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Suimya
louis >3<
BounceBabe
Beginner

HP Drain: 2-3
AR: 2-4
OD: 2-4

00:16:888 (4) - dont overlapp it with the slider below x.x
00:30:444 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - The Hell?! o.ô Minimize it to a long spinner or 2-3 spinners
00:51:555 (5) - New combo
01:11:111 (4) - ^
01:16:666 (1,1,1,1) - Make 2 spinners

Middling

Circle Size: 4

01:08:666 (2) - Bit confusing for a Beginner - Change it
01:16:666 (1,1,1,1) - 2 Spinners

Advanced

Circle Size: 4

Seems fine for me

Experienced

AR: 7-8
OD: not too high please :< make 4-5

00:19:111 (1,2) - Dont overlapp them with the slider before 00:18:222 (3) - this one
00:24:888 (4) - Some grids down
01:07:777 (2) - Place it somewhere else
01:12:333 (4) - ^

Champion

AR: 8
OD: 7

00:20:888 (5) - Take care of the next slider... it's nearly impossible to get a 300 hit - Change it
00:43:999 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Look at the grid
00:52:888 (1,2,3) - Make a nicely triangle with them
01:22:666 (1) - Noone can hit this circle so fast ... remove it

I dont like Speedcore >.< it hurts in my ears..
but nicely done.. not so much i would change but change the suggestions please.. it's important

Star :)
Topic Starter
Louis Cyphre
it's important
Whole stuff what you said is not important and mostly changes would make my map worse.
No changes in any difficulties.
Thanks for paying attention
IceBeam
Ещё не ранкнута? :(
BounceBabe

Louis Cyphre wrote:

it's important
Whole stuff what you said is not important and mostly changes would make my map worse.
No changes in any difficulties.
Thanks for paying attention
Worse?.. lol
Topic Starter
Louis Cyphre
Worse?.. lol
Yes.
Waryas
The simple fact that you suggest AR8 instead of AR9 or AR10 for this bpm makes it a bad mod.
Also Star.
Fraolinch
'v'
Luneko
Red = Fix this!
Blue = Suggestion~
Green = Design.

[Overall]
- unused .osb file. Delet it :3

[Beginner]
00:30:444 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - I would change that, its boring :<
01:11:111 (4) - New Combo

[Middling]
00:11:555 (3) - Remove 1 repeat
00:32:222 (1) - This spinner doesnt fit imo

[Advanced]
00:33:333 (1) - Remove new Combo
00:38:444 (1,1,1,1) - you know what im going to say

[Experienced]
00:19:111 (1) - Remove New Combo
00:19:555 (5) - New Combo
01:12:888 (6) - ^

[Champion]
Fine


Have a Star~
Topic Starter
Louis Cyphre
Nah, no changes ;_;
Jenny
Well, some found some tiny things but they're unchangable if the map should be playable for taiko aswell as standard, so i'll leave them out and give a star... even if i don't like speedcore.
Axey
>w< hiii

(nazi mod..

[general]
lol so many spinnnnnners~
01:23:777(1)-add note? :3

[Advanced & Experienced]
01:14:888(8)-add note?

wow I love this crazy map!!

no kds thanks <(_ _)>
Shael_old
Topic Starter
Louis Cyphre



O__O
TTTL
i did FC hahaXD ☆
Scane
damn gz for this fc o_o, star~
wmfchris
[Champion]
00:39:444 (3) - remove whistle at beginning
00:42:444 (3) - ^
00:45:888 (2,3,4) - [Nazi] left 1 lv4 grid to improve spacing
00:53:111 (2,3) - Try to put them at (176,348) and (336,348) such that it's symmetrical and the spacing is right~

imo many sliders like 00:17:777, a whistle at the end may fit [especially in taiko].

[Experienced]
duplicated timeline: 73777
00:10:333 (2) - [Nazi] left+down 1 lv4 grid
00:15:555 (5) - add clap at beginning?
01:12:444 (5) - ^
for sliders like 00:20:888, maybe adding one more reverse tick is better ._.

[Advanced]
[TimingPoints]
0,222.222222222222,4,1,1,75,1,0
0,222.222222222222,4,1,1,75,1,0
D: ?
00:16:888 (3) - remove whistle on the whole slider, whistle on the tick only
01:01:999 (4) - [Nazi] left 1 lv4 grid
01:02:222 (5) - (Suggestion) move the third fixing point of slider from (96,192) and (104,192) such that it fits the curve of slider (3)

[Middling]
00:08:822 (2) - Try this?
360,164,8222,2,0,B|328:144|352:88,2,75.0000005960464,0|8|0

speedcore makes me sick X_X, but nice map~
Miu Matsuoka
...
Raging Bull
Oh goodie it's Louis again >_>

Beginner
+1HP OD AR? I know it's easy but it's way too easy.
00:15:111 (2,4) - This overlap bothers me. :L Can you find a way to map this part again?
00:30:444 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - Wtfuuu. That's so much spinners. I think beginners will have a very tired hand after this. Maybe remove the last two spinners and add break? Or if you want a consistent break, after the 3rd spinner, use notes/sliders?

Middling:
I think Average would be a better name?
You have two uninherited timing section. Delete one.
Seems okay.

Advanced:
Two uninherited timing sections again.
Seems okay.

