RobotoRaccoon wrote:

Mod

[Kusano]
• HP -1 no
• AR -1 ^
00:04:458 (4) - Oh come on, you could've put it over the 2 fixed.
00:40:094 (1) - I don't agree with this new combo hmm, ok.

RobotoRaccoon wrote:

Mod

General
• Lots of box patterns... ;;

[Easy]
00:20:458 (1,2,3) - Spacing here boy!

[Normal]
Coolio.

[Kusano]
• HP -1
• AR -1
00:04:458 (4) - Oh come on, you could've put it over the 2
00:40:094 (1) - I don't agree with this new combo

[Insane]
00:43:640 (7,8) - Stack these both directly on the end of the slider. You should then see this in the top right corner. http://i.imgur.com/hv1qU.png

Star

• 
  くさのさんのdiffのプレビュータイムが違うので統一してください。

• 
  ちょっと赤線に乗せる音取りが多いです。
  ボーカルにこだわらなくてもいいので、もう少し白線に乗せた方が初心者には易しいですね。

1. 00:33:367 (3) - 00:33:185から始めて、終わりは今と同じ位置まで。
2. 00:36:094 (2,3) - こんな感じの方が易しいです。
   
3. 00:43:549 (1) - 00:43:731から始めて、終わりは今と同じ位置まで。

• 
  難しい音取りが多くてNormalじゃなくなってますが、Easyがあるので問題ないでしょう。

1. 00:48:640 (2) - 無理にボーカルにこだわらなくていいと思います。
   

1. 00:11:004 (T) - 音が大きいのでこれくらいに。10%単位で変化させた方がメリハリはつくと思います。
   
2. 00:13:913 (4) - new combo?
3. 00:40:458 (1) - 00:40:276に移動。
4. 00:58:094 (4) - finish削除？
5. 00:58:640 (2) - 頭にfinish追加？
6. 01:15:367 (5) - finishの音でバックが聞こえなくなって01:15:913 (1,2)のリズムが取りづらいので削除した方がいいです。
7. 01:15:913 (1) - finishつけるならこっち。

• 
  Aメロはこれまでよりも配置の幅が広がったようで良かったです。
  少しずつ新しい形のスライダーも増えていてメリハリも付いてきたので、
  Bメロとサビでももっと新しい配置が増えると良いかなと思います。

1. 00:12:822 (3) - 終端にfinish
2. 00:19:913 (5) - スペーシングが変わっているしnew comboを加えた方が見た目的にもメリハリが出るかも？
3. 00:40:276 (6) - ここまでボーカルの区切りに合わせて作ってきているので、ちょっと違和感を感じてしまいました。あくまで提案ですが、こういうパターンはどうでしょうか。
   
4. 01:14:276 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - もう少しパターンに変化を加えた方がいいと思います。
5. 01:15:731 (1) - finishじゃなくてwhistleの方がいいかも？
6. 01:34:094 (3,4) - バックの音からして連打のパターンに変えてみてはどうでしょうか？

Suzully wrote:

SPOILER

(・w・)ﾉども

[General]

• 
  くさのさんのdiffのプレビュータイムが違うので統一してください。

[Hard]

1. 00:11:004 (T) - 音が大きいのでこれくらいに。10%単位で変化させた方がメリハリはつくと思います。
   
2. 00:13:913 (4) - new combo?
3. 00:40:458 (1) - 00:40:276に移動。
4. 00:58:094 (4) - finish削除？
5. 00:58:640 (2) - 頭にfinish追加？
6. 01:15:367 (5) - finishの音でバックが聞こえなくなって01:15:913 (1,2)のリズムが取りづらいので削除した方がいいです。
7. 01:15:913 (1) - finishつけるならこっち。

All fixed.
Thank you for modding.

Download: Shimotsuki Haruka - Yuuki no Mahou (Short Ver.) (Hinacle) [kusano].osu

Equivalent wrote:

Sorry, late

Not much issues I found:

General:
Dont silence the slidertick for the whole map, especially on normal and easy.
Why not use the custom hitsound for normal and easy too?
Inconsistency in preview time:
Kusano's preview time is : 53185, while the other diff is : 53014 Make it all consistent. done.

