Red: You must fix this.
Blue: You'd better do sth with this imo.
Green: Just suggestions.
[General]
offset:+8
better to add a diff between Normal and Hard. Normal has <2M score, but Hard has >12M. the difficulty has a gap too.
[Normal]
00:40:154 (1) - silence the first slidertick.
00:56:796 (1) - move this 1/2 earlier, then add a note at 00:57:672
00:57:891 (2) - remove clap at the beginning
01:50:227 (1,2) - i'm not a supporter for using jump in Normal = =|||, especially when it's the easiest diff.
01:52:854 (2,3) - ^
01:55:044 (1,2) - ^, also remove clap at the beginning
02:06:431 (1,2) - not perfect stacked.
02:11:905 (1,2) - ...jump
02:21:102 (3,4) - ^
02:23:949 (4,5) - ^
02:25:920 (1,2) - ^
03:51:978 (2,3) - ^
[Hard]
00:30:956 (1,2,3,4) - i'll suggest you this, not simply stack them. since the rhythm is not in a "repeat" feeling. you could do this at similar notes too.

01:02:927 - add a note?
01:13:876 (1) - touches HP bar..
02:07:745 (5) - move 1/4 earlier.
02:48:475 (1) - this part is boring, fuck yeah.
03:27:672 (1) - add a circle then start this spinner.
03:43:657 (3) - end this 1/4 earlier then add circles at 03:44:095 & 03:44:314
03:52:416 (4) - i guess you need a new combo
Blue: You'd better do sth with this imo.
Green: Just suggestions.
[General]
offset:+8
better to add a diff between Normal and Hard. Normal has <2M score, but Hard has >12M. the difficulty has a gap too.
[Normal]
00:40:154 (1) - silence the first slidertick.
00:56:796 (1) - move this 1/2 earlier, then add a note at 00:57:672
00:57:891 (2) - remove clap at the beginning
01:50:227 (1,2) - i'm not a supporter for using jump in Normal = =|||, especially when it's the easiest diff.
01:52:854 (2,3) - ^
01:55:044 (1,2) - ^, also remove clap at the beginning
02:06:431 (1,2) - not perfect stacked.
02:11:905 (1,2) - ...jump
02:21:102 (3,4) - ^
02:23:949 (4,5) - ^
02:25:920 (1,2) - ^
03:51:978 (2,3) - ^
[Hard]
00:30:956 (1,2,3,4) - i'll suggest you this, not simply stack them. since the rhythm is not in a "repeat" feeling. you could do this at similar notes too.
01:02:927 - add a note?
01:13:876 (1) - touches HP bar..
02:07:745 (5) - move 1/4 earlier.
02:48:475 (1) - this part is boring, fuck yeah.
03:27:672 (1) - add a circle then start this spinner.
03:43:657 (3) - end this 1/4 earlier then add circles at 03:44:095 & 03:44:314
03:52:416 (4) - i guess you need a new combo