Experienced:
00:39:222 (1) - With such high AR rate and fast bpm, I think it's best to remove this note to give people little recovery time for the stream.

Champion:
/me sees stream. Okay! /me quits modding.

I tried my best.
tekiya
So hard :O
but fun :3
Gonzvlo
Hey Louis, Krisom is currently sick so I'll be replacing him today.

[General]
  1. Add a pause-overlay to avoid skin mixing, please.
  2. Those black bars in the BG look a bit odd, are those intentional?. I edited the BG a bit to remove them, here it is if you want to use it.

[Beginner]

  • About the spinner-spam:
  1. 00:30:444 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - Spinners tend to be the most difficult object for rookies so for these ones I suggest to join 2 of them into a single one so it's a bit easier.
  2. 01:16:666 (1,1,1,1) - For these ones the rhythm is way more easy to follow, plus there aren't any other objects after them, I guess there's no problem here.
    -
  3. 01:11:111 (4) - A NC might be needed here, consider adding it.
  4. 01:15:999 (1) - The current time of this slider seems a bit iffy, rookies will have to wait some seconds before hitting it so it will be really hard to hit it accurately due to the low AR. You should start this slider here: 01:15:555 - This will it will suit this diff better.
[Middling]
  1. The current AR seems a bit too high sometimes. I think that due to the high BPM, AR:4 can work perfectly fine for this diff, consider using it.
  2. 01:08:666 (2) - This circle was hard to see while playing, I strongly suggest to re-arrange the pattern to make the circle more visible. (All you need to do is select the patterns from here: 01:08:666 (2) - to here: 01:16:444 - and them move them some grid down)
[Advanced]
  1. 00:04:444 (3) - I didn't have problems with this while playing but you might want to fix this spacing. (Tweaking (2) a bit should be enough)
  2. Quite nice, no major problems here.
[Experienced]
  1. I suggest to save AR:9 for [Champion] and use 8 for this one.
  2. Woah, those sliders... nothing else worth pointing out~
[Champion]
  1. Due to some hidden reverse arrows some repeating sliders might turn out unrankable, mainly these ones: 00:44:444 (1) & 01:15:999 (3,1,2,1). I'm not 100% sure if this diff will get affected even if it's going for approval, you better check those sliders with some BATs.
SPOILER

Derekku wrote:

XX:XX:XXX (A,B) - The hitburst from A is covering up some of B's repeats. Yes, it's a kick slider, but the repeats should still be visible.

Yes, it's not likely that a player will read a kick slider based on its repeats. However, the hitburst from the previously stacked note is hiding part of the slider, which is unrankable.

Overall the diffs are really nice and fun, the song makes me dizzy tho
Takuya
Okk

Topic Starter
Louis Cyphre
I suggest to save AR:9 for [Champion] and use 8 for this one.
Plays too slow, i'll keep AR9 in both sorry ><

Add a pause-overlay to avoid skin mixing, please.
iF you can make for me that will be great. I'm not able to make it now. I'm not at home :(

Due to some hidden reverse arrows some repeating sliders might turn out unrankable, mainly these ones: 00:44:444 (1) & 01:15:999 (3,1,2,1). I'm not 100% sure if this diff will get affected even if it's going for approval, you better check those sliders with some BATs.
The only way to fix them is just increase a bit spacing between them, that is the onliest way.
So increase distance between 1/8 streams by 4 grids. Now they are clearly visible.

Thanks a lot Gonzo! :3
Ohrami
Star :3

Hyguys
stars~
-Lennox-
Awesome *o*
Kurohige_old
star bro ;)
Snow Note
Amazing~☆
Mastodonio
блять КАК ОН МЕНЯ БЕСИТ!
Edit: интересно,кто умудрился стереть наши посты вместе с кудосу,при этом чтобы оно исчезло из Recent kudosu history
-maJu
lol
Vass_Bass
It's great!
Star
Ekoro
YES I SUCK.

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Download: _LRJ_ - Syrsa - Mad Machine [Champion] (2011-07-31) Osu.osr
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Artist: Syrsa
Title: Mad Machine
Tags: Speedcore
BPM: 270
Filesize: 3224kb
Play Time: 01:21
Difficulties Available:

Advanced (4,5 stars, 102 notes)
Beginner (0,99 stars, 48 notes)
Champion (5 stars, 362 notes)
Experienced (5 stars, 195 notes)
Middling (3,45 stars, 84 notes)
Topic Starter
Louis Cyphre
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EBAWER123
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Hamuko
IMO the difficulty jump from [Advanced] to [Experienced] is too big.
And I mean playing it, not by star rating.
Aside that it's a pretty good mapset.
Star~
Topic Starter
Louis Cyphre
IMO the difficulty jump from [Advanced] to [Experienced] is too big.
And I mean playing it, not by star rating.
Aside that it's a pretty good mapset.
Star~
just AR is greater.
abalee
Sorry that it is somewhat "noisy" and I paused for a while.
I am not so agree with using taiko hitsound here, original is still fine.
and why not replace the slidertick as well if you almost use the whole taiko hitsound set? :P
Topic Starter
Louis Cyphre
I am not so agree with using taiko hitsound here, original is still fine.
Sorry, but it seems for me good D:
thanks for paying attention <3
minyeob
ok Bubble #1.
Highest diff is for Approval

To BATs mm I don't much on these days so if you guys find main issues that's really sorry.....
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