唔...3.5x的jump是不是有点大了 建议调小点 因為是Extreme 所以不改啦~
01:18:787 (6) - 同上 沒改...抱歉....
01:57:884 - 这里调大点音量?50%感觉太小了 okok~
[Hyper]
00:24:981 (6) - 加finish added
01:26:916 - 这个note删掉 然后后面的3个slider提前1/2? 扼... 我覺得還是原本的好>_<
01:57:884 - 同extreme added
[Advance]
00:44:529 - 加个note? ok~
01:27:303 (1,2,3,4,1) - 这5个slider都提前1/2? 還是別了吧
01:57:884 - 同extreme added
[Basic]
fine ^^
给颗星星吧(27颗 这数字真心不吉利lol
Topic Starter
Fixed~S o r d a wrote:
[overall]:
- looks fine
[Extreme]:no...
- Rename Another? The song is from jubeat lol so ... you know...
- 00:15:690 (7) - New combo added
- 01:13:948 (7) - New combo added
- 01:26:626 (6) - Add note? Nice to find it!!!
- 01:37:368 (7) - repeat 1time? lol no
- Maybe Kiai end for 01:56:142
[Hyper]:ok!
- 00:56:723 (4) - Reduce for repeat1 ok!
- 00:57:303 - Add note
[Advanced]:[Easy]:
- looks fine.
overall nice map
- looks fine
nothing found~
go go Ranked! Thanks!!
Hello~M4M
[General]
既然有spinner approach circle就把所有滑条一系列的补齐w
这几个
其实倒数第二第三个不是很重要但是以防万一因为有的MAT会很挑剔w
因为设置了自定义皮肤所以在osz文件里
Basic和Extreme的break time与其他diff不一样，同mapper的break time要保持一致
SB有强闪光，建议在Song setup里面的
第三个打勾
[Basic]
00:11:045 (1) - 这个spinner对新手来说略短
00:35:819 (2) - 停在00:36:787比较好
00:37:368 (1,2,3,4) - EZ不建议这么叠，新手会不晓得怎么办
00:41:626 (4) - 减掉一个折返00:42:981的地方加个circle？
00:43:561 (1) - 换成00:43:948上的circle
00:48:206 (1) - spinner太短，停在00:49:174试试看？
01:14:529 (2) - 原则上EZ不建议slider叠note
01:16:077 (3,4) - 对EZ来说太难了，EZ尽量不要使用除了两个circle叠在一起以外的stack
01:31:561 (1) - 停在01:32:529
01:36:981 (3,4) - 同前
01:40:658 (2) - del，EZ里尽量不要有红线上的note
01:45:497 (1) - 有多余的绿线,其他diff也有，fix一下
[Advance]
AR+OD全部减1~2
01:04:465 (4) - 减掉两个折返，01:05:239上加circle
其他没啥
[Hyper]
01:56:626 (5) - NC
嗯挑不出啥O O
有些短slider长来回可以做成stream
[Extreme]
00:06:981 (3) - 1 grid right
00:07:755 (6) - 1 grid left
00:23:045 (5) - 拉开
00:34:658 (2) - 2往右移动让2的头和1的头的距离和之前的距离一样，就是>
00:37:561 (3) - 远了，往右边移动
00:42:013 (x) - add circle，调整spacing，就算不加这个note后面那个note的spacing也是会误导人的
以上w。
[General]
既然有spinner approach circle就把所有滑条一系列的补齐w
这几个
其实倒数第二第三个不是很重要但是以防万一因为有的MAT会很挑剔w
因为设置了自定义皮肤所以在osz文件里
[Colours]加上红字这一栏
Combo1 : 244,162,222
Combo2 : 232,250,171
Combo3 : 163,224,200
SliderBorder : 255,255,255
Breeze: RGB数值可以自己定, 这是slider外围的那个颜色, 你用了自定义note, 为了避免其他用自定义skin的玩家不会有奇怪的视觉效果, 所以得加这个sliderapproachcircle有点粗，三连打叠一起感觉很难看，而且会让人分辨不清
Basic和Extreme的break time与其他diff不一样，同mapper的break time要保持一致
SB有强闪光，建议在Song setup里面的
[Basic]
00:11:045 (1) - 这个spinner对新手来说略短
00:35:819 (2) - 停在00:36:787比较好
00:37:368 (1,2,3,4) - EZ不建议这么叠，新手会不晓得怎么办
00:41:626 (4) - 减掉一个折返00:42:981的地方加个circle？
00:43:561 (1) - 换成00:43:948上的circle
00:48:206 (1) - spinner太短，停在00:49:174试试看？
01:14:529 (2) - 原则上EZ不建议slider叠note
01:16:077 (3,4) - 对EZ来说太难了，EZ尽量不要使用除了两个circle叠在一起以外的stack
01:31:561 (1) - 停在01:32:529
01:36:981 (3,4) - 同前
01:40:658 (2) - del，EZ里尽量不要有红线上的note
01:45:497 (1) - 有多余的绿线,其他diff也有，fix一下
[Advance]
AR+OD全部减1~2
01:04:465 (4) - 减掉两个折返，01:05:239上加circle
其他没啥
[Hyper]
01:56:626 (5) - NC
嗯挑不出啥O O
有些短slider长来回可以做成stream
[Extreme]
00:06:981 (3) - 1 grid right
00:07:755 (6) - 1 grid left
00:23:045 (5) - 拉开
00:34:658 (2) - 2往右移动让2的头和1的头的距离和之前的距离一样，就是>
00:37:561 (3) - 远了，往右边移动
00:42:013 (x) - add circle，调整spacing，就算不加这个note后面那个note的spacing也是会误导人的
以上w。
你好 以下只是建議.(可以無視它.因為 我MOD的不是很好?!OTZ ).