Kusano's diff:
I suggest lower down OD 1 tick, so average player who can play hard but can't play Insane have a better score/accuracy. But overall your your hard is playable <3 no.

Even if I saw quite inconsistency in Insane, it play fine by me, so not going to complain about it

good map, star

1. Delete .osb file.

1. Offset 2994

1. Timing Setup Panel
2. Select all timing points you want to move. (Click on the first timing point, and then shift+click on the last one. This way it will select all timing sections)
3. Move selected offsets by: -10.
4. Then resnap all notes~

1. Increase tick rate to 1 or 2.

1. Increase tick rate to 1 please.

1. Increase tick rate to 1 please.

1. Decrease AR and Drain Rate by one.
2. Increase tick rate to 1 please.

GladiOol wrote:

[kusano]:

1. Increase tick rate to 1 please.

00:13:913 (1) - Remove new combo.
00:14:458 (6) - Add new combo.
00:40:276 (1) - Remove new combo.
00:40:640 (7) - Add new combo.
00:42:640 (1) - Remove new combo.
00:43:549 (8) - Add new combo.
00:45:003 (1) - Remove new combo.
00:52:094 (4) - Add a new combo here, because there's also a new combo there in [Insane].
00:58:458 (1) - Remove new combo.
00:58:640 (6) - Add new combo.
01:11:185 (1) - Remove new combo.
01:15:367 (5) - Add a soft-finish on the reverse arrow of the slider.
01:15:913 (1) - Remove new combo and remove the soft-finish. Also move this note 1/2 forward and then add a clap on it. Maybe place it here?
01:16:276 (7) - Add a soft-finish on the beginning of the slider.
01:18:458 (1) - Add a soft-finish on this note.
01:23:367 (1) - Remove new combo.

Starred~

TTTTTTTTTTTT wrote:

KUSANO:

00:22:266 - move to x:104 y:96?
00:28:994 - 1 gird left (lv4)

star

TTTTTTTTTTTT wrote:

suggestions only (No KDS)

EASY:

01 07 721 - remove sliderwhistle and add a whistle here

NORMAL:

01 23 539 and 01 24 084 - whistle

KUSANO:

00:22:266 - move to x:104 y:96?
00:28:994 - 1 gird left (lv4)

INSANE:

fine

ALL:

Fine to me.

star

1. osb入ってました

• 
  赤線配置が多く感じました

1. 00:02:994 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - ヒットサウンド、音量が全て同じで単調に感じたので、
   　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 音量を70-60-70-...みたいな感じで交互に変えてみてはどうでしょう

1. 01:04:812 (1) - whistle追加
2. 01:07:721 (1) - ^
3. 01:23:357 (2,3) - スライダーの終わりにwhistle追加
4. 01:24:448 (4) - 返しの部分にwhistle追加

1. このdifだけSlider Tick Rateが0.5になっているので１に変更しておいた方がいいように思います

1. 00:10:266 (5) - このスライダーの終わりから音量を30-35-40-45と上げてありますが、
   　　　　　 　　　　あまり変化を感じないので、30-40-50-60という風に10ずつ上げてみてはどうでしょう
   　　　　　 　　　　（次の緑線の音量が70だし、きれいかなとも思ったり）
2. 00:53:175 (1) - 終わりのwhistle削除
3. 01:02:266 (6,8) - whistle削除して、(6)にclap追加
4. 01:13:994 (x) と 01:14:175 (x) にnoteを追加して５連打..？

KSHR wrote:

modding


General

1. osb入ってました

Easy

• 
  赤線配置が多く感じました

1. 00:02:994 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - ヒットサウンド、音量が全て同じで単調に感じたので、
   　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 音量を70-60-70-...みたいな感じで交互に変えてみてはどうでしょう

Normal

1. 01:04:812 (1) - whistle追加
2. 01:07:721 (1) - ^
3. 01:23:357 (2,3) - スライダーの終わりにwhistle追加
4. 01:24:448 (4) - 返しの部分にwhistle追加

kusano

1. このdifだけSlider Tick Rateが0.5になっているので１に変更しておいた方がいいように思います

Insane

1. 00:10:266 (5) - このスライダーの終わりから音量を30-35-40-45と上げてありますが、
   　　　　　 　　　　あまり変化を感じないので、30-40-50-60という風に10ずつ上げてみてはどうでしょう
   　　　　　 　　　　（次の緑線の音量が70だし、きれいかなとも思ったり）
2. 00:53:175 (1) - 終わりのwhistle削除
3. 01:02:266 (6,8) - whistle削除して、(6)にclap追加
4. 01:13:994 (x) と 01:14:175 (x) にnoteを追加して５連打..？

fight~

Azure_Kyte wrote:

Here's my Mod

Blue = Suggestion Red = Check this

[General]

Why is this called short ver.? Why not call it OP ver or something more accurate to where it's from (unless it was released on an album under this title) hmmm...I all use (Short Ver.) to be my gal song OP map


[Easy]

01:31:539 (1,2) - The curves on these sliders could be smoothed out a little more; try pulling the 2nd and 3rd slider points out a little bit. Done

Other than that, all good.

[Normal]

No issues, but I'd suggest adding a note with finish hitsound where the final spinner begins, and moving/shortening the spinner forward by 1/2

[kusano] I'd recommend changing this to kusano's Hard (Otherwise it kinda breaks your naming convention with an Easy, Normal, Kusano, Insane mapset) ok.Done

00:15:994 (1) - I don't recommend placing a Spinner 1/4 after a note, as it appears while the note is still active, confusing players. Please Move forward to the red tick and shorten by 1/4. Done
01:25:630 (1) - Same here. Please move forward to the red tick. Done
01:34:539 (1) - And again here, Please move forward to the red tick. Done

Other than that, Nothing really problematic here, although I don't like how some of the combos start in the exact same place as the previous one did, such as 01:01:903 (3,1). Consider respacing these out, or not. Up to you.

[Insane]

00:15:994 (1) - Same issue here with the Spinners 1/4 after a note. Please move forward to the next red tick and shorten. Done
00:47:903 (1) - There's a dramatic spacing change here within the same combo. I recommend changing this to the new combo instead of the next note, so as to maintain consistency Done
01:34:539 (1) - Again, just move this forward to the red tick and shorten by 1/4 Done

All in all, a pretty solid beatmap. Good job =)

1. Your .mp3 has a bitrate of 127.85 kb/s. 128 is minimum... but it's a very little diffrence. I don't mind the diffrence, but I'm not sure if MAT/BAT do... Asked Jericho and he said it's acceptable. You can keep it~

GladiOol wrote:

Second mod ^^ Let's see what I can find.

[General]

1. Your .mp3 has a bitrate of 127.85 kb/s. 128 is minimum... but it's a very little diffrence. I don't mind the diffrence, but I'm not sure if MAT/BAT do... Asked Jericho and he said it's acceptable. You can keep it~

[Insane]

01:14:994 (1) - Remove new combo.
01:15:539 (6) - Add a finish hitsound.
01:16:084 (2) - ^ on slider end.
01:16:448 (1) - Remove new combo.
01:28:630 (1) - Add a finish hitsound on slider beginning.


[Kusano's Hard]

00:24:812 (1) - Remove new combo.
01:15:357 (5) - Remove reverse arrow. Then add a finish hitsound on slider end.
01:16:084 (6) - Add new combo.
01:24:448 (1) - Remove new combo.



[Normal]

00:46:630 (1) - Add a finish hitsound on slider end.
01:24:448 (4) - ^
01:34:448 (x) - Add a note here. Then move spinner 01:34:448 (1) - 1/2 forward and decrease it's length by 1/2.


[Easy]

01:34:448 (x) - Just like at normal. Add a note and fix the spinner~

Lesjuh wrote:

General
I don't know if this is either a visual novel or anime. If so add 'visual novel' or 'anime' to the tags.ero game song=w=
The song title says 'Yuuki no Mahou (Short Ver.)' Shouldn't it be '(TV Size)'? You're also using the the video.
If not, add 'TV Size' and' to the tags!Done.

Insane
00:02:994 - Two timing sections on each other. Remove the green line.ok! offset point change

kusano
00:02:994 - Two timing sections on each other. Remove the green line.^
01:30:266 (4) - Better to move this to a different spot so (2) doesn't overlap it.Done.
01:30:993 (6) - The entire object should be clearly visible. Make sure other objects don't overlap it.Done.

Fix and call me for a bubble!