[Basic]
00:23:432 (4) - 在00:23:432 跟00:24:013 加個finish.
00:24:594 (5) - 在00:24:594 跟00:24:981 加個finish.
01:19:174 (2) - 整個加個finish?!.
01:20:142 (1) - 結尾加個finish 如何?!.
[Advanced]
00:23:432 (5,6,7) - 5跟6的頭 和 7 都加個finish吧?.
00:57:497 (4) - 拉成這樣!?. http://puu.sh/6LJI .
01:19:174 (5,6,7,8) - 都加finish.
01:20:142 (1) - 跟basic的一樣~.
[Hyper]
00:23:432 (1) - 頭加個finish~.
00:24:013 (2,4) - 加個finish~?.
01:06:594 (1,2) - 拉成這樣吧?!. http://puu.sh/6LMq 然後2就是把1翻轉過來而已.
01:19:174 (1,2,3,4,5) - OTZ 跟前面難度的MOD一樣了.
[Extreme]
00:23:432 (1,2,3,4) - 若..前面三個難度都有改的話再改成像前面三個那樣吧~.
00:34:271 (1) - 這樣?!. http://puu.sh/6LOk
01:04:852 (6) - 把這個跟01:05:239 的結尾重疊?!.
01:56:336 (1,2) - 頭都加個finish.
抱歉 mod雖然有點少 又或許這些mod的建議幫不上忙 .
但 歌曲好聽 做得很不錯 加油! .
我蠻喜歡這skin的 .
以下只是建議.(可以無視它.因為 我MOD的不是很好?!OTZ ). [Basic]
00:23:432 (4) - 在00:23:432 跟00:24:013 加個finish.
00:24:594 (5) - 在00:24:594 跟00:24:981 加個finish.
01:19:174 (2) - 整個加個finish?!.
01:20:142 (1) - 結尾加個finish 如何?!.
[Advanced]
00:23:432 (5,6,7) - 5跟6的頭 和 7 都加個finish吧?.
00:57:497 (4) - 拉成這樣!?. http://puu.sh/6LJI .
01:19:174 (5,6,7,8) - 都加finish.
01:20:142 (1) - 跟basic的一樣~.
[Hyper]
00:23:432 (1) - 頭加個finish~.
00:24:013 (2,4) - 加個finish~?.
01:06:594 (1,2) - 拉成這樣吧?!. http://puu.sh/6LMq 然後2就是把1翻轉過來而已.
01:19:174 (1,2,3,4,5) - OTZ 跟前面難度的MOD一樣了.
[Extreme]
00:23:432 (1,2,3,4) - 若..前面三個難度都有改的話再改成像前面三個那樣吧~.
00:34:271 (1) - 這樣?!. http://puu.sh/6LOk
01:04:852 (6) - 把這個跟01:05:239 的結尾重疊?!.
01:56:336 (1,2) - 頭都加個finish.
抱歉 mod雖然有點少 又或許這些mod的建議幫不上忙 .
但 歌曲好聽 做得很不錯 加油! .
我蠻喜歡這skin的 .
Topic Starter
Megurine Luka wrote:
Hello~M4M
[General]
既然有spinner approach circle就把所有滑条一系列的补齐w
这几个
其实倒数第二第三个不是很重要但是以防万一因为有的MAT会很挑剔w
因为设置了自定义皮肤所以在osz文件里[Colours]ok
Combo1 : 244,162,222
Combo2 : 232,250,171
Combo3 : 163,224,200
SliderBorder : 255,255,255
加上红字这一栏Breeze: RGB数值可以自己定, 这是slider外围的那个颜色, 你用了自定义note, 为了避免其他用自定义skin的玩家不会有奇怪的视觉效果, 所以得加这个sliderapproachcircle有点粗，三连打叠一起感觉很难看，而且会让人分辨不清
Basic和Extreme的break time与其他diff不一样，同mapper的break time要保持一致
SB有强闪光，建议在Song setup里面的
[Basic]
00:11:045 (1) - 这个spinner对新手来说略短 ok
00:35:819 (2) - 停在00:36:787比较好 ok
00:37:368 (1,2,3,4) - EZ不建议这么叠，新手会不晓得怎么办 ok
00:41:626 (4) - 减掉一个折返00:42:981的地方加个circle？沒改
00:43:561 (1) - 换成00:43:948上的circleok
00:48:206 (1) - spinner太短，停在00:49:174试试看？ok
01:14:529 (2) - 原则上EZ不建议slider叠noteok
01:16:077 (3,4) - 对EZ来说太难了，EZ尽量不要使用除了两个circle叠在一起以外的stackok
01:31:561 (1) - 停在01:32:529ok
01:36:981 (3,4) - 同前ok
01:40:658 (2) - del，EZ里尽量不要有红线上的noteok
01:45:497 (1) - 有多余的绿线,其他diff也有，fix一下ok
[Advance]
AR+OD全部减1~2ok
01:04:465 (4) - 减掉两个折返，01:05:239上加circleok
其他没啥
[Hyper]
01:56:626 (5) - NCok
嗯挑不出啥O O
有些短slider长来回可以做成stream
[Extreme]
00:06:981 (3) - 1 grid rightok
00:07:755 (6) - 1 grid leftok
00:23:045 (5) - 拉开ok
00:34:658 (2) - 2往右移动让2的头和1的头的距离和之前的距离一样，就是>
00:37:561 (3) - 远了，往右边移动ok
00:42:013 (x) - add circle，调整spacing，就算不加这个note后面那个note的spacing也是会误导人的ok
以上w。
Topic Starter
l1106188 wrote:
你好
[Basic]
00:23:432 (4) - 在00:23:432 跟00:24:013 加個finish.ok
00:24:594 (5) - 在00:24:594 跟00:24:981 加個finish.ok
01:19:174 (2) - 整個加個finish?!.加一些而已>_<
01:20:142 (1) - 結尾加個finish 如何?!.ok
[Advanced]
00:23:432 (5,6,7) - 5跟6的頭 和 7 都加個finish吧?.ok
00:57:497 (4) - 拉成這樣!?. http://puu.sh/6LJI .差不多吧>_< 但還是改了
01:19:174 (5,6,7,8) - 都加finish.ok
01:20:142 (1) - 跟basic的一樣~.ok
[Hyper]
00:23:432 (1) - 頭加個finish~.ok
00:24:013 (2,4) - 加個finish~?.ok
01:06:594 (1,2) - 拉成這樣吧?!. http://puu.sh/6LMq 然後2就是把1翻轉過來而已.ok
01:19:174 (1,2,3,4,5) - OTZ 跟前面難度的MOD一樣了.ok
[Extreme]
00:23:432 (1,2,3,4) - 若..前面三個難度都有改的話再改成像前面三個那樣吧~.ok
00:34:271 (1) - 這樣?!. http://puu.sh/6LOk 好像沒差多少 所以沒改了lol
01:04:852 (6) - 把這個跟01:05:239 的結尾重疊?!. ok
01:56:336 (1,2) - 頭都加個finish.ok
抱歉 mod雖然有點少 又或許這些mod的建議幫不上忙 .
但 歌曲好聽 做得很不錯 加油! . 謝謝啊!!~~
我蠻喜歡這skin的 .
Hi hi!
Overall
我覺得approach circle太肥(或太糊)...
所以總覺得要AR+1才看得清楚
[Basic]
01:36:206 (1) - ?!?!
[Advanced]
maybe AR+1
[Hyper]
maybe AR+1
這個難度你可以修難點(和Extreme比太簡單了) 例如:
01:01:755 (6) - 孤單的clap
[Extreme]
雖然剛開始的節奏簡單了點 有了尾殺補強還不錯
但是尾殺的節奏我覺得不太對 我只修改節奏而已 給你參考Download: Y&Co. feat. Karin - Sweet Rain (bossandy) [Extreme_mod].osu
00:36:981 (2) - 太大聲了
00:42:400 (x) - 加個note?
00:52:755 (x) - ^
01:05:142 (x) - ^ (不過這裡...應該是不可能吧)
01:14:336 (3) - 太大聲
01:30:787 (1) - 取消new combo
01:36:110 (x) - 加個note?
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音效我覺得還不錯
所以沒指出什麼
主要是節奏部分
有些slider很好看
如果extreme的節奏有改什麼最好寫出來喔:D
Overall
我覺得approach circle太肥(或太糊)...
所以總覺得要AR+1才看得清楚
[Basic]
01:36:206 (1) - ?!?!
[Advanced]
maybe AR+1
[Hyper]
maybe AR+1
這個難度你可以修難點(和Extreme比太簡單了) 例如:
SPOILER
01:18:690 (8) - 挪上面一點00:52:658 (x) - 可以放三連打
01:36:110 (x) - 加個note
終盤部分可以放二連
01:36:110 (x) - 加個note
終盤部分可以放二連
01:01:755 (6) - 孤單的clap
[Extreme]
雖然剛開始的節奏簡單了點 有了尾殺補強還不錯
但是尾殺的節奏我覺得不太對 我只修改節奏而已 給你參考Download: Y&Co. feat. Karin - Sweet Rain (bossandy) [Extreme_mod].osu
00:36:981 (2) - 太大聲了
00:42:400 (x) - 加個note?
00:52:755 (x) - ^
01:05:142 (x) - ^ (不過這裡...應該是不可能吧)
01:14:336 (3) - 太大聲
01:30:787 (1) - 取消new combo
01:36:110 (x) - 加個note?
================
音效我覺得還不錯
所以沒指出什麼
主要是節奏部分
有些slider很好看
如果extreme的節奏有改什麼最好寫出來喔:D
Hello ~ Sorry, I'm late ;~;
General :
Basic :
General :
- Skin :
- Your approachcircle is too thick, it's pleasant to play, it makes stream hard to read and double almost unreadable. Please, remove it ? :/ (And don't forget to fullsubmit)SPOILER
It looks so weird D:
- Your approachcircle is too thick, it's pleasant to play, it makes stream hard to read and double almost unreadable. Please, remove it ? :/ (And don't forget to fullsubmit)
- The epilepsie warning hides the notes at the beginning of the map. It's not very playable. Try to do something to fix this problem like storyboarding the warning.
- normal-hitnormal2 is almost inaudible, and you can't have silenced or inaudible hitsounds in your map because it's very very confusing. The player must have a hint which indicate him that he succesfully clicked the note. Instead of using this normal-hitnormal2, I think you ought to use the default hitnormal with volume 65% or make the hitsound louder.
Basic :
- 00:59:045 (1) - This spinner is too short for the easiest difficulty, even if auto get 3000 bonus, remove the spinner and map this part.
- 01:23:819 (1,2,3,4) - Make these notes audible. And you can't use the music to hitsound your notes :/
- 01:36:206 - You have 2 notes on the same tick here !
- 00:00:787 (3,4) - This double sounds kinda weird. According to me, it would be better if you only have a slider which start at 00:00:787. And make it more audible please.
- 00:35:432 - A clap is missing here
- 00:40:852 - A clap is missing here
- 01:22:271 (1,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - Make these notes audible. And you can't use the music to hitsound your notes :/
- 00:00:594 (3,4,5) - Make them louder .__.
- 00:07:465 (4) - A clap is missing here
- 01:16:077 (1,2) - I don't understand why you end this slider on blue ticks, there is nothing mappable on these ticks here. It sounds weird and it's confusing. You ought to end them 1/4 earlier
- 01:22:271 (1,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Make these notes audible. And you can't use the music to hitsound your notes :/
- 00:00:594 (2,3,4,5) - Make them louder
- 00:04:852 (5) - Add a new combo mark on this note because you start an new pattern.
- 00:06:110 - Add a circle here. Even if it should be 1/6 here, 1/4 is fine and more playable than 1/6 which is uh. Or maybe move 00:06:206 (10) 1/2 earlier and add 2 reverse like you did with 00:36:981 (2).
- 01:21:110 - Remove this short break which is useless and looks ugly.
- 01:22:658 - Same as above
- 01:22:271 (1,1,2,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - Make these notes audible. And you can't use the music to hitsound your notes :/
Please, use this normal-hitnormal2, the current one is not enough audible. I increased its volume.
Download: normal-hitnormal2.zip
Edit : Okay, Bubbled ~
Download: normal-hitnormal2.zip
Edit : Okay, Bubbled ~